great characters. really left me hanging. Are you going to finish this soon? - Lee - May-18-2008   

Great story please say theres more...please? - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

great story!!!Still waiting for the ending though... - Anonymous - Jan-02-2011   

More please!!!! Needs a sequel. - Anonymous - May-14-2008   

Wow...lovely and well written, but it definitely needs a sequel. I was left wanting much, much more! - Otter - May-14-2008   

Wow! This was intense. I'm left stunned. I can see the allure of a sequel and yet less is more. I feel the need to read more of Peewee's stories. - Kali - May-15-2008   

17 Year Old Jilly meets Jack Keating, a famous actress and her Idol, while working at a marina. Like all idols, this one proves entirely too human. - Dusty - May-15-2008   

Please. It MUST have a sequel - ^AcidBurn^ - May-16-2008   

Please oh please give us a sequel Peewee! Loved this story! - Anonymous - May-16-2008   

Is there a sequal to this? Please tell me that one is coming soon. - Rae - May-16-2008   

Great short story. Left me wanting more. Hope you consider doing a sequel or two. - Lee - May-16-2008   

Wow very good characters. very hot! Please more? - Anonymous - May-16-2008   

please!! please!! more!!! - marie - May-19-2008   

Nice one!I would love to know what happens next.... please.. :) - lyneX - May-19-2008   

Dude this story definitely deserves to be a series or at least have a sequel, thanx for writing this I definitely enjoyed it! - lolo1989 - May-19-2008   

WOW! what a Brillant story. Desperately want a sequel. Please - scorpio_2097 - May-19-2008   

WOW fantastic in need of a sequel most deferenantly worth reading - Anonymous - May-19-2008   

sequel, sequel,sequel!!! - Anonymous - May-20-2008   

Beautiful! Very, very good! - Rosangela - May-24-2008   

I loved it. I do hope there is a sequel. - Manoli - May-26-2008   

Sehr interessant - und h e i ß !!!!Ich fands klasse. Mehr davon. - Trinity - May-31-2008   

love love loved it. didnt want it to end. - Anonymous - Jan-12-2015   

Peewee has a way with fiction. She draws you in, buckles up the ride, and takes you, lube optional. You come to seeing stars, wondering and then hoping for the next adventure. - Kali - May-28-2008   

ohhh please...u gotta write more of this story,more of jill and jack!pretty pls? - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

Thanks for the sequel....now we need another sequel! - indianasumner - May-28-2008   

Loved it! Now we need a sequel to the sequel. - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

that's another great fiction! But now we need more, you leave us all wanting for more when we reach the last line - ^AcidBurn^ - May-29-2008   

WOW fantastic read
hope you do continue - Anonymous - May-30-2008   

more? please more? very good! - Anonymous - May-31-2008   

Ya did it again ... gave me a absolute stunner of a story to read and left me wanting more... your just mean :-) - scorpio_2097 - Jun-02-2008   

I want more please... - Lee - Jun-02-2008   

Great sequel to "The Lake." Please continue! - pierce22 - Jun-16-2008   

Please continue with Leigh's story. It was one of the first uber stories I have ever read and I can't stop thinking about it. PLease write more soon. - Anonymous - Aug-21-2008   

More pleaseeeeee loved it!!!! - Anonymous - Jan-29-2009   

Pleaseeee continue with the sequel. This story is really too good to be dropped. - bh07 - Sep-12-2009   

Can't wait for the sequel!! - Anonymous - Jan-24-2010   

Great story!!! Sequel Please!! Like to know Jack's story - Traveller - Mar-07-2010   

Please continue, would love to read more of these two. - cpo - Oct-20-2010   

Gosh, that one kinda hurt my heart. I love this one and "The Lake" I really hope there is a sequel coming. Pretty please? - Anonymous - Jan-05-2011   

again you stopped too soon more,more,more I have to know whats next - Anonymous - Jun-30-2008   

This series just keeps getting better with every part! I'm chomping at the bit for the next one! AWESOME..... - Dylan - Jun-30-2008   

This Series just keeps you enthralled and wanting more. So Please, pretty pretty please Peewee can we have more :D - scorpio_2097 - Jul-01-2008   

that was great although short
hope you continue this great series - Anonymous - Jul-02-2008   

Another enthralling chapter in the Jack and Jill saga. Well done Peewee, you are keeping us waiting with baited breath for the next installment (which I hope would not bee too far in the future). Continue with these entertaining contributions! - aj - Oct-02-2008   

This series looks great! More, please! - Anonymous - Jan-08-2009   

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write some more PLEASE. Soon would be amazing - Anonymous - Jan-23-2009   

PLEASE write more!! this is an interesting series and I want to know what happens! - Nicole - Jun-10-2009   

great series, I need to know what will happen next - Anonymous - Jan-02-2010   

I want more. I really do enjoy this series. - Anonymous - Jan-06-2011   

I found this story is like a pilot. It sets up the next part of the story, but ends before it begins. It would have been nice watching the story unfold. - Lyn B - Jun-19-2011   

so far,so good..we want more peewee,this story has tremendous potential,please continue it. - Anonymous - Sep-18-2008   

very good more ? Please? - frostline - Sep-20-2008   

great so far hope more follows - Anonymous - Sep-20-2008   

Really well written. Hopefully there will be an update. - Hoqoq - Sep-28-2008   

great so far - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Really well done. Love the characters and the interaction between the sisters. - ladyaxe - Sep-29-2008