Excellent beginning to a trilogy. - Janet - May 21st, 2002   

Without a doubt the best Mel & Janice short story ever written. Absolutely superb with a fantastic (if depressing) ending that has to be read to be believed! - Janet - May 21st, 2002   

The Fallen is sadistic. If you like happy endings, stay far away from The Fallen's work. - Grommetik - Aug 29th, 2003   

One of the bravest Xena fanfictions I have ever read. Tough to absorb, yet very powerful and plausible. I have yet to read anything else that comes close to shocking me as much as this did.

But, do avoid it if you believe 110% in the X/G relationship. It may upset you. - Kez - Oct-05-2006   

Melissa's "Journey of the Soulmates" series is excellent. I have hooked and spent the last 4 months reading it from start to finish. Melissa good was the reason I ventured into Xena fanfic and reason why I found my way to this site. I've found many wonderful bards and stories here... but Melissa will always be my favorite ! - Anonymous - Oct-24-2009   

This is fresh and well-written, a great combination! She draws us in from the opening lines, building suspense with humor and a good sense of dialogue. I can easily picture 'normal' people talking and feeling this way. I read this one, then went back and read it again. - k.j. - Sep 15th, 2002   

Wonderful story!!!! This is about Lily and Anna trapped in a earthquake.Suspense and humor in a extremly well written story, read pleasantly. - Leth - Jan 5th, 2003   

The Anna Lily Saga has a permanent place in my heart. It's absolutely amazing. A story of familial love, of building a family in the modern world, and of unexpected trials. It's a story that will tug the heart of even the hardest person. This is not a fluffy kind of romance. It's real, so real that everytime I took a ride into their world, something still touches my heart eventhough I've read all the stories many times. - xiu - Feb-10-2008   

I have read and loved all of the pieces in this series - and it's still not enough. These characters are so warm and welcoming, it's would be a shame not to have more.... - Anonymous - May-13-2008   

KG is one of the best! This Shaken series is one you shouldn't miss! I've enjoyed this story so much I'm craving for more update on these 2 wonderful characters. thanks so much KG! - Luie - May-15-2008   

WOW! Thank you ever so much KG! Such a great and wonderful work. I found myself forgetting to breath a few times, I was so caught up in the moment. - Jenner - Jun-22-2008   

Great story! - Nicole - Jan-19-2009   

One of the best stories I have read in a long time! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-08-2009   

Ecriture puissante et intelligente. L'humour subtile, irresistible... et certaine partie ne sont definitivement pas faite pour etre lue aux bureau! lol! BRAVO! Le talent de cet auteur est exceptionnelle a tous les niveaux. En fait, lire cette serie est un privilege... a ne se refuser sous aucun pretext!
- yuka - May-22-2009   

Fantastic Read!! Loved it! - Texas_wild - Oct-11-2009   

This story had me at "Careful gorgeous". - Anna Lei - Sep-06-2010   

I just stayed up all night into the early morning reading this wonderful story! So totally worth the bags under my eyes at work tomorrow... well, today! Loved it! - Anonymous - Dec-28-2010   

This is very well written. The characters are very realistic. It's poignant and powerful.
- Lyn B - Feb-09-2011   

What a great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Feb-27-2011   

nice story, indeed.. leaves me with anticipation for the follow-up.. so i'm off to read 'stirred' right now.. - xtra dog - Jun-15-2011   

One of my favorites. - Anonymous - Dec-27-2013   

a very good read. "Cult" story to me. "Cult" writer too. - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

LOVE LOVE THIS STORY CAN'T READ ENOUGH ABOUT THIS COUPLE XXXX - SD - Nov-07-2015   

I reading this amazing journey for the third time. I wish I could find more stories by this author. - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

****SPOILER ALERT****

I had to listen to that song from the end, I found a clip of John Barrowman singing it, it's a wonderful song!

This series is so full of tender moment and ups and downs, it seems rooted in real life. Excellent work, Ms Meagher! - Anonymous - Nov-26-2013   

Great story.I love the dialogue/banter between these two characters.Will this story be finish soon??? Can't wait til it's finish. Do you have other writings? - mt - Aug 26th, 2004   

I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. A must read for everyone. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! - Veronica - Aug 27th, 2004   

I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. A must read for everyone. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! - Veronica - Aug 27th, 2004   

This story is excellent! The main characters are quick witted, very entertaining and extremely easy to like; you really start to care about them more and more as the tale develops. I can't wait to see where the author goes next, so keep up the good work! - Ang - Aug 30th, 2004   

Ok..I told myself I wasn't going to read this because it was not a completed story yet,but I peeked at the first page and when I dicovered that it used one my most favorite movies as a basis I just had to read it. I'm glad I did it was a great read. A true homage to a great movie. Now I can't wait for it to be completed. I hope it gets updated soon(sneaky bard! you sure know how to leave folks hangin!) Great work...keep it up! - Elfcat255 - Sep 1st, 2004   

Wow!!! I never read an story with an character soooo sexy!!!!Besides, well written, with sense of humor, fascinating! I'mfall in love with they, i'm addictive that wonderful story!Please, Sage, more!!!!! - leth cross - Sep 15th, 2004   

Amazing, fascinatig ! Really, the charater Leigh is afemme fatale, a veeery SEXY GIRL! I'm fall in love withher too! I wait anxiously the next part. - Kath - Sep 28th, 2004   

Great story, and I emailed the author about updates. The author is working on the new installment, be patient. Trust me, we cannot wait, we love the story. I will most surely rate this story upon completion. - klenglish - Sep 28th, 2004   

What a story! cant wait for the next installment. love the character leigh along with the humor and sarcasm found in the story!!! - blazinangelwings - Oct 1st, 2004   

Cool story.... you need to finish this sucker! - jac - Oct 3rd, 2004   

Wonderful!!! Your character Leigh is a fascinating woman, I read and fall in love, how everyone. Please, Sage, I wait the next installment anxiously, more !!!!!!!!!!!!! - Heather - Oct 12th, 2004   

Hi...Just wanna say I really appreciate all the great feedback everyone has given me on this site. I am busy working on the next installment and I will try to have it posted as soon as possible. Thanks for hanging in there with me during this whole process. It has truly been a pleasure to write this story.... - Sage(the author) - Oct 14th, 2004   

Love the interaction between the two gals, can't wait for the next chapter. - Anonymous - Oct 22nd, 2004   

I just finished reading the story and I just LOVE IT! it is one of the best uber stories out there. This one is definitely in my top 5 favorites. It is well written and i love the characters Erin and Leigh. Man, I just can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there is a sequel after this wonderful story is finish :) - GabHope'fan - Jan 12th, 2005   

This is a wicked story. Leigh's character has a devilish sense of humour and she flirts like a demon. I don't normally start reading unfinished stories but the other 'comments' I read on this site pushed me over the edge and now I'm left in limbo land waiting for my next fix. Serves me right I suppose, will I ever learn. Please, please, please feed me now. - Sai - Jan 20th, 2005   

I cant stand reading unfinished stories, but morbid curiosity got the best of me, and i got to say it was deffinitely worth it. now just finish it and i'll love you forever - Meeka - Mar 12th, 2005   

Wow! Just Wow!...I cant wait for the next read. - Leia - May 21st, 2005   

weeell, i'm gonna have to say... I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! - Katrina - Jun 7th, 2005   

Great read, can't wait for the next chapter!!! - Anonymous - Jun 14th, 2005   

I have just finished re-reading this fantastic story and it was just as good the second time around, but! it's still not finished. Does anybody out there know if this will ever get finished, I'm desperate to find out what happens mext, as I'm sure a few of you are too. Help us, pleeeaasse. - Sai - Oct 21st, 2005   

I love this story too! I also have been waiting for the writer to finish. I say let's give Sage some encouragement. How about everyone email her on Oct 30th to let her know that we are still interested in her finishing this story. Maybe if Sage realise she still has fans out here she will get the spark back and complete the story. What say you...are you fans game? - Sue - Oct 24th, 2005   

This story is worth finishing, please Sage finish the story. Please don't make me beg, you wouldn't like it when I beg ;-pAs for the suggestion of emailing Sage for encouragement, I'm all for that. - Sai - Oct 27th, 2005   

please finish this story....it is very very good..I love it. - barb - Oct 28th, 2005   

I very seldom read unfinished stories but I made an exception for this one. I nearly cried when I realized I had misread the review dates only to discover the story hasn't been touched in years. I misread and thought the story was recent and might be continued to the end.

Great, fun read but be prepared to come to a screeching halt long after you get sucked into the storyline. If you can handle the angst, go fot it. - Katelyn - Jan-16-2008   

human sacrifice!! Damn this woman can write. Wow..what a great awesome story. maybe just maybe Sage will finish this story to put an end to all humans who bravely read it. Unfinished but i still recommend it. - vampireslayer2 - Jan-24-2008   

I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. Please finish it - Elsa - Jul-08-2008   

Wonderful when will you finish it I can hardly wait - Alex - Sep-06-2008   

This story was amazing, but sadly. I dont think we will ever learn how it ends. - Brighteyez - Sep-08-2008   

Sage, what's up? Why doesn't finished your wonderful story Honor Among Thieves? Are you sick? Still alive? We are wondering several problems or accidents for it doesn't completed. Please, to tell something, don't be cruel with yours fans!!!!! - Leth Cross - Sep-09-2008   

Sage, please finish this story..Your fans have been waiting a long time for this...Let this torment end... - leia. - Sep-18-2008   

Sage, I have been waiting a long time for this to finish..any updates? Are you still writing? - beth - Jan-27-2009   

SAGE, PLLLLLEEEEASE, FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!I'M WAITING SOOO LONG!!!!!! - Leth Cross - Jan-29-2009   

AHHHH! There's a reason I usually don't read unfinished stories, I hate not being able to finish a really awesome story like this one!!! - Anonymous - Jan-30-2009   

This is an awesome story,very interesting,too bad sage hasn't continue it..any chance of it being completed..has anyone heard from sage? - Grace - Feb-22-2009   

Holy crap! Tbis story is awesome. I know it's been years but Sage, if you're out there, please finish it! Please please please... - Syro - Jul-25-2009   

One of the best stories out there. I had a day off and spent the day reading it. Very worth it even though it's not finished. Keep up the good work Miss Hamilton. - Jet - Aug-25-2009   

very good story with a lot of emotions and funny moments.. I really love this story, too bad it's unfinished and we can't write to the author anymore... - Laurence - Aug-28-2009   

What a great story. Please please finish it. - sue4rab - Aug-31-2009   

Please, please finish the story. You can't just stop there. This story needs an ending desperately. - MayC - Aug-31-2009   

This story is exceptional witty dialog, interesting plot just an all around great story - I wish the author would have finished it I would have liked to see what other twists were involved before the hopefully happy & I'm sure surprising end. - bchgrl - Dec-23-2009   

Having just finished reading the last installment of
Honor Among Thieves and I think it is right up there with some of the best published novels I have read. It had me captivated for several days.Truly some of the most rich, smart and witty dialogue that I have read in a while.
The character development was so complex, extremely engaging and well written that I already miss those two women like they were friends of mine that suddenly disappeared without saying goodbye.
A note for the author
I see from the long list of reviews here that I am just one among many adoring fans who have been begging for a finish the story. (It is so close....)
All I can do is add my plea in some small hope that reaches you on the eve of a some grand vacation on a deserted island with a brand new laptop and a inspirational and supportive muse.

Please finish this story and write many more!!!!
You are too good to stop.

Thanks for the great read!

L
- laf66 - Mar-06-2010   

Excellent story - loved the humour and relationship development. Great writing style that keeps you turning the pages with anticipation. Really, really, really NEED the conclusion though... please?? pretty please??? - rev k - Oct-09-2010   

I was soooo involved in this story, I can't believe I missed the fact that it's unfinished. Such a shame, because it's brilliant. - Silver - Dec-27-2010   

Great story! Too bad it's unfinished. - Anonymous - Feb-02-2011   

Great story! Too bad it's unfinished. - Anonymous - Feb-02-2011   

Damn nice! can't wait til the next installment! - Anonymous - Feb-13-2011   

Stayed up late reading this great story.. Can't wait utill the next installment!!!!!! - Anonymous - Jun-21-2011   

Great story....but please finish!!! - Anonymous - Jul-12-2011   

amazing story)))
hope one day you finished it, because only you can - love this story - Sep-10-2011   

this is beautiful, fun and new!!! just can't wait for read all story - lola - Sep-10-2011   

Please finish!!! - Anonymous - Apr-15-2012   

I challenge you not to fall in love with anything Kim has ever written. She's a fantastic author and well worth a look or two-thousand...Highest recommendations!!! I guarantee youll love it and come back again and again. - Fox_Feather - Apr-15-2006   

Great story. Kim Pritekel weaves a nice tale of a successful music star with a scarred past and turbulent present and a childrens nurse who thinks she has everything she needs in her small town life. After meeting under interesting circumstances the two become friends and find their lives intertwining and the bond that develops between Christine and Willow is palpable even if it takes them a while to understand it fully.

Very well written with a touch of angst and dash of romance to keep you interested all the way to the end. I would definitely read a sequel.
- Sai - Apr-21-2006   

Is this story finished or unfinished? The link on chapter 8 is a loop. - Anonymous - Apr-21-2006   

This is great! I love the slow buildup of the romance. Nice change from "meet, greet, hop in bed" type stories. Maybe I'm just a sucker for a good romance. - JSS - Apr-22-2006   

KP has always been one of my favorite authors and has written some of the 'nets finest fiction. This story is one of her best and is full of what makes her so fun to read - humor, love, action, drama, plenty of angst and the characters are true to life in a way only the very talented can portray. Thanks again KP for your past, present and future endeavors -- I'll always be a fan! - Therese - Apr-26-2006   

This is one of the most well written stories, you will ever have the priviledge of reading. The characters are amazing, and you feel like your a part of their journey. I HIGHLY recommend this Gem to everyone. - brighteyez - Jan-10-2008   

That scene in chapter 16 made me want to call my ex. It was WELL written and I had to GULP!!!! some ice water down. WHOA!! It took a while to get to, but WELL worth the wait. I'm gonna turn around and read this story again next week. It was just that "DARN GOOD"!!! - K.LEWIS - Feb-16-2008   

I'm so impressed!!! I think this is the most sweet and romantic story out there. Gosh I love this story!! - Anonymous - Feb-29-2008   

Gosh, I like this story. Read it when you want to believe in love and redemption. - calabria - Mar-05-2008   

Great inspirational story about love. - Anonymous - May-14-2008   

I've read this story ten times or so and everytime it's like the first. Gorgeous,well written - Manuela - Feb-08-2009   

This is a very talented writer. Read anything written by her that you can get your hands on. 'Twilight' is a particularly good piece of characterization with a very satisfying plot. - wasabigrrl - Mar-19-2009   

This is one of my Favorite Authors out there, and this story is simply amazing! - Angelicrainbw - Oct-12-2009   

Beautiful, well written love story. I challenge anyone to not fall in love with Christine and Willow. - nicole938 - Oct-26-2009   

i've read most of KP's story. all are well and beautifully written. and this one did just that.... KP's words just takes my breathe away - crv - Jan-11-2010   

Very nice tale. Highly recommended. Had me hooked and I couldn't stop until the end. Great job !! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jan-28-2010   

Excellent story and characters. Everything KP writes is great. - MK - Mar-11-2010   

Love the story. Love the characters. - RLA - Aug-21-2010   

Two thumbs way up. I totally loved this story. - sassy123 - Sep-10-2010   

Beautiful written story. Excellent job by the author. - Anonymous - Nov-21-2010   

What a wonderful story of finding your place. It touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing it! - Anonymous - Dec-28-2010   

Loved this story! Very loving, just the right amount of angst, perfect rainy day reading material. Thanks so much for sharing this. - Stardawn - Jan-03-2011   

Excellent story!!! - Anonymous - Jan-13-2011   

Another great story from Kim!
Bravo. - hit.dana - Jan-23-2011   

Great story but then I haven't yet found any of Kim's I haven't enjoyed. Well written with wonderful characters! Can't wait to read more from this author soon! - Anonymous - Jun-28-2011   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jul-01-2011   

great story - Anonymous - Jul-13-2011   

Good read:-) - Lyn B - Aug-24-2011   

i liked this story, i loved the end of it. but adam... man that was a tough one. - braniac - Jan-06-2012   

