I love this story, very well written and i really hope there is a sequel so i can see more of those characters. - Danni - Mar-28-2009   

I really like this story. Even nicer that it is situated in my home town.

I'd love to see a sequel. - Anonymous - Mar-29-2009   

This was a great story and really enjoyed the connection of Gail and Lilym and Sierra is a blast. Love to see a sequel - Anonymous - Mar-29-2009   

wonderfully written story! a must-read. - Anonymous - Mar-29-2009   

great story hope to hear more about this couple...i recommand - nic - Mar-31-2009   

I'm so glad I found this story. The ending was a bit rushed but the story is well told and highly recommended. - jennie - May-15-2009   

I recommend this story and this bard. Hope to read more about this couple soon. - Anonymous - Oct-19-2009   

I really enjoyed the story. Thanks Mary. - BJ - Oct-30-2009   

Loved the mother daughter relationship. The dialogue was fantastic! I wish there was more conflict between the protagonist and her love interest though. - Anna Lei - Nov-03-2009   

I'm glad I found this author. The stories keep getting better. - KimK - Dec-27-2009   

Good story, which has been published under the title "Crash Stop". I would have liked to read more about how the ladies blend their lives ... - Ricky - Aug-18-2014   

This story totally rocked! I love it! I recommend it to everyone! This is one awesome tale! - Gwen - May-14-2009   

Great story. A wonderful read. - RhB - May-16-2009   

Very good read. Deans house was as much a part of this story as some of the humans. The writer suggested a sequel, good idea. - gayzer - May-31-2009   

AWESOME! Sequel please! Definately a must read! - kelz - Jun-23-2009   

Great story!!! Would love to read more about these characters, sequel please? :) - kaysy1994 - Aug-20-2009   

Really good story xx - SD - Sep-06-2015   

Great story! Pulls you in and twists you around. Thanks Cheyne for a perfectly rendered Hallows eve tale. - Anonymous - Nov-03-2009   

Happy Trick or Treat indeed. well done cheyne - crv - Nov-05-2009   

Wow! This one really had me going! Great little read. Thanks Cheyne. - tgrgr - Nov-10-2009   

Sad and strange, but very intressting. - Amanda - Nov-20-2009   

Great read, loved the twist at the end! - Peyton Andrews - Jan-02-2010   

I enjoyed this story and in particular, the twist at the end. Very well written and fun to read. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

this story is a treat, albeit a tricky one.. - xtra dog - Mar-28-2012   

Wonderful Halloween tale with a great twist at the end. Not at all what I expected. One of the best Halloween uber tales out there. - Stacia - Nov-10-2012   

Awesome read! My only complaint is that it was too short, there are so many intriguing avenues left unexplored... maybe in a sequel? :) - Anonymous - Mar-11-2010   

WOW - Anonymous - May-06-2010   

wonderful short story. - Anonymous - May-08-2010   

I love this story! Too many curse words so I can't share it with my older sister, she'd thump me on the back of my head for reading bad words. Hmm, wonder if I can bleep them...
She's got to read how Riley handled her dad and the warmth surrounding the character's Allison & Riley. This is just such a great story. Thank you, Hillsys Stalker! - Samantha - May-20-2010   

This is a really great short story. Unique, fast paced, and will pull at your heart strings. Highly recommended. Great author too !! - x/g fanatic - Mar-19-2011   

great story.. really well paced and well written - soopi - Jul-10-2012   

Excellent story..kept me interested all the way through.. a must read. - Anonymous - Dec-06-2010   

Amazing! A must read! - Jynx - Dec-08-2010   

a delightful read. - rleef - Dec-08-2010   

Excellent story !! Delightfully written by a great author. Highly recommended. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Dec-10-2010   

A great story. Well worth the effort of reading. - sassy123 - Dec-12-2010   

Great piece. I highly recommend it. - pickles - Apr-19-2011   

Great story, it has it all, romance, adventure, intrigue. I hope for a sequel. - Anonymous - Aug-11-2011   

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loved it - recommend it - would love a sequel please. - Anonymous - Nov-27-2011   

Good writing, great characters and fun read! - Anonymous - Feb-02-2012   

Was really enjoying the story till I was nearing the end and the story just stopped mid sentence. [Editor's Note: Corrected. Thanks for letting us know! 10-29-2012] - Wheezie - Oct-29-2012   

Excellent read, loved it! - Surferdp - Nov-05-2012   

Ho sais Xena dosn't have it all..soner or later she will.This story is a Clasic in it's ohn right. I enjoyed it..and lets face it Lucy Lawlles was cute as a man to. - SammyLee - Feb 25th, 2003   

