What a great way to come back into the light. A excellent story with impressive and awesome details to life conflicks. Need more soon....don't keep me in suspense. 2 thumbs up ;,) - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

WOW...all i can say is... wow. Talk about cold way to learn the truth. Looking forward to more chapters in the story. Excellent beginning, got my interest. - Anonymous - Aug-19-2008   

Awesome; an unique lesson in the area of relationship.The best way to know how someone else feels in when life places a character in the shoes of the other person. Continue the writing, it is a most. - xenamary - Aug-22-2008   

Wow! A MUST READ if ever there was one to add to the ever expanding list. Jynaki keep up these excellent contributions! - aj - Aug-26-2008   

Fabulous read! Can't wait for more. - Nancy - Sep-04-2008   

Realy very captivating - I missed the fact it is an unfinished story - and I was dissapponted I couldnt read till the end. So I cant wait! Hurry up Jynaki! - anniel - Sep-06-2008   

WOWWWWWW!!!! Awesome story! I'm waiting anxiously the next part! Jynaki, congratulations!!!!! - LETH CROSS - Nov-04-2008   

Great, great story...when is the rest of the story coming? Need more please...and soon. - Anonymous - Nov-24-2008   

Very nice story. Please finish this story!

- EC - Dec-25-2008   

waaah... i read it. huhu.. and its not finished. i thought it was. and now i am left with frustration and impatience for the wait. please update soon. this story really caught my attention, and it has been awhile since i had a good read. huhuhu.. - rec - Aug-25-2009   

Well, Jynaki posted part 4 of the story... FINALLY! 3 years after the first submitting. :)

part 4: http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/j/jynaki_clearconscience4.html - Anonymous - Dec-13-2011   

Cant wait for the rest of the story...... i am soooooo hooked! Please dont keep me in suspense! - lissa - Apr-23-2012   

Very good so far. I can't wait for part 2 - Anonymous - Mar-28-2007   

I loved the first book and the sequal is getting the same review from me. I can't wait to get to the next book... - Anonymous - Apr-02-2007   

Cliffhanger at the beginning. Captures your heart when you least expect it when Teela is completely vulnerable and Pax protects her heart. Boney is hilarious when dealing with Teela about her flat butt was the icing on the cake.Can't wait for the next part....
- Anonymous - Apr-09-2007   

Awesome story that leaves you wanting more.So hot that I couldn't put it down. A must read. - Anonymous - May-16-2007   

wow what a brilliant story, such complex and lovable characters, it really spoke to me. got me stuck to the screen, can't wait for more to come PLZ! thank you Jynaki :) - Kat - May-20-2007   

I love the book so far. When is the rest coming? - Anonymous - Jun-12-2007   

Good story. Will it be continued? - Anonymous - Aug-27-2007   

Where is part 7? I have been anxiously waiting! - Anonymous - Sep-26-2007   

A must read....need more of it. Need the next part please and hurry it up...brilliant story as always. - Anonymous - Sep-30-2007   

A MUST READ!!! Couldn't put it down....can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. Need more please and soon... - Anonymous - Oct-24-2007   

Great story, as was the first of the series, Extension 147. Does anyone know if it is going to be finished? Hope so, soon. BTW anyone know what happened to Raven and BeyondUber? - jt - Jan-11-2008   

I love this book. I was captivated from the moment I began to read this story. The characters are captivating, each in their own way. I can't wait to read more. - Karen - Jan-29-2008   

Awesome story to read....couldn't put it down. A twist that wasn't expected in the end. - Anonymous - Feb-06-2008   

A brilliant story with a complex ending that leaves you wanting another story...a must read. - Anonymous - Feb-09-2008   

An unbelievable ending that was very surprising. Couldnt put it down, so very hot& I hope we get another book out of this? - Anonymous - Mar-10-2008   

Captivating and brilliant story. Your work touches me, so we need more from Pax. Maybe a wedding for the next book. - Anonymous - May-10-2008   

What a wonderful way to enter The Anthenaeum! This is a complex romance with many layers and lots of interesting characters. I'm looking forward to reading more from Jynaki and seeing how this all plays out. - Kali - Oct-20-2006   

I have read this it since the first day it posted and I love it. I am be waiting anxiously for the next part, it has me hooked. - Anonymous - Nov-01-2006   

This story is gripping, with well defined characters and fresh ideas. The secondary characters, Jo and Boney are strong and lovable too! Set aside a chunk of time to read this, because you won't want to quit...

