| This was a heartwarming story that made me laugh out loud. Having taken my twin nieces and their younger sibling places in their youth I could really relate to Randy. Well worth the read. - R. Nolan Mar 29th, 2004 |
| Great story!! Absolutely funny and charmingly warm. I really hope French & Fry will get a sequel where French's racoon-like temperamental tenacity pairs up with Fry's equally bandit-like inquisitive nature to solve some Michellin-guide fraud going on in restaurants. Not as 2 strangers in one tent, but as a strange, but passionate couple in a relationship! >Go on Creme Brulee, get cooking!!! - letterwolf Mar 29th, 2004 |
| Poignant. Wonderful. I actually said "Wow" after I read the last line. - Alicia Mar 27th, 2004 |
| A very well written PWP. - E Mar 26th, 2004 |
| Well written, interesting characters and engaging story ...I'm really enjoying it! - Chris Mar 25th, 2004 |
| Just Wow! I was at work crying at my desk. It's powerful and touching. Thank you for sharing this. - Anonymous Mar 25th, 2004 |
| I read this only because it was recommeded to me as I wasn't familiar with this bard. Before I knew what time it was, 4 a.m. came and went and I was still too engrossed in this story to go to sleep. What a great time travel story and anyone who enjoys this genre of writing will love it. The climax of it will stun you as it did me. Very well done and now I can't wait to read more of this bard's work. - Blayne Mar 25th, 2004 |
| I thought this was an interesting idea, to follow what happened after Xena's redemtion to the men she lead before she changed. I liked how it played out and her reaction to what the men had done after she left with Hercules. Well done. - Ron Mar 24th, 2004 |
| I always enjoy stories written by this bard, and once again she delivers. I loved this story! A powerful, humorous, and moving read, it may not be for everyone, but it is a fascinating Gabrielle and Xena relationship story - with a twist! Thank you XLB! - Chris Mar 23rd, 2004 |
| I am still waiting for more....hurry!!!!! - taz Mar 23rd, 2004 |
| Great stuff! JC's writing gets better and better. - E Mar 22nd, 2004 |
| I found this a sweet love story and i really find Dakota quite interesting. I can't wait to read the next part and see what happens next. - Rockie Mar 22nd, 2004 |
| This is sweet story. It made me smile more than once. Thanks! - Susan Mar 22nd, 2004 |
| Extraordinary story. Tas is a very imaginative bard with excellent writing skills. Her characters and plot are well defined. In addition to providing a breathtaking adventure, discerning readers also come away with an insight and appreciation for the advantages an open society always has over a closed society. Epic, well worth the time. - Yvonne Mar 21st, 2004 |
| Though the story is long you don't feel it at all. It is so incredibly well written, I couldn't stop reading! And the last part of it...well...left me without breath for about 15 minutes! Thank sweet Aphrodite that I survived!! But my eyes remain wide open forever after what they read :) - AquariusG Mar 21st, 2004 |
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I absolutely LOVED Edge of Nowhere. I am very excited that you are continuing the saga in Path of Thorns. However, I am hesitant to read the story because it is unfinished, and actually barely started. Are you going to finish Path of Thorns..?? If so, soon...??? - Anonymous Mar 19th, 2004 |
| SL....(I slacked an forgot to post this) thank you for keeping this alive.... I enjoyed the phone calls an the laughter you've brought to me about these stories!! My Lunch times are even better,as its fun to think of how in the hell you've come up with these twisted an funny things to keep them alive....tanks again for keeping these going. - BRAT Mar 19th, 2004 |
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Dead Link. - Grommetik Mar 19th, 2004 Fan Fiction Editor's Note: Live Link here. |
| Very sweet story Shadylady. As usual a job very well done. Thanks for sharing the St. Patrick's Day tale with us and thanks for the Ghostly Nudge Series....Best wishes to you on this day and EVERY day... - Stacy Lynn Mar 17th, 2004 |
| An excellent "what if" sort of story. I love stories that have Xena and Gabrielle meeting in a different way. Everyone should read it. :) - Bug Mar 17th, 2004 |
| Just finished the whole series and I really liked the idea and the way it was developed. What a wonderful idea of creating a family in the middle of science fiction story. I adore Hilda I hope there is a fourth part. - Tar Mar 17th, 2004 |
| Oh my god!! I just got out of the shower because this story drove me to it! Fantastic! Finally.. a story for grown-ups and not for the faint at heart. Vertigo write's with a passion and intensity that leaves you breathless. I couldn't read fast enough or catch my breath. Please read "Private Dancer" as a warm up. You won't be sorry. - Califa Mar 16th, 2004 |
| This was a really interesting look at the ep and the charahters of Xena and Gabrielle. I really enjoyed it! - Jannie Mar 16th, 2004 |
