I just love the stories of Kim and that is even (beside "Wild") my favourite one. It is a disturbing read in parts but I really recommend it! - querdenker69 - Aug-11-2006   

This was a fantastic story, very well written and I actually cried at one stage (which I never do!!) It would have been perfect if Keller and Garrison's romantic relationship had been expanded on, rather than, I felt rushed in the last two chapters...just MHO no offence to the wonderful writers of this piece which is now one of my favourites!! - Raven - Sep-03-2006   

This is a VERY good, VERY sad story. I've went through such a range of emotion reading this that I can't begin to describe it. If you are in the mood for a tear jerker this is it. - Netta - Sep-07-2006   

I enjoy Kim's other works, but particularly liked this one. The story is well told, and the characters are very sympathetic; they drew me in! Would highly recommend this story!! - Anonymous - Oct-25-2006   

This is an amazing story! The characters are completely believable, and story was very well though out. This is one of the best I have ever read. It takes the reader through every emotion possible. Truly an amazing story! - jd - Nov-28-2006   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Garrison and Keller are really great Characters in this story. I am amazed that I have not come across this story a lot sooner. This story will make you mad, make you cry and just want to go and hold your children if you have them. I was up all night reading this story because it is Just that great!! Well done!! If you haven't read this MASTERPIECE yet, then you are truly missing out. - K. Lewis - Feb-15-2008   

This is a great story. I loved it. - lyneX - Sep-11-2008   

WOW! Great Story - Anonymous - Dec-18-2008   

I find myself completely captivated by all the stories written by this author. Have to make sure I don't start reading a new one when I have things to do 'cause I just can't stop reading once I start. Loved it! - Ginger - May-18-2009   

Amazing story....overwhelming, give me an intense emotion, wow....excellent!!!! - Lucian - Nov-16-2009   

Ohhhh... that was intense. what a wonderful story. There's a little bit of everything in here. Angst, tragedy, love, heartbreak, LOVE and romance. Thanks for great read and sharing your wonderful storytelling talent with us. - Anonymous - Apr-10-2010   

Great story. Definitely worth the read. - Tara - Apr-12-2010   

A really great great great great story. It made me cry and that is something I really do not do when I read a story. - sassy123 - Jul-15-2010   

A really great great great great story. It made me cry and that is something I really do not do when I read a story. - sassy123 - Jul-15-2010   

I really loved this story> Keep up the good work - sassy123 - Aug-08-2010   

Damn it! I have no idea how you do it, but I can't stop reading! Just finished reading this gem and I am surprised it hasn't gotten more comments. Common guys!I very much respect and I bend the knees before talent of Kim. My most favourite books "Revolution" and "Wild", these stories have blown my mind. This story, of course, very emotional. Atmosphere is transferred well, characters are deep, well developed and believable, I felt heroes as real, a plot will develop in good rate. I often would like to pass to other page at reading fanfiction because dialogues or are banal and boring, or the plot is too predicted and it becomes again boring and again this damned feeling of a deja vu. But here I have read all from chapter 1 and to last. Only, it would be desirable to see more about romantic relations of Keller and Garrison, their feelings and as they go with it, therefore the end has seemed crumpled, and there was a feeling something lost... And I also don't deny that my eyes were filled with tears when I read this, that says that the author is able to influence the reader and knows as to tell a drama. This story will leave nobody indifferent.
I'm not able to write the good review, sorry, but I think, it is amazing and very talented work from the amazing author. BRAVO, Kim, and many THANKS to you!!!
I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys a good tale!

PS: Sorry for my English. It is not my native language.

- Akaisha - Nov-16-2010   

Brilliant. You two write this type of story so well. - Silver - Nov-16-2010   

Yes Read this story! Just finished it. I loved the well written characters, the story flow and the writing. Its top notch! Thanks for the gift of Keller's, Monk's and Parkers's story. Kim and Alexa you have done it again. Keep up the great work!! - Tena - Dec-13-2010   

A love story led in a very credible way, with endearing characters, and well writen, as usual with these authors. - Anonymous - May-04-2011   

This story is truly amazing. A great read, didn't want to stop reading. - Em - Jun-28-2011   

fantastic story.. really loved the last part of it.. a very unusual ending.. too bad i had read another story featuring keller and garrison (my favourite, btw) in a cameo before reading this story.. resulting in my having a good clue of the romantic involvements before they came about.. teach me to read stories by the same author in terms chronology instead of alphabetically.. - xtra dog - Jul-08-2011   

