Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #98 in 2003.  Top-25 #1. 
For the past two weeks, Branson Mahoney had been trying to catch the person who had been destroying equipment, materials and causing her building project to come to a screeching halt. Now with the backers breathing down her neck and her employees ready to quit, she took it into her own hands to find the culprit. Callaway J. Kuhrt made her way towards the trailer to make sure that no one was sleeping inside. Over the past two weeks, she had watched from a distance and then come into the site under the cover of darkness. What will happen these two finally met up? They will change each other forever, and teach everyone a thing or two about about what women can do. ;-) A fun and infirmative read!

Due to the natures of their callings Xena and Gabrielle are forced to separate for a time to take care of pressing duties. They agree to meet in a minor river port called Ciros in a few weeks. Gabrielle arrives first and is taken by marauders. This is not only the story of a rescue but the handling of it's aftermath that threatens to destroy the relationship that has survived the interference of human prejudice and even Gods.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Tall, blue-eyed Largo Coogan, was having her first weekend off in weeks and she planned on spending it fishing at the Shenandoah River. Little did she know that she would run into Garrison Dexter...both literally and figurately. The little blonde would turn her world upside down and then some.

Winner of the Intrepid Story Challenge, June 2003. Larisa has managed once again to totally ambush us with a great story. My recommendation to you is…JUST READ IT! - SammyLee  Jul 18th, 2003

Sometimes fate has to hit you between the eyes to get your attention. Garrison Dexter and Largo Coogan certainly find this to be the case in this hilarious Larisa tale. Add to that a crazy cousin complete with the voices in her head and costumes to match, and some rather unorthodox breast enhancements, and you have another winner!!! You go, Larisa!!! - Michelle  Jun 23rd, 2003

Love the interaction between the two gals, can't wait for the next chapter. - Anonymous  Oct 22nd, 2004

Hi...Just wanna say I really appreciate all the great feedback everyone has given me on this site. I am busy working on the next installment and I will try to have it posted as soon as possible. Thanks for hanging in there with me during this whole process. It has truly been a pleasure to write this story.... - Sage(the author)  Oct 14th, 2004

Wonderful!!! Your character Leigh is a fascinating woman, I read and fall in love, how everyone. Please, Sage, I wait the next installment anxiously, more !!!!!!!!!!!!! - Heather  Oct 12th, 2004

Cool story.... you need to finish this sucker! - jac  Oct 3rd, 2004

What a story! cant wait for the next installment. love the character leigh along with the humor and sarcasm found in the story!!! - blazinangelwings  Oct 1st, 2004

Great story, and I emailed the author about updates. The author is working on the new installment, be patient. Trust me, we cannot wait, we love the story. I will most surely rate this story upon completion. - klenglish  Sep 28th, 2004

Amazing, fascinatig ! Really, the charater Leigh is a femme fatale, a veeery SEXY GIRL! I'm fall in love with her too! I wait anxiously the next part. - Kath  Sep 28th, 2004

Wow!!! I never read an story with an character soooo sexy!!!! Besides, well written, with sense of humor, fascinating! I'm fall in love with they, i'm addictive that wonderful story! Please, Sage, more!!!!! - leth cross  Sep 15th, 2004

Ok..I told myself I wasn't going to read this because it was not a completed story yet,but I peeked at the first page and when I dicovered that it used one my most favorite movies as a basis I just had to read it. I'm glad I did it was a great read. A true homage to a great movie. Now I can't wait for it to be completed. I hope it gets updated soon(sneaky bard! you sure know how to leave folks hangin!) Great work...keep it up! - Elfcat255  Sep 1st, 2004

This story is excellent! The main characters are quick witted, very entertaining and extremely easy to like; you really start to care about them more and more as the tale develops. I can't wait to see where the author goes next, so keep up the good work! - Ang  Aug 30th, 2004

I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. A must read for everyone. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! - Veronica  Aug 27th, 2004

I just love this story. This is one of the best uber stories out. A must read for everyone. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! - Veronica  Aug 27th, 2004

Great story.I love the dialogue/banter between these two characters.Will this story be finish soon??? Can't wait til it's finish. Do you have other writings? - mt  Aug 26th, 2004

Not all accidents end in disaster...as Christy finds out in this cute little tale.

