Good start to what promises to be a great story! Looking forward to more. - cam - Oct-02-2006   

It seems RJ has done it again. Another well written
story. I am definitely looking forward towards the next update. Hopefully it's already finished (g) - Christi - Oct-03-2006   

A wonderful story that got me hooked within the first few paragraphs. Kody and BJ are very likable real characters on the trail of a mystery. I like the way that the characters are taking time getting to know each other as part of the story and not just meeting and jumping into bed. Can't wait for the next installment! - Rose - Oct-04-2006   

It's nice to read a story involving our animal partners. As usual, RJ has made for a great read and I look forward to reading more. - gayzer - Oct-05-2006   

Really great story. Grabs your attention and keeps it. - Anonymous - Oct-13-2006   

Wonderful story. I loved Jack! He had so much personailty.
BJ and Kody make a great team. Hope to see them again. If you haven't read this story you are really missing out. What are you waiting for? Go read it now. - Sue - Dec-22-2006   

How could I have missed this one. I love RJ's stories. Great read! Thanks!! - Anonymous - Aug-31-2007   

Very good read. - Marty - Feb-16-2008   

ARGH!!! why must u torture us!!! please please please put the last part up! im dying here!!! awesome story, really tugs the heart strings... and some other regions! :PBrilliant, simply brilliant. - Blueyez` - May 5th, 2005   

She's back and with a whole new set of characters to love and of course a couple to love to hate! R. Nolan's new story is well worth a read. Both main characters are strong women in their own right and the kids were just adorable. Any chance of seeing more of these lovely ladies? - Kelly - May 7th, 2005   

RNolan never disappoints! Her new characters are wonderfully written. The women's love and their struggle to overcome life's obsticles is a great read. I'm always a sucker for a story that includes kids and this one does not dissapoint! Great work, I look forward to anything else RNolan writes. - Littlespit - May 9th, 2005   

Double Trouble is a very lovely and wonderfully romantic story. I loved it. It is a 'must' read for everyone and since it was #1... many others agree. Thanks for such a wonderful story... keep writing! - GSB - May 15th, 2005   

This is what a romance story should be. R.Nolan knows how to to make you care about the characters and the trials and tribulations any new romace faces. Highest recommendation, read this story...you won't be sorry! - Dana - Jun 13th, 2005   

Great story! Read it and enjoy! - cam - May-31-2006   

Double Trouble is on my 'read and read again' list. It is a wonderful, romantic story that tugs at the heartstrings as well as tickles the funny bone. - Victoria - Jun-29-2006   

Wow this story is amazing. I didn't want it to end, it is so damn good. Its one of those stories that leaves you thinking about it well after you have finished reading it. I think I'm in love !!!!!! - sarah - Jul-27-2006   

I feel sad that this is the final story featuring these characters.It was an absolutely wonderful trip into their lives.I strongly recommend the three stories. They touch you in all the right places.Letterwolf - letterwolf - Jun 13th, 2004   

This is a great story, bringing the tale of the lives of Kim, Jess, Sam and Riley to a fulfilling conclusion. I definately recommend this story to everyone. - Anonymous - Jun 16th, 2004   

Wow was it great to see these ladies back! It was wonderful to spend time with four of my favorite characters. I'll really miss these ladies but look forward to what ever further adventures this bard will take me on. It was a great final look into the lives of Sam, Riley, Kim and Jess and a well written story.. I highly recommend it. - Donna - Jul 3rd, 2004   

Just finished reading Entwined Lives ... Wow that was a fabulous story!!! I never laughed, cried, or cooed more then the story I just read. What a great story. But, my happiness fell when I read the last sentence...This is the end of the series with these characters. I hope R. Nolan will reconsider and give us another look into the lives of Sam, Riley, Kim and Jess. - Jan - Oct 18th, 2004   

After reading these three stories about Jess, Kim, Sam and Riley I hope that the Author has it in her hearts to write more about them.....please.... Such great stories. They had me reading all through the night.
- lyneX - Oct-12-2006   

