Excellent for liv alex lovers! Sizzling hot too - Anonymous - Jan-12-2010   

Well worth reading - especially if you are a Liv & Alex fan. - Georgia - Jan-19-2010   

Ooh, nice story and hot also - Anonymous - Jan-23-2010   

Oh I read this three times over the years and it still makes me laugh. Your sense of humour between them is brilliant. And of cause it’s hot too. Yes it has everything a great Fic should have - Mez64 - Mar-14-2018   

The sequel is just as good as the first. This is a good story that keeps on getting better. - Uber Goober - Jul-19-2010   

I like the series of story. Very well written. The characters are complex and layered particularly well in a short story. Good read. - Lyn B - Apr-04-2011   

a must read. All along with Hen Night, Honeymoon and Divorce. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

Wow! I just loved this story And it's sequel! I've read them twice and I'm sure I'll go back to it in the future. Gangsters are cool!!! - Bolly - Nov-12-2010   

Super story, mystery, romance and murder! Great combination with our fav "look-a-likes". Highly recomend this and the follow-up story too - CoolNik - Feb-26-2011   

Really enjoyed both stories x - SD - Jul-16-2015   

Good job ! I'd really like to read more of it. - Mani - May-27-2009   

I like the story, want more please! - EC - May-27-2009   

Wonderfully enticing. Needs a follow-up to further the characters' tale. - IrishSamurai - Jun-10-2009   

Loved the story. Please sequel. - rosii59 - Dec-05-2009   

more please. - pickles - Jun-17-2010   

Good story. I was drawn into this story, even when I wasn't sure if I'd like it from the teaser. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - May-02-2011   

sequel pleeeease.. - Anonymous - Jan-25-2014   

wonderful story keep me awake until 2 am, thanks :) - Viridiana - Jun-13-2009   

Loved this story. Just too short. - rosii59 - Oct-01-2009   

A very talented author, you'll enjoy it. - brighteyez08 - Oct-10-2009   

story link isn't working! [Editor's Note: We are unable to locate a good link to this story...anyone out there know of one? - 10-16-2009] - help! - Oct-15-2009   

This is a wonderful story from a talented writer and is worth reading.

Here is a working link for the story in eReader format (.pdb file): http://archives.kimlys.com/xena/index.shtml

The Windows (MAC, et al) version of eReader is a free download here: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/ebooks/download-reader.asp?dltab=pc

The story was on Gabrielle Goldsby's site http://www.gabriellegoldsby.com. The site is down for maintenance until 11/1. Since the author now has several books published she may have taken her older work under the pen name 'GabGold' off line. Guess we'll see in November. - wasabigrrl - Oct-17-2009   

http://web.archive.org/web/20070501170708re_/www.gabriellegoldsby.com/stories/found.htm [Corrected 10-20-2009] - Glogomgar - Oct-19-2009   

This is a beautiful love story that kept me smiling long past the ending. I only wish there were more stories in this genre. Don't pass this one up. - rydnlow - Oct-21-2009   

http://web.archive.org/web/20011224185406/http://tiggsxenapage.com/XenaVerse/GabGold/Foundlings1.htm [Editor's Note: Corrected. 10-21-2010] - Charlie - Oct-21-2010   

This is one of my very favourite stories. Short but oh so sweet. I have it stored on my hard drive, and backed-up...Well who hasn't that happened too. Read this, it's worth it. - Omega13 - Oct-25-2010   

Oh yeah !
With a recommendation from Omega13, it could be nothing but good. - M.D. Gibraltar - Dec-01-2010   

What a great story. I really enjoyed it. - sassy123 - Dec-26-2010   

Really great story, very touching. - JettBlack - Jan-22-2011   

This is the best - Anonymous - May-02-2011   

Unfortunately all links to this story as well as the author's site seem to have disappeared. Even tried to get the ereader version - no luck. :(
Looked like a promising story. - Georgia - Oct-19-2012   

This story can be found here: http://...
It's a truly awesome story. [Editor's note: URL updated, thanks Peg. 10-22-2012]
- Peg - Oct-22-2012   

Good read. Don't know how these good stories slip through reader's radar undetected. I'm glad this one didn't get past me ;) I wish there were a way to filter out the profanity; it just throws me out of the story and I have to climb steep terrain to get back to the main road! Warning: story is full of f-bombs, as it were. I skip through the graphic intimate scenes, too, but that's easier to dodge than the bad words. Hey, maybe it's like graffiti on a beautiful building, the story is good but you get distracted when trying to follow the lines. I still felt the story is a good read. Oh, there's suggestive m/f relationships peppered throughout. Hm. I liked all the characters and the story has a positive outcome with an underlying theme that is universal. - Samantha - Jul-16-2014   

Captivating, sweet story with very hot moments. - Ash - Aug-03-2015   

beautiful and sweet with a dash of angst. A pearl. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

Great story line, love the Washington Family..... - maismore - Jul-22-2009   

Great story! I love the Washington women! - Anonymous - Jul-29-2009   

increible me encanta estan historias de la familia real.

incredible I love this series, I hope more of the Washington Family and I would like to reed about normal and
Common thing of his live.
great pleasse write a four part - Auditekk - Sep-20-2009   

WOW! READ, READ, READ!!! - bluebutterfly - Aug-27-2010   

there was something missing from this story.. i just couldn't feel the main characters.. did like the fact that alexa and lauren were still alive and kicking, though.. - xtra dog - Sep-22-2011   

"Goodbye" was certainly a tear jerker! Very nicely done, good dialogue, very touching and romantic, sad, but having a true love like that is what we all want, right? I enjoyed reading it!
- Anonymous - Mar-31-2011   

Very poignant. - Lyn B - Apr-01-2011   

Cant seen to swallow the lump in mt throat. - Wheezie - Jan-11-2012   

A story that feels real and show an aspect of relationships that are often overlooked in fictions : life together after a few years. Beautiful ! - Carambar - Apr-25-2010   

Very sweet story that is very well written. It feels very realistic in how couples can drift apart after being together for a long time, and how Cupid brings them back together. A good read that made me smile:-) - Lyn B - Jul-17-2011   

Incredible story and incredibly hot. Must read. - Anonymous - Jul-28-2009   

This story is phenomenal. This is beyond worthy of publishing. The characters are passionate and the plot is incredible.
The is a Cinderella theme but it far surpasses anything that Walt Disney could have come up with.

