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Dark Omens by Rhys D

Xena | Alternative | Drama | Novella - 116 pages | Finished |
Cast: Xena, Myniria, Tersis, Amdria, Andara, Melosa, Rhys, Crimson, Telemedia

it really sounded like an interesting story but the way it is layed out everything runs together and it is extremely hard to follow - Anonymous - Oct 20th, 2002

TWO WORDS... PARAGRAPHS PPL!!!!i really couldn't read it, i tried but i ended up cross-eyed. Could the author do something about this? - Snuff - Nov 10th, 2004

What I read of the story seemed quite good, but frankly I just couldn't bear paragraphs that took up the whole page. [Editor's Note: Ooops, that is bad. It's a formatting problem and we'll try to fix it if we still have the original doc. 9-17-2010] - Anonymous - Sep-08-2010

Maybe this author was trying to conserve paper by running entire paragraphs together. Whatever the reason it simply makes reading, exhausting. I managed to wade through part 1 but I'll have to rest up for a couple of months before I tackle part 2. - Anonymous - Dec-11-2010

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Xena \| Alternative \| Drama \| Novella - 116 pages \| Finished \| Cast: Xena, Myniria, Tersis, Amdria, Andara, Melosa, Rhys, Crimson, Telemedia

it really sounded like an interesting story but the way it is layed out everything runs together and it is extremely hard to follow - Anonymous - Oct 20th, 2002 TWO WORDS... PARAGRAPHS PPL!!!!i really couldn't read it, i tried but i ended up cross-eyed. Could the author do something about this? - Snuff - Nov 10th, 2004 What I read of the story seemed quite good, but frankly I just couldn't bear paragraphs that took up the whole page. [Editor's Note: Ooops, that is bad. It's a formatting problem and we'll try to fix it if we still have the original doc. 9-17-2010] - Anonymous - Sep-08-2010 Maybe this author was trying to conserve paper by running entire paragraphs together. Whatever the reason it simply makes reading, exhausting. I managed to wade through part 1 but I'll have to rest up for a couple of months before I tackle part 2. - Anonymous - Dec-11-2010