Link leads to blank black screen of disapointment! - Gingertea - Mar-20-2011   

The title "In A Heartbeat" caught my attention very quickly. Hmmm...I thought, perhaps a nice romantic story to read this evening to lift my spirits and soothe my very tired soul after an extremely busy work day. So, I ventured to commence reading this 'new' story to The Athenaeum. WOW!!! I read...and kept on reading...not letting go...not wanting to. I was 'hooked' very early on in this very well written and delightfully entertaining romantic tale. It certainly had gotten my attention and I found myself wanting 'more' even after completing the last chapter. This story by Ms Nolan is certainly a wonderful sequel to her first story, "LA Metropolitan"...and in my estimation, much moreso. This fictional interlude is more poignant, more riveting, more romantic, and more thought provoking in many ways. But, all in all...it's a story of...and about...'the power of love'. My suggestion is for y'all to read this one. Why?! 'Cuz you're really gonna like it. You truly are...'Fer sure!!! Well done,Ms. Nolan...very well done. - ~Ag - Sep 4th, 2003   

I was impressed with R Nolan's first offering "LA Metropolitan" so when I saw this companion piece, I was excited to read it. "In A Heartbeat" matched, if not surpassed her original work. The writing is well done, the characters are real and relatable. By the end of the story I was yearning for more. R Nolan writes a wonderful love story and I look forward to more work from this talented Bard. - Littlespit - Sep 6th, 2003   

Excellent story! Well written and makes you want to keep reading to the very end. I look forward to reading more from this Author. - Anonymous - Sep 6th, 2003   

As I said I would do, I read this novella by R. Nolan late last night on into early this morning. I was impressed. This is a well written story which definitely showcases R. Nolan's writing talent. "In A Hearbeat" is a beautiful love story that leaves you wanting to read more about it's two lovely heroines. And this is not a PWP tale. This work of fiction definitely has a heart and a soul wrapped around a nice story line. You'll understand where the title comes from not too long after you start reading. You'll find yourself on cruise-control as you glide from chapter to chapter. Then suddenly, it's over. And you have to stop. But most certainly, you're filled with a craving for more. This cleverly written and totally entertaining fictional delight was, indeed, a follow-up to "LA Metroplitan", but it's definitely left behind in this sequel's wake. Where have you been hiding R. Nolan? I can most assuredly say I want to read more of this writer's work! - //AW - Sep 7th, 2003   

I enjoyed this bard's first story LA Metropolitan so was happy to see a companion piece. Wow! This one was even better. In A Heartbeat is a wonderful love story. The characters are funny, compelling and presented in a well balanced manner. Once you start reading you won't want to stop! Great story and a throughly entertaining read. Hope to see more of these ladies. - Beth - Sep 13th, 2003   

SUPERB...ONE in a milinon... But wher is the rest????Need MORE PLZ - Keegan Conner - Sep 19th, 2003   

in a word? Brilliant... - Snuff - Nov 6th, 2003   

A friend highly recommended this bard's story and boy was she right! The characters are so alive and believable they draw you right into the story. And what a story it was...well done bard, well done. Any chance of us seeing more of Sam and Riley? - Donna - Dec 23rd, 2003   

Great story, awesome character developement.I laughed and I cried...sometimes at the same time. Highly recommend, this bard knows how to craft a compelling tale. - Sue - Oct 3rd, 2004   

I read this story probably since the first day it was posted and was SO blown away by it. And now, I'm lying awake at night, remembering the characters and just can't seem to let them go. In my opinion, IN A HEARTBEAT is an incredible story, very captivating and real enough that some of us can connect to. The emotions, the struggles..it all just shaped the story into one that touched my heart. This is a story that I've re-read several times as well as it's sequel Entwined Lives. - T.F. - Oct 18th, 2004   

My all time favorite story by RJ Nolan. Sam and Riley are HOT! - Anonymous - Feb-09-2008   

