The is an outstanding story. Great plot, solid characters, well written. What more is there. - wasabigrrl - May-07-2009   

Nice story! Keller and Monk (Control) are 2 of my fave, thanks! - Anonymous - May-07-2009   

WOW! This is a fantastic story. Great characters, excellent plot . . . AMAZING read. - ftcfan - May-08-2009   

I love everything written by this author and this story was no exception. Couldn't put it down. Thanks for sharing a fabulous read! - Ginger - May-09-2009   

Well done - well done! This kept me up into the wee hours of the morning turning page after page wondering what will happen next. Highly recommend. - juliemania - May-11-2009   

OMG---what a ride this story takes you on. Loved it... - Anonymous - May-12-2009   

Great story. Well-written, believable characters, strong plot. Well-done indeed ! And I was so pleased to ear again about Keller and Garrison... Thx Kim ! - Mani - May-14-2009   

This story is amazing.. I've read stories that made me laugh or made me hot but NEVER have I read a story that made my cry through two chapters... this is a MUST read. Do not misunderstand me the tears were happy ones... - Linn - May-14-2009   

Au cours de son oeuvre, Kim ne semble chercher qu'une chose: mettre a l'epreuve le sentiment amoureux, en peindre la force, l'intensité, la beauté, la faiblesse... Quoi qu'il en soit, chacune de ses histoires, aussi torturée soit-elle, ne montrent au final qu'une seule chose: SA TOUTE PUISSANCE.

La tension entre les deux heroines et l'histoire de l'amour valent définitivement le detour... Bonne lecture - yuka - May-18-2009   

I re-read this story again after reading it a while ago. I love the plot and characters. I love how all the character's storylines are followed til the end. This is a must read. - purplehawke - Jul-10-2009   

beautiful! i wonder why i never noticed this story. very good read. i hope there's a sequel/ - rec - Jul-14-2009   

I always find it a struggle when an author throws lots of characters at me at the beginning of a story and this has quite a few. However, before I knew it I realised I was already sucked in and was on a journey with every single one of them. And boy was that a mother of a journey! This is an awesome tale of a life changing situation and the effect it has on a group of very different people. You follow each and every one of the very well constructed characters through till the end. I laughed with them, cried with them and cheered for them! Loved it. - Sai - Aug-24-2009   

What a fantastic story! Thanks so much for sharing it. A must read for sure. - LeaAnn - Oct-10-2009   

Great story. Don't miss any of this writer's stories - keeps you wanting more. Thanks! Oct 09 - unon - Oct-22-2009   

all ths kim stories are wery good ones but i dont understand why "Riding Out the Storm" is not posting in her page, go and read it if you want enjoy one of her best creations :P - anonimo - Dec-01-2009   

wonderful story and beautifully written. im simply amazed with kim's story telling. i've definitely become a fan!! - crv - Jan-04-2010   

linda historia, he llorado, reido, llorado, lindaaa, super recomendable - shivi - Jan-14-2010   

The material for a bestseller in booksphops and for a film.
Very very good. - M. D. - Feb-05-2010   

Kim Pritekel continue amazing me!!! just a great writer with a great storie. I will never gonna get tired of this tipe of writing...it just flow.. definitely a must read storie tipe - Lucian - Apr-13-2010   

Ok I'm only half way through this and so far I'm loving it. The thing that caught my attention was that Beth Sayers was brought back in this and I love that cause I never really knew what happened with her. I would love it if you redid First from bets point of view. - Anonymous - Jun-19-2010   

Ok I'm only half way through this and so far I'm loving it. The thing that caught my attention was that Beth Sayers was brought back in this and I love that cause I never really knew what happened with her. I would love it if you redid First from bets point of view. - Anonymous - Jun-21-2010   

Ok I'm only half way through this and so far I'm loving it. The thing that caught my attention was that Beth Sayers was brought back in this and I love that cause I never really knew what happened with her. I would love it if you redid First from bets point of view. - Anonymous - Jun-21-2010   

Such a beautiful story! Thank you Kim for sharing it with us <3 - hit.dana - Dec-18-2010   

What a roller coaster of a ride. I did find it a bit hard to read with tears in my eyes.this is a must read. - Wheezie - Mar-09-2011   

i was told by an author that shes making it author apperication day and i had to comment on at least 10 authors today. (i dont usually comment) so here it is.. i love your writing. very well written with believable charachters and yes i know i mispelled at least two words and probably mispelled mispelled
- Anonymous - Mar-16-2011   

Excellent story! Gosh, I even cried... Highly recommended. - luna - May-10-2011   

Absolutely fantastic read!! So well written I felt like I was there with the characters...The best story I have read in a long time, the emotion, the heartache, the love, unbelievable..I even cried.. Well done Kim! you are an amazing author!! long may that continue!! - RavenIrish - Jun-13-2011   

this is my favorite story by this author.. many characters but still they have enough depth.. not an easy accomplishment.. loved the whole build up.. highly recommend this story!! - xtra dog - Jul-01-2011   

Very good read! Loved the characters but felt like there were some "unanswered" questions, - sara - Oct-04-2011   

Kim is an absolutely great author. People from many different countries have read her work I'm sure. Her stories are an addiction to us! I keep reading them over and over again.
sad that she won't be writing online anymore.
but great job all the way kim! - A - Apr-20-2012   

Loved it!! Another great story. Her ability to bring so many emotions to the surface is just amazing. A definite favourite and highly recommend. - Niyah - Sep-06-2012   

I marathoned this puppy! So tired. Yes - This is a lovely story. Managing to be very unique regardless of the numerous television series, movies, books, and other stories which feature the 'desert island' trope.
All the characters were given thoughtful depth of consideration and even some really minor characters stood out by the same TLC bestowed in their upbringing.
**** SPOILER ALERT ****
The complex exploration of the evolution of relationships over time and through extraordinary circumstances was beautifully executed. As was the same thought provoking journey into the what-ifs of lives lived 'on hold' (survivors) and trying to 'move on' to survive (everybody else). Regardless of the seemingly static nature of island living, the hero's journey here was deliciously subtle and at the end the change is strikingly apparent.
Not overly melodramatic, with perhaps that bit of Hollywood stylized exception near the end there. I do think that the hotness rating that seems to average high, is a little higher than the reality of the read (particularly based on actual sexual liaison time featured within the pages), but the tease 'can' be just as hot as the moment, and the build-up is what actually matters most in my opinion, so well played there.

