Awesome job Priest,cant wait for the sequel!!!!:) - Sandy - Feb-11-2013   

I love your were ! Really interesting view of the myth. You plan a sequel, don't you ? - She-ra - Feb-14-2013   

A nice read. Hope more of them two is coming ;) - Anonymous - Feb-15-2013   

Wow. Amazing Lace Priest. Excellent writing, fast paced. Love you "were". Please continue with Adal and Kelly's tale. - colorado fan - Feb-17-2013   

Well. Done! Truly a pleasure, now where is the sequel? - Wheezie - Feb-17-2013   

best new storie I've read lately gotaloveit!! - damere - Feb-20-2013   

Brilliant. Sequel please. - Luvtigger71 - Feb-23-2013   

great story please continue. - damere - Feb-23-2013   

it's a really good tale that let me wanting more . sequel soon please! - Anonymous - Feb-23-2013   

a sequel could be great but a pre sequel would awesome. well done. - Anonymous - Feb-23-2013   

More, please!! Nice piece of writing. The story is engaging and full of very interesting characters. Would love to see this world expanded. - Stacia - Feb-25-2013   

Wow....just WOW!!!! Please please please let there be a continuation of this soon! - Tracey - Feb-26-2013   

wow! Brilliant, I really hope there will be more stories from this world or about these characters. - turtle - Feb-27-2013   

Sexy, romantic and fascinating story! I want to see a sequel and I didn't want to see this story end - happykt - Mar-01-2013   

Excellent, I hope this is just the begining. I can't wait for more. - Kaylis - Mar-27-2013   

Excellent story, we need more, thanks for sharing - Anonymous - Apr-07-2013   

Excellent story, can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - LadyKnight - Apr-16-2013   

Fantastic story. Looking forward towards a sequel..many of them. - CJ - May-29-2013   

absolutely enjoyed this story.. there is a sequel, right?? - xtra dog - Jun-09-2013   

Please let there be a sequel................ - Anonymous - Apr-12-2014   

I don't typically enjoy werewolf stories, but this one was great. It is short and begs for a sequel, but as a flight of fancy with just enough plot, it was great. - Anonymous - Oct-25-2014   

Love it!! Grabs you from the beginning and couldn't stop till I finished it. I really hope a sequel will be written for this, PLEASE do one! This has so much potential for a continuation - Nel - Jun-18-2017   

Good story!!! Wish the author would finish it. I would love to know the end. - BratIsMe - Jan 19th, 2004   

Great story, PLEASE finish it. - Anonymous - Sep 12th, 2004   

Great story would like to know ending .Anyone know where I can find the ending? - Anonymous - Jan 23rd, 2005   

I have been waiting forever for this story to be finished. What seems to be the problem. I almost wish nothing were posted unless the author intends to finish it. - Carol Beck - Jan 25th, 2005   

Great story couldn't put it down. Hit the next part and there wasn't one .I did the OH NO. Hope to read the rest. Thank you - cross - Apr 21st, 2005   

omg love the story wish. would you please write the rest of it i'm dying to know how it ends please please please please and a pretty please with a cheery on top =p - rainbow warrior - Dec-09-2006   

One of the best Conqueror stories never to be finished, so damned good, so damned frustrating! - Pa9 - Apr-25-2007   

It's wrong that this story is left unfinished for so long! It's a really great work and I really want to know what happens next. Please finish it! - royuki - Nov-29-2007   

It is a total bummer this story was never finished, ranks as one of my favorite conqueror tale. Hope the author will find inspiration and continue the story again. - Anonymous - Dec-02-2007   

Darn shame this isn't finished. This is one seriously talented writer. - Anonymous - Mar-25-2008   

sUCH A wonderful story! I would really like to see xena's relationship with Gabrielle when they will be together.. I hope this story will be updated because I've been waiting for 4 years on this.. Read this and HELP me encourage the author to continue this :) - Anonymous - Mar-28-2008   

This is a really great Conqueror story but I really wish it had an ending....hope the author finishes it soon!!!!! Trust me if you like Conqueror stories then you'll love this one!! Please Please Seana finish this soon!! - Anonymous - Apr-11-2008   

great story very nnice read-- PLEASE FINISH IT!! - optional - May-19-2008   

This is a wonderful story. You had me hooked from the very begininng. Please finish it. I'm begging.......and I don't usually beg. - xperimental - Aug-06-2008   

eSTA ES LA HISTORIA MÀS GENIAL QUE EPODIDO LEER LA ESPERA DEL AMOR, YA DESEO TERMINAR DE LEERLA POR FAVOR SEANA, TU MAGICA CREACION DEBE COCLUIR, ERES UNA GENIAL BARDO, MIS HISTORIAS NO SON TAN LNDAS COMO AS QUE CREES POR FAVOR CONTINUA, DEBES ESCRIBIR UN LIBRO YO LO COMPRARIA CUIDATE ESPERO EL FINAL - GABRIELE - Oct-21-2009   

Do you have a competion to this excellent story?! - Marsha S. - Feb-23-2010   

Has the potential to be the best in the conqueror genre. I can only hope the author takes pity on us and finishes this story. - kc - May-25-2010   

ahhhhhggggg. This is such a great story and it leaves off in a major cliff hanger. My only hope is Seana James has mercy on all of us and will complete the story. Wonderful author and she penned a great conqueror tale - just wish it was finished. - Anonymous - Sep-25-2010   

Nice story. .Great job writing. - sassy123 - Nov-12-2010   

great story, a must read, please finish. - lucy O - Mar-09-2011   

Excellent conqueror story, I notice it was written over 10yrs ago so not hoping for an update soon, which is a pity. Just wish stories could be completed before posting. I usually don't read uncomplete works but clicked on this without noticing and now I am left hanging..URGHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Oh well - RavenIrish - Aug-21-2011   

I really hate that this story is unfinished!!! Didn't know it wasn't complete and I would definitely be the best Conqueror story out there if completed. Wonder why the author never completed it. - Anonymous - Aug-25-2013   

This was shaping up to be the best Conqueror tale I've come across...and then it stopped ;-/ - Anonymous - Nov-30-2013   

SUCH A GREAT STORY! I can't believe somebody hasn't recommended it yet. READ IT, you won't be sorry. - Jade - Jun-18-2008   

Awesome story! Great Plot and characters!! I think one more story is needed to make it a trilogy! - Xenangabfan - Aug-09-2008   

what a great sequel to Connecting Hearts. Hope for another chapter! - rleef - Nov-16-2009   

what a wonderful, charming and enchanting story. Loved it. These two authors make magic together. I've greatly enjoyed everything they've written. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - Nov-13-2010   

Great story. Wonderfully well written. The Authors craft tales that trully pull you in and let you experience everything that happens just like you were there and a part of it. - uber goober - Jul-14-2011   

in the prequel i was rooting for them to pull it together.. in the sequel i was constantly grinning at their interaction.. both authors are obviously well versed in the romance and humor departments.. - xtra dog - Jan-21-2012   

Loved this follow up great love story well done xx - SD - Nov-19-2015   

A wonderfully touching adventure. - Jenner - Nov-29-2008   

Another great story in the series. As always - a lot of wonderful and touching moments between Dar and Kerry, interesting plot, excellent humor, many well written characters and more. - N - Dec-19-2008   

Grinning like an idiot cus no matter how many times I read each book of Dar & Kerrys life I enjoy it like the first time I read it! God how I love these characters...just can't get enough of them!!!! - JC - Mar-12-2009   

I just love these two characters - can't get enough! A true soulmate love story. Well written a must read. Melissa Good has done it again!!!!! - Cathy - Apr-19-2013   

****spoiler alert****
Again good series but I'm confused with inconsistencies. I thought kyle was killed when he tried to take Kerry back home. That was when Dar discovered her dad was alive but in this story he acts like he doesn't know who kyle is. Very good writing but details like this should have been double checked. - Anonymous - Apr-16-2015   

This is the sequel to Adeptus Major, a domestic look at the future Queen of Atlantis and her Consort hiding in plain view. It's not quite what I expected, but then, I wasn't quite sure what to expect. So far, it's very good. I'm glad I chose to read it, and to be honest, it's a little addicting.I'd recommend this to anyone who has read the first book. There is continuity, a little newness and just a bit of surprise in the characters Evelynne and Ally meet.Yup, this one's a keeper! - Taleweaver - May 8th, 2005   

I missed class and lunch reading this! Excellent tale and well written. I can't wait for new chapters, I just hope it comes out during break. ^^ - Royuki - Nov-08-2006   

i read this many months ago, and i highly recommend the series.
i still wait for the sequel after the third story. hmm.. but i wonder why this isn't 10/10 rating? anyways, i love the story. if you want to read something new and creative, entertaining and the romance, read this. - rec - Jul-14-2009   

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST READ - Lucian - Mar-02-2010   

Thank God I can still read this book online!!! It´s dificult to find it in paperback in my country. Awesome PsiDraconis, waiting for more, please!!!! - Lucian - Nov-13-2011   

well, i can't wait to know what is going on.. who is the one wanting to overthrow the atlantlan government?? the suspense is killing me.. so, i'm off to read nwyn!! - xtra dog - Jan-15-2013   

I absolutely loved this story. It's a great read for anyone who is looking for something to read on a day like this. This story is absolutely beautiful and proves that love can cross time. - Alise - Mar 7th, 2004   

I would like to say just how much I enjoyed this thoroughly wonderful piece of work. It achieves just the right balance between action, adventure and drama; but above all else it is one of the most beautifully romantic tales I have ever read. - Ang - Oct 27th, 2005   

I love this story. It has the appeal of destiny and timelessness that always draws me back for a reread. Try it, I'm sure you'll enjoy it as well. - Royuki - Nov-13-2006   

YUST READ THIS!!
- Patty - Nov-27-2006   

Loooooonnnnng but Gooooooooooooood!!! - LsC - Mar-27-2008   

Good epic story about love across time. Towards the end a few things seemed to be done more to wrap things up rather than for the flow of the story but still a good read. - Anonymous - Apr-21-2008   

This story is remarkable!!!! I loved it!!! I wished there was more to come about these two... - BlueButterfly - Dec-11-2009   

This is a must read story - very, very good!!! - Anonymous - Mar-05-2010   

Loved this story. The magic of finding your one and only true love, the mystery of crossing time to find them, the beauty of the carribian - it was a very enjoyable read and the author is fantastic. Read it ! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jun-10-2010   

I really loved this story. Great job - sassy123 - Sep-11-2010   

I highly recommend this story it is one of the best uber stories I have come across. I really enjoyed this for it has two things that I like first it is an uber story and second it involves the Bermuda Triangle, something that has always fascinated me. - Lee - Apr-21-2011   

Nice and romantic. Couldn't put it down.Till I was done. Totally worth the read.
- sandy - Mar-26-2012   

Nice and romantic. Couldn't put it down.Till I was done. Totally worth the read.
- sandy - Mar-26-2012   

Absolutely loved this story. I stayed up all night reading it. I would love to visit with Donovan and Hannah again. Sequel? - hollyhwrites - Sep-12-2012   

Great story. I have to say though, I was a little sad at the ending. But I still enjoyed it very much. - Anonymous - Mar-10-2013   

I loved this story, It is a must read. It's nice to see love transcend time. - purplehawke - Jul-27-2016   

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This lady has some serious talent and this story just proves it. Thanks Mickey I loved it! - Wannetta Wilson - Dec 27th, 2005   

A truly delightful story. I'm a total futuristic/sci-fi junkie and I have to say this hit the spot. This author has yet to disappoint me. I'm glad I was able to read it. (My thanks go to The Tireless Bug Stomper) - Sparky - Mar-21-2006   

Pretty cool! Great adventure and heroism. Tarp and Terri are fighters, hopefully the lived a great life! - Chess - Oct-05-2009   

