~ Girl Corrupted ~
by Larisa

Disclaimer: This is an Uber based on the movie Girl Interrupted owned by
Columbia Pictures. No infringement is meant.
Sexual content: Yep
Bad language: Of course
So if you're not 18, go away go far far away. Any complaints send them to
Hecate3366@frontiernet.net

Part 2

After they shocked the waitress and everyone in the diner by eating all six breakfasts they hit the road again. The sun was riding high in the sky and it warmed them with its bright rays caressing them like a lovers fingertips. Lisa had unzipped her coat; the wind pushed it and her vest back against her sides. Suzanna let her fingers trail over her tight stomach muscles under the T-shirt, reveling in the feel of them. With her own coat opened, she pressed her breasts against the warmth of Lisa's back. A soft moan came from her lips but was lost in the wind. With the hum of the engine and the warm sun she drifted off to sleep. She dreamed of a very tall and dark woman holding her as she slept under a shady tree beside a gurgling stream. The smell of blooming flowers and grass surrounded her and filled her senses. Soft lips gently kissed her awake. Opening her eyes with a start she was surprised that she was not dreaming but laying in Lisa's arms.

"You can sleep through the damnedest things can't you?"

"Well, yep I guess I can." She grinned. "It was that big breakfast, when I eat that much it always makes me sleepy. I'm just glad I didn't fall off of the bike."

"No chance of me letting that happen. I'm not about to loose you for anything." They kissed softly at first then more demanding until Lisa stopped them. "There's nothing I want more than to make love to you under a tree beside a beautiful stream. But not yet baby, I want it to be perfect."

Suzanna ran her fingertips across Lisa's high cheekbones. "You are so beautiful, one look from your blue eyes takes my breath away."

"And you little one are the one that brings the light to my dark soul." They shared a soft kiss then got back on the road. They still had a long ways to go before they got to their destination. Lisa's mind was spinning with thoughts of her little blond. "One minute she wants to rip my cloths off the next she's running away at warp speed!" She thought to herself. "What the Hell did someone do to her?"

They traveled for hours until it became dusk; they came upon another small town that had a bed and breakfast. After they got a room they followed the same routine that they had the previous night. Except this time Suzanna, still shy about her body came out of the bathroom with a bright blush covering her. She felt more at ease when she noticed the beautiful smile gracing Lisa's face.

"You have a beautiful body. You don't have anything to be shy about."

"Thank you, it's just that I'm so use to having people make me feel self conscious because I don't look like my mother."

Holding her hand out Lisa motioned for her to join her on the bed. Pulling her close to her side, she kissed her forehead. "I don't give a damn what your mother looks like, it's you that makes my blood boil."

"You wouldn't say that if you saw my mother, she has a body like Sharon Stone." She sighed as memories ran through her mind at the way she was always belittled by her parents for not slaving away at the health club like they did. And for not caring about the amount of food she ate. She could hear her mother now. "Suzanna, no man will ever want you if you eat like a pig and bloat up like Orca. Just look at you, you look like a linebacker for the Pittsburgh Steelers." She didn't know that she had spoken the last part out loud until she heard Lisa tell her she most definitely did not look like a linebacker. "I like muscular woman and wouldn't change a thing about you. I'm sorry but your parents sound like superficial fake people."

"I think superficial is to thick for them!" Suzanna said. "Lord forbid if I said that I could careless what any man thought of how I looked."

Stroking Suzanna's cheek she rounded up the courage to ask her the question that could pierce her heart. "Baby, can I ask you a personal question?"

"Sure, I'll answer it if I can."

"The things we've done together isn't to piss off your parents is it?"

Suzanna raised up on one elbow to look into crystal blue eyes clearly showing worry. She leaned forward and kissed Lisa with all the passion she had in her. "No Stud, what we have done together was for me. It has nothing to do with my parents. You make me feel things that I have never felt before. But I want to take it slow. Is that OK?"

"Baby, I never break a promise."