I thoroughly enjoy KP's writings. This one really stays with you long after the end. The words just flow and lead you along, effortlessly. Had a difficult time stopping to sleep. I know I will read it again and again. If you are debating reading it, just do it. Then you can thank KP for sharing her gift with us... Thank you Kim! - ms - Feb-19-2012   

I have read kim's stories countless times. She is a great author and has the ability to bring back emotions and turn your life upside down ;) - Anonymous - Apr-21-2012   

beautiful caracters....beautiful story... - Anonymous - Dec-06-2012   

An excellent read. When I first saw the thing about a clown I skipped this story but came back to it and decided to read it. And I am so glad I did. A very touching and emotive story. Highly recommend. - Niyah - Feb-12-2013   

***Spoiler Alert*** Well, as one would expect from KP a very good read. Quite the emotional roller coaster; well constructed and a page turner. Well worth reading - as well as all of her work. Would be nice to have a little update or two - how are they - esp Christine surviving the terrible twos, or the first day at school ... - Georgia - Jun-09-2013   

AMAZING AMAZING STORY THIS IS A MUST READ .THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ .THANKS YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY XXXXXX - SD - Jun-07-2015   

This is one of my all time favorite stories. And Linda is one of my favorite authors. This story is just so full of everything good. Hmm...I think I'll read it again. - GayNow (Car) - Feb-05-2008   

A marvelous story. - Anonymous - May-04-2008   

My fav Uber of ALL TIME. The best story out there. PLEASE do yourself a favor and read this. - Amanda - Dec-12-2008   

Awesomest story ever!!! This is my 3rd time re-reading, sequels including. Absolutely fell in love with Kennedy even with her past. Can't get enough. Another sequel with be vvvvveeeeeeerrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy appreciated :D Oh, and more thorough story on Isalba Cortez and Meg O'Brien!!!! Dang curious about them. - Sally - Apr-05-2009   

CALLING ALL Newbies and Oldbies. ANYONE who has not read this story NEEDS to read it. It is one of the founding ubers of the Xenaverse. Beyond AMAZING! READ it!! You will not put it down. Again...READ IT!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-06-2009   

Talk about not wanting to put this one down... LOVE IT!!! READ IT!!! then READ it again! This is a Must Read! Enjoy... - Texas_wild - Nov-16-2009   

I enjoyed this story from start to finish and could not put it down until I did finish it!! A true uber...extremely well written...truly one for the archives!!! - JC - Dec-20-2009   

What a great story. A job well done - sassy123 - Sep-11-2010   

If I didn't have had to work, sleep and eat I would've read the story in one sitting -- which I almost did. ;-) It's incredibly romantic, gripping, and contains more than one element of surprise...Very well written. *two thumbs up* - Anonymous - Oct-19-2010   

I loved all the stories. This is my second time reading and I'm sure I'll be back again!
- Bolly - Jan-02-2011   

loved it.. - Anonymous - Jun-03-2011   

Fantastic story really enjoyed this xx - SD - Dec-25-2015   

OMG LOLOLOL!! What a great little tale and a great idea for a story about X and G!! Leave it to Cheyne to come up with this stuff. Laugh out loud funny! Dialogue is perfect ... witty, delightful even precious! - Balmain - Jan-18-2008   

Oh, my, this was hilarious! I'm not there yet, but my partner is, so I can totally sympathize with Gabrielle. - libris cat - Jan-19-2008   

heheheh adorable :) - Kat - Jan-20-2008   

ROTFL "Amazon death pallet" My coffee spewed all over my keyboard when I read that!! This is a very funny story!! I highly recommend it! - TallTale - Mar-03-2008   

Loved it! - Anonymous - Mar-08-2008   

This is such a great story! I really recommend it! Cheyne you are so funny. Hope to see a lot more of your stories. - Anonymous - Jul-24-2008   

Hilarious!!! A MUST read! - BonnieD - Aug-01-2008   

Hahaha, this is awesome!! Very funny, I loved the 'what if' scenario!! - Jemma - Aug-30-2008   

THIS WAS THE FUNNIEST STORY IVE READ.LOVED IT - TNHANLEY - Oct-24-2008   

XDDDDDDD! Very funny! - AikoujOi - Dec-17-2008   

Oh gods ! ^^ I think I have never laughed that much ! This one would definitely fit for a Xena funny episode :D - Anonymous - Feb-21-2011   

absolutely hilarious.. maybe we will get that xena movie after all?? - xtra dog - Mar-28-2012   

Absolutely hilarious, and very sweet. We should all be so lucky to live a long and happy life. - Anonymous - Feb-13-2016   

one of the best fics - ever!these authors certainly have a way with words and in my opinion, are right there among the best! - Rangeela - Feb-10-2008   

Great story one of the best I ever read. It`s really worth the time, read and enjoy. - marty - Feb-10-2008   

very nice story! - Anonymous - Feb-11-2008   

You must read this story. It is so exciting and lovely - ghx - Feb-11-2008   

Fantastic Story. Read and enjoy!! - MHollowell - Feb-11-2008   

Well written. Highly enjoyable. Definitely recommended. - Ape - Feb-14-2008   

You have to read this!!! This will make your time enjoyable. And for sure, after reading this story you will beg for a sequel. :D - Anonymous - Feb-25-2008   

This is such a great (and FUN!!) fic. And professional women's basketball for our warriors. A great story and wonderful characters. - leavethesky - Mar-08-2008   

This is a great fiction. You shall not miss this fic. It is highly recommended and a must read story. It will leave you wanting more from this author. Thank you authors of this story, hope you will create a sequel for this. Continue the good work and Godbless - Anonymous - Mar-13-2008   

BLOODY FANTASTIC!!!! - Anonymous - Mar-14-2008   

The best ever written! - Elle - Mar-17-2008   

OH MY GOD!!! This is fantastic read!!! Well written and the characters are well developed. Reading this will leave you satisfied and wanting to want a sequel... I know I do. lol:) - Anonymous - Mar-25-2008   

FANTASTIC READ!!! I truly enjoyed reading this story. It is different but really exciting... You must not miss this! - Fan - Mar-31-2008   

I'm from the Uk so I can't say I really have much of an interest in basketball which initially put me off the story before reading it. However, I can honestly say that after a few hours into it I was in my room shooting rolled up socks in to my cupboard drawer. The charachters were awesome, and it was exciting to read. Not to mention a certain tall, dark haired, blue eyed beauty was as hot as hell!!! I even watched some basketball clips on youtube. Brilliant...love the whole meeting your idol thing, it always leads to a great build up. Thanks. x x x - nexakill - Apr-17-2008   

WOW - this is a great piece of work! I loved it! - lyneX - Apr-19-2008   

Great Work!!! A sequel might be nice. - Anonymous - Apr-23-2008   

Simply the best - Anonymous - May-10-2008   

stayed up way to late reading this one. - rleef - Jan-03-2009   

Awesome story! One of the best by two fantastic authors! Highly recommended read, you wont be disappointed! - Kelz - Feb-16-2009   

I loved this story so much that as soon as I finished reading it I went back and started reading it again. It was well paced, well written and utterly enjoyable. - BardGirl - Mar-20-2009   

OMG!!!! TNovan and Susanne Beck you guys rock! One of my top 10 stories of all time. Thanks for sharing. - Stormy - Mar-21-2009   

This is a great story, which I can highly recommend. I'm not into that particular sport but enjoyed it nevertheless a lot. - filfil - Apr-26-2009   

Awesome - Fantastic - Do Not Miss! GREAT STORY - Great writing!! - Texas_wild - May-23-2009   

Really enjoyable read. - Puff - May-30-2009   

This is a very well written, fantastic novel. Highly recommended.

A sequel is in order. - Brandi - Jun-07-2009   

great story!!! loved every minute of it. - Anonymous - Aug-07-2009   

great,great,great story ! - Manuela - Oct-22-2009   

Wonderful story, well writen and it keeps you reading. These ladies know their b-ball and make me see the games as they unfold. Well done, and would love a sequel. :D - Akiela Xal - Jan-01-2010   

wow as a basketball and uber fan i definitely am HIGLY pleased with this work. Thanks to Susanne Beck and TNovan for a great, believable storyline. Now comes the begging....more please about these characters and their interactions, please. - avid fan - Jan-19-2010   

wow as a basketball and uber fan i definitely am HIGLY pleased with this work. Thanks to Susanne Beck and TNovan for a great, believable storyline. Now comes the begging....more please about these characters and their interactions, please. - avid fan - Jan-19-2010   

Excellent !! Read it, you will not be dissappointed. Loved the b-ball backdrop. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Mar-03-2010   

Fantastic story!!! ... except that it kept me up way past my bedtime ;) - Anonymous - Apr-19-2010   

Sports, hot women and even hotter sporting action with hot women I've died and gone to heaven! I couldn't stop reading and now at 1am I'm finally going to bed. There are twists and turns, some of the which I guessed and was cheering along with everyone.

The sporting action was crisp and had me on the edge of my seat at all times.

The depth of characters and the storyline made it so much more than girl meets girl, fall in love the end.

If there could be a sequel or a spin off I'd love to see it... Please more from these brilliant authoresses
- Lesley - Jan-06-2011   

simply amazing! - Anonymous - Jan-15-2011   

kinda llove that sport romantic story! - Anonymous - Apr-03-2011   

Thoroughly enjoyed this story...fabulous characters...wonderful writing!!! - JC - Aug-11-2011   

nice read.. kept compairing - and confusing - it with another similar story on the xenaverse, though.. - xtra dog - Aug-28-2011   

A really great story. Job well done - sassy123 - Nov-21-2011   

love it. a must to read - ruthless - Apr-09-2012   

IT WAS AWESOME!!! MUST BE READ!! I can't stop smiling by the end of it. - Anonymous - Oct-20-2012   

Great read couldn't put it down ::: - Anonymous - Apr-17-2015   

This is incredible! It kept me reading and it ended to soon. I want more!if someone's looking for a great story to read this would be it. After reading a lot of the stories on here, you get tired of the same old same old. This had some delightful turns. Highly recommended - katie of ohio - Apr-27-2015   

Amazing :really great story loved it would love more well done - Anonymous - Oct-07-2015   

Amazing :really great story loved it would love more well done - Anonymous - Oct-07-2015   

Absolutely fantastic read. I'm new to fanfic and I'm hooked forever. - G - Mar-09-2016   

Definatly a story to read. Brilliant writing. - Anna28Carm - Oct-14-2016   

Holy crap! You sure know how to write a cliffhanger! Absolutely great stuff once again. I eagerly await the next part in the series. - Arassar - May-08-2008   

This story is absolutely fantastic!! The depth, the character development, the angst! Just wonderful. Waiting with anticipation for the next sequel. - Kattie - May-08-2008   

The series is really ramping up. Great story - Anonymous - May-08-2008   

This is one of the best Buffy story eva!!! - Anonymous - Feb-11-2009   

This author really knows what they're doing!! i'm enjoying every second of it - Anonymous - Feb-26-2010   

So happy to read this new story by an extremely talented writer! Hope we get to see more. Thanks. - Ginger - Feb-04-2009   

I am a big West Wing fan....Loved this very sexy story about Gina and Zoe - Ramsey - Feb-05-2009   

Wow! Just...wow! - Anonymous - Apr-24-2011   

I certainly hope part 2 is not the final part of this series. I hope to read more of this Conqueror and her occasional visitor. - Anonymous - Feb-21-2009   

It's good to see Aurelia writing a Xena story again. As usual she delivers a fine story with all the hallmarks of the two characters we all love. Of course, no Aurelia story is complete without a twist or two in the plot, which only makes this tale more engaging. I hope this isn't the last we see of this series. YOU MUST READ IT!!!!! - jo - Feb-21-2009   

this can't be the end of it. it's not right? pleeeeeease tell me that it's not! :| - Anonymous - Feb-22-2009   

Great story - Anonymous - Feb-24-2009   

Very well done story. I have been looking for some fan fic with a more interesting alternative storyline and this definately satifies. It's one of the best conqueror-esque storylines out there that depict Gabrielle in such a rugged role. - Jenna - Mar-01-2009   

A story with all the hallmarks of a Xena episode - fights, intrigue, maintext and suspense. I thoroughly recommend it - Anonymous - Mar-06-2009   

An exciting tale that manages to find another angle on the Xena legend. Just when we thought there was nothing more that could be explored.... An excellent story that I hope will continue soon. - Anonymous - Mar-07-2009   

A well thought out adventure at a time in Xena's life that is little explored. With lots of suspense and plenty of fighting, it's a tribute to one of the most enduring fictional female characters of our generation. A good read. - Anonymous - Mar-31-2009   

A very clever story. Do yourself a favor and read this! - Anonymous - Apr-15-2009   

Great Xena story with good intrigue and imagery. I could see the action as it was written. A MUST READ. - xenafan - Aug-01-2009   

Great story series. Read the first one so you won't be lost. Very interesting take on the characters - just before becoming the Conqueror. I hope we will see more of these characters - definitely does not feel "finished".
- Georgia - Sep-10-2009   

I loved these conqueror tales but I agree that it seems unfinished. There needs to be another tale to wrap up X&G's relationship. I've read all of Aurelia's works on this page, with the exception of Possessing Morgan which had unfortunely been removed at the author request, and I have been thouroughly impressed with her skill and talent at being able to craft rich and entertaining stories that are capable of drawing you into the characters world. I highly recommend reading all of this authors works and would like to say thank you to Aurelia for sharing her talent and vision with all of us. - uber goober - Sep-24-2010   

"The Undaunted Heart" is certainly not the finish. I had intended to write another tale. I have a story idea but it's a matter of finding the time to write it. I will endeavour to to continue this, and the Priory/Jacey stories, soon.
- Aurelia - Sep-24-2010   

What a great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Nov-12-2010   

I loved the main character in this, I'm so grateful the author was able to continue this series to it's conclusion. Although we didn't get any closure on Bessie... :(. I think the true love story here was Jordana/Bessie :D - Anonymous - May-19-2010   

The title says it all!! A wonderful series that ended with a bang! I hope that the author will one day continue the story as I'd like to know how Jordana handled the change in lifestyle. If you haven't read this yet, now that it's finished you have no excuses!!!!!!!! 10 out of 10 - majic - May-20-2010   

Seeing the series being concluded I had to reread all of the other books first. Thank you Aurelia for this great ride. It is wonderful that it will published as a novel. - rleef - May-20-2010   

I have to say that I had a few misgivings when I saw the title of this series, but it turns out I was totally wrong. Fantastic plots, very well developed variety of characters with realistic interplay among them, and just a plain good story. Any chance of a 6th book?? - celts - May-21-2010   

Now that the series is finished, the ending has been worth the wait. It has been a story of opposites - humor and drama, angst and joy, life and death. I certainly hope this isn't the end for J and her ladies. A job well done! If you haven't read any of the books yet, I suggest that you begin at the beginning because, believe me, you don't want to miss one single word of it. - clarejessie - May-23-2010   

This is just sooooo good!!!!! This author has once again told an amazing tale laced with humor, action and good friends we have come to know. I thoroughly recommend this one. - Anonymous - May-29-2010   

Another highly successful series from a bard who constantly amazes me. Thank you!! - Anonymous - Jun-01-2010   

A refreshing take on science fiction. I LOVE IT!!!! I hope to one day see a continuation of this story. It will be worth the wait. In the meantime, I'm going to put this one in my "to read again" file. - Anonymous - Jun-07-2010   

it's a great story. i had a good time reading this :D but i would also like to know how J's life would turn out after everything. and maybe a little more on the j/beri? - cell - Jun-14-2010   

A terrific series. Will we see any more of Jordana and her band of Noorthi? I certainly hope so. Even if you don't like science fiction, I recommend that you read this series. Excellent!!!!! - Anonymous - Aug-01-2010   

What a great tale! That was such a good story I'm sorry it's the last story to the series. It definitely leaves you with those "feel good " feelings.I highly recommend it. - uber goober - Aug-26-2010   

I just finished this series and all I can say is WOW!! Don't miss out on a great adventure. - Anonymous - Oct-13-2010   

Love this series little Alex is funny little child xx - Anonymous - May-03-2015   

Broken link - Anonymous - Jun-06-2016   

This was the first story that I read from ArcadiaArden. It is very well written and I highly recommend this story. I thank the author for sharing this story with us. - Beckek1 - Jan-12-2013   

Really enjoyed this. The writer's other pieces however shorter, are just as enjoyable. Looking forward to more from Arcadia Arden - Anonymous - Jan-14-2013   

Excellent story - Anonymous - Jan-19-2013   

Great read :) - Anonymous - Feb-24-2013   

One of my favorite stories by ArcadiaArden! I love her depiction of Jane and Maura and she's always spot on with the romance and sex - happykt - Mar-01-2013   

Great read! - Anonymous - Jan-23-2015   

I believe Jane would have acted that way.... an entertaining story.... - Anonymous - Nov-10-2019   

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A nice change of pace for Xena, visting her family while Gabrielle battles with the Amazon's. The writing is balanced and accurate for both Xena and Gabrielle. A good read. - Corbeau's Voyager - Oct 6th, 2003   

The only fan fiction writer that I have ever asked to marry me. LOL. Missy has a way of writing Xena and Gabrielle. She had taken a different path from the series since "The Quest". I'm so thankful that she did because for all of those weekly Xena withdrawals, then those re-runs months, the whole fifth season, and now the end of the series, her stories have kept the Xena and Gabrielle saga alive for me more than any other classic stories. What I love most about Missy's stories are the relationships between the characters. That's not to say that her stories lack action, heck no, but Xena and Gabrielle could be picking their teeth and I would like to read about it in a Missy story. Thank you - BYL - Mar-14-2006   

Run, don't walk to this story. This is one of the best storiesout there, as well as all of missy's other stories. If you decide to read this, it will one of the best decisions you will make today. - Emma - May-11-2009   

Read this story a while ago and had to come back to it again...to me it signifies the beginning of my favorite love-birds acknowledging their true feelings towards each other...Great!!! - BlueButterfly - Aug-16-2009   

Love reading the whole series and I have re-read them several times. This is what has kept me sane during my 12 hour shifts at work. - Anonymous - Apr-12-2017   

'Round and 'round we go! Will the day never end? ;) I'm glad I didn't miss this, it is one very good story. I'm going to put on my ME tee and read more from this bard. - Kaye - Jan 9th, 2003   

Seems I'm a day late, a dollar short and won't get to read more from this bard as I wanted. She's had to remove her stories. What a damn shame and loss to the xenaverse. :( - Kaye - Jan 9th, 2003   

loved it! utterly beautiful story! thanks, bard :) - Kati - Jun-23-2006   

Great! Great fun!!!