This is a great story. I have read a few times and I am still entertained everytime I read it. I have read all of your stories and I hope you write more. - Miss Rose - Sep 23rd, 2004   

This story was really good. One of my faves! - Sherron - Sep-09-2008   

****SPOILER ALERT*** This had a really erotic premise and it was discreetly written when it came to the "alternate" execution of their sexual performance. Teagen's Xena is very troubled by her "dilemma", which in the real world is perfectly understandable, even though Xena doesn't live in the real world and given Xena's adventuresome curious nature along with her well known sex drive, I wish she had tried out her new "toy" more. However, this story takes a different path entirely, far away from my perverted mind and uses this "gift" for just a one time only event as a means to get Gabrielle in the "family way" rather than explore Xena's many "skills". Gabrielle's pregnancy leads them both on another adventure with an angry Herodotus and some wayward rebel Amazons that are up to no good. All in all makes for an interesting and refreshing read with a more real world Xena that is more flustered and concerned when faced with the tense and upsetting challenges presented in this story. - kazy - Dec-17-2012   

I read this only because it was recommeded to me as I wasn't familiar with this bard. Before I knew what time it was, 4 a.m. came and went and I was still too engrossed in this story to go to sleep. What a great time travel story and anyone who enjoys this genre of writing will love it. The climax of it will stun you as it did me. Very well done and now I can't wait to read more of this bard's work. - Blayne - Mar 25th, 2004   

This was an interesting story - very unique! Had some really great moments, especially if you like time travel stories. Never expected the twist at the ending - good one! - AustinXenaChick - Sep 18th, 2005   

Wonderful story - Josje - Oct-27-2006   

WOW!! This is one of the best stories I've ever read. The twists and turns leave you hanging on until the very end. - Anonymous - Nov-04-2009   

Another wonderful story by this fantastic bard. Talk about twists and turns. Loved the unique twist. Read it - you'll really enjoy it. - Anonymous - Oct-13-2010   

Wow! That was an incredible tale. What a wild ending. Just make sure you have a box of kleenex near by for when you get near the end. - uber goober - Jan-18-2012   

She shoots, she scores! Mayhem adds another great moment in every lesbian's life... or fantasy life *w* - E - Sep 3rd, 2003   

This is the third story of Mayhem's I have read tonight, and, in my opinion, it is this author that is headed for a "winning season"!!! Hot stuff!!! Whew!!! Thank you, Mayhem, for spicing up my night!!! - Michelle - Oct 5th, 2003   

That was so cute ... and hot! - Georgia - May-06-2010   

Hot pwp. - Lyn B - Feb-20-2011   

hot pwp indeed.. - xtra dog - Sep-22-2011   

This remains one of my all time favourite stories, it's so cleverly written and so bloody witty. It's a shame the author had to take most of her work offline, but this and it's sequels are available to buy (or so I've heard). Anyway, I recommend this to anyone looking for a story with sharp wit, deviance and a demon or two. Oh hell even if you aren't looking for that read it anyway! - Jade Devlin - Jan 22nd, 2004   

I love this story. You really have to read it ! - Anonymous - Oct 22nd, 2005   

OH GOD!! OH GOD!!! or should I say Oh Demon Oh Demon what a fun read. You are a HELL of a BARD. Humans start reading... - vampireslayer2 - Aug-10-2007   

Looooved it. Whoo hooo! - ethne - Apr-29-2008   

Love this story. I'd like to read the rest of the series. - Anonymous - Oct-21-2008   

Bestest funniest thing EVER! I laughed so very hard reading this, and the mystery thrown in really kept me at the edge of my seat. This author has such a wonderful and charming voice, that it was just plain fun to read! - Kerowyn - May-22-2009   

A charming and witty story that leaves a lasting impression. It is guaranteed to lift your spirits. - Kayla - May-31-2009   

The hilarity and mayhem never stop. Loved the characters. One of the funniest reads ever. - cmwulf - Jun-08-2011   

Some authors try to be funny and fail miserably. This author is pitch perfect with her repartee. Both stories are great. - southerndrawl - Aug-07-2011   

"Nine Minutes" is absolutely fabulous! What a wonderful reminder of all that should be on our minds and hearts during the holidays! Take the time to read this one, and you won't be disappointed, I guarantee it! - Michelle - Dec 22nd, 2003   

A sweet, thoughtful and entertaining story that highlights how sometimes it takes dramatic events for you to reassess how you approach life and love. - Anonymous - Jan 21st, 2005   