I loved this story. I could not put it down!! Sequel? - ChakramGirl - Nov-27-2011   

Now this is what i call a true story. The feelings so raw and poignant definitely had tears in my eyes a few times. A totally moving and compelling read. - Niyah - Sep-04-2012   

Like any good story this one leaves you wanting more, that feeling of 'What did they do next???'
Beautifully written, emotional and very rewarding.
On my top ten for sure. - Amphipolis Heart - Nov-26-2014   

Amazing story very emotional at times I can say I shed a tear reading this story well done on writing this lovely story xx - SD - May-18-2015   

This is one extraordinary reading experience. WoW, what an amazing story ! After being forced to leave it due to everyday duties, you can't wait to pick it up and pursue it late into the night, it's so good ! - orcsage - Jun-08-2015   

I just read this again for the umpteenth time in as many years and it always touches me. What an amazing tale and it brings tears to my eyes each time I read it. Well done. - Kelly Aten - Jul-18-2016   

Wow. was up all night reading this. The story evoked a gamut of emotions. From tears to out and out laughter, this well told tale had it all. A real pleasure and privilege to have been able to read. - Starr - Aug-12-2017   

One of my favorites! - Colorado fan - Aug-31-2017   

I find this story to be exceptional as far as plot and in-depth development in not only the characters, but the major situations in the story. I certainly felt as if the writer was able to create very real situations that draw the reader in-- and her dialog is done very well, although sometimes it isn't clear who says what. She really could use a beta reader to tidy up, help with sentence structure. Also, the author might consider responding to readers who email her, since feedback and response is equally appreciated.Extra comment: on this page, your question below actually reads "How would *your* rate this story?, not "you". Thanks for this site, and the opportunity to comment! - Anonymous - Sep 8th, 2002   

I am a big fan of Kim, and this is a good fic, but it is not their best work. There are times it is confused and for moments the history is something slow. The best in the writer is the drama, and I recommend a lot "FIRST" and "AGAIN", in that order. Excellent histories. - Atalanta - Sep 26th, 2002   

I absolutely loved 'Lessons'. As a recent college graduate, I could totally appreciate the setting and situations of the characters. It has a different feel to it than most other fan fics and it is refreshing and addictive. I was very impatient during updates :). - Michelle - Sep 27th, 2002   

I've just finished your stories on the Athenaeum site and enjoyable is a huge understatement! So is saying that I anxiously await the next installment.(BTW thanks for dating your work) - Ted - Mar 27th, 2003   

What a wonderfull story. I really liked Dagny. This is truely one of the best stories I have read... Thanks - Anonymous - May 6th, 2004   

Kim and Alexa are a great writting team. This was a fasinating and extremely well written story. Dagny and Chase are my new heroes....Thanks! Well done! - Veronica - Feb 21st, 2005   

i fell sooo in love with this story, read it again and again and just love it more. and here comes the spoiler: Dagny is the greatest girl in the world :) thank you, bards. i read the Outcome first and went to find other stories by you. Lessons did me in and i hunted down every story u wrote, you are amazing! - Katrina - Apr 9th, 2005   

Simply a terrific story with well drawn characters! Kim and Alexa are outstanding writers - their stories draw me in every time! - Anonymous - Jul-17-2006   

Outstanding, have a box of tissues ready and a stress ball handy, because the story takes you on a journey that is so intense at times and has so much magnatism, you just have to get to the end, the stress ball will help when you just wanna slap a character silly, and the tissues for the soppy/happy bits. - LuvTigger71 - Aug-01-2006   

This is one of my favorites, read it. You will understand, why. - Brighteyez - Sep-08-2008   

One of my favorites! These authors NEVER disappoint! - kds - Mar-06-2009   

I'm a little late, but just can't help tell how much I've loved this story. I you wanna feel the power of desire, admiration, love and fate... READ IT! - Anonymous - May-09-2009   

Isn't this Uber? Not really XWP [Corrected 5-12-2009] - ficfanC - May-11-2009   

very good sotry a must read!!! - reader - Aug-02-2009   

Another great one by Kimbo - Angelicrainbw - Oct-12-2009   

Ahhh..... that was so good. Gread story. I highly recommend it !! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Feb-02-2010   

I finish reading this story some time ago, and now I'm not able to stop looking for these two authors. It such a great pleasure to find such a wonderfull work, because Pritekel and Hoffman make you feel every emotion of their characters. Dagny and Chase! What a couple! Please give us more!!! - Lucian - Apr-14-2010   

