This is a very well written and interesting story, I love the characters but what I would like to know is when the next update is. - Marian - Jan 2nd, 2003   

Not only does she have great taste in music but, she writes too! This romantic story is very well written and it was a lovely treat for this very warm afternoon. Keep up the good work and write-on! - nlw - Jun 12th, 2003   

A refreshing tale with delightful twists. I really enjoyed this story and will be reading more from this author. - Meg - Jun 23rd, 2003   

This story is one of my favs. Had me captivated from the beginning. I love her work and would highly recommend this fantastic novel to all readers. - Clare - Jun 24th, 2003   

outstanding, great story,much better than the movie that it inspired, sequel, sequel, sequel.......loved the interplay between the major an minor parts, a very good and enjoyabe read, MORE PLEASE! - dusty - Oct 24th, 2003   

This is my first time commenting on a story and all I can say is, what an absolute awsome story!!! Not since the Billie and Cat series by KD Bard has a story and its characters, totally captured me. It kept me glued to my PC for hours. I have never seen the movie, but I am betting that Ambrosia's rendition blows the movie away. I would pay great money to see this one in production. I am hoping to see a series of stories based on all of the characters. - Anonymous - Nov 4th, 2003   

Well-written story, but frankly it was just plain mean after a while. I wanted to smack Jack for stringing along Sonny. I wanted to smack Sonny for being willfully stupid and cheating on her girlfriend with someone she'd never even met face to face. I kept wondering if someone really could be that naive.I just couldn't wait to finish it to see how much more stupid Sonny was going to get. Not to mention how long it would take Sonny to grow up and see that Jack put her out of business on purpose. She's supposed to forgive & forget and then fall in love with her after that? I know this is fiction, but really! - Anonymous - Nov 20th, 2003   

This is an extremely well written story, which made the sweet plot even more enjoyable for reading. I can't wait to read more from this author. - Dimples - Nov 21st, 2003   

An fantastic read for all, but wanted to slap both of them at one stage or another. - LuvTigger71 - May 31st, 2004   

Very good story, worth the price of admission, Engaging and very funny at times. BUTTo borrow a line from one of the characters, I wanted to scream at both of them at several points along the way "Have you lost every bit of sense you possessed!?" and at others slap them both into next week. - -Aerows- - Dec 15th, 2005   

Oh how I loved this story!!!! Sure I lost a few hours sleep and suffered through a long day at work the next day but this one I couldn't put down. An interesting twist on a classic. A definite must read!!!! Opus - Anonymous - Aug-03-2006   

What a wonderful story!!! It is a must read one. I can't count how many times I repeated this story,lol. Read this and your time will not be wasted...For the author, please write a sequel for this, PLEASE.lol... - Fan - Nov-19-2007   

Beautiful and funny story, started reading and couldn't stop until the end. I recommend this story to everyone you definitely won't regret reading it at all.
- Anonymous - Dec-15-2007   

Cute story! Wish there was a sequel. Highly recommend it! - Xenangabfan - Feb-20-2008   

A great story that had me captivated to the end, even though Sonny annoyed me when she refused to admit her true feelings. SEQUEL!!! I want to know more about Chloe and Briana!! - Revalis - Feb-27-2008   

WELCOME BACK AMBROSIA!!! I just finished reading this story and loved it! Very well done, as with all her stories. Too bad there aren't too many kissers who rate consistant 12's in real life! A good story to cuddle up to in the chilly days ahead. Thanks for the awesome return after 364 day hiatus...ya still got it!!! - dez - Oct-20-2006   

Just finished this gem... Definitely a must read. - jac - Oct-22-2006   

Bravo - Great story, Ambrosia! Warm and Fuzzy :) Couldn't put it down. - Kat - Oct-24-2006   

Just what I needed. Fantastic! - Kim - Oct-25-2006   

Wow!!! Very well done and highly recommend to everyone!! It is just like baby bear soup...just right!! - Rachel - Nov-04-2006   

I have been reading fan fic for 4 years now and....this is by far my favorite. I couldn't stop reading. From start to finish this is a beautiful tale about the miracles of love and life. Thank you Ambrosia for this wonderful gift. - cass - Nov-09-2006   