I liked this story. I'm impressed at how much the writer managed to pack in a short story. A good read. Recommended - Lyn B - Feb-26-2011   

So glad I found this author. This is another gem of a story with a wonderful "moral of the story" weaved in - which is so true. A real-life situation that many do face as we struggle to live our lives. Highly recommended. Thank you LCH for sharing her wonderful talent with us here. - colorado fan - Mar-13-2011   

Wonderful story.. made me cry! Very heart touching and totally fully of suspense!! - Stardawn - May-08-2011   

I liked this story. The relationship between Christian and Faith is beautifully written. It's understated but romantic and D has captured the spirit and tone of that period really well. A good read. - Lyn B - May-02-2011   

well written.very nice. - sandy - Mar-10-2012   

nice read.. i laughed at the part about how the phone lines worked in that time period.. extremely clever of the author to incorporate that in the story.. - xtra dog - Feb-02-2013   

I loved this piece! So surprising, so emotional in spots! As always, Ms. Tryst is pushing her boundaries as a writer in new ways. Good job! - Anonymous - Feb 1st, 2005   

A great read. Alex never lets me down! Will there be a sequel? There is the possibility for so much more. - Anonymous - Feb 8th, 2005   

life as seen from a firefighter's point of view.. in ny, nonetheless.. this story gives even more insight in the lives of people involved with 9/11 and how they are desperately trying to cope with its aftermath.. great read from that point of view, not so good a read if you're only looking for romance or graphic scenes.. - xtra dog - Nov-18-2011   

A good read - I loved it! - Ricky - Sep-06-2012   

A Beautiful story about love and friendship reaching into the darkest parts of our hearts and lighting the way home. - Xenasgrrl - Aug-15-2009   

A beautifully written story that truly touched me. A real gem. - Insta-Fan - Nov-29-2009   

If you love xena and this author, you can not go wrong. This is one that I can re-read over and over. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

I really loved this story. Great job writing it - sassy123 - Sep-17-2010   

Loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-02-2010   

i read this story about 2 years ago.. and i remember loving g's insight in x's abilities and hence her careful planning.. - xtra dog - Mar-07-2014   

You can read the story here http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/b/blmiller_ulyssesrevisited.html - Alyssa - Apr-04-2015   

This was a great story. One you won't find anywhere else - I don't think. Most stories are about encountering someone from Xena's past that pose a threat to Gabrielle - not this time. This story is about someone from Gabrielle's past. And because of that, I found it to be quite unique and intriguing. But then again, I find all of Ella Quince's works to be phenomenal. Considered to be one of the best bards in the Xenaverse - if not THE best bard. Check out all her work. It will never leave you - she's that good. - Karon Reiter - Jan 9th, 2005   

A wonderful read!! - JC - Jul-22-2007   

beautiful. - msprism - Sep-06-2008   

Wonderful. So sweet. - Andie - Sep-22-2008   

It was beautiful! - Starry - Jul-06-2009   

Nice, I love the gentle unfurling of this story. - Anonymous - Dec-15-2009   

I've never read a "first time" story as poignant. In particular, the author's description of their love-making is pure poetry. Beautifully constructed narrative with characters so moving this reader longs to know them personally. Sufficiently deep to touch one's soul. - XenaZon - Jun-14-2014   

I've never read a "first time" story as poignant. In particular, the author's description of their love-making is pure poetry. Beautifully constructed narrative with characters so moving this reader longs to know them personally. Sufficiently deep to touch one's soul. - ultimatebard - Jun-14-2014   

This has to rate as my all time favorite "first time" story. The language is so poignant, the story progression is gentle yet purposeful. Vivid characters make the reader long to step into the story to interact with them. And, as for that pivotal moment subtext fans awaited for 6, sensually tense seasons, their communion is tender and fluid, ethereal and timeless, powerful yet delicate. The storytelling stirs one's soul. - XenaZon - Jun-14-2014   

I knew I loved going to the grocery store. Now want to go more! Very good story! - R.M - Sep-14-2008   

And I always hated doing the grocery shopping. I'll share this with my sweetie...LOL - Lee - Sep-15-2008   

What do you do when you both hate grocery shopping and one is a vegan? This sounds like a great idea for a fun date with a side issue of grocery shopping. - ruth - Sep-23-2008   

I need to grocery shopping like that....very well written. - Anonymous - Nov-15-2008   

Definitely gives grocery shopping a whole new perspective... great fun! - Georgia - Aug-24-2009   

Fun story. My grocery shopping should be as fun as that :-) - Lyn B - Sep-21-2011   

Xena waits for Gabrielle to come back.