Very well Recdommended for a good laugh and HOT final! - Mile D'Cast - May-07-2007   

What a great story. I read it all at one time. This is a MUST READ - Anonymous - May-08-2010   

Funny and very well written. It made me feel happy on a gloomy day. - Lynne - Jan-06-2011   

Really want to read this, web page not working. It links to page, but won 't load. - Anonymous - May-22-2012   

cleverly written story with a side dish of hilarious.. leather pants, huh?? didn't know they had an additional benefit aside from sexy and hot.. - xtra dog - Jul-20-2014   

High adventure and romance. Loved this story. - Anonymous - Jun-10-2008   

Marvellous! Ms. Davies' stories and characters are always very rich and vibrant, and 'Rebeccah' is no exception. A must-read for Romantics. - MHR - Dec-02-2008   

Up til 3am and yes it was worth every moment of lost sleep. Do yourself a favor and just click for an evening of enjoyment. - Intl Warrior - Jan-31-2010   

This is a wonderfully entertaining romantic tale. Great characters,plot and story line. - Uber Goober - Oct-28-2010   

Nicely-crafted, well-written story that transports the reader to mid-to-late 17th century England. Includes plenty of action and suspense, capped off by a satisfying ending. - XenaLives - Sep-24-2011   

I liked this story very much. It's well-written and thought-out, with a good characters and satisfying ending. Recommend it. Note: this is the first story in a two-story sequence, the second one is "In the Shadow of Tyburn". - Enverz - Aug-09-2012   

Another wonderful story - sassy123 - Sep-30-2012   

Loved it! I read until after the sun came up; blurry vision finally forced me to bed. I always find historical pieces to be a precarious choice; often the author either ignores the date and uses modern slang and phrases, or s/he gets so wrapped up in the minute details, the story drags. That's not the case with this one; the way the author incorporated phrases and historical figures into the story makes it an easy read that flows seamlessly. - GirlWithMagic - Feb-08-2014   

I love Charlotte Bell. It's nearly 1AM. I'm actually grateful you haven't finished it yet, otherwise I wouldn't be getting to bed tonight. I could not put your work down. What a colorful and gifted writer. You have me right 'there' in your writing. Thank you. - Anonymous - Jun-21-2006   

What a remarkable work! Angelrad captures the flavor of Bronte's original, both in her prose and in the atmosphere she evokes. This story earns my highest recommendation. - ldp - Jun-22-2006   

Okay, you have now finished Charlotte Bell, and I am awed by your sentences, your creativity in bringing the reader to the time and space of Charlotte and Jane. There were hundred of sentences that rippled across their page stirring my imagination, my five senses. So glad I read this amazing work. I recommend it on the highest level. - Anonymous - Jun-22-2006   

I...I'm stunned! Completely speechless! What and outstanding story. Angelrad is truly gifted. - Reese - Jun-22-2006   

I...I'm stunned! Completely speechless! What and outstanding story. Angelrad is truly gifted. - Reese - Jun-22-2006   

Well deserved number one. This was a well written, engaging story that more than satisfies! If you are off put in the begining by the older style of writing...read on - it's worth it! - Anonymous - Jun-27-2006   

Excellent story, brilliant writing style and well worth your time. Although as with another of AngelRad's stories (Where There's Smoke) I did yearn for more interaction between the two lead characters. But don't let that deter you, I could'nt put it down once I'd started. - Sai - Jul-05-2006   

wow - excellent - raddan - Jul-25-2006   

It's such a surprise to me how good this story is. This is completely different from all her other stories in tone, imagery, intricacy of language. She really captured the best of Austen and the style of that time. I highly recommend this story. - Anonymous - Sep-03-2006   

Amazingly well done. Emulates the genre perfectly. Everyone that loves classic literature should read this story. You will not be disappointed. - jd - Jan-22-2007   

Absolutely amazing. Amongst the barrage of fics these days, rarely does a story ever deviate from the normal script. Your command of the English language is awe inspiring. Thank you for sharing it with us. - Kayla - Feb-19-2007   

I've set out to read something to pass the time but what I've found in this story was breathtaking. Have you ever questioned "fate" ? Have it ever come in an unexpected packet? I really loved this story, very heart warming at time and can reach into one's ill weak emotion. I would recommend this story to anyone, you will be in for quite a surprise... - Kuu-chan - Apr-17-2007   

This is one of those stories that, once you start it you cannot put it down. I hadn't realized that 3 hours passed as I was reading it. Angelrad's style of writing is second to none. I highly recommend this one. Well done. - A fan - Mar-26-2008   

Absolutely AWESOME story. I've read all of her stuff and she is by far one of my favorites. - Anonymous - Apr-12-2008   

This is just a kick ass story. I read it without stopping, except to go get another cup of tea. WOW. A MUST read. If you don't you're missing out. - justacitygirl - Jun-02-2008   

Probably the best piece of literature on this site. If this author isn't published, she should be. Her goal to be reminiscent of the Brontes takes this gothic romance to new heights. - Anonymous - Aug-30-2008   

I have read this story many times. It is truly one of the finest stories ever posted here. - Anonymous - Oct-03-2008   

An amazing story - Anonymous - Jul-19-2009   

what an amazing story! it was beautiful, haunting and engrossing. wonderful! so gad i happened upon this bard. - Anonymous - Feb-07-2010   

What a great way to spend a Sunday afternoon. I was totally engrossed. Angelrad is a grand teller of tales. I enjoyed this immensely. I am making it a point to read all she has written, and I bet I won't be disappointed. Good job, A. - Anonymous - May-08-2010   

This is a captivating and intense story. Unique and engaging. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. - Anonymous - Jul-12-2010   

I have to say, I've read many, many stories on this site. Angelrad, by far, is my favorite. She knows how to tell a tale with style. If you've not read this one, be sure you do. It will not disappoint. - A Fiction Reader - Sep-01-2010   

WOW! What a story. Started reading it and didn't stop until it was done (well except to go to the potty) Very engaging and well written. Kudos to you! - CantStopReading - Jun-22-2011   

You know, I never liked Jane Eyre. She always seemed far too willing to overlook monumental flaws in the way she was treated. The independent part of me just rebelled. This story though, goes a long way toward quelling that rebellion. This was a tightly crafted story with a nice style. - Kerr - Jun-28-2012   

What a great story. I chose it because I thought it would be a nice little story to read. When I started, I couldn't stop and stayed up until the wee hours of the morning reading it. WOW! If you don't take the time to read this one... you're missing out.
- Anonymous - Jul-18-2012   

Well done. - Wheezie - Apr-19-2014   

Incredibly beautiful retelling of Jane Eyre. The author is talented beyond measure. I would easily believe she wrote this in the 19th century if I didn't know better. It was like reading Charlotte Bronte's own work. As a huge Jane Eyre fan, this was a dream come true. Thank you for sharing your lovely work. - AnnaCorinn - Oct-23-2015   

Incredibly beautiful retelling of Jane Eyre. The author is talented beyond measure. I would easily believe she wrote this in the 19th century if I didn't know better. It was like reading Charlotte Bronte's own work. As a huge Jane Eyre fan, this was a dream come true. Thank you for sharing your lovely work. - AnnaCorinn - Oct-25-2015   

Wow, this story is the definition of true love... A truly touching tale. I was crying my eyes out at the end and still is. ;_; Thank you for sharing, I'm very honor to have the chance to read this. - rikka - Jun-23-2009   

I second Rikka's comments. And I encourage everyone to read Jane Plant's book. Dee beautifully illustates that we find what we're looking for even if it is to be played out in another lifetime. I am still crying, but I know Isabelle and Marty will have many lifetimes to come. The hard part was finding each other. Such bravery and courage!! Thank you, Dee! - Samantha - Jun-25-2009   

I'm very honor to have the chance to read Marty and Isabelle's story ... I wasn't able to stop crying...this is a true and eternal love story...Thank you very much - Anonymous - Jul-05-2009   

Powerfully moving story, it brought me to tears. I thoroughly enjoyed the deep love between the Marty and Isabelle. - Anonymous - Aug-20-2009   

very good story i cant even describe how i felt after reading it - ann - May-28-2010   

this lovely story made my heart aches. i hope that isabelle and marty gets their second chance. - kc - Jul-04-2010   

Wow what a touching story and the dialog it fantastic. Read it, laugh and cry. - GIA - Mar-15-2011   

Very poignant story. It was beautifully written. Excellent. - Lyn B - Apr-11-2011   

*many tears* ...a very emotional read. - JC - May-02-2011   

wow, fantastic dialog, great story - braniac - Jan-16-2012   

I truly hate sad endings.... I mean we have enuf of that in our life's......but this was truly incredible..... - Sammy - May-25-2012   

My heart aches. - Wheezie - Dec-17-2012   

WOW! this has to be one of her best works yet. It is set 10 years later. The kids are grown. Ryan is 26, Reb is 16 and Mac is 23. Who's dating and who's getting married? who is trying to get their one true love to notice them again. Don't miss this funny, poignant story. All of Anne's characters are back in this great 'family' story with a very 'un'Brady cast. - Chris - Mar 4th, 2003   

Once again, Anne has come through with another quality story. The plot is fun and the characters are engaging (and it's so nice to see the return of our favorites!). While reading it, I felt as though I was visiting with old friends. The whole "Seasons Series" is a treat and this was a great way to end it! - indigal - Mar 7th, 2003   

The last of the seasons and murder stories. All the favorite character meet once again. The only thing I didn't like is that Ryan comes across as an arrogant self-centered woman. Mac shouldn't have taken her. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2007   

That was a wonderful wrap-up story to the seasons and murder series. Thank you. Loved seeing what happened to Mac and Ryan. Read this wonderful author. She is fantastic. - Anonymous - May-16-2010   

I just love everything Anne Azel has written and this tale is great like all the others. Her stories are so full and warm and so well written that I don't want them to come to an end. That is definetly the mark of a great author. - uber goober - May-19-2010   

I loved all the seasons stories. Great writing and I will return to them again and again! - Bolly - Jan-10-2011   

Once again, a super story about the Williams extended family, great to catch up with them all 10 years later and to see how the children have grownup!!

Do we get a 20 year update Anne? - CoolNik - Apr-09-2011   

Excellent story in the series. Every character is brought to life by Anne Azel. Touching, romantic and laugh out loud funny in parts of it. I like these crazy people and their lives. A wonderful read. Highly recommended. - Lyn B - Jul-24-2011   

This is a wonderful addition to the Seasons Series. This is my favourite series from all of Anne Azel's stories. Well worth your time and Azel's depiction of that area of Northern Ontario is spot on - she has the feel of it. Makes me wonder what the Williams clan has been up to lately. - Georgia - Nov-20-2012   

This is great follow up to a great story just pitty it wasn't listed with the other 4 of this series just found it weeks after reading the first 4 instalments . Loved this series could read about them forever X. - SD - Aug-27-2015   

I wish this story continued... - Teresa - May-29-2016   

I wish this story continued... - Teresa - May-29-2016   

Well written, and a very well thought out piece of work.The only problem I have with the story is how Gabrielle is portrayed, I hope that the next chapter is kinder to the Bard. - Kez - Feb 22nd, 2004   

This story is amazing! I not only learned how to climb Mt. Everest, [please god no] but I met two remarkable women with whom I fell in love with. I just couldn't stand it when it ended! Ms. Reilly, you simply must write more about Ricky and Allison, I insist--ha!--but PLEASE, ok? The authors "Darkness before the Dawn" series and its charactors were really good, but High Intensity is supurb!! Many thanks for a great read--MORE! - JLB - Jun 18th, 2004   

This fun, engaging, thoughtful and well written story is strung with a lyricism akin to the prayer flags flown in the jet stream at the roof of the world. - 3creeks - Jul-08-2007   

WONDERFUL! Not just the story, but the information was so educational. I love that you took the time to educate us as well as entertain. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2007   

Wow, I can't believe I've never read this one before. Totally great story - you should read it. Now. Here's hoping for a sequel some day. - Arassar - Aug-03-2007   

SUPURB!!! Amazing!! What a lot of interesting learning curves. Wow!! I loved this story. Give it a READ - vampireslayer2 - Aug-10-2007   

This was a truely great read. Ifyou haven't read it yeat, pull out the Crown Royal, kick back on the recliner and get to it. That is unless you have to work tomarrow, if so, leave out the Crown and just read. - Robin - Aug-21-2007   

MUST READ! I read it for the second time and it is getting better each time. It would make a great movie. Any producers around here? - Inge - Sep-18-2007   

Great subject, great detail. A highly entertaining, intelligent read. Really enjoyed it. - msprism - Sep-22-2007   

A great fav of mine. - msprism - Mar-13-2008   

Read! Great settings, suspence and educational - almatha - Mar-21-2008   

WOW! I feel like I just climbed Mount Everest. Great well-written work. The only thing that would make it perfect would be a sequel. - anon - Apr-07-2008   

awesome story..wish there was a sequel "hint hint" - Anonymous - Aug-05-2008   

A great cast of characters, you'll feel like your trekking up that mountain right along with them. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Fantastic story!! - JettBlk - Jan-29-2010   

A totally great story and well worth the time to read it. - sassy123 - Aug-07-2010   

chalk up another spot-on recommendation from charlie. this story is engrossing. i would have finished it in one sitting if i were not so sleepy. wonderful characters, terrific pacing. highly entertaining. - Anonymous - Oct-25-2010   

Reading this amazing story feels like you are trekking with them at the peak of the mountain Goddess...very well written and for readers out there scanning for the best story, well this is it, look no further coz you just stumble a gem of a story. Well done Belle! - mack - Dec-04-2010   

Wow - excellent story. Don't miss this one. Writing is superb and the story is a nail-bitter at times. Wishing for a sequel on their next adventure !! Highly recommended. Now on to her other stories. - Anonymous - Dec-17-2010   

Wow! What a wonderful story. I absolutely loved it. Great characters and the story was so in depth about climbing Everest that you almost felt like you were there with them. A truly great read that you will definetly enjoy. - uber goober - Jan-08-2011   

Incredible story! I've enjoyed it immensely. The characters are great, development of their relationship is great and feels very true and believable and like was said before me - you feel like you've climbed Everest yourself. Amazing read, highly recommend it. I'd love to read a sequel one day. - Enverz - Feb-21-2011   

What a great story! - Anonymous - Jun-13-2012   

Absolutely fantastic! One of the best stories I've read in a long time! - Anonymous - Mar-25-2014   

Very good so much respect for people that have Tryed to and them who have climbed to the top even if I dont understand the pain they put them selfs through To get there .well done with the story xx - SD - Sep-18-2015   

Put simply, this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Crystal's transformation over the course of the book is wonderful to see. I recommend Crystal's Heart to anyone and everyone who can enjoy a beautiful love story. - J - Jul 23rd, 2005   

terrific story that though long, is worth reading right to the very end. Excellent Story but a excellent writer. I go back and read this story time and again. - Anonymous - Jun-02-2006   

Stories by BL Miller are those that will have you coming back to read time and time again. Crystal's Heart is a fantastic story, one which I urge you to read and challenge you not to like. If youre after a quick fluffy romance fic, then perhaps this isnt the right story for you at this particular time (come back later!). However, if youre after great character development and solid storytelling, and arent afraid to tackle some difficult issues, then fix yourself a cuppa and settle down for a very satisfying read.

