i like this story alot its great. please, please, another.... - Anonymous - Mar-15-2009   

Interesting story. Is this really finished or not? Says tbc on part 2. - Anonymous - Mar-17-2009   

I like to say myself that it is not finished. It will continue. Hope to have the third chapter soon. - Almatha - Apr-02-2009   

I am enjoying this story very much. The author's take on the Creation is quite ingenious and fun. - M. - Apr-16-2009   

excellent series - Anonymous - Jul-11-2011   

a very enjoyable reading kind of revenge. Jazmine did a first good time story job. Well done, still waiting for more from you Jazmine. Highly recommended!! - easteden - Jun-11-2009   

Nice chemistry! - Texas_wild - Nov-13-2009   

I'm loving this series of stories.

- EC - Jul-15-2009   

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i don't seem to be able to get any sound out of my laptop today.. i hope it's just a passing phase.. luckily i know the song 'hero'.. especially the verse 'i can take your breath away' reminds me of this story.. - xtra dog - Dec-02-2011   

Link is broken! - Samantha - Jul-17-2013   

Link is broken! - Samantha - Jul-17-2013   

Link is broken! - Samantha - Jul-17-2013   

Link is broken! - Samantha - Jul-17-2013   

Sorry for the repeats. Each time submitted was received with ERROR, so I tried four times. I guess I really wanted to read this story... - samantha - Jul-17-2013   

Here's a new link that works as of friday 19th july http://cateswannell.com/cates-books/damaged-goods/ - cerealist - Jul-19-2013   

enjoyable little romp through space! - bookgeek - Mar-29-2010   

Interesting space piece. Felt kind of rushed at the end and left the reader wonderingt what was going to happen next. Definitely worth a read. - Stacia - Nov-09-2012   

I just love how Ephiny and Eponin were depicted. So cute XD! - Anonymous - May-04-2010   

This is a hoot and very clever. Nicely situated vignette. Well worth the read! - Georgia - May-06-2010   

Very nicely done, Mayhem. But now that you've used the character of Devillare once, you know I'm going to push you to expand on her storyline. - Del Robertson - Jun-19-2010   

excellent, clever story. - Anonymous - Jul-03-2010   

Great short series - brighteyez - Nov-28-2010   

Great for a quick pick-me-up for Seven and Torres fans, especially those who like turbo lift stories. - Stacia - Jan-13-2014   

I discovered this story by accident. I like the interaction between Abby and Cora. It's well written and a good read. - Lyn B - Apr-03-2011   

Nice short story. I enjoyed it very much - Anna28Carm - Feb-21-2017   

Dude, please tell me that youre haideng to write a lot more. I notice you havent written an additional blog for a while (Im just catching up myself). Your blog is just also important to be missed. Youve got so substantially to say, these knowledge about this topic it would be a shame to see this blog disappear. The internet needs you, man!VA:F [1.9.7_1111]please wait...VA:F [1.9.7_1111](from 0 votes) - lkzmcceqTntHMfk - Jul-08-2012   

Oh so funny. Write some more!! - Niyah - Sep-12-2012   

funny cool - flee - Sep-17-2012   

Niiiccce - Anna28Carm - Feb-21-2017   

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Love this story, very touching MUST READ Mia and Lee are a great couple - Anonymous - Mar-27-2013   

What a heart warming tale. This one is a bit like a fairy tale because everyone gets their happy ending. Would love to see a sequel to see how the family is progressing. If you need a pick-me-up, this one is for you. - Stacia - Apr-02-2013   

I liked it. great story ! - j-lo - Feb-06-2013   

Great read. Enjoyed it very much. - Moe - Mar-17-2013   

Great stories...more please - Paladar - Apr-08-2013   


Unfortunately the links are broken for this story. If anyone has good links, maybe they could post them here.. - Anonymous - Oct-29-2013   

Cant find the file... all I get is the 404 not found error, if anyone knows where to read this let me know - Lesley - Oct-31-2013   

Cant find the file... all I get is the 404 not found error, if anyone knows where to read this let me know - Lesley - Oct-31-2013   

Cant find the file... all I get is the 404 not found error, if anyone knows where to read this let me know - Lesley - Oct-31-2013   