Told ya I'd be an author's fan ;D - ScOut4it - Apr-20-2013   

Believe what is said about this story!!! Amazing read!!! Thanks to the author - Nics - Jan-28-2015   

Thank you for a beautiful story. Makes you wonder though : is it really possible ? Are there any accounts of a similar adventure really happening to someone, somewhere ? - orcsage - May-24-2015   

Great story, but can't seem to get any link to read part 14. Am so sad - Anonymous - Jun-13-2015   

Another great story. Good job. - sassy123 - Feb-27-2011   

great sequel to "Accidental Seduction"! wish we have a sequel to this as it was kinda ended abruptly. could just go on reading! Erin is a big softie! - CC - Mar-02-2011   

Great story again!! does need a sequal or tow - cpo - Mar-02-2011   

Good sequel. I like Erin and Alex and it was interesting seeing what had happened to them in four years. Good read. - Lyn B - May-03-2011   

Loved it! Please write a sequel? Pretty please? There is so much more to be told... - Xenasgrrl - Sep-06-2011   

There aren't many books in my library (whether in the town library or the University's) that protray lesbian relationships. So I seek them out in fandom looking for a comforting read to be entertained by authors that succeed in delivering a story in a revealing light. I have read a few of your stories and plan to devour the rest as well. I wanted to say thank you and encourage you to keep weeving this loom of fiction that I and others are denied by an ignorant society. - Jessica - Oct-27-2011   

liked this story a lot more than it prequel.. this is not a fun little ditty of erotica, since the characters have gained in complexity and are growing in depth.. since the author is not sure whether the story is finished or not, i would like to encourage her to keep writing about these two characters.. i am looking forward to seeing what will happen next.. - xtra dog - Jan-06-2012   

when chance said: ''I wanna wrestle, too'' i almost fell off the bed...lmao - braniac - Jan-06-2012   

amazing work as usual Kim. you can never go wrong with any of Kim pritekel's stories - sandy - Dec-20-2012   

erotica, yes, but a good story as well that is begging for a sequel! i got to the end and couldn't believe it ended there. - Anonymous - Feb-26-2011   

WOW. Awsome as usual. I go to to the end and was suprised that it ended how it ended. It truly does begh for a sequal. - firelarc - Feb-27-2011   

What a great story. Job well done. - sassy123 - Feb-27-2011   

Very hot! My fav author - Anonymous - Mar-21-2011   

Good story. Well written and with characters that feel realistic. Worth a read. - Lyn B - May-03-2011   

Awww,but it looks like there should be a PART 2, not even a sequel. It just CANNOT END THERE!!! Please, please continue...... - Amazonka - Jun-01-2011   

I can't believe this has so few recommendations. Its one of the most memorable f/f stories I've read anywhere. I read this story and its sequel when it came out (Feb 11) and several hundred stories later, this still counts as one of my faves.
Admin, please if you have time, update the TOP 25 list (at least every quarter, monthly if possible) so the better but newer stories like this have a chance to be highlighted and read. - OMG - Jul-13-2011   

Thank you very much for the first 2 parts of that very beautiful story :-) I almost can't wait for the next few sequels ;-) Being really courious what happens next... and how those two loveable women find their way together. - Ayla - Sep-07-2011   

i agree with the description in the teaser: it is a fun little ditty of erotica.. but man, is it hot.. pumpkin pick, huh?? seems like a game worth playing.. - xtra dog - Jan-06-2012   

pumpkin pick... yeah that was a good one! hot...hot...hot - braniac - Jan-06-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - TKD Vix - May-30-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - TKD Vix - May-30-2012   

I can't believe it ended there! Great story, but it needs a sequel! - Anonymous - May-30-2012   

Good story. - Scorpio - Aug-25-2012   

Good story. - Scorpio - Aug-25-2012   

nice and hot story. Actually , there is a sequel : http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/k/kimpritekel_accidentalfall.html - Anonymous - Jul-04-2014   

Nice short read but not a great ending ?? - SD - Jun-12-2015   

A must read again. Beautiful story, lots of emotions... Touching, even for readers like me who do believe that most crappy things on earth happen for no good reason. - C. - Mar-07-2011   

Wonderful read. Amazing portrayal of the supernatural.. - Wheezie - Mar-12-2011   

A great read, Kim never fails to deliver,loved the characters and and story.Loved the whole afterlife thing.Recommended read everyone,don't miss out by not reading,you won't be disappointed! - Jellyhead - Mar-15-2011   

~~thank you - j - Mar-20-2011   

another must read!!! - crv - May-30-2011   

I just got back into reading fan fiction. I found out my favorite site is back up. :D *Spoiler Alert* I love the characters in this story. I recommend this story to anybody who needs a lesson in following your heart and fulfilling your destiny. - Tee - Oct-04-2012   

wow just wow - sandy - Jan-10-2013   

What a great, complete story! Perfect for whenever you want to escape for awhile. - Stacia - Jan-11-2013   

Very good ! The characters sound so right and it's well written too. Try it you won't be disappointed. - She-ra - Jan-17-2013   

If you want a good history, this is for you.Excellent,one of the best I have ever read, really.I would recommed it to everybody. - Atalanta - Sep 19th, 2002   

What a wonderful story! Great job! Please write more. Soon. - Kinsey - Dec 3rd, 2003   

very well-written and engaging - Anonymous - Mar-09-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** This has to be my favorite by Kim. Such a sad but cute love story. I couldn't find a good summary so I almost didn't read it.

My summary:

Caden and Laurel where best friends through college, Laurel from South Boston, and Caden from Beacon Hill. Told through flashbacks and present day happenings the reader learns of the struggles of two girls realizing who they are and how to stand on their own two feet. When Laurel gets a message from Caden, someone she hasn't heard from in ten years, she flies back to Boston to support her old friend as she goes in to have a brain tumor removed. This story had me on the edge of my seat till the last sentence.

Read it! - Amanda - Mar-12-2009   

Amazing Story!! I would love to see a sequal one day. - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

This is by far one of my favorite authors. The story flowed beautifully and I thoroughly enjoyed every line. Great read! - Lady D - Mar-26-2009   

I loved this story, as I have loved everything that I've read by this author. Once again the story is so well written, I had a hard time 'putting it down'. Thanks for sharing your talent. - Ginger - Apr-05-2009   

wonderful story and beautifully written! one of those page-turner story, u just can't put it down. thanks Kim - crv - Jan-03-2010   

What a wonderful author. Loved all that she shares with us. Thank you for another great story. Very, very good. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Feb-21-2010   

Wonderful story. Well written and enjoyable on time line placements to the past to the present day. The end, yet simple, was quite moving personally. - S. Austin - Nov-02-2010   

Loved this story! Caden and Laurel are both so endearing... I can totally relate. Thanks! - Anonymous - Sep-07-2011   

What a heart warming story. Truly beautiful. - hovercat1 - Oct-20-2011   

i love to play the songs mentioned in a story while reading it.. this is the first time i came across a story where the author was able to pace it along with the lhyrics of the song.. not in the beginning, but from the "you smiled, you smiled" part to the "now we are in heaven" part.. try it out.. - xtra dog - Jan-11-2012   

