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Garden: A Revised Tale by Another Author

Original / Uber | Ancient | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 25 pages | Finished | Sep-09

Life in the Garden is idyllic, but Rebekah can't help but feel that there's something more. When Lilith shows her a different world on the other side of the Wall, the temptation is to deny.
wow! this is good. - Yani - Sep-09-2009

different, VERY good - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009

Excellent! A great twist on an old story. - offhermeds - Sep-09-2009

What a great story. It sure is a different take on a well know tale. The author writes with a great descriptive talent that made it seem I was right there watching the scenes play out in front of me. I'll definitely be looking forward to reading any future works by this author :) - Dogz - Oct-16-2009

I definitely enjoyed that. And the differences between one side of the fence to the other is a good reference to a "normal" life and that of a same sex couple. Great story! Oh, and totally hot too. :) - Anonymous - Mar-14-2011

Awesome story and great writing. - gwen - Nov-20-2012

Quite clever...really enjoyed it. - Wheezie - Jul-04-2013

Very clever revision. A delight. - Georgia - Jun-12-2014

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Original / Uber \| Ancient \| Alternative \| Romance (alt) \| Short Story - 25 pages \| Finished \| Sep-09
Life in the Garden is idyllic, but Rebekah can't help but feel that there's something more. When Lilith shows her a different world on the other side of the Wall, the temptation is to deny.
wow! this is good. - Yani - Sep-09-2009 different, VERY good - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009 Excellent! A great twist on an old story. - offhermeds - Sep-09-2009 What a great story. It sure is a different take on a well know tale. The author writes with a great descriptive talent that made it seem I was right there watching the scenes play out in front of me. I'll definitely be looking forward to reading any future works by this author :) - Dogz - Oct-16-2009 I definitely enjoyed that. And the differences between one side of the fence to the other is a good reference to a "normal" life and that of a same sex couple. Great story! Oh, and totally hot too. :) - Anonymous - Mar-14-2011 Awesome story and great writing. - gwen - Nov-20-2012 Quite clever...really enjoyed it. - Wheezie - Jul-04-2013 Very clever revision. A delight. - Georgia - Jun-12-2014