A good story just crying out for a sequel. - Silver - Aug-07-2011   

A good story just crying out for a sequel. - Silver - Aug-07-2011   

What a great, original story with a twist at the end. This story is well written and the plot not only believable, but enjoyable. Would be great if there were a sequel or two! - Stacia - Jan-17-2013   

I read this the first time a little over a year ago and found myself drawn to it again today. For environmentalists, futurists or anyone who loves a good, thought provoking story, this one is a must read. - Stacia - Mar-06-2014   

Thanks for linking this up to the athenaeum. A great story, I love San Diego, pubs and Irish. I was just thinking of this story the other day, not having read it in quite a while. Who knew someone was reading my thoughts and plunked this beauty of here? Wonderful! - Dusty - May-08-2009   

enjoyed this one very much!! Sláinte - rleef - May-09-2009   

Loved this story! Wonderful descriptions of San Diego (I've even been to Julian!) and very believable characters. I'm so glad I came across this story! - Xenasgrrl - Aug-13-2009   

I liked the story very much and would definitely like to see a sequel... by the way isn't Ireland 'anywhere' in the world, maybe we'll see a bit of it in the sequel??? - Kastanja - Nov-09-2009   

I liked this story ... great mixture of supense and romance! - Ricky - May-31-2013   

Really good story x - Anonymous - Jun-06-2015   

A happy romance in good ole uber style - predictable plot but there's a pleasant second half which develops the story further. It was nice to have a sort of part II to complete the tale...and there're hot zingy bits too.This story is complete. E - E - Apr 2nd, 2003   

I really enjoyed this story, could do with a second chapter as I need to know what happens to them both, If you want a really good read, settle down with a flask of coffee, and read, but i warn you, you wont move till you have finished it. - LuvTigger71 - Jul-04-2006   

I loved this story! I felt I was crawling in the jungle myself. Apart from the love story and the character development it advocated for a really worthwhile course! thank you Amber! - ullahoo - Feb-21-2008   

Excellent story! Read it.....you`ll love it! - Anonymous - Jun-19-2008   

A fantasic read ! - Elisabeth - Oct-26-2008   

Wow this is so addicting boy can Amber write if you are looking for an uber that's true to form this is it. I hope there's a sequel. - Lysia - Apr-11-2009   

Respectfully, I wouldn't categorize this as Xena fiction. It's definitely uber/original [Corrected 4-20-2009] - Wrldpece - Apr-17-2009   

Love this story! - Anonymous - Jun-16-2009   

Loved it so much brought the book - Luvtigger71 - Jun-20-2009   

WOW! Ashley is a wildlife photographer out on assignment in the Indian Jungle, looking for the chance of a lifetime to capture the very rare White Tiger what she ends up finding there is something that changes her life forever, an encounter with Leandra a mysterious catlike woman. What occurs in the depths of the jungle? Love, danger, mystery, adventure...read on you won't be disappointed! Hopefully sometime in the future there will be a sequel. Great job Amber thanks for sharing your talent with us!

I should also point out that the story's setting isn't really "Ancient" I'd consider it "Modern" [Editor's Note: Corrected to show as modern. 8-25-2009] - Chess - Aug-20-2009   

I really liked this story alot. Very Tarzan meets Jane-ish and very hot and sexy. - uber goober - Feb-19-2010   

Good story. Would love to see what happens next for these two - that means the characters got into my head. Thanks for sharing it with us !! - Anonymous - May-06-2010   

very very good story ,good writer ...don't miss this story!!! - dakota - Jun-21-2010   

A REALLY great story. With a really great message. - sassy123 - Oct-12-2010   

Love the story. A sequel would be grrreat! :)
- lyneX - Aug-03-2011   

Loved it! More please... - Anonymous - Sep-14-2011   

Excellent story!! Loved it.. - Anonymous - Aug-09-2012   

This was a pleasant change of scenery. It was so hot and tantalizing. You really wont want to put this story down once you start reading it. - Jas - Dec-27-2012   

This story is just amazingly brilliant. I would love to see a sequel one day. Highly Recommend. :) - Anonymous - Jan-15-2016   

This story is just amazingly brilliant. I would love to see a sequel one day. Highly Recommend. :) - Anonymous - Jan-15-2016   

This story is just amazingly brilliant. I would love to see a sequel one day. Highly Recommend. :) - Anonymous - Jan-15-2016   

One of the best stories I've read in this 'verse.I'm still hoping for a sequal Amber :o) - a Fan - Jan-26-2007   

What a wonderful story! Definitely read this tale. The characters are just fantasic, and the story is very well done. I look forward to the sequel. - jd - Jan-28-2007   

THIS is a great story. I loved it from beginning to end. You are truly a gifted author. - K.LEWIS - Apr-10-2007   

Wow! Please Bard, may we have more? A great read for a rainy day. - Sapphire - Nov-08-2007   

What a wonderful story, One of my all time favorites. - Anonymous - Nov-13-2007   

A great read indeed. Well written and paced, great characters. Absolutely begs for a sequel. - Georgia - Jan-22-2008   

Have read this a few times. I absolutely love it.
- Anonymous - Feb-01-2008   

Wow this story rocks! thank you for a wonderful adventure! - Jennifer Lee - Jun-08-2008   

Highly recommend the stories by Amber. She develops great characters and maintains a believable storyline. She is a joy to read. - Lee - Oct-05-2008   

Different part of the world & time from X&G but could be their exact lives as previously lead. Nice job Amber. - Lysia - Apr-11-2009   

Loved it! Knights, castles, battles, love! Incredible characters, I loved Kaleah and Jess. I was enthralled with the story and wished it would keep going. I definitely hope that there is a sequel. Wonderful work, keep it up! - Chess - Aug-19-2009   

i like this story and how you portrayed "gabrielle" and "xena". :D they're both strong and independent(especially gabrielle). if there's a sequal, i'll be sure to read it...is that enough of a hint?? haha - cell - Dec-29-2009   

WOW!! what a great story!! Please write the sequel!!! - Anonymous - Jan-18-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. The author has good plot development and well developed charachters that draw you in and make you care about them, and when the story ends leaves you wishing that it would continue on. - uber goober - Feb-19-2010   

This is going on my bookshelf!!!! Great job Amber :) I would LOVE a sequel. I Don't think their story should end quite yet. Definately a worthwhile read. - Yuri - Jun-09-2010   

Nice story, glad Amber shared it with us. Certainly was racy, too - I liked it very much! - Aerows - Jun-30-2010   

This is one of the best uber fics I've read in a while. Amber has done a masterful job with this tale. Absolutely LOVED it. Great writing, wonderful characters... read it. I do wish for a sequel - please Amber? - x/g fanfic fanatic - Oct-04-2010   

What a great story. Good job. - sassy123 - Dec-05-2010   

Awesome. Definitely a must read. - Anonymous - Dec-10-2010   

Great writing, had me hooked until the very end I desperately want there to be a sequel so I'll be keeping an eye on this author in the hopes she is currently writing one.

There is no far-fetched story lines unlike some fiction I have read lately... The story moves along at the correct pace and draws you into the characters lives... Please write a sequel I want to find out what happens to Jessica and Kaleah - Lesley - Dec-10-2010   

I've read this story several times and just can't resist reading it again! This is the first time I have left a recomendation on this site. This story really has it all. It captures you from the very first scene and keeps on the edge of your seat throughout. The personalities of the leading ladies shine brightly through the skill of this writer. I can't say enough good things about it. I for one would love a sequel. Cheers Amber for the hours of joy you have brought me with your talent. - JAM - Apr-19-2011   

WOW! Truly amazing story...I love this author and am incredibly attached to these characters. I anxiously await the sequel.... - Stacy - Oct-28-2011   

LL2Gtv See it for the first time!!.... - http://shopinq.com/ - Dec-28-2011   

What a journey. This story is that good...i could almost smell the dust in the secret passages and the feel the wet floors of the bathing chamber ;) - M. - Aug-02-2012   

This is a great story and really hope there is a sequel. - Anonymous - Sep-03-2012   

I have read the story several times. I loved it and have been hoping that you would do a follow up story. Their story should not end there but continue. I am hoping that the characters will began to speak to you again so that you will add to their story. - Alfreda48 - Oct-22-2012   

Thoroughly good read. Well constructed story. Fantastic loveable characters. - Lelly - Jul-25-2013   

Wow - what a wonderful gem of a story!! Nice work!! - Anonymous - Feb-19-2015   

very hot
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very hot
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A Great Read - Anonymous - Feb-07-2008   

A truely good read - Callisto - Feb-10-2008   

read this and surely you will enjoy this fic - Anonymous - Feb-12-2008   

wonderfull - Anonymous - Feb-12-2008   

Excellent. I've read several times. This is a great read. - BJ - Jul-11-2008   

This is a perfect story for a stormy sunday afternoon just enough angst and feel good factor. - Lsc - Dec-07-2008   

I loved this story :) great job!!! - Manuela - Dec-10-2008   

i love this story. it's funny and will make you feel all warm and fuzzy. this is my favorite story from BL!!! - Anonymous - Jun-28-2009   

This is one of the best storys I have read. I keep coming back to read it over and over. - Genelle - Aug-19-2009   

One of the best stories I've read on the site. Once I started, I couldn't stop reading it. Great slow-burn piece. - Jeanius - Oct-11-2009   

amazing story well worth the read! - Anonymous - Oct-17-2010   

This story appears to have been removed by the author due to plagerism. It's a shame there are people low enough to steal someone's work and claim it as their own. - Anonymous - Dec-03-2010   

I'm sorry that I missed the opportunity to read this story. Was it ever published? - Lyn B - Mar-08-2011   

Indeed. It is sad that there are one or two individuals with no talent willing to plagerise an Authors work and ruin it for the rest of us. - Kugai - Dec-28-2011   

This is absolutely my favorite book ever! I've read it probably 5 times over the years and cannot recommend it highly enough - Anonymous - Jan-31-2013   

Great stuff! Recommend whole-heartedly. - Arassar - Jul-22-2008   

Good story, good read, highly recommend! - juliemania - Jul-28-2008   

Great story & well written! There are very few quality western uber stories out there, but this is definitely one of them. Highly recommended - thanks, D! - Zeenerchick - Aug-04-2008   

Loved it one of the best. Well paced plot and characters that are believable and human. A story that draws you into it until the end. - iceflamesburn - Aug-06-2008   

Wow. . . I'm speechless. This has got to be one of the best stories I've read all year. It stayed true throughout the whole story. You would NOT be disappointed. I highly recommend this wonderful story. D writes with a passion very few authors have and I've enjoyed it immensely. This moves to number one for me. Thanks, D, for sharing this story with us. - Meg - Aug-12-2008   

I read this over a course of 4-5 days. This was one of the best stories I have read recently. I love the way the author represented the Indian Ways. A very loyal people. If you havent read this I totally recommend it. - pogo - Sep-02-2008   

What a wonderful story. With a long story such as this I always expect there to be some part of the story that drags -- not with "Drifter". The story had my attention every inch of the way! The character development was great, the plot was great, I can't say enough. - Anonymous - Jan-14-2009   

What a great short story. I would love if this became a full length novel to see what our heroines found! - anon-ee-mouse - Feb-15-2009   

wowww!!!! Don`t miss it! - Anonymous - Jul-09-2009   

What a GREAT story. Loved the native american backdrop, the characters, old west time - Read it. I love this author. She is FANTASTIC. - Anonymous - Jun-09-2010   

Love this - Silver - May-14-2011   

Must read story. Highly recommended. - pegi - Aug-08-2011   

Love the Native American storylines!! Nicely written and especially loved the beginning of the tale. Thank you author!! - JC - Aug-11-2011   

That was a wonderfully incredible story. I absolutely loved it. If you want to read a great love story then dive into this one. You'll love it I gaurentee. - uber goober - Dec-04-2011   