She ran her fingertips up and down Lisa's arm "Can I ask you something?" Suzanna asked shyly as her fingers stopped at the top of the black leather bracers on Lisa's wrists. "What are these scars from?"

Lisa smiled at her. "Playing with very sharp knives."

"You tried to kill yourself?"

"Nope, it's from a gang fight. Actually I was getting out of the gang and had to go through the Gauntlet and the other members had knives and machetes. I got cut up trying to get a blade away to defend myself with. But of course when I went to the hospital they didn't believe me and had me committed for attempted suicide."

"But Val said that you've been at Claymoore for 8 years. Why?"

Lisa chuckled at her. "That's easy, free room and board. I am a Sociopath but that doesn't keep me from leaving. It's the women who are their that does. They're the only friends I have." Caressing Suzanna's cheek. "Besides you."

"So if you wanted to be completely free you could?"

"Ohhh yeah, maybe one day I will be. What about you, where will you go when they let you out?"

Green eyes sparkled and took a far away look as she visualized the trees, stream and the surrounding mountains of her property. "I have land up in the West Virginia mountains that I bought years ago. I had a small cabin built there a year ago. But the best thing is, my parents don't know about it!" She gave Lisa a huge grin. "My Grandma left me money that my parents didn't know about. The rest of my money is frozen in accounts until the doctors at Claymoore deem me fit to live among the so called normal people."

They lay cuddled around each other, letting the warmth of their bodies seep into each other. Whispering of dreams and lost friends well into the night. It was at this time that they definitely knew they shared a connection to each other. Something they each had felt at their first meeting but still couldn't explain and didn't tell the other about.

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Suzanna's parents were in Dr. Wick's office. Her fathers pacing back and forth like a caged animal, while her mother sat in the guest chair in front of the desk.

"What the Hell do you mean that she just took off one night!" He yelled at the top of his lungs. "And with this Lisa person who is most definitely a lesbian from what the other patients have told us. She has most likely corrupted my daughter!"

"Mr. Chasim, this is not a state mental hospital. The patients here are not dangerous so we do not have guards at the doors." Dr. Wick explained to the over emotional man. "Suzanna is a very smart young woman, she is not unstable and does not possess a danger to herself."

"Not a danger to herself!" He yelled. "Then what the Hell was she doing trying to kill herself with an overdose of aspirins!"

"Sir, if she truly wanted to kill herself I don't think she would have used baby aspirins to do it."

Mrs. Chasim looked up into Dr. Wicks watery blue eyes. "Did you say baby aspirins? Why use baby aspirins when my medicine cabinet is full of all kinds of prescription drugs?" She became quiet for a minute. "My God, those aspirins where from when she was a baby! They're almost 20 years old! Honey?" She looked to her surprised husband. "We have to get a new housekeeper, that woman clearly doesn't know her job if we had 20-year-old baby aspirins in the house! She's fired the minute we get home!"

"Yes dear, we'll call the agency at once and have her replaced. Now Dr. Wick, we will be notified the minute she is found and not a moment later. Is that understood?"

"Yes, you have my word. We will find her and Lisa and return them to their ward."

Dr. Wick rubbed her tired face with her hands. "Asshole son of a bitches! No wonder Suzanna tried to get away from them anyway she could. Another piece of the Suzanna puzzle fits into place." Writing something down in Suzanna's file, she then flipped it closed and left her office.

The police had been notified the minute Suzanna and Lisa went missing. It was hospital rules set up for them, by their insurance company to protect them from lawsuits if any of their patients did harm or damage while on the loose. What Dr. Wick hated most of all with these two was that she would have to contact Suzanna's parents when and if she was found. Lisa had no relatives so it didn't matter with her. It was days later when she received a phone call from the police telling her that Lisa had stolen some guys wallet and his motorcycle. And that a small blond woman was with her that matched Suzanna's description. Lisa's time there would now be lengthened again. Dr. Wick knew that Lisa would take all the blame for their actions away from the hospital so as not to cause any harm to Suzanna. What they didn't know was that she had been watching them and had concluded that they were meant to be together. Except they were doing it the wrong way, they had to be free of their secrets and totally free of the hospital, until that day they were prisoners of a sort. She held the key to their freedom.

