Good story line....nice plot emerging here. A couple of interesting and unexpected surprises. It's certainly grabbed my attention. This story holds a lot of promise. Awaiting the next 20 or so chapters! - Anonymous - Nov 19th, 2004   

Wonderful story so far. I like how this bard makes her characters imperfect but likeable at the same time. Can't wait for the end. - Claire - Feb 21st, 2005   

I love it. Its very captivating and just has a good feeling to it. It's a story that you stay up all night to read and just cant stop reading. - Anonymous - Nov 21st, 2005   

This story is enjoyable to get tangled up in. Plenty of angst and hot scenes. I look forward to more installments. - Kali - Jul-12-2006   

THis a very nice story but I feel sad because its not yet finish... Though it is not yet finish, you've gotta read this novella for it is really really good. It will not waste your time..lol.. - Fan - Dec-14-2007   

This story was well written by the author. Read it and you will know what I meant. I hope the author will finish this soon because when you read this you will beg for more! - Anonymous - Feb-18-2008   

Very engaging, interesting characters and plot to make me yearn for the next chapters. Can't wait! - wigwam - May-14-2008   

This is a great story. I can't wait for more to be written or the end to be finished! - Michelle - Jul-13-2008   

OMG you have to finish I love the story and need to know how it ends please write more - Anonymous - Jan-06-2009   

Really good story, please MUST finish - Anonymous - Feb-16-2009   

OMG- i just couldn't put it down, i absolutely loved reading Noemi and this one has followed suit. I hope it gets updated soon as i hanging out to see what happens next with Oksana and Kat - saracath - Feb-18-2009   

So... I totally missed the big "Unfinished" tag on this one. Is this story still in the works? I want an ending... ;_; - Littlearsonist - Aug-07-2009   

FINISH PLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Apr-11-2010   

Get with it girl!!! Great story....so far. Please don't leave us hanging. - mine2give2u - Jun-08-2010   

Oh for Gods sake...I didn't realize this was unfinished!! Please Author finish your brilliant work!!! <3 - JC - Jun-19-2010   

WOW! Amazing, please finish it. - Anonymous - Jun-27-2010   

Liked the story and the twist, but it was a bit too quick for me, over too soon... Though I think a longer story could be made about Ixtchel after the events of this short story... I'd love to hear more about her. - Lesley - Jan-19-2011   

Very Good - carmen - Sep-12-2008   

Very enjoyable read, one that I will read again. Couldn't stop reading once I started! Don't forget the ice because you will most assuredly need it to finish this!!! - Nancy - Oct-13-2008   

Enjoyable read about how bad situations can lead to a long loving lifetime. - Anonymous - Oct-21-2008   

A great story from a great author.Loved the story.I Wish there was more to read from you Ms Katia N. Ruiz - Anonymous - May-20-2009   

I recently discovered this story and devour it in a day, like any good story, wish there was more to read, thanks Katia N. Ruiz, this was the first story I read from this author and I'm pleased, thanks again!!!! - Lucian - May-10-2010   

This was a fun read. Wonderful story. So glad I found it digging through the archives. I'm off to ready Katia's other stories. She is a wonderful author. - Anonymous - Oct-06-2010   

beautiful story and hot hot hot! - Anonymous - Nov-18-2010   

What a nice story. Great job. - sassy123 - Jan-08-2011   

great story. i hope theres a sequel - Anonymous - Jan-16-2011   

Great story, indeed! Bravo Katia; write more please! - ebooker - Jan-16-2011   

Wonderful story... frequently I reread that!!! - Rosa - Jul-07-2011   

A truly satisfying story with great characters. Now excuse me while i go take an ice bath. PHEW!!!! - Mica - Mar-02-2012   

Wow..that was beautiful - tafadzwa - Oct-11-2012   

Really enjoyed it. - Wheezie - Mar-01-2013   

Neomi a mindblowing story, good story line and cant stop reading till the end. Check it out gals!! - eden - Apr-19-2013   

Loved it! - Aahi Young - Apr-08-2014   

A great story! Read it! - Anonymous - Sep-12-2014   

This is amazing story couldnt stop reading it from start to finish.
This story will not disappoint you that's for sure .xx - SD - Jun-09-2015   

I have been waiting a long time for Katia to bring the girls out again. This vignette was hot. To see these two share in a new experience was very exciting. This is a must read. - Strongsouljah - May 1st, 2004   

