such a cute and HOT story :-P - Anonymous - Jan-19-2010
It really is a nice story, and sexy, really sexy - Anonymous - Jan-19-2010
NICE-really different--nice change - Anonymous - Jan-25-2010
Loved this! - Ginger - Jan-27-2010
Awesome story!!!! Great read. - camree - Mar-14-2010
You are a wonderful writer. The flow of the story is really good and I like the first persons point of view. And it was really really hot (phew). Please keep writing and posting. Well done. - Dale - Apr-04-2010
What a great read - Anonymous - Apr-09-2010
Well-written, sweet and hot!! Thanks! - Anonymous - Apr-20-2010
GREAT READ!!!!! I really encourage this writer to carry on with her writing - interesting, hot and with a twist - what more should a good short story have? I RECOMMEND THIS WRITER!! - CoolNik - Apr-20-2010
coool....loving every line of it> Gracelan Chase, keep up the good work - easeden - Apr-25-2010
Great story: YOU HAVE TO READ IT!
But: Awful title! seriously, It made me overlook the story the first time around! - Anonymous - Apr-29-2010
Me ha encantado... I've really enjoyed it, but I think the title is a mistake - Rouge - Jun-17-2010
good start and finishing story. I'd love to write more stories from Gracelan Chase. - zen - Apr-04-2011
Awesome Awesome Awesome story!!!! she is a great writer......
please write more.........!!!! plz plz plz - Anonymous - Nov-04-2011
Awesome... READ IT! - Anonymous - Jul-02-2012
That was an intense and incredibly sexy story. It is short but so well written that it delivers a lot of emotion and plot in a very entertaining way. Great job Gracelan Chase. - ubergoober - Jun-01-2014
Unlike most readers, I'm not sure I like this one. It is very well written (especially for a first person point of view), very emotional and hot. But the subject, it seems very controlling and manipulative even though Mitch's actions were rooted in concern. - Stacia - Jun-02-2014