| i read the wordsmith and said "ok, this bard has something, then i read "where ealgles fly", wow, very nice....it got my attention and kept it, now i can't wait for more..please post the finish, i'm in total susense. - decoote Sep 29th, 2004 |
| Great story, and I emailed the author about updates. The author is working on the new installment, be patient. Trust me, we cannot wait, we love the story. I will most surely rate this story upon completion. - klenglish Sep 28th, 2004 |
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Amazing, fascinatig ! Really, the charater Leigh is a femme fatale, a veeery SEXY GIRL! I'm fall in love with her too! I wait anxiously the next part. - Kath Sep 28th, 2004 |
| Dev and Holly are really a fun couple to watch. As they go through the process of freindship and discover all the special gifts the other has. I love the stuff about LA too. Its really a wonderful story. Very well done. - Ther Sep 28th, 2004 |
| I love this story. I think it is beautiful and sweet, Veba is just so adorable and she loves Rickie so. Rickie becomes herself through Veba, Veba brings out all her softness and vulnerablity. Its a loving tale of overcoming great odds. I have read the whole series with fascination. - lily Sep 28th, 2004 |
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HOT! And of course...NOT nearly long enough! LOL - jlnickymaster Sep 27th, 2004 |
| loved it, getting ready to wet my appetite with some more saggio. and i hope to see some more from brooke & dana. - decoote Sep 26th, 2004 |
| Great story - is there going to be an answer to the unspoken question? I'd love to read more... - Anonymous Sep 26th, 2004 |
| Just awsome. One of the best I have ever read. - Anonymous Sep 26th, 2004 |
| Concise, amusing and **ahh** SATISFYING!!!! - ancienthracian Sep 26th, 2004 |
| Truly loved it! Great laugh! - Kayryn Sep 25th, 2004 |
| Loved it. I read this in the middle of the night and had to hold a hand against my mouth to stop from laughing out loud so as not to awake roommate. Too funny! - Kayryn Sep 25th, 2004 |
| Interesting plot and very likeable characters make a Great story! When can we have some more? - Sherry Sep 25th, 2004 |
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Great story. I'm fascinated by this fantastic story. Everybody who loves adventure storis shouldn't miss this one. - Romy Sep 25th, 2004 |
| Beautiful! - Anonymous Sep 24th, 2004 |
| Absolutely wonderful. Do not miss this story. Just perfection. - Kayryn Sep 24th, 2004 |
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I found the author's site and story by chance a couple of years ago, before she started posting here. The basic premise is tangled - Noemi takes on the role of carer for her brother's ex-gf who is pregnant with his child. This story could have fallen apart in so many ways but the writer forges strongly ahead with every chapter. The focus and thread of the story is firm. There are sub-plots shoring the main couple nicely. The supporting characters are interesting; ranging from sleazy, benign, righteous to warm, funny and sexy. Best of all (!), is the tortured soul herself, Noemi. Her character resounds with angst, anger, power, sadness and is oh, so very sexy. In my view, the earlier version of this story was much more powerful in it's rawness and sensuality but the revision has smoothed out some edges and added more to the surroundings. Personally, I think it detracts a little from Noemi's edgy characterisation but the story still remains one of my favourites. The story moves very quickly from the start, we feel the restrained primality of Noemi and we learn about her family and personal demons. We are easily caught up in her activities and the story actually picks up heat the further it runs (note: glacier warning!). Terri is her catalyst for healing and loving again and her best friend's romance deserves a separate story of it's own. Noemi is on my personal Tops list, I pull it for a good angsty, dramatic and erotic romance. Brilliant work, Ms Ruiz. - E Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| What a Totally Awesome Story - Well Written - I Have Read It Over and Over and Over!! This is a Must Read for Everyone! - SSH Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| Is there going to be a sequel???? - SSH Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| Excellent! Just what a short story should be. I highly recommend this if you want a fast good read. - darkenedkarma Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| I had tears running down my cheeks....I love this author! - Shawn Sep 23rd, 2004 |
Due to illness in my family and my upcoming surgery, Fourth and Goal will not be updated again until mid October. Thank you, Strongsouljah
The Cost of Commitment, the sequel to The Price of Fame, is now available for pre-orders for those of you attending BardFest in Washington, D.C. October 1-3. The new novel will be available to the general public October 8th, but will be available for general pre-orders before then. Please check my website at www.lynnames.com or go to www.starcrossedproductions.com for the latest information.
