You did it again Lady J. This story is very humorous and entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next part. - Windsong - Jan 20th, 2004   

All I can say is.....More Please - A. Noni Mouse - Jan 23rd, 2004   

This is a wonderful start. I love the humorous portrayal of corporate life. - Lisa - Jan 28th, 2004   

Loved it, when will we see more? - Rhea - Feb 5th, 2004   

This story is so great. I can't wait till the next part. You have done one fanatic job on it Lady J. - Debbie Dee - Mar 2nd, 2004   

Excellent. - Teri - Mar 2nd, 2004   

What a great surprise this morning to see part 2 of Business Trip. One thing I can honestly say is I hope it does not end in part 3. - Judi - Mar 3rd, 2004   

OMG! This is so funny and so real to life! You've captured office politics with style. I love the characters and I hope we'll get to see more of them in the future! Go Lady J! - Kaia - Mar 4th, 2004   

I laughed till I cried. Who are you and how do you know me? Great job Lady J. - Denise - Mar 5th, 2004   

Please don't end it in part three. - Anonymous - Mar 11th, 2004   

This story is so great I can't wait to read more. Your doing a great job on it Lady J - Debbie Dee - Apr 30th, 2004   

Lady J, you have a wonderful style of writing. I can't believe I laughed out loud but I did. I love this story, more please. - Jenny - May 6th, 2004   

Great story. Looking forward to more of it. I like that the characters are real people with imperfections, fears, aspirations, and needs...in other words, human. I also appreciate the more mature age of the main characters. As mentioned by other readers, the humor and writing style are excellent. Now if I can just be patient until I find out what happens next.... - Debbie - May 10th, 2004   

More please. The story is excellent. - White Wolf - May 17th, 2004   

WELCOME BACK BUSINESS TRIP....this has got to be the funniest down to earth piece ever. I absolutely love this please please please update soon. - Lee - Oct 20th, 2005   

Very wonderful story. A real gem worth finding. - Steff - Oct 31st, 2005   

I just came across this story and was glad I did. I was pleasantly surprised first by the clever mixture of comedy and real life situations. Next how well written this story is. And lastly that this story is about more mature women with children. Thank you Lady J well done and I look forward to your next installment. - Diane - Nov 10th, 2005   

Loved every single word. - Danni - Nov 14th, 2005   

Truly wonderful story. Please continue!!!! - Anonymous - Nov 27th, 2005   

I just found this wonderful story and can't wait for more. Amazing and very very funny. Found myself laughing out loud. - Wendi - Dec 26th, 2005   

AMAZING STORY. A must read. - Wendy - Jan 25th, 2006   

More please. - Gina - Feb 9th, 2006   

I thought I had read all the number #1s but obviously some how I missed this one. Outstanding Job Lady J, just simply outstanding. Waiting eagerly for more. - Connie - Feb 17th, 2006   

wonderful story please please keep writing, finish it, i can't wait - arly - Mar-07-2006   

More please now. - Clair - Mar-07-2006   

Wow. This story is a must read. - LJ - Mar-11-2006   

I really really enjoyed this story. - Justine - Mar-30-2006   

I stayed up all night reading this one. I just couldn't put it down. Wonderful story so far, can't wait for the next installment. - Rita - Jul-10-2006   

I love this story so much. It is so, 3D for lack of another way to word it, that I feel like I'm having coffee with Kara in the breakroom and just talking. Kara feels like the type of friend anyone would love to have. - Donna - Jul-11-2006   

Lady J, this has to be one of the best stories I have read in a very long while. It is truely amazing. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. - Zewm - Jul-13-2006   

Lady J, thank you so much for writing a story that features beautiful, vibrant, more mature women. Also thank you for showing that love and change can come to one at any age. - Lois - Jul-21-2006   

By blending humor, intrigue, and real life situations you have written a truly wonderful story. You have a marvelous talent weaving a tale that is thoroughly entertaining. Thank you for sharing this gift with us. - Tammy - Jul-27-2006   

Good story. Love the direction its headed. Still waiting for it to continue. It will continue, right? - Anonymous - Aug-17-2006   

Is it just me, but I can't find part 6. Thanks - Anonymous - Sep-07-2006   

This story has been wonderful. It's down to earth and realistic which I love. It also has some of the most humerous moments in it that had me laughing not only out loud but to the point tears were running down my face. I have heard that this little novella is finished, where is the rest? I am dying to see how this ends and even though I don't want to see the end of these two I am hoping that there will be more. Lady J you have done a phenominal job with this one and I personally want to see more. - Pam - Sep-11-2006   