I enjoyed this one a great deal. Good job. - Souzan - Sep-07-2010   

Leaves a lump in your throat. - Kugai - Nov-20-2011   

Can it get better then this?It is rar to find a story this good and have the high qualety that it dows from start to finish.I have thretend and demaded that the atur of this story provid me with a glas of water and some new hankis for thos that she made me lose. - SammyLee - Mar 1st, 2003   

I fed the bars direct saying how much I loved this story and would love to buy it if its published - norma thompson - Sep 26th, 2003   

Excellent only problem was it was to short well done great story x - SD - Jun-17-2015   

Great story. Love the relationship between Jac and Laura. - Jules - Jul-20-2008   

This is such a beautiful story! It is the story of a couple, one in the military and her soon to be sweetheart back at home; the setting is just before WWII and right into the attack to Pearl Harbor. This author has such an inside track into emotion that delves deep to the soul. Sweet story. Thanks for writing it and sharing!! - Pearl Harbor - Aug-12-2008   

I too enjoyed this story. A very picturesque trip back to pre-WWII leading up to the bombing of Pearl Harbor. Very well written, I felt like I was there. A wonderful read. Thank you, D! - Teresa - Oct-03-2008   

great story that takes place before wwll and then pearl harbor. very touching because it goes deeply into the emotions/feelings of the main characters--jac and laura. i hope you have a chance to read this. the feelings described can be parallel to the ones we feel towards our loved ones during our present crisis in the middle east. this bard is truly talented. kudos!! - vicam - Jan-19-2009   

Amazingly sweet love story. Thanks for writing it. I shall keep it my my own library for many re-readings to come. - Emily J. - Jul-28-2009   

Very enjoyable story. Poignant and romantic. Well worth reading:-) - Lyn B - Jul-13-2011   

Very sweet story. I really enjoyed how this story was written. Romantic and poignant. Well worth a read:-) - Lyn B - Jul-14-2011   

A nice, well written story with a quite a bit of suspense. The pacing is great...sorry to see this first time author wasn't even considering a sequel. Check this one out. - Anonymous - Nov 15th, 2004   

Solid good story. Nothing spectacular but as good as an average episode. - Anonymous - Mar-02-2007   

Awesome story! Wish I could find more of her works! - bluecoco - Jun-29-2010   

a well written story with great cast and a nice bit of suspense read this you wont be disapointed - Anonymous - Jan-21-2011   

Good read - Anonymous - Feb-22-2014   

Great story well done x - SD - Sep-06-2015   

I'm sure that would work as a way to relieve stress.. - xtra dog - Aug-22-2013   

If you are looking for a story that brings a smile to your face. This is the one for you. Well worth the time. - chrissyboo2 - Jan 26th, 2005   

This is a very cute story and well written. - purplehawke - Feb-12-2007   

Very cute I wish it was longer some great characters! - Amanda - Nov-13-2008   

A delightful story for Valentine's Day. Wonderful characters. No bad words. An early romance, no intimacy; however, the future is not that hard to imagine. Sweet. - Teresa Thomas - Dec-28-2008   

Very sweet story. I liked both characters and how the story unfolded. Good read. - Lyn B - Feb-22-2011   

i loved the disclaimer.. nice read.. - xtra dog - Mar-17-2012   

Sweet and tender story ... made me smile! - Ricky - Jun-12-2012   

What a lovely short story. Very sweet, and a nice ending. - Anna28Carm - Jan-12-2017   

Brilliant characters, wonderful plot, i have lost counted of the amount of times i have read this series. - Anonymous - Apr-11-2008   

I love this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Jan-12-2011   

this is turning out to be a great series.. - xtradog - Jun-13-2015   

This was such a sweet story. I love the way the writer wove the great man into her story and we ended up with a wonderful new beging for the two best freinds. Really well done. - katie - Oct 28th, 2004   

I love the update, the new scene is really sweet and gentle and points the way to then end even stronger. Thanks for adding it. - Carrie - Mar 31st, 2005   

love this story. thanks Sage. - dms_143 - Feb-17-2008   

This was a very sweet love story! - Starry - Aug-10-2011   

This piece of work holds the condensed passion of this author's work. It must be read over, and over. The passion of/for The Red Rider will leave you breathless. Knowing what the truth is beneath, it's an image I'd like to be pressed up against when my 'forever' moment comes.On longing for MORE which her poetry pulses with: Author, I wait for the continuation of A Breath of Scandal. Will it happen? Or will it be 'nevermore'? - Anonymous - Dec 31st, 2005   