Really enjoyed this xx - SD - May-19-2015   

A great story to read. Quite a few surprises along the way. This is a must read - Anonymous - Feb-26-2011   

always love a medieval fic! well-written with a rollercoaster of emotions. - CC - Mar-02-2011   

What a fun story with a bit of spice thrown in. - Wheezie - Mar-06-2011   

The author's name is synonymous to good work! A nice piece of fiction to enjoy on a leisurely evening. - booksmantra - Apr-14-2011   

***SPOILER ALERT*** well paced story.. i do have some questions about the secret, though.. how could it have remained a secret when the main character was injured?? - xtra dog - Jan-12-2012   

I was with this story from the very beginning. A great read - very enjoyable! - Anonymous - Dec-01-2007   

I too followed this story from the very beginning. I know Ms Pritekel doesn't do sequels, but this is one that just begs for more!!! Don't miss it. It'll make you laugh and make you cry and keep you involved until the very last word. - Akiela Xal - Dec-04-2007   

Lot's of clap, clap, clapping for this story. Great story from beginning to end. Another super story from a great storyteller. - Pammmy - Dec-05-2007   

At first was hard to get into, but once I got past a few pages, came out to be a good read. - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

Great story.. Though I have noticed a bit of a trend with this author.. everything happens years after the charachters meet. - Brutal - May-28-2009   

a beautiful story from a very talented writer. the story just touches your soul. - Anonymous - May-28-2010   

Another great story by Pritekel. I've enjoyed everything that she has shared on this site. She's the master for slowly building the romance with lot's of tortured, angsty pasts. But, the endings are always sweet. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-15-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. Great job - sassy123 - Jan-22-2011   

Nicely done!! Great from start to finish. - Druid - Mar-19-2011   

i simply hate the question "if you've never been with someone of the opposite sex, then how can you know you're gay?".. i loved the author's answer to that question.. it had me laughing out loud just imagining someone's facial expression when hearing that answer.. and that is the beauty of this author's skill in writing: she doesn't just tell a story, but she sucks you into it through the settings, dialogues, characters and emotions.. you become a part of the stories.. - xtra dog - Jan-05-2012   

wow...what an incredible story. This bard knows how to bring you to the wedge of crying and laughing with just a few lines. - braniac - Jan-14-2012   

wow!! Just when you think "how different can this one be"...it is original and so well written. The characters and story just pull you in. Very satisfying and entertaining. Kim's stories stay with me for days and days - michele - Mar-09-2012   

Another incredible story. Very well written and highly enjoyable to read. - Niyah - Feb-07-2013   

Loved this story, just when you think it's over, bam something to keep it going. I was rather disappointed when it ended... cuz I wanted more! - Stardawn - Feb-16-2013   

please for once just write a normal story that goes straight forward, was enjoying the book until it went into a warped unnecessary world....that just makes it exhausting! - pleaseforonce!! - Sep-02-2015   

I love Dakota's character, especially the gutsy things she says when they are young. Good read! - Lady D - Dec-21-2009   

This story was really well done. There really was a sense of uncertainty - will they or won't they end up together? Religion and love can be a volatile mix... - JS Stephens - Dec-23-2009   

good little story. - vampireslayer2 - Mar-23-2008   

Nice! Hot! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

i can't believe there are only 2 reviews posted for this story. I hope more will READ THIS STORY! I really like the plot. too bad there's no sequel. and i had hope its a novel instead of a novella. heheh... well, thanks for writting this. my kind of story! - rec - Sep-29-2009   

Gulptasticlly hot read. - LeaAnn - Oct-09-2009   

Oh good lord! READ IT! A few spelling mistakes and a curious ending but IT IS SOOO HOT! READ! - Amanda - Oct-12-2009   

excellent story!!! - Anonymous - Dec-24-2009   

great read. only complaint is that its too short of story. a sequel would be great to this - sarah - May-29-2010   

A great read, I truly enjoyed the heat in the beginning to the slow intensity of it's finishing story lines. Something to leave you flushed in your seat and yet still intriguing enough to continue. - S. Austin - Nov-03-2010   

Really good read ^^ I really appreciated the way Scarlet handled their first encounter in the real life, whan she decided to become a women before Ashton. There was something ultimate about it that made this moment very particular, unique ans quite intense for me. It was exciting and deeply moving and I'm glad this bard did not try to sweep away the reality like many stories have. Kim did a pretty good jod dealing this this suject. Congratulations for this gemme :) - yuka - Dec-14-2010   

If you like the movie, Pretty Woman, you will love this story. Great job! - booksmantra - Apr-19-2011   

nice story.. bit of a rush ending though.. all fine if you really do believe in fairy tales.. not her best story, IMO.. - Anonymous - Apr-29-2011   

Great sexy story with a little bit of everything. And even if you don't like "Pretty Woman" (like me), you'll love it. - Anonymous - Sep-12-2011   

awesome story :D - braniac - Dec-14-2011   

Amazingly, sizzling HOT... - Devyn - Dec-25-2013   

Good story HOT to - SD - Dec-13-2015   

Good story HOT to - SD - Dec-14-2015   

short and sweet. - maddie - Sep 20th, 2002   

Cute sexy story... but i think theres room for a much needed sequel!!!!! - g - Feb 13th, 2003   

Whoo Hoo! - Anonymous - Oct-20-2008   

WAY HOT! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-17-2009   

Very HOT! Nice.. - Texas_wild - Nov-19-2009   

SIZZLES!!! - JC - Jun-19-2010   

this was much too short. it leaves me wanting more. - kc - Jul-08-2010   

This is sooooooooooooooo unfair - lesbinim - Aug-06-2011   

nice pwp.. i wouldn't recommend enacting it with your girlfriend unless you are alone on a closed circuit.. - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

Love this. bookmarking it. hot! hot! hot! - Anonymous - Nov-19-2014   

I often wondered what phone sex girls did with their own dime, lol. Thanks to Kim Pritekel, I now know. This was more a seduction than a story and this author will keep you hanging on until the very end. Well done! - toni - Apr-04-2008   

Great story - Anonymous - Apr-05-2008   

Really enjoyed this story only wish it was longer or better yet had a sequel, big fan of kim pritekel - Anonymous - Aug-18-2011   

really loved the way the phone conversations flowed.. and it is a nice modern day fairytale turned phantasy.. - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

This story had be laughing the whole time. It's nice to have a different spin on what phone sex operators do on their down time. :D - Tee - Oct-06-2012   

Nicely different from KP's normal stories and a fun read. Well worth the time! - Stacia - Jan-12-2013   