Awesome!! Awesome!! Awesome story!!! It had me in tears from the sheer beauty of it. - Nikki T. - Jul-28-2009   

AMAZING!!! I cannot wait to read the next installment. This was truly a delight and pleasure to read. It has it all: romance, suspense, intrigue, magic, friendship. This new bard has created a complex and gorgeous world. READ THIS!!! - Anonymous - Jul-29-2009   

Wow! I LOVED this story! A highly original and captivating twist on Cinderella. This is truly a charming story that has a little something for everyone. I cannot wait for the second installment so that I may devour that too! - Anonymous - Jul-29-2009   

Love this story. Definitely a must read for anyone. The characters are awesome and the story held my attention till the very end. It truly is a great story. - Kim M. - Jul-29-2009   

just sweet :) - wolfy - Jul-30-2009   

You see the comment above -- they are not kidding. An excellent story told brilliantly...run, do not walk to read this. With luck there will be more from the author in the (near?) future. - Anonymous - Jul-31-2009   

Oh yeah, how Cinderella *should* be. This one is publish-worthy. - offhermeds - Aug-01-2009   

the cats - they are just too real!! loved them Rae!

great story and beautifully written and if you haven't read it, you must - it is that good! - Rangeela - Aug-03-2009   

Thank you so much for the support and wonderful comments. I really appreciate them. The sequel is coming along, I'm almost half way done. I just wanted to tell you how much all these wonderful e-mails and comments and recommendations mean to me.

Love,

Rae - Rae - Aug-04-2009   

Enjoyable read - Anonymous - Aug-05-2009   

What an amazingly wonderful story. It was so entertaining, I couldn't stop reading till I reached the end. What are you waiting for, quickly, go read it now :) - Dogz - Aug-06-2009   

There is a reason this bard's first posted story is #1 on its first appearance! DO NOT MISS THIS STORY! This definitely is NOT the Cinderella story MY mom told! Brava, Rae! If this is the first, I'm excited about what is to come! - Anonymous - Aug-08-2009   

I kept skipping over this story because the idea of talking animals what somewhat unapealing. Foolish me. I finally read it, and absolutely loved it! A job well done - Jude - Aug-12-2009   

i want a "magical" sequal hehe :D and i love the fact that there's magic involved!!!! - cell - Aug-12-2009   

An incredible first offering. I really enjoyed this one and look forward to many more stories from this bard. Excellent job. - Xenamungrrr - Aug-13-2009   

i am waiting impatiently for the sequel to this! very close to emailing the author again just to bug her about it...very close indeed. :) very awesome read. - Mas - Aug-18-2009   

wow great story i loved it. there should be a sequal after this though - Anonymous - Aug-19-2009   

Fantastic! Amazing! And soooo incredibly well written! I agree with everyone else who said this was very publishable.

And you will give Cate her own story eventually, right? *hint hint* - Anonymous - Aug-21-2009   

Great!!!! More please, I am excited to see what happens next. - Anonymous - Aug-23-2009   

what a fantastic story! i can only hope we will see more from this bard either in the form of a sequel or another original. either way, i would be more than happy! - jumper - Aug-29-2009   

Very unique story, a pleasure reading it - Xenasgrrl - Aug-31-2009   

A wonderful and creative re-imagining of the classic Cinderella tale (Grimm's version more than Disney) - mec - Sep-05-2009   

A good fantasy story with a good dose of fairytale. Enjoyable. - RB - Jan-11-2010   

Fantastic story, read it. You wont be disappointed - Brighteyez - Mar-26-2010   

nice read. thoroughly enjoyed it. - Anonymous - May-22-2010   

Absolutely breathe taking! I read this months ago on another site but only recently discovered it here. I'd just like to say what a good read this was. It's definitely one of my favourites and I would definitely recommend it to anyone willing to read something different and original. Can't wait till you finish your third and final installment! Good job! - Anonymous - Jun-08-2010   

Phenomenal. I'm not sure why it is listed as unfinished because it is finished, and it is completely beautiful. I couldn't put it down. - Aerows - Jul-01-2010   

Also wanna add this isn't unfinished. Definitely the most unique take on the Cinderella tale I've read. Not to mention kindof hot in places. Deals with mature themes, goes to some pretty dark places but there is still a happily ever after.
Also a great read for people who either love or hate cats and/or horses. ^^ - Kumori - Aug-16-2010   

This is why I continue reading within the now loose realm of xwp uber...because every once in a while something truly truly special comes along.
The synopsis didn't appeal but after reading the other comments, I gave it a go.
You will not be disappointed if you do the same. - Boomer - Sep-30-2010   

loved the story - ebby - Apr-22-2011   

Great story, who can resist a fairytale! :D Great characters and well plotted.. I am looking forward to reading the other two. - Anfor - Sep-09-2011   

Link broken. - Anonymous - Jan-02-2012   

Love the story, and all the ones that follow. Would like to read it again,or even better own it. Does anyone know when or with who its going to be published? - Lakota Rain - Feb-20-2012   

is it published yet?? - xtra dog - Mar-19-2012   

F'ing awesome story! This is definitely one of the best stories I've read! - Anonymous - Sep-02-2009   

What a great story! Well written and fun. Well done! - juliemania - Sep-06-2009   

Very romantic, well written. Sigh. Having come in today from a long holiday weekend drive, I can relate to making up stories about people you see, but I didn't see anyone who looked like Washington. - Anonymous - Sep-08-2009   

Really well put together, nice pace, very sweet and fanciful. This one is a little heartwarmer. - Sai - Sep-10-2009   

The author strokes a sentence the way you stroke a lover, all warm milk and honey. This is a delicious read. - wasabigrrl - Sep-11-2009   

broken links - Anonymous - Dec-04-2016   

What a cute story,, a great read when you want a short entertaining story. I hope I see more from this author - Turtle - Jan-26-2010   

I'm going to pay more atention to my kitten from now on! Obviously, she know better :P - Gaviota - Aug-22-2010   

Cute story. Made me smile:-) - Lyn B - Jun-01-2011   

Very good story... a great read - Anonymous - Dec-13-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Fantastic story!! Need some type of sequel to expose Reggie's bad deeds and identify the lover of the killed teacher - I have an idea who it is - Traveller - Feb-19-2010   