This is one of my absolute favorites of D's and I'm not a big western fan. The story is exceptionally well written and the twists and turns this one takes makes for a very satisfying read. If you love well rounded, realistic characters, this one is for you. - Stacia - Feb-26-2013   

Everything D writes is gold. This is one of my favorites from this author. Well developed, excellent crafted characters and a fun western tale. - colorado fan - Sep-13-2013   

I like this story ... a lot. A must read. - RLopez - May-17-2014   

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what an awesome story! a fantastic treat to read. - Anonymous - Aug-04-2010   

Superb story! - Anonymous - Jan-25-2011   

sweet read.. i like the setting and the suspense factor, next to the romance of the story.. - xtra dog - Jan-31-2012   

Beautiful... Talented writer - Mac - Apr-02-2012   

This story was such an unexpected delight ... read it! - Ricky - May-30-2013   

Geonn Cannon is an exceptional writer and this is an example of one of the best tales by this author. I highly recommend reading it. It says it is finished but when you get to the end of chapter 11 it says to be continued in chapter 12 with out a link. To finish the story click on the back to the academy link, go to the works listed by author link and click on that. Go to Cannon, Geonn and click. Scroll down to Ghost Light and the rest of the chapters are there. - ubergoober - Feb-10-2014   

I've just re-read several of Geonns stories. I had forgotten how much I enjoyed them first time round. If you haven't read them, you are in for a treat!! I also would recommend the Riley Parra series on Geonns own site. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2015   

LOVED THIS STORY!!! - Anonymous - Mar-16-2008   

This was an amazing story. You could almost picture the childlike Xena and feel the determination of Gabrielle to protect her. well done - mapsnika - Sep-08-2008   

This is one of my favorite Xena stories. The determination Gabrielle shows is awe inspiring. - Anonymous - Oct-25-2009   

This was a good story. Well worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Nov-18-2009   

I love stories that show Gabrielle as more than just the weak bystander as she's too often portrayed on the show.Kudos to Ah-Ladis for this gem. - Anonymous - Dec-17-2010   

By the Gods, I don't know how this story got away from me. It was categorized on some websites under uber, perhaps that's why, but I am sure glad I read it. What an adventure, what a ride! I enjoyed this so much that I couldn't stop reading it but then I had to put it down for a bit because I was approaching the end and I didn't want it to end. And then it did end. And I wanted more. Much more. Oh, well. I wish there had been a sequel, even a short story to tie up some lose ends between Xena and Gabrielle. This story was so imaginative, so creative and the writer was so adept at portraying the characters within the plot. The depiction of Xena as a child, Gabrielle's agony and determination to protect Xena from those who would do her harm and her perseverance to get her medical help, at all costs was so riveting. The author also had some very believable and interesting original characters that moved the action along, fleshing out the story more effectively, giving it the blood and bones of one hell of a whirl. Often you get a great story, but it's executed poorly. Or a formulaic story that's well written. Here you get both. I loved this Xena, her innocence and playfulness, yet her willingness to please "the pretty lady", even when it caused her physical pain, kind of reminded me of my grrlfriend, the heart of a warrior, with a gentle soul, enduring so much mental and physical abuse, yet remaining strong and silent for her "la-dee". And Gabrielle's pain and loss of the Xena she once knew, the torment and suffering she endures of wanting her warrior back, brought tears to my eyes. This was such a great read. - kazy - Oct-30-2012   

This is the most hilarious piece I have ever read......we shouldn't take ourselves too seriously should we? Loved it!! - Walooney - Apr-19-2011   

This story is absolutely hilarious - I agree we shouldn't take ourselves so seriously. Even if you never read Uber - read this one. - Georgia - Apr-20-2011   

Frikkin' hilarious! Loved it soooooooooooooo so much. :) - Anonymous - Jun-02-2011   

Approve. - Anonymous - Jun-12-2011   

Very silly. Quite so can't take ourselves too seriously : ) read it - your funny bone will thank you! - Georgia - Jul-17-2012   

BWAHAHAHA! - Wheezie - Oct-28-2012   

nice parody on all the ubers out there.. - xtra dog - May-22-2013   

Hilarious! Loved it! - celticmusicrocks - Mar-08-2014   

This story has it all. Humour, angst, sci-fi, mystery, and a dose of reality! Very few authors can mix all this and come up with a non stop page turner till the end... Anne has done a fanatastic job. A MUST READ! - Reader - Sep 24th, 2002   

This was an excellent story. I couldn't stop. Awesome! - Jen - Nov 15th, 2002   

I was so surprised by "Iron Rose Bleeding". There is a healthy dose of the very real problems our planet faces, handed in a very intellegent and wise manner, there is theory, there is Ralienism, there is love and danger...and it all comes together in a most satisfying way that will keep you hooked. I couldn't put this one down! - Taleweaver - Mar 2nd, 2003   

Bloody brilliant... can't say anything more... overwhelmed and this is just bloody brilliant - Jade Devlin - Apr 4th, 2003   

With this story, Anne separates herself from the rest of the bards. She reaches far and above the rest. I have never read a story like this before. It is unique and brilliantly woven. Her sense of detail to an imaginary world is fascinating. Her creativity blows my mind and her ability to effectively express what her vastly creative mind has created is awe-inspiring. Run, do not walk to read this story. - S. Lee - May 17th, 2003   

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! Ms Azel, you've ruined me for anything else.the logics is so clear i don't know what to believe in anymore, and the language... Tay is incredible, her reasoning is PRICELESS!! my brain and my heart thank you. give my love to your muse - brilliant work. - Katrina - Nov 8th, 2003   

I've read this story five or more times now. Each time I read it, I find something new. It is beautifully written and thought provoking. Ms. Azel, thank you for sharing your gift. - Annette - Jul 6th, 2004   

I kept calling to my partner, reading her lines from this story. I kept reciting several wise sentences, and wanted to run and post them on the fridge so I could be reminded what "WHAT?" truly means, or what "putting a face on really represented. This story touches several issues about earth and it's people, and about other's planet's potential beings. Loved it, loved the characters. Thank you, author. - Anonymous - May-26-2006   

I had seen this story recommended before and since I had recently several of Ms. Azel's stories, I thought I should give it a try. This is an INCREDIBLE story that should be read by everyone. Anne Azel is a terrific writer who creates remarkable stories that will not let the reader go. - Anonymous - Jun-02-2006   

What a fine story. I bought the characters right away and their distinctive personalities were refreshing. This is one of those stories that could be really depressing because of the issues it presents. Instead it was interesting and hopeful. One problem: I want more of this story. - Krystin - Sep-29-2006   

Incredible. This story left me absolutely speechless with it's depth and density. This isn't the best piece of fan fiction I've read in a while - this is the best piece of fiction I've read in a while.

Please write a sequel or at least let us visit this world again.

WOW. - -Aerows- - May-04-2007   

i really enjoyed this story, just wish it was more spicy but great read anyway - Anonymous - Feb-07-2008   

A nice read, makes ya think about the enviorment. - Callisto - Feb-11-2008   

One of the best!! Once you read it , you will never be the same. Hope theres a sequel! - Krysta - Mar-15-2008   

One of the most original stories I've come across in X/G/Uber fiction. Once I started it, I couldn't put it down as I wanted to know what the heck was going on - and when I finished it, I couldn't get the grin off my face. Definitely recommend this one - an extremely impressive story that goes beyond the boundaries of uber. - MEC - Oct-20-2008   

I think what's really great about this story is it's uniqueness, and what's unique is always a welcome fresh breath of air. No, but seriously, I think I got a bit smarter just reading it. Now I'm actually quite intrigued by the author - mary - Dec-05-2009   

Good read once it got going. Would like to have seen it go on. - JettBlk - Jan-22-2010   

E.E."Doc" Smith would be proud... - XNALIVS - Jan-28-2010   

Loved it. The "dimensional" twist was fantastic. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - May-17-2010   

What an incredible story. Anne Azel writes a very thought provoking tale that still manages to leave you with a big smile on your face.I really liked it alot. - uber goober - May-20-2010   

Awesome story, one of the best I've read. It was certainly worthy of being published, and you can bet I will buy it in hopes that Anne will continue writing such great works. - Aerows - Jun-10-2010   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - I am shocked that this story has not yet made a top 25.
I first read this years ago, and although I favour stories in the modern era category, I was utterly charmed by this futuristic tale. - Anna Lei - Sep-23-2011   

**Possible Spoiler** Great storyline showing a lot of imagination. I would like to have learned more about the alien race and their world. The ending felt a little rushed. All in all a great read!! - JC - Nov-08-2011   

I love a good read, but I love to learn even more. This story gave me the best of both. It was very exciting. - Nemo et Nihil - Mar-14-2013   

Excelent story, a must read! - B. - Apr-05-2014   

Wow - what a great read! Wasn't sure if I'd like it at first, then slowly fell in love with the story line. - Anonymous - Oct-31-2015   

One the best and unusual fan fics I ever read. I've gone back to this one over and over again and its my very favorite Anne Azel story. - Anonymous - Jul-21-2016   

great story with an alien twist. Really enjoy everything this author has so graciously shared with us. - colorado fan - Jul-24-2016   

I just finished this last night and as always, Anne Azel does not disappoint. What a strange and wonderful twist. I have always been a lover of good sci-fi and women's fiction and it touches my heart when the two genres meet. This one even throws a little suspense and mystery in the mix. - Kelly Aten - Jul-27-2016   

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I absolutely loved this story. It was a more than worthy follow-up too "Natural Causes". - Anonymous - Apr 27th, 2003   

Highly recommend. Excellent story. Wonderful trilogy. Heart wrenching at times. thanks for bringing them through it. I love your characters and the maturity they demonstrated. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Dec-20-2009   

Awesome story. Great job - sassy123 - Jun-04-2011   

A delightful sequel - sarah - Jan-07-2008   

Great sequel :) - Boo - Feb-26-2009   

The turtle stories are absolutely the cutest stories ever. - EC - Feb-27-2009   

i love the paralelsbetween humans and turtles.. - xtra dog - Feb-22-2012   

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLLLL!!!!!!! :) - tara - Sep 12th, 2003   

This is a freak-in hoot! Took balls to post too! - bardy - Sep 15th, 2003   

You read my mind here, just couldn't put it in a hysterical way like you did. ROTFLMHO! - Anonymous - Sep 21st, 2003   

OH GOD! Good thing you have a spew warning here! LOL! When is the next part? - paws - Sep 23rd, 2003   

This made me laugh so hard I pissed my pants! Where do I send the cleaning bill? Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next part! - Kaye's Boi - Sep 23rd, 2003   

Amy (I hope that's not your real name... It will make it too easy for them to find you & serve you court papers), THANK YOU! One question... Did Joe LoDuca do your musical arrangements? BRILLIANT!!! P.S. Don't worry I'll contribute to your defense fund. - Full of Grace - Sep 23rd, 2003   

I have to admit this was brilliant and totally hysterical. I was cackling so much my lover asked if I was planning to lay a dozen eggs soon. LOL Just wonderful being able to laugh. MORE PLEASE! :) - Carol - Sep 24th, 2003   

I wanted to hate this, but I found myself laughing so that blew that right out of the water. Brilliantly done. LOL - Sarah - Sep 24th, 2003   

This was very hysterical and will definitely piss the masses off. :) Way To Go! - Xenaboy - Oct 3rd, 2003   

This was funny, will it ever be finished? - Corn - May-22-2008   

Very very funny . . . i loved it! - Anonymous - Nov-20-2009   

I laughed my ass off. Shame there's no continuation. - Anonymous - Dec-12-2009   

Wonderfully witty story. Can only hope it'll be finished some day. - Anonymous - Dec-29-2010   

Will this ever be finish? It's a hoot. - Debra - Feb-18-2011   

Ok, I read this and it was very amusing. Sad that its not finished. Do you know if the bard will complete the story? - JEMA - Feb-22-2011   