Highly recommended! This story made me smile, made me cry, made me want to read all of the author's other works. If you choose to gove this one a miss, you're missing out. Remember to let the bard know how much you enjoyed it, too. - Dal - Nov-28-2006   

I so very much enjoyed this story; it's definitely one I will get back to time and time again! Great work. - querdenker69 - Nov-30-2006   

Yeah!!!! very well writen, mystery romance passion jelousy I just love it....Damn - arly - Feb-11-2007   

Wow! Who would believe that finding a baby on your doorstep left by an ex- would lead to your one true love? This story was amusing and romantic all in one. Great read! kudos to Ambrosia - toni - Apr-16-2008   

D*mn good!!! My good what a wonderful story. Dada is sweet ;) - Yani - May-08-2008   

A very touching story so far. I can't wait to read more of it. - Bug - May 18th, 2004   

Gods, what a fantastic story. It really touched a part of me. You see, I can compare myself with Jaden. I am HIV pos aswell. So this story really, really touched me. I hope to read the rest soon. - Anonymous - May 30th, 2004   

Brilliant start to the story, want more soon plz. - LuvTigger71 - May 31st, 2004   

I think it's a very good story, when does part 4 come? I need to read it! - H - Aug 3rd, 2004   

great story so far, cant wait for the rest! - blazinangelwings - Sep 4th, 2004   

I'M IN LOVE!! ... whith this story ... uhm ... Anyway, this story is truly amazing, it's super, it will totally blow you away. Need I say more? READ IT! Don't walk, run! You'll be grateful to me, even when you're sitting behind the computer in the dead of the night with bleary eyes and you know you have to get up to work in few hours but you just can't put it down. Believe me, it'll happen! :D - Bacchus - Jan 17th, 2005   

truely enjoyed your story and I anxiously await it's continuance and conclusion. The sex life should be welcomed and informative for many people. When can we expect more? - keylimegal@webtv.net - Feb 3rd, 2005   

WOW!!!!!!!!! This story is just wonderfull I LOVE IT!!!! I was hanging on to every word . waiting to see what would happen next....I have a feeling where you left off is gonna be that Van is with child which I had suspected :) The Issues between Jae and G and how G wanted to be with her anyway even after knowing she was HIV positive was so sweet....durring this story I laughed and cried you just feel so much from the writing and that makes one awsome story.I recommend this story with high honers you will be stuck in your seat till the wee hrs of the morning (as I was) and still not want to leave it...I can't wait for more keep up the awsome writing...... - Xenasbards (XB) - Mar 19th, 2005   

A truely amazing storyline, so intense in so many ways. Please Ambrosia...invite your muse over for dinner or something...allow your patient audience another taste of your talented mind...maybe a chapter or two or three?? - dez - Apr-04-2006   

PLEASE.........MORE---NEED AN ENDING!
OR A NEW BEGINNING?! THIS IS TOO GOOD NOT
TO FINISH. - Anonymous - Apr-08-2006   

Very cute story. I loved every minute of reading it. Hope someday there will be an end to this wonderful story. Definitely touched my romantic side. I absolutely recommend it to every woman searching for a lovely story. - Ines - Sep-03-2006   

Please, please, please finish the story. I love it!!! - Anonymous - Sep-12-2006   

Very sweet. Hope you finish it soon. - Anonymous - Nov-08-2006   

This story just keeps getting smarter and the cast of characters become even more endearing with each new chapter. So very happy to see this story continued. The love relationship, careful and tender in nature, is bound to be an eye opening experience for anyone who reads it. And knowing the story is still in progress and many things yet to be resolved, keeps me checking this sites 'What's New' section on a daily basis! - dez - Dec-12-2006   

great story, I love it! Can't wait to read more of it, so please update soon! - Anonymous - Jul-07-2007   

I was beyond happy to see Chapter 12 posted and as with all of Ambrosia's works, always worth the wait. The characters are so quirky and we all learn a lot more about each of them, especially the minor characters in this chapter. VERY interested to see where the author goes with it next! - dez - Jul-07-2007   

OH MY GOD!! This is one of my favorite stories ever. I love the plotlines and the characters. I can only pray that Ambrosia will find it in her heart to finish this story SOON!!! I highly recommend this story. - Xenangabfan - Feb-20-2008   

OH MY!!! What a wonderful story to end my day... Hope you finish it soon :) - Anonymous - Mar-05-2008   

I never read stories that are not finished anymore. But I figured with 412 pages I would be tired with it by the time I got to the last posted chaper. I was SOOO wrong.