I liked this story. It's intense and dark. It is very well written. If you want something different from the usual, then this is one to read. - Lyn B - Feb-16-2011   

surprising story in which nothing is as it seems.. - xtra dog - Dec-07-2011   

Another great read that transports you into it's world, from start to finish. - Niyah - Dec-07-2012   

impresionante historia. Me ha encantado el sentimiento que transmite. Muy bien construida. - anonimo - Dec-08-2012   

Fantastic! Lovely!!! Adorable!! And very, very sweety!!!!!!!!! - Rosa Santos - Mar-03-2014   

Juat a bit of grumbling. With all the great feedback I got on my X/G-stories, you guys really got me spoiled - but as of now, there only were two message concerning the Sam/Janet-story. I'd really like to know what you think of it. I also welcome critique, as long as it is constructive. Keep on reading! Cordially, rs. - romansilence - Aug 26th, 2005   

The story totally blew me away. The take on the storyline was absolutely amazing. The story grabbed my attention and kept it to the very end. I would love to see another story in this timeline about just even everyday life for this pair and their friends. Well written and if no one has read this pairing it would still be easy to follow and to keep up with. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS STORY TO ALL TO READ. It is worth your time to read. - wmnwholves - Sep 19th, 2005   

What a fabulous read. I like the way you resolved a issues near and dear to the hearts of many fans. Well written and thought out. - terylfan - Mar-04-2007   

Great story. Sam is ever the heroess. Overall it was a great explanation of P3X-666 and what should have been to begin with. Highly recommend. - Druid - Feb-08-2008   

This story's title comes from a beautiful piece of poetry but that beauty is more than matched by the beauty of this story. This story is a must read, as is anything else by romansilence. - Anonymous - Jun-02-2008   

This is one of my favorite fanfics and an excellent Heroes fix. This was Romansilence's first Stargate fanfic but you would never know it. The writing is excellent and the plot is well thought out. Though the story ventures well outside of canon it still rings true. It is the kind of story you can read over and over and enjoy it each time. I give this story an A+. - slamaina - Jun-29-2009   

I commented before that I could read this over and over again, and I have. This is a must read. Grade A+. - Slam - Jul-03-2010   

Probably the best 'Heroes' fix-up ever written. It will tear your heart out and lift your spirit. - Anonymous - Nov-21-2010   

great - Anonymous - Mar-05-2011   

UsRxxu http://www.2KFk8UxzgR3t2CjpiGYlWRZr9NzJwIs8.com - RvOGJihfnmZgBDPcJP - Dec-29-2011   

UsRxxu http://www.2KFk8UxzgR3t2CjpiGYlWRZr9NzJwIs8.com - RvOGJihfnmZgBDPcJP - Dec-29-2011   

I rediscovered this story and am so glad I did. If you want to see Janet and Sam in a different, yet still brilliant light, this story is for you. It definitely makes you think there is nothing Sam cannot do. - Stacia - Apr-30-2013   

Do not hesitate to read everything written by S. Anne Gardner. My heart nearly fell out of my chest when I saw she has begun another story for we uber-freaks. Thank you, author. May 'White Mist' surround you and yours. - Anonymous - Jul-25-2006   

Another fantastically written story. Always from a truly gifted writer. A fan of all her stories. That she has so
willing shared with us. Thank You! - Christi - Jul-31-2006   

A must read. as always S. Anne Gardner gives us, the readers such a vivid story that we feel we are the characters in it.
Congratulations on another Number I hit. - Monticristo - Aug-11-2006   

Definitely recommend this one :) - Anonymous - Sep-22-2006   

More, more, more please, its utterly brilliant, need more soon please. - LuvTigger71 - Sep-23-2006   

Once again...great start...you've got us hanging anxiously...please finish!! - JC - Apr-20-2008   

I hate it when I get grabbed by a story and then discover it is unfinished...more please - Lee - Jul-21-2008   

Ooooo, what a incredible story (even if it is unfinished)! - Anonymous - Sep-30-2009   

Love it. a lot more can happen in this story. Wait till you finish it. - Su - Dec-31-2009   

Really enjoyed this,it has a well balanced mix of humour and angst,and left me smiling! - Anonymous - Mar-08-2010   

this was sweet. it leaves you wanting more, but not too disappointed. - kc - Aug-08-2010   