TCOC picks up where TPoF left off, with Kate and Jay starting their new life together. If you enjoy thrillers, you're going to love this book. And if you're a romance addict, let me assure you that there's plenty of that to be found, as well.
In terms of a web version of TCOC, I am working on putting something of a teaser together for posting. At the moment, my right wrist is in a cast, I am in the process of moving across the country, and I have two book signings (we'll get to that in a second) in the next two weeks. Just thought I'd explain that the hold up isn't anything calculated...merely the challenges of the moment. In any event, whatever appears on the web in the end will be severely abridged, so be sure to buy your print copy if you want a serious fix of Kate and Jay . (Or if you want to know how the book ends ).
If any of you are planning to be in the Ithaca, New York area this Saturday, September 25th, or know anyone who will be, I will be doing a book signing and discussion at the Borders there at 2 p.m. I'd love to see you. That signing, FYI, is for The Price of Fame, although if coaxed I might be willing to give a preview of The Cost of Commitment ;-).
For those of you attending BardFest in DC, I hope you'll stop by and say hello. I will be sitting on several panels and signing autographs for both TPoF and TCOC both Saturday and Sunday, October 1st and 2nd.
Finally, the new anthology, Infinite Pleasures: An Anthology of Lesbian Erotica, is in print. More than thirty talented authors contributed stories for this book. Oh, and I have one in there, too.
Thanks, as always, for your support. You make it worth all the hard work.
Best,
Lynn Ames
Author: The Price of Fame, The Cost of Commitment
Contributing Author: Infinite Pleasures: An Anthology of Lesbian Erotica
http://www.lynnames.com/
| This is a great story. I have read a few times and I am still entertained everytime I read it. I have read all of your stories and I hope you write more. - Miss Rose Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| Couldn't resist a story with an Adam Ant title! This is a fun, frolicking romp through a bawdy time period. Liked the twist! - Absintheangel777 Sep 23rd, 2004 |
| This was well written. Found a link out in the www for this story and had to track it down. It is post fin fic and has the emotion and story telling cadence of a bard. good job - jlnickymaster Sep 21st, 2004 |
| Excellent story! Please continue. Enquiring minds want to know what happens next. - kinsey Sep 21st, 2004 |
| I loved this story! And and and and . . . I hope you are not finished with it! ;) - Alfie Sep 21st, 2004 |
DC Bardfest 2004 - October 2-3, 2004!
| Defiantly a Larisa story. What do ya do when you find the object of your effection sleepign with a giggling ELMO doll? - SammyLee Sep 19th, 2004 |
| Read the whole series. Good author and you can't stop reading. - Anonymous Sep 19th, 2004 |
| This has all the usal sighns and traits of a Larisa Story You love her stuff this one will be right up your ally to. I know I had a great time reading it. - SammyLee Sep 18th, 2004 |
| I would agree that this story is on many levels a good one, and I did enjoy reading it. There is one thing however that really bothered me and that I can't seem to move past. When we first meet Veba, she has the emotional maturity of a small child, and yet Rickie immediately has an overt sexual interest in her. That part not only doesn't ring true for me, it really puts me off. When they meet, Rickie knows nothing about Veba expect that she is emotionally stuck at a 6 year old level...and she immediately falls for Veba and wants to get her into bed? Hmmmm. I don't think so. - Chris Sep 17th, 2004 |
| I loved this awesome story and can not wait for book 2 thanks RangerLiz for sharing your talent with all of us - Kat Sep 17th, 2004 |
| Heart of Africa is fresh, charming, funny, warm and a delicious adventure love story. I cannot give this story a higher recommendation as you will fall in love with these characters and the interaction between them. Great read, well written and a 'don't miss' story. - Tap Sep 16th, 2004 |
| This is a great story by Vertigo, it's sweet, loving, sexy! and Oh soooo HOT!! great work Vertigo. - Ravinirish Sep 16th, 2004 |
| I think this a wonderful story, its nice and twisty sort of a mystery with a sweet romance in the center of it. I loved it! Thank you. - Anonymous Sep 16th, 2004 |
| I've enjoyed Panter's Pride very much, and am waiting on the next installment. My compliments to the author and the imagination behind the story. - Melinda Sep 16th, 2004 |
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Wow!!! I never read an story with an character soooo sexy!!!! Besides, well written, with sense of humor, fascinating! I'm fall in love with they, i'm addictive that wonderful story! Please, Sage, more!!!!! - leth cross Sep 15th, 2004 |