Lady J, what a wonderful and powerful story. I have been waiting for you to complete Business Trip before I read it. I couldn't put it down. You have built a realistic day to day world and peopled it with 3d characters. By the end I felt as if I knew everyone personally. The plot was well thought out and the humor was amazing. I laughed out loud more than once. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent. - Sarah - Oct-09-2006   

Fabulous. The whole thing from beginning to end was just fabulous. Please tell me there will be a sequel soon. - White Wolf - Oct-09-2006   

Please tell me there is a sequal on the way. - Anonymous - Oct-10-2006   

Business trip was so worth the wait. Wonderful, funny,and romantic. - Linda - Oct-11-2006   

This was a great read, but PLEASE Lady J write an epilogue or a sequel.
Draco - Draco - Oct-12-2006   

I caught up with this at the weekend. Great story fantastically told. Please can we have a sequel? - gillian - Oct-16-2006   

Loved every page. - Christy - Oct-18-2006   

Reading this story was a pleasure. - Tina M. - Oct-26-2006   

I had been waiting for this story to be finished and to my surprise it is finished. I have one thing to say about Business Trip......it was worth the wait. Even though I would have loved the happily ever after type of ending, Lady J, you ended it with a realism of everyday life. Wonderful job. - Vickey - Dec-13-2006   

Your story is a breath of fresh air. It is well written with interesting and endearing characters. The humor is delightful. Thank you for the great read. - Joani - Apr-03-2007   

Totally Captivating. - Barbara - Apr-18-2007   

I can't remember when I have laughed so much. When will we see more of these ladies? - Michelle - May-06-2007   

This was one of the most hilarious, riveting stories I've read in a long time...I'm so enthralled with the characters..please tell me there is a sequel!?! - Karrie - Jun-12-2007   

It's taken me awhile to get to this one but WOW. This story is amazing. A wonderful mingling of comedy and serious moments. Every situation and scene flowed smoothly. I was sorry when I came to THE END. - Val - Aug-08-2007   

I've been out of the loop for awhile, didn't know this story was finally finished. I have just one thing to say...EXCELLENT!!! - Anonymous - Aug-14-2007   


Wonderful story. - andrea - Aug-21-2007   

I have to say that this was a very good story. I hope there is a sequel in the works. - M. Roberts - Dec-20-2007   

Arghhh, please, we need to know how this ends, we need a sequel to this story. Its brilliant. - Luvtigger71 - Dec-30-2007   

great story, everybody should read it. - dalila - Jan-04-2008   

I just loved this story. The humor was insane and well written. I want more. - Tammi - Jul-07-2008   

i was brooding all day when i finished "Business Trip", didn't want it to end man. it was sooo good. really funny and real and sweet and...everything else that's good!
- Stacey - Jul-14-2008   

Great read. Await more of your work. - Lee - Jul-14-2008   

Lovely story of a middle aged woman, who is a widow, who falls for her gorgeous boss. I want a sequel!!! The end left me wanting for more, including more love-making!!!! - Anonymous - Jul-16-2008   

Lady J I have not read any of your stories before this moment and what a wonderful refreshing surprise your story is. It is a wonderful blend of humor, drama and real life scenarios. I couldn't put it down and I didn't. I loved this. - Jennifer - Jul-20-2008   

Terrific story Lady J. I would really enjoy seeing this story continue for say another couple hundred pages! Great job and thanks for sharing. - Nancy - Jul-21-2008   

Exceptional description of office politics and relationships. This story is most definitely worthy of a sequel.
Fantastic read, great entertainment. This has become one of my favourite stories. Thanks Lady J.
- aj - Jul-27-2008   

OMG!!!!! When is there going to be a sequel?????? I soooo loved this story. So many questions left and no answer? We need a sequel! I love this story! - Meg - Aug-07-2008   

I really enjoyable story, was i started it i couldn't put it down! It most definetly requires a sequel! please give us one. - XF - Dec-14-2008   

Kara a middle aged widowed housewife with three kids was given, against her will, the Jamestown project. Something which is very high profile, just what she doesn't want. She is forced to work with the Dragon Lady' the head VP on the project. Soon she learns that the Dragon Lady might just be what she was looking for. This story has great characters, a mysterious plot, and humor. What more could you want? - Amanda - Jan-01-2009   

