...I am now one of your devoted fan :) Ijay should write more. Bard readers shouldn't miss this stories. - zieta - Aug-10-2011   

I loved it! Nice romantic story. - Anonymous - Aug-26-2011   

that is such a sweet story and so romantic i love that so much i feel like dreaming right now :)) good story - maren - Sep-28-2011   

very nice - Anonymous - Sep-19-2012   

Very sweet! I liked it ... - Ricky - Oct-06-2012   

I really liked the writing style in this story. It is refreshing. Would like to see more from this writer.. good job Ijay - soopi - May-01-2014   

Unfortunately, due to poor grammar, I didn't make it through the first paragraph. Correcting verb tense in my head as I read makes for an exhausting experience. - Caden - May-01-2014   

Unfortunately, due to poor grammar, I didn't make it through the first paragraph. Correcting verb tense in my head as I read makes for an exhausting experience. - Caden - May-01-2014   

So, there were a few grammar issues in this story, it remind me of an author that had written this story in a different language then translate it into English. If you are bothered by imperfection then you may not wish to read this story. That being said, I truly think the author was able to capture the flavor of village life, the innocence of the women involved and the pain when they were apart. Look beyond the grammar and sentence structure and you will find a beautiful gem. - Wheezie - May-04-2014   

very well written for a first story. The emotion and passion in the story is very deep and develops gradually. It really reminds me of how magical love feels. Bette is surely an angle ssennt from above especially to Nadia. I demand a sequel... - viva - Jun-10-2011   

This is wonderful, you've made me a fan... - Sid - Jun-18-2011   

I love this story and have no idea why this tsory is not published and for sell you are a great writer, keep up the great work! - Kristy Cato - Feb-29-2012   

Surprising - A good read that says a lot in small vignettes. - Anonymous - Mar-08-2017   

Lovely wee story Intense and I enjoyed it very much - Linda - Aug-10-2011   

Wow! I wish I could wake up like this every morning. Very intense short story, only wished it had been longer. This bard is definitely to be watched out for. I am a fan. - Viva - Aug-13-2011   

So lovely, the gift you have for the small moment is rare- you're a writer to watch. This story sings... - salama - Aug-22-2011   

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