Nice, left me with a smile. I'm curious how they will tackle the writers block in the future. - Anonymous - Jan-17-2010   

such a cute and HOT story :-P - Anonymous - Jan-19-2010   

It really is a nice story, and sexy, really sexy - Anonymous - Jan-19-2010   

NICE-really different--nice change - Anonymous - Jan-25-2010   

Loved this! - Ginger - Jan-27-2010   

Awesome story!!!! Great read. - camree - Mar-14-2010   

You are a wonderful writer. The flow of the story is really good and I like the first persons point of view. And it was really really hot (phew). Please keep writing and posting. Well done. - Dale - Apr-04-2010   

What a great read - Anonymous - Apr-09-2010   

Well-written, sweet and hot!! Thanks! - Anonymous - Apr-20-2010   

GREAT READ!!!!! I really encourage this writer to carry on with her writing - interesting, hot and with a twist - what more should a good short story have? I RECOMMEND THIS WRITER!! - CoolNik - Apr-20-2010   

coool....loving every line of it> Gracelan Chase, keep up the good work - easeden - Apr-25-2010   

Great story: YOU HAVE TO READ IT!
But: Awful title! seriously, It made me overlook the story the first time around! - Anonymous - Apr-29-2010   

Me ha encantado... I've really enjoyed it, but I think the title is a mistake - Rouge - Jun-17-2010   

good start and finishing story. I'd love to write more stories from Gracelan Chase. - zen - Apr-04-2011   

Awesome Awesome Awesome story!!!! she is a great writer......
please write more.........!!!! plz plz plz - Anonymous - Nov-04-2011   

Awesome... READ IT! - Anonymous - Jul-02-2012   

That was an intense and incredibly sexy story. It is short but so well written that it delivers a lot of emotion and plot in a very entertaining way. Great job Gracelan Chase. - ubergoober - Jun-01-2014   

Unlike most readers, I'm not sure I like this one. It is very well written (especially for a first person point of view), very emotional and hot. But the subject, it seems very controlling and manipulative even though Mitch's actions were rooted in concern. - Stacia - Jun-02-2014