| A truely wonderful story. You were able to walk right along with the characters.....Can't wait for the next installment! - Anonymous Jun 28th, 2003 |
| This was a fascinating study of what happened behind the scenes in When Fates Collide. I loved finding out what the Empresses Xena was thinking and what she felt when she first saw and spoke with the Playwrite Gabrielle. Very well done! - Jane Jun 28th, 2003 |
| I loved this story. It was the first one of Ali's that I read and it just had me coming back for more until I had read everything of Ali's that was available. Let me tell you...I was NOT disappointed. Whenever I find myself needing a good fanfic fix, I always return to Ali Vali's stories. I know that some wonderful reading will be waiting for me. I look forward to reading more of her work. And Ali, of your're rading this, I can't wait until "Play It Again Sam" retitled as "Carly's Sound" comes out in print. Just another book to add to my library of favories. Oh, and a sequel to "Play It Again Sam" sounds like a very good idea ;-) - Dal Jun 27th, 2003 |
| It's a beautiful story that has me anticipating a sequel like have not done with any other story. - Dal Jun 27th, 2003 |
| Hey, Califa. Don't Worry, the story is not nearly finished. what is finished is the end of part 1 of the book, the next part will be Jewl's story. And the part after that, will be other characters, so dont worry. - Katia N. Ruiz, the author Jun 27th, 2003 |
| How could you not finish this story?I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting with bated breath for the conclusion.This is a cruel,cruel torment for an avid fan.Please finish this!! - califa Jun 27th, 2003 |
| A great flash fiction on X&G. I like how its in first person perspective from Gabrielle, nice change. Very nice job, Lisa. Thank you. - Red Hope Jun 26th, 2003 |
| One of the best stories I read. Very well written and done. - Anonymous Jun 26th, 2003 |
| Arrrrgh Help! I've gotten to part 5 (the conclusion) of this super story but it cuts off after a page. Where can I find the rest?? - Stephanie Jun 25th, 2003 |
| This story is one of my favs. Had me captivated from the beginning. I love her work and would highly recommend this fantastic novel to all readers. - Clare Jun 24th, 2003 |
| An excellent story to read. I really enjoyed this twist on the Conqueror genre. A good job for a first time bard. I eagerly await a sequel,because there where many questions left unanswered. Good work bard. - jbamazon Jun 24th, 2003 |
| I enjoyed this story immensely but then I have all of hers. The sequel All It Took Was You is even better. - Linda Jun 24th, 2003 |
| Sometimes fate has to hit you between the eyes to get your attention. Garrison Dexter and Largo Coogan certainly find this to be the case in this hilarious Larisa tale. Add to that a crazy cousin complete with the voices in her head and costumes to match, and some rather unorthodox breast enhancements, and you have another winner!!! You go, Larisa!!! - Michelle Jun 23rd, 2003 |
| Lynne Norris is an excellent author. I couldn't stop reading Second Chances once I started. I was captivated by the great story and the excellent style that she has. Regina and Alex's love developed slowly and when the time came for them to realize it, it was beautiful in every way. Keep on writing, Lynne, I'll be looking for more from you! - Katia N. Ruiz Jun 23rd, 2003 |
| A refreshing tale with delightful twists. I really enjoyed this story and will be reading more from this author. - Meg Jun 23rd, 2003 |
| This story is so HOT! - Honeybee Jun 22nd, 2003 |
| I love Veba!!! This was such a sweet tale. How could anyone not fall under the spell of such a sweet soul? I can't wait to read the next story listed here. Thank you Ri I wasn't feeling well and this made me feel much better. - Roxi Jun 21st, 2003 |
| Never have I laughed so hard, spewed so much pizza (till I learned not to eat while reading)... I will never take writing as seriously as I did before, that's for sure! Gabrielle searches for just the right word, and Xena is astounded to find that there are so many ways to describe one little body part. Needing a lift? Read Nipple! - Taleweaver Jun 21st, 2003 |
| Simple and nice. None of those tired cliches and impossible posistions! Good job. - Full of Grace Jun 20th, 2003 |