Highly Recommended. Read it and you will understand! - Anonymous - Jun-13-2010   

I loved this story. A job well done - sassy123 - Sep-15-2010   

i really like this story. i have read it five times now. one of my favorites. - Anonymous - Nov-25-2010   

simply loved the beginning, the middle and the end.. and everything in between.. one minor point of criticism: the timeline is not always correct.. e.g. june to november is a period of 5 months, not 7.. would recommend the story nonetheless.. - Anonymous - May-21-2011   

I am a huge Kim Pritekel fan and find myself drawn to read this story over and over again. I love angst and this most certainly delivers. What I appreciate the most about 'Lessons' is the slow relationship development. Kim and Alexa have a way with unfolding a story with natural progression that's refreshing and enjoyable. - DD - Jan-07-2012   

Thank you for this story!!! well people, yes this can happen in real life! here i am, a medicine student, far away from home, remembering the last 2 years of high school, where i met a wonderful young english teacher that became best friend,my confidant,my big crush and a first girl kiss (a big OMG i like girls :D thank God we remained long distance friends after some bitter sweet times). THIS story really touched my heart, i've enjoyed the playfulness of the characters, it was like looking back smiling and crying ( we used to go swimming every weekend too,so you've touched something buried deep inside me ). SPOILER: this line cracked me up: "Its called First by some woman with a very odd last name." ( funny, you guys :)) and i loved ''First'') READ THIS STORY PEOPLE AND YOU WON'T REGRET IT!

PS: excuse my crappy english, but it's not my native language... i guess i should have taken english lessons instead of making out during the holiday - braniac - Jan-09-2012   

This has got to be my favourite story on this site! It's truly amazing and the characters are just wow. Loved it! - Rylie - Jan-22-2012   

Another great story from Kim! Loved some of the song lyrics in this story. Thank you so much kim for this amazing piece of treasure. - AW - May-30-2012   

Stunning story - wonderful, relatable characters and the relationship development is just beautiful. - Anonymous - Oct-06-2012   

I have re-read this story twice now and I believe that this will stay one of my favorites along with her other book of "Wild". I love how detailed the characters are and how true the feelings progress. I enjoyed this so much that I'm planning on purchasing it. Highly recommended! - Katie of Ohio - Jan-08-2013   

I love this story! - Anonymous - Jun-10-2014   

What to say AMAZING is one word this was my favourite from these author . Read this u will not be sorry xxxxx - SD - May-19-2015   

Simpley put : One of the greats! Do read it if you havent yet and re read it if you have. - Katie of ohio - Oct-03-2016   

I'm looking forward to the continuation of another well written romantic fiction from this collaboration of Kim and Alexa. It's as though they've stepped back from college in setting this new story. Their last work, "Lessons", was set in college. It was a powerfully emotional tale, as are Kim's solo pieces, notably, "First", and "Again", both involving older characters having dialogues with their memories. Judging from the first 2 chapters, and their past writing, "Outcome" will be a very good read. - Phantom Bard - Dec 24th, 2002   

can't wait for the 'outcome' of this story! an excellent start to an intriguing storyline - polar girl - Jan 11th, 2003   

Run don't walk to read this wonderful story.This story is so realistic. You will swear the authors sneaked a peek at your diary. Andi and Haley are truly wonderful ladies that you can't help but root for them. Or to know them and enjoy in their fun times and hug them during their down times. - Chris L. - Mar 4th, 2003   

Deliciously drawn out with an unusual written style; the minimalist POV took some getting used to - but I appreciate the distinctiveness. Great story, 3 kleenex sheets worth :)E - E - Mar 24th, 2003   

Great story - Anonymous - Mar 12th, 2004   

I've been up most the night trying to finish this one. Wonderful novel that I rate very highly. I'm going to miss Andi and Haley, they are believable and likable characters. - Janet - Aldershot England - May 7th, 2004   

What a beautiful story! - pat - May 12th, 2004   

Wow, it's a great story! I wish there was a sequel. - s.happy - Aug 15th, 2004   

Wow....Just wow!!!!! - Anonymous - Feb 5th, 2005   

Amazing Story, I Need a SEQUEL to keep breathing... lol. Likeable characters, believeable story, loved it... I highly recommend it - Heidi - Feb 23rd, 2005   

this story is so good I read it in 3 hours....beautiful....sequel please - miriam - Feb 27th, 2005   

A beutiful read folks. Some one find me a sequel. - Robin Hicks - Apr 29th, 2005   

Wow! Great Story! Utterly captivating! I hope you write a sequel. - Anonymous - May 18th, 2005   

