This is SUCH a beautifully written story!! It's short, punchy but had everything in it to make it a MUST READ! - Anonymous - Feb 24th, 2004   

A wonderful way to join two souls. - Calliopenjo - Jan-27-2008   

wonderful story - shirley - Mar-06-2008   

I enjoyed this story. It was very beautifully written. - purplehawke - Jun-27-2008   

I was very impressed with the three stories. They were well written and really sucked you in to the characters world. Great job! Keep up the good work. - uber goober - Sep-17-2009   

Great stories! I just loved them! - Bolly - Jan-15-2011   

This is a good sequel to Rock for Remembrance. I like all the characters in the original story and it's good to see their interaction here. There are some lovely and romantic scenes after the angst in the first story. Well written as always by Ali, it's a sweet story for all of the mush balls, including me, who like happy endings. - Anonymous - Mar-11-2011   

well, i guess the title says it all.. there is a happy ending.. except that there is a third part to this story.. which i'm off to read now.. - xtra dog - Dec-09-2011   

Very nice stories. Well done. - Anonymous - Apr-17-2008   

I love all the stories og Ali Vali....just Amazing..... - Lucian - Jul-12-2009   

More of Ali Vali is always great! - Anonymous - Aug-23-2009   

Ali is always a first read author - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

Ali Vali is a very talented writer. If you like a good story I highly recommend you read these.I can't wait to read more of her works. - uber goober - Sep-21-2009   

i loved this story a lot more than its prequel.. it is a much more interesting read.. it's more romantic, has a higher suspense quotient, and is better written.. i absolutely adored the way the author blended one part of the story, with the ~~~~~ line, to the next.. definitely a must read even if you are not into the sappy parts of romance.. - xtra dog - Dec-16-2011   

this series is awesome. what a great love story.
- sandy - Nov-02-2012   

AMAZING STORY SO WELL WRITTEN YOU WILL LOVE IT FROM START TO FINISH XXXXX - SD - Jun-02-2015   

Once again, Ms. Valdivia has given us one of her enthralling tales. Like every other piece she has given us out here, she fills our time living the amazing the lives of her intriguing characters taking us away from our mundane lives. As with every other story of hers I have read, I was unable to stop until I have read every word, and ended up all night. It's like giving steak to a starving person. I find her stories original and refreshingly well written, her characters seem to come to life for the reader and you find yourself deeply involved with each of them. I hope Ali will see her way clear to give us more of this wondrous world of Amazonia, and its fascinating citizens. - Alex P - May 5th, 2004   

WOW!!! Once I got started, I couldn't stop! I was up all night reading this wonderful, enthralling story. Another masterpiece from an outstanding author. Beautifully written and engaging, full of twists and turns, a definate classic. Awesome!! - Peaches - May 6th, 2004   

Another wonderful addition to the Ali Vali collection. Romantic and heroic and all the things fairytales are supposed to be. The fact that this one takes place during modern times just adds to the wonder and excitement. A must, MUST read for all. - Roxy - May 9th, 2004   

I don't think there is a story that Ms. Valdivia has written that hasn't been excellent. The way she tells her stories puts her characters right there in your mind to see and hear and feel as they do, and everytime i go back and visit them, they seem more alive then ever. Now she gives us Amazonia, and all i can think to say is. My dear Ali if i beg and plead and wish really really hard do you think you can actually make this island of Amazonia a real place, because if you can i know it would be overpopulated in a day. Your bardic "voice" is an amazing gift. Thank you for sharing. - Scotti - May 17th, 2004   

This is a simply wonderful tale, I was absolutely captivated by it from start to finish. I have read all the works by this author and this story really stands out. Can't wait for Book 2! - Ang - Nov 20th, 2004   

I have read every piece in the Ali Vali collection, this one all but tops the bunch. It is wonderful, captivating, and I stayed up all night reading it - I just couldn't stop. I can't wait for Book 2 - and I hope it won't be too long of a wait! - Laura - Dec 2nd, 2004   

Love this author's writing and this story is no exception, although it had my eyes crossing at the end trying to keep up with who was who! That part could have been a bit clearer or maybe it was just muddled to my feeble brain. One thing's certain and that is I will always read her stories because I know I'm clicking on something truly original, with just the right amount of humour and erotica. - Femmester - Dec 9th, 2004   

Read this one! Romance, adventure, humor and modern-day Amazons. - Cam - Apr-10-2006   