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Lisa and Suzanna had just crossed the Maryland state line when they saw a state trooper whip out behind them. His lights came on as well as his siren. Suzanna started to panic, she knew he was after them. Some how they had been found and running would only make it worse. Leaning forward she yelled in Lisa's ear for her to pull over. She shook her head no and yelled back that they could escape. She was just about to go full throttle when she looked over her shoulder into tear filled green eyes. Her heart was pierced with the stabbing pain of failure. That they could never escape from where they came from and would be hunted like common criminals until they were returned to the hospital. She eased off the throttle and pulled the bike into a parking lot of a gas station. Shutting the engine off she got off the bike and then helped Suzanna. She pulled her into a tight embrace, kissing her lips like she would never see her again she let go. Her blue eyes filled with tears as she took one last look into Suzanna's pain filled green eyes. "You will always be in my heart. I love you." She then took off at a sprint through the parking lot and through the woods that stood behind. The state trooper got on his radio and called for back up as he grabbed Suzanna before she could take off to. She struggled in his grasp and screamed for Lisa to come back for her. She collapsed onto her knees in tears, screaming for Lisa the entire time until the trooper put her into the back of his car. She pulled Lisa's coat around her and cried until their where no more tears to shed. "I never told her!" She mumbled to herself. "I never told her."

Hours later she was taken out of the back seat of another police car that had been part of the relay of cars that got her back to upstate NY. Val came out the front door of the hospital to meet them. Wrapping her arm around Suzanna she helped the exhausted woman inside. Back in her room she lay and stared at the ceiling. Her heart ached; she had never before felt so alone. Tears fell from her eyes to trail down her temples and soak into her pillow. Her door opened slowly to reveal Val peeking in at her.

She whispered the word "Checks." She was about to leave when Suzanna asked her if they had found Lisa.

"No they haven't but they're still searching."

"What will happen to her if they catch her, will she go to jail?"

Val came into her room and sat on the edge of her bed. Brushing back her wet blond hair she looked into the worried green eyes. "No, they'll bring her back here the same as they did you."

"We didn't hurt anyone, we just wanted to be free." She broke down and sobbed into her hands until Val pulled her in and hugged her. "I've never felt so in control as I did when we were together. We just took it day by day. We rode for miles in the country. It's the happiest I've ever been. My past disappeared out there."

"You have to help yourself before you can be free, talk to Dr. Wick. Tell her everything you've just told me. If you can't, then write it in your journal. But put it out in the open and it will all be over and gone. I don't want you to drop anchor here like the others have. Now get some sleep."

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Weeks went by with no word about Lisa. I started to write in my journal and notebooks and any piece of scrap paper I could find. I spent endless hours spilling my guts out onto paper and then on Dr. Wicks couch during our sessions. Then one day I was waiting in her office for my session to begin when my parents walked in. If looks could have killed I know for a fact that I would have been buried a dozen times over. My father jerked me up by my arm and pulled me nose to nose with him. He did his usual. He started screaming at me and telling me that I was a complete disappointment to him and my mother. By this little stunt I had showed exactly how immature I was and that I would never be able to leave this place or home. In addition, to forget about ever seeing that lesbian again, that she would never be able to corrupt me again. I went off before my mother could start in on me.

"You listen to me! I am not some child you can bully around anymore! I'm 23 years old and I refuse to have you tell me what I can and cannot do! You two have been trying to live my life for me, if it wasn't the people you were choosing to be my friends. Then it was the men that I would date. And then...." She gave a short laugh. "THEN you chose an old man for me to marry because it would be a good investment deal for your Goddamn bank account! Well FUCK YOU BOTH! I WILL leave this place and there's not a damn thing you can do about it and if by chance I find Lisa, we will be together whether you like it or not! I love her and there's not a damn thing you can do about it!" She turned to Dr. Wick with a smile on her face. "I will be in the lounge if you wish to speak with me."