This really is a great story. I loved it .I have to agree that I would love a sequel. Really great read thanx Kim and Alexa. - Anonymous - Dec 21st, 2005   

I've read this story several times and I cannot adequately express what a great story it is. Its one of my favourites and something I guarantee youll love and hopefully come back to as many times as I have to indulge in yet another fantastic piece of literature from two amazingly talented authors. This gets my utmost recommendations along with anything else these two have ever written. - Fox_Feather - Jun-10-2006   

This is the kind of story that will keep you on the edge of your seat till the end. OUTSTANDING! A must, must read. You will not be disappointed. Kudos to the authors. - Fredrica - Jun-22-2006   

I've lost count of how many times I've read this story. It's been one of my favourites since I first read it a few years ago, and I come back to it often. How it has never reached #1 is beyond me, seriously. It really is a beautiful story. If you haven't read it, you really should.

Sequel? Please? :) - Melissa - Mar-06-2007   

This story rocks you to the core! With it's believable charcters and plot line; you feel as though you are right there as the story unfolds, cheering, crying, hopping, and wishing right there along with them! A must read you will be gripped from the very beginning! Great read ladies! - Jaely - Apr-11-2008   

Oh this was FANTASTIC!!! I'd love to see these two authors get back together for another go! These two characters will remain with me for a long long time. - JC - May-15-2008   

i really enjoyed reading this story. i laughed alot, and cried alot. it has a certain uniqueness in it compared to other stories here. I REALLY ECOMMEND THIS TO BE READ!! very nice story. it can pass as a love story movie. if your looking for novel like an unexpected blooming HS friendship of two different social-bounded characters to mature love, this is it. experience pain, intimidation, jealousy, fun, joy and love in one. but i still wish there`s a sequel. heheh... - ateB - Aug-24-2008   

Great story !! Molto bella,bravissime :)) - Manuela - Sep-05-2008   

Kim, you are one of my all time favorite bards. Your stories never disappoint. This is one of my all time favorites. There is nothing like your 1st love. This story will help you remember why. - Brighteyez - Sep-08-2008   

Loved this story---excellent! - Stormy - Feb-18-2009   

What an amazing story! I would love to see a continuation of the relationship of these two women. - Angelicrainbw - Mar-10-2009   

Stupid me.....I started this outstanding story last night and couldn't put it down! Stupid me cause it was my turn to get up with our 4 year old while partner sleeps in and I've had 2 hours of sleep! Brilliant story...the angst is so thick at times. A must read. Well done. - Lea Ann - May-23-2009   

Awesome story! Emotional, suspenseful, and very well-written! I love how it's set in Minnesota, nothing ever takes place here!! : ) Great read! - Nicole - Jul-12-2009   

great story! my heart was aching reading some chapters. whew! READ STORY HERE! i just hope there's a sequel, you know? - rec - Jul-29-2009   

Such sweet angst. Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Everything you write has been a pleasure to read. Loved both Haley and Andi. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Feb-15-2010   

This story was beautiful, funny, cute, amazing, and everything else you wish for in a story! This duo is amazingly talented. I recommend it 100%! - Laurence2123 - Apr-27-2010   

What a wow story. Great job pf writing. - sassy123 - Dec-23-2010   

Strange.. at the beginning of the story it seems like andi is the more mature one.. at the end of the story i get the impression haley is the most mature.. or how characters in a story can grow.. nice.. - Anonymous - May-22-2011   

One of my favorites! I enjoyed it even more the second time I read it and will definitely read it again and again! - Jaime - May-27-2011   

i love it! - braniac - Dec-20-2011   

One of the best stories out there. Matches with the emotions I have been living through. As always kim did a great job, read it countless times i think ;) - AW - Apr-21-2012   

Really great. Couldn't put it down. - Anonymous - Nov-14-2013   

Wow. That was a phenomenal read. Roller coaster of emotions. Very well crafted. Read it - well worth your time! - Georgia - Feb-10-2014   

That's the good stuff! - Whitney D. - Mar-02-2014   

Amazing story only fault was the jump from Haley graduation to present but still a great read - SD - May-19-2015   

Revolution by Kim Pritekel and Alexa Hoffman is a major wow! It's a lovely, sweet, tender, humorous, LONG first time novel. I couldn't put it down.I was so impressed with the strong use of first person. It's rare to read a well written 1st person uber...I loved it. The characters are well developed and the authors allow them to evolve into a partnership, rather than using the instant attraction, love at first sight motif. There were some minor editing glitches and errors, but overall, it's a fabulous read. If I were Lunacy (which I'm not) I'd give this my HIGHEST RECOMMENDATION! Run, do not walk, do not sleep, until you've read this one. - PT Martin - Sep 18th, 2003   

