| I found this story truly riveting and I wait for each new addition with great anticipation. The tale this bard has spun is not only spellbinding but is dotted with delightful characters that are so lifelike they come right off the pages and materialize before your eyes. I highly recommend this story as a must read for anyone who enjoys excellent writing. - Lady J Mar 31st, 2003 |
| I really enjoyed this story, and was pleasantly surprised by it. i'm a vampire buff, and usually disappointed by alot of stories out there, but i just loved this one, so go and read and marvel and yeah. now! - Jade Devlin Mar 30th, 2003 |
| I happened upon this story last night, started reading it and was instantly drawn in. Finished the rest of it this morning along with a cup of coffee. What a delightful way to spend a Sunday morning. Thank you C.E. Gray for such a wonderful piece of work. Keep up the great job! - Ambrosia Mar 30th, 2003 |
| All you really need to know is Vivian Darkbloom has an uncanny ability to capture her readers and make them laugh, cry and philosophise about life all within the space of five minutes.... every story is a must read, and she remains as always my favourite online bard.... - Jade Devlin Mar 30th, 2003 |
| This story is both potent and peaceful, and the characters, though presented in a short, short story, are fully realized. It made me ache for the classic X&G. That's about as high as a compliment as I give these days. - Roo Mar 28th, 2003 |
| I've just finished your stories on the Athenaeum site and enjoyable is a huge understatement! So is saying that I anxiously await the next installment.(BTW thanks for dating your work) - Ted Mar 27th, 2003 |
| WOW! uhm WOW! I loved this story! The characters were incredible! I stayed up all night reading this,I couldn't stop until the end and I wanted more!C.E.Gray has done an excellent job and I highly recomend this story. I just hope we get to read more about Sam and Kayla real soon (hint,hint)! - jbamazon Mar 26th, 2003 |
| I really enjoyed this sweet tale of romance. I think I would watch hockey if there was a player like Roxie(G) - Jonna Mar 25th, 2003 |
| A great read. This is an Uber Mel and Janice kind of story, Uber G is rough and tough and Uber X is brainy and from a better background. Lots of interesting characters help the story along too. - sapphie Mar 25th, 2003 |
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Deliciously drawn out with an unusual written style; the minimalist POV took some getting used to - but I appreciate the distinctiveness. Great story, 3 kleenex sheets worth :) E - E Mar 24th, 2003 |
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A wonderful tale! It kept me reading half the night! (and most of the morning.. now it's over.. sniff..whimper..) Excellant development of most interesting and lovable characters! I'd like to travel with them again sometime. Great attention to detail! I wanted it to be one of those stories that just keep going. I know, it was fairly long as stories go, but, I was hoping for the novella. Ok, the kingsized, mondo e mondo, extracurricular, energizer bunny, expanded version of the novella. Hint! Hint! Yes, please write the sequel.. Pssst... What happened to the... Oh, I guess that would be a spoiler, can't write that.(heh) I look forward to seeing more of your work soon! May your muse always smile upon you! Thanx, for the journey, M - Mary A Mar 22nd, 2003 |
| I love this story!!! Kandis tackles many different subjects all revolving around one simple theme...the power of love in all it's forms. If you are in the mood for just about anything, read this story...it has it all! HOO YA! - Kel Mar 21st, 2003 |
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I loved what has been written so far. Cannot wait for more!! The characters are believeable and loveable. I recommend this story for everyone to read. You will love it as much as I do. - T. Stratton Mar 21st, 2003 |
| I'm definitely recommending this one! Great great storyline. I just finished reading it and it was very well written also. Don't forget to feed the bard! - Katia N. Ruiz Mar 20th, 2003 |
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Not too long not too short with a generous dose of angst. I enjoyed reading this piece - mature protagonists facing an emotional crossroads (I can empathise!) in a segment of complicated courtship. Its an easy read, not demanding but with a little more meat than the average quick fic. Fans of La Tucker, KG McGregor and Ali Vali might like this as a warm-up :) - E. Mar 20th, 2003 |
| This was a great story. I'm waiting for the rest, hopefully not in vain. - Alex Mar 18th, 2003 |
| When lesbian prostitutes turn up dead on deserted beaches in Wilmington, North Carolina, Detective Johnetta Green vows to find the killer. Things take a turn for the worse as the killer strikes close to home. Will Johnnie be able to perform her duty and protect the woman she loves? |
