Wow, Lex and Amanda (and their extended crew) just can't catch a break! If you're looking for a little more angst and drama, this is the story in the series for you. Well written and engaging - it definitely pulls you in and has you rooting for both Lex and Amanda. Nicely done! - Stacia - Jan-05-2013   

i like this story the most in this series.. as i was reading it, i remembered reading it before.. since i never read just one story in a series, i'm sure i've read the previous ones before as well.. none of them rang a bell, but this one i clearly remembered.. - xtra dog - Jan-06-2013   

I enjoyed this sequel very much! - Ricky - Feb-21-2013   

since i'm european, still living in europe, i don't know anything about american football.. don't know what all the craze is about, either.. sure enough, i do know who melissa good is.. nice to see some of her characters popping up in this story.. - Anonymous - Jun-05-2011   

Great short story for a fast pick me up. Nice to see Kerry and Dar popping up in this one. My only complaint is that it ended. - Stacia - Nov-02-2012   

Great series. I read it straight through. Loved the great development of the relationship of these two incredible uber X & G's . - ubergoober - Jun-11-2015   

This is absolutely fantastic... a must read...do yourself a favor...spend some time with Red and Evadne...you won't regret it... - T - May-12-2008   

i loved the first two stories in this series, and the first part of this one is just as good. I am waiting anxiously for the conclusion. There is one, right? You wouldn't leave me hanging now, would you? Come on! You're killing me here! - BadSquirrel - Jun-03-2008   

I agree with badsquirrel...finish part 2...i really want to know how it ends...or does it merely begin a new era in the lives of red and evadne...please dinasbran...don't leave us hanging - T - Jun-04-2008   

Ladies...i suggest you put everything down and read this story...absolutely fantastic...lets give Dinasbran a round of applause and get her to a well deserved number one spot... - DW - Jun-10-2008   

Ladies...i suggest you put everything down and read this story...absolutely fantastic...lets give Dinasbran a round of applause and get her to a well deserved number one spot... - DW - Jun-10-2008   

Thank you! It was worth the wait! I love these characters. This author has a gift for building suspense and mystery. If you have not read her stories, you're missing out. - BadSquirrel - Jun-11-2008   

Thank you! It was worth the wait! I love these characters. This author has a gift for building suspense and mystery. If you have not read her stories, you're missing out. - BadSquirrel - Jun-11-2008   

Now we´re talking finally Edvane and Red together and what a sexxxy reunion. I hope the next story don´t take to long to give us one more great reading. - chris - Jun-11-2008   

It's well written, excellent characters and is a lovely mixture of the paranormal with a healthy dose of gritty realism. Make sure you read the two previous works which are just as good. - Ape - Jun-15-2008   

Ladies...we are almost there...Dinasbran is at number 2 for Distance...lets get her to number 1...start reading...you won't regret it... - DW - Jun-17-2008   

Fantastic read. Hope to see it in the #1 spot. This story deserves it. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
- Nancy - Jun-20-2008   

I can't say enough about this series.. I'm more than thrilled it will continue.. This writer is exceptionally well versed. She combines suspense, intrigue and the supernatual, all wrapped up in a wonderful period piece. Hurry and take the time..before a wise publisher snapps it up! - jac - Jun-20-2008   

That was a great tale !! Please say you are going to continue with these two lovely characters. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. This was the first story I've read and I plan to go back and catch them all !! - Anonymous - May-26-2010   

Discussions is a wonderful continuation of Puppet Strings. Demona and Kendra are now back in New York and there are new characters and old to contend with. As with all of Kudara's writing, I can highly recommend it! - Dogz - May-30-2008   

I'm enjoying watching the love between Demona and Kendra gain strength. The pace they are going at is perfect, please continue. - Shelly - Jun-20-2008   

Wildy entertaining. Hope to read more. - Anonymous - Sep-26-2008   

I can't remember a time when I wasn't seeking a story by Kudara. I am very much enjoying the in depth characters, the rightly paced loved story and Goliath getting his comeuppance. Please continue writing, I am always checking and hoping for new chapters. - Shelly - Oct-27-2008   

Please continue - xxy - Dec-01-2008   

You can't leave me hanging!!! Kendra so kicks ass....Please you have to finish it. - leque - Jan-13-2009   

omg omg please more i need more don't leave us hanging - Anonymous - Mar-31-2009   

Shapeshifters, shamanism, sorcery, gargoyles, feys, well-thought and well-written characters and situations... Great series ! I hope new chapters will come soon. - Mani - Dec-03-2009   

This is SO good, please please please finish it! - Aerows - Feb-21-2010   

WOW! this is a great story. - lonevoice89 - Mar-19-2010   

THIS IS THE STORY I RECOMEND. BRINGS THE BEST AND THE DARK SIDE OF SEVERAL WORLDS.ILL BE LOOKING FOR MORE OF THE STORY. THIS ONE IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL...AND I READ ALOT - damere - May-20-2010   

This is a great story even though its not finished. I would love to see a true ending this series. - Anonymous - Jun-13-2011   

I really wish this was finished. I started reading this knowing that it wasn't finished, and most likely not be finished, but one can hope. I hope your muse returns and we can finish the journey. - Pickles - Oct-29-2011   

Great Story! I too would love to read an ending or some short stories based around the secondary charachters. - Anonymous - Jul-22-2014   

extraordinary tale!!! - Anonymous - Mar-04-2009   

WOW!!! Very, very impressive!!! - Anonymous - Mar-04-2009   

A uniquely captivating Uber tale that lingers in the space between the 'known' and the 'not known', but is grounded on solid, intelligent research by the author. Oh please, continue this story! Highly Recommended. - wasabigrrl - Mar-05-2009   

My first recc. Needs more. Please. - zarsa - Mar-06-2009   

Awesome!

That was a great story. I'd love to see a continuation. - EC - Mar-07-2009   

Do yourself a favour and read this - fascinating - Courtney - Mar-08-2009   

absolutely extraterrestrial intelligence. Well worth the read. - vampireslayer2 - Mar-09-2009   

BRILLIANT!!! Simply EXTRAORDINARY!! - E.A. - Mar-09-2009   

I totally recommend this wonderful tale, also I hope there will be a sequel. - Jasper - Mar-10-2009   

WOW!! what a great and imaginative story!! I didn't see the ending coming which attests to a great writer because I was in total suspense until the end. You have to write a sequel Please,Please, Please!!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Mar-11-2009   

This is a bit different from the majority of X/G uber tales, refreshing and original. There's great tension between the two protagonists, a well thought out plot and it's nicely executed.
This was my first delve into this authors work and I enjoyed it very much, so much so I was gutted when it ended all to soon. This could definitely use a sequel. Great work! - Sai - Mar-12-2009   

Excellent work. - Anonymous - Mar-14-2009   

Oh yes, this is a wonderful tale! The twists and turns left me dizzy and only wanting more. An excellent writer! - offermeds - Mar-16-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** *sigh* Interesting and riveting tales like this one come so little often...

So, yes, I would recommend this one to my friends. :) Loved the mystery surrounding it, the more you read, the more complex it becomes and the more questions the reader has, but the author also gives you the answers, little by little.

And while doing that, you witness a blossoming romance. I have to say, this is the kind of romance development I enjoy reading the most. When 2 women feel drawn to eachother, for some unknown and irrational reason, but they don't get all mushy about it.

The jibes at eachother are fun to read. :) And I love the fact that it's a bank robber/hostage kind of setting. Nice action/drama, good story, good romance. Hey, I also thought it was hot. It certainly got my juices flowing. :P

Sequel, PLEASE. :) - Vanessa V. - Mar-17-2009   

Sorry for the long "recommendation".
*sheepish look* - Vanessa V. - Mar-17-2009   

Great story, full of twists, turns, and shocks! So much bakground detail too. You have to read it like two or three times before you get everythng. Why has noone told me about this writer before? - Anonymous - Mar-29-2009   

omg more please... its to good to end - Anonymous - Apr-12-2009   

Had trouble putting this one down. Really good read, well written. - Ange - Dec-13-2011   

Very cool uber. I'm usually not a fan of stories that are light in the romance department but this one was so well written that I didn't mind. A page turning puzzler that kept me interested all the way through. - Anonymous - Dec-02-2014   

I just finished reading this and, what a pleasant surprise! It wasn't what I was expecting, especially the end. I can't wait to read the sequel. I definitely recommend! - Anonymous - Sep-07-2016   

I wasn't sure if I would like this story, because I don't tend to read vampire stories, but I like Meghan O'Brien's writing and it's very good. The relationship between the two women is intense and passionate, even with the night fighting vampires. Very hot and fun to read. Recommended. - Lyn B - Apr-07-2011   

well, if you want to read a kick-ass story with vampires and ubers in slightly different roles, with enough sexual tension to burn your irises,.. this story might just be your thing.. i read this one about 2 years ago, but silly me forgot to leave a comment.. it was worth rereading it though.. - xtra dog - Mar-20-2012   

Awesome story! Loved the interaction between Olivia and Alex!Congrats Allie! - Lucy D. - May-03-2009   

Very Well written and hot ! - Anonymous - May-10-2009   

Amazing... truly amazing... The chemistry between the two heroins was one of the strongest I've ever read about. Congratulations to the bard!
If you're here, you must be looking for a great read. You've just found one. ; )! lucky you - yuka - Jun-18-2009   

My only complaint on this story is that this appears to be the writer's only story....and I want more.

Very well done. True to character. Hot! - Anonymous - Feb-04-2010   

A very good read. Great work, true talent in character development. - Ginger 1290 - Nov-27-2010   

Excellent story. If you like SVU A/O fic, read this. - Anonymous - Feb-13-2011   

Why did u stop at one story???? Loved it want lots more red lace boy shorts - Feral pixi - Jan-03-2013   

A good afternoon read. - mochamaker - Feb-07-2013   

Very late to the party here, but that was an incredible read. Thank you. - Anonymous - Aug-08-2015   

Wonderful! - Anonymous - Nov-05-2015   

I was soo excited when I saw that there was a sequel! It's written even better than the first one since the characters are a lot more developed. And seriously, who hasn't been loved on by a Brutus? :0) - Anonymous - May-08-2009   

I really love these characters and totally loved the story . It's even better than the first 'Dance with Me'. Thanks. - Ginger - May-12-2009   

Histoire relativement simple. Kim, ici, rends la simplicité poetique, attendrissante, et dense a un point quasi toxique!
Cette serie (relativement courte) est "simplement" une vrai perle. - yuka - May-17-2009   

Read it! Good good good. - Anonymous - Jun-13-2010   

I love how this author incorporates song titles and small gestures into her stories. These minor details make the story resonate long after the final page. Not many authors have such ability, but I'm sure glad this one does because she can tell a damn good story. - Chemy - Feb-14-2011   

What a terrific story. Great job - sassy123 - Apr-16-2011   

this was painful and i mean that in a really good way. it is a tough topic and it was really well written meaning, as a reader i felt as though i was watching. thank you for artfully & honestly tackling a really tough topic.
i would love to see a follow up story that fills in the gap between the end of the main story and the final paragraphs. - Anonymous - Dec-07-2010   

Damn disappointing about the turn of the events. You know you usually use to see hard trough relations and get back together in the end. Well, this was unexpected. And very real life like.
I was shell shocked with depth of brutal reality.
Surely beat up all sappy stuff you normally read.
Strongly recommend !!! - AMAZONKA - Dec-08-2010   

Thanks for tackling this tough subject. It's a story that needed to be told to generate awareness. Hard to read. I'm glad you choose to end the story the way you did. It is life and very realistic. - Anonymous - Dec-09-2010   

Yes. - Shelly - Dec-11-2010   

Thank you for this magnificent piece of literature. The issue definitely needed to be talked about. - Jaye - Dec-15-2010   