This story is pretty dark,but extremely awesome just like all of miss pritekel stories. Remy and julie are great characters and I so wish to see a sequel.Read it ppl!!! - Grace - Apr-03-2008   

link between chapter 5 & 6 not working - Anonymous - Apr-03-2008   

Oh wow! Kim as done it again, kept me up all night reading a great novel! - lb - Apr-04-2008   

this is, without any doubt, my favorite story from this author. when it was first being posted, i would stay up WAY past my "bedtime" waiting for updates. a fantastic read that has you on the edge of your seat to the end. - jumper23 - Apr-04-2008   

Wonderful story that would make a even better movie - Anonymous - Apr-05-2008   

I read this a month or so ago and it freaked me out! I had nightmares for a bit. When they finally went away I read it again.(Masochist perhaps?) It still freaked me out but I had to re-read it. I'll read it again when I've recovered. This is definitely worth the time it takes to read it. - darkenedkarma - Apr-07-2008   

Totally different than any other story I read but totally worth reading. Great crime story and great characters. Thank you Kim - Marty - Apr-10-2008   

This is a damn good read! As always, Jae has written a sotry to be remembered. Great character development and tight. There is so much depth in the emotions. Jae, you have to write another sequel. - Giselle - Apr-11-2008   

It's funny how you can read something that contains within it a horrific glimpse of life that many people have to face, and still find it to be a brilliant story. Though dark and disturbing, the collector is a fantastic read perhaps making you appreciate the good within your own life, whilst demonstrating the ability of mankind in suffering through evil and overcoming it!! Must read. - nexakill - Apr-12-2008   

Heck Yeah!!!! I encourage all to read this story. I have read it at least ten times. It kept me up all night long. I could not stop pushing the page down button and clicking the mouse over the next chapter. - k. LEWIS - Apr-18-2008   

Unbelievably wonderful!! Such a gripping tale that i finished reading it in one sitting (okay, some time along.. i lied down).

Its definitely worth of time. - YANI - May-06-2008   

Great crime story, very well written. It will make you squirm in some parts! - Sai - Jun-02-2008   

This is a phenominal author. I have read several of her stories on more than one occassion. I am always on the look out for her new stuff. I dont read this type of story usually, but since it was written by Kim.P. I decided to give it a go. It is definetly intense, but you wont be disappointed. Great writting. If you scare easily,or live by yourself. I wouldn't recommend reading it at night. lol. - brighteyez - Jun-12-2008   

Unlike many other storys of this author this one ist pretty dark at the beginning but like always love wins over everything. Please read it and don't stop til the end! - Ines - Feb-14-2009   

Amazing, just like everything she writes. Kim, you are easily one of the best authors around, online or otherwise. Thank you for letting us share in your magic... - jaeygatsby - Mar-12-2009   

What a compelling story! Couldn' stop reading once I started. Thanks for sharing this. - Ginger - Mar-14-2009   

Nice Work! Good crime drama! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-18-2009   


Cet auteur est vraiment talentueux. Mis à part, la qualité de son style, Kim fait ici preuve d'une audace extraordinaire. Elle aborde un sujet difficile, elle le fait sans demie-mesure, avec honnêteté, puissance et intensité. BRAVO! S'approcher des limites et s'en sortir avec brio... c'est la marque des grands!
Pour les xenites francophones... Vous ne perdrez pas votre temps en lisant cette histoire! - Yuka - May-17-2009   

this is an amazing story....READ IT..... READ IT.... - fallingfast - Aug-04-2009   

WOW...nothing else to say but WOW!!! - Anonymous - Aug-12-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** great story!! it was really dark in the beginning and i found myself skimming/skipping through some of it. but the end of the story made it so worth it. i love how the characters developed and healed each other. it was very sweet. - cell - Jan-02-2010   

What a great story.
- Anonymous - Mar-28-2011   

Awesome, this story had me laughing, crying and sitting on the edge of my seat, I couldn't stop reading and just had to know what happened next. - Ange - Mar-31-2011   

really liked this story... so much so, I read it in one go... bit of a thriller, bit of a romance novel... nice! - Anonymous - May-01-2011   

Excellent story despite the grim topic. Well worth reading and I highly recommend it. - Mickey - May-02-2011   

Very dark subject but one that deserves exploration. KP did an excellent job here, I am certainly a fan now. - ~M - May-13-2011   

It's 5:59 a.m., and I just finished this incredible piece of writing. Absolutely amazing...I don't know when I've enjoyed a read more. A gripping drama, this story kept my attention, well, all night! I don't write many reviews, but READ THIS. Well done, Ms Pritekel! SPOILER WARNING: This does contain sensitive subject matter, so please read the disclaimer. - Souzan - Sep-27-2011   

Absolutely fantastic story. Kim really knows how to grab hold of her readers and not let go. There definitely. Was some disturbing imagery in the one, but it only helped to convey the helplessness of the situation. I loved both Remmy and Julie but Remmy was absolutely the best. Read it! - Jendeh - Mar-04-2012   

Another awesome story by KP. I'm thinking she's becoming a classic in this household. ;D - Tee - Oct-06-2012   

Fantastic story!! Well worth the time. - Stacia - Jan-11-2013   

aww what a sweet story.. and somewhat painfully funny.. - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

Amazing!! - Anonymous - Jun-17-2009   

A great read. Recommended - Daliz - Jun-17-2009   

Great writer. Another great story. Thank you Kim - Marty - Jun-18-2009   

I've read all of Kim's work and IMO this is one of- if not her best piece. READ IT! - Amanda - May-01-2010   

this feels like the beginning of a beautiful story.. but it also feels unfinished.. maybe a sequel would do the trick?? ;) - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

It was so beautiful that I just had to comment.....a must read... - Anonymous - Nov-03-2012   

It was so beautiful that I just had to comment.....a must read... - Anonymous - Nov-03-2012   

First half is really touching!...
But, something happened in the middle and they all went shallow. Maybe the end is full circle? But, I didn't quite make it. - Not this time - Apr-21-2013   

wonderful story, must read it. - amy - May-08-2009   

One of my favorite stories. Short, so I can read it at night and not stay up until the wee hours of the morning, but beautifully written. - Anonymous - May-08-2009   

Love these characters and the story is so good! Thank you. - Ginger - May-11-2009   

A sweet story of a teens first sexual encounter. Nicely told in the first person. It continues years later in a sequel 'Play it again, Grey' which reveals the 'encounter' was so much more. Both were a nice read. - Sai - May-13-2009   

I love first time stories. Nicely written! - Lady D - May-18-2009   

This is so cute and so very hot! Read it! - Amanda - Feb-06-2010   

This story and the sequel are my favorites of this author. I wish they were made into a full length novel. It was sooo good! - D - Jun-13-2010   

great read. loved the writing style
- renslucy - Jun-28-2010   

I think I figured why I love Kim Pritekel's work so much. She just sublimates feminity... she captures the essence of it. Her vision is amazing. I can feel how much this bard worships women, body and soul. WOW - yuka - Dec-18-2010   

