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Nipple Factory (The) by JLNicky and Honeybakedham     
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 44 pages | Finished | Nov-05
Cast: Sheila
Major Sheila Patton has her life in control as the head honcho of her military warehouse. Control begins to slip through her fingers when a pallet of goods from Babies 1st Nipple mistakenly gets dropped at her door. Anger, embarrassment and a shy blush is just the beginning. Her heart skips a beat when she meets with a red headed spitfire and owner of the Nipple Factory, Bobbi Dellicroix.
Well imagine my surprise when I came across this!! An old PWP writing favorite and a recent favorite who's previous work makes my eyes water with laughter. To see them listed as Co-authors made my day! Keep up the great work Bards!! I hope to see more joint efforts in the near future. - Sarah J. - Nov 29th, 2005   

"Don't make me use Lucy people! Family, or not, you are in my way." That line had coffee shoot out of my nose and all over my monitor, and it wasn't the only one! This is like reading a more matured and wittier Larisa story (No offence Larisa, I love your work!). This is full of great one liners and excellent caricatures of known characters. I laughed all the way to work scaring all the other passengers on my train. Great work ladies! I hope there is more from the two of you very soon. And please, more Lucy, that was great! - Lucy Lover - Dec 6th, 2005   

This is a madcap descent into madness with adorably insane characters and a wonderful inner dialogue. Where did you two come up with half these characters and the plot to start with?? Im sure a conversation with you two would leave me with broken ribs. Thanks for the laughs girls!! - Miss Understood - Jul-07-2006   

:D _ **** SPOILER ALERT **** i thought it was really a nipple factory, as it turned out it was meant for baby's nipple thingy. Man!!! Anyway great story, actually its funny - Sky - Jun-06-2014   


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