This is one of the GREATEST stories i have read..I cant wait for it to be published :) - bxverse666 - Nov 23rd, 2005   

im getting nothing on this when i try to go to the story is it me? - Anonymous - Dec 29th, 2005   

This is a great story. Where's the rest? It ends after part 18. Please help. - jac - Apr-10-2006   

When a story is this lengthy, I'll read a little at a time. Not the case here... This story is so wonderfully put together, it grabs you from the beginning and doesn't let go. - jac - Apr-12-2006   

This story has been removed! - Raven - Sep-19-2006   

This an extremely good read, I absolutely loved it, I loved both Sam and Allison although I must admit my softest spot was for Sam. Great coming of age story definitely go and read it!! - Lissa - Sep-24-2006   

I can't access this either!!!! - Anonymous - Sep-27-2006   

This story is one of a kind! It's well writen, with a nice flow and very interesting characters (you'll really want to wring Susan's neck!). Don't let it's lenght throw you off!!! - Bacchuskiller - May-20-2007   

Can't get past Part One! [Editor's note: There is a link to part 2 above.] - ice - Aug-02-2008   

Really great story!!! - ice - Aug-15-2008   

Loved it!! Except for my blood pressure rising when that Susan bitch acted up... - Anonymous - May-29-2009   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - Lengthy yes (it is a novel after all) but more than worth the effort. - Anna Lei - Oct-15-2009   

One of the best stories I have ever read! I just couldn't stop reading! It's one of the few stories where I had to take a kleenex to wipe my tears. seriously, if you search a story where there is haertbreak, love, hate, friendship, and family this is your story! - Spreeuwtje - Jul-01-2010   

One word.... Brilliant! - JettBlk - Aug-20-2010   

I dont know how I missed this one. I have read every single story on here and then some, but come across this gem last night and I must say that it is by far the best I have read in a long while. - Pickles - Dec-27-2011   

The story was good. Kept me intensely interested for a few days. However. There isn't a single likeable character in the story. Not a single one. - Anonymous - Mar-08-2012   

I was really enjoying this story up until the middle. I enjoyed the premise (though not exactly new, the whole step sister thing is pretty interesting and - why not - hot!) and was pretty absorbed throughout the first part, but later, when sh*t hits the fan seemed like the author lost her way. **SPOILER ALERT NOW** By the time the main characters got together again I didn't care about them or their love at all! They were both acting like immature teenagers and seemed so silly. I don't know... It was a major let down for me. so I just wanted to throw my 2 cents in here, just 'cause all reviews are pretty positive, so I thought why not just counterbalance things? - RD - Sep-24-2013   

I wish I had noticed that this story was "unfinished" before I started. It is such a well developed and wonderful story. I was really disappointed I couldn't continue. - jac - Apr-09-2006   

this is a really good story and eventhough i knew it was incomplete, i didn't expect it so soon. The way the author has left the story hanging is soooooo cruel, cos i really wanted to know what happened to Gareth and the fact that i probably never will is not fair. Talk about injustice in the world. Now i know what a cliffhanger really is. jeeeeez. Please, please please Sarkel wherever you are; if you can see this, please could you continue the story. thanks bye. - Queen Victoria - Jun-21-2006   

I was really enjoying this story on a rainy Sunday afternoon, when, smack I hit the wall of the unfinished. I could've had a V8. I know I should have checked but it has been poted for a while. The way it is left is just cruel and increases my resolve not to read unfinished stories. - gayzer - Nov-02-2006   

I think this is a published book (http://www.amazon.com/Odd-Couple-Q-Kelly/dp/1932300996). I just read Strange Bedfellows by the same author, it is a fantastic read. - Anonymous - Oct-13-2011