A great little sequel to Noemi! - Anonymous - Sep-12-2014   

sweet heart aching story. loved it. The story is finished by the way. - vampireslayer2 - Jun-24-2007   

wouldn't this be uber? [Editor's Note: Indeed it would. 6-7-10] - Lysia - May-23-2010   

Nice story about trust! Although the first two parts seemed a little rushed. - Ricky - Apr-15-2012   

This is the worst story I have read on this site my god it is so rushed and just so bad sorry I read it :( - SD - Aug-17-2015   

A page turner, can't wait to see how it develops Katia Ruiz is a fantastic writer. Although she's just started to get her stuff posted, she captures the reader with interesting and complex characters. Look forward to more work from this bard. - Anonymous - Nov 17th, 2002   

On the recommendation of a friend I read "Sweet Surrender". I can tell this is one bard with major talent (in fact if time permits today I'm dying to read more of her works) but, for me anyway, it has one glaring faux pas. This very promising story falls victim to the "Invincible Dyke Syndrome", you know the woman who can have amazingly, fantastic, sex while: sick, injured, hurt but still on the living side of death's door or still recuperating from the aforementioned senarios. I also pegged the wrong character as the "surrenderer"...but I wouldn't mind having that libido for a day. - Kay - Dec 25th, 2002   

Yeah, a beautiful and believable story. This is the first story I have read by Ms. Ruiz and i am looking forward to reading her other submissions.
Katia A. Ruiz you have talent, thanks for sharing your works with us! - aj - Aug-15-2008   

My previous comments still stand. Sorry for the error in your middle initial. - aj - Aug-15-2008   

Wonderful story. I think it ended rather quickly. A sequel would be great. We'd like to know if Jeffrey was confronted about that pile of lies, and Cassidy's reaction when she finds out she's the first to bring Andrea to an, uhh.....higher plane of pleasure ;-) Anyway; great author, great story, highly recommended! - TKD Vixen - May-15-2011   

~SPOILER ALERT~ Sorry guys, the above comment contains a spoiler. I clicked on spoiler when I posted it, but it didn't show up. - TKD Vixen - May-15-2011   

Really great read xx - SD - Jul-05-2015   

great story so far! - Anonymous - Mar 12th, 2003   

How could you not finish this story?I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting with bated breath for the conclusion.This is a cruel,cruel torment for an avid fan.Please finish this!! - califa - Jun 27th, 2003   

Hey, Califa. Don't Worry, the story is not nearly finished. what is finished is the end of part 1 of the book, the next part will be Jewl's story. And the part after that, will be other characters, so dont worry. - Katia N. Ruiz, the author - Jun 27th, 2003   

What do people think about the new title? I'd like to know. Thank you all in advance. :) - Katia N. Ruiz, The Tyger - Sep 15th, 2003   

Great story! I doubt there will be any shortcuts. For Billie and Jewl, the road goes ever on and on..."The Road goes ever on and on. Down from the door where it began. Now far ahead the Road has gone, and I must follow, if I can. Pursuing it with eager feet, until it joins some larger way. Where many paths and errands meet. And whither then? I cannot say." -J.R.R. Tolkien - Beck McCoy - Nov 17th, 2003   

One of the best I've read. I feel for each of the character, especailly Jewl. I hope you had made her life happier. One thing I want to know is how old are Billie and Jewl. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you. - b.mccracken - Feb 15th, 2004   

BRILLIANT story, fantastically written. Why is it not finished? Can't wait any longer... - Anonymous - Mar 15th, 2005   

Thank you for a wonderful story. - Dusty - Jan-02-2011   

I just finished this after starting yesterday. Absolutely loved this story told through four perspectives but never repetitive! Great characters had me routing for all to get what they want. There is a bit tragedy in the tale I won't elaborate as that would spoil for the reader but by no means is it insurmountable and adds to the very realistic tale of how peoples loves and lives can inter-connect and merge in blurring lines!

I tried to find out if there's a book 2 but no such luck, authors website not working or location has moved. Thank you for writing this Katia and I really hope you bring us a conclusion to this beautiful story soon... I really want to know what happens with Leo, Jewl, Johanna & Billie... Please write some more soon...

Currently I've been working through your novels and lovely every minute I spend in your created worlds.

Sequel! More! Please! - Lesley - Jan-19-2011   

Great story, but when will book 2 be posted? I tried contacting the author, but couldn't get through. I'm really interested in Jewl's next steps! - TKD Vixen - May-17-2011   

What a great story... War of the Vampires has a great cast of characters and a great storyline! Keep'em coming! - anonymous - Aug 19th, 2003