For those of you who like a little blurb to pick your stories by Ive copied this from the authors site: Laura is a lesbian mystery writer, compulsively neat and wanting nothing more than to be left alone in peace and quiet as she fights a deadline. Crystal is a stripper, bent on self-destruction by whatever means possible. When Laura's friend Peter plays matchmaker along with rental agent, their worlds collide and things will never be the same.
- FoxFeather - Oct-16-2007   

WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!Very wonderful story,a must read!!!I read this delicious story and I can't stop until the end. BL Miller, you're the best!!!!!!!! - Leth Cross - Oct-18-2007   

Loved it! This story needs a sequel! - Nay-Nay - Jan-29-2008   

Another great story from B L Miller, the romance and story are excellent and the characters are well rounded. Loved how realistic therapy sessions were and the issues handled with tact and care. Read this now! - Melikins - Nov-15-2008   

B L Miller is a true artist. You can't go wrong with anything she writes. - offhermeds - Mar-24-2009   

I truly enjoy reading BL Miller stories. The story line is understandable, the words used is innocently clean and the love making scene....mmmmm makes me want to meet BL Miller personally..:) Crystal's Heart is highly recommended to all. - Easteden - Apr-20-2009   

Great characters and believable character development. A writer who really can write and develop a story. Give it a try, you won't regret it ... I haven't. - Anonymous - May-11-2009   

Great story! - Sara - May-19-2009   

This is an amazing author I came across years ago, and will always be one of my favorites. Talented doesn't do justice as a way to describe these stories. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Wonderful - Angelicrainbw - Oct-12-2009   

I've been very impressed with your writings, and you haven't failed to deliver this time either. A well-written story that covers deep mental struggles and the transition from just existing to actually living. Another masterpiece from B L Miller. - xivren - Dec-07-2009   

B L Miller is an author of reference, for readers and for writers.
In this novel, she shows us again that she is one of the most talented writer when it comes to slowly and credibly build a relationship between characters.
But being a reference doesn't mean having said all, tried everything, not being able to please us again.
I hope nothing worrying is keeping her from going on writing. - M. D. - Feb-15-2010   

Too many people have taken liberties with her stories. Therefore we are unable to access them online anymore. - JettBlack - Mar-13-2011   

http://web.archive.org/web/20090302070611/http://blmiller.net/heart/Page1.html - Anonymous - Aug-05-2011   

definitely a hurt/comfort story.. lots of angst and anger.. well written.. - extra dog - Aug-23-2011   

What a great story. Nice job - sassy123 - Sep-20-2011   

I rediscovered this story recently and read it again. It's a wonderful read. The characters are complex and like with all of the author's work it's a joy to see the story unfold. Very powerful. It's well worth buying. Highly recommended:-) - Lyn B - Sep-27-2011   

Very nice stories. Well done. - Anonymous - Apr-17-2008   

I love all the stories og Ali Vali....just Amazing..... - Lucian - Jul-12-2009   

More of Ali Vali is always great! - Anonymous - Aug-23-2009   

Ali is always a first read author - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

Ali Vali is a very talented writer. If you like a good story I highly recommend you read these.I can't wait to read more of her works. - uber goober - Sep-21-2009   

i loved this story a lot more than its prequel.. it is a much more interesting read.. it's more romantic, has a higher suspense quotient, and is better written.. i absolutely adored the way the author blended one part of the story, with the ~~~~~ line, to the next.. definitely a must read even if you are not into the sappy parts of romance.. - xtra dog - Dec-16-2011   

this series is awesome. what a great love story.
- sandy - Nov-02-2012   

AMAZING STORY SO WELL WRITTEN YOU WILL LOVE IT FROM START TO FINISH XXXXX - SD - Jun-02-2015   

This is one of my all time favorites and easily one of the BEST novels you can find online! Extremely well written, with impeccable pacing, interesting and realist setting and extraordinary characterization (Kaz, particularly, is a beautifully drawn and complex character: introverted, driven, obsessive and emotionally inexperienced). M.Ryan is a very talented writer and it's a shame she doesn't write anymore. This is a definitely A MUST READ! - Anonymous - Apr-21-2009   

this story is on my top 10 list, its one of my favorites. Great characters that are real and you feel what they are going through and hope for the best. you must read this, you won't regret it. - dalila - Apr-21-2009   

I apologise, if here is the wrong place to mention this:

The author has a web page (which hasn't been updated for 9 years), where there is a short story - Seventeen Minutes - and an unfinished sequel - Shell Game - from the same 'verse to be found.
http://www.geocities.com/TelevisionCity/Satellite/6813/

Just be warned as far as I have heard M Ryan doesn't write anymore. - M. - Apr-22-2009   

Extremely well written story. One of the best I've read on the site. Hopefully there will be more.... - Anonymous - Apr-23-2009   

Whatever it is, this sure is a well written story, luv it. Well done M.Ryan. Can't wait for more.. - easteden - May-22-2009   

Loved it! Great buildup of the relationship between Kaz and Chris. Wonderful portrayal of the excitement of live news coverage, I eagerly read to see what Chris would get into next. Great job! Hopefully we get to read more! - 1234 - Oct-01-2009   

I enjoyed this story immensely. Nicely written, great characters. I also liked the short story with these two as well. I look forward to future stories from M. Ryan! - juliemania - Oct-01-2009   

This is my new favorite of favorites story - Anonymous - Oct-02-2009   

A very character-driven story, well written and engaging. I hope to see more from this author soon. - Rae - Oct-02-2009   

One of the best stories ever. Hopefully, one day she'll finish the sequel. - Anonymous - Oct-06-2009   

This is by far one of the very best stories you will have the pleasure to read for free. It's a pity the author has not continued, such a talented writer. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-11-2009   

I love this story. It is very well written - interesting and funny. I highly recommend it. - seventhfrench - Oct-13-2009   

Absolutely LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!... Must read this!!! - Texas_wild - Oct-19-2009   

I can't count how many times I've read this. The chemistry, the pacing makes you read it without noticing how much time has past. The best part is of course Laura's and Chris' relationship. It just developed naturally and they are so cute together.

P.S: If I remember correctly there was a sequel. Does anyone has a link?

---email address deleted--- [Editor's Note: Please do not post your e-mail addy in our recommendation.] - lectra - Jun-20-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. The characters are great and it's lovely watching their relationship develop. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - Jan-06-2011   

So glad someone recommended this gem of a story. It's excellent. One of my new favorites. Read and enjoy. M Ryan is a fantastic author. Wish she had more stories posted. - colorado fan - Jan-22-2011   

This is my very, very favorite Uber read of all time. I've read it again and again and enjoy it just as much on every read. What fun! - L.A. Tucker - Jul-01-2011   

Great story. There is a sequel title "Shell Game" at http://www.ausxip.com/fanfic9/shell_game1.html

It should have its own entry here on the Athenaeum under the author's name. - Nada - Jul-22-2011   

love it! love it! love it! one of the best! :)
- ckgirl - Dec-13-2011   

Wonderful read! Characters, especially Kaz, are lovely and complex. I just wish the sequel was complete! - e - Dec-14-2011   

This book was really good. I enjoyed it alot. The characters were well written. The story line was decently believable. I enjoyed it! - Stonewalldog - Sep-12-2012   

Excellent story with great characters that make you yearn for more. Like those reviewers above, I've read "The Deal" more than once, loving the more believable pacing, trials and tribulations to the central relationship, and the secondary characters in the story. After rereading it and the unfinished sequel (Shell Game)last year, I emailed the author to thank her for her work thus far and reassure her that even 13 years later I would love to read more about Kaz & Chris. I'm pleased to say the email worked and WHO KNOWS... one day M Ryan just might pick up the tale of Burkitt Falls television. - HOJ - May-26-2013   

Hello everyone out there in the cyber world. This story is one not to pass by. It's fast paced and the author kept me up all the hours of the day and night to finish reading. Can't wait to read the sequel and for the person who recommended it last. Thank you! I did enjoy it. - Katie of Ohio - Jun-06-2013   

This story is so good. One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is so good. One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is so good. One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is so good. One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is so good. One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is one of my favorites of all time. So good. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is one of my favorites of all time. So good. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is one of my favorites of all time. So good. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

This story is one of my favorites of all time. So good. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2013   

A good read - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

This is a great story with humor and realism. It also is a fun behind-the-scenes look at a workplace most don't see. Thanks! - Anonymous - Dec-29-2014   

This is one of my favourite reads love to see a follow up - Anonymous - Apr-16-2015   

Such a great story so different than most story's here not to many written with golf as the sport well done - Anonymous - Oct-08-2015   

Wonderful! This is a one of my favorites! It bears up over repeated reading. - Anonymous - Aug-28-2016   

Really enjoyed the TV and Golf back drop. Great characters. Just the right amount of drama to keep you turning the pages :). I had to track down the sequel to see what happens next. This is a very good author. Highly recommend. - colorado fan - Sep-04-2016   

Loved the story, it was well paced and easy to read. You will love this story, put it on your reading list. Brilliant writer. - Anna28Carm - Sep-04-2016   

One of my favorites! - Beckek1 - Jun-10-2019   

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Really love it. Great writing and a great story. Can't wait for the next update. - anonymous - Dec-05-2010   

so well written--witty repartee, lovely settings. - paedagogue - Dec-06-2010   

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What a great story and talented author !! Loving the story. Please post all of it... it's too good to read in installments. I just want to devour the story - NOW. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope to read many more of your stories. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Dec-11-2010   

Wow. Just wow. Fantastic characters. Incredible dialogue. One of my top 5 favorite stories. Impossible to recommend this one enough. Can hardly wait for the remaining chapters. - Anonymous - Dec-15-2010   

One of the best novels out there. Extremely well written, with engaging characters and a fun plot. I couldn't stop reading. I hope the author posts the continuing chapters soon. - Musoki - Dec-17-2010   

This is a delightful story with likable main characters. The repartee is sometimes "spew alert" funny and the story is entertaining with pragmatic and poignant moments. I eagerly await the updates! - Cheyne - Dec-20-2010   

other than Geonn Cannon's Riley Parra series, this is probably some of the best fiction I've read this year (and in a long time). These characters are real, flawed, compelling and frustrating. This writing is superb! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. i look forward to following your work and buying your books. - Anonymous - Dec-20-2010   

WOW!! Maddie & Syd jump off the page and into your heart. This story is funny, exciting, sexy and a wonderful read. Thank you, Ann. - vtxsip - Dec-21-2010   

Jericho is a very good read. The characters are extremely well drawn and engaging. But then everything about this story is crisp from the description of the locations, to taste of the food and wine, and the sound of the music. The author has also meticulously researched even the small details. This work is truly a word canvas brought to life. I look forward to reading much more of Ann McMan's writing. Highly Recommended. - wasabigrrl - Dec-22-2010   

If you are looking for a great story, with excellent writing, compelling storylines and romance - you've found it. I can't wait for the rest of it to be posted. Highly recommended. It's been a fun holiday read - Just wish I could finish it tonight. arggghhhhh. - colorado fan - Dec-27-2010   

Descriptive, engaging story. Great characterizations. Can't wait to read more! - Anonymous - Dec-29-2010   

EXTREMELY well written, engaging story by a wonderfully talented author. Could spend a lot of time explaining why it's so good, but would rather just tell folks to READ IT! Superior work. - Anonymous - Jan-05-2011   

Perhaps one of the most finely crafted and compelling stories I've read here or elsewhere. A new, firm, favourite. Truly well done. - Boomer - Jan-08-2011   

It is unbelievable that this is the author's first effort. The characters leap off the page and the pacing and emotion are pitch perfect Can't wait for Ms. McMan's next story. - Anonymous - Jan-09-2011   

BEAUTIFUL!!! a sequel please. - Anonymous - Jan-09-2011   

Absolutely worth reading! So nicely written and fresh. please write a sequel! - charlotte - Jan-09-2011   

What a wonderful and delightful story. Absolutely LOVED it. Wishing for a sequel. Highly recommended. Ann McMan is a very talented, fantastic writer. - colorado fan - Jan-11-2011   

When I first read the teaser for part one all those weeks ago I knew I had to read the book. I waited until every part was posted and then sat down did not stop turning pages * figuratively* until it was done. And what great writing it was. I loved the characters and I can't wait (hoping and praying) for a sequel.

Superb writing this can't be her first attempt. Interesting and realistic characters, great banter great interaction. All of it believable.

The story was not heartfelt and kept me on the edge of my seat in places.

This is definitely one for the publishers! - Lesley - Jan-12-2011   

what a wonderful read, such great and very realistic characters. Sit back and enjoy the wine, the music and the laughter with these delightful characters. - vtfan - Jan-13-2011   

Ann, if this is your first attempted at writting, PLEASE CONTINUE. Awesome story. - rosii59 - Jan-13-2011   

WOW! I have to say this is now honestly one of my favorite fics! Please, please post all the parts so I can die happy lol. Seriously this is great so keep up the good work. I am excited for the next part! - heathstar - Jan-13-2011   

incredibly well written - i just couldn't stop reading it. please continue to write more! - crv - Jan-14-2011   

I was searching for another story from u 2 read,I can't
believe this is your first try at writing.Please continue u
r good.I loved this story hated 2 c it end. - DAB - Jan-15-2011   

I loved this story .. it 3am and i just got so engrossed in this story .. the characters are aamazing .. so well written n lovable .. the plot is endearing .. leaving the reader enchanted by this beautiful love story - scorpio_2097 - Jan-16-2011   

This was such a delightful story - I can't believe this was the author's first attempt at fiction. It was very well-written. Likable characters. Humorous dialogue. Don't remember when I enjoyed a story this much! - cooscarole - Jan-16-2011   

this was charming and refreshingly real. conversations rang true and the story progresses gradually the way life tends to. - Anonymous - Jan-16-2011   

This is an excellent story written by a very talented author. - ftcfan - Jan-17-2011   

Wonderfully engaging. Memorable characters. Non obtrusive writing style, it truly did flow off the page. - Wheezie - Jan-18-2011   

Great story, can't wait to see more from Ann - Anonymous - Jan-18-2011   

bravissima. this novel is wondrous. the dialogue is terrifically well-written. the story is proof positive that good writing trumps dramatics. this one is a treasure. - kc - Jan-18-2011   

Jericho is an amazing piece of work. The characters are diverse and enthralling. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and found myself looking for more. I believe there is more to this story and if or when the words hit paper I would love the chance to read it. - Animism - Jan-18-2011   

I enjoyed this story very much. An excellent first offering. I hope to see more where this came from! - Rae D. Magdon - Jan-19-2011   

great one!! would like to know how things work out with these ppl :) again grrrreat one! - lyneX - Jan-19-2011   

Gorgeous. Well written and beautiful characters. Classical Uber at its best. - Ape - Jan-20-2011   

A great read, one of the best. Can not wait to see more from this author. - Anonymous - Jan-20-2011   

Love it!!! Great story... - blueyz - Jan-20-2011   

A total gem. Please keep writing! - offhermeds - Jan-24-2011   

Fantastic!!! Excellent writing. I want more - especially a closure on the father. The humor is great!!!! - Traveller - Jan-25-2011   

I loved this story. Great story. - sassy123 - Jan-27-2011   

Great story! Looking forward to reading more from Ann! - Kay48 - Jan-27-2011   

Great characters, witty dialogue, and a good romance. I can really recommend this story to anyone looking for a good read. This story is worth your time. - filfil - Jan-29-2011   

This is a wonderful story with three-dimensional characters and dialogue that is fun to read. Finally a story that didn't have the characters jump into bed together on page 2! - Jae - Jan-30-2011   

I could not put this down. Wonderful wonderful story with incredible characters. Well done!! GO READ IT! :) - Di Bauden - Jan-30-2011   

Loved this story. Really good. - Silver - Feb-01-2011   

Excellent read. - Jackie - Feb-02-2011   

Grace, passion and lots of time to explore them.Cheers - tudy - Feb-04-2011   

I really loved this story. Great job writing. - sassy123 - Feb-06-2011   

Good read. - D - Feb-08-2011   

Great story with great characters. Highly recommended! Thank you Ann McMan. You are truly gifted writer. - pegi - Feb-09-2011   

What a delightful piece of work!! Well developed characters, some very witty conversation and a slice of RL comes to life in a love story.