Great story about real-life issues in small town america. Characters are lovely. Highly recommended. This is the first time I've read this author - treat yourself, she's fantastic. - Anonymous - Aug-25-2010   

Very good story - quite worth the read. - Anonymous - Sep-03-2010   

Enjoyable read. Needs a sequel. - cygirl1 - Dec-05-2010   

That was a great story. I enjoyed it very much! - uber goober - May-03-2011   

Good story x - SD - Aug-17-2015   

Excellent story. Worth reading. - rosii59 - Sep-18-2009   

Yeah, really good story. Great build up with an interesting plot. Totally enjoyable. - Silver - Apr-10-2010   

Another brilliant uber from this author. Fantastic. - Silver - Jul-10-2010   

That was another great story by C.Paradee. I thought it was very entertaining and I thouroughly enjoyed reading it. I highly recommend it to everyone else. - uber goober - Mar-26-2011   

really nice read.. at first it was a bit hard understanding all the abbreviations and army ranks.. maybe because i'm european and our ranks carry other names and titles.. moreover, i can smell a sequel so i hope the author doesn't give up on these characters just yet.. - xtra dog - Oct-25-2011   

I love this story, it's so true to life and gives a glimpse of what military life is and how much of a better future for our gay soldiers will have. Thanks, C. Paradee! - SamJerGar - Nov-14-2011   

Very good military fic! - Anonymous - Jun-22-2013   

Very good military fic! - Anonymous - Jun-22-2013   

Very good military fic! - Anonymous - Jun-22-2013   

Excellent story really well written xx - SD - Jun-14-2015   

Once again Ms. Azel's talent shines. She is a great author and I recommend reading all her stories. - uber goober - May-21-2010   

What a great story. Great job of writing. - sassy123 - Feb-05-2011   

Once again, a super story about the Williams extended family, great to catch up with them all 10 years later and to see how the children have grownup!!

Do we get a 20 year update Anne? - CoolNik - Apr-09-2011   

Great story! - Anonymous - Oct-04-2009   

Loved it and hope for a sequel. - Anonymous - Sep-08-2010   

Ohhh, such a sweet little story. Please read and enjoy! - Ines - Mar-27-2011   

Very sweet:-) - Lyn B - Apr-16-2011   

Very sweet short story ... nice read! - Ricky - Jul-04-2012   

A sweet May-December story that shows love over comes all. - uber goober - Aug-10-2012   

This is the witiest story! It reminds me of Creme Brulee's stories. - Samantha - Oct-20-2014   

So sweet.... sequel please :) - Yani - Oct-15-2009   

OMG this is so sweeet... I totally love your story..... - Anonymous - Nov-15-2009   

really sweet.. - xtra dog - Dec-02-2011   

This is a story that draws you in and holds you to the final line... and that line...
I liked the story. Well worth a read. - Lyn B - Feb-26-2011   

Really good story, liked it until the last line :-) Very entertaining! - GIA - Feb-28-2011   

can't believe nobody commented this story.. there's a bit of everything in this one, folks.. bit of romance, bit of suspense.. it ain't no thriller nor a western, but it could be both.. loved this one! - Anonymous - May-09-2011   

Another great story. - sassy123 - Jun-14-2011   

Good, solid story with lots of emotional highs and lows. If you like a more realistic type of story, this one is for you becuase everything isn't fixed easily or at all in the end. - Stacia - Jan-31-2013   

I love Mel and Janice erotica! This is a good one. :-) - Jessica - May-30-2011   

Thank you Jae for the second sequel to Second Nature. A great addition to Second Nature, but pllleeaase add a really long sequel soon - Anonymous - Dec-28-2009   

Yes, long sequel please.. I loved Second Nature. I just finished it in one reading! You are such a wonderful writer! - Yani - Dec-29-2009   

I haven't read 'Second Nature' but I love this story. Witty, touching and beautifully written. Well worth reading, even if, like me, you haven't read the first story. Now, I'm off to buy 'Second Nature'. Excellent. - Lyn B - Feb-25-2011   

id love to know if theres a story of griffin and jerie from when they first meet??? - Anonymous - Oct-07-2011   

A sweet and very different portrayal of Herodotus than many I've seen. Puts our girls in a historical/cultural perspective a bit. - Asterix - Jan-19-2010   

Better than the first White Fever. Full of action. Keeps your interest until the end. - Anonymous - Feb-12-2010   

a really good tale, written in a way that made me feel like I was waching one of the episodes. - Dark'n'Ligth - Apr-19-2010   

Great sequel.
Indeed,full of action. - donar - Jan-16-2011   

Yes, Virginia!! there is life and romance after 50!! i thoughly enjoyed this story. the author was superb in bringing the reader into the plot. thank you, f.j.d., for sharing your art with us. kudos!! - vicam - Jul-20-2010   

That was a wonderful story of discovery of two people finding real love. I'm surprised it's not been read and rated more. - uber goober - Oct-13-2012   

Ha, ha , ha !!! Been a while since I read such a funny fic ! You did my day K, thx ! - Condorcet - Apr-18-2010   

For anyone who has read a lot of XWP-based (Classic, Uber, whatever) fanfiction, there will be very few words or phrases in this story that you haven't read at least, oh, maybe a hundred times before. However, the way that K. has put them together makes this a truly snicker and snort-worthy read.
You might be a trifle confused in the beginning, but stick with it. Once you make sense of it, it really is worth the effort. - Ianic - Apr-18-2010   

You simply amaze me. Excellent story. -Silverwriter01 - Anonymous - Apr-21-2010   

OMG K,I think I sprang a leak from laughing.. Brilliant. I love X&G uber's but all the cliches can get very tiring. You have made them hysterical. Thank You!! - Scotti - Apr-22-2010   

this was funny!! - crv - Apr-27-2010   

Too bed there's not a rating for being funny. This would rate high in it! I like the ending. :D :D - celts - May-11-2010   

Very very funny. Great idea for something a little different, I actually laughed out loud. - Stardawn - Jun-26-2010   

This is so,so funny - I love it! Thanks! - Forester - Sep-22-2010   

10 out of 10! It has everything in it, suspense, action, angst, love, hotness. You just have to know how to read it. Thank you writer for sharing your nuttiness :) - Mica - May-25-2012   