A dark and disturbing, but necessarily so, tale of events that need to be brought to light and hopefully be banished from our community -- lesbian rape. Thank you Cheyne for having the forbearance to tell the tale...and for the ending that brings some light to the main character. - squinty - Dec-16-2010   

Cheyne tackles a difficult subject with her usual grace. She's the consummate writer and gift to the Athenaeium. Due to its necessarily violent nature, it would be inappropriate to give this a spice rating. - offhermeds - Jan-03-2011   

I found this story very powerful to read. It was disturbing to read what happened, but the writing was excellent. Well worth reading, but be warned. It's very dark in parts. I've given no spice rating because of the content. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

This was a very hard read but a story that needed to be written. I don't know women like this, or do I? - ~ Robin ~ - Feb-10-2011   

Bra! Super! Oh Gud hon kan skriva!
Intressant och gripande berättelse...Jag rekommenderar att läsa. - Z. Rodson - Jun-24-2011   

What a powerful and extremely well told story. You get totally drawn in, and while reading you are aware that something terrible is about to occur, even so you can't help but wish that somehow, it's going to stay a 'fantasy' come true for the character. IMO this would make a fantastic novel, and would help get the terrible truths of this story out there. - Ange - Oct-03-2011   

Good grief, you made me nervous in those last couple of lines!! Knowing the topic before reading the story was enough warning to "safely" get through it but those very last couple of paragraphs I think was the most terrifying; not knowing who she was talking to. Bravo! - Tori - Nov-14-2011   

i've read this story about 2 years ago.. and i still vividly remember every last part and detail of it.. it blew me away at the time.. due to the subject i am reluctant to read it again, but it is one hell of a read.. highly recommended!! - xtra dog - Mar-28-2012   

Omg very powerful story . Rape seems bad enough when it's between man and woman but this is so horrible . Very well written and well told even if I felt sick with what happened . - SD - May-27-2016   

I can't say this was a great story, because it was heartbreaking and eye-opening all at once. But it was necessary and beautifully written. Well done, Cheyne. - Kelly Aten - Jul-05-2016   

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Fantastic read, This is one that i've read again and again and it's always as magical as the first time - Anonymous - May-30-2011   

Ah, what a beautiful, well written story. Kudos to the Author.
- mashymoo - Jan-16-2012   

Inspirational, deserves to be read. - Anonymous - Aug-27-2012   

Powerful, instructive and very, very moving - Dominic - Aug-30-2012   


There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you ~Maya Angelou
Sometime I will forget what youve said I might even forget what you did but I will never ever forget how you make me feel
love always Sham
- sham - Sep-08-2012   

Eyes that do not cry, do not see.Very brave I bow to you
Story need's to be read FBL
- FBL - Sep-08-2012   

A true warrior. - Anonymous - Sep-13-2012   

Lots of romance, family/friends and plot in this story. It is a great read when you need a pick-me-up. - Stacia - Jan-15-2013   

This is a great series. Enjoyable uber characters. Thoroughly enjoyed each story. Thank you Wendy Arthur for sharing your wonderful talent with us - and thanks for the hours of reading pleasure ! - colorado fan - Jan-15-2013   

Loving CJ and Kate. Romance, action, great dialogue. More characters coming into their lives... they seem almost real! Onward! - Jenn - Jul-18-2013   

Maybe shouldn't read this series at work! Another great episode. I'm definitely a fan :) - Denny - Dec-31-2013   

more romance and a thickening plot.. yay! - xtra dog - Feb-19-2014   

Its a real pain when life gets in the way of your reading. Finally got to continue with this series. I love it.
Definitely starting the next one today. And thank you to the person who posted the link to the author's website. Big thumbs up! - Jonah3 - Apr-11-2014   

Another great story from cj and Katie xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Another great story from cj and Katie xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

This series is spectacular. The build-up is amazing and the end even better.
- Sandy - Feb-25-2016   

Series has been given an edit and continues at marshallcarson.wordpress.com !! - Anonymous - Mar-06-2016   

another excellent story in the series - colorado fan - Jan-18-2013   

This series just keeps getting better. This one was darker than the ones before but it's a great read. Action, friendships, justice and so much love between the two leads I can't get enough of them. Can't wait to start the next episode! Oh and I just found the writer's own site at marshallcarson.wordpress.com. There are more stories! - Jenn - Jul-25-2013   

Really liked the FBI case in this one. Dark subject matter but well handled and an enjoyable read! Really loving these characters. - Denny - Jan-15-2014   

nice read.. the way the main characters love each other is quite amazing.. - xtra dog - Feb-21-2014   

Thoroughly enjoying this series... another triumph! The Federal case was dark indeed but the author tells a great story. The lead character's interactions are incredible. A must read. - Jonah3 - Apr-20-2014   

Another great story from cj and Katie xx - SD - Oct-03-2015   

I cried more than once reading this one. The love between the leads is so amazing. Loving this series! - Jenn - Aug-03-2013   

every time i come across homophobic parents (irl and fiction alike) i cringe my brow.. i just don't understand how you cannot love your child over such a minor and insignificant detail.. - xtra dog - Feb-21-2014   

Me? Cry? Yes I did. Another highly enjoyable story in this amazing series! - Jonah3 - Apr-30-2014   

Another great one just can't get enough xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Another great one just can't get enough xx - SD - Oct-04-2015   

Nice ... - Anonymous - Oct-01-2012   

Good story. I hope there is another one to follow. I really love reading about this family. - Pickles - Nov-07-2012   

Good story. fun characters. want to murder the mother :) Very good sequel. Needs one more to finish... please??? - Anonymous - Apr-05-2013   

Fantastic short piece. Very emotional without being too emotional. Thanks for sharing. - Stacia - Mar-12-2013   

Loved this little story! I just watched the episode prior to it and thought this was a well-written addition (and it filled in a few 'gaps' in the episode's rather abrupt ending). Nicely done intro to their intimacy too. - SFM - Jul-23-2013   

So touching. Very enjoyable - Anonymous - Dec-29-2014   

This was fantastic!!! Was kind of waiting for more or maybe a sequel! - Anonymous - Nov-02-2013   

OMG!!!!!!!!!! This was the best Rizzoli and Isles story I've ever read!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapters come out!!!
I read up to chapter 18 on the Passion and Perfection site and really hope that you will update soon!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Jan-23-2014   

Another great story from Weebod, romantic and very sexy, I love the setting and the dashing Eloise :) - Wolfie67 - Jun-30-2016   

Very enjoyable story. Thank you Weebod.Good to have you and The Athenaeum back on line. - lizzie UK - Jul-02-2016   

It's a great short story. Very cute. - Katie of ohio - Jul-16-2016   

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Zee brings to the table compelling characters and an eye for the way in which terrible experiences shape one's life.A thrill ride of emotions--tears, laughter, loneliness, joy, a dash ofcraziness and a heap of romance. There is a large secondary cast of characters who round out the story, including Sammy & Nikki..who I'm still trying to figure out. - X X - Sep 28th, 2002   

A great read. This is an Uber Mel and Janice kind of story, Uber G is rough and tough and Uber X is brainy and from a better background. Lots of interesting characters help the story along too. - sapphie - Mar 25th, 2003   

Good story, i would like to see what happens to them later in life. - Anonymous - Aug-21-2009   

cant wait for their next step in their lives for these characters......very good story to read - goody - Jul-12-2010   

"use those word things"... ha! this story is thrilling - angst, yep; flashbacks, yep; action, yep; 3-dimensional characters, love, romance, yep, yep, yep. astoundingly rocking novel. - kc - Sep-12-2010   

Well written story by Zee. It's complex and full of great characters. It would have been nice to read a sequel and discover more about these people. Good read. - Lyn B - Mar-05-2011   

What a great story. Nice job - sassy123 - May-20-2012   

killer kitchen tiles hahahahahah...great story - soopi - Oct-08-2014   

Good read x - Anonymous - Jun-06-2015   

I've read each and every story that this bard has given us. I believe 'Afraid of the Dark' is her best work yet. It was acutally hard to choose a favorite. I encourage anyone who wants a great read to pick any of this bards work, I garuntee you'll love it. - raven_heart - Sep 17th, 2002   

I started this story by mistake, I actually thought it was a story by a different author. But once I started reading this story I didn't want to stop. I thought it was great! A very suspenseful story, but the author didn't try to draw it out like some I've read. It was very cleanly written. I even wrote the author to tell her and she wrote back, a very funny and polite note. She's working on a new story and I for one can't wait to read it. - Tina - Oct 24th, 2002   

She is one great writer, maybe the best around - Anonymous - Oct 27th, 2002   

Here's a story that made me feel sympathy, pain, fear and elation all in the span of 46 pages. I can't believe I haven't read this before now. I'm going back to read all her other stories! - TJC - Nov 1st, 2002   

Oh my! What a story. It's been a while since I was so drawn into a story. I'd recomend this to anyone and everyone. - J_Dierdre - Nov 28th, 2002   

Happily, every now an them I come across a gem. This was a great story that I must have over looked. Fantastic job. - Sarah - Dec 23rd, 2002   

Wow! That was better than Believe. Not something that I thought was possible until I read this story. Very emotional, it had me ready to cry in places. I noticed that there are six other stories by this author and I plan to read them all! - Jen - Jan 15th, 2003   

Excellent story! It's one of my favorites. - Lori - Apr 25th, 2003   

Intense, satisfying and leaves you wanting to read more of this bard's work. - NET - May 7th, 2003   

A great story. I loved it. I wish there were more of it. This is a definite must read, or even re-read if it's been a while. Excellent. - BB - Aug 24th, 2004   

I had forgotten this story's name, but not the story itself. A terrific mystery with realistic thought processes and dialogue. (It's no spoiler to say that in this story, a woman is blinded in a car accident and then begins "seeing" disturbing things.) A great story. - Fanficionado - Aug 29th, 2004   

WOW!! Fantastic writing and story, I couldn't stop reading. Will there be a continuation? C'mon, there's gotta be. I too am going to read all the other stories by this author!! :) - Erin Kelly - Dec 30th, 2004   

Here we are deep into 2005, and I still come upon such excellent writing. I've read nearly all of this author's work, a couple more to go. They all leave me thinking..great entertainment. - Anonymous - Sep 16th, 2005   

This is a highly imaginitive story that had me enthralled during the entire reading. It had mystery, suspense and romance, but not too much. I loved it and I know anyone who reads it will too. - reads_a-lot - Oct-10-2006   

Outstanding writing! Awesome story and heartfelt Characters! Perhaps a sequel could come of this? *grins* - Waking the Dream - Nov-20-2006   

Most of the time when I read the fiction housed on this site I'm affected by it. Sometimes I'm deeply affected, so much so that I can actually feel what the characters are going through. This is one of those stories. I've never given much thought to tragedy striking my life. 'Afraid of the Dark' made me not only think about it, but also wonder how I would react. Even though I find it hard to fathom the magnitude of the loss and the desire to end that pain. I was able, for a moment, to imagine it and feel it. It may be a while before I read this again, but I will read it again. I suggest you read it too. - Fran - Mar-12-2008   

As soon as I read it I figured inspired by X-Files! It was good, I enjoyed reading it! - Orion - Jul-12-2008   

Wow. Just, wow. - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

This is a truly awesome read! Thank you. You definitely possess great imaginery and writing skills. If you're not already, you should be a published writer...a best selling one at that. I'm a writer wanna be and I'm envious of the chills and excitement your story has provided me. I'll definitely be looking for more of your work. - Anonymous - Aug-05-2008   

another please another - Anonymous - Sep-07-2008   

Wow! I would hope for a sequel - rleef - Feb-07-2009   

Darkenedkarma's page is giving an error when you go to it. [Corrected 3/25/09] - Netta - Mar-24-2009   