Just one of many great stories by Ali Vali. I am looking forward to Book 2. - Anonymous - Apr-11-2006   

the BEST, most romantic fairy tale i have ever read, bravo! it got me reading all through the night, singing in the shower, smiling at strangers day after day, it made my...day? week? well, it's still making... so when it stops i'll tell you what it made :) meanwhile, read it NOW!PS thank you, Ali Vali!!!!
- Kati - Apr-20-2006   

This is an awesome story with good character progressions and developments - Gemma - Nov-04-2006   

A wonderful drama fantasy. - Calliopenjo - Jan-27-2008   

I love this story! It is plan out so well. It grabs you from the start and doesn't let go until the end. The Amazonian world Ali Vali creates here is so real you find yourelf wanting to believe they are. This story never gets old it continues to capture me in it's world no matter how many times I read it. - Anonymous - Mar-28-2008   

A wonderful read along with its sequel. Ali Vali's work is always well worth the time. - calabria - Sep-17-2008   

The Amazonia stories are probably in my top 10 -- they are absolutely AWESOME. Read them! - Vale - Apr-24-2009   

Just so good! - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

Once again Ms.Valdivia has captured our imagination and pulled us into this wonderful world of her creation making us feel like we're there witnessing the journey of these extraordinary characters.Thanks to her for sharing her extraodinary talents with all of us. - uber goober - Sep-25-2009   

Most excellent. Loved the tale about 21 century amazons. Makes me wish we still had them... maybe we do. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent and tale. You are a truly gifted bard. Now on to Book 2 - yeah ! - Anonymous - Apr-23-2010   

I couldn't put this one down! Wonderful tale! - ChakramGirl - Oct-05-2011   

One of the most clever tale I've ever read in my whole life. Seriously, ancient time and modern age are so well articulated, that this gem is pure delight to read. The plot, the background, the characters, the way every aspects are intertwined and related to each other, are impressive. This whole storie is a marvel for the mind. I bow before this talent and this intelligence. READ IT AND BE IMPRESSED TOO ;) - yuka - Dec-13-2011   

The romantic fairy tale continues. Thanks to the author for continuing this great story. READ and ENJOY! - Cam - Apr-26-2006   

As an avid Ali Vali fan I can again say, I still wish there was an Island of Amazonia and I still say if there were it would be overpopulated in a day. This was a great addition to what i hope will be an ongoing story. Thank you again Ali, for sharing your gift with us. Oh buy the way I bought Ali's DVD Gillery's Little Secret, It was lovely so I urge you to see it too. - Scotti - Apr-27-2006   

Another great Story Ali. Thanks. - Kasey - Apr-30-2006   

I loved the story, though I still, somehow, think that there's a lot more to tell. The ceremonies, both the 'funeral' and the joining, were very beautiful. Please write some more! Besides, I also like your other stories. - romansilence - May-05-2006   

I am delighted that the author has given us another insight into Amazonia. The first book was wonderful and this piece continues in the same way. A delight to read. - Ang - Jun-23-2006   

I only wish a Book 3 exists. - Calliopenjo - Jan-27-2008   

An excellent story, just like the previous one. Kept me glued to my seat for the most part of a day! - Vale - Apr-24-2009   

Continuation of the Bebo & Annie story. I hope there will be more in the future... - Anonymous - Jul-05-2009   

Ali, we do need to hear more of Amazonia - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

What an incredible talent. Ms. Valdivia just keeps deliverying exceptional stories of love and life.Do yourselves a favor and read whatever she writes. It's definitely worth the time. - uber goober - Sep-25-2009   

Loved the story, Hope that there will be a Book 3 to this story - Anonymous - Oct-15-2009   

ahhhh...that was so sweet and an excellent ending. What a great Amazon tale. Read it - you will love it. - Anonymous - Apr-24-2010   

A Awesome read that will make you went more - Anonymous - Aug-13-2010   

since i have a very chronologiacal mind, i like to read stories in chronological order.. i don't mind flash backs within a story, but i do have a problem with series that break the chronology.. it is, to me,like reading the end of a story and then return to the middle part.. the beginning is to set the mood, the middle is an elaboration and deepening of all mentioned before, and the end is the ultimate climax of a story.. whether i expected it or not.. however good or bad the ending, i need the beginning and the middle to feel involved.. when i read a series i expect it to follow the rules of beginning, middle and ending.. if not, i am truly disappointed and maybe even traumatized.. ;) so, if you are as chronologically impaired as i am when reading series, read this one before reading "all it took was you" after reading "how do you mend a broken heart".. 'cause this story is right between the two.. that said: i don't know who comes up with these story telling ideas first, but i've read a similar story before on this site.. and, although very well written, it leaves me with a sense of dissatisfaction.. i don't enjoy reading the same story all over again, even if it's written by different authors.. - xtra dog - Dec-16-2011   