"SPOILER ALERT"!!! This piece takes me back... Dr. Laura and Jerry Falwell who? Ha, nice that they ceased to be relevant. - Copper - Jun-13-2017   

Intriguing tale with a wonderful twist on romance. Highly recommended for the adventuresome readers. Great job DJ. - Shadylady - Oct 18th, 2004   

I wish I could find the Caf? in this story for after reading it, I'd LOVE to just go there. Paris is not my favorite city but I would go just to feel Caf? Angel's atmosphere. Hear the music, sip the coffee and cognac. - MoonLightning - Jan 22nd, 2005   

I really loved everything about this story and would love a sequel to it.The characters are great > Angel is just that. - yin yang - Jun 13th, 2005   

This was a real treat to read.I love strong,mysterious women,international intrigue,sexy assassins.
Wonderful story.
Thanks,Pat - Pat.I. - Jun-09-2010   

Wow! Political intrigue, shady politician, and an assassan with a heart. This was great. Can't wait to read the sequel. - cygirl1 - Dec-07-2010   

What a great story. Very well written. - sassy123 - Jan-04-2011   

great read.. very basic and yet complicated.. loved the fact that angelique didn't speak perfect english.. makes it all the more realistic.. - xtra dog - Nov-30-2011   

I enjoyed this story. It kept a good pace and had some cute moments and a lot of action. Im going to read the next installments. Recommended for one of those days you just want to sit and read on a rainy day. - katie of ohio - Jun-25-2015   

It seems that these two fantastically gifted writers. Have come together onceagain to share with us another what seems to be an interesting.....riviting story.That will keep us on the edge of our seats...til the very end......hopefully itwill turn out to be a long...trilogy? As always I look forward towards theirstories. - Christi - Mar 17th, 2005   

Such a great story I've never, never read before. I enjoyed reading. And I can't wait for the next one. I love the characters. You have to read it! I'm sure you like it!!!Great job!!! More of those stories!!! - Samantha - Apr 4th, 2005   

"Dyki Tantsi" It seems they didn't disappoint me. These two very 'gifted' writershave lived up to their reputation once again. A story so heartfelt,compassionate, loving....well written. Left me for wanting more onthese amazing woman. One willing to reach beyond looks.....patient totouch anothers 'Soul' Wow! Definitely worth reading. Thank you both forallowing us to partake in your zest for putting 'pen' to paper. - Christi - Apr 19th, 2005   

Great story, very entertaining. Well worth reading as long as you overlook the occasional grammatical mistake. - uber goober - May-13-2013   

This series of tales are incredible and I highly recommend reading them. - uber goober - May-10-2011   

okay, this story has me kind of confused.. ****SPOILER ALERT**** why did lex act all surprised when her grandpa told her lester was his longtime friend?? wasn't it lester who told her that in the first place and gave her a box filled with letters?? and what happened with the letters they (lex, amanda and martha) found in the storage room?? - xtra dog - Jan-04-2013   

Amanda and Lex are back again and their family grows in unexpected ways. They definitely have unusual families and if you like family twists, you'll really like this story. - Stacia - Jan-05-2013   

This is an excellent series so far! Looking forward to further installments. - jd - Mar-22-2007   

great story..waiting for the next installment.. - leia - Apr-06-2007   

I have followed the story since the original posting. This is a great tale. Suspense, love, and a firm hand to the backside. I loved it. You will too - Muphassaa - Apr-08-2007   

Excellent story - Anonymous - Jul-15-2008   

Great story could't put it down - Anonymous - Jul-15-2008   

Family life for the warrior and bard. Good story line and excellent new character - Anonymous - Jul-15-2008   

I can't recommend these stories highly enough. They are very well written, completely charming and I have enjoyed reading them very much. I am always happy to see a new one! - Netta - Mar-05-2010   

I am soooooooo happy this series is being finished I absolutely love it. I was worried I would not see this one finished and that would have been a real shame. Its a must read series - Anonymous - Jun-21-2011   

I've fallen in love with the little bird. Enjoying this series very much. - Stardawn - Aug-26-2011   

aw, broken link [Editor's Note: Corrected. 6-4-2011] - Anonymous - Jun-01-2011   

More?? moremoremore!!! - GingerTea - Jun-22-2008   

Can we have more, please. Good stuff. I've been waiting for this update. - brighteyez - Jul-30-2008   

Lovvved, the update. It was too cute. - Brighteyez - Aug-12-2008   

Great story, well-written sentiments unfolds as a measure to the entire spirit of the series I can not wait to read more felicitation !!!!! Hillsys Stalker continues .... french fan ;-)) - Archange - Aug-18-2008   

Yay! More!! Thank you! - GingerTea - Sep-16-2008   

Patiently waiting for an update! Please indulge me! - Jenna - Oct-23-2009   

Good story, but since it's two yearssince last update I have to assume it will never be finished. - Anonymous - Aug-13-2010   

gods you have to continue you cant leave it at that. please!!!!! - gwen - Sep-02-2010   

gods you have to continue you cant leave it at that. please!!!!! - gwen - Sep-02-2010   

Yet another great Xena story that for whatever reason the author doesn't finish. - Anonymous - Nov-15-2010   

Really liked where the sequel was heading. The story was really heating up, all the bad guys lining up to crush our heriones, x/g finally getting a clue. Very sad to see it's been so long since it was updated. I couldn't resist reading it even though it was unfinished, after getting caught up in the first one. Guess we'll never know where the author wanted to take the readers. I have enjoyed reading this x/g classic series. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. - x/g fanatic - Mar-19-2011   

Yet again another great Xena/Gabrielle story without an ending.Disappointing to say the least. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2012   

Amazing. I loved this at Pink Rabbit...so glad that it's been included here. Hopefully more people will be able to enjoy such a great story. Wonderful writer! Everything she writes is great. - Anonymous - May-16-2009   

stayed up late last night reading this one. was worth it! Enjoy the ride. - rleef - May-16-2009   

so glad to see Harper here--she's an amazing writer! this is one of my favorite stories. - Anonymous - May-17-2009   

One of my favorite stories from an excellent author. Her character development is amazing. You can't help but fall in love with Abbie Carmichael even if you haven't seen Law and Order. - Kayla - May-23-2009   

A sweet story with great banter between all the characters. An effortless read that I enjoyed immensely. I would very much recommend this story to even those who are not fans for Law and Order because I enjoyed it despite having seen only half an episode featuring neither character. - Anonymous - May-31-2009   

this was great! The only thing that would make it better is....a sequel. - Anonymous - Jul-15-2010   

Great story, I hope you carry on with it one day. - JettBlk - Jul-28-2010   

Really nice. I loved the pairing of alex and abbie. - october - Mar-28-2015   

This is great! Another story from Cheyne! And this one has illustrations!!! - kay23 - Sep-03-2009   

This story was such an unexpected delight. Knowing how the movie ends, I didn't expect to be drawn into the lives of the characters that Cheyne has created. Cheyne has created a very memorable tale that I highly recommend! - Anonymous - Sep-06-2009   

This is a must read story! This story gives the Little Jack character what the book and movie lacked; substance. Yes it has violence but it's a western about gunfighters and whores. It's a great read. Thanks, Cheyne. - Corky - Oct-09-2009   

This was very well written even the dialect. I enjoyed reading this like all of Cheyne's work. It did leave me a little sad. Such is life... Great work, Cheyne! - Theia - Dec-09-2009   

I loved this story to death.. I haven't seen the movie yet but I think it will be hard to watch. Compared to Cheyne's story!!.....Vivid..heartbreaking,tear jerker,...absolutely ROC and FLAWLESS. PLease read, you won't regret it. Hey Chenye I love you writting. Did I mention that yet??:)
- vampireslayer2 - Mar-23-2010   

yes... make sure you read this story. - laurie - Jun-07-2010   

It was bittersweet for me. Bittersweet fics usually aren't my cup of tea, but this was wrten so wonderfully and the ending was done so greatly, that I would indefinetly recomend this fic. - Anonymous - Jul-05-2010   

This is such a great story, and such a fun take on the Little Jack character. I LOVED Little Jack in Ghost Town and there just wasn't enough of her!!! Plus, with a certain crystal eyed prostitute, my uber-heart just skipped beat after beat. AWESOME!!!!! - twinsparadox - Jan-03-2011   

wow.. the talent this author possesses just leaves me stunned.. i haven't seen the movie or read the book, but i'm guessing that this story only creates more depth to the character of little jack.. highly recommended story!! - xtra dog - Mar-30-2012   

Awesome story. I definitely recommend it. - Hoqoq - Dec-07-2009   

A great romance! I love Helena and Barbara and this story shows how right they are together, regardless of the circumstance or time. I hope to see more BoP from this author.

- Barbaralover - Feb-08-2010   

i really love this story. there's not a lot of BoP out there and this is one of the best. - carinjo - Mar-02-2010   

A fun story! I really enjoyed this romance. - LynnR - Apr-02-2010   

Another masterpiece by Enginerd. Excellent work, and as to be expected from Enginerd, a well crafted tale.

Excellent writer, and I just noticed she had a sequel up to A Fine Line, one of my favorite Voyager fics :). Please keep writing, Engie, you are *wonderful*! - Aerows - May-29-2010   

I LOVED this story! It has everthing you would want in a BoP fic. - mokita - Aug-10-2010   

working link: http://www.enginerd.info/Fiction/miscellaneous/BOP/JAMOT/jamotcover.htm [Editor's Note: Corrected. 8-15-2010]

- Anonymous - Aug-15-2010   

Very good story, one of the best I've read. It's hard to spoil he premise, but you're in for a nice ride. - NGBlue - Sep-10-2010   

Another great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Mar-03-2011   

Really enjoyed the looong story. Got to see some batgirl action too! - Oracle46 - Oct-19-2011   

YESSSSS!!! Fantastic read, Brice is fun and cute. Love it :) Holding my breath for next part - Anonymous - Jul-21-2010   

I love these! I wish they were longer because I enjoy them so much. Can't wait for the Fourth Adventure. Write On! Silverwriter01. - juliemania - Jul-22-2010   

AWESOMENESS!!!!! So I wake up this morning and what do I find? The next installment in one of my favorite series! I was so excited to learn what was happening with Brice and yes, my bus..err her bus, I almost didn't go to work. Thank you for continuing to bring life to your wonderful characters, I love how Brice's and Noel's friendship has evolved. Greer is certainly proving to be quite the superhero and so much more. I anxiously look forward to what happens next, what did Duster add?!?! Excellent cliffhanger! Thanks again :D - Chess - Jul-22-2010   

Can't wait for the next one! - Anonymous - Jul-24-2010   

Can't get enough of this series! - Datajunkie - Aug-03-2010   

Great! Can't wait for the next, hurry or I might break the F5 button. - Anonymous - Aug-12-2010   

Nooooo! Don't stop there! Excellent read as always and I can't (and I really really mean CAN'T) wait to read the next installment in this excellent series. Brice's mom is hilarious and I adored the shopping parts. Excessive and awesome and entirely fitting for the characters. Please PLEASE continue soon. Loved it! - Kerr - Aug-19-2010   

Wow, not often I leave comments, but I like this series a lot and hope it will be continued. - Dracotoni - Aug-25-2010   

Wow, This is a gripping read from start to finish. I look forward to reading more from this author. - Rocky - May-28-2011   

Disturbing - Anonymous - May-29-2011   

Really amazing read... Good job and keep it up! - Anonymous - May-29-2011   

wow. - Anonymous - May-29-2011   

...brutal but talented writer. i like it at least it's something different. the rest of the bards should read it. Valerie Ross please write more !! - umie - May-31-2011   

The stuff of nightmares but also hope... an excellent, and wothwhile read, but not for the faint hearted.. - Anfor - Jun-04-2011   