Great story - delighted to see that there is a sequel! - Georgia - Apr-05-2011   

What a terrific story. Great job. - sassy123 - Apr-16-2011   

Simply love this story and its sequel! Cute and sizzly, what more can a girl ask for? - Anonymous - Apr-18-2011   

This writer sure knows how to dig deep in those emotions! Great read! - Anonymous - May-22-2009   

I have to agree, this was a heartwarming story, and well written. - Maddy - Sep-09-2009   

another great one from KP. u r really a talented writer - crv - Jan-06-2010   

Excellent!! Would love to see more of this couple. - jt - Jan-25-2010   

callahan and paige are wonderful characters, as are the others (locked, max). you come to care for them. "i dare you" and "double dog dare" are terrific stories. - kc - Aug-25-2010   

this story is a lot darker than the prequel.. if you are not into hurt/comfort stories, you should skip this one.. it would be a shame for you to do so, because you would be missing out on a wonderful story.. - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

Beautiful..... Just what I been looking for.... Thank you for making my day. - Sammy2do - May-23-2012   

Beautiful..... Just what I been looking for.... Thank you for making my day. - Sammy2do - May-23-2012   

Beautiful..... Just what I been looking for.... Thank you for making my day. - Sammy2do - May-23-2012   

my fav writer by a mile - Anonymous - Oct-01-2012   

That was a great story. I enjoyed it very much! - Ricky - Jan-30-2013   

please change author's name to correct one ) it's Pritekel not Pretikel. thanks
about the story - good as usual ), but i wish it was longer, 'cause characters are quite interesting. [Editor's Note: Corrected. 12-28-2009] - RuSome - Dec-21-2009   

Very good story - would love to see a sequel - ec - Dec-30-2009   

Wonderful, as are all of Kim's stories! - Peyton Andrews - Jan-04-2010   

Fantastic, great characters would love a sequel. - Chris - Jan-10-2010   

That was SO good! Beautiful sweet little tale. I would love to see more of these two. - Amanda - Feb-07-2010   

Very nice. Good pace. - Anonymous - Feb-14-2010   

Loved this story. A great read - sassy123 - Sep-10-2010   

Great story! - Anonymous - Jan-14-2011   

I Fell in love with these two, would love to hear a sequel, would like to see Megan get her sight back. - Anonymous - Jul-24-2011   

oh my God this story was amazing. you've got 10 from me! - braniac - Dec-04-2011   

nice valentine story.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

Beautiful eee - Keepers - Jul-12-2012   

Beautiful love story - Anonymous - Sep-26-2012   

Nice. - Anonymous - Oct-01-2012   

loved it - Anonymous - Oct-01-2012   

this story is fantastic needs a sequel i've read all of Kims writtings i can find i really enjoy her work keep it up - tinna - Oct-10-2012   

so sweet. worth the time taken to read it!! - sandy - Dec-25-2012   

I really enjoyed the various aspects of the characters' personalities. The premise was also a real nice change from the usual fair - What a great dynamic! :)
I really loved the bitchy model who was more that her shallow surface would at first lead one to believe.

**** SPOILER ALERT ****

Man, their first fight was so wonderfully fucked up; I really liked how horribly wrong it all went.
Seeing how Juliet's day began leading up to her interview (that she was 'somewhat' primping for) was such a sweet build up (with the anticipation of their first meeting and Juliet's subsequent revelation).
Having Megan's character be so lonely was a very believable and, for many, relatable inclusion.
Though the ending felt a bit fantastical, ultimately it was satisfying.
A new favorite story that I'm sure will lead to a new favorite author of mine.
- ScOut4it (FF.net among others...) - Apr-19-2013   

I really liked this story. One issue, I felt it ended rather abruptly. Maybe I just wasn't ready for it to end. All in all a very good read. - TJ - Sep-02-2013   

A jewel. - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

Great read, can't wait for a sequel! - Bluangel - May-17-2015   

I am surprised no one has recommended this story before. To begin with...a warning: it is not for one faint of heart. It is, in fact, the only story that has ever made me cry. A VERY emotional read, great characters, and most importantly, very realistic characters. I truly recommend this to anyone! Especially ones looking for an awesome hurt/comfort story. I guarentee this story will stick with you for a long long time. - Anonymous - Sep-02-2006   

I was so overwhelmingly touched by this story...I could never have imagined feeling so much and so deeply on such a personal level through reading a story...anyone who reads this will certainly appreciate this author's outstanding ability to reach her readers' emotions. - Sthpaw30 - Oct-26-2006   

Well written with a good pace. Kim is very good at writing characters you will care about. The flashback scenes were seamless, best I've seen a writer write, actually. You definitely feel as if you've been on the journey along with the protagonist when you are done. Great read and highly recommended. - A fan - Nov-05-2006   

This story is so good it's depressing. - Anonymous - May-17-2007   

Wow!...a truly wonderful story from one of my very favorite authors. I could not put it down and suffered at work on just over three hours of sleep. I wish I hadn't read it just so I could have the pleasure of reading it all over again. BRAVA KIM PRITEKEL!!!! - JC - Jun-19-2007   

Man...this story was awesome. I felt everything the characters were feeling and it made me cry. Wonderful read. - Lady D - Aug-07-2007   

This is the most touching story I have ever read in my life. The characters were so believable and real that you are pulled into the story. You are not only reading about this incredible journey, you are taking it. It definitely made me break out the tissues at time. BRAVO!!! - Alicia - Jan-25-2008   

painfully poignant - Anonymous - Apr-20-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** I read this ( the 1st time) about a year ago and i swear sometimes i still think about this and just start to cry.
It got to me like no other fic ever has ... and i've read alot of fic lol
i don't really like sad stories usually but i love the author so i thought i'd give it a go, sometimes it makes me so sad i wish i hadn't, but it is and will always remain one of my favourite stories. - Amy - Mar-12-2009   

Awesome! - danbina - Apr-01-2010   

I NEVER cry when I watch movies or read stories. However, by the time I finished this I was in tear. Still just thinking about it brings tears to my eyes. I agree with the reviewer above sometimes I wish I would never I have starting reading it. That's how emotional it made me. I've never reacted like that to a story, but I would do it again in a heartbeat. - CD - Jun-13-2010   

Such an emotional work deserves to bed read. I challenge you not to be moved. - Tara - Jul-12-2010   