This story combines excellant writing with one of my favorite sports. All that's missing is an ending. Another great story from Ali Vali. - Rachel - Aug 18th, 2002   

What a wonderful story! I have enjoyed every story Ali Vali has posted on the net. If you haven't read "Play It Again, Sam", you don't know what you're missing. I hope that it is posted on this website soon for those of you who haven't read it. This is truly a gifted storyteller and I've never been disappointed with this authors' work. If I could give it a 10 star rating, I would. - Maria - Oct 19th, 2002   

I really enjoy this writer's stories. They are funny, and warm, and very entertaining. I especially enjoyed the characters in this one. I look forward to anymore strories this bard may grace us with in the future. - Anonymous - Apr 20th, 2005   

In short, great story, fun characters, consistently entertaining author. Enjoy! - anonymous - Dec 2nd, 2005   

I had no idea that ali vali didn't have a No. 1 before today. Seriously, what a fun, talented bard. In hopes of upping her stock...I thought I'd recommend one of my favorites of hers. This is total mush- but well written and fun mush. If you haven't read it and you enjoy the genre...please do! - Anonymous - May-01-2006   

Ahhh - A sweet romance with enough action and suspense to keep you hanging onto every word! A delightful story! - Opus - May-01-2006   

i've just happened across this story again after a few years and boy does it bring back memories. i absolutely loved this story when i read it; definately one of my favourites ever and isn't Ali such a class author? simply brilliant! - Queen Victoria - Aug-07-2007   

I love Ali Vali's work. I eagerly look forward to her stories. She's great at keeping continuity in her sequels and each character is endearing and complex. - Anonymous - Jul-03-2008   

Love it, Love it, Love it. A must read... B. Jen - B. Jen - Jan-14-2009   

Very good story telling - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

Thanks again Ali Vali for sharing your incredible gift of the muse with us once again. - uber goober - Sep-26-2009   

Must read !!!
Fun !!! - Diana - Apr-12-2010   

i read this story about a year ago and i still remember the entire story line.. it is well written, has witty dialogues and great chemistry between the main characters.. - xtra dog - Dec-07-2011   

Whoa! What a story! This one would have done the "Twilight Zone" TV series proud...very proud. It's an awesome fictional tale that will hold the reader spellbound and thoroughly entertained at the same time. It certainly catches the reader's attention. Once you start out to read this one...you will not want to stop...even after the last sentence has been read. Once you read this story...you'll understand what I mean. And what a thrill you're in for when the finale catches you unaware. This is one story I shall be reading time and time again. Why? Because it's that good! This writer knows her craft and has, indeed, done very well for herself. //Ag - Anonymous - Jul 23rd, 2003   

This story captured my attention. It is one of my top ten favorite stories. Simply magical!!! - robinnight - Jul-19-2006   

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. I read it about a year ago and I find myself thinking about it often. I'm glad I found it again, it's one of the best reads ever. - Best Fic!! - Nov-18-2008   

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. I read it about a year ago and I find myself thinking about it often. I'm glad I found it again, it's one of the best reads ever. - DarXe - Nov-18-2008   

A joy to read! Loved the Twilight Zone aspect of it. - Anonymous - Aug-02-2009   

simplyy excellent storytelling! - Anonymous - Aug-08-2009   

Another good romance from Ms.Valdivia but with a definite unexpected twist. - uber goober - Sep-27-2009   

I really enjoyed this story. It had a great twist to it, and was very thought provoking, as well as romantic. Good read. - Lyn B - Mar-17-2011   

after reading this story i kind of regret that there are no more twilight zone episodes.. the story would have made for an excellent episode.. - xtra dog - Dec-08-2011   

Okay this is one of my new favourites. I can't believe I haven't read this after all the years I've been reading from this site!! Superbly written with a great story line. - Niyah - May-10-2013   

Okay this is one of my new favourites. I can't believe I haven't read this after all the years I've been reading from this site!! Superbly written with a great story line. - Niyah - May-10-2013   

A very entertaining story. I enjoyed it! - Ricky - Jan-11-2015   

Oh by the gods! This was a great great story and I am so very happy I read it. Thank you to the author. - Liana Travis - Jul 20th, 2002   

I enjoyed this story immensely but then I have all of hers. The sequel All It Took Was You is even better. - Linda - Jun 24th, 2003   