A week later I went before the board about my release from the hospital. It seems that my little outburst with my parents showed the members of the board that I was strong enough to stand on my own two feet in the outside world. Not to mention the reports that Dr. Wick had shown them of my progress over the last weeks. At the end of the meeting the members gave me my release date. I would be free in 2 weeks, but I would have to come back for sessions with Dr. Wick for a month afterwards. Then monthly check ins.

It was during my last week when I was leaving the lounge that they brought a very sick Lisa through the doors. She looked terrible; her long black hair hung limply around her shoulders. Her cheeks looked angled and sharp beneath her empty blue eyes. She was still dressed in her black leather cloths but now they were covered in mud. As they walked her down the hall to her old room her body twitched and her legs were wobbly. If not for them holding her up I know she would have fallen to the floor. As she passed me our eyes met and I could see a small spark fire there then disappear. Tears slid down my face as I looked at the woman who held my heart in her hands. They kept her in her room and every hour one of the nurses would go into take care of her. None of us were allowed to go in her room all we could do was look through the small window in the door at her body strapped to the bed. She was kept medicated to the point that all she did was sleep. My heart cried out to her each time I pictured her so helpless and in pain. One night I heard a loud commotion out in the hall, MG was being hauled away in a straight jacket. I found out the next morning that she had gone over the edge because of not being able to see her champion Lisa. Lisa was the only one who treated MG like she was human and lack of that tender care from her sent MG into the arms of oblivion.

My last day there, Val let me go into see Lisa. It was her parting gift to me and I will forever be grateful to her for her kindness. She had told me shortly after they had brought Lisa back that Lisa had taken full blame for everything. Which I knew she would. When I opened the door Lisa was laying with her eyes closed but I knew she wasn't sleeping. Her breathing gave her away. I pulled a small stool over to the side of her bed and sat down. I brushed her dark bangs from her eyes and waited to see the beautiful blue eyes. When it didn't come I whispered her name.

"I knew it was you, I can smell your cologne." Her voice was gravely from sleep and lack of speech. "Guess I turned out to be a big disappointment to you huh?"

"Never, you did what you thought was right. I know that you tried to protect me by taking the blame for everything. Dr. Wick knows that we did it together and that it was my choice to leave with you." Tears slid down her cheeks as she dropped her head down to try and hide them. "Lisa, they're letting me out today. I hate leaving you here like this. I wish I could..."

"Don't worry about it baby. You walk out those doors and make a life for yourself."

She pulled a piece of paper from inside her pocket and placed it in Lisa's hand. "This is where I'll be, so when you get out I want you to come and see me." Standing up she leaned over Lisa and placed a gentle kiss to her lips. "Promise me you'll come."

"I never break a promise you know that."

Suzanna left her room before she broke down completely; Lisa's tears fell for hours after Suzanna left. All she could do was lay there and remember the time they had shared together while they were free. She was happy for Suzanna, she hoped that everything worked out for her on the outside world.

Suzanna hugged everyone goodbye then went out to get into the rental car that she had delivered to the hospital for her departure and arrival into the world. Val went with her and gave her a hug and a kiss on her cheek. "Your gonna make it out there, I know you will. Your a strong person and don't let anyone tell you any different or I'll come and kick their ass! Got that?"

"Thank you Val for everything you did for me and that includes kicking my ass. If not for you I wouldn't be leaving this place."

"Now get going before it gets dark. I don't want to worry that you got lost out there somewhere."

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Months had gone by with Suzanna living in her cabin in the mountains of West Virginia. She had decided to write her life story of the time she spent in the hospital, and of how she found her true self with the help of another patient. However, she was blocked, she didn't know how to end the story. She wanted it to be a happy ending and the way it had ended was not happy for her. She felt incomplete and lost. She didn't know if she would ever feel like she had during the time she was with Lisa. All she had were the memories. She closed the Microsoft Works program on her computer and stared at the picture of Lisa on the background of her monitor. It was a picture that they had taken at one of the diners that they had stopped to eat at. The sun was coming at an angle lighting Lisa's hair to give it chestnut high lights. Her ice blue eyes blazed with a seductive fever like nothing Suzanna had ever seen before. As she sat she could almost hear Lisa's deep melodic voice caress her ears.