Sweet. The story really pulls you in. I was smiling when I finished reading it. Nice read. - Lyn B - May-01-2011   

sweet story.. i bet the coffee got cold.. - xtra dog - Jan-16-2013   

Excellent story! Dante and Gabrielle are both stranded on a deserted island and while there they learn to survive and love. Sweet and a testament of the power of love for survival. - Anonymous - Jul-30-2009   

http://web.archive.org/web/20010303111952/http://www.tiggsxenapage.com/XenaVerse/GabGold/Dantes.htm [Editor's Note: Corrected. 10-21-2010] - Charlie - Oct-21-2010   

this is a very good story. nice build up. liked it a lot. - Anonymous - Oct-21-2010   

great story... only wish it was a tad longer - Anonymous - Oct-31-2010   

Exceptional story I totally did not expect that end. It was great!! - Sandy - Sep-25-2011   

So sweet. And hot! - Ash - Aug-03-2015   

Wow, I'm still a bit shocked at the ending! Not what I was expecting. Too bad there isn't a sequel about what happens to these two after a few years. And what a nice surprise to have the Gab character be smart and capable without having to have the Xena character teach her. - Stacia - Aug-23-2017   

I love these stories. I can hardly wait for the next in the series - Anon - Jan-18-2011   

Very well written, very good story! Excellent Job, would like to know how the story will go on. Please write another part. - GIA - Feb-25-2011   

i love it! when i reach the end, i was a bit sad. i really hope you write the next installement soon. - Anonymous - Sep-10-2011   

I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON!!!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! - Te` - Dec-23-2014   

Link broken! Really liked the first generations. Does anyone have a working link to this one? - Anonymous - Jul-18-2021   

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What a powerful message. Your tale was very moving! It was too short, I know it had to be. You did such a wonderful job with so few words! Thank you for sharing this with us! - Pixieydust - Jun-14-2010   

Wow. This is a powerful short story. I like the stories that Cheyne writes because the topics are always so varied and thought provoking. This one conveys so much. Read it. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

how anyone can write such a powerful, albeit sad, story in only 999 words is not only a great achievement but also a marvel.. wonderful author.. - xtra dog - Mar-29-2012   

Highly recommend! - Anonymous - Jan-16-2011   

Sequel....horray...... Excellent bravoooo - Anonymous - Nov-13-2012   

This second part is as remarkable as the first. I'm sure there are hidden gems within both stories that subsequent readings will reveal. I am sure I drank this story too fast. This was a pure joy experience. - Teresa - Sep-25-2013   

Romantic, thrilling, dramatic and dern good. Blue Fire is sexy and perfectly set in the past as a western thriller. I liked the characters and the pace. I liked the cowboy versus Indian flare and the Indian versus Indian issues. It's a really great read. - JLNicky - Jul 16th, 2005   

This is a well written story, crossing cultures and taking us back to a different time. The references to nature, cultures, and languages are well thought out, and are incorperated smoothly into the story. I'd like to see Robyn take Alicia back to her tribe, and see things from Alicias' point of view.I truly ejoyed reading this story and hope there is a sequel ! - Kelly - Feb 6th, 2006   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Great story! Wow! this is a MUST - Kris - Jul-20-2008   

Wow! Great story - Alex - Aug-16-2008   

This in an altogether, dramatic, down to earth,unique, formidable thrilling story. C.E. Grey does have an unfaltering style and dexterity in the progress, development, evolution and clinch of this story. Highly recommend it - xenamary - Sep-07-2008   

This was a great story, told well. - Silver - Nov-26-2008   

Very very good !!1 - Anonymous - Mar-14-2009   

Very nice story...thoroughly enjoyed it!! It's begging for a sequel!! - JC - Nov-26-2009   

Sequel, please!! - Robyn - Sep-16-2010   

That was a great story. It was so well written that it didn't take long to read because once you started you didn't want to stop. - uber goober - Feb-27-2011   

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This is such a cute story. - purplehawke - Feb-12-2007   

I've loved both stories, can't tell wich one is better... but of course, because I really like this author!! (her works, of course ; ) - Rouge - Jul-16-2010   

A sweet story!! Light and cute..... - CoolNik - Aug-10-2010   

Cute story. Easy reading. - Lyn B - Feb-23-2011   

really felt the expectationsof the main character building so very good title.. nice ending.. - Anonymous - May-22-2011   