I have no words to do this story justic in a revue. I can only incurage you to read it.In a way I envey you. You will read this story with fresh eyes for the first time,You have a remarkebel trip ahed. ENJOY. - SammyLee - Sep 21st, 2003   

Wow, Wow, Wow... I'm going down the line on these stories and so far they're wonderful. Love the writing style, the characters, the story line. This story is one of the most wonderful stories i've read, and believe me i've read plenty. Highly recommended, Don't miss it - Heidi - Mar 3rd, 2005   

Wonderful Story! The characters are funny, enchanted, a teenage falling in love for your mother'friend. Amazing! A unforgettable story! - leth cross - Apr 30th, 2005   

Totally outstanding story, well worth staying up till 4am to finish reading it. Everyone just has to read it. - LuvTigger71 - Jul-30-2006   

Amazing story!! Highest recommendations! - Krysta - Aug-22-2006   

This story is one the best in the xenaverse! I read
several time ago, but I read again and again, because
is wonderful!!!! - lethcross - Aug-25-2006   

Love all of their work. This however is a personal favourite. At first I frowned at the summary, wondering how it w/could ever work. It does, very well. Excellent even.

Excellent story and wonderful characters.

A must read. - Ape - Feb-14-2008   

This story is wonderful! It's a beautifully written story that takes the reader for a fully believable journey. In my opinion a must read! - Jaely - Apr-09-2008   

Oh! Now THIS is one FANTASTIC story!!! I hated reaching the end as I was nowhere near ready to let go of these two characters. Loved it!!! - JC - May-31-2008   

Grrreat story. Loved it. - lyneX - Jun-06-2008   

Great story,great romance,I really enjoyed it !!! - Manuela - Oct-27-2008   

Superb story. I must have read this about four times already and it always is a refreshing, entertaining and heart warming story. Great work by the authors. More, morem more. - aj - Nov-14-2008   

Amazing!!!! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

this is an awesome story! - Anonymous - Mar-26-2009   

dam well written story loved it - Anonymous - Apr-05-2009   

what a wonderful story. very sweet, very believable, very wow! - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009   

Wonderful and Hot!! Great story and characters - Anonymous - Jan-23-2010   

I read this story about a year ago and it still pops in my head every now and again. I stayed with me for days after I finished reading it. It should be published. This is my favorite author! - D - Jun-13-2010   

LOVE IT! There's so much depth in the characters. I love the authors - well recommended! - Jane - Jul-04-2010   

WOW! What a story.... A-MA-ZING!!!! I LOVED it from the first paragraph to the last. This one of THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!
- Sourth Guest - Oct-12-2010   

Brilliant. It could have been dodgy, but was written carefully and with great believability. Loved it. - Silver - Nov-14-2010   

I loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

I really loved this story. Was sad to see it end. Highly recommend. - moe - Apr-18-2011   

easy read.. i missed chemistry between the two main characters.. laughed out loud with the way things ended for bill and martha, though.. - Anonymous - May-25-2011   

Dude what a great story! :D i loved this line: ''It's a love revolution. Welcome''. - braniac - Jan-13-2012   

It was a slow start, but about halfway through I was hooked. I wish it had a bit more at the end, but liked it overall. - Anonymous - May-29-2012   

Really great read loved the story ending was a bit quick but still enjoyed it xx - Anonymous - May-17-2015   

Revolution by Kim Pritekel and Alexa Hoffman, a very enjoyable read. It's all good, even to their first fight. Only real problem, the story's too short, you don't want to leave these people. It's too soon. Anyway, thank you for sharing them with us. - orcsage - May-31-2015   

You know, I just loved this story. Very sweet, practically angst free... Well done ladies. A wonderful read. It's how High School should have gone, for all of us. If I had any critique, it would be that the secondary characters needed more depth. Would have transformed this from a novella to a novel, but didn't detract from my enjoyment one bit. - RoxyTrek - Mar 6th, 2004   

Great read! Made me nostalgic for some of those old times of sneaking glances at those cheerleaders and trying to make my move in the same shy ways Palmer did. I loved it! I also liked the secondary characters. Everyone should have had such friends in high school. - Alex Tryst - Mar 12th, 2004   