Had me biting my nails! Wonderful, great suspense! I really enjoyed the relationship between Melanie and Tricia especially the inner struggle Melanie experienced with her emotions. It would be great to read about their continued relationship and whether or not they experience more challenges. Great job! - Chess - Aug-24-2009   

Excellent story! - Anonymous - Nov-26-2009   

that was really good. the best i have read in a while and trust me i read a lot. - pickles - Jun-21-2010   

Excellent ! truly fantastic piece of work. - Anonymous - Jul-02-2010   

WOW! There are some stories that you just can't forget and this is one of them. I think I've read it 20 times already lol amazing! - Mich - Jul-03-2010   

i have no idea where this bard has been all my life, but i know now that i have found her, i will willingly follow her damn near anywhere!
great story... now if you'll excuse me, i have an afternoon of reading to do, and i suggest that you all do the same! - goober - Jul-16-2010   

wow. what a rush. suspensful and romantic. pretty heady combination. - Anonymous - Jul-25-2010   

Fascinating story that draws you into the characters lives. It's very well written. I'd like to read a sequel too:-) Well worth a read:-) - Lyn B - Jul-26-2011   

what a great story highly reccomend this and hope to see a sequel to it soon - chippy - Oct-07-2011   

this story reminds me of a movie starring madeleine stowe.. i don't remember the title but the gist of it was the same.. still a nice read, though.. - xtra dog - Jan-27-2012   

Although this story deals with harsh circumstances, I took away a feeling of hope. Unlike many fics I have read where the main characters use meaningless sex to "deal", the underlying message in this one is how love and devotion can weather any storm. - Anonymous - Sep-09-2012   

Really enjoyed this one. - Wheezie - Mar-10-2014   

Wow! i mean my God, great writing, it was so well written i'd swear i'd just watched a movie not read a book. - Aahi Young - May-21-2014   

Wow! i mean my God, great writing, it was so well written i'd swear i'd just watched a movie not read a book. - Aahi Young - May-21-2014   

Wow! i mean my God, great writing, it was so well written i'd swear i'd just watched a movie not read a book. - Aahi Young - May-21-2014   

Wow! i mean my God, great writing, it was so well written i'd swear i'd just watched a movie not read a book. - Aahi Young - May-21-2014   

Wow! i mean my God, great writing, it was so well written i'd swear i'd just watched a movie not read a book. - Aahi Young - May-21-2014   

Wow, just wow! What an incredible read! The plot really does shine in this one and the romance is so skillfully woven into the plot's fabric, at the end this reader was left feeling very satisfied. I agree with other reviewers, it was like watching a movie. Knock people out of the way to get to this story, it is that good. - Stacia - May-22-2014   

What a wonderful story! It's a well written story full of joy and passion along with some heartache and angst set in the American West just after the Cival War. I'd recommend you keep a box of tissues handy for some parts. - Gabsfan - Nov 30th, 2002   

Radclyffe ventures West and, unsurprisingly, carries it off. Good histrical detail and measured characterisation ward off the worst of the cliches of the genre and instead you are left with a short, uncomplicatd drama with a very endearing love story at its heart.
I'm beginning to think Radclyffe might be a true romantic. - ab - Nov-05-2008   

wonderful, wonderful story! made my heart soar and my senses pop! it's incredibly cinematic and evocative writing. well done. - Anonymous - Nov-08-2008   

East meets the wild west. From the heat and dust of a small frontier town rises a true romance between Kate, a young Bostonian woman and Jessie, a local ranch owner. Kate's parents have already mapped out their daughters destiny and are deterimed to keep her on that path. Kate however has other ideas. Radclyffe expertly keeps you gripped by drip feeding you just the right amounts of tension, desire, romance, spice and angst, and I won't even mention the leather chaps...ooopps...crap! Sorry, that just slipped out! Anyway, this is very easy to read and very enjoyable. Yeeha! - Sai - Nov-10-2008   

Wonderful story, as always! I knew I wouldn't be disappointed with a story by Radclyff. I want a sequel! Jessie is the sexiest cowgirl on earth! - Xenasgrrl - Aug-24-2009   

Yes!! a sequel is a great idea. Loved the story, as all Raddclyfe's.
No te la pierdas, es diferente, pero engancha, como todas las de esta autora - Rouge - Jun-17-2010   

Please, Please write a sequel. What a great western. Loved Jessie and Kate. The writing is fantastic. Highly recommended. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-13-2010   

Wauw Radclyffe, you've done it again, thank you for one more story, beautifully written. - Anonymous - Jul-14-2010   

A great story. job well done - sassy123 - Oct-03-2010   

This is one of the first western stories that I had read (this was a few years ago now). I loved it and the characters. It's beautifully written as alway. I was gripped from the beginning, and loved it so much that I bought the book.

It's a great read. - Lyn B - Jan-23-2011   

Radclyffe has written a beautiful story with delightful characters and a seriously tense climax. I truly wondered whether or not... nope, sorry you'll have to read it to find out :-)
Did I mention that I have really enjoyed reading it?
I think this is the first of Radclyffe's stories that I have read and I now look forward to sampling some of the other works. - ianic - Mar-09-2011   

Wonderful Story! - Aahi Young - May-28-2014   

nice read.. - xtradog - May-15-2015   

I read this story some time ago on another web site. I highly recommend taking the time to read it. Once I began, I was hooked and could not put it down until I had all the twists figured out. Ms. Brownell tells an excellent story of love, survival, mystery, family, and forgiveness. You will certainly not be disapointed by this entertaining and well-written piece. - S. Lee - Jun 4th, 2003   

I've been reading this book again lately and I was hooked. Just like the first time when I couldn't stop reading and finished it in one weekend. There are some many twists and turns that you will think "oh, i figured it out" more than once just to read you're totally wrong on the next page. It always reminds me on classic Hollywood drama from the old days with all it's charme. It has everything from mystery, fame, love, family and life. One of my all time favorit books! - Mindwalker78 - Mar 5th, 2004   

Absolutely wonderful story.Would deserve to printed at once. - letterwolf - Mar 10th, 2004   

When I stumbled upon this story, I had no idea how prfound it would be. Simply on eof the best I have read period. I enjoy the fact that it's not a 'nice and neat' story and contains many intense depictions of survival of violence without being sensational. Amazing! - BkFaith - Mar 14th, 2004   

This piece is masterfully done. Each character has depth but does not inapropriately cross over the boundries created by the first person narrative. I was moved by this piece and only sorry that it was over when it was done. The mystery unfolds with the reader sometimes a half a step ahead of the narrator, and somehow that's just enough to prepare us to survive the whirlwind. The whole thing is honest and tragic and sweet all at once. I highly reccomend it. - Roxy - Apr 15th, 2004   

Just read this again and can't beleve I didn't recommend it before. Great story! READ & ENJOY!! - cam - Sep-10-2007   

This is an amazing novella that I have read at least 4 times now. Surprisingly enough I still find myself reading until the wee hours of the morning because I can't to put it down. I definite must read!
I wish the author would share some more of her works with us. I guess in the mean time we'll just have to keep re-reading the masterpieces that she has graced us with.
- Shadowboxer - Sep-19-2007   

WOW! Fabulous read. All the other statements summon it nicely! Keeps me wondering, why didn't I discover this earlier? And where is the author? Thanks for the recommendation Shadowboxer! - Dutch - Sep-22-2007   

Oh my GOD, this was such a great story!!!! You are a very gifted writer!!!! READ THIS STORY, EVERYONE!! - k. lewis - Sep-23-2007   

Excellent and well-crafted!! I add my highest recommendation to the list of those before mine. - rlh - Sep-25-2007   

Great great story and very imaginative story. I couldn't put it away. - dale - Oct-07-2007   

A truly WONDERFUL first story from from this exceptional writer. Ah true love, some of us are really lucky to find and hold on to it as revealed in this remarkable story.

I look forward to reading and re-reading more contributions from this gifted writer. - aj - Nov-25-2008   

I was completely captivated by this incredibly well written story. The author writes these characters so vividly, I hated to see the story end. Really hope to read more from this gifted author. - Ginger - Nov-26-2008   

What a great read. Great characters and of course a great story line. I definitelt recommend this to everyone. I couldn't put it down til I was done. Thank you. - Tracey - Nov-29-2008   

this is a great first story by Jannenn. Though told from the first person, the integraty and depth of the characters is maintained. - rleef - Dec-01-2008   

Touching, brilliant, and well written. I was not prepared for what I stumbled upon. Thank you so much Janneen. - Jenner8 - Jun-03-2010   

Wonderful story by a fantastic author. I've enjoyed every story she's shared with us. Thank you. Highly recommended - Anonymous - Aug-31-2010   

Well written, definitely keeps your attention. I'm glad I found it. - MoSeS - Oct-15-2010   

Loved this story. Great job - sassy123 - May-26-2011   

Wow talk about a roller coaster ride. The joy, the angst the anger the love. Just read it! - Wheezie - Jan-04-2012   

captivating story. one of the really good authors here. recommended! - D - Jul-19-2012   

Great story! - Anonymous - May-03-2013   

Excellent read, well crafted and ingenious, enjoyable until the end. - Inema69 - Nov-11-2013   

Amazing story.I started this story around 11 pm and finished at exactly 4:32 am...I have no regrets. >.< - Hannah - Nov-25-2013   

Another gem. Unique storyline with underlying tension and mystery. I loved the characters. - Samantha - Mar-06-2015   

J Brownell is a very talented author. Don't miss this. She can absolutely write a good story. - ash K - Apr-15-2015   

Well Done! Extremely well done. This is one you don't want to miss. - Carolyn - Sep-30-2016   

Wonderful! - Anonymous - Oct-03-2016   

Simply the best "turbolift" story Ive come across. Funny in parts ironic in others. How did she make a story with such a simple plot so cohesive??? - Anonymous - Dec-31-2007   

Short and sweet with an edge of spice that is familiar to anyone with a healthy fantasy! I enjoyed this and might enjoy it again in my dreams later. My thanks. - Dg - Feb-01-2008   

Great PWP turbolift story - Anonymous - Mar-11-2008   

Im not a hufe fan of turbo-lift stories. But for some reason I keep coming back to this one. It sticks in your head. I love the compromising positions this author can put our heroines in. I think all turbo lift stories should be written this way!!!! - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

The best turbolift story I have read to date. Read it and see why. - linda aka cygirl1 - May-06-2008   

A wonderful, fun, sexy and well written PWP from an exceptional bard. Hot stuff in a damaged turbolift that is as expected from this author, very well characterised. - XV - May-11-2008   

PWP! Very hot... loved it - Lynne - May-15-2008   

You will need a glass of ice water while you read. And I think there is a nice story with this. I'd love to see some follow up.... - Jenni - May-15-2008   

WOW!! Make sure you have a glass of water. - ceeking - May-15-2008   

i love your j/7 storys
keep up the good work - Anonymous - May-18-2008   

Whew! Gosh! Another well written short by you. GURL, but you can do the spice scenes. - Anonymous - Jun-01-2008   

Best Turbo-Lift story ever! - Anonymous - Aug-17-2008   

Very clever and artfully written PWP. It will definitely give you a lift. - Georgia - Jul-13-2010   

You strike me as a person that lives in a fantasy world! You need to go work out, get outside more. The stories you write indicate to me that you have some real self esteem issues. Get a life sweetheart. - Anonymous - Sep-29-2010   

Groan!!!!! That was sublime. Anyone discovering this in 2013 read it! Do not pass it by. - Anonymous - Oct-09-2013   

I found this story by accident and am I ever pleased that I did. Ive been a fan of ds9 forever and have never found a fanfic so refreshingly well written. This author knows that even in darkness there can be a hint of light. I recommend that everyone read this startling and slightly disturbing tale. - Anonymous - Dec-31-2007   