An all time fave..Read many many times.. and could read many times over - Anonymous - May-12-2010   

Fantastic story! loved it! will there be a third story? That would be excellent. - Bolly - May-20-2010   

wonderful, wonderful story and series! Bravo! It's nice to have new X and G FF!! - Anonymous - Jun-19-2010   

Great Story!!Definitely a must read for Xena fans - Anonymous - Jun-19-2010   

It was so nice to see a brand new xe/gab story. Loved it and I'm looking forward to continuing the tales this lovely author has shared with us. Read it - it's classic xena/gabrielle. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-05-2010   

Thank you for writing something that's not afraid to be real. This piece, just like life, is at times messy, uncomfortable and doesn't pretend that there are answers for every question. Thank you for reminding us that being true to ourselves is worth risking happily-ever-after. - A.D.Winn - May-31-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** I have never had a story affect me like this has. For days Brianna had haunted me. I cried for her loss; I cried for my loss. Thank you for for having the courage to push beyound the safe zones of writing. This is what others should aspire to. - Anonymous - Jun-08-2010   

wow! unique story by a master storyteller! Awesome and very much recommended. - bookgeek - Jun-26-2010   

I've enjoyed lots of fanfiction during the last six years since a friend clued me in to its existence. I've sent a few private emails to bards during that time, but this story is the only one that has prompted public words.

I started reading it, filled with curiosity and hope that the author was talented. I read more, engrossed in the plot possibilities. I continued to read, sinking into dread and could not move away. Then I finished the piece and just sat, staring at the screen.

I overflowed with rage at the injustice, grief from my own loss, and intense pain from the knowledge that this could well have been and could continue to be non-fiction.

Rae D. Magdon, well done. Very, very well done. - Logos - Jul-06-2010   

This was so incredibly moving. Thank you. - Anonymous - Jul-31-2010   

i lost someone whom i love very much, last year. i didn't even know she was dying. and just like Erin, i had all those questions and what-ifs in my head. perhaps we can't answer every question.

thank you for writing this. it seemed to have spoken to me in a way that no one else did. - A.J - Sep-05-2010   

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This, this is a tale that DESERVES to be read. Very moving and has you hooked from beginning to end - you just can't walk away from it. - Kugai - Jun-08-2014   

I've got a lot of affection for this story. It was one of the first J/7 stories that I read. I liked it. Very well written as all sHaYcH stories are. Good. - Lyn B - Feb-17-2011   

This story was a very pleasant surprise! If you're a fan of ST, take the time to read it! - Anonymous - Aug-17-2014   

Another jem from Isobel Rowan. - cwulf - Oct-29-2010   

Awesome story -- love it! - Anonymous - Nov-27-2010   

Hot and good. More! - Anonymous - Jan-30-2011   

This is a well written story. Thanks. - beckek - Mar-08-2011   

Enjoyable read. - Anonymous - Apr-03-2011   

I really enjoyed Ma and Pop Rizzoli's interactions with Jane and Jane's emotional journey. Fun story. - DrDeath - May-05-2011   

Great, enjoyable read. Wish there were more R&I fanfic from this writer. - Mich - May-11-2011   

Fun story with great characters. The interruption of Jane's confession was bittersweet but humorous - the one-sided phone conversation with her mother was soooo funny. - Helen - May-27-2011   

I loved it. I couldn't stop reading even with my partner begging me to come to bed. Great job!! - pickles - Jun-01-2011   

Great enjoyable story. Captured the characters well. You won't be wasting your time reading this one. - cmwulf - Jun-18-2011   

Great enjoyable story. Stayed true to the characters. You won't waste your time reading this one. - cmwulf - Jun-18-2011   

R & I is my new obsession. This story is, as all stories by this author, fantastic :D - Aerows - Sep-21-2011   

Loved the story! Good character development and interesting OCs! - FOLfan - Oct-19-2011   

Excellent read! Loved the dialogue and Jane's struggles to get her head out of her....:) - Jillian - Oct-28-2011   

I loved loved loved this story stayed up till eight thirty in the morning reading it. Keep up the good work!!!! - LSC - Nov-05-2011   

This was a good story. And I loved the Rizzoli and Facts of Life crossover. - Anonymous - Jun-24-2012   

Really great read xx - SD - Oct-02-2015   

Great story, with a wonderful twist that I'm embarrassed to admit I didn't figure out sooner. Makes my fanfic ever-loving heart all gooey. - Anonymous - Feb-24-2016   

Really enjoyed the characters and the story plot. Engagung and enjoyable story - Scorpio_2097 - Aug-26-2016   

Well written, with some nice surprises. I don't know how I missed this one. - JS Stephens - Sep-05-2016   

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Darren - Darren H - Jan-17-2023   

Great characterization of Barbara's motives and emotions. Most of D's "conversations" are very well done but the conversation between Hel and Barbara in this one is fantastically done! The reader really feels both emotional responses and is fully drawn into it. For all BOP fans, this is a must read. - Stacia - Dec-19-2012   

very well written for a first story. The emotion and passion in the story is very deep and develops gradually. It really reminds me of how magical love feels. Bette is surely an angle ssennt from above especially to Nadia. I demand a sequel... - viva - Jun-10-2011   

This is wonderful, you've made me a fan... - Sid - Jun-18-2011   

I love this story and have no idea why this tsory is not published and for sell you are a great writer, keep up the great work! - Kristy Cato - Feb-29-2012   

Surprising - A good read that says a lot in small vignettes. - Anonymous - Mar-08-2017   

Excellent post-Endgame story! Loved the characterizations of the Janeways as well as Chakotay, making it painfully clear who's best for Seven. Wonderful Gretchen and Seven moments too! - Zivadiva - Sep-13-2012   

Great, enjoyable read. - Beckek - Sep-18-2012   

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Excellent handling of the "After Endgame" dilemma. One of the best. - Seana James - May-08-2013   

There were some great laugh out loud moments in Asylum. The dynamics between the characters, even the minor ones were lovely crafted. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent. - CJ - Aug-30-2013   

Very nice Post End Game fic that will warm your heart efficiently. - Anonymous - Oct-09-2013   

A nice 'sunday afternoon' read.
- Ricky - Nov-10-2012   

Really great story. Love it - Anonymous - Jan-17-2014   

Loved it. Great story. - Anonymous - Jan-18-2014   

This is the best fan fiction that I have read for some time. If you enjoy romance...you will love this story. - Anonymous - Jan-19-2014   