| Just incredible! I loved that one so much that I just couldn't stop smiling :D And what do men really know about us, huh?? - AquariusG. Mar 15th, 2004 |
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There is light at the end of the tunnel. Just have to open your eyes from the darkness to see it. Sometimes that is the hardest thing to do. But when you do a peace happens. May peace always find you and be with you. - Anonymous Mar 15th, 2004 |
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This has been one of the best - well-written, exciting and interesting characterization, great flow, engaging for the reader - stories I have read in a very long time. Etoh brings the reader, alternately cheering and cringing through this amazingly broad yet limited panorama that is the lives of these women. There are no heroes in this piece but there is heroism a plenty in the lives of these beautiful characters. The only possible shortcoming might be the lack of physical description, something I actually rather enjoyed as I could put the faces I liked on the characters. This story was an all around wonderful experience! Kudos Etoh! - Nyc Mar 14th, 2004 |
| A simply spellbinding story. I think this bard truly captured what the young Xena might have been like. The story is also very well written, great style and a real GEM. Currently I've read it at least five times. BRILLIANT!!! - Keshet Mar 14th, 2004 |
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Well, I always wondered what happened to Kim after that fiasco with Kerry in the ER series. Now I know! Thanks R. Nolan. You picked it up and made it into a story, giving Kim a place she deserves. - letterwolf Mar 14th, 2004 |
| When I stumbled upon this story, I had no idea how prfound it would be. Simply on eof the best I have read period. I enjoy the fact that it's not a 'nice and neat' story and contains many intense depictions of survival of violence without being sensational. Amazing! - BkFaith Mar 14th, 2004 |
| I never thought I'd enjoy a conqueror story, but this was out of this world. Suppose I shouldn't have been surprised from the author of the Soul Mates series. I think I might just become a Merpup. More Please. - Keshet Mar 14th, 2004 |
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I must agree with Roxy here... a sequel is definately a must! There are few novels that i feel are worthy of a comment, and this is absolutely one of them! A marvelous storyline, i love how they transverse between past and present, the characters are so real... i find that i can easily picture them, which always makes a reading easier! I must say, i am a sucker for a good old heartwrencher, and LJ Maas has produced an excellent example. YOU WILL ALL HERE ME.... DO NOT GO PAST THIS NOVEL. READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Once again, a brilliant story. *applause* - Snuff Mar 14th, 2004 |
| This is one of those "What If Xena and Gabrielle had met differently" stories. Romantic and hot. - J Mar 13th, 2004 |
| I've never really been into Uber...that was before stumbling upon L.A.'s works. I fell in love with the Sara/Chloe series. It was inventive, witty, and poignant...all the things I think great stories should be. The real-life character studies, imbued with just the right amount of humor, had me thinking long after I finished the tales. I'm glad that you feature her (pardon the assumption) works, and thanks for the link to her website. - cyndyn Mar 13th, 2004 |
| Not bad at all I like the X-men a great deal It is a shame more do not use the characters on more stories as this is the only one I have read.Love xena and Gabrielle as mutants. - Daydream Mar 13th, 2004 |
| Great story - Anonymous Mar 12th, 2004 |
| Wow, deep and dark but heartfelt. I could feel the doubt and hopelessness of the character in the story. Thanks for the new read. - Shadylady Mar 12th, 2004 |
| Great read! Made me nostalgic for some of those old times of sneaking glances at those cheerleaders and trying to make my move in the same shy ways Palmer did. I loved it! I also liked the secondary characters. Everyone should have had such friends in high school. - Alex Tryst Mar 12th, 2004 |
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[This Comment contains spoilers.] Turning tides is a great read. It portrays the helplesness in the maelström of love and sexual attraction/need quite well. Naten could have fleshed out some parts in more detail, added perspective or a bit more conclusion, such as: what of the "sneaky stepbrother"?. His machinations and the plans/deals he apparently made during his vacation are not referred to again further in the story. Perhaps a sequel is in the making? Also the need for anonymous, strongly dominant sex. That, to my mind, could not just disappear overnight, so to speak. But well, those are just my thoughts. I really enjoyed reading it and certainly recommed it to others! Letterwolf - Mar 12th, 2004 |