Great story. I really enjoy the way she writes. - Anonymous - May 4th, 2004   

The first word that comes to mind is... cute.The title reveals a lot. It'a about a girl who plays football and falls for a cheerleader. Cute! - lectra - Aug 15th, 2004   

this was a very cute story , It brought back memories I have forgotten, this is one the sweetest ones I've read so far. I absolutly love it. - arly - Mar 7th, 2005   

Oh, this is a sweet story... Kim and Alexa are definitely great writers and their stories are all excellent. - Summer Sun - Mar 25th, 2005   

Very cute highschool sweetheart kind of tale. And without the big time skip right in the middle of an angst. - Mile D'Cast - May-09-2007   

omg, this is the perfect story for those who wants to have a taste of high school romance. very sweet and makes you feel warm and fuzzy in your stomach! - lxlanimefreaklxl - Feb-23-2008   

I truly love this story - Anonymous - Mar-10-2008   

Great story! Makes me think about the good old high school days. I loved this sweet story and would recommend to all. Agin another wonderful story by Kim & Alexa, Thank you both. - Tracey - Sep-03-2008   

I adored this story. Palmer and Kent are just soooo cute! I'm really glad I took the time to read it, along with other works by these two. I give it a 10 on the awesome scale. - Hillsys Stalker - Sep-04-2008   

This is a high school story that is doesn't make you wince or cringe. There's only a small bit of M/F interaction but it is only one of the character's breaking up with her on again, off again boyfriend. Both main characters give up there innocense to each other. For gay women this story is safe to read. Thank you, KP and AH, this one's a keeper. Excellent story. - Samantha - Sep-06-2008   

Another wonderful story! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-10-2009   

I've read several stories on this site, but hardly any have touched me the way this has. - Anonymous - Jul-09-2009   

OOOOO... my god!! wat a read! - Nien aka David - Aug-12-2009   

This is my favorite story on this site! It's beautiful and sweet. It's just the right length. I love it and highly recommend it. - Anonymous - Oct-31-2009   

I had read it years ago. Loved it. Very entertaining. - Millie D'Cast - Nov-07-2009   

This is the second time I read this sweet storie, and I think it won't be the last. Sometimes a storie like these take you to the essence of things, and make you feel so good about love, people,and your place in the world. Pritekel and Hoffman's writing do so much in a few pages. Hope there will be more to share. Thanks! - Lucian - Apr-14-2010   

Loved the mush ! Now that was such a sweet story. I wish high school could have been like that back in my day. Hope it's like that now. Sweet, sweet. Thanks for sharing this story. - Anonymous - Jun-15-2010   

hmm... i don't remember hs being like this. great story, btw. - kc - Jul-06-2010   

I fell in love with this sweet history - Anonymous - Oct-13-2010   

A lovely story. In a world less fearful of love, this is how High School should be for people....good friends, good team mates and love in all it's forms. - Silver - Nov-13-2010   

aaawwww... that was incredibly sweet. Thank you for a great feel-good story. - Anonymous - Mar-04-2011   

Very cute and sweet, yet it was hot as well! Great story. - TKD Vixen - Apr-28-2011   

as a high school teacher in an all boys school i can tell you most have very distinctive ideas about gays.. none too flattering.. i think its just part of puberty to fight against things unknown and misunderstood.. hence my continuing battle against prejudice amongst my pupils.. the scene at the prom being very recognizable for me.. the openmindedness grady and di exibit a sad unreality (is that actually a word?) in our puberescent world today.. luckily most harsh opinions and prejudices against gays tend to wear off once puberty is over.. - Anonymous - May-26-2011   

I didn't comment this novella the first time I've read it. My recommendation will not differ with the others. This tale shows how things should be happening for everyone. I had this melancholy stuck in my chest when I finished reading it, knowing too well all of it was truly to good to be realistic, but I have to thank again these two wonderfull bards. I want to thank them for their tremendous work, for wanting to offer the readers, a piece of what the world should be like for two young women falling in love with each other. Love without guilt, or dramatic dilemmas, or hatred, or the fear to loose everything... Love without all of this ugly, unfair and so realistic suffering is really beautifull... don't you think? :) - yuka - Jun-01-2011   

high school sweet high school. you wanna relive old days, when you were struggling with emotions? yeah? then read this beautiful story :D - braniac - Jan-10-2012   

I loved this story!! I will definately be ready more of their stuff!! - Anonymous - Apr-20-2012   

Great story - sassy123 - Aug-20-2013   

Would have loved it if my school crush could have been this sweet, sincere and drama free!
A wonderful story. - Amphipolis Heart - Nov-26-2014   

Really enjoyable read xx - SD - May-18-2015   

Well written, interesting characters and engaging story ...I'm really enjoying it! - Chris - Mar 25th, 2004   