Can't say enough about Katie, CJ and their friends. What a great series. - Stacia - Jan-15-2013   

really enjoying this "After" series by Wendy. Smart writing. Action packed. Great characters. - Anonymous - Jan-17-2013   

Sweetness, danger, angst, love, an argument, GREAT make-up sex! Loving the Carsons and their friends! Can't wait to get started on the next one. - Jenn - Jul-21-2013   

LOVED IT! Starting to love these characters too... - Denny - Jan-06-2014   

LOVED IT! Starting to love these characters too... - Denny - Jan-06-2014   

this story shows how important communication is in a relationship.. well, that and hot sex.. at least i think that was the auhor's message.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2014   

This author kinda makes you forget you're reading a work of fiction. I was right there in that bank with them. Starting to feel some real affection for these lovable characters. Highly recommend! - Jonah3 - Apr-14-2014   

Love this story he whole series is great xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Love this story he whole series is great xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

planetsolin thank you. the first series is good but this one is even better. either planetsolin is once a soldier or she is one of the good imaginative mind!! you guys read it! - eden - Feb-11-2013   

This story tugs on the heart strings. It is as well written as the first and emotional. The ending was abrupt and it feels almost unfinished. It would be interesting to see a piece where "Number 1 and Number 2" meet and compare stories. This is a definite must read for military story fans. - Stacia - Feb-12-2013   

Great story. Truly inspiring. - Charlotte - Mar-10-2013   

Such a great story ! I hope you'll write other companions fics to it. Thx to you ! - Platoon1 - Jul-20-2013   

I discovered this one by sheer luck. It's really good ! I loved the 1st one in this series too, and I do want to know about the 3rd woman in the program and may be have a all together... - She-ra - Jul-21-2013   

I can't wait for the third installment (pls tell me there will be one!). Planetsolin is one of the most talented bards out there and this is another wonderful MUST READ story. Congratulations again on your amazing work and pls keep 'em coming. So many authors have gone MIA from the fic world we cannot thank enough those that remain and keep bringing new amazing stories to life. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU! :) - babyjune - Nov-19-2013   

Oh my. What an unexepected gem. Left me with a smile on my face. Thanks for sharing with us!! - colorado fan - Jul-05-2016   

**SPOILER**
Oh i didn't realize this is a vampire story. What a surprise! - Passiflora - Jul-08-2016   

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This is one of my all time favourite B'Elanna and Seven of Nine stories. I loved the original characters and the entire premise of this story. I would definitely recommend this story ! - Dogz - Feb-14-2008   

This story is soo good, recommeded to all. - DalizC - Feb-14-2008   

this is fantastic
great story
a must read
would like to see a sequel - Anonymous - Feb-14-2008   

I have read this story a couple of times and each time it just gets better and better. I think everyone should get a chance to read this. Enjoy!! - Gwen - Feb-15-2008   

This is a great story, one of the best Voyager stories I've read to date. Hope there will be a sequel. - Fabeola - Feb-18-2008   

This story and others by H.W. show a richness in the development of both theme and characters a like of which is seldom seen. As a Voyager story I'd say it's one of the best I've read. Take the time to read this story. If you enjoy it as much as I, check out Passion and Perfections Voyager's Torres/Seven section for more of H.W.'s work. Great job H.W. - nljacksn - Feb-19-2008   

ah one of my most top favourite stories found the way in here. :) Love it and read it several times a year I admit. One of the best I know. - wolfy - Mar-21-2008   

Terrific story, I highly reccommend. - Anonymous - Mar-29-2008   

One of my favorites and one I reread. I like Empress Shadeen and her take no crap attitude. - linda aka cygirl1 - May-01-2008   

one of my all time favs. read and enjoy - Anonymous - Jun-15-2008   

fantastic - Anonymous - Mar-06-2009   

Fantastic read.. One of my favorite H.W. Stories.. More of Empress Shadeen, Zerisan, Seven of Nine and B'Elanna.. sequel please.. - Anonymous - Mar-24-2009   

greatttt story. - Anonymous - Jun-10-2009   

Fantastic story! Must read for all...
- Ronnie - Nov-12-2009   

I can't even come up with good remarks; this is truly one of the best I've ever had the privilege of reading. A must read. - xivren - Dec-07-2009   

My all time favorite Star Trek Voyager story! - Rono - Dec-22-2009   

H.W. is one of those writers of Star Trek:Voyager Fictions you can always count on to write a good tale. Always enjoy coming back to read this and other tales. - Kugai - Feb-09-2010   

This is a very well written and interesting story, I love the characters but what I would like to know is when the next update is. - Marian - Jan 2nd, 2003   

Not only does she have great taste in music but, she writes too! This romantic story is very well written and it was a lovely treat for this very warm afternoon. Keep up the good work and write-on! - nlw - Jun 12th, 2003   

A refreshing tale with delightful twists. I really enjoyed this story and will be reading more from this author. - Meg - Jun 23rd, 2003   

This story is one of my favs. Had me captivated from the beginning. I love her work and would highly recommend this fantastic novel to all readers. - Clare - Jun 24th, 2003   

outstanding, great story,much better than the movie that it inspired, sequel, sequel, sequel.......loved the interplay between the major an minor parts, a very good and enjoyabe read, MORE PLEASE! - dusty - Oct 24th, 2003   

This is my first time commenting on a story and all I can say is, what an absolute awsome story!!! Not since the Billie and Cat series by KD Bard has a story and its characters, totally captured me. It kept me glued to my PC for hours. I have never seen the movie, but I am betting that Ambrosia's rendition blows the movie away. I would pay great money to see this one in production. I am hoping to see a series of stories based on all of the characters. - Anonymous - Nov 4th, 2003   

Well-written story, but frankly it was just plain mean after a while. I wanted to smack Jack for stringing along Sonny. I wanted to smack Sonny for being willfully stupid and cheating on her girlfriend with someone she'd never even met face to face. I kept wondering if someone really could be that naive.I just couldn't wait to finish it to see how much more stupid Sonny was going to get. Not to mention how long it would take Sonny to grow up and see that Jack put her out of business on purpose. She's supposed to forgive & forget and then fall in love with her after that? I know this is fiction, but really! - Anonymous - Nov 20th, 2003   