| I really loved this story, I thought that Jackie was fascinating. I thought that was a really good idea to recreate the classic and make it the same and yet so different from the movie. Really good job. To be honest I'd like to see more of these two. - Nattie Mar 11th, 2004 |
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Please don't end it in part three. - Anonymous Mar 11th, 2004 [Fan Fiction Editor's Note: Lady J Has assured us that it will continue. J |
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[This Comment contains spoilers.] Always wondered when someone would do a Relic Hunter/Xena Crossover.Good story. Coulda had at least 1 or 2 fight scenes in it. Liked the way you made Sydney turn out to be xena. - Cyn Mar 10th, 2004 |
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Absolutely wonderful story. Would deserve to printed at once. - letterwolf Mar 10th, 2004 |
| I really enjoyed this story. There are times when you want to just read a story about a romance... without misunderstandings and slapstick. There was some serious drama and a bit of 'thriller' built in, but just enough. My one critique would be that some of the secondary characters were sacrificed for the 'drama' quotient. the family drama was actually just as interesting and there were a few holes left in it in light of the physical drama. It's like the story took off in a different direction than where the focus began. But all in all... totally enjoyable and a 'straight on 'til morning' read. - RoxyTrek Mar 9th, 2004 |
To all our readers and fans,BTW, The Athenaum is currently looking for Beta Volunteers, so if you think you have the time and some of what it takes, please contact: WebWarrior
First of all we would like to thank all those nice people who sent us such lovely feedback on Chronicles of Darkness and our Christmas story! You guys totally rock!
Yes, we are still writing. Actually, the sequel to the Christmas story is done as are three more chapters of Chronicles of Darkness and we really, really, really wanted to post that stuff weeks ago, but, we have a big problem. Our former beta reader has no time any more and it seems that we are unable to find a new one. Now, if there is anybody out there who would like to be our beta reader, please tell us at fiur-vlamme@web.de
We really, really, really are getting kind of desperate here!
Thank you for your time, and we hope you all have a nice day!
Fiur and Vlamme
| I was so deeply into this story that I read it at work and forgot I was at work. I adore this story, these people have such heart. I really adore this family. I love watching Veba grow and mature and Rickie become softer and even more loving. It was also a really good mystery. Just an excellent story. - Luckie Mar 8th, 2004 |
| Captured X&G's characters quite well. Good plot. Will be particularly appreciated by those who enjoy the First Time genre. - Yvonne Mar 7th, 2004 |
| I loved this story, It has two things that are very dear to me. It is true love coming at last to two people who had been freinds for a very long time. The other is that it pointed out a state of sadness in the world that these two people did there part to correct. A perfect story:) - milly Mar 7th, 2004 |
| Really enjoyed this one. KG's stuff is always wonderful but this was certainly fun. Would have made a very nice novella or even novel if the secondary characters had been fleshed out. However, everyone was quite three dimensinoal and the read was a pleasure. Would be nice to see these two again. Reggie's transformation was quite remarkable and it would be interesting to see what happens in the long run. Her past is just itching to come back and bite... well, you get the idea. - Roxytrek Mar 7th, 2004 |
| I absolutely loved this story. It's a great read for anyone who is looking for something to read on a day like this. This story is absolutely beautiful and proves that love can cross time. - Alise Mar 7th, 2004 |
| This is one of my favorite stories. A true romance with real life issues and a very satisfying ending. A well written story that would do well to be complimented by a sequel. - RoxyTrek Mar 7th, 2004 |
| Come what may,we have all been down this road. Its a long painful journey,but they say it gets better with time. And time is what we have my dear! Never forget,All for one,one for ALL! - Wizzy Mar 6th, 2004 |
| You know, I just loved this story. Very sweet, practically angst free... Well done ladies. A wonderful read. It's how High School should have gone, for all of us. If I had any critique, it would be that the secondary characters needed more depth. Would have transformed this from a novella to a novel, but didn't detract from my enjoyment one bit. - RoxyTrek Mar 6th, 2004 |
| I just have to say," Wow". Great story kept you on your toes. Very different from others. Anymore said and i'd give the whole story away. - Cyn Mar 6th, 2004 |
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Excellent! short story. It was refreshing to read and truely brings us back to where we came from and what we are to be like to each other. Betrayal is a lack of faith and trust and a word that should not exsist in any human realationships. Job well done! It does make you step back and re-think about yourself and life. Thank you for the nudge Lady J. :) - sunny Mar 6th, 2004 |