I can't think of any other way to describe this story except fabulous. I would highly recomend it to anyone looking for a good enthralling read. I wasn't able to stop reading it until I finished every word, and it's sequel, "All It Took Was You" did it again the next night. Excellent work Ali. - Alex P. - Oct 19th, 2003   

I have just finished reading, for the third time, this thoroughly delightful and most entertaining romantic tale, "How Do You Mend A Broken Heart"...and it's just as wonderful sequel, "All It Took Was You". I equally loved both of these romantic tales. Why not? These two stories are all one and the same...the continuation of a beautifully told 'love story'; the sensational saga of 'Harry and Desi Basantes'. Did I say "Harry"? Yes, I did...but don't let the name fool you. This story(ies) are going to be a delicious surprise for you. And you can't read the first one without desiring to read more about 'Harry and Desi'...thus, your search for the sequel. And what two wonderful stories they are! The first story is so masterfully written to flow ever so easily, ever so gently, into it's sequel. Ali Vali has truly written a most enchanting 'love story'...one for the heart. There are some DV situations that were written in as part of these fictional tale(s), but you'll easily sail through these 'paragraphs' as easily and as smoothly as I did. Because this very talented author has written these two romantic tales so well and in such a manner as to overshadow anything else. And 'LOVE' is what is happening...and where it's at! I can say for sure that you'll never be disappointed in reading anything that is written by this marvelous writer. This writer can most definitely be called a 'bard's bard'! Thank you Ali Vali. - //MjM - Oct 25th, 2003   

Ali Vali, or A. Valdivia, is an author that should not be over looked. Her stories speak to the noble parts of us that still remember the magic that made us believe. How do you mend a broken heart and its sequel, All it took was you, should be read and reread over and over and again.... B. Jen - B.Jen - Jan-14-2009   

Great read - I like romance and Ali Vali does a great job with that one - Anonymous - Aug-23-2009   

So romantic...must read... - Diana - Apr-12-2010   

This was the first story I read by Ali Vali, and let me tell you that I opened the doors of a new romantic universe. Some parts of the story that Ali Vali has written, have stuck in my mind (when you read look for the reference Oh my god! Left me a smile without realizing it). I have read several stories of this website and I have discussed and recommended several of them, but I had to get to this particular story, to make the decision to take the time to write some good lines to express my thoughts and feelings. What made me sorry to leave so poorly written recommendations on other wonderful stories worth reading. In this case, my advice: start reading the story of Harry and Desi Basantes when you have nothing else to do, because it's going to happen to you the same thing that happened to me, instead of preparing a monograph for college, I read How do you mend a broken heart. Fortunately, I had more time for my paper. Thank God! - Lucian - May-17-2010   

i really enjoyed this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-12-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. The relationship between Harry and Desi unfolds in a delightful way and the supporting characters are all memorable. I've been a fan of Ali's writing for years and read this story before, but it was lovely to go back and read it again. A good read. - Lyn B - Mar-18-2011   

I love all the stories of Ali, Thanks for share your work. - Lebasi - Jul-19-2011   

great love story with a little suspense up until the end.. can't wait to read the sequel, so i'm off to do just that.. - xtra dog - Dec-15-2011   

OMG! I really LOVE this story and the second and the 3rd :-)
GREAT GREAT GREAT. Thank you Ali. - Petra - Jun-27-2013   

AMAZING STORY THIS ONE YOU WILL WONT TO READ XXX - SD - Jun-02-2015   

Aqwsome writing ince more time from this author. Its a 10 in the scale of one to 10... - nerymari - Mar-27-2008   

I read this a lont time ago and it was great to revisit a wonderful romance. - Anonymous - Apr-24-2008   

Wonderful writing & wonderful reading! - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

If you want to read a good short romantic story Ms. Valdivia delivers again. - uber goober - Sep-28-2009   

What a charming, sweet, and romantic story! A real gem that I've missed until now. Bravo to the author! - Anonymous - Sep-02-2010   

i really liked this story. Excellent job. - sassy123 - Dec-18-2010   

I read this story a long time ago and have only just found it again. I like it more now than when I first found it. There's a lot of layers to the relationship between the women. It's a tender and thought provoking romantic story. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - Mar-18-2011   

i like the fact that the writer weaves characters from her other stories into her new one.. sometimes it's just a reference, sometimes they play an active role.. it interconnects them and makes you think back to the stories this author wrote before.. that being said, i did miss the witty dialogues in this story.. - xtra dog - Dec-10-2011   

