I enjoyed this tale. Short but sweet.Not a bad PWP story - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

nice sequel to 'british invasion'.. - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012   

This and the sequel are both good tales worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

certainly not bad for a first attempt at pwp.. - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012   

who needs a plot..this was hot! - Anonymous - Dec-30-2012   

If your looking for a cute little read, give this and the second part endless summer a try. - cpo - Sep-16-2010   

Oh I loved this little romance, a nice story! Well done! A second part would be perfekt. - GIA - Sep-20-2010   

Very sweet,romantic and sexy short story - luvbear - Nov-08-2010   

I enjoyed this love story. It was short but oh so sweet.It will leave you with a good feeling. - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

tough decision.. but good choice.. aren't we all just suckers for romance?? ;) - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012   

Cute short story! It leaves you with a smile ... - Ricky - Oct-31-2012   

Fantastic sequel! - Anonymous - Sep-20-2010   

This is a great sequel to the tale "Dregs of Summer". Cephalgia writes a good sweet story of enduring love. I'm surprised more people haven't read it or expressed an opinion on it, or the authors other offerings. - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

very sweet story both this and its prequel dregs of summer are well worth a read - chippy - Nov-15-2011   

loved the playful dialogues.. they made me smile.. very sweet story.. - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012   

I'm glad I found this sequel. I really enjoyed it! - Ricky - Nov-02-2012   

It doesn't get much better than this. - Samantha - Mar-08-2014   

Still my favorite. I wish there was more.... - Samantha - Sep-12-2014   

That was a great post fin tale. I felt like the author was extremely true to the series characters and it felt like the perfect next episode. - uber goober - Jun-24-2011   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jan-15-2012   

Great follow up to FIN. I love stories that bring a happy ending for Xena and Gab and this one doesn't disappoint. - Stacia - Mar-18-2014   

Excellent! I was so crushed that it was over. Great story, moving characters and one red hot love scene. More..more..more.. - Califa - Jul 30th, 2004   

Great story. I really hope that you write a sequel! - fan - Aug 4th, 2004   

I have to say this is truly an endering story. Really opens your eyes to the everyday challenges of loving and caring for a child with a life threatening illness. The development of the relationship between Crystal and Lauren moved along at a pace that was realistic and didn't feel rushed and phoney, as they so often can in a short story. I had many a chuckle over the comments to the cat "Ram" and the humour has just the right flavour throughout! Thankfully there was not TOO much "inner monologue" that often takes away from the main body of the story. The story's perspective, written from the kids point of view, speaks volumes about how the author relates to kids. Over all a GREAT story and an eye opening subject,also perfectly paced for a really enjoyable read. This one is not to be missed. I'm just crossing my fingers that there will be a sequel. ;) - Skeeter - Aug 4th, 2004   

I've read this author's other works and while those are good, this is GREAT! She doesn't rush the plot and allows the readers and the characters to slowly and irrevocably fall in love. - Ursula - Dec-20-2007   

Beautiful well written story that definately needs a sequel! - Xenangabfan - Mar-16-2008   

Hidden gem - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Very touching and well written - JettBlk - Feb-14-2010   

Great to read not too long, falling for the straight girl..ready made family. - readinglori - Oct-31-2010   

Wow! This story deals with a pretty tough subject, I was afraid it might be hard to read. But this Bard managed to tell a story that talks courage. I admire, respect highly courage. The ending was fabuous. It made me cry actually. It wasn't sad. It was just pawerfull in it's own way and deeply beautiful. - yuka - Dec-21-2010   

Well written story.I've never read about a single mother with a child who has heart problems.Interesting insight,great love story. - Pat - Jan-01-2011   

Love this story. Would love to read more about them! - LadyKnight - Apr-19-2011   

Very touching story, you could feel real love between characters. Great read. - Anonymous - Jun-11-2011   

Excellent well written story. A very touching tale that had me tearing up a few times.I definetly recommend reading this one. - uber goober - Jun-25-2011   

what i found most touching about this story was the obvious love and respect mother and son shared with each other.. - xtra dog - Jan-19-2012   

A sensitive, heartwarming and tender story ... don't miss it! - Ricky - May-01-2014   

Really well written story loved reading this from start to end xx - SD - Jun-14-2015   

It was good revisiting these two characters in another hot little PWP tale. If you like that kind of story I recommend you don't pass this one up. - uber goober - Jun-25-2011   

loved the joke with the middle names.. as far as this series goes, it was a nice addition to holly's and gina's story.. - xtra dog - Jan-15-2012   

If you've ever completely lost yourself to someone who couldn't return your love, you're going to think Cephalgia has seen inside your heart. This triumphant tale is well-written, and packed with the emotional detail usually found only in longer, character-rich stories. Great job. - KG MacGregor - Jul 21st, 2003   

Wow. Really moving. Definitely worth a read. - Anonymous - Jan 14th, 2004   

Very well written. Bittersweet. It's not romantic, but it's poignant and thought provoking. - Lyn B - Jul-26-2011   

never having been on the seawall myself, but having lost my best friend who went swimming with eliza, this story really did hit home.. it is a very solemnly written without any embelishings, exactly what the story needed.. praise to the author.. - xtra dog - Jan-18-2012   

I liked this sequel. It was thought provoking, poignant and hopeful. The story is very well written. I'd like to have read more about Cass and Abra too:-) A good read. - Lyn B - Jul-26-2011   

the mid-west translations were funny.. the rest of the story was just brilliant.. i kept getting the feeling the author wanted to state that some things in life were supposed to happen, just to prepare you for the rest of your journey.. - xtra dog - Jan-18-2012   

eventhough this story is rather tragic in a way, the author still managed to put a smile on my face.. - xtra dog - Jan-17-2012   

regardless of the subject 'revenge throughout times and ages', this story put a smile to my face.. - xtra dog - Jan-13-2012   

This is a wonderful story. It is a bit different from the author's other work but is very nicely done. It has humor, heartbreak and a special guest star, God. And she is a hoot. - jh - Sep 7th, 2005   

Stop what you're doing and read this story immediately! It is a terrific read. I liked it a lot. - Peg - Sep 7th, 2005   

Cephalgia writes a humerous, heartwarming and thought provoking piece in this one. Run, do not walk, do not pass go, do not collect $200.00 to read this story. What are you still doing here? You're supposed to be reading...Go! - Victoria (Littlespit) - Sep 10th, 2005   

very good read - Anonymous - Jan-05-2010   

i agree with the other comments.. the story is well written, humorous and thought provoking.. i really loved the ending as well.. keeps you wondering.. - xtra dog - Jan-17-2012