I love the humor in all of your stories, you inject just the right amount. Great story - keep up the good work. - Paula S.  Sep 7th, 2004

OH was this one fun -- I enjoyed it muchly - Linda  Aug 29th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #11 in 2003, #68 in 2002.
In this Uber, two friends, Samantha Martin and McKayla Farr, are slow to discover just what their friendship is about, as the widowed Sam helps Kayla see the light about her marriage and what is important in life.

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #71 in 2003, #6 in 2002.  Top-25 #1. 
Get ready to meet Memphis Belle and Luka and go Cajun in this tasty tale by the Mistress of Maybem and Weird Relatives! You will re-write what you know about vampires and roll on the floor laughing in this very funny and sometimes violent gem set in Mardi Gras country, where romance...ahh...Sprouts, and the characters are out of this world...literally! ;-)

I am not a person that likes vanpier storys or the likes of them but this one rely made me se the light.It has clas and stile and I say Larisa sure is better then Ann Rise...Well I faver Larisas storys anyway.Thumbs up.. fangs down. - SammyLee  Jan 4th, 2004

Kudos to Larisa!!!! I can't wait for Larisa's next story. It seems like it has been weeks since this author has posted any new stories. I feel the main component of her stories is her ability to make the characters three-dimensional. I also appreciate that the dialogue in her stories flow giving depth to the characters, even the bizarre characters that she utilizes for comedy relief. A story that really captured my interest was "Day Walker". I'd like to know if Larisa plans to write a sequel to "Day Walker"? Maybe the new antithesis can be demons or Lupines. Thanks Larisa! MDeBeers - MDeBeers  Oct 5th, 2003

KILLER STORY REALLY. I JUST ABOUT BUST A GUT DO I HEAR A PART TWO? - TMc  Aug 3rd, 2003

You call this Drama??? I almost killed my computer cause I was drinking Coke while reading ... DON'T DO THAT!!! KEEP LIQUID AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER WHILE READING DAY WALKER!! ... just some advise ;)
This one is just too damn funny ... I love it!! Keep it up Larisa, you're the best!!!!!!!!! - Bacchus  Jul 19th, 2003

MY GOD!.... this has to be the funniest, most riveting uber story I've read in a while! Luka and Memphis were superbly fleshed out, and Sprout... oh my.... I am just not gonna comment! AMAZING!!!!!! - Katelin B  Mar 2nd, 2003

I loved this story!!!!! Larisa is one of the best uber writers out there in my opinion. I can't wait for more about Luka and Memphis(and Sprout too!) Please give us more Day Walker! - Jbamazon  Dec 18th, 2002

I absolutely do not read Vampire stories. This story though is so wonderful that I loved every word. The charachters are sweet and funny and I loved every moment of it. I almost forgot that I was reading a vampire story I was having so much fun. Great Job Kiddo!!!!! - Ri  Dec 18th, 2002

I stayed up reeeeal late one night reading this, and it was sooo worth it! This is a fabulous story! I don't know which I found more enchanting... Sprout or Mama. Larisa has outdone herself with this one. I loved it! Thanks for the laughs. - Taleweaver  Dec 16th, 2002

Are you afraid of vampires?...well don't be with Fang and friends around. Another HIT from Larisa. I'm still laughing and very warm with this latest installment. Read it and you'll see why. Loved it! - NLW  Dec 12th, 2002

Good God, i havent laughed so hard (or needed a bucket of ice soo badly) in a LONG time! This is a great story! both for the plot and the nutso characters! - Wind  Dec 10th, 2002

I've come to the conclusion that Larisa should be certified as a nut case. She has the strangest characters in her stories and IT WORKS! I love the little ones Sprout and Lia! She may have been MIA for a while but she came back with a WINNER! I laughed until I couldn't breathe, keep up the great work. - Dancer  Dec 10th, 2002