This is an extremely well written story, which made the sweet plot even more enjoyable for reading. I can't wait to read more from this author. - Dimples - Nov 21st, 2003   

An fantastic read for all, but wanted to slap both of them at one stage or another. - LuvTigger71 - May 31st, 2004   

Very good story, worth the price of admission, Engaging and very funny at times. BUTTo borrow a line from one of the characters, I wanted to scream at both of them at several points along the way "Have you lost every bit of sense you possessed!?" and at others slap them both into next week. - -Aerows- - Dec 15th, 2005   

Oh how I loved this story!!!! Sure I lost a few hours sleep and suffered through a long day at work the next day but this one I couldn't put down. An interesting twist on a classic. A definite must read!!!! Opus - Anonymous - Aug-03-2006   

What a wonderful story!!! It is a must read one. I can't count how many times I repeated this story,lol. Read this and your time will not be wasted...For the author, please write a sequel for this, PLEASE.lol... - Fan - Nov-19-2007   

Beautiful and funny story, started reading and couldn't stop until the end. I recommend this story to everyone you definitely won't regret reading it at all.
- Anonymous - Dec-15-2007   

Cute story! Wish there was a sequel. Highly recommend it! - Xenangabfan - Feb-20-2008   

A great story that had me captivated to the end, even though Sonny annoyed me when she refused to admit her true feelings. SEQUEL!!! I want to know more about Chloe and Briana!! - Revalis - Feb-27-2008   

excelente historia, desde el principio me quede super enganchanda, recomendada absolutamente - Ale - Nov-10-2008   

loved the movie but this story is better. I have become a fan of Ambrosia's work. Thank you. - rleef - Feb-02-2009   

EXCELLENT story..........I couldn't stop reading I was too addicted to the story..... Maxine - Anonymous - Feb-03-2009   

Wow... amazing,wonderful,I couldn't stop reading !!!! Great Job,Ambrosia,you really ROCK ;-) - Manuela - Feb-06-2009   

What a wonderfully entertaining story and even though it was based on the movie "you've got mail" it was still a great read and well worth taking the time to read it.So if you want to be well entertained for a bit, pull up a chair and dig in. - uber goober - Feb-23-2010   

I loved it! It was simply great! Ofcoarse I wanted to slap a few of the characters at certain points. But it had me captivated from strt to finish and I simply loved Jack's humour, constantly had me laughing. But if I was Sonny I'd be pretty annoyed at Jack for hiding the fact that she was Blueyez, she should have just told her when she arrived at Disneyworld .. - ROCer (Sheronah-Hope) - Sep-28-2010   

I so love reading this story :) Jack is evilly funny and Sonny is blushingly cute!! Affair to Remember is for anyone who wants to fill their heart with good humour. Hihgly recommened. - zackie - Mar-16-2011   

Not even finished with this yet and still have to say what a great story this is! Well written and god the characters are great! Makes you keep your fingers crossed for the "bad guy" - Anonymous - Jun-29-2011   

***SPOILER ALERT*** though a romantic story at its core, it is also very funny at times.. the flintstones part was simply hilarious.. and the banter cracked me up a couple of times.. well done.. - xtra dog - Jan-23-2012   

I wish there was more about during and after the cabin sequence at the end. But the build-up was amazing! - Anonymous - Apr-11-2012   

i loved this story... jack is a helpless romantic, so i crossed my fingers for the bad guy too ;));)) :D - braniac - May-07-2012   

What a wonderful story. Really held me captive. - Wheezie - May-27-2013   

Really nice. it's been long since I read such a scintillating tale. Read it you'll not regret it. - sandy - Oct-23-2013   

Extremely enjoyable read. I loved the humor and wit! - Ricky - Jan-05-2014   

REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY .Must say I enjoyed this better than the movie well done great job xx - SD - Jun-25-2015   

REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY .Must say I enjoyed this better than the movie well done great job xx - SD - Jun-26-2015   

FABULOUS!!! I`ll have to read it once a day at least! And I especially loved the dates being an aphrodisiac! DELICIOUS!!! - Magda J. - Mar 1st, 2004   

Great pacing! - absinthe angel 777 - Dec 12th, 2004   

Absolutely great! Loved reading it. :-) - The Fic Addict - Jan 3rd, 2005   

B L Miller you are the greatest! Another fav story. Must read for sure. - dms_143 - Feb-17-2008   

Great story. B.L. you are an excellent writer, very touching story! - Anonymous - Dec-22-2008   

Very nice smooth flowing story that gets you there! Well done B L. - Diane - Jan-21-2009   

Ouuuh ... yeah =) - FriikkiN - Jul-31-2009   

Wicked is right. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

This was a really nice written story! - Starry - Jul-07-2010   

A really great story. Good job - sassy123 - Sep-23-2010   

amazing... utterly and completely value the authors writing. please keep em coming! - Lisa Jane - Feb-14-2012   

This is a great story! I wish it was longer. I finished it in a few hours and it had me glued to the seat. Really good characters and an exciting plot. READ IT! - Amanda - Nov-29-2008   

That was a pretty good story. It was a little short. It could have been longer and a litle more detailed but over all it was pretty good - uber goober - Oct-18-2010   

Good story. Very well written and defintely worth a read. - Lyn B - Apr-21-2011   

A great, entertaining story. Definitely take the time to read this one ... - Ricky - Mar-05-2015   

Great dialogue! Wonderful tail, though the end felt rushed. - Anonymous - Jan-09-2017   

Great story! I really enjoyed the first two parts. Just can't wait for more. - GC - Apr-06-2006   

Loved it! Great read as were all the stories in this series. - Anonymous - May-18-2008   

Must read! - Tee - Apr-04-2009   

"standing applaud" =D hell yeah, you gotta read this!
- FriikkiN - Aug-08-2009   

I can't believe there aren't a lot of recommendations for this story. Don't let the title throw you off, it is actually a very sweet and romantic story so please take out some time to read this...its actually very good!!! =] - Anonymous - Sep-12-2009   

This was a very entertaining story that takes you on a roller coaster ride of romance between two soulmates that are meant to be together. A well done tale. Read it. - uber goober - Dec-05-2009   