Another great romantic tale from Ali Vali. I liked this story so much more than the somewhat similar plot in the movie starring Robert Redford, Demi Moore and Woody Harrelson. Read and enjoy! - Cam - Dec 3rd, 2005   

A wonderful love story. - Calliopenjo - Jan-27-2008   

Once again Ali Vali delivers a good romantic story that's worth taken the time to read. - Uber Goober - Sep-29-2009   

Great story! Very romantic! - Anonymous - Mar-17-2010   

This is a very good Valentine's story. Ali is a favourite author of mine, so it's always good to read her stories. I liked how this story was developed and not rushed like some short stories can feel. It leaves you feeling happy at the end. Good read. - Lyn B - Mar-18-2011   

Great story. It's one of the one's I'll read again and again! - lyneX - Aug-03-2011   

i remember reading this a couple of months ago.. unless my memory fails me, it was a slow paced story.. and i don't mean that in a bad way at all.. if everything happens really fast in a story, i have difficulties believing it.. - xtra dog - Dec-08-2011   

Loved the story, wonderfully well written and simple use of language.
If you like a love story this is for you.
- Anna28Carm - May-10-2017   

I really loved this story. It's a lovely romantic adventure for the mushball in all of us. I have no doubt this will remain on my personal list of favorite stories, along with just about anything else penned by Ali Vali. - Beth Goodman - Sep 10th, 2003   

Whoa!!! Hey y'all...read this one. You're gonna love it! It's a wonderfully entertaining story...with some tissue time thrown in for good measure. This is one very talented writer who certainly has honed her craft. I have never been disappointed in anything of hers that I've read. And this is good. - amg - Sep 11th, 2003   

I first read amazonia then went on to read the rest of her stories. Place To Dance should read everybody will be looking for any new stories thanks. - m mason - Mar-30-2006   

an absolutly fine romance! - tl_farr - Feb-15-2009   

Great reading - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

Very good Ms. Valdivia you have once again given us A good romantic read that will leave you feeling good and smiling when your done. - UBER GOOBER - Oct-02-2009   

Charming,romantic! Makes you smile! - Anonymous - Mar-17-2010   

This is a very romantic story. It's like chocolate cake romance:-) Jolly and Mimi are great characters and very sweet as a couple. It was a little too sweet for me at times, but it made me smile. - Lyn B - Mar-17-2011   

most has already been said about this story.. it is very sweet, romantic, etc.. but it also has some very witty dialogues.. "she's got you so whipped, i thought she transferred it to the kitchen" was my favourite one.. good job writing.. - xtra dog - Dec-09-2011   

Nice Sunday afternoon read. - Ricky - Oct-29-2012   

Amazing really loved this story xx - SD - Jun-29-2015   

I really loved this tale. Rather bittersweet, yet funny and comes with a perfect ending. I love Ali Vali's writing and this is one of her best. - Beth - Jan 29th, 2003   

Really a sweet story. How nice for all of us to find such a love. - A friend from TX - Feb 2nd, 2003   

I think that this was a pretty decent story but in some parts it was rushed. I don't think that we saw enough of the time Julia and Poppy spent together as their relationship and feelings grew and I think that that should have been one of the most important parts in the story. We saw plenty of Carly and Poppy in the story sharing moments, but I feel it would have made Julia and Poppy's relationship something more unique in the end if we could have seen more special moments between the two. Also, I think that Julia and Poppy could have been any two women. The only thing that seemed to distinguish them as Xena and Gabrielle was there looks. Not many of the same traits or mannerisms could be seen. But, overall it was still a nice story and I enjoyed it. - Anonymous - May 27th, 2003   

A wonderful tale of the magic of love and life with a touch of reality, the story of Carly and Poppy only enhancing the story of Julia and Poppy by giving a wonderful insight into how Poppy becomes the woman she is. I can only hope for a sequel. - N.E.T - Jun 15th, 2003   

I loved this story. It was the first one of Ali's that I read and it just had me coming back for more until I had read everything of Ali's that was available. Let me tell you...I was NOT disappointed. Whenever I find myself needing a good fanfic fix, I always return to Ali Vali's stories. I know that some wonderful reading will be waiting for me. I look forward to reading more of her work. And Ali, of your're rading this, I can't wait until "Play It Again Sam" retitled as "Carly's Sound" comes out in print. Just another book to add to my library of favories. Oh, and a sequel to "Play It Again Sam" sounds like a very good idea ;-) - Dal - Jun 27th, 2003   