I'm going to recommend this, as the last time I was that morbidly fascinated was at the end of the book "Gerald's Game" Its got a major ick factor, but a good solid read. - AC - Jun-04-2011   

gory... morbid... awesome! and yes a part of it is sort of reminiscent of stephen king's gerald's game. only this story's plot, for me, has more oomph. to those who like stephen king's morbidly descriptive writing, read this. you wont regret it. - ann o'nymous - Jun-05-2011   

I usually don't like stories with gore and the like, but I gotta say I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the writing was excellent! Recommend this 100% - Anonymous - Jun-06-2011   

wow... that was the first word to come to mind at the end of the story. Literate, smart, engrossing -- and yes very disturbing -- story that nevertheless has the timeless idea of love conquering all. Highly recommend, but not for the squeamish. - squinty - Jun-10-2011   

WOW, Okay. How can you describe a story that horrifies you and grips you at the same time. WOW, jus wow. I love/hate/love this story. Because..... well just read it and you'll see but be warned its not an easy/lite read. - F. - Jun-10-2011   

dark? yep, it sure is, but it is also well done and heartfelt. - Anonymous - Jun-18-2011   

That was intense. Great job - sassy123 - Jul-02-2011   

Ms Ross has a talent to hold you attention even with a dark story such as this. - Intl Warrior - Jul-31-2011   

Awesome, gut wrenching in places but so worth it. Take the time to read this. You seriously won't be disappointed. Be warned it's not for the faint hearted. Had me in tears. Thanks for a great read that really played with my emotions. Its been a while since that has happened. Well done - Dragongrrl - Sep-09-2011   

Awesome writing. Not for the faint of heart but absolutely riveting. Valerie, I wait with baited breath for your next one!!! Brava!!! - Lena - Oct-07-2011   

Awesome writing. Not for the faint of heart but absolutely riveting. Valerie, I wait with baited breath for your next one!!! Brava!!! - Lena - Oct-07-2011   

Definately don't read while eating spaghetti. Edge of your seat, truly gripping story. - Wheezie - Jan-21-2012   

It was well written and gripping, but the story line was rushed. Their love sort came from nowhere and was therefore a bit unbelievable. It was a good story though, kept me reading. - Anonymous - Apr-30-2012   

Just read for the second time and enjoyed as much as the first. I hope to see more from this author. - hollyhwrites - Sep-07-2012   

One of the best stories I have ever read. A very powerful read provoking inmense emotion. Highly recommended. - Niyah - Jan-09-2013   

Wow...Just Wow! - Tracey - Jan-09-2013   

One of the best, if not the best, crime fictions on the internet. The words and story flow so smoothly, the darkness surrounds the reader like a favorite blanket. Exceptionally well done!! - Stacia - Jan-11-2013   

This is one of the creepiest stories I have ever read but keep going back again and again. It is well written and a very good read. - Anonymous - Nov-22-2013   

Very dark and disturbing. However, one of the best stories I've read. - ~M - Nov-23-2013   

One of the best unpublished stories I have ever read. I try to re-read this story once a year since 2011. And after 5 readings I still love it every time. - M.F. - Dec-31-2015   

Bit dark for me but well done - SD - Jun-21-2016   

This is my second read and I am still in awe of the work. Truly an impressive tale. Scared the shit out of me because of the truth of it. I believe stories like this should be told more often; they remind us to keep alert and aware. Thanks and keep up the great work. - soopi - Apr-15-2018   

Absolutely loved this series. Filled with so much emotion I couldn't help but cry during some parts throughout the stories written so far. Look forward to reading more about these characters in the future. Excellently written. - Niyah - Jan-14-2013   

I have greatly enjoyed this entire series. Looking forward to the next. Highly recommended. - colorado fan - Jan-20-2013   

this series deserves to be a novel. each part has a bit of everything - mystery, romance, family, action, a bit of comedy too at times.....i'd love to see more of CJ & Kate.(and the wonderful set of supporting characters)
- Anonymous - Feb-11-2013   

Next instalment here http://marshallcarson.wordpress.com - Anonymous - Aug-08-2013   

OMG! This short story was so sweet! Love this series! Off to the author's website to read the rest... come on, Athenaeum... update!!!! - Jenn - Aug-12-2013   

I was looking for short stories and came across this. Now I HAVE to go start the entire series, Great stuff. - Ziggyfic3 - Aug-13-2013   

This series continues at http://marshallcarson.wordpress.com
Go! Go now! ;) - Anonymous - Feb-21-2014   

i agree with jenn's comment.. it is time to update.. the author has an entire second season out.. - xtra dog - Feb-21-2014   

Sweet as pie! Love this series. I'm heading to the author's website to continue. Wish I could review them here, tho... :) - Jonah3 - May-10-2014   

Loved this so much love in this story xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Loved this so much love in this story xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Read on at http://www.marshallcarson.wordpress.com - Anonymous - Oct-21-2015   

I loved this! Fantastic dialogue from 2 sharp, witty, well matched characters.. - Anonymous - Jul-01-2013   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jul-19-2014   

The synopsis is dead-on. This story had everything! DJWP weaves one heck of a tale. - Anonymous - Feb 22nd, 2004   

This was an incredible story. I loved it. Couldn't put it down. I recommend anything by DJWP - one of the great classic Xena bards. Check all her stuff out. You won't be disappointed. All her work is original and captivating. - Karon Reiter - Jan 24th, 2005   

Phenomenal story. This is one of the great ones! - -Aerows- - Aug 14th, 2005   

Whoa! Now that's one memorable story with a real hot spice to it.. - XS-DARKLORD - Feb-08-2009   

The Best - Little - Mar-09-2009   

It's always nice to find a hidden treasure of well-written classic XWP - loved the story, and love to see the classics done with skill and style ... thanks dj! - Anonymous - Nov-11-2009   

Take the time to read this one. Well written, excellent storyline, and I'm very glad I stumbled across it. Yup, happy indeed. - MoSeS - Jun-03-2010   

Absolutely loved the story. But it's to be expected from a talent like DJWP. She was one of the first bards I came across and a big reason I'm still a huge fan of XWP fanfiction. - rp_michaud - Mar-30-2011   

What a great story, Job well done - sassy123 - May-25-2012   

That was one incredibly great story.This author is amazingly talented and crafts an unbelievably well rounded tale that draws you in and takes you on a wonderfully emotional ride. - ubergoober - Jun-14-2012   

very well written. Really impressive. Lively, funny, thrilling. The reader really feels like being in Pompei with the girls. You have great talent. - Anonymous - Oct-06-2013   

I truly enjoy the way it was written! - Anonymous - Mar-05-2015   

really loved this story. this woman knows her way around a sex scene and manages to avoid alot of the judgements some fall into. well done! - feral - Sep-02-2006   

Please do yourself a favor and read this. In all of fandom these two characters are in my top five favorites. SX Meagher is a phenominal writer and weaves a tale that I find hard to put down. PLEASE READ. - robinnight - Sep-13-2006   

Loved it, SX rights some of the best stories out there. Lots of love, angst, sex :P And each story is slightly different, rather than following the same theme as other authors tend to do. - Reese - Oct-29-2006   

One of my favourite stories to read.....love every piece of it, a sexy well written story - wolfie - Dec-09-2006   

Love the older gal, younger gal dynamic. Wonderful story with great storyline. SX Meagher is one of the best creative writers out there in the Xenaverse. Her stories are always worth a "stay up all night" read. This is no exception! - Cassiopeia - Dec-25-2006   

I've read this story numerous times, but I continue to seek it out when I'm in need of a solid, well-written, fully developed, romantic piece of fiction. Brava! - little bear - Oct-03-2007   

This story deserves all the praise it's gotten--and more. Great writing, compelling characters--but you don't expect anything less from SXM, do you? - micah6 - Oct-22-2007   

Best, funniest SXM story of them all - and that's really saying something!! - chatham23 - Nov-23-2007   

i would just like to say a heartfelt thank you there are very few stories i can read again and again but this is one of many you have written.you should be commended truely great storytelling - Anonymous - Jan-22-2008   

Read it several times and still one of my all time favourite stories - Anonymous - Feb-09-2008   

Wow truly amazing reads! I loved every second and couldn't leave my computer until I finished! - Jennifer Lee - May-24-2008   

A wonderful love story... really beautiful - Manuela - Sep-08-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** THIS HAS TO MUCH REFERENCE TO M/F SEX IN IT. And some of it is very explicit such as when the one is talking about how she eventually enjoyed oral sex with her husband. This is not safe for a gay woman to read. Too bad because it had some real good possiblities. - Jenni - Sep-11-2008   

The first time I read this story, I was turned off by the heavy straight turned gay theme. I generally don't like that stuff. But, if you read it with an open mind, you will absolutely LOVE this story. I adore SXM as an author, and all of her writing is excellent! - Anonymous - Sep-12-2008   

i followed this story as it was being written and i must say that i absolutely loved every minute of it. the author took you on a journey of self exploration and awakening. it brings tears to the eyes and warmth to the soul as you follow two women on a wonderful, fearful, exciting journey to a new love. any person that fears M/F sex does this story a great injustice by not looking beyond that minor portion and embracing the true meaning behind this wonderful story. well worth the time to enjoy. - Anonymous - Sep-17-2008   

really enjoyed this story. Found it on Academy of Bards. - rleef - Mar-07-2009   

I read this book a couple of years ago and loved it so much that it's going on vacation with me for another read. I love SX Meagher's writing and you will too! - wink - Mar-11-2009   

brilliant story...I will be keeping it as one of my favs to go back to...and not just for the hot sex scenes..lol - Lea Ann - Mar-16-2009   

Loved it, Loved it, Loved it!!! - Redblaze18 - Apr-03-2009   

Awesome, this is my favourite story on this web site and beleive me when I say I've read a few. - Chris - Jul-25-2009   

one of my fav stories - Anonymous - Aug-01-2009   

Don't pay any attention to other reviewers who complain about relationships in the story that happen to be other-than-lesbian. Just like real life, this story has people and relationships that are not all one kind, not all one way. The characters spend most of the story searching their hearts in the face of change that is often confusing and scary to them, and there's nothing unfathomable or repulsive in that. This story is through and through a love story between two women, but more than that it's about hope, and grief, and loyalty, and carrying your family through the worst things you can imagine. It's also about blossoming love, even when and where it's at its most unexpected. If you're searching for a long, well-written, engrossing read about falling in love again for the very first time, give this story a try. - S. - Dec-23-2009   

truly amazing!!!! I just need to read this till the end.....impressive.... - Anonymous - Jan-05-2010   

DO pay attention to what others have said about the het relationships in this fic! If you don't want explicit M/F sex in your femslash and/or Xena fic, this fic (and SX Meagher's other fics) probably isn't for you. - Anonymous - Jan-15-2010   

this story is one of her best and certainly worth reading. don't let other people's scare tactics (explicit het sex warnings? come on, we're all adults here), scare you away. SX is a true wordsmith. - Anonymous - Jan-27-2010   

Very lovely love (yes, lesbian) story and the first I've read of this wonderful author. I am so glad to have found this gem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I have to go back and read her other stories now. Read this one. Truly a GREAT read. - x - Mar-17-2010   

Wonderful story. The characters were so real and so well done... it was just amazing. Definitively worth reading. - Stardawn - Jun-15-2010   

absolutely loved this couldn't put it down. - lumor - Jun-26-2010   

Wow... Can't find my words after reading this story. That I love it is an understatement. The characters have depth and maturity, the situations they find themselves in look truly realistic. Nothing's just black or white, there are many shades of grey that make this story so compelling. And everything is beautifully written, up to the spicy scenes! Thank you for such a gem. - Elise - Oct-31-2010   

I've read this story .... several times.
I'll read again and again, it's that good.
If you haven't read it yet, what the hell are you waiting
for?! - Mickey - Oct-31-2010   

Couldn't stop reading it. Absolutely beautiful story. - hit.dana - Nov-05-2010   

A well written romance novel that captures and holds your attention by posing real life circumstances with pliable solutions. The love shared between Abby and Clancy is riviting and stimulating. A highly recommended read. ^5 - mine2give2u - Dec-02-2010   

a very sweet story... - bluebutterfly - Dec-08-2010   

oh my goodness...what a beautiful story...
- bluebutterfly - Dec-19-2010   

This is a wonderful read. Funny, sad & touching. I loved it. - Lyn B - Jan-21-2011   

A brilliant story. - Silver - Apr-10-2011   

This is a great story. The characters are well-developed and the love stories (both of them) are down-to-earth and very...human. There's something, that I think, we can all relate to in this story. Well done. - c - Apr-29-2011   

A wonderful romance of two women from different backgrounds and ages. I enjoyed this story! - Ricky - Jun-18-2013   

Yeah more B-7! This is shaping into another great story by H.W. Seven is less rote and Harry isn't insipid; what a nice change.
I'm glad H.W. is writing this one for herself; she has wonderful instincts. Keep it coming... - Kali - Feb-03-2009   

This is HOTTTTT........I hear the shower calling my name....Great story. - Anonymous - Feb-08-2009   

Aaarrrggghhh!!! Please post more chapters. This is getting to be so exciting! H.W. does it again and puts a twist into a common plot line that makes it better.

