I'm not so good with poetry, but this one was begging to be let out...
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With Her by my Side
I want to see the world with her,
I want to do it all;
Sit in a quiet garden,
Walk along the pier;
Lie on the beach and watch the sun
Fall below the horizon.
I want to ride a train with her,
Go on a merry-go-round.
Ride a Ferris Wheel,
Climb a mountain,
Jump from a bridge with
Hands held tight.
I want to sit in a park with her,
Play a game of tag;
Take the dog out for a walk,
Buy some lollies from the store.
Watch a movie at the cinema,
Ride a boat down a peaceful river.
I want to dance in the rain with her,
Be soaked right to the bone;
Laughing, singing,
Kissing beneath the stars;
Jumping into puddles,
When it's only she and I.
I want only to walk down the street with her,
One lazy Sunday afternoon;
Arm-in-arm, in the warm sun,
A gentle breeze blowing
Through the trees;
Birds all singing with glee.
I want to fly high in the sky with her,
Not in a plane,
But in a hot-air balloon;
Catching clouds,
The wind in our hair,
Seeing the most magnificent view.
I want to visit Italy with her,
See Florence, Venice and Rome;
Visit France and Switzerland,
England and Ireland;
See the plains of Africa
Before heading home.
I want to go everywhere with her,
Leaving no stone unturned;
Cities and countries,
Rivers, lakes and streams;
Forests and deserts,
All the islands of the Philippines.
I want to see the world with her,
I want to do it all,
With her by my side.