There was magic in this author's finger tips as she wove this totally delightful, bewitchingly enchanting, and thoroughly entertaining romantic fictional tale. This is an awesome story, people! This story is a MUST READ! Then you'll be able to see for yourself just what I'm talking about. I have never, ever been disappointed in in this author's ability to write a most superb story. And she has done so again with this one, "Play It Again Sam". Thank you Ali Vali for making yesterday evening's reading event an unforgettable one for me. - MjM - Sep 25th, 2003   

I love this story. But then I love most of Ali Vali's stories. I have yet to be let down. - Sparky - Jun 25th, 2004   

This story is what caused me to become addicted to fanfiction and this fabulous author. - Calliopenjo - Jan-27-2008   

This is a wonderful story, another of my favorites. :-) - Netta - Oct-04-2008   

This is a wonderful story, another of my favorites. :-) - Netta - Oct-07-2008   

Buy the book. It's excellent. - Lyn B - Feb-11-2011   

i spent an entire evening searching the net to find the name under which this story was published.. now i find it is mentioned on this site.. talk about being dull.. anyway, i'm still figuring out if i can purchase this book in europe somewhere.. - xtra dog - Dec-11-2011   

Hey, I simply eopphd over for your site by means of StumbleUpon. Now not one thing I would typically learn, but I appreciated your emotions none the less. Thank you for making something value reading.VA:F [1.9.7_1111]please wait...VA:F [1.9.7_1111](from 0 votes) - rEyEiswEhq - Apr-08-2012   

I love this series, and have read it many times! The spin of Ramses being female is wonderful! Of course all of Ali Vali's works are truly a pleasure to read! - Pixieydust - Mar-22-2009   

Another literary gem given to us by Ali Vali. It was so good I read them all at one go. I'm sure if you take the time to read it you will enjoy it as much as I did. - uber goober - Oct-04-2009   

this story was much more diverse than the first story in this series.. some of the comments were funny and amusing.. good job.. - xtra dog - Dec-10-2011   

clearly a pwp.. but a pwp with a very nice twist to it.. - xtra dog - Dec-16-2011   

Another wonderfully written tale by Ali. Even without the 'happy ending' follow-up, I believe that this story is one of her best. Those who can't see the love that shines throughout the tale and only look at the 'supposed' unhappy ending, are missing the boat (or a few screws). It left me thinking that there HAD to be a sequel, love always prevails (at least in fiction) and there was a sequel!!!I think it fits the Valentines's genre perfectly - well done oh bardly one! - Lori - Feb 19th, 2004   

She writes as well as gourmet wine, it is better every time. - Terre - Nov-29-2009   

Oh... so heartbreaking. Thank goodness there's a sequel. Now on to the next. This was a wonderful story. Characters are lovely and engaging. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - Jul-17-2010   

I really liked this story. It had a powerful mix of humour, friendship, romance and angst all combined together to make it a memorable read. The writing is excellent and I liked all the characters, not just Julian and Kiki. For those that don't like angst, it does come with sequels to ease the pain at the end. Definitely worth reading. - Lyn B - Mar-11-2011   

this story nearly broke my heart when i read it the first time.. luckily enough i know now that there are sequels.. so that provides some hope for a romantic soul.. heartbrokenly well written.. - xtra dog - Dec-09-2011   

This is a great story full of love the first 2 stories are great just a shame the link is broken to the 3rd story :( - SD - Sep-02-2015   

Ali is one of my favorite authors! It was great to imagine there being a female Ramses (Pharaoh)... Can't wait to read more of her work! - Katia N. Ruiz - Dec 30th, 2002   

please, please more its to good to stop here, - Anonymous - May-08-2009   

This is a fun series and I've loved everything this author has shared with us. Hopefully, Ms. Valdivia will continue this series. I can't wait to see what comes next. The characters are fun and lively. Love scenes are just right. This series has captivated my imagination and pulled me into their lives. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-16-2010   

a light read but still filled with emotions.. it is all the title promises with the addition of a couple of other feelings.. has this series come to an end?? since the author finished with 'for now anyway', i thought there would still be stories in this series.. - xtra dog - Dec-10-2011   

I love Ali's stories and this finishes off the series so well, I love happy endings. - pippinfluff - May-31-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** I wish Ali would continue this series. I loved this story and these characters. It would be great to see what Julian and Kiki had - boy or girl?? Ali can you do one more? Please?