- L'Nara - Feb-08-2009   

great so far
fantastic read highly recomended - Anonymous - Feb-09-2009   

WOW! Gonna need another shower! Looking forward to the rest of this story. - Dusty - Feb-09-2009   

LOVE this story so far.I check back daily for the new updates,and cant wait to see where you go with it. - On the edge of my seat - Feb-15-2009   

This is a great epic! Definitely a must read. - L'Nara - Mar-04-2009   

This is a must read for anyone!
Can't wait for more. - Kris - Mar-04-2009   

If only this could become a real movie or mini series. - Anonymous - Mar-05-2009   

fantastic - Anonymous - Mar-06-2009   

It's gooooood and hot.
It long but a must read.

- DalizC - Mar-08-2009   

Awesome, awesome, awesome work and read.Ilove this author works. Did i tell you, they are awesome, awesome, awesomw. WHAT A WORD AND DESCRPTION. let me tell you, awesome - xenamary - Mar-08-2009   

An interesting epic looking at the borg through the eyes of Seven and b'elanna.
I love this story, very well written by a master of words.
xxx - ChrissyTaff - Jul-21-2009   

Wow, my socks have just been knocked off! This is truly perfection! No matter what your usual preference is to Voyager pairings ...... YOU MUST READ THIS STORY!
Please may we have some more! i'd love to see how Janeway fares after getting home and possibly a plot around Ms Borg.
HW if your reading this...thanks for a wonderfull story. x - Chrissytaff - Jul-24-2009   

*SPOILER*
Truly, I needed a cold shower on occasion while reading this. A wonderful story by H.W. that shows an alternative to the popular 'save Seven from the Borg' story. I especially enjoyed seeing the transformation of the Collective from an unfeeling machine, to a unified consciousness that worries over the First Family. - xivren - Dec-07-2009   

This Story was great. Definitely hot in places, but it still had an excellent plot. Even though it was long, I was sad when it ended. I definitely recommend this story. - Anonymous - Dec-10-2009   

I don't even really read ST fanfic...but I just had to have a go when I saw the other recs. This story is great...great writer, great plot, hot scenes....and it's long enough to really get into the characters. I'm not even finished with it yet and I haven't gotten bored. Thanks for the read, it's passed my time at work over the holiday. - LeaAnn - Dec-31-2009   

I'm finally done and I gotta give the writer virtual appaluse.& and standing ovation. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. I'm a ST fanfic convert. - LeaAnn - Jan-04-2010   

This is a great story and I love the growth you can see in the characters as the story progresses. I would also like to see other stories with the minor characters that were introduced. Awesome story and a really great job! - Shelley - Mar-05-2010   

If you are looking for a really good, epic story - this one is great. I was not a Star Trek fan and didn't know the characters, but - I love Sci-Fi. This is a very sexy tale. - Anonymous - Jun-23-2010   

Started reading this, at 10 00 am, finished at 8 00 pm, whole day has flashed by, what a terrific fic - Mjf - Aug-14-2010   

One of if not the best Torres/Seven story I've ever read. I would love to see more as well written and thought as this story.
- Anonymous - Feb-10-2012   

Loved, loved, loved it.

Authors email is invalid. I tried to send kudos but was bounced back. - Wheezie - Dec-12-2013   

Such a great read! I could expand, but why should I when i know you'll be hooked on chapter 1? Read it! - Aahi - Aug-07-2017   

This is where it all begins. Is there anybody left who doesn't know this series? If you don't, this story begins not long after the events depicted in Destiny and The Quest. Missy's depictions of Xena and Gabrielle are so well written and fleshed out, that it is her characterizations that I see as canon. Make sure you have a comfortable chair before you start this story, because the whole series flows from one story to the next. - Michelle - Feb-12-2009   

This is the first fanfiction story I ever read, and it's one that I keep coming back to. I love the characterization and the world created within this series. - BardGirl - Mar-20-2009   

Melissa Good is one of my all time favorite writers. Love everything she does. The soulmate series is truly engaging. Absolutely THE BEST. Guaranteed to capture your imagination. I've spent many hours with these characters. Love and adore them. - Anonymous - Sep-16-2009   

you captured what i always thought was love at first sight and fought hard to allow to blossom. wonderfully written and wonderfully romantic - strange1 - Aug-01-2013   

I have read this series multiple times since being introduced to it by my late husband(Draco). Each time it's like I'm reading it for the first time b/c I find things that even though I read previously just jumped out at me while reading it again. - Lysia - Feb-12-2015   

This has got to be one of the funniests XWP tales ever. This bard has sure got a way with words. Dont miss it!!!! - icelover - Jul-29-2008   

Funny and true to character story. Just discovered this bard and love her work so far. XWP writers are like gold and she shines! - kjviking - Mar-28-2009   

That really cracked me up. Give it a read if you're in the mood to laugh. :) - Anonymous - Jan-04-2011   

this story is hilarious.. the author not only shows that she has a profound insight in the characters, but she can also play them like a violin.. two thumbs up! - xtra dog - Nov-11-2011   

This was a awesome story. One of the best XWP out there. You cant go wrong in reading this, it is wonderfully written. This writer is right on!! - icelover - Jul-28-2008   

I only wish it was a little longer. There are stories that just feel right, still feel true to the characters and their fundamental stories, no matter how different the circumstances or plot. This series is one of those stories that's just right. - Anonymous - Aug-04-2010   

Very good story with an absolutely endearing Gabrielle. I just wish their love was more explicit. - Anonymous - Oct-12-2010   

Very good story and hope there is more to come.. - Anonymous - Jan-30-2011   

Job well done. One of my favorite bards. - sassy123 - Feb-07-2011   

loved the sequel more than the first story.. it had a lot more depth to it.. really loved the intelligence gabby displayed, the growing connection and the absolutely hilarious ending.. - xtra dog - Nov-10-2011   

Great job. Another great story - sassy123 - Jan-31-2013   

One of my favorite stories! - Samantha - Jan-14-2015   

I loved this! Clever, great dialogue,well thought out. Excellent read! - Anonymous - Aug-06-2016   

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Xepher? Guess those "X" names are kinda hard to come by, huh? Once I got past that, and the fact that parts of it are REALLY gory, I quite enjoyed it. - Mich - Sep 14th, 2002   

I agree, there is gore galore but I like a story with grit so I was interested right away. I just read it in it's entirety, it's simply wonderful. I can see a Bone Collector 2 with Angelina here ... or is that wishful thinking? It would be a shame if you bypassed it simply because the graphic scenes may disturb you for it's got one of my highest ticks of approval. - Corbeau's Voyager - Dec 1st, 2003   

GREAT STORY!! READ IT!!! Alittle gory, but if you're like me and like that kinda stuff, its a keeper. Larisa, you rock! - Anonymous - Jul 26th, 2005   

This is my favorite Larisa story of all time...OMG..LOVE IT...Xepher and Bri rock, but I love the captain, they're always embarassing him HAHAHA...thanks Larisa..I've re-read this too many times now.....and it just gets better. - Anonymous - Dec 11th, 2005   

THis was soooooo SICK!!! I loved it... almost made me want to go to med school. lol - sumdumbbytch - Feb-08-2007   

Sick, twisted and a good ride. No worse than CSI, as far as gore, and the interaction between the girls is priceless. - Amy - Mar-30-2007   

Loved this series and would love to read more from Xe and Brian. I thought the characterizations were great and I loved the banter between the two characters. I also like it when uber G has some spunk and grit to her. - Anonymous - Apr-01-2009   

Would love to see a fourth chapter. Fantastic, spunky, gory and better than CSI - Anonymous - Apr-14-2009   

AWESOME series of stories - a great whodunit!!!! - Traveller - Aug-25-2010   

This series will always be my favorite by Larisa. I have come back may times. Good thing my laptop has insurance. I have read and re-read this story and I still forget not to drink when I am reading. Xe and Brie are by far the best set of characters besides the real deal that I have read. Now, we jjust need to see them with kids!! could you just imagine????? - cpo - Oct-08-2010   

Part one was a laugh a minute and the drama was great - Anonymous - Dec-10-2011   

Part two was as good or even better than part one. - Anonymous - Dec-10-2011   

This is Larisa's most funny story by far for me. Do NOT drink when reading it. This story has everything - humor, sex, gore, humor, good friends/family and of course more humor. Would love to see another sequel with these wild women. - Stacia - Oct-25-2012   

These are strong tough ladies, and I wish this author would write more of them. - loli - Dec-15-2015   

The Growing is one of my favorite ongoing stories. Set in the future, it tells of a fight for survival. It is an expert blend of sci-fi and drama. Published weekly, I have grown to care for the characters and what happens to them. There is even a wonderful dog, Asimov. This is great storytelling and I always look forward to the next chapter with anticipation. - Carole H - Jul 27th, 2003   

A story of EPIC proportions, the Growing will keep you hooked till the last drop. I've been hooked since the beginning, and have gotten to know the characters and to feel for them. If you haven't read it, I recommend that you do. A battle huge battle is in the making, and if you start now, you'll be able to read it with everyone else. Ladies, thank you for such a great story! - Katia N. Ruiz - Oct 30th, 2003   

What a great story. I've read this story 3 times now. Wondering if there was a sequel in the works yet?? - Bezza - Jun-26-2006   

Terrific reading! bought the book - LOVED the book! thank you, bards! - Kati - Jul-03-2006   

This is one of the best written and interesting stories that I've read. I highly recommend this to anyone who reads beyond "potty" books. - Anonymous - Sep-04-2006   

Great great great great great et cetera book. Read it. Now. That's all. - Arassar - Mar-09-2007   

I read this story a second time and it was just as good as the first. DO NOT MISS THIS ONE. - Olivia - Mar-11-2007   

I loved this story. - Netta - Mar-13-2007   

Without a doubt, this is one of the best stories on the web. I loved it so much, I had to have the print version. Don't let the length hold you back because once you start, you won't want it to end. Fabulous collaboration of two wonderful writers. - calabria - Mar-14-2007   

This a great book. I couldn't put it down. This trio has outdone itself. Sequel PLEEEEEEESE - Anonymous - Apr-09-2007   

What a story, a masterpiece!! It brings to mind 'The Stand' by Stephen King. It's very long but well worth your time. Bravo, bravo!! - Bijou - Apr-21-2007   

This is a terrific story that really deserves the sequell that was mentioned! - Pat - Oct-10-2007   