Oh My God,this is absolutely incredible !! Funny,sweet,romantic.... wonderful ! - Manuela - Jan-17-2009   

A wonderfully funny love story, but the unresolved ending leaves it in *serious* need of a sequel. - Anonymous - Sep-20-2009   

I'm new to the Atheneaum and I have enjoyed many of the stories that are here but Business Trip, for me, is something very, very special. I loved it. It will be one of the stories I will read over and over again. - Jill - Oct-04-2009   

Amazing and well written. - Anonymous - Oct-10-2009   

More Please, Please, Pretty Please. - Toni - Oct-14-2009   

All I have to say about this story is ......WHERE IS MORE...You can't just leave me hanging at the airport - Cindy - Oct-15-2009   

I hate you so much right now! Argh! Please, I'm begging you! Give us more of this wonderful tale! We want more of Jac, Kara, and Patty. - xivren - Dec-11-2009   

Fanastic, would love a sequel - Chris - Dec-22-2009   

This is a great story with an ending that just begs for a sequel. So many questions left unanswered. Please put the sequel on your to do list. Thanks for a wonderful read. - Sherry - Feb-07-2010   

Loved this story!!! Would like to hear Jac's side in sequel - Traveller - Feb-19-2010   

What an excellent story. I loved the way told it from Kara's point of view. You are a very talented writer. For all those looking for a great read - you've found it!! Lady J - you left us hanging, their story begging that you continue this journey. How does their love story end? Please continue. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jun-03-2010   

This is a wonderful story. Everything is great. - Tonya - Feb-01-2011   

Wow. I have read a good number of stories here on Athenaeum, and this ranks way up there in my Top 5. Everything about it is so just right...very interesting, well-fleshed out characters, great dialogue, wonderful supporting characters, realistic scenarios and conflicts, and all of them resulting in a very entertaining piece of romantic fiction. You should definitely be published. Unfortunately, being a hopeless romantic, my only gripe about this story is the ending. We can all use a sequel, or if that's too much to hope for, considering how many years its been, then maybe an epilogue to give us some closure. Does anyone know if the author had this novel published?

- OMG - May-09-2011   

a wonderful story. but pls do finish the sequel. pls. - Anonymous - Jun-03-2011   

Great story! I laughed SO much, especially during chapter 10, and the response to the boxer question; "Put your cell phone on vibrate and stick it in there&." The story was well-rounded and full of depth&.just perfect, but then you left us hanging at the airport! It definitely requires a sequel for closure. - TK Vix - Jan-28-2012   

LOVED this story! Especially the drunken story that just couldn't be told to Kara. Hilarious! Please write a sequal! - Anonymous - Feb-26-2012   

LOVED this story! Especially the drunken story that just couldn't be told to Kara. Hilarious! Please write a sequal! - Anonymous - Feb-26-2012   

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Wonderful story. I know its been a long time since you wrote this but I would love to read a sequel. Very entertaining and enlightening!! - Niyah - Sep-19-2012   

This story was so good! I would love to see more of this couple. Please may we have more? - Ggirl - Oct-29-2013   

So GooD!Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. - Aahi Young - May-15-2014   

Nice story some funny lines especially when kara was drunk x - SD - Jun-16-2015   

Wow. - Jazz - Dec 7th, 2004   

Just hot enough, love the ending - Darhma - Dec 7th, 2004   

Hot! Now if I could just my girlfriend to do that ... lol - E - Dec 8th, 2004   

Passion is not for the 20 something anymore. Hot story Lady J - Windsong - Dec 9th, 2004   

Whoa, Lady J, I didn't know you had it in you. Very HOT. - A Noni Mouse - Dec 10th, 2004   

cool story, way to go. - LuvTigger71 - Dec 10th, 2004   

Nice job, loved the ending. - Sarah - Dec 15th, 2004   

Very cool. Very hot. - Claire - Feb 10th, 2005   

Very hotttt! loved the story. I am so glad that you left it open ended. So now where is the sequel?? Great read. - Nancy - Jul-15-2008   

