What can I say about this story that will bring you all over to read it. I could say that is it one of the best out there...or I could say that it was Awesome....well how about I say that it was both. This story has heart and you can feel the connection between the two right from the get go. The feeling of not wanting to get hurt again yet unable to stop herself Allyson gives her heart again for one night. Morgan is so lost until she find Allyson that she is willing to give up all she knows. Love is the strongest thing and makes you do things that you wouldn't normaly do. I say live life and love as much as you can...especpialy with your soulmate!!!!! Wizzy you ROCK and I LOVED IT!! - T. Stratton - Jun 13th, 2003   

This story was different than what I've read of hers. It weaves a tale of mystery and intreague. Definately will keep you wondering. You could see the link between Allyson and Morgan right away. And you knew there was something fishy about Allyson's survant. Truly a great tale. I loved it. :) Thanks for sharing. :) - Caden - Jun 14th, 2003   

Touching and mysterious with just the right amount of humor. - K. Murphy - Jun 17th, 2003   

I'm glad for the couple Allyson and Morgan. They're meant to be together forever and this story proved it. It's a must read story if you're looking for something sweet mixed with a little side of fantasy. You will not be disappointed. - Ri - Mar-12-2007   

Wonderful story. - Wheezie - Mar-06-2012   

Wow, if you've read the first then don't hesitate to read this one also. Goss, I love the couple Allyson and Morgan. Anyway, I think you should continue with this story.

P.s. I really the evil girl. - Ri - Mar-12-2007   

I would like to see more and expand the story a bit. Great job with the urgency and anger. - Wheezie - Mar-06-2012   

Wow Wizzy that was a funny story. I just kept laughing picturing those animals doing that. Really good job. Keep the stories coming. - Debbie Dee - Nov 20th, 2003   

I had the privilege of seeing this particular story before it was posted. When I finally finished laughing I realized why I have dogs and not cats, the sneaky bastards. And in truth, the only good squirrel is a dead squirrel. What a delightfully funny tale. Keep up the good work, my friend. - Shadylady - Nov 20th, 2003   

I like the way your mind thinks..warped,warped and more warped. What a hysterical story. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants a good laugh! I look forward to so much more from you in the future. - WLASAW - Nov 20th, 2003   

I love how the sequal was done. A beautiful mixture of love and mistrust. The emotions are so thick at times that it leaves you hooked til the very end. Wonderful story. Cannot wait to read more. - Caden - Apr 29th, 2003   

This story grips you from the very beginning and won't let you go, leading you through twists and turns at a breakneck speed until it finally returns you to a safe, happy place. But for how long? Keep up the good work, Wizzer. I'm looking forward to another one. - K. Murphy - May 5th, 2003   

OKAY YOU JUST HAVE TO RUN AND READ THIS STORY!! It is one of the best out there. It grabs ahold of you and doesn't let go. You won't care either....when you are done you will beg for more and beg you must. Wizzy has a great sense of what her characters are going through. You can see everything in your mind as she paints a vivd picture with her words..MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! - T. Stratton - May 9th, 2003   

Kill Tarie...I never liked her. Perhaps a nice upper respiratory infection or a truck runs over her toe and she gets gangrene and succumbs to infection. Or a serial killer...ooo ooo yes, a serial killer. Or you can write me into the story and I'll beat her with my pointy stick! The condescending little twit needs to go bye bye! hate ya buddy!lol! Ive read the 3rd part an its a bummer Tarie dont get it then either! - I HATE TARIE FAN! - May 9th, 2003   

Me gusta mucho. - D. Nightshade - May 17th, 2003   

Perfecto. I'm speechless...you got me this time, buddy. - Autumn's Roommate - May 17th, 2003   

A stunning centerpiece for a trilogy of emotion and passion. - K.L.S. - May 17th, 2003   