Great story. A must read! - MK - Mar-11-2010   

This series was wonderful. I almost didn't read it because of the title but once I started I could not put it down. I must say that there were points where I wanted to crack some heads though - stubborn, blind woman can drive me to distraction. All's well that ends well - it just takes time. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jun-15-2010   

For the longest time I skipped this story because the title did not particularly appeal to me. But this is an awesome read. I am so glad I finally decided to give it a try. This is a very beautifully written story. An Alex Tryst classic! - N - Jun-21-2011   

Wow I didnt know what to expect when I first read the title but the other comments mind me wonder lol. I loved it keep'em coming Alex
- Jayleen - Oct-13-2011   

Don't let the title stop you from reading a truly amazing series. - Ricky - May-08-2012   

Forget the title and read it because it's a must read! - Raf_51 - May-14-2012   

...oh, and an epilogue would be perfect - Raf_51 - May-14-2012   

Omg this is amazing story it is so well written loved evey part of it just wish there was more .Thanks for writing this lovely storey xxx - SD - Jul-31-2015   

I have read the entire series and it is truly awesome! Thank you very much Alex for sharing your amazing talent with us!
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goddamn! this is so great! where have you been hiding? need more more more - opiraeus - May-28-2008   

Another great piece of storytelling from this most promising new author. Brilliant and dense, the Xena canon as written by William Gibson. - Kamouraskan - May-30-2008   

Love it! Love it! Love it! MORE MORE MORE!!!!! - Anonymous - May-30-2008   

Easily the best Conqueror fanfic I have ever read. Grim, gritty realism that at first shocked me yet ever so slowly drew me in. This story could easily stand on its own without the familiar XWP characters. I highly recommend this to everyone. Great ending, I eagerly await what comes next. - anon - Jul-29-2008   

The science-fiction whore in me was tickled to no end. This fandom needs more Spyrel. - Cookies - Jul-29-2008   

Wow! Another excellent story! Thank you. - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

By far the best thing I've read on this entire site, and I've read just about everything. Beautiful writing, captivating characters, scintillating storytelling. I can't BELIEVE it hasn't gotten to #1 yet. Spyrel deserves it. Hands down, no questions barred. Just amazing. - Anonymous - Apr-26-2009   

An absolutely amazing story! One of the best pieces of fanfic I have ever read (out of at least hundreds, seriously). Spyrel is incredibly talented and has an innate grasp of her characters' selves. I loved it! - M - Aug-12-2009   

Excellent story. I was looking for a futuristic story and this one was great! I only wish it had been longer! - Xenasgrrl - Aug-17-2009   

Oh, my god!!! Why did this incredible story have to end? I'm in agony because a sequel was never written. If I were wealthy, I would purchase Spyrel and keep her as my "story slave." Shackled to a laptop, she would write chapter after chapter for eternity and life would be absolute bliss. PLEASE, SPYREL WRITE ANOTHER TALE!!! WOULD YOU ACCEPT BRIBES VIA PAYPAL? - Anonymous - Sep-13-2009   

Eeffin' a, you're good! Can't believe I didn't read this earlier. But after being absolutely mesmerized by Pretium Silenti, the thought of cyberpunk kinda put me off. If only I'd known...
Loved the intermitten style, went back to re-read to get better clarity right after I'd finished reading the firts time. Clearly your way of explaining less rather than more is absolutely addictive and dripping suspense. I found myself captured by the character development that shone through so very clearly in those short scenes... I could go on and on....
All in all, I hope to read more of this entirely talented bard. Thanks you Spyrel! - Anonymous - May-10-2010   

Best uber-realization of FIN I've ever read. - Anonymous - Sep-06-2010   

Very tight, gripping cyberpunk fic. Dark and tense, complimenting FIN but totally deviating from the show's texture.
I enjoyed this a lot. - Boomer - Sep-19-2010   

Oh my god. WHY are there not more Xena stories by you? Spyrel's writing is incredible. It's so "in your face," and I'll say it. I love it! - Whitney D. - Mar-04-2011   

nice way to make sure that xena and gab, i mean ink and siren, stay together for the rest of their lives.. :) - xtra dog - Aug-16-2011   

It's just very good. Brutal, but good. - Frankie - Jan-08-2013   

Fantastic uber tale I come back to again and again. Captures the essence of X&G perfectly. Dark but worthwhile. A must! I wish Spyrel would write more. - Quillbard - Sep-19-2016   

cute story, and funny convo between Xena and Gabrielle. cool. - Anonymous - Mar-28-2010   

awwww! Cute story - Anonymous - Jun-07-2010   

erotica, yes, but a good story as well that is begging for a sequel! i got to the end and couldn't believe it ended there. - Anonymous - Feb-26-2011   

WOW. Awsome as usual. I go to to the end and was suprised that it ended how it ended. It truly does begh for a sequal. - firelarc - Feb-27-2011   

What a great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Feb-27-2011   

Very hot! My fav author - Anonymous - Mar-21-2011   

Good story. Well written and with characters that feel realistic. Worth a read. - Lyn B - May-03-2011   

Awww,but it looks like there should be a PART 2, not even a sequel. It just CANNOT END THERE!!! Please, please continue...... - Amazonka - Jun-01-2011   

I can't believe this has so few recommendations. Its one of the most memorable f/f stories I've read anywhere. I read this story and its sequel when it came out (Feb 11) and several hundred stories later, this still counts as one of my faves.
Admin, please if you have time, update the TOP 25 list (at least every quarter, monthly if possible) so the better but newer stories like this have a chance to be highlighted and read. - OMG - Jul-13-2011   

Thank you very much for the first 2 parts of that very beautiful story :-) I almost can't wait for the next few sequels ;-) Being really courious what happens next... and how those two loveable women find their way together. - Ayla - Sep-07-2011   

i agree with the description in the teaser: it is a fun little ditty of erotica.. but man, is it hot.. pumpkin pick, huh?? seems like a game worth playing.. - xtra dog - Jan-06-2012   

pumpkin pick... yeah that was a good one! hot...hot...hot - braniac - Jan-06-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - TKD Vix - May-30-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - TKD Vix - May-30-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - Anonymous - May-30-2012   

Good story. - Scorpio - Aug-25-2012   

Good story. - Scorpio - Aug-25-2012   

nice and hot story. Actually , there is a sequel : http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/k/kimpritekel_accidentalfall.html - Anonymous - Jul-04-2014   