Hot pwp:-) - Lyn B - Jul-14-2011   

A wonderful little read. And definitely hot!! - Niyah - Sep-18-2012   

Very Hot & Memorable! - Kali - Jun-01-2006   

Wow, hot and spicy just the way I like it. - Anonymous - Jun-01-2006   

I'm glad I have showers at work. Nice job Lady J - Jan - Jun-06-2006   

This is one hot story and from one of my favourite Authors, good on you Lady J just fantasic, keep em coming lol - Lissa - Jun-13-2006   

This story should come with a spontaneous combustion warning. Very very good. - Myra - Jun-13-2006   

Muy Caliente. Story is very good. - Carmen - Jul-04-2006   

You stopped while the iron was still hot (not to mention anything else). The only thing I have to say about this one is "MORE I WANT MORE". Lady J I'm hooked. - Pat - Jul-10-2006   

Whoa. I LOVED THIS. Amazing love scene. I have to fan myself everytime I think about it. - Brenda - Aug-07-2006   

OMG. Amazing. Don't read this one alone. - Jeri - Aug-16-2006   

This story was not only hot but left me wanting to see more of Laura and Trisha. Please say there will be more. - Debbie - Aug-21-2006   

Hot! Very hot! I want to know more about these girls. When a sequel??? - Lane - Apr-11-2007   

Muy Caliente!!!!!! More Please!!!! - Tana - Apr-18-2007   

more pleeease - Anonymous - Apr-20-2007   

hot! very hot!! more please. - Lee - Jul-14-2008   

I really find it hard to believe there are so many recommendations and no ratings!! I've seen a lot of "hot" describing this story and I think that word falls short. Ummm I be thinking more on the line of scalding!!! Thank you LadyJ for sharing with us. - Nancy - Jul-15-2008   

nice.. - Anonymous - May-29-2009   

hot - Anonymous - Oct-19-2009   

HOT HOT HOT. Need I say more. - Terry - Feb-01-2011   

Great Story! Loved it! I just wish there was a aepuel *g* - Anonymous - Aug-07-2011   

A lovely sexy story. Would love to see these characters build on their chemistry. - Niyah - Sep-18-2012   

Good pwp ... and hot! - Ricky - Oct-09-2012   

Wow - Anonymous - Dec 26th, 2005   

This is an a very thought provoking piece. I look forward to the next letter. - Amy - Dec 26th, 2005   

This story effected me the same way as Phone Call. I was moved and can feel your tears. This story is poignant and heart wrenching. Lady J whether you write comedy or something thought provoking you always do an outstanding job. - Jazz - Mar 3rd, 2004   

This story is powerful. I thought the Bible references were right on. If you enjoy reading something that makes you feel and think do not miss this one. - A. Noni Mouse - Mar 4th, 2004   

That was one of the most inspiring and moving things I have ever read. Thank you for expressing the heartbreak of betrayal so well. - Am Not a Moose - Mar 4th, 2004   

Deep and lyrical. - Gina - Mar 5th, 2004   

Excellent! short story. It was refreshing to read and truely brings us back to where we came from and what we are to be like to each other. Betrayal is a lack of faith and trust and a word that should not exsist in any human realationships. Job well done! It does make you step back and re-think about yourself and life. Thank you for the nudge Lady J. :) - sunny - Mar 6th, 2004   

This story touched me very deeply. Thank you for submitting this to a public forum. - A nony mouse - Sep 17th, 2003   

This story is quite moving and I would recommend it to anyone who occasionally takes the time to reflect on their life. My friend I know you exposed yourself totally with this piece and I am proud of you. - Jazz - Sep 17th, 2003   

Wow. Just Wow. Will there be more? - Anonymous - Sep 22nd, 2003   

This was one of the compelling stories I have ever read. Obviously you placed your heart on paper. Thank you for being brave enough to post this. I am glad my friend recommended this to me, it or you helped me move on. Thank you. - Joan - Sep 6th, 2005   

Thank you. Lived this and then she tore out my heart and stomped it while wearing her red cowboy boots... be sure to also read The Phone Call-The other side of the Ring & The Phone Call - The final Ring. - Lee - Jul-14-2008   

The three parts of Phone Call is a very intimate look at disfunction which I think we've all experienced at one time or the other. The Phone Call series is very potent and terribly honest. - Jennifer - Jul-20-2008   

The Phone Series is very powerful and thought provoking. Painful and poignant. Well worth a read. - Lyn B - Jul-14-2011   