| Classic X&G with sense of humor. Don't drink anything while reading this one, you'll spew it all over your keyboard laughing! - kekai Sep 14th, 2004 |
| I laughed so hard I almost inhaled my scone. Very funny -- had a great time reading this one. Can recommend it for a more than a few laughs. :o))) - Linda Sep 14th, 2004 |
| A great read! Intelligent and thought provoking debates between the two main characters and a beautifully developed romance. Even though Alex Tryst's political intentions are obvious, you don't have to know a lot about the election to enjoy the adventure of two women looking for their soulmates. This book makes you believe in the power of love, love of family, love of friends, and the kind of love only to be found in that special person. And the part about Dara's nephew, Justin, well, all I can say is that it takes a strong person to reveal their personal trials to the world. Thank you, Alex, for allowing us to look into your real life for a brief moment and letting us learn more about a disease that affects so many. Job well done! - Anonymous Sep 14th, 2004 |
| just finished but didn't want it to end...can't wait for the sequel.. - dodie Sep 14th, 2004 |
| I love this beautiful story. I was so captured I read it in one sitting. I wish I could just start exploring a building and find myself my own Veba. Thank you for this lovely touching peice. - Darlene Sep 14th, 2004 |
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And that bargain explains why their names are not known to history. Readers who discover this bard learn to expect thoughtful beautifully written, richly imaginative stories about the Bard and Warrior Princess. Mary Morgan’s love of and dedication to the relationship recommends all her stories which are Alternative, by the way. One of her many strengths particularly evident in this one is the skillful use of metaphor to describe the basic nature of the two friends and soulmates. How each experiences and reacts to what happens and how it affects their bond makes this a very satisfying read. I especially like the bit of whimsy in the denouement. The stories are also available in Palm Doc and Palm Reader Format. - Ann Sep 13th, 2004 |
| This story is not to be missed! Beautifully written and edited. My new favorite uber. I too am head over heels for Devlyn Marlowe. This story should be in print. Congrats to T. Novan and Advocate--Well Done!! - FullofGrace Sep 12th, 2004 |
| Great story, PLEASE finish it. - Anonymous Sep 12th, 2004 |
| this was such a great story to read. a sequel is needed for sure - Anonymous Sep 11th, 2004 |
| Ouch. I was all ready for the final stage of their sweet, sweet love and then... Harsh! - Satire86 Sep 11th, 2004 |
| This was quite an entertaining little mystery. I'm a huge fan of Sherlock Holmes and murder mystery in general. This tale was told in the best tradition of my faves. This was the first Bardywnna story I've read and I can't wait to read more! - LT Sep 9th, 2004 |
| I love the humor in all of your stories, you inject just the right amount. Great story - keep up the good work. - Paula S. Sep 7th, 2004 |
| This story should not be missed. A beautiful tale of love and friendship. Like the other commentor, I think I fell in love with Dev. Just beautiful! - Kayryn Sep 7th, 2004 |
| Beautifully written and very touching. - Robin Alexander Sep 6th, 2004 |
| Is this person writing any more? If not, they need to. Excellent sci-fi story, one of the older Xenaverse fanfics and it still rocks! - Avid Sep 6th, 2004 |
| Larisa, you are the best! I have read all your stories and have enjoyed them tremendously. I never got tired reading them over and over again. Keep it up and never stop writing. You got me hooked forever on your stories. - kimm Sep 6th, 2004 |
| Great story! ! - Anonymous Sep 5th, 2004 |
| A friend recommended this story to me, and I am so glad! The characters grabbed me the moment I started reading and they held me captive until the end. Please tell me this is not the last we'll see of these characters. I highly recommend this story to anyone who loves a good old fashioned love story. - Lynda D. Sep 5th, 2004 |
| I thought this one was good. I recommend it.lots of battling Amazons. A great deal of Love, Pain and sacrifice. The another has don good. - Samson Sep 5th, 2004 |
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Just finished reading this wonderful story, and hope J.A. Bard is planning a sequel |
| For those interested in the pic that inspired this story go to: http://www.joinme.net/intrepid/TwinsonbordMini.jpg - Intrepid Sep 4th, 2004 |
| great story so far, cant wait for the rest! - blazinangelwings Sep 4th, 2004 |
| I found I enjoyed this one a lot. Thank you Patricia. For anyone that wants to read a sweet story with most of the Olympian gods making an appearance read this one. Artemis and Aphrodite cook up a soul connection with Gabrielles' and Xenas' souls. Worth taking a look at. - SammyLee Sep 4th, 2004 |