| Brilliant as usual! Gardner's stories captivate you from the get go! I only have one thing to say..finish finish..finish..!The conclusion of "An Affair of Love" would be nice to have also. Author..Author!! - Califa Mar 5th, 2004 |
| I laughed till I cried. Who are you and how do you know me? Great job Lady J. - Denise Mar 5th, 2004 |
| Deep and lyrical. - Gina Mar 5th, 2004 |
| I've been reading this book again lately and I was hooked. Just like the first time when I couldn't stop reading and finished it in one weekend. There are some many twists and turns that you will think "oh, i figured it out" more than once just to read you're totally wrong on the next page. It always reminds me on classic Hollywood drama from the old days with all it's charme. It has everything from mystery, fame, love, family and life. One of my all time favorit books! - Mindwalker78 Mar 5th, 2004 |
| I never wanted to read fan fic stories involving FIN or Post FIN. I saw many recommendations for this story and after looking into it, found it to be around 600 pgs. With that many pages, this story had to have some substance. I had hoped anyway. So I took a chance. Luckily, I wasn't disappointed; in fact, my socks were totally blown off. This story is simply, in a word, brilliant. I stayed awake so many nights until my eyes would betray me and close from exhaustion. The characters introduced in this tale were so rich, I couldn't wait to read their storylines in addition to following Gabrielle and Xena's. I grew to adore Zara and was so happy Gabrielle had befriended her. Once more, the author gave historical facts before each section; I actually learned about other cultures while reading this story. There is way too much to discuss in this type of arena, but do yourselves a favor and give this story a read. It truly is incredible. Fantastic job, Crystal. - Di Bauden Mar 4th, 2004 |
| You've got 2 in 1!!! Xena & Gabrielle making love on the space station in the far future! And boy, is it hot! - Kamila Mar 4th, 2004 |
| i always thought that herc and xena belonged together if only they had explore the possibilities. i don't think gabby and xena were lovers i think they were very close friends. i also loved this story if only xena and herc could be united in a movie i give this a thumbs up - onika auguste Mar 4th, 2004 |
| OMG! This is so funny and so real to life! You've captured office politics with style. I love the characters and I hope we'll get to see more of them in the future! Go Lady J! - Kaia Mar 4th, 2004 |
| That was one of the most inspiring and moving things I have ever read. Thank you for expressing the heartbreak of betrayal so well. - Am Not a Moose Mar 4th, 2004 |
| This story is powerful. I thought the Bible references were right on. If you enjoy reading something that makes you feel and think do not miss this one. - A. Noni Mouse Mar 4th, 2004 |
| This story effected me the same way as Phone Call. I was moved and can feel your tears. This story is poignant and heart wrenching. Lady J whether you write comedy or something thought provoking you always do an outstanding job. - Jazz Mar 3rd, 2004 |
| I really think this was a very special story. It said so much about Xena and Gabrielle's relationship. It's very beautiful. - Carrie Mar 3rd, 2004 |
| What a great surprise this morning to see part 2 of Business Trip. One thing I can honestly say is I hope it does not end in part 3. - Judi Mar 3rd, 2004 |
| This story seems to be incomplete. It is to be continued, per the note at the bottom of part 5. I was disappointed by that fact, as I was really interested in reading the completed story. - Anonymous Mar 2nd, 2004 |
| Excellent. - Teri Mar 2nd, 2004 |
| This story is so great. I can't wait till the next part. You have done one fanatic job on it Lady J. - Debbie Dee Mar 2nd, 2004 |
| T. I reread this story many times over the past few days and again several times today. I am sorry that you have had to go through an experience as described within this tale. You are one of the finest, loyal, and most compassionate woman I have ever met. I find it an honor to call you friend. You have demonstrated your faithfulness and understanding time after time to me. I will always have you covered should you ever need me beside you. Thank you, my friend, for sharing your story with us. - Shadylady (#2) Mar 1st, 2004 |
| Naughty and funny story about a bad bad bard and a bad bad warrior. And they really enjoy bathing together...:))) I almost as much enjoy reading about that... - Magda J. Mar 1st, 2004 |
| Xena gets hotter than ever when Camilla`s nearby!!! Love that!!! - Magda J. Mar 1st, 2004 |
| FABULOUS!!! I`ll have to read it once a day at least! And I especially loved the dates being an aphrodisiac! DELICIOUS!!! - Magda J. Mar 1st, 2004 |
~ Lesley Davis ~ Woven In Life's Tapestry and Cast A Wide Circle are now slated for a release date of May! These novels are to be published by WindStorm Creative.