Broken links! I really wanna read - Anonymous - Apr-15-2016   

VERY good story. Love the characters. Realistic. Believable. Only story I read straight through without stopping in a while. Very much looking forward to the rest of the story. - Anonymous - Sep-13-2010   

I'm really, really, really enjoying this story.
Good storyline.
It's nice to read real content and you've got a real interesting tale going on here.
Hopefully the Muses have been kind and you will finish the story tomorrow and the sequel will be ready in two weeks. - KKKatie - Sep-25-2010   

Looking forward to the rest of the story! - Anonymous - Nov-16-2010   

Another excellent story from this author. I am anxiously waiting each new chapter. - Bkwrmchar - Nov-17-2010   

Would LOVE to see how this story continues. Have been waiting ... and waiting .... and *sigh* - Weep - Feb-12-2013   

One of my favorite Lois Kay's story - now only if it was finished! This one blends a great deal of action and suspense with romance threaded throughout. Hopefully you're still out there Ms. Kay and checking because I really hope you finish this great story. - Stacia - Sep-24-2013   

Original ***spoiler*** d pastor should be d one holding back - Ifeoma - Oct-10-2013   

Loved it! - Amanda - Jun-30-2016   

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That was an awesome story! Loved it! - Peg - Mar-27-2006   

As good as Dawn of the Dead...which coming from me is a HUGE compliment! This was a whole ton of fun. Read it! - Anonymous - Oct-10-2006   

What's really amazing about this story is that it's so well written you can see the scenes in your head. This authors are really good and funny as hell too:) - mary - Jan-07-2010   

"She swung her fire extinguisher and the attack was dropped like acid at a Grateful Dead concert." I'm not sure descriptive sentences get any better than that one. As always, this one is a gem from Zee and Windstar! - Aerows - Jul-11-2010   

Really good. - Anonymous - Dec-26-2013   

nice read.. it does leave me wondering about something though..

***SPOILER ALERT*** how did billy get in the basement? wasn't the store locked? and he obviously didn't die in there.. - xtra dog - Feb-16-2014   

Wow...this one hit home for me big time! This is exactly how my Partner and I met and we've been together nearly 10 years and still very much in love! So yes it can and does happen this way. Aside from that this was an enjoyable story but not one of my fav's from this author. Ms. Pritekel is a very talent writer and most of her other works are far superior. That being said...this is still a fun read! - JC - May-04-2008   

have to agree with CJ.. uh, JC i mean.. it can and does happen this way.. is how i got in touch with my first girlfriend.. ah, sweet memories.. anyway, nice story.. not miss pritekel's best one but nice nontheless.. - Anonymous - May-09-2011   

Hmmm...okay that was scary...but I liked it... - BlueButterfly - Aug-16-2009   

For a short story, this really was a great (and creepy) read, but what's with the high spice rating? - Xenamungrrr - Sep-08-2009   

Spooky story:-) - Lyn B - Jun-21-2011   

Always wonderful to get an update into the lives Dar & Kerry!! Fabulous short story!! - JC - Nov-12-2011   

This is really one fantastic story. Took me two days to read it and I loved every moment of it. Can't say much more about it without giving anything a way, so I'll end this by saying that I will be reading and re-reading it in the future. It's going on my fanfic CD! - Sherry - Nov 3rd, 2004   

This one is not to be missed... Fantastic story filled with adventure and love. - Beth Goodman - Nov 8th, 2004   

this is one of those stories that u can not stop reading lol vary good i love the bro\sis thing herc and gabb get in this story - Anonymous - Jun-07-2008   

Excellent story! I sped through it as fast as possible and found it really compelling with excellent incorporation of historical figures into Gabrielle and Xena's lives. - blissefan - Sep-03-2008   

fantastic! devoured it in one day, missed classes for it. for sure reading it again! - Anonymous - Feb-20-2009   

When Xena is accidentally sent into the future post-FIN, Gabrielle must wait to reunite with her soulmate, while Xena searches for a way back to her bard. This story follows them both as they struggle with the pain of their separation, the consequences of their choices and an ever-expanding world still in need of heroes.