Growing is an extremely well written story by two authors I cannot praise enough!!! Highly imaginative with well developed characters who wind their away around your heart so that by the end you simply do not want to let them go. And I simply must thank the authors for making us wait awhile before bringing the two characters together...how I love a slow progression of dawning love rather than two characters drooling over each other and sharing the sheets within a day of meeting each other. Thank you! - JC - Jan-03-2008   

wow!!!! this i highly recommend to anyone who is a dying fan of xena fanfics. - Anonymous - Jan-30-2008   

This is one story that will hav eyou missing hours of eleep and not care. Not only have i read it twice i own the book.
And am waiting for the second. - F_L_J - Feb-05-2008   

Excellent excellent story - read it! - Anonymous - Feb-06-2008   

This is such a GREAT story, i've read the book two times. This is a story that will keep it's residence in the back of your mind. - Callisto - Feb-11-2008   

i thought long and hard about what to say when recommending this book. I am giving up 3days after finishing it to spend my time going over my favourite bits, of which there are plenty. Heed this advice though: don't rush through it, it is an Epic and will take time, so you might as well enjoy the journey and find your own favourite bits. - carinjo - Feb-14-2008   

I have read a number of fan fic stories but this is the first one I felt I had to write a recommendation about. While I am not typically drawn to sci-fi type stories I gave this one a shot and wow was I amazed. I could not stop reading it and now I have ordered the book. Loved every minute of this story and truly hope there is a sequel out there somewhere. - pntgrl - Feb-17-2008   

One of my favorite sci fi stories - Anon - Feb-21-2008   

Absolutely BRILLIANT!!! Can we get more from this amazingly talented duo?! I am now ordering the published copy... - Xeener - Mar-01-2008   

This was soooooo good that I bought the book... I'd really love to see a sequel someday... It's one I read over and over and over. One of my all time favorites. :) - Akiela Xal - Mar-09-2008   

Probably one of the stories I most return to over the years. Could there be a sequel? Should there be? This would be hard to top....but these three authors may be up to the challenge, if anyone is. - Dusty - Apr-05-2008   

This is an epic worth sitting down and reading. So many twists and turns I'm surprised I'm not a pretzel. I would really like to see a sequel to this. There are so many things I want to know about like how does Dakota's mom react to her bringing Kirsten home and did Manny and Tacoma get to Maggie in time? What kind of trials will our girls go through in rebuilding the world? Please please please write a sequel to this!! - Anonymous - Oct-27-2008   

I LOVED this story...and I've read many on these boards...this one HIGHLY recommended. SEQUEL PLEASE PLEASE PLLLLLEEAASSEE!! - Lea Ann - Dec-31-2008   

I absolutely loved this story. I could not put it down!! Sequel please!!!! - Chakram Girl - Mar-15-2009   

wow! im reading chapter 7 now and let me tell you, it blows my mind off!!! i get excited just reading it. wondering what would happen next. it doesn't make me bored. not even once, and to think im only at chapter 7. whew!! heheh.. just stopped to type in my fresh excitement. heheh... be back in a few chapters! - rec - Apr-29-2009   

Completely mind blowing story! But the link appears to be broken. Was in the middle of Chapter 22 when it decided to quit! Please pretty please fix it! I NEED to continue reading about these amazing characters! Zelda - Anonymous - May-04-2009   

This story is freaking awesome! it has great characters and storyline, so why are you still reading this? GO READ IT! - ethne - May-05-2009   

I LOVE this book!! I've read it twice & still get chills! I'm crossing my fingers for a sequel! - T-Town Heather - May-08-2009   

An amazing read! I'm waiting for the sequel! For anyone who is intimidated by the length of the story...fear not because the time you spend reading this will be far worth the effort. - Yuri - May-19-2009   

Although the story has some substance&. Digging into the context it was tiring to get to the end. Or does it ever end!! - KT - May-21-2009   

This is one of the four finest books I've ever read!! The other three are also by Susanne M. Beck (Redemption, Retribution, Restitution). I eagerly await future writings by her. - Tara - Jun-04-2009   

I was totally blown away the 1st time I read this book about a year ago. My first love is sci-fi and this book has it nailed down. On the 2nd read, I concentrated on characters, the state of that world after the up-rising, very interesting by the way. I hope there is a sequel. The romance aspect is great!!! - Alice - Dec-29-2009   

I've never read sci-fi but this one is really mind blowing. - Diana - Mar-09-2010   

Just Brilliant!!!! mind blowing.....Must read - Lucian - Mar-15-2010   

What a GREAT read. Wonderful. Highly recommended !! You are truly gifted authors. Will there be more to come for Kirsten and Dakota? - Anonymous - Apr-27-2010   

This is so good, when you start reading make sure you don't have anything else to do until you finish. I so hope there is a sequel. - MoSeS - Jun-14-2010   

i am speechless. wow! truly epic. i wouldn't mind for a sequel. i'd imagine it will be another adventure . ~cheers! STAMP OF APPROVAL HERE! - *Reader - Nov-06-2010   

I bought this book four years ago before I even discovered online fanfiction. I was amazed at the book at it remains one of my favourites to this day. At least once a year I undertake the pleasure of re-reading this lengthy tome from cover to cover and each year the suspense eats away at me even though I know the outcome.

I do wish four years ago I'd know about Susanne Beck, T Novan or Okasha as I would have surely been a fan for life as I am. I've not read the online version of this but I wanted to rate this book as some of the best fiction I've ever read! - Lesley - Jan-06-2011   

Excellent story, would love to read a sequel. - Anonymous - Jan-25-2011   

Another incredible story by some of my favorite authors. I highly recommend it to anyone who's up for riveting storytelling and great characters. - Baraka - Jul-03-2011   

Wow, what a story! It has something for everyone and is one heck of a tale. The authors do a fantastic job of making each and every main character (and there are a lot of them) interesting, loveable in their own ways and real. The romance portion of this story was hard for me to believe and I'm still trying to wrap my head around why it was written the way it was. But perhaps that is part of the mystery of the story itself. Great way to spend a couple of afternoons. - Stacia - Aug-14-2014   

Outstanding plot, charactors, so much in this story it is unbelievable and so well but together. Classic Xena at its best. If you enjoy romance, Amazons, battles, Warlords, and one cute Baby to add to the fun this is the story for you. - Daydreams - Dec 31st, 2002   

This story is absolutely wonderful. The author really brings Xena and Gabrielle to life, flaws and all. I have read all the stories in the 'Journey Of Soulmates' series, and this is a must read for all classic Xena fans. It has just about EVERYTHING in there, and having just finished it, I have to say it blew me away! - Ang - Dec 15th, 2004   

Anything by Melissa is not just Good it is the Best!! Dark Comes The Morning gets my highest praise!!! - JC - Jul-22-2007   

Oustanding entry in an outstanding series. Don't believe the page count listed here, though. This epic novel is way longer than 300 pages. Give yourself some time to get through this one, cause once you start, you won't want to put it down. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2008   

Miss Good is truly a master at creating battle scenes. this entry is not to be missed. I really enjoyed the Amazon mix. As long as this story was, I was at a lost when it ended. Spectacular. - slotfever - Jul-18-2008   

It's definitely my favourite so far. I was overwhelmed with the previous parts - too many 'smirks', 'grins' and 'chuckles', too much cuddling and 'mushy stuff'. But this one is really, really good, and I'm so glad that M. Good did not give up on the idea of an evil stone, it was my favourite plot in all of the stories. This one restored my faith in the series, just when I started considering giving up reading it. So - good job. - A. - Oct-22-2013   

Just finished reading this wonderful story, and hope J.A. Bard is planning a sequel ! - gail - Sep 4th, 2004   

just finished but didn't want it to end...can't wait for the sequel.. - dodie - Sep 14th, 2004   

This is a great story! Enjoyed this one very much. I hope for a sequel soon. - L'Nara - Oct 13th, 2004   

Marvelous! If you like intrigue and romance mixed with the "High Life" of the Entertainment industry in a futuristic setting, then this is the story for you! This tale is well-crafted, the plot-line well thought out and the descriptive prose puts the reader right in the middle of the action. Thanks for a thrilling read, JA -- where's the sequel??? - Therese - Jan 2nd, 2006   

I do not recommend this story for anyone that wants to get to sleep on time. Once I started this story, I had a hard time pulling myself away to get some sleep. This story had drama, intrigue and passion. It was well written and the plot was not predictable. I cannot wait to read the sequel. - Gabsfan - Jan 26th, 2006   

Great story but it really needs a sequel. The end was very abrupt and rushed. I still have a lot of questions. - Anonymous - Apr-11-2007   

Awesome story! Just want a sequel! :oP - kaysy_1994 - Apr-22-2007   

Great story. I stayed up late to read this. Just couldn't stop. - Linda aka cygirl1 - Dec-05-2007   

fantastic
wonderfully wrote - Anonymous - Dec-10-2007   

enjoyed this SciFi very much. Good characters. But I do have some unanswered questions...so on to the sequel. - rleef - Jan-25-2009   

Wonderful story. Highly recommended. This is a wonderful mystery story with lots of intrigue, twists and turns. Kept me engaged until the very end. Now off to the next installment. Will Lonnie and Kali find their way back to each other - I have to know. - Anonymous - Jun-01-2010   

Whoa! This is a fantastic sci-fi story that has intrigue, mystery, spying,white water rafting, climbing, hiking, running and superb dancing! And the characters and future technology are second to none. I very much enjoyed this story. And, there's more--a sequel! Thank you, J.A. Bard for sharing your imagination and The Atheneaum for giving it a home! - Teresa - Aug-12-2013   

All I can say is that was one tremendous tale. Amazons, X&G, and Wonder Woman all bound up in a terrific novel that kept me from doing yard work, house work, and even sleep this weekend. Excellent, my highest recommendations for this story. - JS Stephens - Aug-20-2006   

I couldn't stop reading this. I would have read it straight through if a little thing called work hadn't interfered. This story was fascinating and well written with a terrific plot. I highly recommend it to everyone. But don't start it unless you have alot of available time because you will not want to stop reading. - Reita Lawrence - Feb-27-2007   

WOW!!! Great story - once I started reading - I couldn't turn away from the screen, until I finished (@3a.m.) I hope "D" will consider a sequal, a couple of years after this story ended ... - keysstillwishing - May-08-2007   

Well done, this story was crafted very nicely. I enjoyed it immensely. I could not put it down. - juliemania - Jul-28-2008   

Fantastic story!! - Maxine - Aug-02-2008   

D,you are soooooooooooooooooooooooooo good at wtiting these stories!! I am in total awe of your talent. Please add more to your lists. I am trying to read all your stories. You have such a creative mind. Your stories are amazing. I really love this one, and Blood Bond. - ttlle - Sep-12-2008   

Soooooo brilliant!!!! - JettBlk - Dec-05-2010   

This story is phenomenal!! It is truly amazing how you have managed to weave all of these various characters into one overall fabric that completely ties together. Thank you so much for writing it. And I agree with one of the other reviews - a sequel PLEASE!! - Anonymous - Jan-08-2011   

I couldnt stop reading! Awesome story line & you made it all come together... - Jayleen - Sep-10-2011   

I really enjoy D's stories. They are well written and thought out.Very entertaining. The only thing that would make them better as far as I'm concerned would be for the love scenes to be a bit more in depth. - uber goober - Nov-23-2011   

What an awesome Xena Wonder Woman crossover. - Wheezie - Aug-12-2013   

This is an amazing story!! I couldn't stop reading! - Anonymous - Jan-06-2015   

Superb story yet again. D is certainly an author who has you wanting to read all the stories she writes. This is one of her best. - Anonymous - Jan-03-2017   

Superb story yet again. D is certainly an author who has you wanting to read all the stories she writes. This is one of her best. - Anonymous - Jan-03-2017   

Excellent! Very nice read. - colorado fan - Jan-16-2017   

Nice X & G story. READ and enjoy! - cam - Apr-29-2007   

Set during the episode 'Chakram' and told from Gabrielle's perspective the author does an excellent job of making you experience the Bards profound feelings for her 'new' Warrior. Highly recommended.