| This is such a charming tale. I loved it. I love how your slowly drawn in and just captured by the two main charachters and the mysterious planet they get stranded on. Great job. - Katie Sep 2nd, 2004 |
| This is a short, fascinating tale of hate, murder and revenge and how Xena and Gabrielle come to the aid of a besieged village with their wits rather than sword, chakram or staff. You’ll be surprised to see how her weapons become a liability for Xena. So Gabrielle plants an idea and Xena uses it to the detriment of their assailant. She expresses a truth pertinent to today, that there will always be underlings to do the dirty work, following orders. You can count on Mary Morgan to engage your mind as well as emotions and this story does just that. Highly recommended. - Ann Sep 2nd, 2004 |
| awesome story! i'm not ususally fond of vampire stories, but the way gabite hooks you in is wonderful. very captivating. just don't read it if you have to get up early the next morning, cause you won't be able to stop! - r.d.elliott Sep 1st, 2004 |
| Ok , so I stayed up late and read this because I just had to see what happened. Nice job !!!! - Shaybe Sep 1st, 2004 |
| Can't wait to see where this goes. More soon I hope!!! - Shaybe Sep 1st, 2004 |
| Ok..I told myself I wasn't going to read this because it was not a completed story yet,but I peeked at the first page and when I dicovered that it used one my most favorite movies as a basis I just had to read it. I'm glad I did it was a great read. A true homage to a great movie. Now I can't wait for it to be completed. I hope it gets updated soon(sneaky bard! you sure know how to leave folks hangin!) Great work...keep it up! - Elfcat255 Sep 1st, 2004 |
| the intense pain radiating from both characters breaks our heart little by little as their story progresses to only be fully healed in the end with a simple but heartfelt ending, one everybody hopes for. - blazinangelwings Sep 1st, 2004 |
The story challenge has ended with eight stories posted in the What's New section for your perusal. When you've read them please take a moment to vote for your favorite. The results will be posted on September 10th. Thank you.
I wish to thank all the bards that participated in the challenge.
| This is such a great story!! I hope the author contnues. The story takes its time and there is real angst, not forced but the pain of childhood and home. The main characters are great and are imperfect in a way we all can relate. - BKFaith Aug 31st, 2004 |
| intense and captivating every time i read a story by Radclyffe i want more, beautiful and deep in every way - tracy Aug 31st, 2004 |
| beautiful story exciting in more ways then one the sequals are not to be missed - Anonymous Aug 30th, 2004 |
| This story is excellent! The main characters are quick witted, very entertaining and extremely easy to like; you really start to care about them more and more as the tale develops. I can't wait to see where the author goes next, so keep up the good work! - Ang Aug 30th, 2004 |
| This story is absolutely good. The characters seem real and the plot kept me reading well into the night. Believe me when I say you have to read this story because you will hooked from the first word to the last. I highly recommend this to everyone. Just when you think you figured it out, something else happens and that is what kept me reading. Can't wait to read the sequel. - Meg Aug 30th, 2004 |
| Wow, this story is just amazing. And I think the scene between Erin and Liz is the hottest I've ever read! I'm really looking forward to the sequel and how things turn out. Does anybody else wish that Erin and Liz end up together?? - Anonymous Aug 30th, 2004 |
| I really enjoyed this series the budding freindship and then love between these two people are touching. Well done, I hope there is more I hate to see them end they are very endearing. - Tessie Aug 30th, 2004 |
| I had forgotten this story's name, but not the story itself. A terrific mystery with realistic thought processes and dialogue. (It's no spoiler to say that in this story, a woman is blinded in a car accident and then begins "seeing" disturbing things.) A great story. - Fanficionado Aug 29th, 2004 |
| OH was this one fun -- I enjoyed it muchly - Linda Aug 29th, 2004 |
| Great story...was up late looking for something to read when I came across this. Ended up staying up till I was able to finish it. Keep up the good work...=) - Lacey Aug 27th, 2004 |
| I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. A must read for everyone. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! - Veronica Aug 27th, 2004 |