One of my favorite all time works by this author. And definately a must read for any ds9 fan! Filled with humor even in darkness this is a great look at how ds9 should have been written - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

I'm not sure if I liked this well written story or not since I didn't like the parings, but it certainly made me look at DS9 in a different light!! DAx did a great job of capturing the essence of Kira, Odo and Dax. DS9 fans should not miss this one. - Stacia - Apr-26-2013   

I was with this story from the very beginning. A great read - very enjoyable! - Anonymous - Dec-01-2007   

I too followed this story from the very beginning. I know Ms Pritekel doesn't do sequels, but this is one that just begs for more!!! Don't miss it. It'll make you laugh and make you cry and keep you involved until the very last word. - Akiela Xal - Dec-04-2007   

Lot's of clap, clap, clapping for this story. Great story from beginning to end. Another super story from a great storyteller. - Pammmy - Dec-05-2007   

At first was hard to get into, but once I got past a few pages, came out to be a good read. - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

Great story.. Though I have noticed a bit of a trend with this author.. everything happens years after the charachters meet. - Brutal - May-28-2009   

a beautiful story from a very talented writer. the story just touches your soul. - Anonymous - May-28-2010   

Another great story by Pritekel. I've enjoyed everything that she has shared on this site. She's the master for slowly building the romance with lot's of tortured, angsty pasts. But, the endings are always sweet. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-15-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. Great job - sassy123 - Jan-22-2011   

Nicely done!! Great from start to finish. - Druid - Mar-19-2011   

i simply hate the question "if you've never been with someone of the opposite sex, then how can you know you're gay?".. i loved the author's answer to that question.. it had me laughing out loud just imagining someone's facial expression when hearing that answer.. and that is the beauty of this author's skill in writing: she doesn't just tell a story, but she sucks you into it through the settings, dialogues, characters and emotions.. you become a part of the stories.. - xtra dog - Jan-05-2012   

wow...what an incredible story. This bard knows how to bring you to the wedge of crying and laughing with just a few lines. - braniac - Jan-14-2012   

wow!! Just when you think "how different can this one be"...it is original and so well written. The characters and story just pull you in. Very satisfying and entertaining. Kim's stories stay with me for days and days - michele - Mar-09-2012   

Another incredible story. Very well written and highly enjoyable to read. - Niyah - Feb-07-2013   

Loved this story, just when you think it's over, bam something to keep it going. I was rather disappointed when it ended... cuz I wanted more! - Stardawn - Feb-16-2013   

please for once just write a normal story that goes straight forward, was enjoying the book until it went into a warped unnecessary world....that just makes it exhausting! - pleaseforonce!! - Sep-02-2015   

what an incredible piece of literature! Engaging, thoughtful and full of full of life's foibles. it's no fairy tale, but i'll take it. more please!!! - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

great story!!!! A must read - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

What a story! Can't wait for more of these characters. - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

Wow what a good read lets hope for a sequel. Highly reccommend. - Shaz - Aug-19-2008   

Great read...grab a blanket, cup of coffee and be prepared for a great ride! - Norah S - Aug-19-2008   

I really liked it... it certainly opened my eyes to some things. I am waiting for more from this author. - FL Reader - Aug-19-2008   

Awesome and really touch all of us who have members of our families serving faithfully with silent hearts. A sequel must follow this work - xenamary - Aug-19-2008   

That was amazing. Absolutely, undeniably amazing. - Jaydon - Aug-20-2008   

WOW....what a great story. Hope to see more. - Anonymous - Aug-21-2008   

Lynette Mae is a wonderful original story teller. I really enjoyed the suspense and not knowing what would happen next. She also creates likeable characters with depth. She has clearly set the stage for more to come and as a new fan I will be waiting. Cheers! - Kali - Aug-21-2008   

I really enjoyed the story. Highly recommeded you read this story. - Leslie - Aug-21-2008   

This is an awesome read. Could'nt put it down. Writer sure has a talent for true to life purpose and sensitivity. Hope there is a sequel. Please! Thanks for sharing your talents. - the 2P's - Aug-22-2008   

Lynette has told a good story giving us insight into the lives of those gays and lesbians who serve and the witchhunts they must endure to do so. Thank you. - Lee - Aug-23-2008   

Loved your story, full of love, life and touched me! Thank you =) - Aisha - Aug-26-2008   

fantastic

more please - Anonymous - Aug-27-2008   

Awesome story. loved it. Gotta tie up that open ending in a sequel though! - Anonymous - Aug-28-2008   

This is a MUST read! Ms Mae took a storyline begging to be told and created a fantastic story that will leave you scrambling to feed this new Bard! - jls - Aug-31-2008   

This is a great story. I totally enjoyed her writting.
I'm very much looking forward to a sequal!!!!!! - Beth - Sep-12-2008   

Excellent story! Could not put it down, can not wait until the sequel! Highly recommended. - R.M - Sep-14-2008   

The content of this story reveals a great deal of truisms bout the American military system. Ms. Mae provides the readers with a believable story, realistic characters a a great romance for VERY good measure. This is exceptional stuff and a must read! - aj - Sep-16-2008   

OMG!! This was absolutely incredible.. a must read for everyone! - Faithnlove - Oct-05-2008   

Very provocative and well thought out. What a great story! - MaiLover - Oct-05-2008   

Very provocative and creative. What a great story! - MaiLover - Oct-05-2008   

Once I started, I couldn't stop reading. This captured everything you would want and more! Highly recommend - love2love - Oct-05-2008   

Exceptionally well written ..once you get into reading it, there's no stopping until finish.. - Anonymous - Oct-07-2008   

Wow! What a great story. Very well written and the characters are intriguing and real. I can't wait to read the next story! - Stephanie - Oct-11-2008   

This story rocks. I feel like I actually know the characters!! Very good story line and kept my attention throughout the whole read, didn't want to stop!! Where's the sequel?? - Anonymous - Oct-20-2008   

very well written story, can't wait for the sequel. - Anonymous - Nov-06-2008   

Loved this story cant wait for more. - Anonymous - Nov-06-2008   

Very passionate...and well written - Anonymous - Nov-15-2008   

Thanks for writting this story. I was in the Army during them years serving overseas and we did not trust everyone, we were scare every day. A few of my friends know first hand, what CID could do some spent some time in Leavenworth. Others I knew were dishonably discharged for loving someone. It is sad to this day, that CID was only interested in hurting people for caring and loving someone. The wold has change some my hope is that will change some more. Your story was great looking forward to your next part. Thanks from the bottom of my heart. - Manoli - Dec-07-2008   

Loved the story Lynette. Now get it published so I can add it to my library. - LTJ - Jan-19-2009   

OHMYGOD!! you must read it! Great story. From Russia - G8B0BL >1O70B5;L=> 2A54>;65=85*)) - now your fan)) - Nov-10-2009   

Story is gone. is link broken or was it removed????? [Editor's Note: The story has been published. 9-23-2010] - cpo - Sep-20-2010   

Well written, fantastic story. I cried and laughed my way through it, and felt anger, disgust, anguish, the whole range of emotions, this book totally pulled me in. I will be constantly on the lookout for more from Lynette Mae. - Angela - Oct-31-2011   

I read this story more than one and truly enjoyed it.It really touches on the human experience of true love, loss, rebirth and new life with a touch of understanding and hope for tomorrow. Awesome reading. Truly worth to read and enjoy. - xenamary - Sep-03-2009   

VERY NICE...GIVE IT A TRY - Anonymous - Sep-04-2009   

The best short story i ever read.. my only regret is.. Its not a movie!! :( - Nien aka David - Sep-05-2009   

This is a wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it and the ending was so beautifully put together. Great job! - Lady D - Sep-08-2009   

muajaja i like it - Viridiana - Sep-08-2009   

Beautiful. One of the better stories I've read. - Anonymous - Sep-10-2009   

a very nice story! - BlueButterfly - Nov-12-2009   

a very well thought out story, that will ring you through every emotion known to humankind. if you dont read it then you are missing out on a beautifull story of life, death and love everlasting. - lonevoice89 - Mar-12-2010   

Excellent story!! The storyline is just beautiful - Traveller - Mar-13-2010   

beautifully written, really touching - joey - Dec-14-2010   

A new twist to a great story. Well worth reading, kept my interest throughout. Well done....take the time to read this little gem!
- Gemmagirl - Jan-07-2011   

well written story.. kind of gives a new meaning to eternal love.. - xtra dog - Jul-03-2011   

Great story! - Anonymous - Aug-10-2011   

Cela me fait penser à colorful
magnifique
Beautiful - réveuse - Dec-16-2015   

Intereting, and an enjoyable read. - Betty - Dec 30th, 2002   

I don't think the above comment does justice for Ella Quince. She is an amazing writer, and I personally LOVE 'Deja.' She has a great grasp on the characters, the plot is intriguing, and the one thing i love is that she so descriptive. Ella is one of the best fanfiction writers on the net. - Anonymous - Jan 8th, 2003   

The link to De Ja Vu All Over Again is actually to a different story (A Taste of De Ja Vu), so I'm not sure which one the first comment was meant for. I do know, though, that Ella Quince is by far one of the best X:WP writers out there. Her stories, such as this one, have intelligent and original plots, clever dialogue, humor, and are just a sheer pleasure to read. If I could have only five X:WP writers' works on a desert island, Ella Quince would be one of them. - Della - Jan 9th, 2003   

cute, short, and sweet story. interesting and funny dialogue. overall great read - Anonymous - Mar 3rd, 2005   

It' s cute and very fanny!! - Rosa - Dec-27-2010   

well-written sweet and charming story.

(broken link, though. found it at http://ellaquince.org/dejavu.asp) - kc - Apr-18-2011   

You can tell how old a fandom is when the links start to bite the dust. :(

Great story though.

https://web.archive.org/web/20100512181244/http://www.gabwhacker.com/xwp/quince/dejavu.asp - Link Fixer - Jan-16-2016   

This is fabulous. All Enginerd's work is a joy but this is a particular favourite. Gabriele's family are hilarious and Xena and Gabrielle's characters are on the mark. I thoroughly recommend you read all Enginerd's work. - Elaine - Jan-31-2008   

This is one the earliest Xena stories is very good. Enginerd is not only a good writer but a very funny writer. She has a sly sense of humor and is a great story teller. Read this stor and then go on and read em'all. - CherylA - Jan-31-2008   

A classic! - Avidreader276570 - Feb-09-2008   

A true classic, and enjoyable read - Callisto - Feb-10-2008   

This story is great. Humor, action, romance, and .... Amazons! How can you go wrong?? - Fran - Aug-04-2010   

I really love this story. Great job - sassy123 - Sep-20-2010   

I really enjoyed this story and the modern day Xena characters all playing together in Chicago. The relationship between our Uber X & G was beautiful. Must say, the vision of leather did get my heart racing! - Corbeau's Voyager - Oct 1st, 2003   

Wow! What a story! Did I say 'wow'? One of the all time great uber Xena stories. LN James really delivers as she always does. Great writer. - Karon Reiter - Feb 20th, 2005   

Here's a current link:
http://www.squonk.net/users/lnjames/CHICAGO1.htm

- purplehawke - Jul-03-2006   

Nice story. Atractive caracters, good lines, good plot.
Very, very readable... - Mile D'Cast - Apr-26-2007   

I highly recommend this story. It had me up late reading it and I had to survive on 4 hrs sleep today...well worth it!!! I hope to see more work from this talented author. - JC - Apr-26-2007   

1 of the BEST ever written. If you haven't read this fantastic story - what are you waiting for??? - Anonymous - Dec-16-2007   

That was fun- it looks like it is set up to have a sequel. Anyone know if that was ever written? - Anonymous - Oct-26-2008   

Wow. I usually don't like uber. But this was excellent! L.N. really sucked me into the story.
How can I read the sequel "Entire"? I can't seem to find it anywhere... - rnrgirl - Feb-01-2009   