Jaden and Georgie are written so perfectly they seem like close friends. This story deals with some real-life issues and it has opened my eyes to a new world. I hope to be walking in my first AIDS walk this April. Please post the next chapter soon...I'll hold my breath so hurry! - Anonymous - Mar-26-2008   

Great story but would be even better if it was finished - Anonymous - May-02-2008   

This story is great please don't leave us hanging. - Toni - May-06-2008   

Please Ambrosia finish this story..It's awesome...and Jaden & Georgie so deserved a happy ending. - Grace - May-08-2008   

I have read, then reread the 12 available chapters so many times...it seems almost real..in a daydreaming sorta way. Last I heard, this talented bard is working on the 13th chapter. I would write corny poetry or senseless songs to her daily, if it would help to get the next chapter posted sooner...Maybe a cheer?? "I scream, you scream, we all scream for thirteen!! Yeah!!!" um, please?????ma'am?? - mayplemuse - May-08-2008   

This is one of my all-time favorite stories. I keep rereading it over and over again. I would LOVE to see the author continue this story. - Anonymous - May-12-2008   

All I can say is BRILLIANT!!!, I couldn't stop till I finished it.Ambrosia,great story! - Anonymous - Apr 23rd, 2004   

great story!! the characterizations were very real and believable. It made me cry and made me smile. Awesome! - peaches - Apr 29th, 2004   

Brilliant story. Brilliant writer. I read all of Ambrosia's stories and liked them all. I laughed and I cried. Truly a piece of art. I hope to read some more in the near future! - Bacchus - May 1st, 2004   

Another great tale from a wonderful writer! Although it was somewhat predictable (at least to me), it's not the destination, but the journey getting you there! And Ambrosia takes you on one that you wish didn't end! I highly recommend this story! - gail - May 4th, 2004   

Great story. Really enjoyed it. - xluvr - May 17th, 2004   

Cute story! - Xenangabfan - Feb-21-2008   

This is absolutely amazing. The title does not prepare you for the gem hidden beneath the whole story, neither does the teaser. There's great depth and meaning behind the plot. At the end I was reminded again that life is so precious and to treasure every moment and everyone that I have now.
An excellent read! Totally recommended.
- xiu - Feb-26-2008   

My God! Such a wonderful story. It can brought you tears and happiness at the same time. I feel so luck to have found it. I highly recommend this story to all of you, not only this story is the best but also the author. I read most of her stories and they were all awesome. Take a look and have fun you guyz. - Anonymous - Mar-13-2008   

What a sweet story. The characters are amusing and easy to like and it's very well written. If you don't fall in love with "Courtney" there's something wrong with your taste in women LOL Good one Ambroisa, thank you. - Tracy - Apr-12-2008   

Wow, that was great. And, I had tears in my eyes at the end along with a huge goofy smile on my face. Bravo, Ambrosia. Bravo! - Jennifer - May-05-2008   

I remember this story because it was the first EVER Xena fanfic i read, being a teenager, completely oblivious to the world of subtext. I will always cherich it :) - Kat - Oct-24-2006   

What a sweet little story! Definitely recommend it for anyone needing to brighten up their day. - Carinjo - Dec-06-2006   

I CAN NOT believe there's not a recommendation on this story. This is one of the best Ubers I've ever read, it's at least in the top 5 best ones I've ever read catagory. READ THIS!!! you will not be disappointed It's one of Ambrosia's best works. - Draco - Oct-27-2006   

OMG It's very good!!!!!!! If you haven't readed this than please do. If you don't like the last eps of Xena and its ending than this story is a must read. - Kuu-chan - Apr-10-2007   

Awesome story! - Xenangabfan - Feb-21-2008   

Oh, now this was great!! What a wonderful conclusion to FIN!! So glad I stopped to read it...you will be too!!! - JC - Mar-08-2008   