I enjoyed this story but I was disappointed when, near the end, I was given a choice of endings. I found this to be abrupt and unexpected. For me, it interrupted the flow of the story. Overall I enjoyed the story very much. - Rio - Jul-27-2009   

wow. read it. you must. - Vale - Mar-01-2010   

I absolutely love this story. The mix of history and xena uniiverse is enjoyable and the characters believable. It presents a spread of emotions throughout its entirety.That and I loved the ending. - firelarc - Jun-30-2010   

A very long story, but well done. - sassy123 - Nov-08-2010   

very imaginative & well written. Long, but it holds your interest. Good job D. - Anonymous - Nov-17-2010   

I've been searching for this story for a long time and I'm so glad I found it again. Such a beautiful story. One of my all time favorite X and G epics. - Grayson Kelly - Feb-20-2011   

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I am absolutely spell bound by this novel. The author has integrated so many historical people in this story it is amazing. The story just flows beautifully! - Ec - Mar-02-2011   

So many of lifes priorities fell by the way-side for this incredible story. Don't miss this amazing read! ~ Anon. - Anonymous - Jul-25-2011   

great story! very glad i had the chance to read it. thank you so much to all involved in bringing this story to life. you did a fantastic job! - kjviking - Oct-13-2011   

I really like this authors stories but she is a bit of a tease.She takes a long time for the build up til there finally together, but once they are it's too brief and quick on the love scenes.Still it is a tale worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Nov-23-2011   

Whew!!! I need a cold shower and a tall glass of ice water. Yeah,baby, steaming and a good read. - Anonymous - Jun-15-2008   

OMG!!! that lit my fires and kept them stoked...:) - rleef - Apr-25-2009   

You'll definitely need a cold shower after this. - Anonymous - Aug-06-2015   

Oh, this is a cracker, not just for those looking for a romantic Uber with some real human issues, but also for any budding petrol-heads who enjoy the thrills of stupidly-fast sports cars racing around the classic race tracks of Europe. Brmm, brmm! And watch out for the steamy gym workout :-)
- ianic - Feb-08-2011   

Great sequel. Definitely a must read. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - Feb-18-2011   

Good sequel. - Silver - Mar-01-2011   

A very good sequel!!! - donar - Mar-28-2011   

very nice read...i was exciting reading about the racing... - bluebutterfly - Apr-15-2011   

Great sequel! Love the setting, the characters... for me, a riveting read. - SFM - Jul-17-2013   

I really liked this story. especially nightshade, she was that gentle tortured soul i always love to read about. Thankyou for a wonderful tale. - anonymous - Oct-20-2006   

I don't read alot of uber stuff but this grabbed me and sucked me right in. Nice work J. - Mayhem Incarnate - Oct-29-2006   

I just found this author (loved Eagles Reach) and wanted to read more of this wonderful bards stories. Dark Elf grabbed me and didn't let me go. Great, fast-paced, action adventure fantasy story. On to the sequel now. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - Dec-10-2010   

It's good read, but the end is quite rushed. I would have liked it if the chemistry between the characters had been build up slowlier. The characters and the setting are really great, but as I said, it seems rushed... - Guilty Writer - Sep-03-2012   

I love fantasy, mix it with uber and I'm dancing on a cloud. - Wheezie - Oct-28-2012   

***SPOILER ALERT*** I can't say enough about this story. I love the different physical/cultural dynamics and I am going to sound like a geek here but the evolution of a species is extremely interesting especially when there is some truth to it. For example: J. Falconer dark elf species have different types of eyes one in particular happened to be blue. According to Duke Health, light color eyes, like the color blue, are light sensitive and in some cases cause photophobia which is difficulty seeing in bright light or blindness in light. But I don't want to say to much so I'll leave you hanging as to why that is an important fact.

I adore how this author wrote about the characters emotions developing not only romantically but morally.

I don't think I'm doing this story justice just know that it was a great read and I look forward to reading the 2nd installment. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED! - Katie of Ohio - Feb-28-2013   

Good story. It would have been better if you acknowledged
R.A. Salvatore for his 'drow' world. - soopi - Apr-28-2018   

This is a very talented author. If you want fluff, go somewhere else. The characters have a depth and complexity that is truly compelling, and the stories draw you in and don't let go till the end. It was impossible not to read them straight through! - Anonymous - Feb 4th, 2003   

This is a really good story....had you wanting to know how it would end...:) :) TWO THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......can you please think about making a sequel..thanks lol - goody - Jul-15-2010   