Sequel "Entire" can be found here http://web.archive.org/web/20010418014336/www.squonk.net/users/lnjames/ENTIRE.htm

Lat update was in 2001 though so its not finished. Anyone know what happen to the author? - Anonymous - Oct-27-2009   

I really enjoyed this story. Very well written. - sassy123 - Jan-11-2011   

Enjoyed this!! It seems to set up a sequel. Anyone know if that exists? - Anonymous - Oct-13-2016   

When I began reading Xena fan fiction there was one name that kept popping up in the writers' 'thank yous': Kamouraskan. So I naturally checked out the bard and started reading everything. This was the funniest vignette I ever read, still is. Delicious humor that bears reading over and over again. Another indication of the versatility of this writer. - abardreader - Jun-28-2008   

I keep coming back to this Bards work...and this is the reason why. Hysterical, saucy, and well written. Love it! - msprism - Jun-30-2008   

OMG this is too funny, I swear I dont know where she comes up with her stuff, But its great!! Keep em coming Kam. - icelover - Jul-29-2008   

LMAO, the theme would have made an hillarious episode. - brighteyez - Jul-30-2008   

loved it. brilliant. - msprism - Aug-15-2009   

that was really funny.. - xtra dog - Nov-12-2011   

FANTASTIC!!! I read it without pause following Valiant Heart. Moving on to the next chapter now...READ IT!!! - JC - Feb-10-2009   

One of the best fics I`ve read ! - Anonymous - Feb-14-2009   

I've become addicted to this series and I'm only two stories in. Highest recommendation! - Jumper - Jun-06-2009   

Awesome series!! I'm totally addicted! - Anonymous - Oct-23-2009   

New Life, Turning Tides and Second Son (not finished) are well written by this author. I like what A.K. Naten does with erotica in these three. Could limit some of the 'head talking' that each character gives to 'tell' us what they're thinking etc in Turning Tides...but it did keep me reading until finished. I think this will be a book Aug2005 according to A.K.N. page. I love stories that have the X character as she is in these pieces...gender straddling/dominance. S. Anne Gardner's great writing also comes to mind for strong X character's not to mention intriquing plots. - Anonymous - Jan 12th, 2005   

This was good. I'm not really a fan of a butch man like Uber X but this worked. Some good H/C. - Amanda - Sep-02-2008   

Wasn't sure if i'd like this story, but it is good - nay, VERY good. Good descriptions, and it felt pretty realistic - no rushing into things, and no magical miracles that can ruin an 'authentic' feel. Would like to see more from this little-known author. - Anonymous - Sep-05-2008   

Very sweet story. Interested plot...gave me alot to think about...absolutely loved the ending!!! - BlueButterfly - Aug-09-2009   

It all begins with that one look doesn't it. This is a really nice story. - Hot Tamale - Aug-17-2009   

missing link? [Editor's Note: I just tried it, and it works fine for me. 9-2-2009] - royukki - Aug-28-2009   

Wonderful! Love triumphs over adversity. - Anonymous - Sep-08-2009   

A good love story that's well worth taking the time to read. I really enjoyed it a lot. I would highly recommend taking the time to read it. I give it and author Naten a big thumbs up. - uber goober - Oct-12-2009   

This is a very well written story. I enjoyed watching their relationship unfold. Very nice:-) - Lyn B - May-16-2011   

nice enough read.. - Anonymous - May-27-2011   

Another great story. Great job - sassy123 - May-30-2011   

Bravo!!! - Anonymous - Aug-24-2011   

Wow, so many emotions and a glimpse of what life was like for a lot of women in this period piece. For sure this isn't for everyone (pay attention to the disclaimers) but it provides a nice counterpoint and healthy dose of realism in the fanfic world. - Stacia - Feb-19-2014   

Possibly her best... - Autolickis - Feb 10th, 2004   

truly a wordsmith. written images that pull emotions, deep and dark. a different kind of read. - Anonymous - Aug-02-2007   

Amazing, just like the rest of her work - d - Oct-03-2007   

This story will draw you in with beautiful language and crush your heart with its tragedy. - poppyflame - Jun-16-2008   

Jesus, that was intense. Really great read! - JettBlk - Feb-09-2010   

This was a really well written, intense story. I highly suggest it to anyone who is looking for a great read but doesn't require bunnies and rainbows. - Kristen - Feb-11-2010   

ARGH!!! why must u torture us!!! please please please put the last part up! im dying here!!! awesome story, really tugs the heart strings... and some other regions! :PBrilliant, simply brilliant. - Blueyez` - May 5th, 2005   

She's back and with a whole new set of characters to love and of course a couple to love to hate! R. Nolan's new story is well worth a read. Both main characters are strong women in their own right and the kids were just adorable. Any chance of seeing more of these lovely ladies? - Kelly - May 7th, 2005   

RNolan never disappoints! Her new characters are wonderfully written. The women's love and their struggle to overcome life's obsticles is a great read. I'm always a sucker for a story that includes kids and this one does not dissapoint! Great work, I look forward to anything else RNolan writes. - Littlespit - May 9th, 2005   

Double Trouble is a very lovely and wonderfully romantic story. I loved it. It is a 'must' read for everyone and since it was #1... many others agree. Thanks for such a wonderful story... keep writing! - GSB - May 15th, 2005   

This is what a romance story should be. R.Nolan knows how to to make you care about the characters and the trials and tribulations any new romace faces. Highest recommendation, read this story...you won't be sorry! - Dana - Jun 13th, 2005   

Great story! Read it and enjoy! - cam - May-31-2006   

Double Trouble is on my 'read and read again' list. It is a wonderful, romantic story that tugs at the heartstrings as well as tickles the funny bone. - Victoria - Jun-29-2006   

Wow this story is amazing. I didn't want it to end, it is so damn good. Its one of those stories that leaves you thinking about it well after you have finished reading it. I think I'm in love !!!!!! - sarah - Jul-27-2006   

This story completely blew me away. A lead I could relate to and a fun little mystery. I hope this isn't the last we're gonna see of these two... - Anonymous - May-15-2006   

I like AngelRad's writing style. This is very pleasant to read, it has an easy delightful flow to it. My only criticism is I would have like more interaction between the two main characters. Otherwise a really good tale. - Sai - May-31-2006   

another fantastic story by Angelrad. love getting lost in her work. this is excellent. - msprism - Apr-28-2007   

I read "Charlotte Bell" and went on a search for this author. She's got style, she's got pizzaa, and you have to read her stuff. One of the best around. - justacitygirl - Jun-02-2008   

Interesting mystery. - 1234 - Oct-05-2009   

I really liked this tale by Angelrad. I think it is one of my favorite stories that was written by this author. - uber goober - Mar-23-2010   

What a great story. Nice job - sassy123 - Oct-15-2011   

Great read! A reseach Dr. and a Surgeon butt heads and then get together. Well written, with a wonderful story line. - BeckeK - Feb-10-2007   

FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!! cant wait for the next one! - Blueyez - Feb-11-2007   

Grrrreat story!
Hope to read more from this author! - lyneX - Feb-14-2007   

Well Done! I'd love to see more of these two characters. - Anonymous - Feb-16-2007   

This story is great. The concept was one I haven't seen explored. A must read!2-17-2007 - xax - Feb-17-2007   

Really enjoyed this and looking forward to reading more from Revan in the 'near' future. - Sai - Feb-20-2007   

Fantastic story with great characters that was addictive to read. I hope that we see more from this author and recommend it to anyone looking for a good read. - Windstar - Feb-24-2007   

You should definitely READ this one. Great story, fun characters, and drama. Looking forward to more from this author. - cam - Mar-24-2007   

I really enjoyed this...nicely done! Hope to see more from this great author!! - JC - Jul-31-2008   

Great characters. I hope to see more from this author. - Brighteyez - Sep-12-2008   

Loved the tension between Bryn and Dana. Exciting med cases. Would love to read more about our two lovely doctors! - Chess - Oct-05-2009   

i stayed up at late as i could but succumbed to sleep (the spirit is willing, but the body is weak). no need to say that i finished this beautiful story as soon as i could the next day. - kc - Sep-05-2010   

A great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Sep-23-2010   

Very cute story. Fun and entertaining. Well worth a read. - Anonymous - Oct-02-2010   

A really great story. Very well written. - sassy123 - Oct-18-2010   

Great story! - pegi - Jan-11-2011   

Not sure how I missed this one, but I am thrilled to have found it now. Great building of characters! - Anonymous - Jan-25-2011   

I went to bed at 5am finishing this lovely fiction in one sitting. That definitely says something about the quality of this work! you must read it! - Anonymous - Feb-26-2011   

I agree with the other reviewer...I went to bed at 7am because I couldn't put it down, trust me you won't! Well written and complex characters with a very well detailed plot. - Anonymous - Feb-27-2011   

this is one good heartwrenching story. Revan should write more - zieta - Mar-03-2011   

Well written story put you through all your emotions. Pleas writ another story. - Kate - Mar-05-2011   

Great read, look forward to more from this author, - Lizzie - Mar-12-2011   

I found this one riveting and very pleasant to read. The characters are OK, more than that actually ^^ They're fun, smart and have strong personnalities. The plot has a good rythm, maybe things go a little too fast sometimes, but the equilibrium is very hard to find. This one was a heck of a first story this bard did a very good job. - yuka - Mar-25-2011   

What an incredibly well written story. I could read this 10 more times and still not get sick of it. - celticmusicrocks - May-01-2011   

I really enjoyed this story and sorry not to see any more from this bard - Anonymous - Jun-26-2011   

fantastic story..great characters..well done - soopi - May-05-2012   

This was wonderful... well-written with well-developed characters. Thank you! - Anonymous - Feb-11-2013   

Good and fast paced story ... I liked the characters and their interaction! - Ricky - Nov-05-2013   

This story is just spectacular. I love the tension and imagery. What a different angle this Author provides in this story. - Anonymous - Dec-31-2007   

Oh My! The love scenes are certainly stimulating. Good story! - bren - May-03-2008   

Just an awesome idea! Im not an author but I have to think that this would be a hard way to write a story. But the results are worth it! One of my top faves! Read it and see why!! - Anonymous - May-04-2008   

This is quality writing at its best. I loved the idea and each scene is so eloquent. An excellent read. - Lynne - May-15-2008   

Meets the challenge. Amazing! - ceeking - May-15-2008   

Definitely more, more, more ... please. - Georgia - Dec-02-2007   

You're killing me with the short posts! This Vignette has the potential to be a great novel. Can't wait for more parts. - Jude - Dec-03-2007   

Please, please, more. - Anonymous - Dec-07-2007   

OMG!! I can't wait to know what happens next! Well done! - Kaia - Dec-10-2007   

wheee! Quite a ride. Please keep the story going... - Michelle - Dec-15-2007   

Pleasant reading. - yuka - Jun-14-2009   

ahh, the joys and dangers of the fast lane.. - xtra dog - Feb-03-2013   

this is sooo good.. i want some more! more! more! more! - Anonymous - Jan-16-2014   

beautiful story, and very well written... I'd very much like to read more from this author. - Anonymous - Jun-25-2008   

Great story. There is a sequel i found on another site(cant remember where) but it was not finished. - leia - Jun-25-2008   

good story, well written and entertaining. read this one, you'll be glad you did. - Anonymous - Jun-26-2008   

This is a great read and does have a small sequel which can be found at: http://www.ausxip.com/fanfic9/thedayafter1.html [Editor's Note: Story is listed here as The Day After.] - Anonymous - Jun-26-2008   

a really good read, well done .. as is the completed sequel - Anonymous - Jun-30-2008   

Brilliant! Read it! - Anonymous - Jul-02-2008   

I never get tired of reading this one. I just need to get around to reading the sequel now. - Hillsys Stalker - Jul-07-2008   