Wow. I loved Cherish and this was no execption. This is the kind of story you cannot get out of your mind. I rushed home from work to finish it. Although it is shorter the charaters very well developed. Great read! - Amanda - Apr-06-2008   

This was a story that made you laugh and cry! It's an excellent story about finding innocence in the one you love. - Jenni - Nov 15th, 2002   

This was a great story. I'm waiting for the rest, hopefully not in vain. - Alex - Mar 18th, 2003   

I meant this story (Hostage of the Heart). I need some cafeine, please. - ip_reverso - Mar 20th, 2003   

A brilliant story, can't wait for the next installments to be written, when you read this story make sure you are sitting comfortably in a nice comfy chair, because you will not want to move until you have finished it. - LuvTigger71 - Jun 2nd, 2004   

This one had me hooked from the beginning. Read this one - you'll be glad you did! - Opus - Apr-22-2006   

Ambrosia sure knows how to tell a good story. She mentioned that she would be writing a sequel to this story. I hope that she does.Piper and Desiree are awesome characters! - Xenangabfan - Feb-22-2008   

Ambrosia sure knows how to tell a good story. She mentioned that she would be writing a sequel to this story. I hope that she does.Piper and Desiree are awesome characters! - Xenangabfan - Feb-22-2008   

must read greay story and nice twists - me - May-03-2008   

Short but a brilliant story. Made me cry and smile! Loved it! - Yani - May-08-2008   

Liked it enough to recommend it!
Good reading, this one. - Mile D'Cast - May-09-2007   

Ever wanted to take one single moment in your life and get a do-over? Well for author, Chastity Sinclair, it was meeting Melissa Ward, the woman who pretended to love her just to steal the novels Chase authored. Chase gets the chance at a glimpse of just how different her life could have been with a certain tall, dark haired blue-eyed ... hmmm makes me want to make a birthday wish... Thanks Ambrosia, another GREAT story

- toni - Apr-16-2008   

I thought wife swapping was a thing of the '70's! Now, the 21st century version is truely depicting an "alternative lifestyle"! Throw in the homage to "Been There, Done That" and "Groundhog Day" and Ambrosia turns infidelity into a quest for the greater good!!I LOVE IT!;D This story would make for a very enjoyable "Twilight Zone" or "Outer Limits" episode! Too bad network heads are such prudes, TV might be worth veiwing if that wasn't the reality we all have to endure, at least for now, we can read and dream!!! - dez - Aug-04-2007   

The story of Kori Eaton and Skylar Whitney. An unusual meeting turns into an unforgettable night. A recently singled Kori, has been "living" at the Shopaholics Department store when one night, she finds out she is not alone in the store. A soon to be unhappily married Skylar, loses track of time (in the ladies room) to discover she was locked in the building with this stranger till morning. The events of the night would change both women forever. This tale was fun-loving and creative in nature, but most of all it had loads of that romantic stuff I crave. I would happily recommend this story. - Di Bauden - May 6th, 2003   

Liked this story, its a must read if you are a fan. - LuvTigger71 - Jun 2nd, 2004   

I loved this story. I really dont usually read uber but I am glad I read this. Thanks to Ambrosia for writing this. - Anonymous - Mar 28th, 2005   

Ambrosia has one the most vivid imaginations I've ever "seen". The bard's descriptive abilities are so clear, I can SEE Kori and Skylar driving the length of aisle 3,it still cracks me up just thinking about it! - dez - Oct 27th, 2005   

Ambrosia has a way with putting quirky characters together. I was laughing through the funny parts, sighing at the romantic parts and grining at the good parts. It's a great story to read when you need an "Ambrosia Fix." Go on and read it. It's guaranteed to make you smile. - Mary - Jan 7th, 2006   

One word, SPEECHLESS!!!! From what I can tell, one of the BEST all around, funny, captivating, compeling, etc... story I've ever read!!! If you are browsing and wondering on story to read next, this is not a proposal but a command, READ THIS!!!!! - Kuu - Jun-06-2007   

What can I say.... Ambrosia rocks!! - Xenangabfan - Feb-22-2008