One word...Sprout!!! This newest offering from Larisa had my partner rolling on the floor and the dog questioning our sanity we laughed so much. ;-) To the author: Fangs for the memories! (you may gag at that or write another story whichever you choose.) - Kay  Dec 5th, 2002

Since Larisa hasn't written in a while, she has definately came out with something worth the wait. A DAMNED good story if I say so myself. One that I actually have read twice. The characters are so funny and every bit as perverted as the ones in her other stories. Good reading and recommend it to anyone who needs a good laugh. Good job Larisa and keep up the good work!! ^_^ - Anonymous  Dec 4th, 2002

A very well written PWP. - E  Mar 26th, 2004

Hey Shady...I've heard that when it rains it pours, but I don't think they had this in mind. This is one heck of a story Shadylady!!!! Hope I get a rain check half as good...hint hint..lol - Anonymous  Jan 14th, 2004

Interesting approach to handling business problems, wish mine worked as easily and as much fun. Would definately like to see future relationship between R.C. and Chelsea. - Anonymous  Jan 8th, 2004

Enjoyed the story very much.
It's like watching a fast-paced movie. - Sawa  Jan 4th, 2005

Just awsome. One of the best I have ever read. - Anonymous  Sep 26th, 2004

was my first uber by Mark Annetts, and what a great story! i'm off to hunt every last one down now! the dialogue (hilarious and truly touching sometimes) and the mystery kept me glued to the screen, awesome characters too. - Katrina  Aug 15th, 2004

Don't let the title fool ya...Good story... Kept me reading. Loved the banter between the two main characters. - Anonymous  May 23rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #51 in 2002.
Brandy Chancellor had just inherited a dilapidated house she from her late aunt. The yard looked like a hay field waiting to be cut and bailed, and every window in the place was either broken completely, out, or cracked so bad it needed to be replaced. A construction worker, she decides to make it her home, and gets some unexpected help from her enigmatic and mysterious neighbor, Rowan.

This was the first Larisa story I read. I was pretty sick last week so I re read this story and it made me feel much better. It is a fascinating story of tragedy and triumph with a nice twist at the end. One of earlest and still one of my faves:) - Ri  Dec 31st, 2003

A Medieval-era tale that follows the story of two people who are brought together under less than ideal circumstances, and must learn to adapt to each other, as well as their new lives. Deception, heartache, and twists of fate complicate feelings and alter futures, and relationships struggle between bouts of love and despair.

Excellent! This is going to be a whopper of a romance. Naten does it again. Please finish..soon!! Like "Turning Tides", I am sure this one will blow us away. Love this writer and boy oh boy will I be checking every day to see new installments.Wonderful. - Califa  Sep 29th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
This is a sequel to 'Conqueror and Amazon: Towards a New Life' and leads our reluctanty heroic ex-Conqueror, her bard, and the Amazons straight to the Centaurs and a whole lot of trouble.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Marilyn Miller had high hopes for her youngest daughter Jodi. Those hopes were dashed the day she found out her daughter was a lesbian. In a heated argument she tells her how she really feels. In front of relatives she tells Jodi, "I wish you were straight. I wish you had married Bobby McLane." The following morning her wish is granted only with dire consequences. This is their story.

An enlightening story, very well written with characters so believable, you can actually see the story taking place in your mind. Great job, Candideyes. - Sherry  Nov 30th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Awesome!! Very well written! Reminded me of a few of my own camp crushes. Too bad mine didn't turn out with this happy ending!! Looking forward to Kim's next venture.
Keep up the good work!

- Linda  Jan 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Forced together during a wilderness adventure on a remote Canadian river, a shy and solitary kayak guide does everything she can to fight her inexplicable attraction to one of her clients—a workaholic redhead who seems to invite disaster wherever she goes.

