Links: (web.archive.org) ForevaXena's FanFic Part 2
im getting nothing on this when i try to go to the story is it me? - Anonymous - Dec 29th, 2005
This is a great story. Where's the rest? It ends after part 18. Please help. - jac - Apr-10-2006
When a story is this lengthy, I'll read a little at a time. Not the case here... This story is so wonderfully put together, it grabs you from the beginning and doesn't let go. - jac - Apr-12-2006
This story has been removed! - Raven - Sep-19-2006
This an extremely good read, I absolutely loved it, I loved both Sam and Allison although I must admit my softest spot was for Sam. Great coming of age story definitely go and read it!! - Lissa - Sep-24-2006
I can't access this either!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-27-2006
This story is one of a kind! It's well writen, with a nice flow and very interesting characters (you'll really want to wring Susan's neck!). Don't let it's lenght throw you off!!! - Bacchuskiller - May-20-2007
Can't get past Part One! [Editor's note: There is a link to part 2 above.] - ice - Aug-02-2008
Really great story!!! - ice - Aug-15-2008
Loved it!! Except for my blood pressure rising when that Susan bitch acted up... - Anonymous - May-29-2009
ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - Lengthy yes (it is a novel after all) but more than worth the effort. - Anna Lei - Oct-15-2009
One of the best stories I have ever read! I just couldn't stop reading! It's one of the few stories where I had to take a kleenex to wipe my tears. seriously, if you search a story where there is haertbreak, love, hate, friendship, and family this is your story! - Spreeuwtje - Jul-01-2010
One word.... Brilliant! - JettBlk - Aug-20-2010
I dont know how I missed this one. I have read every single story on here and then some, but come across this gem last night and I must say that it is by far the best I have read in a long while. - Pickles - Dec-27-2011
The story was good. Kept me intensely interested for a few days. However. There isn't a single likeable character in the story. Not a single one. - Anonymous - Mar-08-2012
I was really enjoying this story up until the middle. I enjoyed the premise (though not exactly new, the whole step sister thing is pretty interesting and - why not - hot!) and was pretty absorbed throughout the first part, but later, when sh*t hits the fan seemed like the author lost her way. **SPOILER ALERT NOW** By the time the main characters got together again I didn't care about them or their love at all! They were both acting like immature teenagers and seemed so silly. I don't know... It was a major let down for me. so I just wanted to throw my 2 cents in here, just 'cause all reviews are pretty positive, so I thought why not just counterbalance things? - RD - Sep-24-2013