Lady J you have done it again. Love love loved it. The undertones you put into place made this piece not only hot but insightful. - Brenda - Aug-24-2006   

Lady J, you never disappoint. Thanks for sharing your marvelous gift. - A Nony Mouse - Aug-26-2006   

What a powerful read. The undercurrent of love lost is painfully real. - Carol - Aug-28-2006   

Amazing. Not only hot but made me think. - Laurie - Sep-06-2006   

Why can't I think of a more powerful word than WOW? Maybe because ya left me speachless??? Wonderfully hot and enticing read. Thank you! - Nancy - Jul-15-2008   

Another page turner by Lady J. Really upsets me that the real world gets in the way of my reading time. Thank you, can't wait for more. - Nancy - Jul-21-2008   

Lady J!! You are absolutely amazing! I finally got a chance to read this story. I was feeling what the character was feeling and it touched my inner soul! You are rare gift! Thank you for sharing your writing with us! - Terri - Oct-03-2008   

Wow so hot. I would love to see the behind the scenes of this story. - TJ - Oct-24-2009   

WHEN IS THE SECOND PART GOING TO BE ADDED? - Anonymous - Dec 1st, 2002   

I loved what has been written so far. Cannot wait for more!! The characters are believeable and loveable. I recommend this story for everyone to read. You will love it as much as I do. - T. Stratton - Mar 21st, 2003   

I love this story. I was laffin so hard I almost joked. Lady J is really somethin special, can't wait to see more from her. - ne-ne - Apr 10th, 2003   

It is great. There are parts in it that were so funny I amost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. I very much highly recommend this story. I am sure once you start reading it you will love it as much as I do. Can't wait till the next update. - Debbie Dee - Apr 13th, 2003   

I have found this story not only entertaining but also exciting. I feel the characters are 3 dimensional, each having a very unique personality. I anxiously await more and would recommend this story to anyone who loves good writing and a well-spun tale. - Windsong - Apr 20th, 2003   

Ok, so I am slightly biased, but I truly love this story. The characters are well written and the plot is fun (and at times just plain funny!) Its a charming and entertaining story and I highly recomend it! - Trin - Apr 30th, 2003   

Wonderful, just wonderful. Waiting for the next part to be posted. - A. Nonny Mouse - May 6th, 2003   

I really enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for part 6!!!! - Deja - Nov 7th, 2004   

Loved this story ...any idea when or if this story will be completed...finished part 5 pleeeaaase finish it Thanxx - FBF - Jan 31st, 2005   

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. You are a wonderful writer and I am glad to see you writing again. I can't waite for the part seven. - Janice - Aug 5th, 2005   

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana - Sep 5th, 2005   

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana - Sep 5th, 2005   

Lady J, what a great story. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. Amazing plot. Can't wait for part eight. - Jenny - Sep 6th, 2005   

The story is great. The charectors are so real I feel like I actually know them all. I'm also enjoying the plot twists. Write faster. ;) - Linda - Sep 8th, 2005   

More please. Loving this one. - Marie - Sep 21st, 2005   

You're KILLING me. - JAZZY - Sep 25th, 2005   

More please. - Anonymous - Sep 30th, 2005   

Fantastic story Hurry and finish it cause i want to know Who ends up with who!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a great story teller keep it up! - Andie - Oct 6th, 2005   

I love this story. The conflicts are realistically confusing as they would be in life when someone comes to the realization that they can no longer live the life chosen for them. I also love the interplay of loving friendships vs friends loving each other. - Jasmine - Oct 13th, 2005   

Woohoo! Just love the girls and can't wait for Vic and ummmh ...??? to get together (come on, you know you want to! LOL). - Mic - Oct 13th, 2005   

I beg for this story to be continued. It is so great and you are left wondering why will get with who. Please finish. - Anonymous - Aug-09-2007   

Thanks you so much for posting more of this - love it - pls keep it coming ! - BJ - Aug-19-2007   

I was so happy to see an update to Spring Break. Please finish, it's a great story. - lrt - Aug-20-2007   

Loved it up to part 9. Where is part 10? - Anonymous - Aug-21-2007   

I'm truly enjoying this story. The mingling of the charectors is very well done. I really really like how each girl is so different and yet so the same that they mesh so well into their long term friendship. Nice job. - Tiff - Aug-21-2007   

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Keep it coming. - Randi - Aug-22-2007   