It's really good, great even. Don't miss this story.
Can say Uber or what? :-) Love it - Ixzie - Jul-07-2008   

Wonderfully written story. The characters are quite easy to fall in love with and the intricate plot made it a page turner that I stayed up til three thirty in the morning to finish. So in conclusion, Awesome. - nicole938 - Jul-16-2009   

This story was beautiful - Anonymous - Nov-20-2009   

A really great story. good job. - sassy123 - Sep-23-2010   

College student Jennifer stumbles upon a project that propels her into the dangerous world of gangs. She meets ex gang leader Resa and their lives are fused together through some unexpected circumstances. The tale of their journey is very well written and a delight to follow. The characters and plot are well thought out and are executed with a steady pace and great dialogue. I thoroughly enjoyed this and it's excellent (but shorter) sequel 'The Day After'. I just wish this author had penned some more fiction as I would be very interested in reading it. Highly recommended. - Sai - Oct-13-2010   

I love this histori. Y amo a Resa tambien. - Rodson - Dec-27-2010   

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A heart-felt story with magnificent characters, - Jennie - Jul-10-2013   

Resa is a must read! This tale was a roller coaster ride of emotion and suspense that truly delivered everything I could have asked for in a love story. It is a standout among the rest. - Ellie - Feb-13-2015   

An excellent story that is very exciting. I encourage all to enjoy this one. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2015   

Incredible tale! I couldn't stop reading! - Anonymous - Feb-12-2016   

Highly recommend. Looking for more! - shelby211 - May-27-2008   

Loved it! Can't wait for more.... - Anonymous - May-27-2008   

PLEASE TELL ME THAT THERE IS GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - May-27-2008   

AMAZING!!! Please Write A Sqeuel!!! LOVED IT!!! - Jynx - May-27-2008   

Looking for the continuation of this story! - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

**** Spoiler Warning **** the moment i started this story i knew i'd not just like it but love it! and i did! just wish there were more of it n not have such an abrupt ending... was that a spoiler?? hmmm i guess i'm gonna just click yes on spoiler justtttttt in case - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

I loved it. It was really good. I recommend it to everyone - tinylynae77 - May-28-2008   

The ending left me wanting more. I love the characters and the story is pretty cool. Totally want a sequel! Please continue, and soon! - Anonymous - May-29-2008   

This was fantastic. You so need a sequel. - Peewee - May-29-2008   

Wonderful story! Eagerly waiting the sequel to this story! - Anonymous - May-29-2008   

This story was awesome, please give us a sequel!!!!!!!!!! - jackie - May-29-2008   

Woo wow, U heard 'em, u gotta write a sequel or else there will be some unhappy readers ! :P Like everyone has said after reading this, I'm gonna say it too: I LOVE IT ! And I'm gonna join ''We want a sequel'' group so beware. U just had to leave us hanging for more. :( - Bitazh - May-30-2008   

WOW fantastic
wonderful read
sequel is needed please
- Anonymous - May-30-2008   

I lovedt. Please don't let it end there! Neeed more please. Thank You. - Manoli - May-30-2008   

Amazing story!!!!! Hopefully there will be more. From the looks of all the other comments I would think that a sequel is a must. - Nancy - May-30-2008   

Great story! Highly recommend! - Anonymous - Jun-01-2008   

Loved it! Please do a sequel and soon. - Elliot - Jun-02-2008   

Wonderful story please there has to be more. Please? - Anonymous - Jun-03-2008   

I'll add my 2 cents here as well. This is not only good, it's WONDERFUL. How long before the next installment? - Sue - Jun-03-2008   

Awesome! Can't wait for the sequel! - Anonymous - Jun-03-2008   

It's a wonderfull story, beatifully written and with hign emotional content, for me at least... Read it... A sequel please!!! - Monik - Jun-04-2008   

Excellent. It has definately become one of my favorites. Sequel please. - Jynaki - Jun-05-2008   

Great story. I've read it twice already.... please, a sequel is a must. Thanks. - Manoli - Jun-13-2008   

Three words: BRILLIANT, SIMPLY BRILLIANT!! - Anonymous - Aug-22-2008   

Great story! PLEASE let there be a sequel!!! - Anonymous - Jan-30-2009   

This story is excellent!!!! - Bkwrmchar - Aug-14-2010   

That was a great story and a wonderful start to the series. I absolutely loved it. - uber goober - Apr-06-2011   

Ladies...this story is wonderful...love...romance...sex...plot
all the things that make for a excellent read...badsquirrel is my (I'm possessive) writer meaning I am her beta reader...and very proud of it...she is not only a superb writer, but a good friend...I would not rave about this story if it didn't deserve the accolades...I predict she will have another number 1 on her hands...do not let me be wrong...READ THIS...you can thank me later ...btw...I gave her an 8 on the spice index because I want her to put more sex in her stories...grin... - QMBG - Jul-15-2008   

What can I say that QMBG did not?? It is a great story, with only one major fault.... it ended!!! I could see this story going on for another couple hundred pages! Keep up the great work BS( i really mean badsquirrel, nothing else really!!)You really need to write faster, so I can read more!
Thank you QMBG for helping badsquirrel turn out a great read!
P.S. Was there enough more sex for you??? - Nancy - Jul-15-2008   

Once again, great stuff all around. Two thumbs way up! - Arassar - Jul-15-2008   

I have been waiting for what seems like FOREVER for my favorite Squirrel's new story, and it was worth it. This is a great one, and I can't wait for the next. Thanks BadSquirrel YOU ROCK - Anonymous - Jul-15-2008   

Couldn't stop reading until "The End". Great story. Loved it! Thank you :) - Anonymous - Jul-15-2008   

Yet another brilliant one by BadSquirrel! I was totally captivated and drawn into the story, so much so, that when I got to the end I felt extremely sad there wasn't more. This story is moving to the top of my list of favourites. I definitely recommend it and can't wait to see what's next. - Dogz - Jul-16-2008   

Great stuff, badsquirrel, great story, wonderful characters (everyone should have a Maggie in their life) and a cute little cameo with the Edgewater crew at the end - now where's that sequal! - dinasbran - Jul-16-2008   

Another great story. Ended up reading it in one sitting. Really liked the tie in with Edgewater. So when do we get the sequel...LOL - Lee - Jul-16-2008   

Extremely well written story, I hated for it to end. I can't wait for the next story this wonderful Bard puts out, because she knows how to do it right. She is going to be one of the best. - Netta - Jul-16-2008   

Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.
Have I mentioned that this story is awesome?! Thanks for sharing Squirrel, it was impossible to put down. - Otter - Jul-17-2008   

That was FANTASTIC. Once I started reading it I had to keep going. I was actually anxious when I clicked on the link for the last part and saw the word 'Epilouge', I just didn't want the story to end. And I totally agree with the other recommendations,please, please, please post a sequel very soon, I just have to know what comes next and how much more they explore of their relationship. - Anonymous - Jul-17-2008   

You've done it again...OUTSTANDING!!!
When I'm looking for something to read and I pass by something that has BDSM as a theme, I usually keep looking. Not because I have anything against it -- other things to read about just usually interest me more. Well, I knew better than to consider for one second that there would be anything out there more interesting to read and I wasn't disappointed. Far from it. The same as with all of BadSquirrel's stories, the characters and their thoughts and emotions are incredibly funny and real and touching, and the way the story itself is told keeps the reader totally engrossed -- all the way to the end. I can't wait for the next story. - Sthpaw30 - Jul-17-2008   

You are by far my favourite author...please don't make me wait so long for your next story - Anonymous - Jul-17-2008   

again, you wrote another fantastic story. can't wait for more. - SP - Jul-17-2008   

Oh, this story ROCKS!! The characters are very well done, the stroyline is fascinating, the whole thing is just amazing! I can't wait to see if there's gonna be a follow on to this. Thanks for sharing this story with us! - Gwen - Jul-18-2008   

Another WONDERFUL story! You are one of the greatest writers out there right now! Just like all your other stories, this one has depth, heart, and beautiful character studies. You should be a published author! Keep writing, Please! - Rose - Jul-18-2008   

Great story! Had me cracking up all over the place. The big reveal? EFFING HILARIOUS!...I feel greedy for saying this but I definitely want more. BadSquirrel...you Rock and you Roll. - wrldpece - Jul-18-2008   

A totally awesome story! It just needs one thing, a SEQUEL!!! BadSquirrel, you do totally rock! - kymba - Jul-18-2008   

Wonderful!!! I thoroughly recommend this tale, it drew me in from the first line and the last line left me wanting more! Thank you, loved it! - Loll - Jul-19-2008   

BadSquirrel you are the cause of the dark circles under
my eyes.I stayed up all night reading this story,it was
soooo good I could not stop til I finished it, then I
was sad it ended. There needs to be a sequel.This is just
my opinion,but u r one my favorite writers. I highly
recommend this and every other story you've written.
OUTSTANDING! - DAB45 - Jul-20-2008   

Wow! As usual I am in awe! This should be on everyones must read list! Thank you BadSquirrel! - Jenner - Jul-20-2008   

Such a well written story, never read BDSM before, thought it violent, this has opened my eyes lol. Jordon is so sweet, oh how i wish. Thank you Bad Squirrel for sharing. [cant believe you are still looking. hehe........] - Lizzielee - Jul-20-2008   

The plot is well executed and the character development is superb. You'd be a fool not to read this gem. - Ryan - Jul-20-2008   

please, please, please make a sequel. I love this storyline. PLEASE> - F_L_J - Jul-21-2008   

Yet another awesome story from an incredible author. I will echo the comments above when I say "Sequel!" - Anonymous - Jul-21-2008   

A truly talented writer. I highly recommend reading this story. - Anonymous - Jul-22-2008   

spicy! - Anonymous - Jul-22-2008   

Read it. You will not regret it. Okay, when I first read the disclaimers and content section and saw that the story involved BDSM I was a bit reluctant. I am so not into pain, dominance or bondage. Call me squemish. I kept reading because everyone else seemed to be so taken with this story and I didn't want to miss something great. So, I read on, and on...and on. I loved this story. Do not let preconceptions stop you as I almost did. BadSquirrel did a wonderful job telling her story without once making me turn away, or squeezing my legs together. - Anonymous - Jul-23-2008   

An unusual and quite entertaining story. I'd love to see a sequel with Jordon/Sarah and Kelly/Hannah! That would be amaaazing. - cap - Jul-23-2008   

outstanding, beautiful story! - Kat - Jul-24-2008   

Love all your stories, but this one just begs for a sequel. And with all the threads you left hanging I can't imagine you aren't tirelessly working on one for all your devoted fans; the vacation, finding a new place, moving everyone, new job, Hannah&Kelly, FREDDIE and the new DOG!! Thanks for a great story and wonderful characters. - Titan - Jul-24-2008   

I've read all of the comments on here and decided to read it. All I can say is. . . WOW. It made me see a whole different side to a lot of things. You won't be disappointed if you read this. I'll bet you'll too would look at things differently. - Anonymous - Jul-24-2008   

Well developed characters with witty, intelligent dialogue. Thoroughly engaging. - Anonymous - Jul-28-2008   

excellent - a very good read - Anonymous - Jul-29-2008   

Loved it, Great characters,very touching but also funny.
Would love to See more of them! - iceflamesburn - Jul-30-2008   

Two thumbs way up. I have loved every story written by BadSquirrel, and would highly recommend them to everyone. - Jules - Jul-31-2008   

Great, just the ending was a bit abrupt. Seems like an in-joke about another story. So now I *have* to read all the other stories of the author, twist my arm will ya :-). - Anonymous - Jul-31-2008   

This was one HELL of a read. The only bad thing about it was that it ended! I really hope a sequel is in the making. READ IT!! - Bacchuskiller - Jul-31-2008   