| I started this story a bit late at night & despite how tired I was from a long day, I could not stop reading R.D.'s fanfiction. Its quite different compared to the show's Bitter Suite. I definitely went through an emotional roller coaster and felt so rewarded by the end. Very nice job, R.D. Thank you again! ;) - Red Hope Jun 19th, 2003 |
| I enjoyed the dog in the story, I hope nothing bad happens to him. So what happened to her ex-husband? I hope we see more of this soon. This is a new bard, isn't it? - F.Cambell Jun 19th, 2003 |
| This continuation of the Merker's Outpost story is simply amazing! J A Bard creates an intense world where every action does have a consequence and lessons take on a planetary scale. That Jina Gari Zohra and Harriet Alexandra become a part of it all and rise above adversity is no surprise. I love the world that is presented, but I love even more the twist that this writer gives to the concept of having your characters evolve! I really cannot wait to see this in print, I know I'll be first in line to buy a copy. - Andy Jun 19th, 2003 |
| Here is one author who doesn't understand at all the Xena/Gabrielle relationship architype and why it works--and why this doesn't. - Enterprise Jun 18th, 2003 |
| I'm not saying whether my partner and I pulled this one off or not. What I am saying is that we are in fact giving serious thought to putting this obvious genius writer, (who, btw, should have her imagination bronzed), in our will. This has to be the hottest, PWP I've read in a long time. - Kaye Jun 18th, 2003 |
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This is a complex, multi-layered, well stocked diarama that you simply must read! You'll be enthralled from the very start, hooked into a suspended belief that will keep you clicking through part after part. A great read! - Taleweaver Jun 18th, 2003 |
| I really needed this burst of sunshine today. I'm right with Xena on this one everyone can use a bit of "Happiness" in their lives. - Robbie Jun 18th, 2003 |
| Touching and mysterious with just the right amount of humor. - K. Murphy Jun 17th, 2003 |
| This is classic Larisa! Funny, touching, an incredibly entertaining read and educational too!! Read it tonight you won't be sorry. Great job Larisa! - Anonymous Jun 17th, 2003 |
| I've read most of R.D. Elliot's work. I really enjoyed them. Ocassionally I do get a little confused about who is doing the speaking or actions. I reckon Touches would be my favorite out of the lot since its a good twist. Overall, the fanfiction is excellent like the bard. - Red Hope Jun 17th, 2003 |
| I have such a bone to pick with Ms. Larisa. Our relationship (mine and my dumbass girlfriends that is) is nearing breaking point because of your so called 'hilarious romps'. Well sure, I thought it was cute when she first jumped into bed wearing footie PJs, and I did so enjoy ripping the spiderman y-fronts off her firm smooth tan, ahem, uh, backside. I have just finished weening her off the Pez and donating all the dispensers to the neighboured kids. That's fine too. And I indulge the sippee cups she likes to drink her wine from...even when we have my folks over. When she painted herself green, we just made erotic paintings and said no more about it. However, to come home from a long day at work, stumble towards the shower and find my beloved avec hand at crotch, peeing (albeit with incredible accuracy - she does have amazing hand-eye coordination) whilst standing, is simply a step too far. Ms. Larisa, I plead with you to consider, when writing your next tale, some of your more impressionable fans..and their everloving girlfriends. Oh yeah and BTW bitchin' story, really love the 'bonding' scene. Dumbass will be thanking you for that tonight ;) - Stephanie Jun 17th, 2003 |
| Fantastic! Another great one and one of my favorites. I'm still waiting to see Larisa's stories published. How can we get that accomplished? - dreamer Jun 17th, 2003 |
| What a darling story. Very cute and brought a smile to me. - Anonymous Jun 17th, 2003 |
| OH MY GOD!!! This story is one of the best I've read in a long time. I had to stop myself from laughing out loud several times. The peeing standing up thing was so funny. I tryed it and it actually works and it's fun!!! Recommend that all women who hate squatting at least try it. Instructions at the end of story. Enjoy. - Anonymous Jun 16th, 2003 |
| This story is sweet! I loved it. - Bug Jun 16th, 2003 |