Great sequel. I found myself irritated at the characters' immaturity in Steel Free Fall. However, it all makes sense when you read this sequel. In Free Falling Fate the characters' experience emotional growth and are able to connect more deeply. Looking forward to the next story of this trilogy. - Anonymous - May 19th, 2003   

ok, I could not let this comment someone posted slide by..(I found myself irritated at the characters' immaturity in Steel Free Fall.) who ever you are.please email me and let me explain the back ground of this story and you will understand!I wrote Steel Free Fall at the age of 16...at that age who is not immature? I was...please read every stories disclaimer carefully I always give a little back ground on how the story came about.. I love the feed back Ive gotten,helps me to make corrections on the last part of these ladies lives! So please keep them coming, good or bad!PS.I am glad you did like FFF tho! and the next bit is even better from the feed back Ive gotten on it so far! - Wizzy - May 20th, 2003   

I loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it!!! Muchas Gracias!!! - Akaisha - Nov-12-2010   

Great sequel! - Ricky - Jan-30-2012   

This takes my breath away. I hope you become one. - WLASAB - Aug 21st, 2003   

You could tell that this was written from the heart. I liked it very much. Good work Wizzy. - Debbie Dee - Aug 22nd, 2003   

Because you are a beautiful person inside and out Wizzy, I know this story has to be true! Also knowing how people in P-town can be, bless you for trying to make it a more beautiful place. In the days that we are living in today, sometimes it's hard to find a reason to smile, we all need someone to remind us to smile once in awhile. Keep the stories coming... they're wonderful! When shall I see them in paperback? hehe I guess this website will just have to do. - Shannon - Jul 17th, 2003   

Great little story and the names are hilarious. Had a definite chuckle over them names there. - Niyah - Jan-10-2013   

Another great story from Wizzy. You learn that sometimes you have to finish things from your past before you can begin your future. And then you may grow into the person you are meant to be.I suggest you read this story for a truely awesome experience. - Anonymous - Jan 18th, 2005   

Well done tale - you really get a feel for the grit and pathos of the world of the rodeo circuit. - BradleyB - Jan 25th, 2005   

wooooooooooow superbe histoire, je ne me suis pas detache d'elle..y aura-t-il une suite ? pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase - alanlansky - Feb-21-2010   

Very good story x - SD - Sep-07-2015   

What can I say about this story. It is one of the best I have ever read. The way Tarie and Brie go at it is outrageous. Two people that hate each other but deep down they love the other. Both are scared but by the end they take the chance. LOVED EVERY SINGLE MINUTE OF IT!! - T. Stratton - Apr 8th, 2003   

This is a classic tale of opposites attracting one another...yet it's not. Drenched with emotion, this story leads the reader on a veritable merry-go-round of emotions written so tangibly that the feelings last right up until the very last word. I've only three words for you, Wizzy: I Want More! - K.L.S. - Apr 8th, 2003   

This story kept me caught in its' weave the whole way through. I couldn't get enough. It is one of the best I have ever read. Tarie and Brie definately are proving opposites attract. Their souls belong together and deep down they are starting to realize it. The story unraveled just enough to make me want more. I cannot wait to read a possible sequel. AWESOME STORY!!! LOVED IT! :) - Caden - Apr 9th, 2003   

This story simply has to be the best one I've read in a long, long time. It broke my heart and healed it all in one fell swoop. Brava to the author...Brava! - K. Murphy - Apr 9th, 2003   

Cutting to the chase, this story rocks!!! When o when will there be more?! I love these two characters! Wizzy not only makes you care about these two, but she also leaves you begging for more. You'll be up all night with this one, it's more than worth it. - ne-ne - Apr 14th, 2003   

Rouses the emotions and stirs the senses...the hallmarks of a true artist. - D. Nightshade - Apr 16th, 2003   

So nice I read it twice... - Anonymous English Major - Apr 22nd, 2003   

one of those stories you can't help but call a fresh breathe of air. truly amazing, loved every second!! - mary - Oct-28-2008   

Amazing!!! loved it. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2008   

It was the a bit strange beginning, but I very much liked this history. It wasn't too banal, dialogues were sharp and hot, characters are obstinate, and in general... I can express only the admiration and gratitude to the bard. I love such type of stories, and this story is freaking AWESOME!!!

10 +!!!

P.S. Excuse for my English - Akaisha - Nov-12-2010   

Fast paced, passionate and intense. The relationship between the two women was explosive in every way. A very involving story and I'm looking forward to reading the sequel. - Lyn B - Feb-02-2011   

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it! - Ricky - Jan-30-2012