Snif Snif so emotional strong and beautiful. Wish I knew how to kick but. Radclyffe you are awesome. - Darkwaters - Sep-03-2012   

when i first read this story i was in awe.. after reading it the second time, i still like it but.. i believe this is not the best story this author has written.. still worth the read, though.. - xtra dog - Oct-12-2012   

I loved a story with more mature adults! And the characters were delightful...doesn't hurt a bit that the story is HOT! - Xenasgrrl - Sep-22-2009   

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Nicely written short story about the moment when a friendship teeters on the edge of becoming something else. As always with Andi, the editing leaves nothing to trip over, and I enjoyed the spark-to-fire metaphor. Also, I am now craving taquitos and fresh guacamole. - Fletcher DeLancey - Mar-08-2010   

Extremely well written. - Anonymous - Mar-14-2010   

Yummy! - Anonymous - Mar-30-2010   

Esa comida mejicana!! loved the story & the food!! both hot and spicy!! - Rouge - Jun-14-2010   

Slow burning story. I liked how the two women connected. It was like a slow dance. Nice read. - Lyn B - Mar-31-2011   

A new working link http://andimarquette.com/stories/freebie-stories/dinner-party/ - Anonymous - May-24-2011   

Great story! Wish there was sequel - Anonymous - Aug-12-2011   

I just loved this story by My Osage. A different take on the meeting of my favorite couple. Sweet and sexy! - Anonymous - Nov-04-2008   

I loved this story! it was beautiful and so full of "real" love. Neither expecting but it just happening like love does sometimes. - Starry - Sep-26-2011   

Very creative piece regarding this "gift" that Aphrodite gives Xena. Could you imagine what this world would be like if we had this "gift"? Wow! Considering how romantic this piece was I was very surprised at the eroticism as well. I like that combo. - kazy - Jan-07-2013   

Ooops, my above review was intended for Aphrodite's Gift. Sorry. wasn't paying attention. - kazy - Jan-07-2013   

I read the whole series. They were all great and incredibly entertaining. Highly recommended! - uber goober - May-03-2010   

An enlightening story, very well written with characters so believable, you can actually see the story taking place in your mind. Great job, Candideyes. - Sherry - Nov 30th, 2004   

This is an interesting story. I found it a little simplistic at the end, but it is thought provoking in its own unique way. - Lyn B - Mar-08-2011   

It's the holidays and I was so happy to stumble across this story!! Read this quick story to put the spirit of Christmas or the Holiday's in your heart. With the exception of a spackle of f-bombs, the story is full of poignant magical charm. 'Tis the season to be jolly... This story sets you on that path. Thank you, Candideyes! Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas every one. Reading and writing a good story is a gift, thank you to all who make it possible ;) - Samantha - Dec-20-2012   

short and sweet story set in the Northern Star/Southern Cross universe. Would love to hear more about these two. - Anonymous - Feb-04-2008   

Great action and storyline, the characters were great. I don't usually like reading stories this short, but this worked well. - juliemania - Oct-04-2008   

What a wonderful conclusion to North Star and Southern Cross. - Intl Warrior - Jul-06-2010   

This story is short however it has some of the best fighting scenes (mostly aerial) that I've read. Nice job with the storyline, too. I love the spiritual depth Windstar gives to her stories through the characters and circumstances. A wonderful read. Thank you, Windstar! And the Athenaeum for hosting these treasures!!!!!! - Teresa - Aug-23-2012   

You know why I loved it? Because even if it's a story about a reverend and a rockstar/producer it DOESN'T plot about the most obvious thing: faith and homosexuality, it discusses it rationally but it's definitely not the center point. Which is why I'm so happy I read it, it's definitely a change from the more obvious route and I definitely recommend this! - Anonymous - Dec-19-2009   

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I'm glad you liked it. You obviously understood what I was striving for, and not striving for, in my plot.