| Robin Hood has long been a cultural favorite, but Power has given Robin a new face and a new life in this story. It's multi-layered, it's easy to read and it's highly enjoyable. I hope Power gives us more soon. - Taleweaver Jun 16th, 2003 |
| Changed Lake is an amazing story, rooted in truth and garnished with gritty determination. The main character is made of strong stuff indeed, but she doesn't hide her heart of gold. So far, there's even something for the dog lovers, as well as the budgie enthusiasts! I can't wait to see how this story will take shape!. - Taleweaver Jun 16th, 2003 |
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I think that this story would rank among Patty's best works. It's the story of devotion, loyalty and love that can truly achieve miraculous things. It is the story of all that is good about one small corner of the 'Verse, and it's just the story to lift your spirits after a long, hard day. - Taleweaver Jun 16th, 2003 |
| With the amount of stories, Larisa has written at this point, one might be tempted to say: GET A LIFE! However, I prefer to say: Please don't EVER get a life. Please! Blue Calm is not the first Larisa I've read, and it will certainly not be the last, either. It it simply too funny to describe, it has to be experienced. You laugh, you cry... and then you laugh some more. I want a Mama and two idiots of my very own. Larisa = Quality. Keep it up! - Wolvie-DK Jun 16th, 2003 |
| Loved it. I'm fast becoming a big fan of Teagen2! - Bug Jun 16th, 2003 |
| A very cool story! I thought it was great and I would love to read more. - Bug Jun 16th, 2003 |
| A wonderful tale of the magic of love and life with a touch of reality, the story of Carly and Poppy only enhancing the story of Julia and Poppy by giving a wonderful insight into how Poppy becomes the woman she is. I can only hope for a sequel. - N.E.T Jun 15th, 2003 |
| This story was different than what I've read of hers. It weaves a tale of mystery and intreague. Definately will keep you wondering. You could see the link between Allyson and Morgan right away. And you knew there was something fishy about Allyson's survant. Truly a great tale. I loved it. :) Thanks for sharing. :) - Caden Jun 14th, 2003 |
| A unique courtroom comedy that takes place in Illusia just after the end of XWP. With Ares as judge, Callisto as prosecutor, and all the usual suspects as witnesses, the reader is taken on a journey to attempt to unearth the moral of our girls' story. - Maddie Jun 13th, 2003 |
| This is a first time story that takes place within the world of the famous Unicorn Tapestries. A sexy, romantic fairy tale, and a very unusual format for a story. - Maddie Jun 13th, 2003 |
| [This Comment contains spoilers.] What can I say about this story that will bring you all over to read it. I could say that is it one of the best out there...or I could say that it was Awesome....well how about I say that it was both. This story has heart and you can feel the connection between the two right from the get go. The feeling of not wanting to get hurt again yet unable to stop herself Allyson gives her heart again for one night. Morgan is so lost until she find Allyson that she is willing to give up all she knows. Love is the strongest thing and makes you do things that you wouldn't normaly do. I say live life and love as much as you can...especially with your soulmate!!!!! Wizzy you ROCK and I LOVED IT!! - T. Stratton Jun 13th, 2003 |
| Every now and then you run across a story that plays like a movie reel in your mind while reading..this one did it for me. I simply love the story line and the development of characters in such a short story(hint)was very well done. I kept wishing that it would go on and on... Anyway you must read this story by Alex the Cat. Butch/Femme stories are really a turn on and this does the genre justice. Enjoy and please keep this author inspired!! - Anonymous Jun 12th, 2003 |
| Not only does she have great taste in music but, she writes too! This romantic story is very well written and it was a lovely treat for this very warm afternoon. Keep up the good work and write-on! - nlw Jun 12th, 2003 |
| J.W. Heart does it again! This entire series is a favorite simply because the author doesn't lose sight of her characters. Trace, Shannon, Dawg & company remain true to form and continue along a great storyline, providing genuine laughs (of the out loud and snorting variety) along the way. The only problem I see is that this is the end of the series. =) - Kaye Jun 11th, 2003 |