Nice short read but not a great ending ?? - SD - Jun-12-2015   

This is one of the all time great Xena fan fiction stories ever written. A classic. - Karon Reiter - Jan 9th, 2005   

One of my top five favorite classic Xena fics! Very sexy, great writing. Thanks Friction! - periwinkle - Feb 18th, 2006   

oh my goodness oh my goodness - angst, anger, vengeance, love, lust... it's all right here! - Anonymous - Aug-14-2008   

*** spoiler alert*** I really liked it and found the intervention of Callisto pretty much interesting! I've often thought that the cold-hearted bitch the original character incarnated was sometimes caricatural. She stays a "bad guy" here, but Friction brings her nuance, and ambiguity. She elevates her at the rank of enigmatic nature, charismatic tortured soul. I really appreciated it! - yuka - Oct-23-2009   

I've always had a fondness for Callisto & more of a willingness to forgive her evil. Truthfully if someone had killed my parents I'd spend my life trying to get even as well. - Anonymous - Nov-13-2010   

I loved it! Read if you haven't already! - Lee - Mar-02-2011   

What can you say about this story that hasn't been written already? It would've made a great episode and with Rob's penchant for blood and gore, he probably would've loved it. Aside from that, this was a harrowing story that was very well written and deserves to be read over and over again because it gets the highest honors of a 10. Friction is a good writer. - kr - Jul-01-2011   

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed this story and it definitely had some hott moments, but I guess since I have read Wet Dreams by you, it is hard for another story to compare. I greatly enjoy your writing style and will be reading all of your other stories also. - Crushi - May-19-2012   

Wow!!!!! 5 stars - Anonymous - May-31-2013   

Interesting story. Worth taken the time to read. - ubergoober - Jul-08-2013   

Very well written! Great story line. Very believable and consistent with the Xena and Gabby characters. I didn't want to finish it it was that good! - XenaZon - Apr-19-2014   

I'm surprised no one has commented on this little gem. An amazingly well written short story that introduces us to two very likeable characters. Not only that, but it's got a very hot sex scene!! One of my favorites, so if you've not read it yet, do so now! :) - Jen - Sep-11-2007   

This is a wonderfull story. It has everything in it. What? How can this be in such a short story? Well Ms Jlynn proofs it. Go read it and tell her what you think. Should at least be one time a number one. - Inge - Sep-14-2007   

Lovely short story. It's a shame it hasn't been read by more. - Anonymous - Nov-20-2008   

this story is amazing. i think that something's in it for everyone. :) and what an incredibly erotic yet sweet love scene! really great job here. a must read. - Anonymous - Mar-13-2009   

This is the BEST short story i've evere read here. Thanks JLynn, and thanks a LOT :) The language, the metaphores, everything's just perfect. It's not "empty", emotions and feelings are understandable, meaning they have a ground to grow on. Even having a not-so-big practice in reading in english, i can honestly admit that this piece was written beautifully, and thanks to such authors i love english more. Thanks again. sorry 4 my bad english writing ) - RuSome - Nov-25-2009   

A beautiful gem of a romance story. - wasabigrrl - Dec-05-2009   

sweet holiday story - much like a modern day fairy tale. an entertaining feel good romance. - kc - Dec-15-2010   

This is a great story. Very well written. - Anonymous - Dec-17-2010   

A sweet story. Made me smile. A good read. - Lyn B - Jan-24-2011   

i loved this story it was very sweet and left me smiling afterwards very nicely done - chippy - Oct-19-2011   

After reading this, I couldn't help but take the time to write a recommendation aknowledging the high quality of this work. It was a real delight to read, for this bard having such a way with words. I needed romance, I needed to get wrapped in a story line, I needed a talented bard. That's exactly what got. So if you too, want to indulge yourself a moment of escape in pure fictional sweetness... trust JLynn, click on the link and enjoy ^^ - yuka - Nov-10-2011   

Wow!! very well written story. Well paced with a fabulous story line. The writing is prose and definitely the best I have read for a very long time... well done JL - soopi - Mar-23-2012   

Xena fans must read this story !!! - Anonymous - Oct-03-2012   

thanks for recommendation. Very sweet story and great read. Recommend you read this little gem. - colorado fan - Oct-04-2012   

link is dead.. - xtra dog - Jul-20-2014   

I've read this a few times, and it still draws me in. Amazing work, Zee. Thank you! - Anonymous - Nov-25-2007   

Starts out as a sweet, funny love/lust story, then suddenly...won't give anything away - just read it. This story definitely needs a sequel. - chatham23 - Dec-05-2007   

I re-read this one when I saw it recommended by Anon & have enjoyed its complexity and characterizations. - Kali - Dec-06-2007   

Fabulous story! Needs a sequel. - Julie - Dec-13-2007   

Wonderful story-Would like to see a sequal. - Trista - Jul-23-2008   

This story has a lot of depth. It's about a young woman who was unknowingly caught in a web of lies and tradegy at the tender age of 13. Carmen, now at the age of 26, is forced to relive the past her mind tried to protect her from. She's such a wonderful character. Thank goodness for the care and attention she receives from her two friends Sue and Ed; and such wonderful friends the three make. Molly is another friend that later enters the small circle and brings with her a lot of sunshine. And there is April.... What a wonderful world if only made up of these five characters. Brilliant writing with a lot of insight and heart. Thank you, Zee! Oh, yes, there is reference to male/female intimacies. It is not the main character, however, just boyfriends or girlfriends of the main character's best friends. I was able to gloss over those references with litle or no ripple on the storyline. - Teresa Thomas - Dec-01-2008   

i am puzzled that this story is not rated higher. it is absorbing, with fantastic characters. - kc - Sep-11-2010   

Complex story, with lots of twists and turns before the ending. I enjoyed reading it.
- Lyn B - Mar-05-2011   

This story contains everything. I couldn't stop until I read the whole book! The story line is different from any thing I've ever read. Easily one of my favourite stories! - Riley - Aug-20-2012   

You know, everything I've read of Zee's has been amazing. This story is no different.
*****SPOILER ALERT***** I found most of the story incredibly sad. Carmen made great progress in the end, but the shadow will never truly go away. Great job in making me feel the emotion of this tale. - AJ - May-15-2013