If you are looking for a sweet, romantic tale - you found it. Start at the beginning of the series. This is a very sweet ride, very enjoyable. This author is wonderful - Anonymous - Jul-17-2010   

Very romantic and sweet story. Nice story to go with the series. - Lyn B - Mar-10-2011   

very romantic and playfull story which is even hot at times.. nice end to the series.. - xtra dog - Dec-09-2011   

I get a Bad Request (Invalid Hostname) on the Link to this story. - Kugai - Apr-28-2014   

I get a Bad Request (Invalid Hostname) on the Link to this story. - Kugai - Apr-28-2014   

Omg can't believe this link is not working - SD - Sep-02-2015   

This story is the sequel to Vampires, Mummies and the Holy Ghost. I enjoyed this story as much as the first. The plot definitely thickens a this series progresses. - purplehawke - May-08-2007   

SUCH a great story! It's not super long so you have no good excuse to not be reading it RIGHT NOW... slacker! - Arassar - Jul-05-2007   

A fantastic sequel to "Vampires". I loved every minute of these two tales and I'd absolutely love to see these characters appear again in the future. Romantics owe it to themselves to read this! - Fox_Feathered - Jun-15-2008   

A fantastic sequel to "Vampires". I loved every minute of these two tales and I'd absolutely love to see these characters appear again in the future. Romantics owe it to themselves to read this! - Fox_Feathered - Jun-17-2008   

this story is awesome as its the one before,but now the question is .. where's the 3rd one ali vali? - Anonymous - Jun-22-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** More emphasis on the love than in the previous story, but still as entertaining as "Vampires, Mummies & the Holy Ghost". Only problem is that it kinda leaves you hanging. Hopefully there will be a sequel. - Ape - Jul-05-2008   

That was brilliant. An excellent sequel to Vampires. I can only hope for more. - Hoqoq - Sep-21-2008   

I absolutely loved this story. Couldn't 'put it down'. Hope very much to read more from this author! - Anonymous - Oct-04-2008   

Ali Vali once again weaves a great romantic tale that leaves you wanting more. I would love to see Ms. Valdivia continue with Piper and Kendal's story in the future. What an incredibly talented author. A definite must read for anyone who loves a great love story. - uber goober - Oct-10-2009   

OMG!!! i love this. from first word to the very last. there was no part that bored me at all. please tell me there will be another part to this, i cant just be left hangin here. i have got to know what happens. - pickles - May-16-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Thanks so much for a GREAT series. Asra and Piper are wonderful characters. Immortals, the fight between good and evil, the love and romance makes for heady reading. Throw in Aphrodite and it was a unexpected twist. Please continue their tale. The series have given me hous (days) of reading pleasure. I hope you will share a new one soon !! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jul-18-2010   

A really great story. - sassy123 - Sep-30-2010   

i wasn't able to find the title of the book this story is published as.. so i'm thinking that 'vampires' and this one were published in the same book 'balance of forces: toujours ici'.. - xtra dog - Dec-14-2011   

I just finished reading the 3 stories in this series, and I must say, what a fun premise! Keep the series coming ;) - Anonymous - Jan-28-2008   

When you read the first lines of a text, you know if it's worth to continue reading or not. In this case, it is worthwhile to continue reading until the end of the last page, but one also hopes that the story does not end there. When a story is really good, one is left with the desire to know more. Lucky for people who experience this feeling as well as part one, also there are two parts to enjoy. Ali Vali achieved another great story where you can find the prototype of a couple, on the one hand is the stoic and strong character, who falls in love and protect at all costs, and on the other hand there is the gentle soul which has fallen in love without reservations. This love story is the classic sweet love story, set in a context that not many take as a starting point. Ali Vali's talent allows us to enjoy and devour in a short time a story that one would want to read more than once. My advice, do not waste time, sit and read and then take a few good minutes to praise this work. - Lucian - May-17-2010   

i loved the story

read it you will love it to - ebby - Jan-30-2011   

i find it kinda weird that the story ends with a 'they lived happily after', when the author informs the reader at the end that there will be a continuation to the story.. it's like reading the end of the book and then go to the middle of it.. - xtra dog - Dec-10-2011   

This is another one of Ali Vali's fine writings. If you've read any of Ali's stories and liked them, then you will definately like this one. It's funny, romantic and sweet. Thoroughly enjoyable. - Anonymous - Jan 15th, 2004   

I loved this story. A. Valdivia (Ali Vali) is getting better and better with each story I'm reading.
- purplehawke - May-03-2007   

A fun romantic tale that will leave you smiling and even though it's a short story Ali Vali makes it come to life. Thank you again Ms.Valdivia for sharing your wonderful talent with us, your fans. - uber goober - Oct-10-2009   

sucha sweet and romantic story. beautifully written, thanks Ali - crv - Feb-12-2010   

