Feeding Time by
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Horror | Very Short Story - 6 pages | Finished | Oct-09 | ![]() |
It's not safe at night. He should know. He's one of the things that they warn you about: a predator without conscience that preys on whomever he chooses. But for every evil that exists there is one much, much worse. | |
Oh I liked this one, and I loved the twist. - Treecee - Oct-21-2009 Nice ending. I grinned as he went down. - Anonymous - Oct-24-2009 This is a good story, with a very nice twist at the end. - Anonymous - Oct-25-2009 Nice.. very nice :) - Yani - Dec-09-2009 This short story packed a lot into it. I liked the twist at the end. I'm not usually a fan of these types of stories but I liked this one. - Lyn B - Feb-11-2011 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Drama | Very Short Story - 6 pages | Finished | Apr-09 | ![]() |
A long time ago, something precious was lost. Perhaps it can be found again&if the right questions are asked. A take on 'Interview With A Vampire'...with a twist. Fate often conspires to bring two souls together. It is futile to stand in her way. | |
I really loved this story. Wish it was longer, could we see more? PLEASE!!! - Charlie13 - Apr-19-2009 |
Illusions by
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 17 pages | Finished | Mar-06 | ![]() |
This was a really good story! Hope we will hear more about what happens to these 2 women. - Charlie13 - May-02-2009 a forever love. appropriately "light" reading for valentine's day. this site is a treasure trove, and the writings of this bard is wow. - kc - Feb-13-2011 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Very Short Story - 6 pages | Finished | Apr-09 | ![]() |
There's always that one thing...the one thing that you say will bring about the end of your relationship...that you just could not bear to stay through. If that one thing happens, would you have the strength to leave the one you love? This is about one woman's thoughts as she gets ready to walk out the door. | |
this is very very good. I could see an feel everything. Too short though. I would have loved to see more of these characters. - Anonymous - Apr-18-2009 I really love the way you write just wish they were longer! - Charlie13 - Apr-19-2009 This is very well written. I like how the author draws you into the scene. I could picture the rain, and feel the characters pain. Very short, but well worth reading. - Lyn B - Feb-17-2011 I really enjoyed this story and was sad to see this story end so soon! - Ricky - Oct-11-2012 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Very Short Story - 5 pages | Finished | Jul-06 | ![]() |
There was no greater betrayal than that from the one she loved. There was nothing that could break her spirit more than the hurt caused by lies. Just as she thought that she could no longer go on, hope came from a very surprising source. | |
Very beautiful and touchng, is there a sequel in the works i hope? - dez - Aug-13-2006 Very well written. I loved the theme of this story. It deserves a sequel, but is enough as a stand alone too. It gives hope to all of us who've had broken hearts. - Lyn B - Feb-12-2011 ummm... more, please? this is indeed a lovely story as it is. but, it makes a beautiful beginning for something more. this bard's writings leave you begging for more. - kc - Feb-13-2011 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Very Short Story - 4 pages | Finished | Aug-12 | ![]() |
Have you ever wondered what goes on inside a writer's head? You might just be sorry you ever asked. | |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 40 pages | Finished | May-06 Cast: Sierra, Beth, Anna, Cassidy, Jesse, Cass, Cassie, Steven Honors/Awards: #95 in 2006 Top-25 #1. Links: The Atheneaum | ![]() |
Sometimes you think your life is perfect and nothing can ever go wrong. Sometimes you think the one you love will love you forever. What if you're wrong? Would you have the strength to let go and move on? Those are the questions that haunt Cassidy MacKenzie when her idyllic life takes a heart wrenching turn. Will she be strong enough? One story...five points of view. | |
This was a very well written story. I liked the way the story was constructed and how the 'accident' affected each person close to Cassidy. Each perspective added a little more to the story, and the glimpses of the future added to that too. I'm trying not to spoil the story. Read the story. It's a good one. - Lyn B - Feb-12-2011 |
Original / Uber | Modern | Alternative | Vignette | Very Short Story - 9 pages | Finished | Oct-09 | ![]() |
There's just something about her...something that draws you in even as you try to pull away. You belong to another but you cannot help wanting her. What is this power that she has? What on earth is she? | |
Great story! I wish it was a littler longer, I feel everything happened too fast. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2009 Nicely done and as always, leaves me wanting more. Can't wait to read more. - Darke - Nov-02-2009 Excellent story. I didn't see the twist at the end coming, but it adds to the intensity of the story. Very nice. - Lyn B - Feb-12-2011 |