JS Stephens - JS Stephens - Dec-20-2009   

wow. powerful story. thank you - carinjo - Jan-09-2010   

Lovely wee story Intense and I enjoyed it very much - Linda - Aug-10-2011   

Wow! I wish I could wake up like this every morning. Very intense short story, only wished it had been longer. This bard is definitely to be watched out for. I am a fan. - Viva - Aug-13-2011   

So lovely, the gift you have for the small moment is rare- you're a writer to watch. This story sings... - salama - Aug-22-2011   

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WOW THIS STORY IS SO MIND BLOWING HOT DO NOT READ AT WORK AND KEEP A COLD GLASS OF WATER NEAR YOU SIZZLING - taz6644 - Mar-09-2007   

very sexy pwp - anon - Jul-27-2007   

Wow is right. Use the ice BEFORE you read this, because after you read this the ice is gonna melt before it is even close to its destination. - Nancy - May-11-2008   

wow it hot really hot - Anonymous - Apr-15-2009   

wow - Anonymous - Apr-19-2009   

Sexxy & HOT - brighteyez08 - Oct-11-2009   

Truly delicious, makes my mouth water. Damn that was so hot! - JettBlk - Jan-11-2010   

HOT - Off the chart hot! Wow! - Georgia - Jan-19-2010   

Holy hotness Batman! Wow. - Drach - Jan-21-2010   

WOW!! Cold water doesn't help with these hot lines. - statics - Jun-11-2012   

this was a very erotic and hot, hot, hot story. one of the all time great hot stories. did i mention that this was hot? - kr - Mar 21st, 2005   

Suzar knows how to write 'em hot! - offhermeds - Nov-04-2008   

Wow!!! What can I say? Hot!! Well written hot. Keeper for sure. Did I mention that this was hot? - Karon Reiter - Jul-01-2011   

Nice story - a short and sweet X and G tale. - Anonymous - Nov-02-2008   

This was a really sweet love story. - Starry - Aug-17-2010   

najara has always bugged me.. in the sense that i've thought x& g's relationship had evolved beyond friendship before she turned up.. and i just couldn't get my head around the fact that both x & g were willing to part.. - xtra dog - Feb-27-2014   

You're the one with the brains here. I'm watcnhig for your posts. - ghrsxbvpqsuk - Dec-11-2011   

i don't really get it..
***SPOILER ALERT***
wasn't she supposed to share her vision?? and why would she give it away if it was such an intricate part of her being able to concentrate on what she saw?? wouldn't that leave her without the ability to do it in the future?? and ewww, not very hygienic, is it?? - xtra dog - Jun-12-2013   

I LOVE this story and it's sequel. Great read. - Anonymous - Feb-10-2008   

This was a totally great read, I just wish there had been a sequel. hint, hint. - Jasper - Feb-13-2008   

A very nice story...also very shall we say..stimulating - Chercheur - Apr-27-2010   

A very beautiful and hot story, with fascinating characters, long time ago I'm not read a story so adorable. JLNicky,you're very talented writer! - Leth Cross - Apr-29-2010   

adorable - Anonymous - Jan-17-2010   

funny and cute.. - xtra dog - Feb-23-2012   

Interesting story concept. Worth a read. - aj - Nov-14-2008   

Different and interesting; the sort of story where what is left unsaid is of the greatest importance. - Lall - Nov-28-2008   

Great series, I'm not sure when this was written, but I hope it's a recent posting and the writer intends to finish this one. Love,love,love all the characters and the talent this writer displays with her words. Please, please Xenamungrrr
don't let this be the end. - legatoeff - Jan-27-2011   

WOW. This series is awsome. I love the orginal charcters. The character's are intriguing and I love the vampire chick. Can't wait to read what's instore. Please keep te updates a commin - firelarc - Feb-04-2011   

I am totally hooked! Just discovered that book 3 is not finished! Gasp! And then what happens??!
Very good series - Quite intriguing premise - Georgia - Sep-29-2012   

Please finish!!! - Jinxie - Dec-18-2012   

Loved it! Can't wait to read the 2nd installment! - Xenangabfan - Feb-12-2008   

A must read, human reality like story. I am enjoying it greatly. Amazing writer and theme - nerymari - May-09-2008   

If you want to read a series of stories with romance, suspense and a few hot scenes in it don't look any further than KD Bard's wonderful series starting with 'The Commitment'. It has everything a good story needs and will keep you reading for days. Highly recommended. - Asinda - Jun-09-2008   

as a stand alone, this story is somewhat lacking in depth.. but it is the basis for a wonderful series.. i have read the whole series once already and am now reading it again.. - xtra dog - Mar-12-2012   