"Don't you ever lock your doors?"

Suzanna spun around in her chair, leaping out of it at the sight of Lisa. She threw her arms around her neck. "My Gods, your here!" Tears flowed down her cheeks as she kissed her entire face. "I've missed you so much!" Lisa pulled her away far enough to look into the green eyes that she would walk through Hell to see. "Remember, I never break a promise."

Suzanna ran her fingers down Lisa's face, reaffirming her memory of the soft skin. "I never let a day pass that I didn't think of you." She brought her finger across Lisa's bottom lip then replaced it with her own lips. Their kiss started out gentle at first but soon became much more. Their moans were swallowed by each other as their hands worked their way under constricting clothes. Suzanna pushed Lisa's leather vest off of her shoulders, then peeled her T-shirt up and over her head to drop it on the floor where the vest lay. She trailed her fingertips down from Lisa's neck to cup her full breasts in her hands. Her thumbs worked their way across rising nipples. "I've waited a long time for this." Suzanna led her to her bedroom. She pushed her backwards until her knees hit the edge of the bed. Sitting down, Lisa brought Suzanna down with her to lay across her chest. She grabbed the bottom of Suzanna's shirt and pulled it over her head. She ran her fingers down the muscled back loving the feel under her fingers.

"Would you believe I walked all the way here just to be able to touch you like this?" Blue eyes twinkled with laughter. "And it was worth wearing my boots out."

"I'll buy you a new pair. Now make love to me."

They removed the rest of each other's clothes with tenderness. Lisa laid Suzanna down on her back then stretched out above her, taking her bottom lip between her teeth she pulled it into her mouth to suck on it with such gentleness. Her kisses were deep and slow, she didn't want to rush one bit of this. She let her tongue work it's way down to lavish firm breasts, circling each nipple until it hardened from loving attention. Suzanna's soft moans were driving her nuts. Rising onto her knees, she straddled Suzanna's hips. Pressing down on her, she let her lover feel her wetness. Suzanna groaned at the contact and pushed up with her own hips to feel more. Running her hands down Lisa's sides, she circled around to her soft curls. Pushing her fingers through them, she felt the juices soak her fingers.

"You feel so good Lisa, let me taste you"

"Later baby, right now I have a couple of hours planed out just for what I want to do to you."

Suzanna continued to run her fingers through Lisa's juices, amazed at how wet she was getting just by touching her. Lisa slid down to lay between her lover's legs, placing small kisses on her stomach and hipbones until she came close to blond curls. Taking her time she licked up each side of the blond strip of hair. Never touching the quivering bundle before her. Suzanna's hips kept pushing up trying to get her to move further down.

"Please Lisa, lick me!"

"In time baby, in time."

Putting her lover's legs on her shoulders, she licked the newly exposed flesh before her, teasing the line between her outer lips and her thighs. Coming closer each time. Suzanna was thrashing on the bed, her moans becoming louder with each touch of Lisa's tongue. She gave out a loud moan when she felt that soft hot tongue slip between her lips and taste her juices for the very first time.

"Gods! Please Lisa...I want your tongue in me!"

Her hips came up off of the bed the second she felt Lisa's hot tongue push into her. Using her thumb she moved it across the bundle of nerves while she moved her tongue in and out of her lovers throbbing walls. Suzanna had her hands tangled in Lisa's long dark silky hair holding her head down. With her other hand on her lover's stomach she felt the muscles start to ripple. Pulling her tongue all the way out she plunged it back in as she pressed the bundle of nerves between her finger and thumb sending Suzanna over the edge. Before the spasms could end, she sucked on the bundle throwing her lover back over the edge. At the sound of her name being screamed, she started licking the juices flowing from her panting lover. She couldn't help herself as she moaned against the sensitive flesh and was surprised when it sent Suzanna over again. She knew she had to stop before she fell over the edge or Suzanna passed out. When she crawled back up the bed, she found that her lover had indeed passed out on her. Kissing her softly, she then whispered her name.