| I really love this story alot. It showed the clones the way I wanted them to be. It was cool to see Clone Xena actually just like Xena would act. Well done. - Rox Mar 17th, 2003 |
| Wow! I love this story! Please, please, please write a sequel. It WOULD be a crime not to. The characters are so true to xena and gabrielle. This is an amazing novel. Pleeeeaaaaaaaassssssseeeeee write a sequel. - Feagin Mar 16th, 2003 |
| IMHO I believe this is one of her best. - Amanda Mar 16th, 2003 |
| This is a great story! I love it! It's on my bookshelf. It has some fantastically funny lines...The characters are very true. I think this book has the most pop culture references of any book I have ever read, though...haha - Feagin Mar 15th, 2003 |
| Wow! I love this story! I laughed, I cried...It's wonderful! It could use some editing...But the story is wonderful!!! Now I know why there are so many great comments about this writer. - Feagin Mar 15th, 2003 |
| good story! the characters were so real! good job. - Anonymous Mar 14th, 2003 |
| great story so far! - Anonymous Mar 12th, 2003 |
| THIS STORY IS MONEYYYYYY!!!!! - Anonymous Mar 11th, 2003 |
| I started this story just because I wanted a sweet love story. It is but I was caught up in the twists and surprises too. I loved the charachters and felt very much a part of the action. I was really charmed by this tale. - Yvette Mar 11th, 2003 |
| Wow!..Just what I needed..a good laugh! I've missed reading Larisa's stories they are so great..Just wanna wish her a speedy recovery. We miss ya girl! - jbamazon Mar 10th, 2003 |
| This was a wonderful story. LOVED the plot. - Jen Mar 10th, 2003 |
| Wow!!! There are sequels and then there are SEQUELS!!! And "Love has no Pride" is a SEQUEL and then some!!! Kat and Beth are back, facing huge challenges that threaten to tear them apart forever!!! Can they reach down, deep inside and pull put the strength, courage and fortitude it will take to put their lives and their dreams back together again? Sometimes, even the most cherished of loves is simply not enough...will it be for Kat and Beth? You'll have to read S. Lee's sequel to find out...and, I promise, it will be well worth your time!!! Fabulous...simply fabulous!!! - Michelle Mar 9th, 2003 |
| I've been recommending S. Lee's Kat and Beth series to friends right and left, because it's so very, very good, and that made me want to re-read them myself!!! "Three Days" is an incredible trubute to romantic love...to commitment and building a life and family together...and to following your dreams...individually and as a couple. Kat and Beth sit poised, together, on the cusp of having everything they have ever wanted...and, it is a breathtaking sight!!! Read this series or you'll miss one of the most romantic, moving, tender, euphoric, triumphant love stories ever written!!! - Michelle Mar 9th, 2003 |
| I just read this the other night. After reading Love in Photographs..I just had to read this one. It left you wanting more hanging on the edge of a cliff wanting to hear more about Georgia and Blake. After Blake is hurt and Torrance takes her picture...that really touched me. Great job to the author on another awesome tale. I hope to read more soon :) - Caden Mar 9th, 2003 |
| Larisa has outdone herself once again!!! And, our webmistresses were right on about the spew warning!!! Every other line holds at least a giggle and most hold outright guffaws!!! Imagine Jack and Oink and the rest of Larisa's wrecking crew loose on a starship...holodecks and all...Woo-hoo!!! We're having some fun now!!! Thanks, Larisa...I needed that tonight!!! - Michelle Mar 8th, 2003 |
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Currently unfinished, this offering is a fantastic dramatical read. It's slow moving and fairly detailed in the early parts. What I love is the simmering attraction between the leading ladies, the phrase "slow burn" is an apt description! Great supporting roles by the other characters too. I'm glad I started reading this, Jules Matthews is a bard to keep an eye on. - E Mar 8th, 2003 |
| Yeah, I'd really apreciate a sequel to this fine story- I hope the author doesnt let us hanging here for much time. - reverse_ip Mar 8th, 2003 |
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[This Comment contains spoilers.] "Merker's Outpost" is a sexy, action filled, sci-fi fantasy, with a complex plotline and interesting characters. (I really worried about them at times and wonder where they'll end up, even some of the more minor players, and this involvement is a very good thing). The settings are easy to visualize, a testimony to the author's vision of the outpost and other alien environs. J A Bard has created an expansive universe of societies, populated by an interesting variety of aliens. Constructionwise, with the background and interlocking character development segments, I was reminded of the "Dune" series by Frank Herbert. "Merker's Outpost" is a very good read, well worth the time, but I'll be looking for its continuation in "Arnica", since I felt that the ending left me hanging. (J A, unlike many readers, I wouldn't have a problem with a single 600-700+ page story, |
