I really enjoyed this series. Well written. I like this author. Also read "Get away with Martha Hall" very good story. Keep writing AC. - Ramsey - Jun-06-2009   

Beautiful, my favorite in the serie. Characters with wits and emotions so real they touch your heart. Great work ! - Carambar - Jun-08-2010   

That was a good series of tales. Enjoyable from beginning to end. - uber goober - Jul-19-2010   

I liked this story. It is well written, and packs a lot in, considering it's a short story. Every word counts. Good read. - Lyn B - Apr-04-2011   

I read the entire series...Hen Night, Wedding Reception, Honeymoon and finally, Divorcee.
So enjoyable, I had to read it all again. In world of mediocrity your pieces are entertaining and well written, inhabited by characters that have depth and humanity that allows the reader to like and root for them.
Please write more! - Inema69 - Oct-05-2013   

a must read. All along with Hen Night, Wedding Reception and Honeymoon. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

a must read. All along with Hen Night, Wedding Reception and Honeymoon. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

Wow. This writer's distinctive voice urges you to keep reading and makes you care about the characters and their fates. This is the first story of a four-part series. Not to be missed. - offhermeds - May-31-2009   

Wonderful story - Anonymous - Jun-08-2009   

I found reading this tale to be enjoyable. It was well written and able to keep my interests. - uber goober - Jul-19-2010   

great short story - Anonymous - Jul-26-2010   

Great Story - Anonymous - Jul-27-2010   

a must read. All along with Wedding Reception, Honeymoon and Divorce. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

If you've read the first two then you'll want to keep reading cause it keeps getting better,and if you haven't then go back and read them first it'll be worth it. - uber goober - Jul-19-2010   

Good story. I like this series and the stories are well written. Realistic and gritty. Well worth a read. - Lyn B - Apr-04-2011   

a must read. All along with Hen Night, Wedding Reception and Divorce. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015   

Love this story by AC - Anonymous - Jun-08-2009   

This story is so good. Intelligent and well written - Anonymous - Jun-08-2009   

this is one of the few stories that i will go back and gladly re-read. its one of my favorites, go ahead and read it you won't regret it! - dalila - Jun-08-2009   

Really well written, very realistic.
- CR - Jun-23-2009   

Such an excellent story, couldn't pit it down, it has everything a girl could want. Thanks for the great read.
- LeaAnn - Dec-08-2009   

An exceptionally talented author who makes the time spent reading this story worth every minute! Loved it. - mary - Jan-05-2010   

i dnt want to sound like the typical reader by screaming omg or hurry and read this because that would be a complete understatement..this story is completely undefined....it is so poetic that you cant stop reading...you make the reader want to know what is going to happen next...it makes the reader want to know what other ways this writer can manipulate humans everyday emotions when they become physical with another human being....when i completed this story it helped me realize that there are millions of people who love and never get the chance to be loved..or vice versa...and it also shows that the longest love is one that is never returned..this story literally blew me away...but i dnt want to talk your head off but i just wanted to say that i really enjoyed this story 100 percent and want to show my appreciation by explaining why i enjoyed this story so much...:-) - jb - Jul-25-2010   

This one twists and turns proving that love is never straight foward and that affairs of the heart are flawed. It's gritty and sensitive and very well written. Nice read. - Sai - Aug-10-2010   

Wow... I'm kind of speechless but since I've written tons of recommendations before I just can't go like that, as if this story was not absolutely stunning.
This Bard is unbelievable. I'm not all excited or even enthousiastic. I'm... WOW... this was SO beautiful. Not sweet, not heart warming, not even romantic, just beautiful. It was poetry. I don't understand why I found this at the 20th page. It's probably the best read I had since I discovered this site! - yuka - Dec-16-2010   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - Compelling, intense, beautiful ... all other appropriate adjectives fail me.
There is a maturity to this piece that surpasses everything else I have ever read on this website; and I hunger for more of the same.
(My 3rd reading ... and counting) - Anna Lei - Sep-27-2011   

Link between part 1 and part 2 broken - this seems to work:
http://tinyurl.com/8jhc8mv
- Anonymous - Oct-03-2012   

Loved it.
Sequel pleeeeeeeeeease! - Inema69 - Sep-18-2013   

I want to critize this story but I can't. It made me feel so angry and hurt. I recognize the pain of Jenna as my own. I feel like you Artemis, have been privy to a part of my life that I would sooner forget.
The clarity is scary. Thank you for the reminder that we are in some way totally fucked up - even if only for a bit of our existence.
Your ending is indeed the truth; there is no ending, only more confusion and indecision.
To anyone who wants to read this, know that you will be confronted with your demons.
This is beautifully written, terribly accurate and undeniably eternal. - Gill - Jul-19-2014   

This is not plain fanfiction. This is literature. Great talented author. - Ash - Aug-02-2015   

The sequel is just as good as the first. This is a good story that keeps on getting better. - Uber Goober - Jul-19-2010   

I like the series of story. Very well written. The characters are complex and layered particularly well in a short story. Good read. - Lyn B - Apr-04-2011   

a must read. All along with Hen Night, Honeymoon and Divorce. Witty dialogues, brilliant scenes, captivating characters. Great author. - Ash K - Oct-08-2015