Ali Vali is one of my favourite authors and this story was a very sweet and funny. I liked the characters, and, of course, it was beautifully written. Well worth reading - Lyn B - Feb-10-2011   

sweet story.. - xtra dog - Dec-08-2011   

An amazing tale of a love that we wait a lifetime for. Truely a story i rushed home from work to read.
good one a. valdivia. - lordlamberino - Aug-13-2006   

I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading this and had a couple very late nights or early mornings to get to the end. - purplehawke - May-02-2007   

This is a truly extraordinary tale that should not be missed. Ali Vali weaves a wonderfully romantic story that is intertwined with elements of fantasy, the supernatural and history and enhanced greatly by its cast of highly interesting and complex characters. This story, and its sequel promise a fantastic read and should not be missed by anyone who considers themselves a romantic at heart. - fox_feathered - Jun-15-2008   

Beautiful story. I didn't think I would enjoy a story about vampires but since I haved loved every Ali Vali story I have ever read I thought I would give this one a chance. I am so glad I did! This tale has a great plot, engaging characters and witty dialogue. Don't miss it! - Anonymous - Jun-22-2008   

A nice take on the concept of immortality and what it may include. Good supernatural action mixed with a sweet love story. - Ape - Jul-05-2008   

One of my favorite vampire stories. I was glued to it and its sequel for a few days, to the detriment of my relationship...but it was worth it. - calabria - Sep-17-2008   

Really loved this story. Thanks! - Anonymous - Sep-28-2008   

Stuck in on a cold wintery night? No problem---grab a seat and hold on to your drink, the ride is about to begin. Excellent work.... - Stormy - Mar-01-2009   

Thanks for bringing a bit of NOLA to a homesick soul. I moved to New Zealand 7 years ago and do love it here, but nothing can come close to the Big Easy. Lucky for me and my partner I can cook! Your a great writer thanks again for the wonderful stories. I was sorry to be done with them. These are my favs. - Lea Ann - Apr-14-2009   

Fantastic!! Not to be missed. I read a lot and this is one of the best ever. - Anonymous - Sep-28-2009   

When there are so many stories to choose from, choosing what to read is difficult, sometimes the title is not so attractive, sometimes there is no preliminary outline, but when Ali Vali is behind the words, the decision is easy. One has the urge to read. I have read several stories that Ali Vali has shared on this website, and my desire is that they keep coming. Ali Vali is a wonderful writer, her writings maintain a rhythm, and his characters run deep, being difficult to break away from them. Vampire .... is a good example of the talent of this writer, mixing fantasy and different times, the writer takes us back and forth in time without many problems, while laying the foundation for a love story that all we want to read. My advice is, read it while you can, fast. - Lucian - May-17-2010   

great story!! i had an awesome time reading it - cell - Aug-27-2010   

this story was better than good
it was great - ebby - Jan-21-2011   

i read an excerpt of the book (balance of forces: toujours ici) via the bold strokes books site.. story seems promising.. - xtra dog - Dec-12-2011   

This story runs with that of Anne Rice. It's absolutely amazing. My problem is I am missing part of it the first part. I have the beginning right up until when Jacques enters the picture when he enters the solarium and falls on his knees and says: "My queen, welcome to New Orleans. I'm here to do your bidding." Please help... Does someone have a copy they can email me? I actually even tried to buy the book, but for some reason it wouldn't post an amount so seemed impossible to get. I'm hangin' on here. Please help. Somebody release me from this torment. I don't think I'll be able to sleep until I finish it. I gotta see how this ends. My email is Jojodyke@rogers.com Thankx in advance! - Jojo - Mar-28-2016   

This is a fabulous story! I loved the interplay with all the characters. The family story vs. the romance story read very well. Ali Vali is one of the most gifted writers with using just the right words. - TC - Oct 7th, 2003   

This is a wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much and recommend it to be read by everyone. - purplehawke - May-01-2007   

If your looking for a great story to read then look no furthur, if your looking for one of the best writer's on the internet then you have found her. it doesn't get any better then this folks........ - gyrlfetish -6/15/09 - Jun-15-2009   

Another gem from the mind and heart of the very talented Ali Vali. Do yourself a favor. Read and enjoy! - uber goober - Oct-11-2009   

lovely valentine story.. - xtra dog - Dec-08-2011   

Very good. Excellent author. A real gem. - colorado fan - May-26-2017