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What a wonderful sequel, I love watching Veba grow and Rickie is wonderful and warm. Its a very special love story. - Gracie Mar 7th, 2003 |
| This is a heart wrenching tale. Keeps you captivated the whole way through. Great job by the author and I do hope there is more to this saga. Makes you laugh and makes you cry. I'd read it over and over again. Thanks for endulging our sweet tooth for good fiction. - Caden Mar 7th, 2003 |
| I'm looking forward to when this comes out in print, I enjoyed it and it captured my imagination. One of the best pieces of sci-fi I've read in a while. - Andy Mar 7th, 2003 |
| This story was wonderful. A splendid combination of loving warmth and incandescant heat. I look forward to more (a story, it can be a small one, about Angel and Ellie, the younger(s), would be great.) Thanks for the wonderful bit of prose. - Nyc Mar 7th, 2003 |
| Once again, Anne has come through with another quality story. The plot is fun and the characters are engaging (and it's so nice to see the return of our favorites!). While reading it, I felt as though I was visiting with old friends. The whole "Seasons Series" is a treat and this was a great way to end it! - indigal Mar 7th, 2003 |
| Ms. Tryst seems to get better with every story. This is a pretty good read with a chance to see Torrance (drool) from "Love in Photographs" again. The strip club scene's "climatic" end makes this story worth the price of admittance. - Kaye Mar 6th, 2003 |
| I recently read this story when a friend suggested that I read it. It was amazing. Besides for a few minor grammatical errors that a beta could have edited out it was perfect. The chracters are just so honest and real. It was really refreshing to read about something so honest even though it is painful. Sometimes I need a bit of reality in my fiction and Verity satisfied that need very well. I hope to hear more from this writer. - Alicia Mar 6th, 2003 |
| This is going to be a story I will read many times...Make sure you read it at least once. - SammyLee Mar 5th, 2003 |
| "Love in Photographs" was my favorite story from this author, but now I have a new one! I absolutely adored the way the new characters were blended with the ones from "Love in Photographs". Readers get a chance to see new relationships develop while enjoying some old favorites! A must read for any fan of Alex Tryst! She's right though in her disclaimer in my opinion. Would be best enjoyed after reading "Love in Photographs" first. - Anonymous Mar 5th, 2003 |
| Great story! I loved every bit! The characters were so well done! I can't wait to read the follow up piece! - Anonymous Mar 5th, 2003 |
| What a beautiful but different love story. I found myself falling under Hilda's spell. Very compelling story series. - jeri Mar 5th, 2003 |
| Oh Gods! This bard knows how to pull the heart strings. I could handle this as the ending of Xena. Emotional good story-Kleenex is a must. - Jenny Mar 4th, 2003 |
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Words can't do justice on how great this story was. One hell of a tale here. Lara 3-5-03 - Lar Mar 4th, 2003 |
| This is the third story I read by this person, all are very good. This one is a short tale full of emotion and I can believe Xena and Gabrielle having this conversation. - jenny Mar 4th, 2003 |
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Run don't walk to read this wonderful story. This story is so realistic. You will swear the authors sneaked a peek at your diary. Andi and Haley are truly wonderful ladies that you can't help but root for them. Or to know them and enjoy in their fun times and hug them during their down times. - Chris L. Mar 4th, 2003 |
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WOW! this has to be one of her best works yet. It is set 10 years later. The kids are grown. Ryan is 26, Reb is 16 and Mac is 23. Who's dating and who's getting married? who is trying to get their one true love to notice them again. Don't miss this funny, poignant story. All of Anne's characters are back in this great 'family' story with a very 'un'Brady cast. - Chris Mar 4th, 2003 |
March always reminds us that spring is right around the corner. Now, more than ever, with the dark sadness of February behind us, we can turn our attention to the brightness of spring. With that, it is my pleasure to announce that the March 2003 recipient of the Charani Award of Excellence in Fiction for Ethnic or Religious Diversity goes to Ana Ortiz for HABÁNAME. Ordinarily, I would go into detail and explain my decision, however, for this particular story, I decided to let just a small sample of the emails that I have personally receive speak for me.....