More please, Jynaki? - Anonymous - Nov-12-2006   

This story is absolutely wonderful. Jo and Boney has me laughing out loud, other scenes had me in tears and more scenes (by far my favorites) had me running for a cold shower. But be warned, it does have a clifhanger at the end. Can't wait for the sequel! Please hurry! - Bacchus - Nov-18-2006   

Great story , very well written if you start reading you will not be able to put it down, i urge you to read this. - Lizzie - Nov-25-2006   

great story. can't wait to read the follow up... - Anonymous - Jan-17-2007   

Fantastic story. It will keep you glued to the screen of your computer. Please give us a sequel! - ROCLLNZ - Jan-18-2007   

[Contains Spoilers] A really great story. But it is unfinished. Sorry just putting the end at the bottom of the last page doesn't mean a story is finished. This part ends with a cliffhanger. - Anonymous - Mar-02-2007   

Great story, couldn't put it down. Now I can't wait to see how it ends. - PJ - Mar-12-2007   

Awesome story but leaves you with a cliffhanger. This story is like a rose with many layers and I cant wait to get down to the core. Very HOT love scenes, and interesting secondary characters. Couldnt put it down, need more please&.. - Anonymous - Apr-09-2007   

Loved it, loved it! this is one of the most interesting stories psychologically, unusual and riveting. thank God it has a sequel :) thank you Jynaki, you rock! - Kat - May-20-2007   

This story grips the reader and will not let go. Exciting, unpredictable characters with real flaws. Loved it, can't wait to start sequel. Thanks Jynaki for sharing your gift with us!!! vtxsip - vtxsip - May-25-2007   

a breath taking adventure that has scandal in the end. Couldn't put it down once I started reading... - Anonymous - Feb-09-2008   

Intense fighting and hot sex&beware very hot and heavy plot. Need to read second story now. - Anonymous - Mar-10-2008   

Great story and very well done on the ending..glad there is another book out there. - Anonymous - May-10-2008   

I couldn't stop reading it no matter how frustrated and pissed off I got. Great story wonderfully real characters. Very Happy I found this hidden gem. Now I am off to read the sequel. - frostline - Sep-10-2011   

Fantastic story that grips you right were you least expect it. It is HOT. Once you start to read it, you won't be able to stop until the end. Good beginning now we need a second part to it.... - Anonymous - Feb-02-2007   

This is a must read. Captures your heart and soul. Soulfuly written. Everyone should take time to read this one. - loyal fan - Feb-09-2007   

honest, brutal, HOT, soulful, vulnerable, loving.... this one has it all... great work. - osb - Apr-05-2007   

beautiful story! touches you deeply, a must must must read! thank you Jynaki - Kat - May-21-2007   

An absolutely fantastic page turner, a must read. Everyone should read it. It depicts something that afaects thousands of women every year. - Devoted Fan - Nov-18-2007   

very emotional, very real... very good! :) - Leah - Jan-29-2008   

There are stories you'll always come back to read again. This is one of those. It's not only a great read but touches something deep inside of me. Thanks for writing this one! - filfil - Aug-03-2008   

A wonderful thoughtful, touching and realistic contribution based on a subject that affects so many women. This is not only a page turner but one that must be kept to be read again and again to remind us of the beauty of life.
- aj - Aug-30-2008   

Wow,amazing story,really really gorgeous ;) - Manuela - Mar-16-2009   

Very well written story. I found it thought provoking, poignant and tender. I liked how the relationship built between the women. I'd liked to see these characters again. Recommended. - Lyn B - Feb-10-2011   

Touching story ... and HOT too! - Ricky - Mar-01-2012