I've tried not to, oh god I've really tried... but i did it. I couldn't help myself. I cried. I've read the previous recommendations and I didn't want to do something so predictable. I thought I was better than that! lol! Pretty full of myself huh? I don't like being sad, or desillusional, or bitter... so I usually keep myself at distant from stories or movies that scream "I'm gonna make you cry and then let you go frustated for one day". I think there are already to much frustrating things in real life. At first I didn't want to read this story, but somehow I brought myself to do so, cause I love Kin Pritekel's work and a part of me kept saying that she was to clever, to talented, to just write a "sad" story. There had to be something else. And I was right. I found one of the most beautifully written novel I ever read. This had me wrapped, enjoying a ride full of emotion, of passion and wisdom. For those who are sceptikal like I was before reading this, I can assure you that the aching that you fear, the sadness that you find sooo boring, are not what will remain in your chest after reading the last word. You'll actully feel like there's nothing in the world you can't do. Don't wait, indulge yourself to be touched in your soul... - yuka - Dec-18-2010   

Up to this point the best story of this author. I was truly moved like seldomly before by a story. And I was in turmoil because I wished I hadn't read it, the emotions rang too strong in me. And then I catch myself at reading it again. - WT-GER - Feb-20-2011   

So damn emotional. Just a Classic Tragedy, get the hankies ready. I just couldn't make myself stop reading. Whew - ~M - May-13-2011   

This is an AMAZING story. I lost count of the number of times my heart clenched for the characters and my vision blurred because of the tears. If you're looking for a heart-wrenching story, this is it. - e - Jul-26-2011   

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after reading the comments, i tried my best to prepare myself for when i would finally read this story. and yes, there's no preparing for it. its absolutely impossible not to be emotionally sucked into it.

this is one of the most beautifully heartbreaking stories you're ever gonna come across in your lifetime. - -J - Sep-21-2011   

my god i am halfway through and i'm crying like a baby - braniac - Dec-05-2011   

wow i just finished this wonderful story, i'm staring at my laptop with sore puffy eyes trying to put in words what i feel at this moment, i'm blocked, huh, that's because this story brought out so many emotions that now i have to stop and take a deep breath. ohhh... the story... plain brilliant, all those flashes keep you wanting to know what happened to those little girls that once swore to be friends forever,to know what went well and wrong, how they struggle with this powerful new feelings: love, jealousy, desperation,anger, confusion, loneliness, peace, understanding...ohh... the characters... these pieces of your heart Kim, these wonderful women are so complex,interesting, powerful and weak at the same time, they make you crawl under their skin and in their soul and feel with them. it'hypnotic. JUST READ IT PEOPLE AND YOU'LL FEEL, what? well that is up to you. you Kim are a great bard,10! - braniac - Dec-06-2011   

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wow.. talking about an emotional rollercoaster.. i went through all the emotions through and with the characters.. every hopefilled and heartbreaking emotion tore at my very soul.. sublimely well written.. - xtra dog - Jan-04-2012   

WOW... I really have no other words. So much feeling and emotion so vivid I just couldn't stop the tears from streaming down my face. Truly a spectacular read. - Niyah - Feb-07-2013   

This story will stick with you! You would have to have a heart of stone not to cry while reading First. Can't say enough good things about this story. - Breaze - Sep-07-2013   

Heartbreaking, incredibly moving, and beautifully written. Very rarely am I this emotional reading a story. I cried so much. Kim Pritekel is a very talented bard, and has written wonderful, realistic characters that you cannot help but love. I couldn't put it down. And even though this story is incredibly sad, it left me feeling... idk... galvanised, maybe. I think that this story will stay with me for some time. Amazing. Don't wait, read it. - A - Jan-02-2015   

Oh gosh what to say about this story...I think it will haunt me for a very long time until I read it again and let it haunt me all over again. So beautifully written and heartbreaking. I knew I shouldn't read it just from the disclaimer but I am glad I did because it just makes you FEEL. It made me laugh, cry, get angry, and even frustrated with the characters' stubbornness but that's the point, it made me FEEL so many emotions. I love this author that I am barely discovering. I plan on reading all of her work I also love, Love, LOVE the cameos of her other characters from other stories that show up in all the different stories, they make me happy! - AMO - May-06-2015   

First by Kim Pritekel : so rich and so giving. Thank you for this treasure, this golden mother lode of a story. Thank you creating this remarquable experience. Thank you for digging so deep into our human soul and sharing with us. Thank you. Thank you. - orcsage - Jul-07-2015   

I come back to this place every few years. How have I missed this story? It is a must read. Thanks to TPTB for keeping this site live for all these years. - JettBlack - Feb-21-2017   

Very good story from a truly wonderful writer!!! - JC - Mar-01-2008   

I find the ending a bit far fetched.. but hey, that's just my opinion... read it and rate it - Anonymous - May-02-2011   

Love it, Love Kim, Love the way she writes. - Anonymous - Feb-17-2007   

A very sweet and passionate tale. Loved the dual meaning for the title.. just made me all warm and fuzzy inside. :D - Stardawn - Sep-21-2010   

really sweet tale.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

A sweet, delightful read. - Anonymous - May-14-2009   

So sweet! Aww, young love! - Anonymous - May-22-2009   

i stayed up really late just to finish the story. readers beware. u definitely wont wana stop - crv - Jan-06-2010   

Kim is one of the best writers in Xenaverse and this is one of her best stories.. don't miss! - Luie - Jan-24-2010   

For once im speechless you outdid yourself on this one Kim P. If you havent read it you dont know what your missing i guarantee you your not going to put it down till its end! - Sandy - Sep-01-2011   

this is a touching story about first love.. and what it can do to you.. - xtra dog - Dec-19-2011   

A great story well done x - SD - Jan-01-2016   

.......wonderful, touching story. All of your readers should give this a go!! - easteden - Aug-30-2010   

What a fantastic story. You had me hooked right from the start all the way to the end. Awesome!!! - Druid - Mar-30-2011   

not quite the story i was expecting after reading the first few lines.. brilliant.. i love it when an author surprises me.. - Anonymous - May-28-2011   

I really enjoyed the storyline and characters. Brilliant writing - Anna28Carm - Apr-19-2017   

This was a beautiful story, well written. - JS Stephens - Feb-14-2010   

have some doubts about this story.. seems strange to me that they consumate their bond within the span of one week.. specially since one is an abuse victim.. kind of makes the story less credible to me.. - Anonymous - May-08-2011   

I liked this story and their characters! - Ricky - Oct-16-2012   

Wonderful, short but sweet! - Anonymous - Mar-11-2010   

i don't know what it is, but something about this story just doesn't sit right with me.. it's not that they're not in character, because they are.. it's not that i have a disliking for what if stories, because i don't.. it's not because it is not well written, because it is.. - xtra dog - Jan-05-2012   

Awesome read! Thanks so much, Kim; you ROCK! Seriously, this was a tremendous story, and it was so very well written. I highly recommend it, but keep some tissues near by. Kim, you are one of my favorite authors, and I'm grateful for the entertainment your stories always provide. Thank you. - CarolinaGirl - May-18-2009   

