Absolutely gripping...enjoyed it immensely. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2007   

This was the first Xena fanfic I read. I was lucky to chose it, since it made me want to read more. Have I read something less gripping, I might've well steered away.
Though Xena and Gabrielle weren't the ones I know, the well drawn character of Lykeas will be one of my all time favorite fictional characters. The plot is interesting spiced with the more interesting aspects of the Xenaverse. - XS Dark Lord - Mar-22-2008   

Awesome story. Nothing else need be said. - Anonymous - Feb-10-2010   

Great story...!!!! - Anonymous - Apr-12-2010   

A wonderful and touching story. The characters are realistic and human. This is a story that draws you in and holds you to the final line...
- Ricky - Mar-23-2012   

Great story!!! The plot has depth, the characters are believable, and one cannot help falling in love with the Amazon Boy :) - Claudia - Dec-31-2013   

Wow! This story is wonderful!!!! The characters Terri, a teenage and Sarah, a more old sophisticated and sexy woman, have a relationship tumultuous, hot, passionate, to writer with rare talent and preciosity. Leth - Leth - Dec 26th, 2002   

Loved this story.I thought the characters were very well rounded,but I couldn't find part 8 to finish reading it.Any suggestions? - jbamazon - Jan 13th, 2003   

http://ca.geocities.com/dayliobserver/frontpage1.html Is where you'll find the rest of the story, it's in episodes. It was really hard to track down! Why would someone hide this beautiful story away like that tsk!! - Stephanie - Jan 14th, 2003   

This was a fantastic story. It was very well written and it had me until the very end. The characterization was great. I have to say though, I couldn't stand Paige. I think she was a bit of a lousy friend. Sort of reminded me of the phrase 'misery loves company' at times. Once again though, great story. - Anonymous - May 25th, 2003   

I just needed to read this story to put me in very good mood..wow...very very well done.. and just wonder why this wonderful story hasnot been publish yet..I would say this one is a plus.keep the good work miss. Day. - miriam - Jul 10th, 2005   

what a wonderful, realistic, heart wrenching, upsetting, happy, sucking ya in and keeping ya hooked right to the end story, that I have read in a long time.To put it bluntly, its a brilliantly written story. - LuvTigger71 - Aug 13th, 2005   

A very touching and beautiful story, a must read !!!
- Anonymous - Nov-11-2006   

This one grabbed me. It kinda haunts me. These are real people dealing with reality and love. The ending was believable yet romantic. Thanks, Day1 - Calabria - Nov-13-2006   

Very well written and the characters feel so real. I was really rooting for them at the end. Totally recommend this! - royuki - Apr-02-2007   

i'll always be grateful for stories like this one. just the right amount of emotions and intensity. love the characters. thanks day!!=) - redrng - Jun-08-2007   

wow i can't believe i haven't commented before! i read this fantastic piece so many times. this is a story that pulls on your heartstrings and lets you relate to the characters all the way to the end. brava! - Kat - Jul-02-2007   

Amazing!! This story really is one of those must read. It deal a lots with everyday life that we all can relate to. the characters are as real as they come and all in all, too good to pass. So, READ!!!! - Kuu - Jul-08-2007   

This story stayed with me for days...Terri and Sarah kept popping in my head at the most unusual moments. Very well done Day! - JC - May-01-2008   

Great story, I love these two characters. I recommend all of Day's work. - d - May-02-2008   

I love this story. Well-thought out story and believable characters. What a wonderful ride! Thank you Day! - Luie - May-18-2008   

A lovely story with deep character development. Haunting and real. - offhemeds - Feb-01-2009   

Very good read! The relationship between the heroins is developed in a very realistic way. Don't get me wrong, "realistic" doesn't mean "boring". It's just that the characters act like real human beings, their feelings are understandable. That makes this story a highly recommended one.
In fact, it has qualities I never see anywhere else. This bard is smart... - yuka - Jun-14-2009   

Thank you - SP - Jul-10-2009   

This story is wonderful!!!!,fantastic story.
a must read !!! - Anonymous - Nov-30-2009   

Excellent story! It's the second time I read it and still loving it: it's frustrating and incredibly addictive! You must read it! - Anonymous - Dec-06-2009   

beautiful story - crv - Dec-09-2009   

This story was so amazing.... I actually teared up with all the emotion and heartache. Great story!! - JettBlk - May-21-2010   

I am so glad I found this author. The was a very enjoyable read. Great characters with plenty drama, twists and turns. It's a great way spend the day - read it. I love this author. - Anonymous - Jul-02-2010   

Definitely a wonderful read. Great story, great characters and fantastic writing. - Anonymous - Jan-08-2011   

wonderful, romantic and haunting story. i teared up a few times. a must read - Anonymous - Jan-15-2011   

A wonderful and touching story. The characters are realistic and human. This is a story that draws you in and holds you to the final line... - Ricky - Mar-23-2012   

excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!! - soopi - Jun-20-2012   

Great story! - Anonymous - Apr-20-2013   

This is a really amazing story so well written so glad I found this a took time to read it. Xx - SD - Jun-19-2015   

This is a really amazing story so well written so glad I found this a took time to read it. Xx - SD - Jun-21-2015   

Very well developed characters, realistic plot, riveting story, believable scenarios...wonderful love story with enough angst to frustrate and bring a smile. - LMC - Oct-20-2015   

Cute... - bluebutterfly - Oct-13-2010   

Poignant gem of a what-if Xena and Gabrielle never met until much later. - Anonymous - Oct-08-2013   

Brilliant. Excellent. Fantastic. Some of the best I've read, now I just wait for "the end." - lakey - Jul 21st, 2004   

Wonderful and amazing story! Grim and realistic tale with very believable and lovable characters. The intensity of the relationship between the main characters is well done and extremely heart-rending. I give this a 9 out of 10 rating. More parts to "When the Land is Dark" can be found from Day's homepage here:http://ca.geocities.com/dayliobserver/frontpage1.htmlThe story is still unfinished, and I seriously hope that the author would continue it, although it seemed to have not been updated for a long period of time. Such a great story shouldn't be left hanging, please update!! - aurelius - Oct 27th, 2004   

This is one hell of a story, wish it was finished. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - It states that this piece is unfinished, but I only realised that after I've read it. I was okay with where the author stopped. So even if it is never finished, I do not feel deprived. - Anna Lei - Jan-22-2010   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - It states that this piece is unfinished, but I only realised that after I've read it. I was okay with where the author stopped. So even if it is never finished, I do not feel deprived. - Anna Lei - Jan-22-2010   

Yes, it is unfinished, but still well worth the read. It didnt leave me feeling frustrated by its abrupt ending. A really good story and well written. - Anonymous - Feb-22-2010   

What more do I need to say other than; you are so good! This is a must read. - JettBlk - May-22-2010   

This is one of my all time favorites, one of the below posters is correct. Despite, it never being completed it does stop at a decent part of the story. It doesn't leave you regrets. - brighteyez08 - May-30-2010   

What a great story. I wish it had been finished. Would have loved to see how the author intended to end this great tale. I am happy that our two ladies were moving in the right direction. Day - if you check in, please finish. This is a fantastic read. - Anonymous - Jul-01-2010   

This is an amazing read. its captivates the reader from the beginning to the end. - sandy - Sep-09-2012