I highly recommend this new writer and this work to you - but take note that it is hard to put down once you start so you mey have a very early morning or 2 whilst reading this!! - CoolNik - Feb-13-2011   

excellent story - nicolen - Feb-23-2011   

Beautiful! Fantastic! I thoroughly enjoyed this story!!! - heinerway - Mar-08-2011   


Amazing work! This bard did a very good and dedicaded job writting this. It shows by the quality of it all. Characterisation, development, transitions... I didn't find any flaws, any awkward parts reading this long tale. Every step seems to be where it meant to be and lead where it meant to lead. And indeed, how the heck this can be this bard's first fiction? If she hadn't already wrote dozens of literary gemmes BEFORE writing this one, then fore sure she must have read tons of them. it's the only way... - yuka - Mar-26-2011   

Loved this story - I can't think of a single thing that
I didn't enjoy. More, please! - Mickey - May-03-2011   

What an awesome novel, very well written with great dialogue. Can't wait for more from this author!! - Jan - May-14-2011   

I have no clue how I missed this story. Best story I have read all year!! I hope the author keeps writing. - Emily - Jun-07-2011   

Excellent. The relationship between Maddie and Syd is beautifully written, as are all the supporting characters. The dialogue between all the characters is funny, tender and poignant. Everybody should read this story. A must read and definitely one of the best stories that I've read. Awesome:-) - Lyn B - Jun-24-2011   

WOW! Beautiful story, talented writer. - Tess - Jun-25-2011   

the VERY BEST I have read in ages. Loved it and the end screams: SEQUEL :=) - kiju - Jul-16-2011   

do your heart, mind, and soul a favor and don't delay, just go read it now! I could not put it down! bravo!! - Anonymous - Jul-21-2011   

hahaha!! laugh out loud dialogue! loved it and thank you for sharing! - Anonymous - Aug-16-2011   

this story just begs for a sequel.. well, maybe not just the story but me as well.. very well written, good dialogues, nice build up.. hell, even i felt the first kiss they shared racing through my veins.. :) - xtra dog - Aug-25-2011   

Great story, and beautifully written. - Anon - Aug-27-2011   

Thanks to all of you for taking the time to read and recommend Jericho. I wanted to let you know that it's just been published, and is available now in ebook format (and soon in paperback) at amazon.com and barnes&noble.com. Enjoy! Ann McMan - Ann McMan - Sep-26-2011   

Beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. There is a great mix of interesting characters. This author is definitely a new favorite of mine. - Kathy H - Dec-26-2011   

Beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. There is a great mix of interesting characters. This author is definitely a new favorite of mine. - Kathy H - Dec-26-2011   

This is an absolutely wonderful story. Wonderful character. Excellent pace. I am SO looking forward to reading more of this is autor. Excellent Job! - aaguilar - Jan-09-2012   

A real fun read. Thanks for taking us on this journey! - zomerblond - Feb-26-2012   

Loved this story, so glad I took the time to read. I'm greedy I want more!!! Sequel Plzz - Ashley - Mar-09-2012   

Great great story, I read it over the course of about 2 weeks and enjoyed every single moment of it. The banter, the portrayal of the main characters, every single secondary character; everything just fit, and felt true. Recommended to print out and enjoy the read during a lazy summer week! - NGBlue - Mar-20-2012   

This was an amazing story. well done! Oh and I wish some parents were this considering. - Anonymous - May-16-2012   

I really loved this story. The banter and the witty dialogues between the main characters are superb! - Ricky - Nov-28-2012   

What a well thought out, believable story!! Definitely should be published - it is that good. It has something for everyone, especially 2 very likeable main charecters and with an engaging cast. - Stacia - Dec-03-2012   

Great story, it is published. Bought it together with a sequel, 2 days ago. Can't wait for books to come! - P. - Dec-03-2012   

A good read. I'm hoping for more - Anonymous - Jan-07-2013   

Ann wasn't kidding about years of dedicated reading until you get to good parts. yet this was an amazing, captivating story, wonderfully written and just cries for many, many sequels. - Naty - Jul-10-2014   

This is one of my favourite storys on this site love to see a sequel to it can't read enough about these . sure I will come back again and read it again cant say enough about it Thanks for bringing this lovely story so well written xxxxx - SD - Sep-19-2015   

An absolutely WONDERFUL story!!!I loved it to bits.I can't wait for more adventures with Randy and Mac.I hope there will be more! - Xexy Warrior - Aug 14th, 2002   

This was a wonderful story. LOVED the plot. - Jen - Mar 10th, 2003   

LMAO AT THIS ONE, FUNNY BEYOND BELIEF, A MUST READ IF YOUR IN A FUNK! - D - Oct 28th, 2003   

This story is all that and a bag of chips. I loved it! - cyndyn - Apr 3rd, 2004   

The "Day in the Life" of uber fanfic. Probably the yardstick by which all other comedy ubers should be measured. I'm not kidding!! - Charlotte - Jul 19th, 2004   

Beyond Brilliant! The most original story I've every read and my absolute favorite Uber of all time. A perfect combination of humor and romance. The narrative had me howling at Randi unique observations of life, love and revenge as during her journey with Mac she finds herself and then cheering her on as she musters up the courage to go after the girl of her dreams. There are few stories that you read and can honeslty say that there could be nothing done to make it better, but the Story of Me is in my opinion perfection. It's the kind of story I hope to write one day myself that is so memorable you never forget it, or the joy of experienceing it no matter how many times you read it. - J.S. Connolly - Apr 15th, 2005   

I have read this story a gazillion times and it never gets old! AWESOME story! A must read! - Anonymous - Aug-16-2006   

A true classic in every sense of the word. You can truly see Lucy and Renee playing these roles. It is hilarious, honestly... if you don't laugh out loud reading this you must be dead.

Oh, how I wish there were more stories as original and brilliant as this one. - Kez - Oct-04-2006   

WOW!! What a brillant dazzling out of this world talented human author (bard). I hope you find it in your funny and sparkling heart to write more and more. Oh YEAH! I enjoyed it to say the least. - vampireslayer2 - Oct-07-2006   

Okay, so I usually don't read fic that's heavy on comedy (I heart angst!) but I'm so glad I read this one. There were countless, solidly funny, laugh out loud moments that left me howling loudly while gripping my sides. Oh and I really appreciated that the love story wasn't in any way compromised for the sake of comedy. It's as sweet as it is funny.
- nicole938 - Sep-16-2007   

One of the best stories ever!!! Who knew a squirrel could be a protagonist? Brilliant, funny and totally charming! - Anonymous - Feb-04-2008   

this story was too funny. a LOT of fun to read! - Anonymous - Feb-05-2008   

IF you've ever read a story that you wish had more of the sub-charactors than the main, this is it. Thought i've read this 3 times i'm gonna read it even more. - F_L_J - Feb-05-2008   

This is a MUST read it's so funny you will laugh your head off at times, the characters are absolutly cute. Advocate is one of my favorite bards and if ya read the works i think you can't blame me. - Callisto - Feb-11-2008   

hilarious,just hilarious!! and so romantic... - mary - Jul-16-2008   

I absolutely LOVE this story! I've read it many, many times, and it always leaves me with a smile on my face :D - Lindsey - Sep-23-2008   

I was laughing so hard while reading this! This is definitely a GREAT story. - Anonymous - Sep-26-2008   

I was grinning like a fool throughout this unexpectedly funny story. Advocate has a wicked sense of humor. Enjoy this one. - wasabigirl - Oct-24-2008   

I never giggled so much in my life! Really good read. :-] - Miki - Jan-19-2009   

What a great story- I really need that tonight! Some bits were truly hysterical! - Xenasgrrl - Sep-22-2009   

A humorous entertaining story that was very fun and enjoyable to read. If you want a good time reading a tale ,then by all means read this one. - uber goober - Oct-31-2009   

One of the queens of the Lesbian Comedy.
Perhaps the one who writes the best.
Thank you Blayne Cooper, and please, keep on delighting us. - M. D. - Jan-20-2010   

hysterical and oh-so-sweet. - kc - Jul-31-2010   

Guaranteed to make you smile. An oldie, but goodie romantic comedy. - kayla - Aug-13-2010   

Simply excellent! I had so much fun reading it... I couldn't stop! Now I really need to go to bed. Thanks for this great, great story!!!! - luna - Aug-22-2011   

i can't understand how i missed this story.. i read about everything else advocate wrote.. anyway.. loved seeing the squirrels again.. i'm guessing this is the story that brought them to live.. so it's nice to know how they have grown as charactershaving read the other stories that featured them.. knowing they haven't lost their fun(ny) factor a bit.. absolutely recommend this story!! - xtra dog - Dec-29-2012   

This was a ggrreat story. I couldn't stop reading til the end and it's 2:30 AM. You HAVE TO read this one. It will make you laugh and appreciate the romance that the author so expertly weaved in this tale. Kudos to the bushy rodents. Again: great reading. Don't miss it. Still LOL! - vicam - Apr-12-2013   

seriously how can us readers miss reading and recommended on Advocate Untitled:The Story of Me. This story is wittedly funny:) Story about Randi whom spilled out her confusion on two squirrels who understand and speaks English :::)))) - eden - Jun-21-2013   

seriously how can us readers miss reading and recommended on Advocate Untitled:The Story of Me. This story is wittedly funny:) Story about Randi whom spilled out her confusion on two squirrels who understand and speaks English :::)))) - eden - Jun-21-2013   

Showstopper laughs. Good read - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

I loved this story. Its funny and sad and sweet and succinct, excellent balance of love and angst. The paragraph beginning with "I loved you then ..." is one of the best, most perfect, most achingly beautiful words ever.Fantastic work. - Emi - Jul 27th, 2003   

Wow. EVERYONE TAKE A FEW MINUTES TO READ THIS STORY! I'm glad I did. My heart laughed, cryed and ached through every word. Worth reading over and over. - rhonda - Feb 4th, 2004   

AWESOME - Anonymous - Dec 18th, 2004   

wonderful story , very well written. definitely 5 stars - Anonymous - Sep-08-2007   

What a beautiful story. Glad I followed others recommendations otherwise I'd have missed it. This is a gem. - msprism - Sep-24-2007   

great story, short and sweet - d - Dec-22-2007   

A wonderfully heartfelt read. - brighteyez08 - Oct-11-2009   

this is a fantastic, absorbing story. the characters feel real and believable. a beautiful accomplishment. - kc - Oct-02-2010   

Absolutely stunning piece of writing. I cannot recommend this enough. - e - Mar-29-2012   

Nice and real. - Anonymous - Apr-27-2012   

incredibly done!! very realistic pulls you in to the end - sandy - Nov-20-2012   

A very touching story, have mr thinking of Bette and Tina in The L Word. - Anonymous - Jan-28-2013   

Goodness...everyone should give a shot on this story If You're Gone. After reading it, you'll feel that it is you that in the characters. Xenickz ...thank you!! - eden - Jan-28-2013   

Intense. Very good read. Loved it. - Anonymous - Jan-28-2013   

Fantástico story! - Rosa Santos - Feb-12-2013   

I could only find 3 of this writer's stories and they are all very well written. Would love to read more of her work. - Anonymous - Feb-18-2013   

The ache, the longing, the need and the love so beautifully put together in this profound story. - Wheezie - Apr-07-2013   

truly beautiful story.. ***SPOILER ALERT*** what do you do when you love someone so much it hurts to be together?? you fight (it) until you give up.. - xtra dog - Jun-09-2013   

That was definitely a beautiful story. I thought that they wouldn't make it together in the end, but as I guessed, romance always ends happily. :) Beautiful work - Sky - Jun-23-2014   

" Love in Photographs" A great story once you start reading you won't want to stop! - Anonymous - Dec 23rd, 2002   

IMO this is one of the author's best works. Some of her other stories give a definite uneasiness (enough to where I skip to the part where the child-woman is finally of legal age) with their may/pre-december themes. With "Love In Photographs" Ms. Tryst has perfected her love of the older woman/younger woman genre, especially since this younger character isn't a high school, sapphic, Lolita. ;) There's also a part that deals with 9-11 but the author is kind enough to forewarn her readers. Great story. - Kaye - Jan 2nd, 2003   

It is my opinion that this is absolutely the best piece from this author to date. The relationship between the main characters as well as the subplots and secondary relationships are well-developed. Torrance Whitfield is an excellent character sketch. You can tell this character is full of compassion and love, making her truly liekable even when her flaws are brought to light. As for the other main character, Helen, she is sophisticated and open. From the moment these two come together, you can tell something is going to happen, and the rollercoaster ride is fabulous. In addition September 11, 2001 is dealt with in a sensitive manner. The passage is emotional and trying on the characters, but the way it was written was well-constructed, and I give kudos to the author for taking on the challenge. If you read only one piece by Alex Tryst, this is the one you should read. - Anonymous - Jan 3rd, 2003   

Oops! I apologize, I didn't know my comments were spoilers. Is there a way for you to place them under that category (and also delete this message)? Thanks and if I write anything else on your website I'll know for the next time. ;) - Kaye - Jan 3rd, 2003   

Great story! I loved every bit! The characters were so well done! I can't wait to read the follow up piece! - Anonymous - Mar 5th, 2003   

This is a heart wrenching tale. Keeps you captivated the whole way through. Great job by the author and I do hope there is more to this saga. Makes you laugh and makes you cry. I'd read it over and over again. Thanks for endulging our sweet tooth for good fiction. - Caden - Mar 7th, 2003   

What a story! Talk about a rollercoaster ride! I loved it! Everyone should read this one. - Anonymous - Mar 31st, 2003   

Love in Photographs is and excellent read. I highly resommend it to those looking for a good read. Once you start, you won't want to put it down...even if it's 4 o'clock in the morning and you're bleary eyed and running on caffine... - Michelle - May 29th, 2003   

I enjoyed this story immensely and so will anyone that takes the time to read it. - Stone - Jul 18th, 2005   

You do know you've ruined me as a photographer ;) .. just kidding, however photographing my models sometimes I remember this story and wonder .. what if?
This one spoke to my heart, as well as other regions, but my heart and dreams .. its like you've captured them and wrote the story of my dreams.
Amazing. - Dg - Apr-28-2006   

This is a great romance. The characters are fantastic. - jd - Jan-17-2007   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

great read - michele - Feb-05-2008   

I read the whole new york series they are all fine pieces of work. I thoroughly enjoyed them and recommend anyone who likes a good love story to read them too. - uber goober - Jan-04-2010   

I have read the NY series several times over the last few years, I absolutely love them. Do yourself a favor and read them for yourself, you won't be disappointed. - Peyton Andrews - Jan-24-2010   

Great story and characters. Well written. - MK - Mar-12-2010   

I think this one of the most lovely stories on this entire website. This is my favorite uber. Their love seems so authentic to me. I encourage everyone to read it. - Anonymous - Apr-15-2010   

Everytime I read this, I love it - readinglori - Jan-26-2011   

nice story.. i especially like the last chapter.. an author who describes things in life that have truely affected her/him, captures so many emotions in the writing.. even when those things were an international nightmare.. - xtra dog - Sep-04-2011   

This is one of my all time favorite stories. I have read it probably 20 times and it never gets old. - Laura - Feb-04-2012   