This is one of the best story's on this site .This is amazing has it all love passion kids great friends funny grandmas and most of all so well written I couldn't stop from start to finish . Only small fault was the last in the series didn't like it much but that just me . This is one story you will not forget .thanks for giving us this amazing story xxxxx - SD - Aug-04-2015   

Holy poop! That was HOT! Yesiree! It was also giggle worthy! Loved it. - Anonymous - Apr-29-2011   

Extraordinary writing! One of the early fictional works that I came across and still could remember clearly what the story is about. I became an avid reader of fanfiction because of this wonderful story full of romance, mystery, and action. My highest recommendations! Is there anyone out there that still has not read this story? - BYL - Jun 8th, 2005   

I don't comment often but I really enjoyed the story. unique concept. thanks. - Anonymous - Nov-11-2009   

This is by far the cutest funniest story ever!! I love the way comedy is intertwined with the erotic writing I was really getting into the sex parts and wham up came a comical piece I started laughing out loud not once but several times!! - Solari - Jun 7th, 2002   

Well... well... GREAT! I don't know... technically it is a PWP somehow, but a PWP with a tiny bit of a storyline and a lot of comedy. And that's exactly what I like! Everytime one thought... ok... now... now they'll get to it... then... something happens... Extremely well written! - The Fic Addict - Jan 4th, 2005   

This is probably one of the best fics I have ever read! The humour, the passion, the great characterisation... absolutely loved it!! WELL DONE Zzelami!!
For all you readers out there, this one is DEFINATELY WORTH READING!!!!!!!!! - Amazon Penny - Aug-20-2008   

Both sexy and hilarious. I think I reread the bed-scene around three times and it still cracks me up every time.

Two thumbs way up - Anonymous - Dec-09-2009   

This is a classic Xena story. Very well crafted and incredibly sensuous. A definite keeper to be read over and over again. - kazy - Nov-04-2011   

would'nt this and the whole series be uber? [Editor's Note: Corrected. 7-28-2009] - Lysia - Jul-26-2009   

Great story and I hoping the nest ones in the series are just a good.Read it it's worth it. - uber goober - Oct-30-2012   

Enjoyed this story. Good first time effort by Fantasy. On to read the next in the series. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. - colorado fan - Nov-11-2012   

Awesome twist! I enjoyed this story very much!!! - Calais - Aug-24-2009   

I like the way the author takes a story and then rewrites it with a little different take and twist, very creative,and I must admit more the way that I would have liked the tale to go. - uber goober - Mar-10-2010   

I've read most of R.D. Elliot's work. I really enjoyed them. Ocassionally I do get a little confused about who is doing the speaking or actions. I reckon Touches would be my favorite out of the lot since its a good twist. Overall, the fanfiction is excellent like the bard. - Red Hope - Jun 17th, 2003   

A Perfect Ending :) - aubs - Jan 30th, 2005   

Sweet! - Starry - Jan-14-2011   

if the show were like this, i would have watch faithfully. ah, but that's why we have lovely fanfic such as this one. - kc - Jan-16-2011   

Talk about a HOT story!!! I enjoyed this story very much, but it seemed to end to abruptly. I wanted MORE! - TC - Oct 6th, 2003   

MUCH better written than most, truly enjoyable, not just due to it's memorable heat, but for the bard's skill with language! - Gingertea - Aug-31-2008   

Save this story! This is one of the very few uniquely written stories in which the author knows about ancient Greece or did some serious research on it. The only other writers I can think of off-hand who can do this is Day (none of those stories are on The Athenaeum, sadly), Lori Meyers, and Brigit Morgan. There are more, I just can't remember. The attire described in this story that is worn by the characters are what they would actually be wearing had they lived in ancient Greece, not what we see on the TV show. The emotions and feelings expressed reads like prose in some parts that could easily have come out of a Sappho's poetry. I felt transported to a different time as I read this, with it's elusive and mysterious tone. The sex was extraordinarily arousing and also quite mysterious too. A bit illusory, in fact, even though it was vivid. Was there a suggestion of Xena being a bit of a hermaphrodite or was that part of the magic of the story? I loved this short story. Quite impressive. More, please. - Karon Reiter - Jul-16-2011   

Exciting! Hot! WOW! - Starry - Sep-28-2011   

I enjoyed this tale. Short but sweet.Not a bad PWP story - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

nice sequel to 'british invasion'.. - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012