I've read all of Kim's stories, and this one is by far her best. The characters are wonderful and well written. This is one of the most heart warming stories I've ever read, and I recommend it to all. - Renee - Jul 11th, 2004   

A lovely story - excellent characterisation and wonderful, almost-addictive relationship development. A real 'page-turner'. - Charlotte - Jul 14th, 2004   

awesome as always - kasey - Aug 9th, 2004   

I really loved this story. I recommend it to everyone. I loved Zac's innocents so appealing and funny. Great love story all around. Wish there was a sequel. - Veronica - Feb 21st, 2005   

I absoulutly love love love love love this story....yeap.. Keep up the good work you guys. (sequel please) - barb - Mar 7th, 2005   

I have read all of this writing team's work and I must say I am amazingly impressed. This particular story was very well written and I just wish more storis online would be as fantastic as this one. I surely hope this team gets published soon, I would definately buy their books in a heartbeat. Highly Recommended, Do Not Miss Any of these stories... - Heidi - Mar 14th, 2005   

The premise was so unbelievable that I didn't think I would enjoy this story - HA! I couldn't stop reading it and now rank this in my top 10!!! Read it, read it, read it!! - Anonymous - Jul-16-2006   

Fab, Fab, Fab, totally outstanding piece of writing. Should be read by all. - LuvTigger71 - Jul-31-2006   

This story is the best I have ever read. It truly is a must read. I loved the whole journey. Kim Pritekel & Alexa Hoffman: Thank you, Thank you and Thank you for writing it. - geetargrrrl - Apr-07-2007   

Intriguing. Nice to read.
Loved it! - Mile D'Cast - Apr-26-2007   

awww, i love this story! it gives new meaning to achingly, heartbreakingly sweet! thank you Kim and Alexa! - Kat - May-10-2007   

amazing story, everyone should read. This story turned in to one of my top two favorite stories. you will not be disappointed if you take the time to read. - Anonymous - Aug-07-2007   

WHen I first readed this I couldn't tear my eyes off of the screen and I HAD to finish it even if it meant that I would have to stay up all night. BUT when I finished this, it wasn't enough so I started over again and read this for the second time. The lovely part is that I'll always return to this story to read it, because it has just something addicting that I have to return to read this all over again and again. I would say that this is the best story I've ever read ! Thanks Kim for writing this wonderful story. You should all read this. It's just so awesome that even words can't describe the prettines of this story. - Bitazh - Feb-02-2008   

Oh, oops sorry, I forgot Alexa. Thanks Kim AND Alexa ! - Bitazh - Feb-02-2008   

a fantastic read .... totally love Kim's & Alexa's stories. - scorpio_2097 - Feb-11-2008   

This was a really amaxing Piece of work. I don't know which is my favorite, "CONTROL" OR "WILD" I love when I can become so caught up in a story that I can "feel" the emotions of the characters. I bow down to these two remarkable authors!! - K. Lewis - Feb-15-2008   

Great story with love and adventure - Anonymous - May-12-2008   

Wow!!! What a wonderful story. If this story went on and on and on, I'd read it. I loved it and would recommend thta eveyone shouls, it's just too good!!!! Thank you for this sweet story Kim and Alexa. - Tracey - Sep-03-2008   

I have re-read this story so many times. Kim is such a talented author. The way these characters develope as you read is brilliant. - Brighteyez - Sep-08-2008   

These two characters are wonderful..such pure hearts, wow! Amazing story and one of the best there is. Thanks to Kim and Alexa. - mackdido - Sep-12-2008   

Absolutely phenomenal. I am still thinking about it, so touching,heartwarming; the love between these 2 women--their connection--- it was almost palpable. A joy to read, thankyou Kim and Alexa. - j'seekher - Sep-27-2008   

Loved it. Very romantic. Zac is just a wonderful character. Just the right amount of drama. Ending could have been less corny though.. - Bloo - Oct-21-2008   

I've read this story like twenty times over the years and I never get bored or tired of it. Kim Pritekel's writing is always well plotted and exceedingly well written. I know whenever I see her put a new story out that it's bound to be awesome. "Wild" does not disappoint. An all time Top 10 in the Xenaverse and beyond! - Kishmari69 - Nov-08-2008   

WOW! i finished this story in one sitting. it was AMAZING! totally juss skipped studying for my finals for this :] and i would do it again! - fallen - Dec-09-2008   

Grab something to drink and get ready---once you start reading, you won't stop until the end! Loved it. - Stormy - Feb-18-2009   