Thanks to Alex for bringing these amazing storys to us I can say I loved reading about these couples but have to say my favourite is Tor and Helen their love was so special and amazing . such a journey Alex bring you on with all these people you will laugh and cry and fall in love with them .feels like the journey is over but so glad I took the journey with them THANKS AGAIN FOR THIS AMAZING STORY Xx SD - SD - Aug-23-2015   

Thanks to Alex for bringing these amazing storys to us I can say I loved reading about these couples but have to say my favourite is Tor and Helen their love was so special and amazing . such a journey Alex bring you on with all these people you will laugh and cry and fall in love with them .feels like the journey is over but so glad I took the journey with them THANKS AGAIN FOR THIS AMAZING STORY Xx SD - SD - Aug-23-2015   

Just AMAZING! Angsty but well worth it. - Samantha Brown - Oct-10-2008   

In a word...FANTASTIC!! A wonderful sequel that stands strong on it's own. - JC - Nov-02-2008   

I can't say enough about this story and this author! This is my favorite author in FF and I love this story!! Would love to hear more from this author!! - Anonymous - Jan-26-2010   

This story is the sequel to Vampires, Mummies and the Holy Ghost. I enjoyed this story as much as the first. The plot definitely thickens a this series progresses. - purplehawke - May-08-2007   

SUCH a great story! It's not super long so you have no good excuse to not be reading it RIGHT NOW... slacker! - Arassar - Jul-05-2007   

A fantastic sequel to "Vampires". I loved every minute of these two tales and I'd absolutely love to see these characters appear again in the future. Romantics owe it to themselves to read this! - Fox_Feathered - Jun-15-2008   

A fantastic sequel to "Vampires". I loved every minute of these two tales and I'd absolutely love to see these characters appear again in the future. Romantics owe it to themselves to read this! - Fox_Feathered - Jun-17-2008   

this story is awesome as its the one before,but now the question is .. where's the 3rd one ali vali? - Anonymous - Jun-22-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** More emphasis on the love than in the previous story, but still as entertaining as "Vampires, Mummies & the Holy Ghost". Only problem is that it kinda leaves you hanging. Hopefully there will be a sequel. - Ape - Jul-05-2008   

That was brilliant. An excellent sequel to Vampires. I can only hope for more. - Hoqoq - Sep-21-2008   

I absolutely loved this story. Couldn't 'put it down'. Hope very much to read more from this author! - Anonymous - Oct-04-2008   

Ali Vali once again weaves a great romantic tale that leaves you wanting more. I would love to see Ms. Valdivia continue with Piper and Kendal's story in the future. What an incredibly talented author. A definite must read for anyone who loves a great love story. - uber goober - Oct-10-2009   

OMG!!! i love this. from first word to the very last. there was no part that bored me at all. please tell me there will be another part to this, i cant just be left hangin here. i have got to know what happens. - pickles - May-16-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Thanks so much for a GREAT series. Asra and Piper are wonderful characters. Immortals, the fight between good and evil, the love and romance makes for heady reading. Throw in Aphrodite and it was a unexpected twist. Please continue their tale. The series have given me hous (days) of reading pleasure. I hope you will share a new one soon !! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-18-2010   

A really great story. - sassy123 - Sep-30-2010   

i wasn't able to find the title of the book this story is published as.. so i'm thinking that 'vampires' and this one were published in the same book 'balance of forces: toujours ici'.. - xtra dog - Dec-14-2011   

This story is pretty dark,but extremely awesome just like all of miss pritekel stories. Remy and julie are great characters and I so wish to see a sequel.Read it ppl!!! - Grace - Apr-03-2008   

link between chapter 5 & 6 not working - Anonymous - Apr-03-2008   

Oh wow! Kim as done it again, kept me up all night reading a great novel! - lb - Apr-04-2008   

this is, without any doubt, my favorite story from this author. when it was first being posted, i would stay up WAY past my "bedtime" waiting for updates. a fantastic read that has you on the edge of your seat to the end. - jumper23 - Apr-04-2008   

Wonderful story that would make a even better movie - Anonymous - Apr-05-2008   

I read this a month or so ago and it freaked me out! I had nightmares for a bit. When they finally went away I read it again.(Masochist perhaps?) It still freaked me out but I had to re-read it. I'll read it again when I've recovered. This is definitely worth the time it takes to read it. - darkenedkarma - Apr-07-2008   

Totally different than any other story I read but totally worth reading. Great crime story and great characters. Thank you Kim - Marty - Apr-10-2008   

This is a damn good read! As always, Jae has written a sotry to be remembered. Great character development and tight. There is so much depth in the emotions. Jae, you have to write another sequel. - Giselle - Apr-11-2008   

It's funny how you can read something that contains within it a horrific glimpse of life that many people have to face, and still find it to be a brilliant story. Though dark and disturbing, the collector is a fantastic read perhaps making you appreciate the good within your own life, whilst demonstrating the ability of mankind in suffering through evil and overcoming it!! Must read. - nexakill - Apr-12-2008   

Heck Yeah!!!! I encourage all to read this story. I have read it at least ten times. It kept me up all night long. I could not stop pushing the page down button and clicking the mouse over the next chapter. - k. LEWIS - Apr-18-2008   

Unbelievably wonderful!! Such a gripping tale that i finished reading it in one sitting (okay, some time along.. i lied down).

Its definitely worth of time. - YANI - May-06-2008   

Great crime story, very well written. It will make you squirm in some parts! - Sai - Jun-02-2008   

This is a phenominal author. I have read several of her stories on more than one occassion. I am always on the look out for her new stuff. I dont read this type of story usually, but since it was written by Kim.P. I decided to give it a go. It is definetly intense, but you wont be disappointed. Great writting. If you scare easily,or live by yourself. I wouldn't recommend reading it at night. lol. - brighteyez - Jun-12-2008   

Unlike many other storys of this author this one ist pretty dark at the beginning but like always love wins over everything. Please read it and don't stop til the end! - Ines - Feb-14-2009   

Amazing, just like everything she writes. Kim, you are easily one of the best authors around, online or otherwise. Thank you for letting us share in your magic... - jaeygatsby - Mar-12-2009   

What a compelling story! Couldn' stop reading once I started. Thanks for sharing this. - Ginger - Mar-14-2009   

Nice Work! Good crime drama! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-18-2009   


Cet auteur est vraiment talentueux. Mis à part, la qualité de son style, Kim fait ici preuve d'une audace extraordinaire. Elle aborde un sujet difficile, elle le fait sans demie-mesure, avec honnêteté, puissance et intensité. BRAVO! S'approcher des limites et s'en sortir avec brio... c'est la marque des grands!
Pour les xenites francophones... Vous ne perdrez pas votre temps en lisant cette histoire! - Yuka - May-17-2009   

this is an amazing story....READ IT..... READ IT.... - fallingfast - Aug-04-2009   

WOW...nothing else to say but WOW!!! - Anonymous - Aug-12-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** great story!! it was really dark in the beginning and i found myself skimming/skipping through some of it. but the end of the story made it so worth it. i love how the characters developed and healed each other. it was very sweet. - cell - Jan-02-2010   

What a great story.
- Anonymous - Mar-28-2011   

Awesome, this story had me laughing, crying and sitting on the edge of my seat, I couldn't stop reading and just had to know what happened next. - Ange - Mar-31-2011   

really liked this story... so much so, I read it in one go... bit of a thriller, bit of a romance novel... nice! - Anonymous - May-01-2011   

Excellent story despite the grim topic. Well worth reading and I highly recommend it. - Mickey - May-02-2011   

Very dark subject but one that deserves exploration. KP did an excellent job here, I am certainly a fan now. - ~M - May-13-2011   

It's 5:59 a.m., and I just finished this incredible piece of writing. Absolutely amazing...I don't know when I've enjoyed a read more. A gripping drama, this story kept my attention, well, all night! I don't write many reviews, but READ THIS. Well done, Ms Pritekel! SPOILER WARNING: This does contain sensitive subject matter, so please read the disclaimer. - Souzan - Sep-27-2011   

Absolutely fantastic story. Kim really knows how to grab hold of her readers and not let go. There definitely. Was some disturbing imagery in the one, but it only helped to convey the helplessness of the situation. I loved both Remmy and Julie but Remmy was absolutely the best. Read it! - Jendeh - Mar-04-2012   

Another awesome story by KP. I'm thinking she's becoming a classic in this household. ;D - Tee - Oct-06-2012   

Fantastic story!! Well worth the time. - Stacia - Jan-11-2013   

Great read! A refreshing and different story from the many ubers written right now. Hope to see a sequel in the works. - Anonymous - May-23-2008   

Ok, only rarely have I seen such realism that I've had to put my head between my knees... Gladiator themes and such. This piece is masterful in both storytelling and compassion, and ultimately, love. Thanks for a wonderful piece of writing. - Dusty - May-23-2008   

This has to be without a doubt, the best Conqueror fic that I have ever read! - Omega - May-23-2008   

A refreshingly original Conqueror story that deviates far from the standard lonely ruler-submissive slave plot line. Now, where's the 300+ pages of the novel that you seem to have left off? :D - Anonymous - May-23-2008   

for her first story, this is a very good read. Well written and interesting, a slightly different slant on a conquerer story. - Olivia - May-23-2008   

Wow! Extremely well written conqueror fanfic. First rate action and dialogue. Not an awkward sentence in sight. Run, don't walk, to this story. You'll be on the edge of your seat for the entire time. - Cuddles - May-23-2008   

Great, great story. I hope there will be a sequel. Gladiator Gabs and Conqueror Xena - Anonymous - May-23-2008   

Thank you. I really enjoyed this story. I hope there is a sequel. - gillian - May-24-2008   

EXCELLENT!!!! So great to see a new Conqueror story and this one is so engaging and well written!!!! - Anonymous - May-25-2008   

What a fantastic story! We see some old faces from the world of XWP but they are not the characters you expect them to be. Gabrielle fans will be intrigued by this version of her character. She is certainly not what the fanfiction cannon usually supplies ,and it is so refreshing and believable that I want to see more about this Gabrielle.
The first story from this exceptionally talented bard is dark, violent, gritty and not for everyone. But, for me that is what makes it fresh, exciting and so satisfying.
This story screams sequel, and I certainly hope that we get to read one in the near future. - Kez - May-25-2008   

I found this story last night and could not shut my computer off until I finished reading the story. This has become one of my favorite Conqueror/Gabrielle stories. If you love rich, deep characters, this is a must read! - searcher - May-25-2008   

A very difficult, violent and graphic read, but I'd be amiss if I didn't comment on the quality. Strong writing, beautiful characterization, unapologetic. Well done to the author.
If you have the stomach for it you shouldn't miss this novel. - k alexander - May-26-2008   

great read. exciting - want a sequel - dktr - May-26-2008   

Awesome read... but tell me theres more coming!!PUHLEEEASE!! - Saysyou - May-26-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** This was an awesome story! Very well written for a first timer! I would very much love it if there was a sequel in the works...Too many questions left! Like...do they survive, what happens to the betrayers...Does Rome rule the world....etc, etc, etc :P PLEASE!!! - kaysy_1994 - May-27-2008   

Is there a sequel is the works? I stayed up the whole night to read this excellent fic. I couldn't stop reading. Wonderfully written Spyrel. - Anonymous - May-27-2008   

AWESOME!! More, please? - Anonymous - May-27-2008   

Great, great story! I really hope that the author is planning a sequel to it. - Anonymous - May-29-2008   

Fantastic story! Excellent! I hope there is a sequel! Thank you Spyrel. - Anonymous - May-29-2008   

very good story,spyrel makes the best conqueror story ever. - ailidh - May-29-2008   

loved it. nicely written piece, with great inventive insights. a sql would be appreciated. - msprism - May-30-2008   

What a wonderful page turner of a story. Once I started reading I couldn't put it down until I finished. A continuation of this story would be nice. - cygirl1 - May-30-2008   

Grrrreat work. Loved it. Nice twist and I would love to know what happens next! - lyneX - Jun-01-2008   

Excellent story!!! I love it! I hope there is a seqel. - Anonymous - Jun-01-2008   

Excellent, well-crafted, gritty and yet touching story. Loved it and shamelessly join in the clamour for a sequal. - dinasbran - Jun-03-2008   

This story will become a classic. My words can not do it justice. I love your portrayl of Gab, you have given an edge to her character that is seldom explored. You have breathed new life into X&G, but manage to stay true to their core characters. I have read this story over 2x in less than a week. I would recommend this to all my fellow XWP lovers out there. You will not be disappointed with this tale. I do hope the author is going to gift us with a sequel. You just cant end it there...pretty please. - brighteyez - Jun-12-2008   

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a materpice! Please write a sequel! - Anonymous - Jun-19-2008   

Great story, please write a sequel to it...don't make us wait. I loved it, thank you. - Manoli - Jun-20-2008   

One of the best Conqueror story that I have ever read !
Absolutely stunning !!!
A sequel... please - Anonymous - Jun-21-2008   

Extremely well written. A really talented bard!
I hope there is a seqel... - Anonymous - Jun-21-2008   

Single-handedly the greatest Conqueror story I have ever read. Gabrielle is smashingly hot and Xena is everything we want her to be and more! I can't wait for the sequel! - Chunks - Jun-22-2008   

EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! Thank you Spyrel;-) Sequel please?! - Anonymous - Jun-23-2008   

Very very good. Interesting twists and a great read. A sequel is eagerly awaited. - RhB - Jun-26-2008   

Dark and violent........but extremely well written. Hope there is a sequel. - Anonymous - Jun-28-2008   

Very, very good. Sometimes I forget that there are good writers out there. This reminded me.

Thank you. - K - Jun-28-2008   

What a fantastic read!!! Amazing. Sequel pllleeeease :-))) - Anonymous - Jun-29-2008   

I read a glaring recommendation for this story at XOC on a thread for Conqueror fan fiction that was very complimentary so I had to click on it and see what all of the fuss was about. I could not stop reading it; I didn't want to! This is as close to a masterpiece of Xena fan fiction as I've read. I wish there was more and that the story didn't have to end so suddenly. If anyone is reading this review and has not read the story yet, read it now! You will not be disappointed. I have fallen in love. - areslovex - Jul-08-2008   

The best thing I have read on this site, no contest. Brutal, beautiful, one of the best stories you will read whether you like alternative fiction or not. It's got something for everybody. Xena and Gabrielle are so complicated they're perfect; I wish that this could have been filmed for the show. I cannot recommend it highly enough to everyone. Spyrel, you have outdone yourself. - Elisa H. - Jul-09-2008   

This is a masterpice! Thank you Spyrel! - Anonymous - Jul-11-2008   

This is one of the best stories I've ever read! - Anonymous - Jul-14-2008   

Wow. Just...WOW. Can't wait for the sequel! ...there IS going to be a sequel, right? - LD - Jul-15-2008   

FANTASTIC! A must read! - Anonymous - Jul-16-2008   

What can I say that hasn't already been said about this story...mesmerizing...it gripped my imagination and tugged at my heartstrings....indeed an epic tale, when I finished I found myself saddened that the ride was over...the characters were flawed and beautifully written , a conqueror tale that few writers ever actually 'get'. Spyrel 'gets' it. I hope she continues to write in this genre for awhile, as an avid reader I eagerly await her next story. - juls - Jul-18-2008   

If this fic were a person, I would make love to it. =P - Cookies - Jul-29-2008   

Thank you - excellent story! - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

one of the best conqueror stories i have ever read. you must read it, you wont regret it. - d - Aug-03-2008   

AMAZING! This was gripping, brutal, beaufiful and poetic. Spyrel captured everything about Xena The Conqueror magnifsantly. This story MUST have a sequel....for my sanity! For all our sanity I beg you! - Sai - Aug-07-2008   

Absolutely amazing a must read! :) - Karrie - Aug-22-2008   

Wow. . . really, just. . .wow! I can't say anything more than that. This story had me reading until the wee hours of the morning. It felt like watching an episode of Xena and I couldn't take my eyes away. Of course this screams a sequel. I wanted to scream when it ended. When I read the last line, I was like, "Is this it?" Oh my God, how I cannot wait to read another story like this from Spyrel. Out of ten stars, this story gets a hundred. Bravo!!!!!! - Meg - Sep-14-2008   

That was great. Well done. Can we have a sequel pleaseeee. Pretty Pleaseeee. - Bella Taggart - Sep-16-2008   

This is the third time I've read this story and it just gets richer every time. Unlike a lot of the usual conqueror stories where GX fall instantly and madly in love, this story makes you work for it and enjoy every minute while you are doing it.