| This was a great piece. I loved it! Great pace for a short story. Well worth the time to read. - Alex Tryst Jun 11th, 2003 |
| An excellent piece of sci-fi writing from a very promising writer. I would dearly love to see more from this bard! The story of Nyx and Billie is the best XWP Uber Sci-Fi story I have read to date. I hope that we'll get to see this story published! - Five Two Jun 10th, 2003 |
| This was a fabulous third edition to the series! I absolutely loved it! I especially enjoyed the addition of children to the mix. That was something new for Alex's books, and she did a wonderful job with capturing them accurately. There was also a new twist to her usual girl meets girl story line, which I will not divulge so it can be a surprise to readers, but I will say it truly makes Jamie a more believable character. The contrast between her physicality and her "real" personality is wonderful. As for Sarah, she was a great, strong woman. It was nice to see women who know what they want and go for it. A great book! A must read for fans of her work, and if you've never read Alex's stuff before, you should read this series. It's some of her best! - Anonymous Jun 10th, 2003 |
| This bard has me hooked. Love in Gray Shadows is a story that takes us into a world that is being brought into the lime light more and more every day of our lives. I admire this bard's courage to write about this subject. Read it. It will stay with you. - Sally Jun 9th, 2003 |
| This story is a true sci-fi piece of art. Sarah does a wonderful job of weaving you into a time of the future where human kind is not so human anymore. The characters are intense and complex. This story is just like potato chips once you start you can't stop. - Anonymous Jun 9th, 2003 |
| Another sweet romatic tale from one of my favorite bards. I really love the Artistic flare in this one and the feeling that they were not only fated to be together but so were their families. A wonderful love story. - AJ Jun 7th, 2003 |
| This is about the cutest story I've ever read! Very different from this author's other stories but no less entertaining. - Kaye Jun 7th, 2003 |
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Who knew finding the right apartment could change your whole life? For Sam, finding a renter like Mike, who is willing not only to pay first and last month's rent, as well as her security deposit in advance, but also help with the repairs Sam needs to do on the last apartment, was a dream come true. As they get to know one another, Sam begins to wonder what other dreams Mike might make come true. You'll have to read to find out, and believe me, it's well worth your time!!! |
| Wow! S. Anne Gardner has done it again. A story that sucks you in and never lets you go even after you have finished reading it. This bard dares to take the reader into a world hardly spoken of but that exits. Once again she gives us, the readers everything we wanted in a story. - Monti Jun 7th, 2003 |
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Yet another fine story from a bard who just seems to get better and better as each tale unfolds. Love in photographs was my favourite story, until this little gem came along. Alex Tryst has certainly a talented way with words, love the way she develops a plot, throws some rather unexpected twists and turns to the reader, never mind the, will they, won't they in her stories. A fine piece of work, very skilled in its attempt to portray the southern accent, that I am glad to say works well. Cannot wait to read her new story, just posted - Stick to the Script. A Must Read. - Del Jun 6th, 2003 |
| Great story from a very talented bard, who if you check out her site is also a very talented artist it seems, definitely an author to watch out for - check it out - http://surf.to/Mindwalker78 - Del Jun 6th, 2003 |
| This is the most charming tale I've read yet! I felt as if I was watching an episode of our favorite show. This is a must read for anyone who wants to see a glimpse into the lives of our two favorite women. - Arati Jun 6th, 2003 |
The Charani Award for excellence for June 2003 has been presented to Daughter of Egypt (117 pages), by Shadowriter. This is a riveting story that intertwines Ancient Egyptian mythology of immortality with the turn of the 20th century. I felt myself transported back in time and actually living the story as a spectator. This is an excellent and entertaining piece of work!”
