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Xena: Janice and Mel | 1900-1960 | Alternative | Romance (alt) | Short Story - 24 pages | Finished | Jan-00
Cast: Melinda, Janice
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I think this was a pretty decent story, but it needed a bit of work and one thing that kept throwing me was the portrayal of Melinda's southern accent. She ALWAYS said "ya'll" in place of "you" and I just found that very annoying. But besides that I still think it was a good story. - Anonymous - Apr 14th, 2003 Not to be picky...but it is "y'all", not "ya'all". Contraction of "you all". Otherwise, the story is good, I enjoyed reading it. - Anonymous - Apr-23-2006 |