| wish she would finished the story. try to write to the author but her email is no longer valid. - dot Mar 1st, 2004 |
| Aaahhh loved it! Just loved it! Short, not mushy and straight to the point ;) Everything is there so you better read it now! - Kamila Feb 29th, 2004 |
| INCREDIBLE read!!! A must read! This story has it all, fear, love, sadness, anger. Your feelings will run the whole ladder of emotions. The words that melted into sentences to make the paragraphs and the finally the story, flowed over my skin like silk. I did not want to stop reading. Thank you for a wonderful read. - K. Hart Feb 27th, 2004 |
| Another FANTASTIC read!! Again, any emotion that the author wrote about the reader will feel it as if it was their own emotion. So great are the words and the way this series is written, you just want to keep coming back for more. Can't wait to start on the third in this series. Thank you again for one of the most enjoyable stories/series I have ever read. - K. Hart Feb 27th, 2004 |
| Once again, Susanne M. Beck has out done herself. If you have not read this trilogy, I suggest you read it from the first word of the first story to the last word of the last story. If you are looking for a story that stands out from all the rest, the Angel and Ice series is the one you are looking for. Thanks again for an incredible journey. - K. Hart Feb 28th, 2004 |
| Nothing better than sitting bored in an IM with you. God only knows what developes. From spiders to making out in a cooler. I wonder what is gonna happen next time we get bored. Heheheehe when it happens it will be one heck of a ride and a great story. - T. Stratton Feb 27th, 2004 |
| Great story. I wish there were more stories like this set after AFIN. - Sarah Feb 26th, 2004 |
| Heartache, grief and joy so lyrically embodied should not be missed! - Anonymous Feb 25th, 2004 |
| Another excellent offering from Larisa -- she just keeps getting better. I enjoyed the mystery -- didn't even come close to who the bad guy was. I always wait till things is done before starting as I know nothing will get done till I am done with the story. - Linda Feb 25th, 2004 |
| This was a great story! I never read a better X and G, It was really great to see Gabrielle as the hero of the peice. I loved this. Thank you. - Jonnie Feb 25th, 2004 |
| What a sweet story, crafted like a rose unfurling slowly revealing itself to the delight of all. Very well written - Lari Feb 25th, 2004 |
| Softball and sexual tension? Of Course! Characters are beautifully rounded out. Story line flows. Heat of passion is tremendous. There is some well written mother/daughter angst. Good READ! - jlnickymaster Feb 24th, 2004 |
| This story is great! Visualizations are perfect. I could almost feel the flexing leg muscles during the "lap dance". Now if this comment doesn't get someone to read this story...nothing will! Thanks for the great short! - jlnickymaster Feb 24th, 2004 |
| This story was a charming story... - Anonymous Feb 24th, 2004 |
| I really have enjoyed this writer's Conqueror series. I was delighted to learn that she is equally skilled in writing an uber tale. Don't miss this one! - LDP Feb 24th, 2004 |
| Damn, how did I miss reading this last week. Funny.....funny.....funny. Had tears streaming down my eyes and nearly wet my pants laughing so hard. WANT MORE!!!!!!! - Anonymous Feb 24th, 2004 |
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Thank you Shadylady for opening your heart felt tell for all of us to read. I too have been through a similar emotional encounter. It does drain the energy out of you to be the one to always carry the burden of love. I had to learn to let go. - Anonymous Feb 24th, 2004 |
| Very cute, makes ya feel all warm and smooshy inside =o) - Willow Feb 24th, 2004 |
| This is SUCH a beautifully written story!! It's short, punchy but had everything in it to make it a MUST READ! - Anonymous Feb 24th, 2004 |
| I just finished reading Curse of the Conqueror and I give it high marks. A tongue tied Conqueror looking for "love" in all the wrong places and unable to talk about, um... well, you know... makes for a very funny story. Add to that an excellent plot and you have a winner. - Patricia Feb 23rd, 2004 |
~ Lynn Ames ~ I wanted to let you know, that The Price of Fame is coming out in print in less than two weeks! Not only that, but it is already available for pre-order (actual publication date is March 1st). You can find purchase information on my website at www.lynnames.com. All you have to do is click on the book cover (or on published pieces). Or, you can go directly to www.starcrossedproductions.com.
I don't know about you, but there's something about holding an actual book in my hands that feels so good. Not only that, but you'll want to be sure you get the print edition, since it contains 23 new scenes that were not in the online version!
I hope you'll come along for the ride. FYI, I am currently writing the sequel to TPoF, which I hope you're going to love. If any of you are planning on attending the BardCon in Orlando in May, I hope you'll stop by and say hello.
Thanks for your support,
Lynn Ames