To view entire page, go to:
http://www.charani.org/XenaDiversityFanFicAwards2003Pg2.html
Congratulations, Ana, for a well written story.
Crystal
| I owe this author an apology for when I first saw the word "revision" and the amount (55) of additional pages, I knew she'd ruined a perfectly good story. My bad. Ms. Ruiz, you have turned a good story into a great one. - Kaye Mar 4th, 2003 |
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OH what can we say abut this noting have had me shiming in my bootis like this one. Wonderful Uber. One of WolfDragon´s finest storys ever. - Keegan Connor Mar 3rd, 2003 |
| Do not stop here, do not walk ....> run to the sequel. - Paula Mar 2nd, 2003 |
| Very well written, easy to follow, the flow was exceptional. Held my interest all the way through. Couldn't put either one down. It was a pleasure to read both the prequel and the sequel. Hope there will be more of the same from this wonderful author. - Paula Mar 2nd, 2003 |
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A story I have on my book shelf after going out and buying it so that I can read it again at any time, any where. Romance, Espionage, Uncertainties and Passion rolled into two women finding love for and with each other. A wonderful story to read and one I highly recommend. - Anonymous Mar 2nd, 2003 |
| I was so surprised by "Iron Rose Bleeding". There is a healthy dose of the very real problems our planet faces, handed in a very intellegent and wise manner, there is theory, there is Ralienism, there is love and danger...and it all comes together in a most satisfying way that will keep you hooked. I couldn't put this one down! - Taleweaver Mar 2nd, 2003 |
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MY GOD!.... this has to be the funniest, most riveting uber story I've read in a while! Luka and Memphis were superbly fleshed out, and Sprout... oh my.... I am just not gonna comment! AMAZING!!!!!! - Katelin B Mar 2nd, 2003 |
| I too have read this story 2 times. The second time took me longer, there was more to look at, look for. It is a riveting romantic drama, chock full of dirty politics in the race to win, and behind the scene's of running a campaign. Ms. O'Connor's loyalty and honor to country, the citizens of the State of Texas, and family only endear her to the voter's, until her past is brought to light unfavorably. This story proves that the means don't justify the end. It is a fast read in that you won't be able to put it down. It'll keep you glued to the page. And it screams: sequel. When I see a candidate that embodies all of Jordon O'Connor's traits - I'll become a resident of that state and vote. - Maria Mar 1st, 2003 |
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Can it get better then this? It is rar to find a story this good and have the high qualety that it dows from start to finish.I have thretend and demaded that the atur of this story provid me with a glas of water and some new hankis for thos that she made me lose. - SammyLee Mar 1st, 2003 |
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Not too long not too short with a generous dose of angst. I enjoyed reading this piece - mature protagonists facing an emotional crossroads (I can empathise!) in a segment of complicated courtship. Its an easy read, not demanding but with a little more meat than the average quick fic. Fans of La Tucker, KG McGregor and Ali Vali might like this as a warm-up :) E - E Mar 1st, 2003 |
| I'm definitely recommending this one! great great storyline. I just finished reading it and it was very well written also. Don't forget to feed the bard! - Katia N. Ruiz Mar 1st, 2003 |
| Wow. This is such a nice story. One problem...it was to short! Will there be a sequel to this story? Really want to see more of these characters. Great work!! - Anonymous Mar 1st, 2003 |
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WHAT A TRIPP:::..I wan´t a mini ME 2... and some action like thos hott cracy galls in this story. It will give you a good laght and food for thught to read this story. ENJOY - SammyLee Mar 1st, 2003 |