"Baby, nap times over."

Suzanna's eyes blinked open half way to look into Lisa's smiling face. "By the Gods, I think you killed me! But if I have to go then that's how I want to do it!" Pulling Lisa's head down for a deep kiss, she said what she had missed telling her before.

"I love you Lisa. I've been in love with you from that first day you looked at me."

"You mean the day I tried to scare you to death?"

Suzanna chuckled. "Yep, that day."

"I love you to. Always have always will."

Suzanna rolled Lisa over on the bed and lay between her parted legs. Kissing Lisa with wild abandon she left her mouth to bite the tender flesh at her neck, sucking hard she got a moan from Lisa. Her hips started pumping against Suzanna's stomach spreading her wetness across her skin. She trailed her tongue down to each breast, licking around her nipples until they hardened. Pulling each one into her mouth she grazed them with her teeth. Lisa was close to going over the edge. Suzanna stopped what she was doing and made her way down Lisa's long frame. Brushing her lips across dark curls until she made her way down to lick the juices from Lisa's thighs. She felt her own wetness begin to flow once again. In addition, it made her impatient, using her fingers she spread Lisa's lips and began to lick all around her center. Wrapping her arms under and around the muscular thighs of her lover, she pushed her face deeper, burying her face in the wetness. Licking and sucking with greed she pushed Lisa over the edge with a scream of her name. She crawled up her body to straddle one strong thigh, grinding herself into Lisa she came with such intensity that she collapsed from exhaustion.

"I love you so much Stud."

"I love you to Baby, go to sleep."

Lisa pulled a blanket over them and soon followed her lover to the land of dreams.

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The next morning Lisa woke to see green eyes watching her. Putting her arms over her head she stretched until she heard a pop come from her back. "Been watching me sleep?"

"You looked so at peace, so I didn't want to wake you."

Lisa then noticed that her lover was dressed in a T-shirt and boxers. Snuck out of bed huh? What'd ya do?"

"I made us some breakfast. Are you hungry?"

"Starving. I hope ya made a lot."

Lisa sat at the small breakfast nook with only a button down shirt on which she had seemed to forget had buttons on it. Her feet crossed at the ankle and resting between Suzanna's legs on the chair across from her.

"I finished my book this morning." Suzanna said around her toast.

"Is that what you were doing when I got here? Cuz it looked a lot like staring at my picture to me." Lisa said with a seductive grin.

"You got here right on time. I had writers block and I was able to finish because of you. You gave me the ending."

"I did?" She gave her lover a questioning look.

She explained to her about her book and her trouble with how to end it. Lisa was amazed. "Well, your gonna have to change it. 'Cuz it's all wrong."

She watched green eyes start to tear up. She raised from the table and went to where the PC was sitting. Opening up the program, she found the story. Skipping to the very last page she read it through. With Suzanna standing over her shoulder watching, she went to the last paragraph and deleted it. She heard her lover gasp and try to reach over her shoulder. Grabbing the offending hand, she placed a kiss on the palm then placed it against her breast. Stretching and cracking her fingers she started to type. When she was finished she moved to the side and let Suzanna read it. Tears were falling fast now, trailing down her cheeks to drop off onto the keyboard.

"Do you mean this?" She asked as she looked into the most beautiful blue eyes.

"Yes, I do." Pulling Suzanna into the chair with her, she took both of her hands in hers. "Now that I'm legally free and clear from the nut ward. Will you be my life mate?"

Her answer came from a heart-stopping kiss.

Years later Suzanna and Lisa collaborated on numerous books and became well known among the Lesbian and gay people for their heartfelt alternative stories.


The end
Girl Corrupted
By Larisa
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