Cute short story! - Ricky - Oct-06-2012   

Very Hot & Memorable! - Kali - Jun-01-2006   

Wow, hot and spicy just the way I like it. - Anonymous - Jun-01-2006   

I'm glad I have showers at work. Nice job Lady J - Jan - Jun-06-2006   

This is one hot story and from one of my favourite Authors, good on you Lady J just fantasic, keep em coming lol - Lissa - Jun-13-2006   

This story should come with a spontaneous combustion warning. Very very good. - Myra - Jun-13-2006   

Muy Caliente. Story is very good. - Carmen - Jul-04-2006   

You stopped while the iron was still hot (not to mention anything else). The only thing I have to say about this one is "MORE I WANT MORE". Lady J I'm hooked. - Pat - Jul-10-2006   

Whoa. I LOVED THIS. Amazing love scene. I have to fan myself everytime I think about it. - Brenda - Aug-07-2006   

OMG. Amazing. Don't read this one alone. - Jeri - Aug-16-2006   

This story was not only hot but left me wanting to see more of Laura and Trisha. Please say there will be more. - Debbie - Aug-21-2006   

Hot! Very hot! I want to know more about these girls. When a sequel??? - Lane - Apr-11-2007   

Muy Caliente!!!!!! More Please!!!! - Tana - Apr-18-2007   

more pleeease - Anonymous - Apr-20-2007   

hot! very hot!! more please. - Lee - Jul-14-2008   

I really find it hard to believe there are so many recommendations and no ratings!! I've seen a lot of "hot" describing this story and I think that word falls short. Ummm I be thinking more on the line of scalding!!! Thank you LadyJ for sharing with us. - Nancy - Jul-15-2008   

nice.. - Anonymous - May-29-2009   

hot - Anonymous - Oct-19-2009   

HOT HOT HOT. Need I say more. - Terry - Feb-01-2011   

Great Story! Loved it! I just wish there was a aepuel *g* - Anonymous - Aug-07-2011   

A lovely sexy story. Would love to see these characters build on their chemistry. - Niyah - Sep-18-2012   

Good pwp ... and hot! - Ricky - Oct-09-2012   

This is an excellent story. I voted for it in the contest. - Anonymous - Mar-15-2010   

good story about A.I. / humans - bookgeek - Mar-29-2010   

Just read this book. AWESOME. More - deverax - Apr-17-2010   

What a wonderful story. Thanks for posting it. Wish it had a longer ending. Would love to see how their lives unfolded. I truly loved this story and highly recommend it. - Anonymous - Jun-18-2010   

This was an OKAY story all things considered - Anonymous - Mar-17-2011   

Really enjoy all of this writer's work and this is no exception, it was also engaging, entertaining and caused you to think about things around you that you take for granted. Thanks again H.W. Curious a longer version was promised, has anyone seen another posting?? - -toni - Dec-25-2012   

Interesting premise and different from other AI stories/movies. If you're looking for a story to make you think and wonder "what if" this story is for you. Would love to know if the longer story/different ending is available because the ending in this was really rushed and seems unfinished. Perhaps because it was the ideal ending, not really a believable one based on human emotions. Regardless, it is a must read for science fiction fans. - Stacia - Dec-29-2012   

Love it, love it, love it. Just wish the end had not come quite so quickly! - Anonymous - Jan-13-2013   

I truly loved this for the logical reasoning. Great job!! - soopi - Jul-20-2014   

I loved this. Truly good sci-fi are hard to find. It seemed a little rushed at the end but maybe I just wanted more. A sequel would be nice. *hint hint* - Kelly Aten - Aug-09-2016   

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I loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-19-2010   

Wow! How did ya'll miss this one?! How did I miss this one?! Not what I expected at all. Excellent grasp of characters. Nice insight. Believable. Great little story. - muinighan - Dec 2nd, 2003   

This whole series is incredible... - Anonymous - May-04-2010   

This story reads like a Greek legend and if you are familiar with all the different mythologies of Caeneus, you can figure out, I assume, where the story might lead. I was not familiar with this legend nor did I know that Danae had gotten the idea from Greek mythology. All I knew was that I read a damn good story that I couldn't put down and you will too, if you care to read it. As always, Danae weaves a narrative that is titillating and provocative. It revolves around Xena's first love, and the rekindling of sexual desire in a very touching and sensual story. Would have made another great back story episode to Xena's past. - kazy - Feb-10-2012   

This is an extremely beautiful story. The way it is written brings a gentleness to this Xena adventure that will stick with you. This is a HIGHLY recommended read for anyone. - Anonymous - Dec-18-2012   

I also was not familiar with the myth and even though I could guess where the story was headed it really kept my attention. Engaging and engrossing. - BigZ - Oct-13-2014   