Fixed every single pet peeve I ever had about conqueror stories and Gabrielle is so incredibly intriguing in this I couldn't stop reading. Completely different from anything you'll have read in the genre. Highly recommended!!! - Kerowyn - Sep-17-2008   

I know I praised this to the hilt last time, but I have now read it for a second time and it has now become my absolute favourite story ever in Xena fanfiction. I have been reading fanfic for 10 years and it is wonderful to see a new Bard delivering quality like this. Spyrel... any news about a sequel? - Kez - Sep-20-2008   

This is an amazing read, loved every part of it and would love there to be a sequel! - xengab20 - Sep-23-2008   

Unglaublich gut geschrieben! Ich bin absolut beeindrückt! Sehr gut! Thank you Spyrel! Germany - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Gah. Just Gah! If only they were ALL this wonderful. Perfect combination of suspense and intrigue without sacrificing character one little bit. It's everything I ever wanted to read in a Xena story and it's raised the bar on what I now expect out of a Gabrielle portrayal. Utterly delightful and amazingly well written. - Anonymous - Oct-02-2008   

I have yet to find a better written or more compelling piece of fiction since this one. The portrayal of both Xena and Gabrielle are believable,complicated and wonderfully gritty. Beyond everything, this story is about the fundamental nature of our beloved characters. How despite the constraints, self imposed and otherwise, they still have the ability to free each other from the darkness. And in case you haven't figured it out yet, I love LOVE this story. Please read. You won't be disappointed and will probably be surprised. - Specks - Oct-09-2008   

An extremely well woven conqueror tale where Gabrielle is a gladiator and Xena is still the destroyer of nations. Intrigue, tension and awesome characterization. Probably my fav Gabrielle yet. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2008   

This is my favorite fan fiction, ever. I've read numerous tales, and I always come back to this one. The writing is superb, as is the plot and characterizations of our fav. duo. I hear there is a sequel in the works...I pray to the gods this is true, for I need a sequel! Do yourself a favor and read this. right. now. - Anonymous - Dec-09-2008   

This is probably the most heart rending, amazing, and complicated portrayals of the X/G relationship yet. I don't care if you like or do not like alternative timelines, you will like this. Because in the end,its all about the characters and Spyrel does the characters more justice than any other author I have read before. I have no words for how exquisite this story really is. Pacing, characterization, writing, all absolutely perfect. Read this, you'll be doing yourself a favor. - Kerr - Feb-03-2009   

This story is beautiful raw and violent, it tears into you and refuses to let go. I couldn't stop reading once I had started, I was so transfixed by everything. Please, Spyrel, will you give us a sequel? - S. Livingston - Feb-06-2009   

Most excellent read on so many levels. A "what if" that acknowledges the core essence of each character. But, as it is a strong conqueror story, each character is true to what they might have been had there been a Conqueror. Very strong story. Difficult at time -- not in reading, but in the ideas and themes presented; that is, doesn't cheapen out which gives all the more to savor in the story. Lots of lovely angst and anger. I look forward to more from this writer. - Anonymous - Feb-08-2009   

Please, it's going to be a year in May. I need a sequel!! - Anonymous - Mar-14-2009   

Definitely one of the best Conqueror stories I've ever read. The Gabrielle character as the Gladiator "Parda" was fascinating. Excellent work. This brillant tale is screaming for a sequel. - LRT - Mar-22-2009   

What am amazing piece! This is a spectacular read. - filfil - Apr-05-2009   

AAAACK!!!!...WHERE'S THE SEQUEL?!?!?!?! It's been a long, long time since I've been so completely taken by a writer and her work. When I found there's no sequel I wanted to start loppin' heads!!

- JC - Apr-14-2009   

I agree that everyone who has read this story is in dire need of a sequel! Something this good just can't end so quickly! Sequel! Sequel! - Zelda - Apr-16-2009   

Wow. A must read. - Puff - May-30-2009   

le sigh. I check back about twice a month to see if a sequel has been posted. It's over a year now! I can't take it anymore. Spyrel, please put us out of our misery and give us a sequel. Please? - Anonymous - Jun-05-2009   

Excellent! Don`t miss it!!! - Anonymous - Jun-18-2009   

Awesome characterization. Strong writing. Absolutely amazing. A masterpice! Thank you Spyrel!!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Jun-25-2009   

dang!!! it was amazing. is there gonna be a sequel? this story is too good to let it end here. - cell - Aug-10-2009   

Awesome, awesome,awesome. Sequei plllllllease!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-02-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Good story. Well written. Indeed, very diferent from what we're used to read in a conqueror storyline, that's why I still find it so strange to buy... Intriguing no sex between the main characters, purposefully, I guess, which I also found it interesting.... I loved the awy they met, The Leopard thoughts well discribed for the situation. Worth spending a little time to read this one. - Miledcast - Oct-22-2009   

Awesomeness! Stupendous writing, I loved how you conveyed Xena's and Parda's struggles with emotion. Wonderful character depth throughout. Thanks for sharing your work! - Chess - Oct-27-2009   

Excellent! Amaizing! Spyrel, you just made my day!!!! - Anonymous - Nov-01-2009   

SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL! please - Anonymous - Nov-10-2009   

I just read this story in two nights. Add me to the list of huge fans. Tons of unasnwered questions and an amazing adaptation of Gabrielle. Truly unique and well written. I hope there's a sequel out there. Thanks so much. - J. Davis - Nov-12-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** I nearly cried several times, the pain was so visible, my heart shattered to pieces for Gabrielle, Love her so much, the broken yet lonely,independent,tough spitfire....
I've read thoudsands of fanfic, this is always the BEST, the FOREVER NO.1 in my heart, and always will be.
Thank you so much for this unbelievable journey, Spyrel - dazzleusuck - Nov-17-2009   

WOW!!! Just WOOOWWW!!!! High quality! Don`t miss it!Thank you Spyrel ;-) - Anonymous - Nov-19-2009   

Top read, excellent twist on the conqueror theme. Sequeal please - Anonymous - Nov-21-2009   

One of the very best stories out there. It is well structured and the language is lush. The characterization is fabulous. This is my second time reading, something I normally don't do, and it was still a riveting read.

I hope this writer continues with other like stories. - Anonymous - Jan-03-2010   

Absolutely amazing. Hoping against all hope that there is a sequel in the works.

- Dominique - Jan-09-2010   

First conqueror story I read and... Well, Simply the best. Very realistic, even brutal. What I really admire, is that there is strong friendship and even love, but it's not emphasized. You just feel it. - Aate - Jan-16-2010   

This story is amazing! Quite realistic and well-written. - Anonymous - Jan-19-2010   

wow. one of the best stories i have EVER read. the only thing it lacks is a sequel. - Vale - Feb-06-2010   

I don't know how many times I've read this story but I always go back to it. A scene will pop into my head, then I'll remember another, and before I know it I have to read it all over again. Amazing and unforgettable - I highly recommend it. - Anonymous - Mar-23-2010   

Amazing character development and storyline. Please write a sequel! - k.c - Apr-03-2010   

Thank you! - Anonymous - Apr-16-2010   

Absolutely Loved this book. Very well written. - Anonymous - Jun-10-2010   

WOW!! WOW!! WOW!! SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!!! SEQUEL!! A MASTERPIECE OF LITERATURE!!! - Anonymous - Jun-29-2010   

A really great story. Enjoyed reading it. - sassy123 - Aug-31-2010   

Fantastic! The level of detail adds depth and life to the characters. This and your other work are so gripping, it's a shame there aren't more stories from you. - Anonymous - Sep-06-2010   

BEST Xena story I've ever read. WOW... WOW... It's really, really, REALLY good. VEry well-written. The spice index is low, but the author turns it into the story's greatest advantage. This story was SO good. I wish to GOD there was a sequel. - Whitney D. - Sep-10-2010   

Awesome! Read it! Please Spyrel give us a sequel! Pllleeesssee ;-)
- Anonymous - Sep-23-2010   

sequel please...what happen to them.. - leia - Oct-21-2010   

Amazing read! Not usual Conqueror story - this one is more realistic and has lots of violence in it, but once you start reading, it captivates you completely. Thank you, Spyrel! I really hope to read a sequel one day. - Enverz - Oct-31-2010   

Ohhhhhhh......where is the sequel??? Please Spyrel don`t let us down ;-((( - Anonymous - Nov-17-2010   

This is one of the best Xena fan fics I've ever read, period!! I really really hope there's a sequel!!! - Anonymous - Nov-21-2010   

Excellent story - highly recommended. - Anonymous - Dec-04-2010   

Highly recommended. The gladiatrix is fantastic- so refreshing and captivating way to create Gabrielle character and Conqueror is as she's supposed to be - merciless and trusting nobody. Great story dark and violent but the world of Ceasar and Destroyer of Nations couldn't be any different.Read it! - carbon - Jan-01-2011   

Ich bin wegen der Story nicht zur Arbeit gegangen, da ich erst um 6 Uhr morgens mit dem Lesen ferig war. Unglaublich gut!!! Thank you Spyrel. Hope, your girlfriend will "let you" write a sequel as soon as posible?! - Germany - Feb-09-2011   

Very different take on the Conqueror story line. Very interesting and plausible. Well written and nice pacing. Nice blending of a variety of elements from the show and ff. Well Done. - Georgia - Apr-23-2011   

More stories like this;especially a sequel!!! - Marsha - Jul-04-2011   

Excellent! I love how Spyrel wrote historically, and acurately of ancient Geece and Rome. Great story...I highley recomend this. - mashymoo - Aug-30-2011   

Amazing, complicated, and gripping. This is a rich and full story exploring the very human aspect of rulership, triumph, failure, and redemption. - Anonymous - Jan-25-2012   

I do admit I was a bit reticent about a Conqueror tale where Gab was a gladiator, but boy was I glad I did! ONE OF THE BEST EVER! It really deserves all the praise it gets here, so DO NOT MISS this. And yes, a SEQUEL would be sooooooo perfect. Hope Spyrel gives us a bit more of her talented work =) - babyjune - Apr-29-2012   

Read it! You are not going to waste your time! - Anonymous - Aug-05-2012   

Brilliant! A must read! - Anonymous - Aug-13-2012   

The violence is unrelenting. Not for the faint of heart. But, in the manner of Conqueror stories, this is probably the best. - spyce - Aug-29-2012   

You rock Spyrel! Thanxs for sharing your talent with us! The sory is a 10 out of 10! - Anonymous - Aug-31-2012   

Absolutely fabulous!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Jan-04-2013   

An unflinching tale of the Conqueror that manages to stay true to it's origins through the surety of its characterisation. This is Xena and Gabrielle in a world of darkness, but it is Xena and Gabrielle, nonetheless.
A story that poses difficult questions, but also excites, captivates. Read it. - Frankie - Jan-08-2013   

I absolutely adored this tale. It kept me on the edge of my seat the entire ride and it never stopped slamming you with more than you expected. Truly one of the most awesome fanfictions I've ever read. I have to say it, will there be a sequel any time soon? Pretty please? - SVRose - Mar-16-2013   

nice read.. - xtra dog - May-19-2013   

Excellent story - best Conqueror story I've read. I found it emotionally more realistic than most. Great ending, too. - xhk - Jun-01-2013   

Really good story. Well written and good plot development. I like the fact the relationship grew gradually and realistically. One of the best conqueror stories I've read. - Hawksflight1 - Jun-12-2013   

Loved this story & the authors way of writing.... But I was really let down by the abrupt ending. All that time... For no true reveal of their feelings, which is the build up I yearn for in any Xena fan fic. I'm a sucker for it. - Lisa Jane - Aug-01-2015   

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Antigone, yeap!! I really knocked myself out on this one. For a first fic story, it is a good one. Thought it's just a 'I meet you first time, falling and make love' but NO I was wrong. Along the way reading, it became twisted and interesting that make me have a second thought to seriously finished reading till the end. On Second Thought is waiting for you all to read !! - Easteden - May-11-2009   

Clever Scooby you are, making with the Sunnydale stylings and dialogue. That takes real skill. Thank you for treating our beloved ladies with the respect that they deserve. Now if you could just rewrite the end of season six, and throw season seven out entirely, that would be good too .... - Anonymous - May-11-2009   

Your Buffy-speak is soooo spot. I was spewing water laughing so hard at the dichotomous understatements. Willow is sweet, and though heavy on the romance, the friendships were definitely given their due. Loved it! - Anonymous - May-12-2009   

Parts 4 and 5 are the same chapter. I've read this many times at other sites...there is a big chunk missing here. [5-18-2009 - Corrected] - Anonymous - May-15-2009   

About as perfect a story as you'll find on this site. A very talented writer. - offhermeds - Jul-04-2009   

Really nice. Love the constant repetition on how the persona in the poem want to do everything with his/her lover. Kudos! - Sandy - Oct-19-2011   

It's joy to read Fletcher DeLancey's work. Smooth like butter. - wasabigrrl - Dec-09-2009   

sweet and romantic. - Anonymous - Jul-24-2010   

Excellent story. Sweet, poignant and romantic:-) - Lyn B - Jun-18-2011   

Beautifully written, thought provoking, insightful emotional journey. - Wheezie - Nov-28-2012   

awww.. such a sweet, romantic tale.. it's not syrupy (don't know if that is an actual word, don't care either) since it does send out the message that communication is everything in a relationship.. but.. yeah.. still sweet and romantic.. - xtra dog - Dec-30-2012   

Wonderful story ! It is romantic yet stern in it's message.
I think I just may do a little role playing myself ! - Thothgirl - Oct-14-2014   

A masterpiece! This series keeps getting better with each new adventure. Congrats!! - Anonymous - Apr-23-2011   

I loved it. You are so original and innovative. Definitely didn't expect what happened. Wonderful stuff! I literally clapped my hands and squee'd when I saw another installment and you did not disappoint. Brice is just so damn lovable. :D - Kerr - Apr-28-2011   

I was thrilled when I saw "The Fifth"!! I loved it, as I have all the rest of the series. Brice is one lovalble character and I can't wait for more. - JAM - Apr-28-2011   

6:30 AM and I couldn't sleep until I read every last word this series has to offer so far. More soon, please? :) - AB Knight - May-01-2011   

Amazing! Read all 5 adventures til 2am! Can't wait forth next installment!!! - Anonymous - May-29-2011   

Xcellent!!! gotta have on the computer to read again! - Anonymous - Jun-01-2011   

nice mixture of superheroes and barons.. nice series.. would like to see it continued.. - xtra dog - Aug-09-2011   

Awesome story!... Can't wait until the next installment - Anonymous - Sep-18-2011   

Fun story! Good mix of drama and comedy. OH! I am sure I spotted some UBER Xena/Gabrielle characters in there:) - Clara - May-06-2006   

Great story.