Jessica A. Michallet
| A tale that has the passion of a PWP and yet an interesting innocense to it. I enjoyed it a lot! - Five Two Jun 6th, 2003 |
| I've read this story twice and loved it both times. Indigal does a terrific job of developing her characters and the story. I most liked the way the two women built a friendship before starting a romantic relationship - far more believable than love/lust at first sight. I hope the author writes more stories in the very near future. - LTA Jun 5th, 2003 |
| I read this story some time ago on another web site. I highly recommend taking the time to read it. Once I began, I was hooked and could not put it down until I had all the twists figured out. Ms. Brownell tells an excellent story of love, survival, mystery, family, and forgiveness. You will certainly not be disapointed by this entertaining and well-written piece. - S. Lee Jun 4th, 2003 |
| Incommunicado ….This is a “must read” tale. The timing of this story couldn’t be more perfect with today’s news centering on serial killers, forensics and justice. The talents of J. P. Mercer and Nancy M. Hill drew me deep inside the story amidst the danger of the treacherous Sonora Desert, illegal immigrants being smuggled over the Mexican border and the mysterious murders of young women. The two main characters are exciting women. One, an attractive, feisty forensic pathologist and the other, a beautiful but formidable defense attorney that are brought together in less than attractive circumstances. Yep! Intrigue, sex and murder…. and .enough angst to keep me on the edge of my seat….My Thanks to the writers. - Agatha Tutko Jun 3rd, 2003 |
| i'm practically in LOVE with nutty Sweetpea! WANT MORE! MORE! MORE! HILARIOUS tale, one of Larisa's brightest gems. :) - katrina Jun 2nd, 2003 |
| Frizzle is so real to my kids, they often ask what Frizzle is doing now. We hope there is a new Frizzle story soon. Frizzle is a young dragon that seems to have adventures just like real kids. Including asking why the sky is blue! Do you have kids? You MUST read them this story! - K. Gibson Jun 2nd, 2003 |
| This is a short sequel to "Careful What You Wish," tying up some emotional loose ends. - Anonymous Jun 2nd, 2003 |
| Well DD I love what you wrote! I look forward to more. You grab the reader attention right off the bat. You keep the reader wanting more. So you better get your butt in gear and get more posted! - T. Stratton Jun 1st, 2003 |
| This has been a pleasure not only to read while in the makings but seein' it actually posted here as well! DD continues to amaze me on how this story unfolds! I look forward to more DD! you so ROC! - Wizzy Jun 1st, 2003 |
| No topic is more important. The courage and justice of the story are remarkable. I feel more sustained and confidence in Gardner's handling of these painfully difficult issues. S. Anne Gardner's story is terrific. - Bloomsaul May 31st, 2003 |
| It is a tonic to experience a major work commited to the topic of love. There is wisdom in Ms. Gardner's writing. Highest rating. - Bloomsaul May 31st, 2003 |
| I just finished reading this book by S. Anne Gardner and I find it a deeply learned, highly intelligent, and beautifully written book. - Linda Grey May 30th, 2003 |
| I understand why this story has stayed in the top 25 list for so many weeks. It is skillfully written. It is superb. A must read. - Chattanooga May 30th, 2003 |
| It is hard to imagine how the many aspects of love and pain are so much a like. We find so much of both throughout this story. It felt good to know a bond as strong as Tory and Danni had endured all because of their love and passion for one another. Very well written. Suprising many times over. - Chattanooga May 30th, 2003 |
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I was almost not going to add my comments because I figured there were so many who already spoke up, but then I decided to go ahead and throw in my praise for this work. Never have I read such a detailed account of a mythology which is still alive today. I always knew that the Xena show had a positive affect on me, but I never realized how important the show is not only to the American culture, but to the Chinese as well. Bravo, Ms. Michallet, this is a fine piece of research and I hope you get an A+ for it. I know it's the grade that I would give it if it was within my power to do so! - Jay May 30th, 2003 |
| I got very interested in this story. How are these two ever going to end up together? Is there more to this story? - Paticakes May 30th, 2003 |
| So far, this is my favorite story by S. Anne Gardner. I still have a few more to read. Thanks. - Paticakes May 30th, 2003 |
| I have been reading this bards works and believe this is my favorite. It is so pasionate. Every thing they went through and still their love brought them back to each other. I rate it a 10. - Sally May 30th, 2003 |
| I had to read it. There are lots of surprises in this story. I thought I had it figured out but I was wrong. This story is written with lots of surprises. - Sally May 30th, 2003 |