Nice story but could have been better if Kim had taken more time to give it more body. It has potential to become a much better story if the characters are given more depth, there is more intrigue and the action is more intense. But I suppose she wanted to just keep it short. Pity though. Still, It's just right to read in bed just before you go to sleep. It's fun, pleasant, not too exciting or "angstfull" to give you bad dreams and short enough to finish before lights out.
Restfull. - letterwolf  Apr 20th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Heart of Africa is fresh, charming, funny, warm and a delicious adventure love story. I cannot give this story a higher recommendation as you will fall in love with these characters and the interaction between them. Great read, well written and a 'don't miss' story. - Tap  Sep 16th, 2004

Don't miss this story. It's a sweet, funny and romantic adventure love story. Excellent writing as always. - Jesse  Aug 20th, 2004

Excellent, easy to read. - Anonymous  Jul 2nd, 2003

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award:#9 in 2002.
This story tells of the perils that Levi Straussenhofer endures while trying to find the 'One' to make her life complete. She answers the personal ads in the newspaper and suffers nightly with the freaks that show up and are nowhere near how they describe themselves in their ad. Then one night while trying to escape a date from Hell, she literally runs into a pair of leather-clad legs under the table next to her. Ice blue eyes capture her - this could be the 'One.' The only problem is that she believes that the tall woman is...well, you'll see...it's one of the things in her ad she wants nothing to do with!

Well I absolutely agree with the previous entries. It's funny, it's fresh. What are you waiting for? Go on and read! - lectra  Aug 5th, 2004

i shrieked and oinked and howled with laughter!!! TERRIFIC story, was my first of Larisa's and i'm hooked now, totally. it's amazing how she can make you LOVE this LOVE, it's so UPROARINGLY, HILARIOUSLY ROMANTIC. Larisa, you're a genius! - katrina  May 25th, 2003

Hi! I've read ur story "Blind Date". It's great! Just great! I laughed like crazy while reading it! I guess we have a similar scense of humor. Thank u very much for ur writing!
Best regards. - Angel  Nov 12th, 2002

Genuinely endearing characters, funny dialogue and an incredibly sweet romance. And fish. Lots of 'em. Read it! - Anonymous  Jun 19th, 2002

Genuinely endearing characters, funny dialogue and an incredibly sweet romance. And fish. Lots of 'em. Read it! - Anonymous  Jun 19th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #6 in 2003.
A SciFi/Fantasy tale where the lives of two people entwine to continue a Dynasty based on Love and Honor. I don’t do angst so there is none and I’m a mushball at heart, read at your own risk.

Excellent story, well worth reading over and over! I would love to see a sequel about the second generation! - Sandy  Apr 4th, 2004

Extraordinary story. Tas is a very imaginative bard with excellent writing skills. Her characters and plot are well defined. In addition to providing a breathtaking adventure, discerning readers also come away with an insight and appreciation for the advantages an open society always has over a closed society. Epic, well worth the time. - Yvonne  Mar 21st, 2004

God this is now one of my fave's!!! I absolutely love this bard.. i can't wait for them to write another one!! MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!! The characters are so unique and yet retain the base elemets of X&G. Simply Amazing! I don't want to give any spoilers but you would be completely mad to overlook this epic novel!
- Snuff  Sep 27th, 2003

Hey I loved it..It was so cool.. I don't want to give any spoilers.. All I can say Is I can't wait until she writes another one... This one is awesome... - TinyLynae  Jul 13th, 2003

Awesome read, was brill first time around and now the third re-read I find it even better - well done. I cannot wait for a sequel, please can we have one? - val  May 23rd, 2003

i really enjoy all the stories and which to thank all the authors for enjoyable stories. Tas the return was a great story i hope you write a sequel soon. thank you again for a great story. sincerely - jojo  Apr 23rd, 2003

I was blown away by this story. The world and characters this bard has created are magnificiant. This is a must read story! It has everything..love, action, humour and alot of magic..Loved it! Keep up the good work Tas! - elfcat253  Apr 22nd, 2003

I remember reading The Return a few months ago...I loved it then and loved it even more the -third- time around! Strong characters, good plot and excellent writing! Tas is a wonderful storyteller! - ~gail  Apr 21st, 2003

I enjoyed this story so much, I saved it to re-read later. There is romance, action, and humor. I would love to read more stories set in this world. - jh  Apr 18th, 2003

An 8 year old pirate child loses her roots and grows up as an outcast. One day, with the help of her best friend, she starts her search to find out who she really is. Will she find what she has been looking for all her life? Will all the blanks in her memory dissapear after more than 15 years? Or will she remain lost forever...