- Sai - Apr-30-2007   

Very lovely X and G tale. Purest Love is purely perfect! This story reminded me of how I first came to enjoy the Athenaeum site - I love to read a soulful passionate story about my two favorite girls. - Opus - Mar-05-2008   

Broken link? - Anonymous - Jul-12-2013   

Amazing story!! Started reading and could not put it down until the end, loved the characters and how little by little we got to know them better and better and just end up loving them even more. I most definite recommend on this story! - Anonymous - Sep-10-2007   

AWESOME!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-10-2007   

great reading I have been looking for a story like this for a while could not leave computer until I finished it at 2:30 in the morning. does anyone know where I can find something similar to this a good romance.
- Anonymous - Sep-11-2007   

READ & ENJOY!! Great story. Looking forward to more from this author. - cam - Sep-11-2007   

WOW...if u haven't read this yet...read it..ASAP..
- leia - Sep-11-2007   

A gentle romance, which I hope has a sequel. - nondescriptone - Sep-12-2007   

Gotta say.. i loved it... great plot, great characters... lots of emotion... definately a must read... will add it to my favs list... hope author writes more soon... - PYE - Sep-12-2007   

I just love this author! She is sooo witty and funny! - dawnsue541 - Sep-13-2007   

Awesome story. Hope there will be a sequel. - Jules - Sep-13-2007   

It's always great to see new authors offer their work, especially ones like BadSquirrel, who write so well! Very enjoyable story with great characters and lotsa romance :) - Jen - Sep-14-2007   

A lovely story. Great characterisation and a nice slant on everyday things. Enjoyed this one alot. - msprism - Sep-15-2007   

much enjoyed .. (reminiscent in tone I think of another story I read some years ago), elusive to me at first, but recalled after reading some posted reviews by the phrase a "gentle romance". It reminded me of Edith Forbes and her published story "Alma Rose".. so kudos to both authors. - MM - Sep-16-2007   

Priceless!! this story is one of my all-time favorites as of now. the characters are complex and deep, interactions are just as precious and it's a beauty and a pleasure to read this creation. brava, BadSquirrel! - Kat - Sep-16-2007   

OUTSTANDING!!! I've read this 3 or 4 times already. Very witty characters and such a great story...please keep writing and posting. - Sthpaw30 - Sep-19-2007   

Hot damn this is a wonderful story. Great character visualizations. I loved the relationships Shine had with the kids, it reminded me of...me. - gayzer - Sep-22-2007   

Oh, my word, this was a beautiful novel of love. I'd just like to say that BadSquirrel does a fabulous job of slowly building the relationship between Maureen and Shine (love the names), and was not afraid to make them just as flawed as real humans! And I'm pleased to see a librarian presented as a voluptuous, desirable, sexy woman. - Libris Cat - Sep-22-2007   

Great story i agree with the other reviews. good characters, very entertaining and funny. i hope for more on shine and maureen. the character of mabel is priceless. - deb - Sep-23-2007   

Wonderful!!!! - Anonymous - Oct-05-2007   

A must read. It has wit, compassion, angst and a gracefully elocuted love story. I enjoyed watching these two women grow in overcoming their own troubled past as they learn to truly love and cherish each other. - anon - Oct-12-2007   

C'mere Mabel!

I really enjoyed this story. As you can see from the dozens of other recommendations, this is a story well worth reading. - Aubrey - Nov-05-2007   

loved it,hope you write more..your stories are a must read - anonymous - Nov-08-2007   

As everyone else has said...WOW!!!!!!
Didn't want to reading this story for the trivial & mundane things such as sleeping or eating. Hope there will be more from the characters...especially Mabel. - BD - Nov-26-2007   

I love everything by this writer. Her characters are incredible individuals. She joins the ranks of those authors who have created a rich and evolving community where past friends interact with the current ones. - Irish Samurai - Apr-16-2008   

Absolutely wonderful! What a lovely, lovely story. definitely a must read! - Gwen - Jun-27-2008   

A truly talented writer. I've read all four stories currently available in this series - and I'm laready wanteing to read them again. - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

Run, do not walk, to read this intriguing story. This bard knows how to write. There is the right amount of angst, laughter, tears and 'just' life to take the reader on a wonderful journey. Awesome! - Kaz - Aug-20-2008   

Fantastic part of the "Edgewater" series. Perhaps, "Shine", "Rumors", and "Dark Side" ought to be linked up? Shine is a must read. Thanks! - Dusty - Mar-27-2009   

wonderful n well written - Anonymous - Nov-05-2009   

excelent story, well writen, passion, angst and love.... what else a reader can ask? way to go for me - kky - Dec-03-2009   

Ok do all of your stories SCREAM for a sequel?
they end perfectly by leave the feeling for more
just what a good bard is suppose to do
cant wait for more - dakota86 - Jun-24-2010   

I can't say enough, just how much I enjoy your stories! Your writing style is superb and I don't know how you don't have a bunch of books published already. I read Rumors and Dark Side of the Moon earlier and I can see that you probably won't be writing any sequels since you have yet to write one, but personally, I would LOVE to see a sequel to all your stories! I never want them to end! Love, Love, Love the story and want more! Please! Grace sounds awesome :) - Marie - Aug-17-2010   

A really well written story. Yeah!!!!! - sassy123 - Aug-19-2010   

A really well written story. Yeah!!!!! - sassy123 - Aug-19-2010   

As a first story by Bad Squirral I found it very well writen,and I got hooked right from the first paragraph. - Meg - Sep-09-2010   

Another brilliant story by a terrific author! This author is a must read as everything she has written is just wonderful - these stories just call out for a sequel, please, please!! - CoolNik - Oct-05-2010   

I found this to be a good story well worth taking the time to read. This one is the authors first posted story and it's very good but the others that follow are even better. This author just keeps getting better with experience. Great entertainment. - uber goober - Oct-16-2010   

What a amazing beautiful story! It's so full of everything....and loveable characters including Mabel :) Started reading it and couldn't put it down until the end! Thank you very much for sharing! - SwissGirl - Oct-18-2010   

I like BadSquirrel's work indeed. Her characters are always likable, her stories are full of tenderness, her style is fluent. This romance was very pleasant to read. - M.D. Gibraltar - Nov-30-2010   

I love this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

This is a well written story and an excellent read. The relationship between Shine and Maureen is developed so perfectly. I liked these women and watching them fight past their insecurities was beautifully written. If you've not read it, then definitely give it a try. It's great:-) - Lyn B - Jun-18-2011   

Great story! - zac - Dec-26-2012   

An absolutely amazing story! This was the second story by BadSquirrel that I had read and she did NOT let me down.. Absolutely phenomenal and I loved the characters! I definitely recommend this author and now I'm off to read more of her work which I know will just be fantastic! :) - Brandi - Aug-29-2013   

Have to say this was a really great story so glad I took the time to read it xx - SD - Jul-19-2015   

Very good sequel to Thin Line. I read it in one seating and I enjoyed imensely the psychological aspect of the story. - M. - Apr-11-2009   

Enginerd has added wonderful depth of character to this story line. A writer to watch! Definitely three-hankies. - offhermeds - Apr-13-2009   

An intense, vivid story. A great read. - MaryOtt - Apr-28-2009   

An engaging story! I highly recommend. - SusanG - Jun-06-2009   

Second in an Awesome series. Must read! Must continue!! - Anon - Mar-19-2011   

Excellent sequel. It's a wonderful story; romantic, bittersweet, funny and a happy ending. Very well written. Highly recommended:-) - Lyn B - Sep-27-2011   

Excellent sequel. Great characters. My final wish as I move on is this series had been a triology letting us see the new life they made once they made it home. Thank you for all the enjoyment you provided sharing this great scifi series. - Anonymous - Nov-06-2011   

I cannot believe I'm the first one to review this story! I loved it. REad this gem people.. Very original plot.. Wonderful characters. Crossing fingers that the author is planning a sequel :) - BOO - Jul-18-2009   

This story is really nice and full of great characters. - Anonymous - Jan-24-2010   

I cannot believe this story hasn't been recommended more! I think I've read this story 4 times already. The characters are great and the situation they are in is interesting. - Mich - Jan-30-2010   

I HAVE READ THIS STORY MORE TIMES THAN I CAN SAY. MS HART KUDOS TO YOU AND YOUR WORK - I READ AND LOVE THEM ALL. THANKS - MANOLI - Feb-16-2010   

one of the best stories I've read. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2010   

Just finished reading this gem and I am surprised it hasn't gotten more comments. A very touching story, well written, and had me laughing and even crying. Please do yourself a favor and read this work of art! - quack - Sep-30-2010   

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Simply amazing - @manddym - Jan-21-2015   

Excellent as AA's stories usually are. A must read for any sci-fi fan and a good read for everyone. Looking forward to the next story. - RB - Aug-05-2009   

another great sci-fi story. tension angst and annoying "superior" officers - got to love it. Can't wait for their next adventure. - Kali - Aug-07-2009   

Excellent! I can't wait for the next story! - Anonymous - Aug-07-2009   

great story. Can't wait for another story. - Anonymous - Aug-08-2009   

Once again excellent story. Please more. - rosii59 - Aug-12-2009   

Amazing story! Eagerly waiting for the sequel if possible. Hopefully in the next story the Commodore can deal some damage to her evil superiors hehe!

For any who wants to read a good sci fi story here is a good one! - Krysta - May-27-2010   

Amazing story! Eagerly waiting for the sequel if possible. Hopefully in the next story the Commodore can deal some damage to her evil superiors hehe!

For any who wants to read a good sci fi story here is a good one! - Krysta - Jun-02-2010   

Kept me on the edge of my seat until the very end. Great work! - gaz - Sep-08-2009   

A very clever story. Well worth a read. - Anonymous - Sep-12-2009   

A great read but it begs the question. Will this story continue? This story is just the beginning and I'd like to know what happens to these two. - Anonymous - Sep-25-2009   

Great story. Well worth a read. - jaqi - Oct-07-2009   

This is one of those tales that goes bump in the night. A story where one is tempted to look over one's shoulder at the sound of every scrape and shudder. I've never taken the opportunity to thank this author for her diversified range of stories. She has a way, in a few well chosen words, of putting the reader into any world she wishes to make. Thank you, Aurelia. - xenastarved - Nov-29-2009   

A good story but it felt like it was just the beginning to what should be a longer tale. Still it was worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Aug-28-2010   

A nice story. I think it would have been better if it had been longer. There a little bit of everything in it; grief, drama, tension and the hint of romance and new beginnings. Worth a read. - Lyn B - May-09-2011   

great reading I hope you will finish this story I love Alex Olivia stories - nicolen - Aug-28-2010   

Awesome and HOT!! Love your Alex and am enjoying her whore of a best friend, Abbie. Can't wait for you to finish this story! - Scoobydum - Sep-11-2010   

This story makes me dance around my living room every time it's updated. And given that Rae updates nearly three times a week, I get a lot of dancing in! - Clomle44 - Oct-06-2010   

This is a great story. The interpretation of the characters is very believable, as is the matchmaking. I'm excited for more. - PT - Oct-07-2010   

i truly like this the benson/cabot pairing, as much as andy/miranda (dwp). this story is terrific, and i am looking forward very much indeed for the continuation of the magnetic resistance universe stories. - kc - Nov-09-2010   

WOW! This is a GREAT story. A must read for anyone who enjoys fully realized stories with the correct character voices. I swear it was like reading with the actors voices in my head. & no I'm not crazy for hearing voices...that's just Damn good writing. - mokita - Dec-02-2010