Wonderful story! Stayed up very late to read it all but it was worth it. Please keep writing!! - Shelley - Jul-31-2008   

Great story. Thanks, BadSquirrel for giving an full evening of entertainment. This story presents a different slant to the norm and does it well. I hope you plan a sequal, because I'd really like to see how Jorden and Sarah do in their new enviorment. - nljacksn - Jul-31-2008   

What a great story! - jen d - Aug-04-2008   

I've been looking around for a really good, kinda blow me away story and I found it in this. Great read. Hope a sequel will follow soon.
Who's Freddy?? - lyneX - Aug-14-2008   

fantastic brilliant story - Anonymous - Aug-15-2008   

I read this story first and then went back to read the other three in order of writing. I LOVE the way the characters in former stories are brought into the other stories. This tale has it all; love, angst, sex, life and did I mention LOVE? Superior writing at any level. badsquirrel's stories are a MUST READ for anyone who likes to have a sense of completion at the end of a story. I do wish, however, to read more of each of them. - Kaz - Aug-20-2008   

This is one of the best if not the best stories i've ever read it was SOOOOO GOOD - happycricket - Aug-22-2008   

So moving a story, its brilliant, utterley brilliant, but it just ends, this is the first story from this author i have read, i intend to read all of this authors stories. - LuvTigger71 - Sep-02-2008   

Real, honest, beautiful representation of plotty romance - eli - Sep-17-2008   

Wow...wow, wow-ee-wow
I stumbled across BadSquirrel by accident and fell in love.
First with Shine and Maureen..and then along came Robyn and Maryl. Meeting Jordan and Sarah was an incredible ride and I thank you for every moment. Hannah and Kelly were warm in an "aw-shucks" kind of way. This is the first time I've ever recommended a story but this author is SO good I'm gonna go ahead and recommend her NEXT one. Squirrel if you are not being published it's a crime. Kudos to your ever-faithful Beta-reader as well.
Please tell us you have something else in the works? Sequel? New characters? I'll take it!!!! - Tracy - Sep-18-2008   

Sarah and Jordan are great characters. I love how they discover and interact with each other.

Jordan, especially, is amazing. Such deep and complex a character totaly diserves a sequel. It would be shame to leave it to that.

I want to know how their relationship evolves. I want to know how life in Edgewater is for them.

Please give us a sequel ! - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Excellent excellent story with a BDSM flare - Anonymous - Oct-07-2008   

Don't let the theme stop you from reading a truly amazing love story. I've always loved this writer, but she has just topped all tops! I am awe struck with the basic and primal beauty of this story. I really want to move to Edgewater! - shelby - Oct-28-2008   

I have read and enjoyed all of the work BadSquirrel has posted here and I have to say that Dark Side of the Moon is my favorite. The only thing that can make it better would be a sequel. This is definitely one of those stories where I just have to know what happens next. If you haven't read this story you are missing out. I really hope BadSquirrel checks out these comments. Please, please, please be working on a sequel...... - Anonymous - Nov-06-2008   

Oh wow...WOW!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL.

Amazing. - Anonymous - Nov-06-2008   

WOW!!! What an amazing story. i loved it. it kept my attention and had me wishing there was more of it by the end...PLEASE write a sequal to it. - odessa - Nov-15-2008   

This story is absolutley AMAZING! - from germany - Nov-28-2008   

I love it MORE PLEASE - damere - Feb-13-2009   

Rather excellent. A little on the sappy side towards the end, but it was well deserved. Lesbianism, BDSM & genderbending presented in the form of tight and well written language. To ask for more would be plain greedy. I was thoroughly entertained by this story. - Ape - Feb-17-2009   

This story kept me up all night and well into the next morning... This is the first Badsquirrel story I've ever read and this has convinced me to read all of her stories... You are amazing! Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift! - Archer - Feb-23-2009   

3am people, 3am. I could not stop reading. Wonderful story, good characters and spicy. What more can I say. - Marcia - Feb-26-2009   

Like others have said, I couldn't stop reading this story. Really well done. Thanks. - Ginger - Feb-28-2009   

I thought this was a great story! I really enjoyed it. - Anonymous - Feb-28-2009   

WOW!!!!!!! absolutley loved this, 1st time i've read this author and look forward to more. So badly want a sequal talk about left dangling - Debbie - Mar-19-2009   

Excellent! More Please! - Anonymous - Apr-05-2009   

I loved this story. I started it tonight thinking I would read the first part and then go to bed, however I could not stop until it was done. I hope you write a sequel to this. - Tgz87 - Apr-30-2009   

I'm one of those people who don't like to read things twice, but i have read this story many times and am still interested. Well done BadSquirrel, i look forward to reading your other stories. - Anon - May-10-2009   

sweet jesus...that was just yum yum yummy. oh did i say that outloud. well anyways you have so got to read this, but keep an open mind, because some of this stuff is like way out there, or at least i think so. i actually had to research some of it, to see if it was real. but OMG it was awesome. just read it shit. - iheartpickles - Jun-10-2009   

This is one of the most amazing stories I've read in the past year or two. It's smart, funny, heartwarming, informative, tender, sexy... I felt for these characters the whole way through. I wish this was Spinal Tap so I could give this story an 11. - Revolos55 - Jul-25-2009   

Amazing story...I would love a sequel to hear more about Jordan and Sarah (and Maggie!) - Xenasgrrl - Aug-02-2009   

WOW! I LOVE this story! Everything about it! Pleaseee write a sequel!!!!! - Anonymous - Aug-13-2009   

Fabulous story line ... excellent writing ... great author! - Anonymous - Aug-31-2009   

Its just soooo good - happy - Sep-01-2009   

I've always put off reading this story because BDSM stories aren't usually my thing, but this one is different! It's romantic and has angst and I love the chemistry and portrayals of Jordon and Sarah! I would love to read a sequel! I'm so glad I finally read this story! - Anonymous - Sep-19-2009   

One of the Best Stories and Writers I've ever read. Truly hope there will be more from this writer and soon. - Anonymous - Oct-14-2009   

Absolutely love the story. Gave a insight of another kind of world out there. Couldn't stop reading. When the story was finished it felt like something is lost.Hope to have a sequel! - unon - Oct-22-2009   

Very excellent story. . Loved it beginning to end. A very good twist on the S&M lifestyle. - JJ - Oct-31-2009   

I love Edgewater!! Can't wait to read more of the cities residents or soon to be residents! Please keep writing, your stories amaze and touch me. Hope you're working on a new one! - Anonymous - Nov-04-2009   

This a great story,it hooks right from the first paragraph,it would even be better if there was a sequal. - Mut - Jan-17-2010   

Wow, just wow! - Peyton Andrews - Jan-24-2010   

This story is great. The characters are well drawn, believable and just plain likable. I would love to have a sequel. - Sherry - Feb-19-2010   

Different - Great story - Well worth reading!! - CoolNik - Mar-19-2010   

Great story! One of my favorites. BadSquirrel is a truly talented writer. - Anonymous - Mar-29-2010   

A truly enjoyable read !! I had shied away from this story because of the BDSM content but I am so glad I read it. This is the first time I've read on of BadSquirrl's stories. What a truly gifted author. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. Now I have to read your others..... - Anonymous - Apr-07-2010   

ohhhh.... please write a sequel. I feel in love with the characters and would love to follow them along. - Anonymous - Apr-07-2010   

Great story! It made me understand what the appeal of BDSM is for both sides. Please write another and let us know what happens with them and how their relationship evolves! - Kristy - Apr-09-2010   

This is the most intresting story I've ever read. I would indefinetly recomend this. I've read it atleast 6 times and it has yet to get old. - firelarc - Jun-21-2010   

This is the most intresting story I've ever read. I would indefinetly recomend this. I've read it atleast 6 times and it has yet to get old. - firelarc - Jun-21-2010   

PLEASE PLEASE THIS STORY NEEDS A SEQUEL ITS 1 AM AND I FINALLY GOT DONE AND WANT MORE SO PLEASSEEEE - dakota86 - Jun-23-2010   

Well what can I say, that hasn't been said before. I think absolutly nothing ;) This is one of the best stories I have have in a long time and I really would like to see a sequel. - hop-sing - Aug-02-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** I read Rumors first then went straight to this story. Both are incredible stories! I love that you incorporate characters from your other stories into others. I really hope there is a sequel in the works for this story because I am dying to know how everything is going. Who all decided to make the move with them, how they are getting along with the Rumors cast and if there will be grandchildren in the future for Maggie afterall. Please, please, please write a sequel! Please? I fell in love with the characters and I'm dying to read more about them and see what other trials and tribulations they may have to face :) - Marie - Aug-17-2010   

I loved this story and found it a very gentle one for all it's BDSM warnings. - Mina - Aug-23-2010   

Excellent, really, really excellent. Also very informative (wow). - MoSes - Sep-15-2010   

very good read. I would love a sequel. and to know how they gets along with the other couples in town would be so cool.
- lyneX - Sep-19-2010   

Loved this story! The author paints very realistic images with her words. - Mickey - Sep-19-2010   

This is an absolutely incredibly entertaining tale. I just couldn't stop reading it and when it ended, I like so many others who have read it, didn't want it to end.It definetly gets my vote for a sequel.So if you ever read these recommendations Bad Squirrel, Give us what we want. But seriuosly you are the bomb! Great work keep it up. - uber goober - Oct-11-2010   

Very nice story. I look forward to reading more of this authors work. - Duffy - Oct-15-2010   

First I didn't really wanted to read that story because of the main theme. But I'm very glad I did! After Shine and Rumors another great and beautiful story from that author! And I'm looking forward for a sequel ( or sequels ;-)). Thank you very much for sharing! - SwissGirl - Oct-19-2010   

Sequel, sequel...we want a sequel!
OMG, this was incredible. Fantastic job. I ignored my family to finish it! Excellent work, my friend. Thanks for adding to my day! (Hopefully my family will forgive me...then again, I haven't read your other works!) - Souzan - Oct-31-2010   

I want more!!!! This was fantastic, from the first sentence to the last!!!! I am curious about Freddie!!! I am hoping for a sequel!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome story. - Anonymous - Nov-01-2010   

I absolutely adored this story, read more than once and probably will read again.............and again
Highly recommend, curious about S&M now :) - Anonymous - Nov-02-2010   

I just read this again, and was again captivated. I stayed up until after 5am to finish reading. I laughed so hard at the closing sequence I thought I'd have an accident:
"Kelly pulled up her sleeve and made a very impressive muscle with her biceps. "Can you beat that?" "Nope." "Didn't think so," Kelly boasted. "But I can pee standing up." "She can," Sarah giggled. Kelly draped herself over Hannah's shoulders with a pout. "Tell me I'm still butch, baby." Hannah patted Kelly's arm as she winked at Jordan. "Feeling a little feminine?" "Yeah. And I don't like it. It's...ooky." - Souzan - Dec-19-2010   

I just love this story! This is my second reading and I'm sure I'll come back to it again. I just wish there was a sequel! - Bolly - Feb-03-2011   

Another well written story by BadSquirrel, infact I would have to say it is the best one. - Anonymous - Mar-02-2011   

Another well written story by BadSquirrel, infact I would have to say it is the best one. - Anonymous - Mar-02-2011   

Brilliant! - Anonymous - Mar-22-2011   

I have absolutely loved every single of of BadSquirrel's stories. :) - Brandi - Mar-31-2011   

i loved the story hope for more soon - ebby - Apr-21-2011   

Hmm, where to start....... Fantastic characters that I found very real, great story, very well written. It was a pleasure to read, I cried, I laughed, this story really should be published. - Angie - Jun-16-2011   

A must read for someone looking for a great story. I am waiting for a sequel (hint,hint,hint). I loved it. - Linda - Jul-11-2011   