A day in the life of beautiful, syndicated sci-fi actress Carcen Ashe; a woman doomed to attend a small town fan convention and to have some of her most tragic flaws and mistakes tear her apart.

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #2 in 2003, #44 on 2002.
Inspired the movie 'You've Got Mail,' this finished work is a fine romance.

An fantastic read for all, but wanted to slap both of them at one stage or another. - LuvTigger71  May 31st, 2004

This is an extremely well written story, which made the sweet plot even more enjoyable for reading. I can't wait to read more from this author. - Dimples  Nov 21st, 2003

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Well-written story, but frankly it was just plain mean after a while. I wanted to smack Jack for stringing along Sonny. I wanted to smack Sonny for being willfully stupid and cheating on her girlfriend with someone she'd never even met face to face. I kept wondering if someone really could be that naive.

I just couldn't wait to finish it to see how much more stupid Sonny was going to get. Not to mention how long it would take Sonny to grow up and see that Jack put her out of business on purpose. She's supposed to forgive & forget and then fall in love with her after that? I know this is fiction, but really!
- Anonymous  Nov 20th, 2003

This is my first time commenting on a story and all I can say is, what an absolute awsome story!!! Not since the Billie and Cat series by KD Bard has a story and its characters, totally captured me. It kept me glued to my PC for hours. I have never seen the movie, but I am betting that Ambrosia's rendition blows the movie away. I would pay great money to see this one in production. I am hoping to see a series of stories based on all of the characters. - Anonymous  Nov 4th, 2003

outstanding, great story,much better than the movie that it inspired, sequel, sequel, sequel.......loved the interplay between the major an minor parts, a very good and enjoyabe read, MORE PLEASE! - dusty  Oct 24th, 2003

This story is one of my favs. Had me captivated from the beginning. I love her work and would highly recommend this fantastic novel to all readers. - Clare  Jun 24th, 2003

A refreshing tale with delightful twists. I really enjoyed this story and will be reading more from this author. - Meg  Jun 23rd, 2003

Not only does she have great taste in music but, she writes too! This romantic story is very well written and it was a lovely treat for this very warm afternoon. Keep up the good work and write-on! - nlw  Jun 12th, 2003

This is a very well written and interesting story, I love the characters but what I would like to know is when the next update is. - Marian  Jan 2nd, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

I have been waiting a long time for Katia to bring the girls out again. This vignette was hot. To see these two share in a new experience was very exciting. This is a must read. - Strongsouljah  May 1st, 2004

In this tale, Talia has a pair of tickets to a musical. The night of the show her g/f begs off once again. A little more than irked, she goes alone. When she finds someone is sitting in one of her reserved seats, she more than makes up for the ex-g/f's absence.

Honors/Awards: 2002 Story Of The Year.  Perennial Favorite Award: #54 in 2003, #1 in 2002.  Top-25 #1. 
FBI Director Jericho Chamaune has a hobby of trying to solve the cases of missing women dating back ten years of more. One day her assistant director Stan gives her yet another folder of a missing woman. Like several others, she is a college student from Texas. In all the time she has been working the case, they have yet to find any sign of the missing women. When she placed the picture of the latest missing young woman on her wall, she could not tear her eyes away from the green eyes looking back at her. One day a friend working at the nearby hospital calls her. A woman has been found lying beside a road and brought to the emergency room for treatment. At her first sight of the woman's haunted green eyes, Jericho knows that this is the latest missing woman.