I love women cops and would like to have seen more of Sam in that role but I enjoyed this story and would love to see a sequel!! - JC - Mar-30-2008   

great story bery good characters - optional - May-09-2008   

I loved this story! Hooked from start to finish! - BlueButterfly - Dec-08-2009   

Since this story has been "removed by the author", why is this reference to it here? It's rather annoying to use the search function and to find a possibly interesting story ... only to see there is not actually a story. [Editor's Note: We always leave entries up with their current status, unless the author requests that we remove them. 12-3-2010] - Anonymous - Nov-09-2010   

I would love to read this story but it is no where to be found. Pity - Justme - Nov-26-2011   

I completely recommend this story. ItÆs different than Unexpected Arrival, but in such a cool way. I canÆt wait to read more about Kara and Annika as well as Del and Seven! RJ Nolan has such an amazing way of showing depth and small character details in her writing. - Anonymous - Jan 10th, 2006   

A definite must read! I was elated to find out there's a continuation, which the author has so far updated everyday. Never read any ST Voyager fiction until RJ Nolan's "Unexpected Arrival," which I could not put down until finished. Into the Void is another awsome story from an awsome and talented author. - blazinangelwings - Jan 11th, 2006   

I enjoyed reading this story as much as "Unexpected Arrival" and I would love to read more :-) Great job! - querdenker69 - Jan 22nd, 2006   

Engaging 7 of 9 story. Glad she's not with Janeway. What a refreshing change. - Kali - Dec-28-2006   

One of the best Voyager stories I've read. I think I have read this at least four times and plan to read it many more. - linda cygirl1 - May-01-2008   

What a great sequel to Unexpected Arrival. Another story for my bookmark. - Anonymous - May-02-2008   

Great sequel to Unexpected Arrival. I recommend both stories to any sci-fi fans. You don't have to know Star Trek to enjoy these great stories. - Tanya - May-17-2008   

Am a big Janeway/Seven fan but this and Unexpected Arrival were wonderful. Wouldn't mind a sequel with either Del/Seven or Kara/Annika... - Lee - Aug-28-2008   

Another RJ Nolan masterpiece. Loved the new story. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and imagination with us. Even if you are not a STV fan, you will love the sci-fi story. These are wonderful characters. The Sci-fi is fanatastic. Read the the first of these and come back and read this one. - Anonymous - Jul-02-2010   

Overall, a very good story. A little rushed in places, but very good. I'll be on the look out for more from this author. - SBerry - Apr 12th, 2003   

Standard piece of uber for a lazy sunday morning, good dose of soppiness and a pinch of angst. Nice portrayl of the relationship between these two women and I did enjoy the subtle moral of the tale in the end. - Stephanie - Apr 12th, 2003   

Whoa!!! A pleasantly satisfying romantic tale that will delight anyone's taste for a great afternoon or evening of reading entertainment. Go ahead and read "LA Metropolitan". I'm willing to bet you'll like it. I certainly did. Thank you, R. Nolan. Now, next on my reading agenda for tonight...the sequel..."In A Heartbeat". It's a great day, or should I say, night for reading! - //WA - Sep 6th, 2003   

I really enjoyed this nice romantic tale. I loved the relationship between the lead charachers and I loved the end. I can't wait to read the sequel. - Ri - Sep 9th, 2003   

One of the best ever. Dont You miss it. - Keegan Conner - Sep 19th, 2003   

An excellent read. I didn't want to stop reading it. The main characters are fully realized and believable. Kim's ability to help Jess face her past and move beyond it was wonderful.Keep it up. I look forward to reading the sequel.Great job, R Nolan! - Kinsey - Oct 30th, 2003   

Well, I always wondered what happened to Kim after that fiasco with Kerry in the ER series. Now I know!Thanks R. Nolan. You picked it up and made it into a story, giving Kim a place she deserves. - letterwolf - Mar 14th, 2004   

READ READ READ THIS NOW!!!!!!!! This story will whisk you away into a different, very appealing world. Amazing story! - AmbJade - May-23-2008   

Very, very good story!!! - BlueButterfly - Dec-09-2009   

Oh..why did the author take this wonderful series down? Came back to re-read an all-time favortie and they are gone :-( Sure hope this means Ms Nolan is going to publish the series. Fingers crossed!!! - Anonymous - Sep-03-2010   

