| Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative (Mature) | Drama | Short Story - 19 pages | Unfinished | Cast: Claire, Vegas, Lizette, Paige, William, Brenda, Emily, Tess, Jack, Cranston, Jason, Elvis, Ward Honors/Awards: #38 in 2004 | |
| A business tycoon on a mission and Las Vegas show girl that has some how managed to retain some of her innocence - the potential for this story is enormous! Hope to see more of it soon! - GW - Jan 20th, 2004 Fabulous!!! Please...keep going! - Anonymous - Jan 20th, 2004 This is a fabulous story. I can't wait for the next part. This has the making of a fantastic novel. - purplehawke - May 25th, 2004 I love this story Please continue - sam - May-17-2006 This has the potential to be great. I really like the flow and the characters, but no more since 2004 so I doubt we'll read more :( If there's more I'm so there! - Kali - May-19-2006 Hey great start! I'd love to read the next part. Please keep going ;-))) - Golem3 - Sep-04-2006 Great story, love it and can't wait for the next part. - Kitty - Nov-09-2006 Oh my god! i love it... when is the next part..please,please, please.. - Yani - Feb-06-2008 Great story. Hopefully we'll get the rest of it too. It would make me a verry happy reader :) - lyneX - Feb-11-2008 |