Great read.... I recommend it to all - Linn - May-29-2009   

awww.. great story.. going to read joie's POV right now!! - Anonymous - May-08-2011   

What an awesome story. Great job - sassy123 - Jul-31-2011   

Beautifully and romantically written... - Anonymous - Nov-20-2012   

Really nice well done another good one Kim xx - SD - Apr-05-2016   

Really nice well done another good one Kim xx - SD - Apr-06-2016   

what a great story!! I recommend it to everyone, but make sure you read jenny's POV first.. that way you'll really enjoy the epilogue.. :) - Anonymous - May-08-2011   

Another great story. Awesome read. - sassy123 - Aug-05-2011   

can't believe nobody commented this story.. there's a bit of everything in this one, folks.. bit of romance, bit of suspense.. it ain't no thriller nor a western, but it could be both.. loved this one! - Anonymous - May-09-2011   

Another great story. - sassy123 - Jun-14-2011   

Good, solid story with lots of emotional highs and lows. If you like a more realistic type of story, this one is for you becuase everything isn't fixed easily or at all in the end. - Stacia - Jan-31-2013   

Wow...this one hit home for me big time! This is exactly how my Partner and I met and we've been together nearly 10 years and still very much in love! So yes it can and does happen this way. Aside from that this was an enjoyable story but not one of my fav's from this author. Ms. Pritekel is a very talent writer and most of her other works are far superior. That being said...this is still a fun read! - JC - May-04-2008   

have to agree with CJ.. uh, JC i mean.. it can and does happen this way.. is how i got in touch with my first girlfriend.. ah, sweet memories.. anyway, nice story.. not miss pritekel's best one but nice nontheless.. - Anonymous - May-09-2011   

I like this story. It's well written and sexy. - Anonymous - Jul 3rd, 2005   

This is one of very few fanfic stories that I come back to again and again. The concept is original which sets it apart from the beginning. I normally prefer contemporary stories but as this was so well constructed and written I didn't have time to think about the setting. I like a good story and I like a good PWP but this combination (that the author names SWP) is great, with the sex scenes enhancing and complimenting the story while also being really hot at the same time!I highly recommend this story and commend the author for an engaging and sexy interpretation of 'marriage' traditions of the past! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your work! - Leah - Sep 4th, 2005   

A lovely Elizabethan Era romance with a nice twist. Well written and well paced. - Georgia - May-03-2008   

LOVED IT...my only disappointment in the fact that it's so short!! Great job Kim Pritekel!!! - JC - May-17-2008   

i hope theres another one i just love it it great... - Anonymous - Sep-25-2008   

quite hot indeed. Since it takes place in 1540, it should be Middle Ages, not modern. - offhermeds - Jan-15-2009   

A very beatiful story, indeed. And usually the beginning of Modern Age is pointed after 1492, with the discovery of America by Cristoforo Colombo. So, in this case is correct. - Tenshi79 - Jan-19-2009   

love it! one of the best and hotest medieval stories. kim is an amazing writer. - luie - Feb-18-2009   

HOT! - Anonymous - Mar-16-2009   

Wonderful story. This is one of those stories that I reread regularly. Love the characters. - Marcia - Mar-29-2009   

Great story!!! I really loved it!!! - Anonymous - Jun-06-2009   

Very romantic story packed into a few pages. Loved the uniqueness! - Maddy - May-02-2010   

I LOVE IT... this story is definitely among my favourite. hehehe my last name is Aragon like the Fallon of Aragon of the story coincidence. - Silent-Angel - Nov-02-2010   

Good story, enjoyed reading it. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

My first introductory piece to Kim Pritekel's fiction. A sizzling hot erotic story which I really enjoyed reading. My only complaint is its rather hasty ending. - booksmantra - Apr-14-2011   

indeed swp.. but good swp is nothing to be sniffed at!! - Anonymous - May-10-2011   

omg. great story. hot love scenes - braniac - Dec-04-2011   

omg this was so beautiful.kim you are outstanding and my fav writer - tafadzwa - Oct-01-2012   

BEAUTIFUL AND VERY VERY HOTSMITH - Anonymous - Mar-31-2015   

Beautifully written The Phantom of the Opera is a great story base. Kim has done it again. - Draco - Feb-24-2007   

I must for any Phantom lover. Little pays off the musical from the obvious to the plays on names. Read it! - Amanda - Oct-12-2009   

nice pwp.. - xtra dog - Jan-12-2012   

I was soo excited when I saw that there was a sequel! It's written even better than the first one since the characters are a lot more developed. And seriously, who hasn't been loved on by a Brutus? :0) - Anonymous - May-08-2009   

I really love these characters and totally loved the story . It's even better than the first 'Dance with Me'. Thanks. - Ginger - May-12-2009   

Histoire relativement simple. Kim, ici, rends la simplicité poetique, attendrissante, et dense a un point quasi toxique!
Cette serie (relativement courte) est "simplement" une vrai perle. - yuka - May-17-2009   

Read it! Good good good. - Anonymous - Jun-13-2010   

I love how this author incorporates song titles and small gestures into her stories. These minor details make the story resonate long after the final page. Not many authors have such ability, but I'm sure glad this one does because she can tell a damn good story. - Chemy - Feb-14-2011   

What a terrific story. Great job - sassy123 - Apr-16-2011   

Beautiful, touching story. - Duffy - Jul 30th, 2005   

Another Masterpiece, Kim; Thank you. You truly are a gifted wordsmith. - CarolinaGirl - May-18-2009   

love the story, cant get enough of the characters. a part 2 should be written - sarah - May-31-2010   

I love everything that is written by KP. if you haven't read anything from here! start reading now. mayn! i can't believe i missed this story. glad i read it, as always! amazing! - crv - Jun-12-2010   

I won't tell i'm surprised by how good this story is... cause I'm not. This bard doesn't need any recommandation. I just saw her name and read, without further questions... and OF COURSE, the read was excellent. Too short though, I wouldn't have mind to read 200 more pages. Congratulations and thank you for sharing your talent with us. - yuka - Dec-12-2010   

nice story.. bit short which results in the end seeming to be a rush job.. still a nice read though.. - Anonymous - May-12-2011   

What a great story. Job well done - sassy123 - Aug-06-2011   

****Spoiler ALERT****
Snowball Effect tells a tale of 2 women stuck alone in a discount store while trying to wait out a storm...but what they don't know is their every own storm has just begun. Can they make it though?