This should be published! I'd love to have my own copy to keep. One of my all-time favorites! - Luie - Feb-23-2009   

Thanks so much for this story. I can't believe I never read it, I guess the 'Drama' genre put me off as I'm a sucker for mushy romances. I'm so glad I decided to give it a shot after realizing that it has received over 400 ratings. It's now officially my favourite story, EVER. Not kidding! - Alicia - Mar-03-2009   

Another great story from Kim! My fellow Denverite can sure write! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

this is a great, great story! - Anonymous - Mar-26-2009   

wow best story i ever read - Anonymous - Apr-05-2009   

It is the best love story I've read so far ! beautiful ! - ad vitam - Apr-30-2009   

Zac is such a adorable and wonderfull character and so well written. the whole story is so good in so many ways and brought many tears in my eyes. This is my favorite story that Kim has written. - Eliane - Jun-08-2009   

this story is one of those page-turner kind... you just wana keep on reading.... - crv - Nov-09-2009   

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Did I say that I loved it? - Anonymous - Nov-20-2009   

Amazing writing, nice build-up. My favorite piece of fanfiction. - Anonymous - Jan-15-2010   

Another great KP story. Zac is a unique and well written character. - MK - Mar-11-2010   

Loved this story. Definately one for us hopeless romantics. Thx. - Tara - Apr-09-2010   

Definitely my favorite story of Kim Pritekel and Alexa Hoffman!!!It keep me glue to the pc until the end. I love Zac and Abel and the way the two of them found love. Amazing story. A must read story type. - Lucian - Apr-14-2010   

A sweet and romantic Uber.
Kim Pritekel is a wonderful storyteller, very imaginative, embracing a large panel of genres, from romance to drama, from teenage to mature characters, and her association with Alexa Hoffman is successful.
Thanks to them both. - M. D. - May-15-2010   

LOVE this story!!! Zac made me laugh again and again. A very entertaining story - you'd be missing out if you don't read! - Jane - Jun-30-2010   

Wild will not let me go! The story just grabs you and doesnt let go until your sure the everything turns out right in these characters world. It is a beautiful woven web of emotion from beginning to end. I have read this story more then a few times and I can not walk away from it until I reach the end. For me that is a true hallmark of a superb writer(s). - Spark1e1 - Jul-22-2010   

I really liked this story. A really good job!!!! - sassy123 - Aug-25-2010   

Good story. - Anonymous - Nov-19-2010   

Loved it! Will definitely read this one again! - goa4me - Nov-22-2010   

Like everyone else who's commented here, I loved the story. One of the best if not the best. I couldn't put it down. I read this in one sitting and have read it two more times since then.Your capacity to build character, emotion and great plot is amazing. It has been a long and wonderful ride. Extremely AWESOME, I enjoyed everything. One of my favorites so far. And God, did I mention how fantastically brilliant your writing style is? You are an exceptional writers and you have my total admiration. I love this terrific book and HIGHLY RECOMMEND it!

Thank you for posting such an unforgettable story and thank you for your hard work writing it. Well done, I take my hat off and salute you!!! I hope you continue writing.
- Akaisha - Dec-12-2010   

What a wonderful, tender love story!! Thank you for a great read. Couldn't put it down. - Anonymous - Dec-29-2010   

I love it, absolutley Love It - Czips - Feb-01-2011   

Such a beautiful story! No other word but "Beautiful"! - lena - May-29-2011   

zac is quite the character.. - xtra dog - Jul-03-2011   

Oh my! Beautifully written, beautiful to read. - Anon - Aug-01-2011   

What a beautiful story.I highly recomend this to anyone.This is one of those stories that hold you captive until the last word is read. I just can't say this word enough...beautiful, beautiful,beautiful. Thank you Kim and Alexa. - mashymoo - Aug-28-2011   

One of my all time favorites by this author. FANTASTIC Read!!! - ReneeW - Sep-16-2011   

great story. chapter 12 cracked me up, i couldn't stop laughing at zac's antics. - Anonymous - Jan-13-2012   

great story. chapter 12 cracked me up, i couldn't stop laughing at zac's antics. - braniac - Jan-13-2012   

I will admit I started and stopped this story more times than I can count. In the end though once I got into the story I read it through in one day. I really loved this story. It proves the fact that love can heal all wounds. - Anonymous - Apr-02-2012   

totally loved this story. tks - soopi - Jul-13-2012   

Wow! A beautiful, original and well-written story. Don't miss reading this. - Liz - Mar-27-2013