| I think what I liked most about this story.....every time I read it, is the way the humour,snide remarks and quick asides fly around the entire story. It really makes the story come alive for me. The opening paragraphs really got me wondering what all the questions being directed at Sue, were for. At first you have no idea if Sue Rainer, the questionee, was under arrest or at a job interview or the Spanish Inquisition! The rapid fire way the story is written, sure helps get the adrenaline pumping right at the jump off point. This style in Mavis' writing is what keeps me looking for more new stories........and I'm never disappointed! - Kelly Aug 26th, 2004 |
| Great story.I love the dialogue/banter between these two characters.Will this story be finish soon??? Can't wait til it's finish. Do you have other writings? - mt Aug 26th, 2004 |
| Wow, this story is absolutely the best thing Ms. Tryst has written. This story has the perfect balence of plot, sensuality, and romance. please write a sequel. - Anonymous Aug 25th, 2004 |
| If you like Conqueror stories (and big doses of angst), this baby is for you! Mayt is a skilled writer who produces moving and engrossing stories. This is one of my faves ~ Don't miss it! - Chris Aug 24th, 2004 |
| A great story. I loved it. I wish there were more of it. This is a definite must read, or even re-read if it's been a while. Excellent. - BB Aug 24th, 2004 |
| Finish please!!This is an awesome freakin story!!! - Chaser07 Aug 22nd, 2004 |
| I just finished reading the whole series in one night. I really loved Dakota and Jackie but this last one just ripped my heart out. What a touching end to a wonderful series. I loved all the layers and all the love. - Toni Aug 20th, 2004 |
| Don't miss this story. It's a sweet, funny and romantic adventure love story. Excellent writing as always. - Jesse Aug 20th, 2004 |
| This sequel is as moving as the first part of My Lord. Don't miss it. - Renee (Netherlands) Aug 18th, 2004 |
| Beautifull story. Beautifull written. - Renee (Netherlands) Aug 18th, 2004 |
| Ok Chapter 2 - damn I live in Georgia where Kudzu is the state flower I believe. You transported me back in time and took me on the journey of their terror just as if I had been standing there watching the entire scene. Life in your story is no different then real life. Ronica you have accomplished a true feeling of real life in how you write. Thank you for sharing it with us. I can understand more about Jay's paranoia and why death is her way of protecting those she loves. Looking forward to chapter 3 with anticipation. - Shadylady Aug 16th, 2004 |
| Like the rest of her works, exceptional! A must read for any lover of romance. Thank you for sharing your talent and your beautiful story. - Anonymous Aug 16th, 2004 |
| This story is what Friend In Need I and II should have been IMHO. Saul's story, in comparison to FIN, makes more sense to me. I don't want to spoil this story, so let me just say that the flow of this piece is smoother and the ideas expressed within are more rational to me. The relationship beween G and X is honored and respected. The battle scenes respect the skills of both Xena and the Samurai warriors. Its a good read, IMHO and I recommend it highly. - M.E. Hunt Aug 16th, 2004 |
| An intriguing series. The first story had me vaccilating between the 3 main characters and the sequel looks promising too. Excellent story. - E Aug 15th, 2004 |
| Wow, it's a great story! I wish there was a sequel. - s.happy Aug 15th, 2004 |
| "Somewhere in Hollywood" deals with a homeless woman, Annah, who is mistaken for a famous Hollywood actress. Having nothing to lose she plays along. She learns that the actress has disappeared, leaving behind a filmcrew and a girlfriend. What a wonderful story! I started reading it without any expectations and i was surprised in a positive way. - lectra Aug 15th, 2004 |
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The first word that comes to mind is... cute. The title reveals a lot. It'a about a girl who plays football and falls for a cheerleader. Cute! - lectra Aug 15th, 2004 |
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Another one nailed by Mark! My second uber and i'm still on the hunt! this one is absolutely precious. the dialogue...man... can't say too much, don't want any spoilers here, you better go read it and get blown away!Again! - Katrina Aug 15th, 2004 |
| was my first uber by Mark Annetts, and what a great story! i'm off to hunt every last one down now! the dialogue (hilarious and truly touching sometimes) and the mystery kept me glued to the screen, awesome characters too. - Katrina Aug 15th, 2004 |
| This was such a neat story I loved Dev and Holly. They are both so complex and yet very lovable. I really loved the different view of Los Angeles in it. I had no idea there was even a subway there. What do you do when there is an earthquake? - tess Aug 14th, 2004 |
| Highly highly highly recommendend. What a wonderfull writer Gardner is. - Renee (Netherlands) Aug 14th, 2004 |
| this is a must read story.....the author proves yet again that she gets better and better with each new story. the story makes you laugh, makes cry, makes you mad all the way to the very e |