| Makes me wan be a kid agen..I want a blancy to..Or maby a wight lamb..just so gabriel gets to ceep her black one...I gess i cud have a gout if i had to... - SammyLee Feb 27th, 2003 |
| Beautiful story, I also cried my way through it. Sadly, when I searched for some more of this ladys works, I discovered a memorial website for her. Sadly for all of us, she has passed away from cancer. More tears. - Stephanie Feb 27th, 2003 |
| THIS SERIES IS A MUST READ! I HOPE YOU INTEND TO KEEP THESE CHARACTERS GOING WITH NEW ADVENTURES! THERE IS SO MUCH MORE TO LEARN ABOUT THEM! - CHARLIE AND TERRI FAN Feb 26th, 2003 |
| Oh, I can't lay laurels upon the head of a bard for a wonderful sequel without mentioning this story, Home Fires. The characters of Melinda Pappas and Dr. Janice Covington, just barely 2 dimensional sketches in a 44 minute episode have here been fleshed out, given breath and blood, passion, angst, lust...lots of lust. But it's all been so tastefully handled. And believably. That's the real surprise. These two mature women have real issues and though they clearly have strong feelings for one another at the outset, there is a lot of water gone under their respective bridges...and neither one seems inclined to do more than wade for the first 8 chapters. THAT, in my opinion, is real. The writer has taken tremendous care to deliver well thought out, believable dialogue. Mel has left Janice in the lurch, holding a terse "Dear John" letter. Six months later, the redoubtable Dr. Covington confronts the author of her misery, and there is no quick fix. They don't kiss and fall into bed at the end of Chapter One. And there's wit. Mustn't forget the wit. Melinda and Janice as written and realized in this story, by this bard, are smart AND funny...a double threat. I found myself aching for the climax, pardon the pun, in Chapter 10, but also very grateful to the writer, in retrospect, that she took her sweet time getting there with 9 chapters of incredible verbal foreplay. - Buchwhacker Feb 26th, 2003 |
| I've been sitting here, reading over previous comments about Slow Burn and can add my voice to those who call it "rich", "passionate", "witty", "literate". I haven't a clue what the hell "Bocce Balls Batman!" means, but it comes off sounding like a compliment. I read the first chapters of this story and after first registering my disappointment that more chapters are not yet available, I have to say I am enjoying the writer's meandering path to the heart of the story. That's a little misleading. I think the story has many hearts, many paths, and each one is delicately written, intricately explored. Chapters 1 through 7 are just the beginning of what is shaping up to be a first class read. - Bushwhacker Feb 26th, 2003 |
| I thought this was a wonderful series. I read all four and thought each story got better the more deeply we got into these charachters. I just love Dakota and Jackie and I hope that Ri writes more of this sweet and loving couple. - Nat Feb 26th, 2003 |
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Ho sais Xena dosn´t have it all..soner or later she will. This story is a Clasic in it´s ohn right. I enjoyed it..and lets face it Lucy Lawlles was cute as a man to. - SammyLee Feb 25th, 2003 |
| Whoa! What a powerful story here, this gave me a big lump in my throat, gulp. The characters were done very well and 'wow'. 'Wow' is all I can say. - Jenny Feb 24th, 2003 |
| What a great story! I want a Charlie in my airport! This was HOT HOT HOT and I look forward to the sequel you just posted. Read the disclaimers here and do not read this at work! Ready for Take Off has definitely changed my opinion on flying. - Anonymous Feb 24th, 2003 |
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What can one say...? It was and is a great story. When will the sequel be posted? I am eagerly waiting for next part - SammyLee Feb 23rd, 2003 |