I read it. A light little fluffy piece. Fun. Then I read it again and realized it was surprisingly funny. Good job, Pen old gal! - Anonymous - Jan-19-2012   

Great story! ! - Anonymous - Sep 5th, 2004   

a very interesting story to say the least a must read for a X&G fans. - erma - Mar-08-2012   

This is such an amazing story it almost convinces you that the characters are real and the events are so realistic it leaves you with sharp twinges in your stomach. Unbelievable story.. - Anonymous - Jan 12th, 2003   

Thank you for your excellant story Ms Muzza.You have a truly amazing and astounding gift in writting and Frankly, I want to read more from you.So please give us more:-) - Anonymous - Sep-26-2009   

This is a wonderful story ,the story grabs you right from the very first paragraph. I highly recommend reading this one. - Mut - Mar-14-2010   

What a great story! I laughed, cried, got angry and fell in love with the two lead characters. Some people don't like story's where 2 persons meet and fall immediately in a relationship, well I think those people will love this story! (I think :p) - Spreeuwtje - Jun-25-2010   

Cute story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Wish it had been longer. Would love to see what happened after the baby was born. - colorado fan - Mar-19-2011   

An excellent story. - Silver - Jul-14-2011   

AMAZING STORY .Thanks for writing this beautiful story I read it in one go couldn't put it down just wish there was more .xxx - SD - Jun-23-2015   

Improbable Protector and its 2 sequels is simply a wonderful trilogy with great characters, romance, mystery & suspense written with much care & attention to development of plot & characters you will just love. Story moves around in places,& time with a realistic patience given to following characters progression into a warm, deep relationship. I have read many of JDragons stories and could not just pick one to recommend. But IP 1,2,& 3 is something I will read again & love it just as much as the first time. - O.Ger - Sep 16th, 2003   

awesome! - Anonymous - Jul-02-2009   

I simply loved this series!! Could stop reading it - Traveller - Jul-17-2010   

Good entertaining trilogy. Well worth reading. - uber goober - Aug-05-2012   

This story is so HOT! - Honeybee - Jun 22nd, 2003   

You've got 2 in 1!!! Xena & Gabrielle making love on the space station in the far future! And boy, is it hot! - Kamila - Mar 4th, 2004   

Wow...I mean...Wow! I hope they invent a time machine soon cause if thats the future Man oh Man do i wanna be there!! =o) - Willow - Apr 18th, 2005   

hot hot hot - Anonymous - Aug-12-2008   

I have been enjoying all of Greek Warrior's work this week. This one is especially hot!! Even though this is a PWP I really enjoyed the premise. - Lee - Oct-11-2008   

This was wonderful and Interesting story. Great Job! - Hollie - Sep-01-2009   

If this PWP doesn't make you hot and sweaty you must be dead. Very sexy read. - ubergoober - Jun-28-2014   

I was bored one weekend and i came across this story and it's sequel. I fell in love with it right away. For an uber it really shows Xena's and Gabrielle's personalities. If you find time I suggest you read this story. Larisa I'm still waiting for a third part to this series. Please give me another story. Always keep up the good work Larisa. - Katherine B. - Oct 2nd, 2003   

Need more stories from you, Larisa!Just great! - Trinity - May-16-2008   

this was another Larisa classic with the humor coming at you full force.Can't wait to read part 2. - mutt - Dec-22-2011   

this is a very heartwarming and sweet story. i liked the way the author was able to include the song in the storyline. kudos!! - vicam - Aug-26-2008   

Absolutely loved this dark humour fic about Xena's long suffering but caring attitude towards her unstable bard during that certain delicate time of the month. Gabby's OOC antics are hilarious and the fact there's a mini-adventure tucked in amongst the chaos is a nice bonus. Great fun! - Uzu - Mar-15-2007   

Loved this. Very funny and clever. Made me snigger and grin stupidly in public. - msprism - Mar-20-2007   

Hilarious! IF you haven't read it, give it a try. - k alexander - Mar-23-2007   

I loved it! You gotta read it! The title says it all!!! - Nadine from Germany - Mar-26-2007   

Hillarious - brighteyez - Oct-10-2008   

definitely different reading. seems silly till some of the lines sneak up on you and you find yourself laughing hysterically. a wonderful fun read. don't miss this one. - Anonymous - Oct-17-2008   

Raised a smile or two :0 - Silver - Jul-07-2010   

I laughed SOOOO hard, I can totally imagine Gabrielle this bitchy when she gets her period - talissa - Jan-22-2011