Interesting new character added and very well-written plot. - Anonymous - Feb-11-2007   

Excellent Story - Highly recommend!! - Anonymous - Jan-02-2008   

Great story! I laughed out loud on many occasions. I highly recommend the story and will look out for more from Enginerd. - Anonymous - Apr-22-2008   

This has long been one of my favorites that I have read several times. In fact I will read many more times in the future. - linda aka cygirl1 - May-01-2008   

Very enjoyable story. I recommend - Anonymous - May-02-2008   

Another winner from Enginerd. This is one of my favorite J/7 stories I've ever read, and I've read a lot of them. - Aerows - Sep-30-2009   

WOW! This story was just ....WOW! You must read this story & it's sequel. You won't be disappointed. And just like everyone else who hs read this story, MORE PLEASE! - mokita - Aug-15-2010   

I've read this story many times:-)It's well written, with the relationship between Janeway and Seven so well drawn that I could picture them:-) Excellent. - Lyn B - Sep-27-2011   

so glad I check the top rated stories. This is an excellent story and while I haven't thought about STV in years - I greatly enjoyed it. Also wonderful new characters that added a new dimension. Highly recommended. On the the sequel now... Thank you Enginer for sharing your wonderful talent with us who lurk the atheneaum. - colorado fan - Nov-05-2011   

Brilliant. Excellent. Fantastic. Some of the best I've read, now I just wait for "the end." - lakey - Jul 21st, 2004   

Wonderful and amazing story! Grim and realistic tale with very believable and lovable characters. The intensity of the relationship between the main characters is well done and extremely heart-rending. I give this a 9 out of 10 rating. More parts to "When the Land is Dark" can be found from Day's homepage here:http://ca.geocities.com/dayliobserver/frontpage1.htmlThe story is still unfinished, and I seriously hope that the author would continue it, although it seemed to have not been updated for a long period of time. Such a great story shouldn't be left hanging, please update!! - aurelius - Oct 27th, 2004   

This is one hell of a story, wish it was finished. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - It states that this piece is unfinished, but I only realised that after I've read it. I was okay with where the author stopped. So even if it is never finished, I do not feel deprived. - Anna Lei - Jan-22-2010   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - It states that this piece is unfinished, but I only realised that after I've read it. I was okay with where the author stopped. So even if it is never finished, I do not feel deprived. - Anna Lei - Jan-22-2010   

Yes, it is unfinished, but still well worth the read. It didnt leave me feeling frustrated by its abrupt ending. A really good story and well written. - Anonymous - Feb-22-2010   

What more do I need to say other than; you are so good! This is a must read. - JettBlk - May-22-2010   

This is one of my all time favorites, one of the below posters is correct. Despite, it never being completed it does stop at a decent part of the story. It doesn't leave you regrets. - brighteyez08 - May-30-2010   

What a great story. I wish it had been finished. Would have loved to see how the author intended to end this great tale. I am happy that our two ladies were moving in the right direction. Day - if you check in, please finish. This is a fantastic read. - Anonymous - Jul-01-2010   

This is an amazing read. its captivates the reader from the beginning to the end. - sandy - Sep-09-2012   

This has been one of the best - well-written, exciting and interesting characterization, great flow, engaging for the reader - stories I have read in a very long time. Etoh brings the reader, alternately cheering and cringing through this amazingly broad yet limited panorama that is the lives of these women. There are no heroes in this piece but there is heroism a plenty in the lives of these beautiful characters.The only possible shortcoming might be the lack of physical description, something I actually rather enjoyed as I could put the faces I liked on the characters.This story was an all around wonderful experience! Kudos Etoh! - Nyc - Mar 14th, 2004   

Totally LOVE this story.... wonderfully written .. very insightful. Tried to contact the writer but could not find an email address.. so eToh, if you are reading this, THANK YOU for a great story. - Sheri - Apr 1st, 2004   

What a story, absolutely brilliant. Everyone should read this. - Kitty - Dec-19-2006   

This is a great story - read it! - gillian - Dec-31-2006   

By far one of the most touching, eloquently written stories I have read in years. Simply amazing. - jd - Dec-31-2006   

wow! beautiful!!!
- francesca - Mar-31-2008   

This is an astonishingly good fic. Superb characterization, beautiful prose, and a story that isn't just told, but felt. This fic will leave you breathless. One of the best I've ever read. - leavethesky - Apr-03-2008   

Perfect writing - Susan T - Apr-09-2008   

we want more - rie - Apr-13-2008   

Wonderful, heady, terrifyingly romantic... - Dusty - Apr-16-2008   

This is an exceptionally good piece of fiction; beautifully executed and well written. - Wasabigirl - Apr-28-2008   

An excellent and intelligent read! - TallTale - Apr-29-2008   

Beautiful, lyrical, enchanting. - jaeygatsby - Aug-07-2008   

Beautiful prose. Exceptional writing. This fic will have you drowning in a panorama of sensation. - Anonymous - Nov-11-2008   

I have started to read this story many times in the past and always wound up getting sidetracked. I finally got to read the whole thing all the way through this week thanks to a break in my schedule. I can't even begin to describe how amazing it is... It's shot straight into my 'top 10' list for sure! - Jumper - Nov-27-2008   

This is a great story! I read this at least 3 times and every time, it make me pause and think... beautiful writing and charaterization.... you should write more! I would love to read more of your stories... - Ann - Dec-01-2008   

This story has hit home in more ways than ever. Background wise, actual context wise, I think reading this has put my fears hopes and dreams into paper, and I ask myself, along with the protagonist Kris, "What am I frightened of?". Go on, I urge you to read this, because it will leave you changed. - T - Dec-09-2008   

I so enjoyed this story. All the characters are so realistic and I found I couldn't stop reading once I started. Would love to read more from this author. Thank you! - Ginger - Dec-19-2008   

Not a quick read, not meant to be. Make time to think and absorb, it's worth it. - a - Apr-03-2009   

This is one beautifully written story. eToh's writing is intelligent with characters that have layers, color and shadows. eToh&hope to see more - Ramsey - Jun-23-2009   

WOW... What can I say? This story is beautiful! Thi bard is a genius, I wish I had her way with words so I could tell how exceptional is her fiction! But I better let you read... ; )
- yuka - Oct-21-2009   

Just wanted to say the eToh writes a wonderful tale. I really enjoyed it as it kept me glued to my computer from start to finish. Wish she would do another and let us catch up with these two later down the line. Thanks so much for allowing us the pleasure of your talent ! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-08-2010   

Simply Beautiful. This author has the heart of a poet. - Anna Lei - Jul-12-2010   

E'ffing brillinant story. I went in without knowing what I was going to be reading. I'm so glad I took the plundge. I couldn't put t down and had to read it in one sitting and as fast as I could. - JettBlack - Jan-20-2011   

wow, eToh is a poet... absolutely amazing with words. And wow, what a story this is. I wish I'm half as good with words so I can give this writer and this story the praise they deserve. I know I'll come back to this story again whenever I want a quality read. Thank you for writing this.

And eToh... I'm guessing you're a local? It's pretty damn cool to read a story set in a place I actually know :) - e - Dec-10-2011   

What a good story this was! - Anonymous - Jan-22-2012   

Wonderful! This story pulls you in and beautifully weaves a love story in with current events and life abroad. - JT - Jun-10-2017   

I like this story. It's well written and sexy. - Anonymous - Jul 3rd, 2005   

This is one of very few fanfic stories that I come back to again and again. The concept is original which sets it apart from the beginning. I normally prefer contemporary stories but as this was so well constructed and written I didn't have time to think about the setting. I like a good story and I like a good PWP but this combination (that the author names SWP) is great, with the sex scenes enhancing and complimenting the story while also being really hot at the same time!I highly recommend this story and commend the author for an engaging and sexy interpretation of 'marriage' traditions of the past! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your work! - Leah - Sep 4th, 2005   

A lovely Elizabethan Era romance with a nice twist. Well written and well paced. - Georgia - May-03-2008   

LOVED IT...my only disappointment in the fact that it's so short!! Great job Kim Pritekel!!! - JC - May-17-2008   

i hope theres another one i just love it it great... - Anonymous - Sep-25-2008   

quite hot indeed. Since it takes place in 1540, it should be Middle Ages, not modern. - offhermeds - Jan-15-2009   

A very beatiful story, indeed. And usually the beginning of Modern Age is pointed after 1492, with the discovery of America by Cristoforo Colombo. So, in this case is correct. - Tenshi79 - Jan-19-2009   

love it! one of the best and hotest medieval stories. kim is an amazing writer. - luie - Feb-18-2009   

HOT! - Anonymous - Mar-16-2009   

Wonderful story. This is one of those stories that I reread regularly. Love the characters. - Marcia - Mar-29-2009   

Great story!!! I really loved it!!! - Anonymous - Jun-06-2009   

Very romantic story packed into a few pages. Loved the uniqueness! - Maddy - May-02-2010   

I LOVE IT... this story is definitely among my favourite. hehehe my last name is Aragon like the Fallon of Aragon of the story coincidence. - Silent-Angel - Nov-02-2010   

Good story, enjoyed reading it. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

My first introductory piece to Kim Pritekel's fiction. A sizzling hot erotic story which I really enjoyed reading. My only complaint is its rather hasty ending. - booksmantra - Apr-14-2011   

indeed swp.. but good swp is nothing to be sniffed at!! - Anonymous - May-10-2011   

omg. great story. hot love scenes - braniac - Dec-04-2011   

omg this was so beautiful.kim you are outstanding and my fav writer - tafadzwa - Oct-01-2012   

BEAUTIFUL AND VERY VERY HOTSMITH - Anonymous - Mar-31-2015   

I was so very happy to see our favorite Amazons. Wish there were more stories with the Amazons. Thanks, Del, for an enjoyable evening. Keep them coming! - Sherry - Aug-06-2007   

Thoroughly enjoyed this series. I've never seen anything like it done before. - A Fan - Nov-13-2007   

Really, really liked this tale. It's about time a certain cute regent of the amazons got some romance.............the big question has always been would Ephiny choose Solari -- or Eponin????? - AmazonQueen - Oct-08-2008   

an excellent read!!!!!!! - a fan - Oct-15-2008   

I've read this story and the others in the series and am just amazed that not only did the author manage to tell the same event from 4 different perspectives but also got the characters' voices downpat. - Anonymous - Apr-16-2009   

EPHINY!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-26-2009   

A really great story. Well done - sassy123 - Oct-16-2010   

Those series were my first introduction into the Birds of Prey fandom. Even today I have no big knowledge of it going beyond some clips on YouTube to put faces to the names. Still, I can only recommend BG's fiction. It's well-written, long enough to possess some intricate characterisations, with nice mix of romance, angst, action and sex. What could a reader wish for more?
And to be honest, as a dedicated Xenite, the idea of a brainy, redheaded, green-eyed woman with pacifistic tendencies and a dark-haired, blue-eyed, volatile warrior-type with the heart on the right spot is ringing all my bells and whistles. - M. - Jun-09-2009   

This is a great story, even if you are not a fan of the series, or indeed if you have never heard of the series (I certainly hadn't). It has twists and falls and great character evolution. If you are looking for a new fandom, or simply a great story, then read this and the sequels. - RB - Jun-18-2009   

Great story, BG is a very good writer, and clearly a fan of the show. This is such a tender romance, and so so good. - Aerows - Jun-16-2010   

I really loved this story. Great job - sassy123 - Apr-23-2011   

This is the first chapter in such a beautifully written series. Whether or not you're a fan of the show, you'll be captivated by the characters and the love story. I'd love to read more BG! - Ginger - Jun-06-2011   

So glad this series showed up in the Top Rated. Landslide is fantastic. What a talented author. I had not seen any of the show but love the characters and story. Off to read the next in the series. Can't wait to see what happens next. - Anonymous - Dec-29-2011   

Really lovely, an awesome look into opening a heart, accepting changes. Made me want -- NEED -- to find the television series and watch it! - Anonymous - Feb-25-2012   

OMG!! This is HILARIOUS!!!! Don't read this at work! I LOVE these characters! - Anonymous - Feb-19-2011   

Loved it, made me laugh out loud. - DAB - Feb-20-2011   

I Can wait to read more about Jericho is a wonderful story - nicolen - Feb-23-2011   

Excellent continuation of "Jericho"! Look forward to more! - Anonymous - Feb-24-2011   

Wonderful - read Jericho first then this Valentine's day update. Really very well written - a must read....looking forward to the next story from Ann - CoolNik - Mar-29-2011   

This is an hilarious story. I love these characters and laughed out loud at their antics. Very funny, sweet and romantic. Excellent read. - Lyn B - Jun-21-2011   

what a treat.. this story ends as it starts: funny, even hilarious at times, lots of innuendo, romantic and arousing in parts,.. excellently written.. would love for this series to continue.. the two main characters have simply stolen my heart.. - xrta dog - Aug-25-2011   

Without a doubt the best Mel & Janice short story ever written. Absolutely superb with a fantastic (if depressing) ending that has to be read to be believed! - Janet - May 21st, 2002   

I don't like Mel and Janice stories but this story was so moving, so captivating, so emotionally provoking that it stayed with me for several days. (This refers to it's pre-quel as well And A Nightingale....) - Karon Reiter - Jan 31st, 2005   

Broken link - Anonymous - Apr-12-2007   

Ubers come and Ubers go, but this story is without doubt the best Mel & Janice story ever written. It rends the heart upon first reading but you'll thank me for recommending it, I promise. - Beth - Nov-23-2008   

Oh my Gods! A friend sent me a link to read this and I could not put it down. Far and away the best Uber I have read in a long time. The characters are well drawn and the layers upon layers of meaning dispersed throughout the tale make it a keeper. I am burning a candle and asking Artemis to rattle this woman's muse. If ever a story deserved a sequel, this one is it. - Cora Leigh Hampton - Mar-10-2009   

Love it! Finally, a critique of X/G's vampiric relationship, and the psychological consequences for Mel and Janice. Very realistic and unashamedly honest. Highly Recommended! - Lexx - Apr-23-2009   

I HIGHLY recommend anything written my Melissa Good...she is truly one extremely talented writer...I greedily eat up her work like there's no tomorrow. Moving Target will not disappoint but I'd recommend reading her Dar & Kerry series in order...www.merwolf.com. - JC - May-13-2008   

traduzca sus libros al español - winipeg - Jun-29-2014   

traduzca sus libros al español - winipeg - Jun-29-2014   

Truly loved this story. I have never really been able to get into the Voyager Fanfic due to the dynamics of the characters but by adding a new character to the cast really made the story line click. Loved it. I highly recommend it to all. The author's previous works have all been excellent pieces and with this addition is par for the course. Wonderful job. - ellebmd - Feb 23rd, 2005   

ItÆs no secret that I adore R NolanÆs writings; this story is no exception. It is well written, and a wonderful love story with just enough angst to be intriguing without becomming frustrating. Keep up the great work Ràand weÆll all keep reading, IÆm sure. - Littlespit - Feb 25th, 2005   

You have cemented my fandomhood with your latest story. Wow! I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more in the future. Please continue to write! - ln549 - Feb 27th, 2005   

R. Nolan has created something truly wonderful in Unexpected Arrival. It was one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a long time. With R. Nolan's wonderfully written dialogue, the characters really come alive to the reader. Seven is written very accurately, and the "Unexpected Arrival" was one that the reader can't help but fall in love with. It's sweet, romantic, funnyàand just an all around great love story. It gets my highest recommendation. - Bardeyes - Mar 7th, 2005   

this is an amazing story!!!! hope theres a sequel cuz i cant wait!!!! - krysta - Mar 19th, 2005   

An excellent story from start to finish. A nice change to have Seven not be with Janeway and what a delightful alternative Del was. - Anonymous - Apr 7th, 2005   

What an unexpectedly wonderful story! It was touching,charming, funny, and exciting.Highly recommended, even if you are not a Voyager fan. Great sci-fi story. - Janie - Aug 31st, 2005   

I just have one question. RJ where were you when this series was on the air? With writing like this it would still be on! Great story. I miss these characters and it was great to see them back. More please! - Karen - Nov 12th, 2005   

I wanted to take this opportunity to thank all my loyal readers for all the wonderful response Unexpected Arrival has received. The reaction has been phenomenal. Star Trek Voyager was a bit of a departure from my usual writing but was a fun experience. Seven of Nine has always been my favorite character, and I was intrigued by the idea of creating a story that featured Seven and expanded on the character we had all come to love.Many of the emails IÆve received concerning this story have requested, sometimes quite adamantly in fact ;-) a sequel to Unexpected Arrival. To that end, as a thank you to everyone who has taken the time to write and share with me their enjoyment of Unexpected Arrival I have an announcement. Coming in January to the Athenaeum: The sequel to Unexpected Arrivalà Join Del and Seven on a totally new adventure as they go Into the Void. Happy Reading, RJ Nolan. - RJ Nolan - Dec 24th, 2005   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Excellent Voyager story with an intriguing original character. Well worth reading. - Sandy - Jan-27-2008   

This is one of my favorites. I have read this story numerous times and plan to read it numerous more. It is that good. - linda aka cygirl1 - May-01-2008   

Well written and thought out. Will go into my bookmark to read again. - Anonymous - May-02-2008   

This is a great story! If you enjoy sci-fi give this story a try. You don't have to be a Star Trek fan to enjoy it. I love Del! The sequel Into the Void is just a good. Read them both! - Tanya - May-17-2008   

I'm a J/7 fan. But this story pairing 7 of 9 with another female is fantastic and believable. At least it made a believer out of me. - Sally - Feb-08-2009   

I love this author - everything she writes is absolutely fantastic. I don't normally read Voyager stories but I'm sure glad I did. What a wonderful coming into your own story. The romance and love that developed was a pleasure to read. Read it - you'll be glad you did. - Anonymous - Jun-28-2010