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Bitter and Sweet by dark chocolate     
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Short Story - 14 pages | Finished | Jul-09
Different choices lead us down many different paths in life. And from some of them there is no turning back.
Totally hawwwwt...omg...and the ending was just as good...really great author...can't wait for more! - Anonymous - Jul-28-2009   

Very interesting! I think there needs to be a sequel tho, so we can find out why she did/does it... - Nicole - Jul-29-2009   

What an excellent short story ! The impressive writing let us know a lot about the characters in a few well-chosen words. I grew quite fond of them, and would ask for a sequel, even though it could defeat the purpose of the brilliant ending. Tough choice. I guess the author will choose for us. - Tweedle - Aug-03-2009   

that was HOT!! it's begging for a sequel though.. - Helena C. - Sep-22-2009   

a great read...erotic but quite interesting.. - Anonymous - Nov-21-2009   

heartfelt, hot... sweet and sad at the same time. looking forward to more from this talented writer in the future. thank you! - omkhalil - Nov-25-2009   

I've rated this story 10 for spice and all ^^ I don't even remember if I've ever done this before and I've read a LOT though.

This one is short, but has it all and comes so near to the perfection! The vision is just brilliant... the sex is bleeding hot... and the bard, so talented! The main character is just fascinating... - yuka - May-11-2010   

wow... - bluebutterfly - May-23-2010   

excellent short story. sex HOTl need some more please!
- andi - Jun-06-2010   

Hot! And please, what about some PWSAALOP (Porn with Sequel and a lot of Plot)? I think there would be room for it! It's like a teaser for a bigger story! - Freya - Jun-15-2010   

Seriously, this NEEDS a sequel and the author would be doing the FF community a huge favor by writing more. Excellent first offering. - Xenamungrrr - Jun-19-2010   


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