Wow...This story is both fun and sexy at the same time. I do wish that this story has more to it in the future. But Damn! - Katie of Ohio - Sep-15-2012   

HOT!! - Anonymous - Sep-18-2012   

Funny and sexy, just how I like it *wink* - Purr - Sep-29-2012   

Great, funny short story. Perfect to read with a cup of coffee or a beer. - Stacia - Jan-12-2013   

I challenge you not to fall in love with anything Kim has ever written. She's a fantastic author and well worth a look or two-thousand...Highest recommendations!!! I guarantee youll love it and come back again and again. - Fox_Feather - Apr-15-2006   

Great story. Kim Pritekel weaves a nice tale of a successful music star with a scarred past and turbulent present and a childrens nurse who thinks she has everything she needs in her small town life. After meeting under interesting circumstances the two become friends and find their lives intertwining and the bond that develops between Christine and Willow is palpable even if it takes them a while to understand it fully.

Very well written with a touch of angst and dash of romance to keep you interested all the way to the end. I would definitely read a sequel.
- Sai - Apr-21-2006   

Is this story finished or unfinished? The link on chapter 8 is a loop. - Anonymous - Apr-21-2006   

This is great! I love the slow buildup of the romance. Nice change from "meet, greet, hop in bed" type stories. Maybe I'm just a sucker for a good romance. - JSS - Apr-22-2006   

KP has always been one of my favorite authors and has written some of the 'nets finest fiction. This story is one of her best and is full of what makes her so fun to read - humor, love, action, drama, plenty of angst and the characters are true to life in a way only the very talented can portray. Thanks again KP for your past, present and future endeavors -- I'll always be a fan! - Therese - Apr-26-2006   

This is one of the most well written stories, you will ever have the priviledge of reading. The characters are amazing, and you feel like your a part of their journey. I HIGHLY recommend this Gem to everyone. - brighteyez - Jan-10-2008   

That scene in chapter 16 made me want to call my ex. It was WELL written and I had to GULP!!!! some ice water down. WHOA!! It took a while to get to, but WELL worth the wait. I'm gonna turn around and read this story again next week. It was just that "DARN GOOD"!!! - K.LEWIS - Feb-16-2008   

I'm so impressed!!! I think this is the most sweet and romantic story out there. Gosh I love this story!! - Anonymous - Feb-29-2008   

Gosh, I like this story. Read it when you want to believe in love and redemption. - calabria - Mar-05-2008   

Great inspirational story about love. - Anonymous - May-14-2008   

I've read this story ten times or so and everytime it's like the first. Gorgeous,well written - Manuela - Feb-08-2009   

This is a very talented writer. Read anything written by her that you can get your hands on. 'Twilight' is a particularly good piece of characterization with a very satisfying plot. - wasabigrrl - Mar-19-2009   

This is one of my Favorite Authors out there, and this story is simply amazing! - Angelicrainbw - Oct-12-2009   

Beautiful, well written love story. I challenge anyone to not fall in love with Christine and Willow. - nicole938 - Oct-26-2009   

i've read most of KP's story. all are well and beautifully written. and this one did just that.... KP's words just takes my breathe away - crv - Jan-11-2010   

Very nice tale. Highly recommended. Had me hooked and I couldn't stop until the end. Great job !! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jan-28-2010   

Excellent story and characters. Everything KP writes is great. - MK - Mar-11-2010   

Love the story. Love the characters. - RLA - Aug-21-2010   

Two thumbs way up. I totally loved this story. - sassy123 - Sep-10-2010   

Beautiful written story. Excellent job by the author. - Anonymous - Nov-21-2010   

What a wonderful story of finding your place. It touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing it! - Anonymous - Dec-28-2010   

Loved this story! Very loving, just the right amount of angst, perfect rainy day reading material. Thanks so much for sharing this. - Stardawn - Jan-03-2011   

Excellent story!!! - Anonymous - Jan-13-2011   

Another great story from Kim!
Bravo. - hit.dana - Jan-23-2011   

Great story but then I haven't yet found any of Kim's I haven't enjoyed. Well written with wonderful characters! Can't wait to read more from this author soon! - Anonymous - Jun-28-2011   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jul-01-2011   

great story - Anonymous - Jul-13-2011   

Good read:-) - Lyn B - Aug-24-2011   

i liked this story, i loved the end of it. but adam... man that was a tough one. - braniac - Jan-06-2012   

I thoroughly enjoy KP's writings. This one really stays with you long after the end. The words just flow and lead you along, effortlessly. Had a difficult time stopping to sleep. I know I will read it again and again. If you are debating reading it, just do it. Then you can thank KP for sharing her gift with us... Thank you Kim! - ms - Feb-19-2012   

I have read kim's stories countless times. She is a great author and has the ability to bring back emotions and turn your life upside down ;) - Anonymous - Apr-21-2012   

beautiful caracters....beautiful story... - Anonymous - Dec-06-2012   

An excellent read. When I first saw the thing about a clown I skipped this story but came back to it and decided to read it. And I am so glad I did. A very touching and emotive story. Highly recommend. - Niyah - Feb-12-2013   

***Spoiler Alert*** Well, as one would expect from KP a very good read. Quite the emotional roller coaster; well constructed and a page turner. Well worth reading - as well as all of her work. Would be nice to have a little update or two - how are they - esp Christine surviving the terrible twos, or the first day at school ... - Georgia - Jun-09-2013   

AMAZING AMAZING STORY THIS IS A MUST READ .THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ .THANKS YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY XXXXXX - SD - Jun-07-2015   

"High quality erotica" - Anonymous - Dec 17th, 2003   

Great erotic offering. I didn't mind the switch from perspective which I usually don't enjoy. It just seemed to add to the story even more. - Anonymous - May-12-2008   

Awesome presentation and story. The format is unique in regard of the authors approach to the development and interaction of this story. - xenamari - May-23-2008   

This is really well written. Loved it! - Ginger - May-30-2009   

nice erotica. thank you. wish there was a sequel to go with this to follow their tale. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Feb-21-2010   

Very hot, good story. Highly recommended erotica. - snott - Feb-12-2011   

omg.hot.hot.hot - braniac - Dec-14-2011   

loved the way the interaction between the main characters was protrayed through changing POV.. it as also a very hot pwp.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

This was great !! Very erotic but also quite funny in parts. Thank you ! - Thothgirl - Jan-17-2012   

Wow, wow, wow. Loved this story. Great short story. A must read. - Anna28Carm - Oct-25-2016   

Great story. One of my favorite writers. Lots of love and angst will keep you involved with these characters. - Anonymous - Sep-15-2012   

An EPIC story. As always, great writing from Pritekel. Thanks for sharing :) - Anonymous - Sep-19-2012   

VERY GOOD. - HMARTINA - Sep-26-2012   

I love this story. - Anonymous - Nov-07-2012   

Really well written story. I enjoy how this author combines the necessary background information with present time to form complex people and situtations. I recommend you read this! - CoolNik - Nov-10-2012   

A complete delight. A story that spans nearly 30 years.Beautiful. I loved - -Rosa Santos-- - Nov-15-2012   

AWESOME .......SEQUEL PLEASE - EL Diablo - Sep-07-2013