Yeah, it's always sad to see a good story disappear off the 'Net. - Kugai - Nov-24-2011   

YA! This novel has finally been published! And wow... did the author really do a great job of expanding and improving an already great story. Published version is more than twice as long as the original online version. It's avalible on Amazon, L-Book and a bunch of other places. I am so happy to finally be able to add this favorite book to my bookshelf. - Anonymous - Nov-29-2011   

Truly loved this story. I have never really been able to get into the Voyager Fanfic due to the dynamics of the characters but by adding a new character to the cast really made the story line click. Loved it. I highly recommend it to all. The author's previous works have all been excellent pieces and with this addition is par for the course. Wonderful job. - ellebmd - Feb 23rd, 2005   

ItÆs no secret that I adore R NolanÆs writings; this story is no exception. It is well written, and a wonderful love story with just enough angst to be intriguing without becomming frustrating. Keep up the great work Ràand weÆll all keep reading, IÆm sure. - Littlespit - Feb 25th, 2005   

You have cemented my fandomhood with your latest story. Wow! I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more in the future. Please continue to write! - ln549 - Feb 27th, 2005   

R. Nolan has created something truly wonderful in Unexpected Arrival. It was one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a long time. With R. Nolan's wonderfully written dialogue, the characters really come alive to the reader. Seven is written very accurately, and the "Unexpected Arrival" was one that the reader can't help but fall in love with. It's sweet, romantic, funnyàand just an all around great love story. It gets my highest recommendation. - Bardeyes - Mar 7th, 2005   

this is an amazing story!!!! hope theres a sequel cuz i cant wait!!!! - krysta - Mar 19th, 2005   

An excellent story from start to finish. A nice change to have Seven not be with Janeway and what a delightful alternative Del was. - Anonymous - Apr 7th, 2005   

What an unexpectedly wonderful story! It was touching,charming, funny, and exciting.Highly recommended, even if you are not a Voyager fan. Great sci-fi story. - Janie - Aug 31st, 2005   

I just have one question. RJ where were you when this series was on the air? With writing like this it would still be on! Great story. I miss these characters and it was great to see them back. More please! - Karen - Nov 12th, 2005   

I wanted to take this opportunity to thank all my loyal readers for all the wonderful response Unexpected Arrival has received. The reaction has been phenomenal. Star Trek Voyager was a bit of a departure from my usual writing but was a fun experience. Seven of Nine has always been my favorite character, and I was intrigued by the idea of creating a story that featured Seven and expanded on the character we had all come to love.Many of the emails IÆve received concerning this story have requested, sometimes quite adamantly in fact ;-) a sequel to Unexpected Arrival. To that end, as a thank you to everyone who has taken the time to write and share with me their enjoyment of Unexpected Arrival I have an announcement. Coming in January to the Athenaeum: The sequel to Unexpected Arrivalà Join Del and Seven on a totally new adventure as they go Into the Void. Happy Reading, RJ Nolan. - RJ Nolan - Dec 24th, 2005   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Excellent Voyager story with an intriguing original character. Well worth reading. - Sandy - Jan-27-2008   

This is one of my favorites. I have read this story numerous times and plan to read it numerous more. It is that good. - linda aka cygirl1 - May-01-2008   

Well written and thought out. Will go into my bookmark to read again. - Anonymous - May-02-2008   

This is a great story! If you enjoy sci-fi give this story a try. You don't have to be a Star Trek fan to enjoy it. I love Del! The sequel Into the Void is just a good. Read them both! - Tanya - May-17-2008   

I'm a J/7 fan. But this story pairing 7 of 9 with another female is fantastic and believable. At least it made a believer out of me. - Sally - Feb-08-2009   

I love this author - everything she writes is absolutely fantastic. I don't normally read Voyager stories but I'm sure glad I did. What a wonderful coming into your own story. The romance and love that developed was a pleasure to read. Read it - you'll be glad you did. - Anonymous - Jun-28-2010