| I like this quiet story. Xena observing how much her best freind had changed and grown up. Its a very sweet and loving tribute from the Warrior's heart and you don't have to read it on Thanksgiving. - Jane May 30th, 2003 |
| I started this story yesterday and finished it today. I got angry, I cried and I was so happy with how it ended. Love conquers all. - Sally May 29th, 2003 |
| Wow! I read this all in one sitting. It is better than great. - Sally May 29th, 2003 |
| Great story. Where can I found more of it? - Sally May 29th, 2003 |
| Right away I have to say that Tess and Dana are sorry friends. Everytime I read an Uber story, Uber X and G always have the sorriest friends. I hate that so much. But anyway, I liked this story a bunch. Very good job. - Anonymous May 29th, 2003 |
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Love in Photographs is and excellent read. I highly resommend it to those looking for a good read. Once you start, you won't want to put it down...even if it's 4 o'clock in the morning and you're bleary eyed and running on caffine... |
| S. Anne Gardner combines suspense with romance. Wonderful story. - Anonymous May 29th, 2003 |
| I'm not sure if it's a loading problem or if the end of the story finished with, "Her body shuddered and her fingers entwined in my dark locks." I can't imagine that that is the end of this short story. What I did read was wonderful and would like to finish it if I didn't get the entire story. - Mo May 29th, 2003 |
| I read the comments before reading this story. They are all true. This Bard wrote a stunning love story. Read it. Once you start it you can't put it down. - Chattanooga May 28th, 2003 |
| intense. Coolly thrilling. - Anonymous May 28th, 2003 |
| A tidal wave of emotional storms, hot and cold constantly ticking away. Humanity's continuous and sometimes futile battle against nature makes this one of the most powerful novels. - Tildus May 28th, 2003 |
| This bird sweeps the reader along at a breathless pace.Rate it highly and recommend it to all. - jeanette May 28th, 2003 |
| Jammed with the tensions of imminent disaster. The whole thing unfolds with the timing of a quartz watch. - popadopalous May 28th, 2003 |
| This is a rebuttal of Anonymous' feedback on the story. It looks as though there is a formatting problem with this story. I've read many stories by this bard and starting a new paragraph between a character's dialogue has never been an issue. If you read the stories on her website you'll see the difference. - Anonymous May 28th, 2003 |
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wow ... what can I say ... The way L. Crystal Michallet develops the roots of Wuxia from the confucius and buddhist eras, traveling to the Chinese revolution and linking to Xena and modern movies is a strike of pure genius... I recommend that all Xena Fans do watch Brigitte Lin in the Bride with white hair to see how the persona of Xena was developed... - Aalavih May 28th, 2003 |
| This story gives us the beginning of a love finally accepted between our two favorite warriors. Xena Warrior Princess and Gabriell The Bard. I have read this story more than once and was very happy to see it made the top 25 here at The Athenaeum. Good going Lisa. - Anonymous May 28th, 2003 |
| I recommend this story to everyone who has had to go through the ups and downs that falling in love and trying to hold on to a woman who has a past brings. - Jesse May 28th, 2003 |
| Great read. I could feel the struggle Raisa's love for Carolyn. I found myself actually praying that every thing would work for these two. Love the story. I recommend it and rate it your highest rating. Very well written. - Sqadie2000 May 28th, 2003 |
| Once I started on this story I could not put it down. S. Anne Gardner has written a best seller. - Jane May 28th, 2003 |
| I read this story here at work. We did not have ice. I had to ask for an extended lunch it was that hot of a story. If we still have the "Ice Awards" this one and For the Love of a Woman deserve one.Is there more of it. - Jane May 28th, 2003 |
| I just had to read this story after everything I heard about it. All good. I know this is one of the best mystery stories written by a writer. By the way, I plan on reading all this authors stories. - Jane May 28th, 2003 |
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Crystal is not only a talented bard, but she's a scholar as well! This thesis is a must read for any Xena fan who wants to better understand our favorite show. - Arati  May 28th, 2003 |
| What a pleasure it was to learn the roots of where my favorite show came from! - Anonymous May 27th, 2003 |
| Power of Two is very well written. Lisa S. always puts so much heart and soul into her stories which makes us keep coming back for more. One of her best and a must read. - Monti May 27th, 2003 |
| Always start a new paragraph when a different character is speaking. I must admit that got a little annoying after a while. Other than that it was a good story. - Anonymous May 27th, 2003 |