I loved it. This story is sexy, loving and sweet. - bead lights - Aug-25-2011   

needs more MORE MOOORRRRRE please *bats her sweet femme eyes* - Anonymous - Sep-04-2011   

What a great story. Loved it. - sassy123 - Oct-17-2011   

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! Need more be said. BadSquirrel is an amazing writer! - freeearthboy - Nov-15-2011   

A really good read. Loved it! - Anonymous - Nov-18-2011   

Loved this story! I so wish there was a sequel. I'd love to follow these characters again. - Anonymous - Dec-13-2011   

Excellent read! Good solid writing, very hot sex, great dialog and wit! - gova - Jul-05-2012   

I love it. Thank you, thank you - Pepe - Jul-09-2012   

PS. Please let there be a follow-up. These two couples are set for a great friendship. Will Kelly and Hanna show Jordan and Sarah the river in the mountain? - Pepe - Jul-09-2012   

Another awesome story by this author! It's is a wonderful story! - Anonymous - Oct-30-2012   

BadSqirrel just can't do wrong. Another great story! - zac - Dec-26-2012   

This is by far the best online original fiction I've ever read! The plot just keeps your mind on edge and craving more! I've read Hannah and Kelly's story, and am now dying for a sequel where Freddie meets Jordan. If there were a way to give this 100% I would...Please keep up the good work! - Caralion - Mar-10-2013   

Thanks to a fellow reader's recommendation, Caralion, I decided to read this story and I am very happy that I did. Although I'm not into some the S and M things its really minimal and holds little bearing on the whole story. What made this story so amazing was how the author was able to portray all the emotions and break them down. Completely eye opening in all aspects and "aww shucks" romantic too! Please give this a shot! - Katie of Ohio - Mar-13-2013   

Exploratory and fun would definitely recommend - naked ninja - Mar-16-2013   

One of the best books I've read in a long time! I loved the characters and the story and I am officially hooked on BadSquirrel! I couldn't put this book down, I read it literally every spare moment I had until I finished it! It had the perfect blend of romance and sex and angst and just everything! It flowed seamlessly and was written just phenomenally! I couldn't get enough! I fell in love with the characters! Thank you, BadSquirrel, for an amazing read! :) - Brandi - Aug-27-2013   

what can I say, brilliant, entertaining and I cannot wait for more maybe even a sequel. did I mention brilliant:) - chris - Nov-29-2013   

I loved this story. Why did it end so soon? Please write us a sequel! - Alena - Mar-12-2014   

A great read. i thoroughly enjoyed it and read it in 1 sitting. here's hoping there's a sequel. - Aahi Young - May-31-2014   

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY RIVETING!!!!!!!!!!
I WAS SO CAUGHT UP IN THE STORY THAT THE ENDING FELT LIKE A SLAP IN THE FACE!!!!!! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!! REMARKABLE!!!!!!!!!!!! - Te` - Nov-26-2014   

Amazing story! ! - Anonymous - Aug-30-2015   

I loved it from the beginning. Kept me guessing what would happen next and how Sarah came out of her shell and became a strong woman. - Darlene - Sep-17-2016   

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Nice romantic story. Just the way I like em. - Anonymous - Dec-04-2008   

Sweet story. Sizzling love scene. - Barbar - Jan-09-2009   

A very romantic story. The love scenes are hot without being crass. I love the method you have Seven of Nine use in romancing her Captain. I hope to read more stories like this from you. - Voy-ager - Jan-19-2009   

I love J/7 and this is a wonderful story. Thanks CeeLyn. - Teresa - Feb-16-2009   

Short but well rounded romance with a lot of action of the red-hot sexy variaty. - Anonymous - Oct-22-2009   

I liked this story. Sweet and sexy. The characters are both well written. A good read. - Lyn B - Jan-22-2011   

A wonderful post endgame story. A true checkmate....Avid - Avidreader276570 - Dec-08-2008   

Great story. I just love Enginerd's stories. Hope to see many more. - linda aka cygirl1 - Dec-09-2008   

I love Captain Janeway!! I hope Enginerd writes more about the J/7 pairing. - Greegan - Dec-09-2008   

What a wonderfully witty story! I love Janeway/Seven. The humor is so uniquely woven into the story that it's just richly satisfying. Sweet, Enginerd. It's a gift for one of the twelve days of Christmas. Thank you. - Teresa Thomas - Dec-09-2008   

I enjoyed this! More J/7 please! - Joan - Dec-25-2008   

i can never get tired of this short story. leaves me with a smile. - carinjo - Dec-06-2009   

Nice J/7 story. I love the dry humor between Seven and Janeway. Very well written.
I've read it many times and it always makes me smile. - Lyn B - Feb-28-2011   

Cute! - Anon - Mar-18-2011   

ST:V J/7 stories are my absolute favorite. It's the dynamic of wit, intelligence, the universe, Janeway and Seven; when all are mixed together the effects go supernova. Enginerd is one of my favorite J/7 writers, it's the closest I've been to seeing through a writer's lens and witnessing the story unfold---words soon give way to faces and scenes.

Thank you, Enginerd! And, a bow to you Athenaeum!! - Samantha - Mar-09-2014   

Awesome read! Thanks so much, Kim; you ROCK! Seriously, this was a tremendous story, and it was so very well written. I highly recommend it, but keep some tissues near by. Kim, you are one of my favorite authors, and I'm grateful for the entertainment your stories always provide. Thank you. - CarolinaGirl - May-18-2009   

Great read.... I recommend it to all - Linn - May-29-2009   

awww.. great story.. going to read joie's POV right now!! - Anonymous - May-08-2011   

What an awesome story. Great job - sassy123 - Jul-31-2011   

Beautifully and romantically written... - Anonymous - Nov-20-2012   

Really nice well done another good one Kim xx - SD - Apr-05-2016   

Really nice well done another good one Kim xx - SD - Apr-06-2016   

gorgeous. simply, gorgeous. - Anonymous - Aug-07-2009   

Amazing. Most sequels can never really reach the high quality in which the first reached. However, The End not only reaches the first but in some aspects surpases the former. The Fallen has graced us readers a wonderful read and I highly recomend this series to everyone. - Yuri - Aug-13-2009   

Every bit as fascinating as the first book - do yourself another favour and read this one as well! - Courtney - Aug-16-2009   

I loved "The Out" and this is even better. The Fallen manages to make the utterly fantastic perfectly feasible. If you want a well plotted story that has believable characters and buckets of suspense then don't miss this one. - siggy - Aug-20-2009   

Excellent story with a wonderfully complex plot and quick pacing. Don't miss the precursor, "The Out," but the "The End" is even better. - crskcks - Sep-05-2009   

I highly recommend this second part of The Out (a must read). You will find suspense, action, adventure, traveling, myths and romance wonderful blended into a great story. Do not miss it. - Pru - Sep-06-2009   

this sequel along with the first story were great. I do yearn for another story with these characters. - rleef - Sep-13-2009   

Truly unbelievably good. A rip-roaring romantic adventure tale that is one of the best stories I've ever read. It's very different to most ubers; it's not a lesbian story but instead a novel in which the two main characters happen to be gay. That's a refreshing change.

If the fallen isn't already a published author (and I suspect she is, given how strongly she protects her anonymity), then she should be. He'll, someone should publish this story and it's prequel! They'd have me everlasting thanks! - Anonymous - Nov-21-2009   

I cannot recommend this story highly enough. Believe me, you'll want to read it and once you start you won't be able to stop until you get through the very last twist. - Anonymous - Nov-28-2009   

I cannot recommend this story highly enough. Believe me, you'll want to read it and once you start you won't be able to stop until you get through the very last twist. - Anonymous - Nov-28-2009   

is there a sequel? i can't even find the right words to describe this story and its prequel. i found myself hanging on every word that i read. its too short to satisfy my craving, and i say that with outmost honesty. the world would go crazy if ambrosia is real and everything implied that comes with it. don't you think? heheh.. anyways, i really enjoyed reading this series. if there is more, ill be here to read it. don't worry. :) - rec - Mar-25-2010   

A really good read - well worth a look. - Anonymous - Sep-20-2010   

A good story.Well done. - sassy123 - Oct-23-2010   

What can I say but...amazing. I read the first book a few days ago and really liked it but the sequel is so much better. It has all the quality of a great tale, action, adventure, love and mystery. And if are a studentry of mythology, definitely give this a read. I wish there were more! - Kelly Aten - Sep-12-2016   

Great start! I want to see how Jamie's and Alex's relationship develops. Thanks for sharing, I hope you continue. - Anonymous - Aug-28-2009   

Oh please pleas please update this more often. Even with only 2 chapters, the story has my HIGHEST RECOMMENDATION. I see a lot of potential in this story, and I know this will not be a disappointment. Read it guys and I assure you, you won't regret it, maybe it will just leave you exited for the following chapters :D Cheers! - Fan - Sep-03-2009   

This one is great, can't wait for some more - Anonymous - Sep-13-2009   

ohh.. please update this. can't wait! - belle - Oct-26-2009   

Excellent start--the characters are interesting, not the usual "types" we often read. Would love to see this continued! Please update? - Anonymous - Jul-25-2010   

Great story! please finish! or another chapter:-) - Fan - Jun-05-2011   

Great story can't understand why these story's are left on this site when they are not finished it such a shame why the people writing these never finish them xx - Anonymous - Jun-03-2015   

Why isn't this finished it's an awesome story! - Anonymous - Mar-13-2017   

Why isn't this finished it's an awesome story! - Anonymous - Mar-13-2017   

I love this story!!! Kandis tackles many different subjects all revolving around one simple theme...the power of love in all it's forms. If you are in the mood for just about anything, read this story...it has it all! HOO YA! - Kel - Mar 21st, 2003   

HOO YA! This a great ending to the series that I couldn't put down til finished at 5AM when I had to be at work at 8am that was a lousy day but this great series made up for it. I thought the ending of part 31 was a little rushed, but still loved it. PLEASE Kandis share more of your wonderful writing w/ us. - Draco - Oct-19-2006   

Holy Crap! This is great stuff! I lost many of recommended 8 hours of sleep to this great story! Bring it on Kandis!! - Lineah1 - Feb-17-2007   

Great story. Enjoy this to the fullest because suddenly it's over and you feel like missing out on stuff.
It's a must read and the disclaimers are not to take lightly.... I want more of this KG. - lyneX - Feb-26-2007   

Hi All, yes of course I recommend this, but that's not why I'm here! I want to thank all ya'll for reading my stuff....so very many years later!! Yes I am writing....three stories at once....yes I'm insane, but then you knew that:)
Thanks again!! kandis - Kandis Glasgow - Mar-05-2007   

Loved the series. The characters were well developed; the plot line creative; and the ending just right. Can't wait until the next one. - Taylor - Dec-10-2008   

WOW *picks jaw off the floor* of all the series, this is THE BEST and THE HOTTEST. fookin' hell. yeah. read it. you'll thank me later. - Vale - Jun-04-2009   

I am so happy I found this series. Read it ! Loved how KG tied their lives together over time. Destiny, true love, forever. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Apr-15-2010   

What a great series! Hope everyone reads this series....Thank you Kandis!!!! - Tracey - Apr-25-2010   

This was an AMAZING series!!!! YOU MUST READ IT!!!!! Its completely addictive!!!! - Trystan - May-24-2010   

WOO HOO and HOO YA too!! Loved. loved, loved this 3 part series. A MUST read. Well written. Tuggs a ones heart. Don't forget the tissues. Bard Kandis, extremely well done. ^5 - mine2give2u - Jun-22-2010   

And another HOOYAH from the back! This trilogy is great, but the last in the series is the best by far. - TKD Vix - May-06-2012   

Amazing story. Glad to have found it once again. - Reader - May-13-2017