Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Drama | Very Short Story - 3 pages | Finished | Dec-09 | |
Thanks, that almost made me cry. Nicely written. I really suffered with Jen. - romansilence - Dec-20-2009 nicely written - crv - Dec-20-2009 read all of them as promised...of all, I like this the best. - butterfly_Orchid - Jan-08-2011 this is a lovely piece of writing. heartfelt; touching. - kc - Jan-13-2011 Poignant and sad. - Lyn B - Feb-28-2011 Sweet and touching. Nice story. - Lyn B - Feb-28-2011 |
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Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Very Short Story - 1 page | Finished | Feb-11 | |
Very nice. Romanticly melancholic. - Sandy - Dec-12-2011 Really nice! Sweet but also sad. Really enjoyed reading it. But kinda wish that a story was made from it. Anyways definitely worth reading! (: - Anonymous - May-07-2013 |
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Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Very Short Story - 7 pages | Finished | Sep-09 Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. Links: The Athenaeum's Scroll Archive | |
Wonderfully sexy! Thanks for sharing, hope we get to read more from you. The awesomeness of delivery takes on a new meaning! ;D - Chess - Sep-15-2009 Damn, that was hot. Write some more please..Youre really good! - Yani - Sep-16-2009 Another wonderful short one. Keep writing, please! P.S. But my first choice would be Second Best :D - LeadOn - Sep-16-2009 i love the setting of the story and the story itself!!! - bobbert - Sep-17-2009 Very good, very hot! Would love to read more! - Irish Eyes - Sep-19-2009 Love the dirty humor and your style is superb...cheers to Lez literature :) - Butter_Orchid - Jan-08-2011 That was a very cute and sexy short tale.I enjoyed it. - uber goober - Oct-08-2012 |
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Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 11 pages | Finished | Aug-09 Honors/Awards: #65 in 2009 Two-Time Top-25 #1. | |
Wonderful! I held my breath for a second there ;D I hope that you continue Kate and Erin's story. Thanks for sharing your work! - Chess - Aug-11-2009 My sister wrote this, so you guys better read it!!! lol Luv ya sis e e e - Mike - Aug-12-2009 Estillore, for a first timer, you are goooodddd. heartwrenching but sweet, a must read short story. - easteden - Aug-12-2009 Oh my gosh.. this is heart wrenching. I loved it. Please write more!!! Especially bout them =) - Yani - Aug-12-2009 Awww! - CJ - Aug-12-2009 Just amazing! I'd like to know this story from Erin's view, please :) - LeadOn - Aug-12-2009 love it - Tahn - Aug-12-2009 Very good story from first timer. Keep it going!!! - Ramsey - Aug-14-2009 Well, that was rather sweet. :) She did good with this one. - Anonymous - Aug-16-2009 wow, i was never a fan of short stories but seeing this in number 1 spot made me curious. and WOW the story was great. I would love to heas erin's pov and maybe just maybe a longer story of this characters ?? :D - Fan - Aug-19-2009 Excellent story... I am normally not a fan of shorts but you really pulled it together tightly. Awesome... - Anon - Aug-23-2009 i love it!!!!! - bobert - Aug-25-2009 For a first posted story this is an excellent read..I would recommend it to all. It was so heart felt...Please read - Linn - Aug-30-2009 WOW...what a wonderful read! Heartwarming and almost heartbreaking...Would love to read more of this story! - Irish Eyes - Sep-19-2009 one of my favorite stories. SEQUEL PLEASE¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡ - Anonymous - Sep-27-2009 I actually had tears in my eyes. I'm speachless. Hope we can see Erin's perspective soon. - Anonymous - Dec-28-2009 Excellent story...Would love to read more of this story! - Anonymous - Jan-28-2010 I don't know why, but this just really strikes a cord in me. I love this story, too bad it's short, cause I really want more. Read this. - damnedchick - Feb-22-2010 this is so achingly sweet, it brought tears to my eyes. - kc - Sep-03-2010 Excelent job, Erin's view please or second part....so good - lebasi - Sep-29-2010 sweet :) - butterfly_orchid - Jan-08-2011 I liked the simplicity of this story. The characters are very well written. Angst and happy. A good read - Lyn B - Jan-21-2011 I read Estillore Second Best breathlessly... It's so hearwrenching that I'm not sure if this surreal short story makes me want to cry or smile. I decided to do both !! - rita - Mar-26-2011 This was beautifully written with a complete beginning and ending. I really felt for the characters. - Kerr - May-11-2011 What a great story. Well done - sassy123 - Aug-01-2011 Wonderful story.. Sweet and heartwarming. - Anonymous - Jan-26-2014 Oh my goodness! This story hit right in my heart. The emotions are almost tangible. This is a raw and real!! - Alyssa - Dec-05-2014 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Very Short Story - 5 pages | Finished | Feb-11 | |
i like sappy, and this is lovely. - kc - Feb-14-2011 awesome short stories...Estillore should write more !! - easteden - Feb-17-2011 Nice little sappy fluff piece. I love it when you get little 'Twists' at the end like that. - Kugai - Feb-21-2011 Another reviewer called it fluffy and it is, but it's very well written. The ending was a little unexpected, but it only added to the story. Nice read. - Lyn B - Feb-28-2011 Estillore never failed to deliver..it seems that her short stories is deeper than you thought. Read on. Estillore should write more !! - zen - Mar-26-2011 |