I have been reading your fics and I can't possibly describe it any different from all your fans. Wow!!! wonderful writer.. I hang on to every sentence,word and letters... whew.. You are awesome! Thanks for sharing your stories. thank you so much. thank you thank you. - redjassy - Aug-26-2007   

This such an awesome story so far. I can't wait for part 10!!! - Deja - Aug-26-2007   

such an incredible story. want more please?!? - Anonymous - Aug-29-2007   

More please! This story is just so engaging, I'd really like to see more! - L'Nara - Sep-07-2007   

I loved Business Trip and I'm loving this just as much. Please keep the updates coming. - Devin - Sep-15-2007   

This story is taking so many spins and curves I have no idea who will end up with whom and where they will end up. I'm loving this ride, please don't stop updating. Part 11 please. - Gina - Sep-15-2007   

Thanks for the update... waiting for more.. thanks again for sharing your stories. ciao - redjassy - Sep-15-2007   

great story. you have me hooked. will it be finished any time soon? - Lee - Jul-15-2008   

This is a tender, fun, sexy romp among college friends who learn more about each other on a journey to Louisiana. I wish Lady J would finish this GREAT story!!!!! - Anonymous - Jul-16-2008   

Loved the story Lady J. So many things going on, I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing - Nancy - Jul-21-2008   

I remember starting this story years ago. I loved it then & now. I am very pleased to see you continuing with updates, with twist & surprises. I know which original couple i'm rooting for...lol. I hope the updates continue. It's a brilliant story. - brighteyez - Aug-04-2008   

Always happy to see an update to this great story. Can't wait for more... - chatham23 - Aug-05-2008   

oh my god! finally!! thank you lady j....now tell lady muse to stay... pretty please...we've been waiting so long...keep it up. - Anonymous - Aug-05-2008   

thanks for adding another chapter. waiting for more but I'm patient. Great story. - Anonymous - Aug-06-2008   

thankyou for the wonderful storie. Great read. - Pat - Aug-09-2008   

I love this story and was really excited to see a new chapter. I hope you have plans to continue the updates.

- Les - Aug-09-2008   

Just like so many others I am enamoured with your story. It's amazing you've been writing it for years...please don't make us wait so long between updates! I'll wait to rate your story when it's completed. - JC - Aug-17-2008   

Thanks for adding another chapter. I love this story...I just don't know which couple I'm cheering for. - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

Lady J you are a genius!!! I like Business Trip a lot but I LOVE SPRING BREAK. Please keep the updates coming, we are really getting to the good part now. - Nigie - Aug-26-2008   

I adore this story and all the characters. I honestly don't know which couples to vote for. - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Wahoo! Another chapter and salivating for some more.

This is suspenseful as all heck. - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Oh my God!! What a wonderful story! It keeps me on the edge. Please update this more often cuz I know I'm not the only one who's tired of guessing :)) lol. SERIOUSLY, ITS A MUST READ EVEN THOUGH ITS UNFINISHED - Anonymous - Sep-30-2008   

Love what's been posted so far. Can't wait for more. - C - Sep-30-2008   

Lady J! Lady J! What a great story!!! Spring Break just keeps getting better and better!! Please continue to give us our SB fix!!! And make it soon!!! I don't think I can wait for chapter 14!!! - Terri - Sep-30-2008   

More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved it! - Anonymous - Oct-12-2008   

This is such a great story with very engaging characters, I hope the author completes the story. - Anonymous - Sep-28-2009   

I love this story - please post more - Shar - Oct-15-2009   

this story keeps you going.... more pls........ - crv - Oct-19-2009   

What a great story. I love all of them. Please, please, continue to write. - sue4rab - Oct-20-2009   

Love this story. The players are all real people. Please post more. - TJ - Oct-24-2009   

Didn't realize the story was unfinished when I started reading. Just about ruined my night when I got to the end of the page and saw "to be continued" at the bottom. I truly hope that Lady J finishes this. Over the course of the first 13 sections I've become genuinely attached to the characters & am dying to know how things work out for them. - MD - Oct-19-2010   

Love it love it love it. Please send in the finish, I can't wait. - JC - Feb-01-2011   

Love this story. Would really like it to be continued. - Anonymous - Jun-20-2011   

aaaaahhhhhh. :( its not finished what i did read i do love. Great Read! - Anonymous - May-15-2014