I must say that this story is one of her best. I loved it so much I have it bookmarked. - Anonymous  May 16th, 2003

I’ve just ‘discovered’ Larisa’s stories. Buried Prejudices was fantastic, and I wan’t more, more, more!!!! - Anonymous  Dec 11th, 2002

As with all of Larisa's stories, she grabs your undivided attention at the onset and you find you can't stop until the last sentence has been read. All her stories contain the standard beginning, middle, and end...but in between, they're packed with enough action and romance to make your reading a delighful pleasure. - ~M~  Jun 17th, 2002

I thoroughly enjoyed Buried Prejudices and the rest of your stories. I don't know why I've never read them before, but each new story is like a fine wine - to be savored. - Judy  Jun 13th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Two women journey into lust and love in a most unusual place and a not so simple word game teaches them the importance of fairplay and sacrifice.

loved it, getting ready to wet my appetite with some more saggio. and i hope to see some more from brooke & dana. - decoote  Sep 26th, 2004

Interesting plot and very likeable characters make a Great story! When can we have some more? - Sherry  Sep 25th, 2004

I loved this story! And and and and . . . I hope you are not finished with it! ;) - Alfie  Sep 21st, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #47 in 2003.
Coming back from visiting her girlfriend, Ashley Carver, Maryland State Trooper # 1153, ends up rescuing Katia Danforth, college student in a strange and potentially situation om the road. Uncharacteristically, Ashley takes Katia home with her, and finds she's fallen into quite a strange friendship. Where will it lead? You'll have to keep reading...

I am still waiting for more....hurry!!!!! - taz  Mar 23rd, 2004

Okay, so here I was, looking for somethin' to read when I happen upon this story. Now, I get kinda picky at what story I want to read. But once I read the first chapter, I got hooked. I'm going mad,waiting AND wanting to know what happens next. This story is absofreakinlutely, positively, in all honesty GREAT!!! Need I say more? - xluvr  Jan 29th, 2004

great, please finish must find out what happens - Anonymous  Jan 22nd, 2004

Lonnie Bestrolie had been entertaining passengers on the galactic cruise liners for 19 years. and she enjoyed it. By keeping a tight control of her privacy, she avoided stardom and unwanted publicity. So why on her 20th year, would she accept a deal to end her contract two years early just to nursemaid a fallen diva?

This is a great story! Enjoyed this one very much. I hope for a sequel soon. - L'Nara  Oct 13th, 2004

just finished but didn't want it to end...can't wait for the sequel.. - dodie  Sep 14th, 2004

Just finished reading this wonderful story, and hope J.A. Bard is planning a sequel ! - gail  Sep 4th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #12 in 2003.
Terri Bledsoe is very angry when Anthony Leone leaves, leaving her very pregnant. As a last resort, she visits Noemí Leone, the head of Leone Pasta Enterprises. When Noemí learns of her brother's misdeed, she offers a helping hand. Follow this chronicle of Noemí as she moves from an alcoholic haze and into a friendship that could give her life more meaning.

This comment contains spoilers.
I found the author's site and story by chance a couple of years ago, before she started posting here.
The basic premise is tangled - Noemi takes on the role of carer for her brother's ex-gf who is pregnant with his child. This story could have fallen apart in so many ways but the writer forges strongly ahead with every chapter. The focus and thread of the story is firm. There are sub-plots shoring the main couple nicely. The supporting characters are interesting; ranging from sleazy, benign, righteous to warm, funny and sexy.
Best of all (!), is the tortured soul herself, Noemi. Her character resounds with angst, anger, power, sadness and is oh, so very sexy. In my view, the earlier version of this story was much more powerful in it's rawness and sensuality but the revision has smoothed out some edges and added more to the surroundings. Personally, I think it detracts a little from Noemi's edgy characterisation but the story still remains one of my favourites.
The story moves very quickly from the start, we feel the restrained primality of Noemi and we learn about her family and personal demons. We are easily caught up in her activities and the story actually picks up heat the further it runs (note: glacier warning!). Terri is her catalyst for healing and loving again and her best friend's romance deserves a separate story of it's own.
Noemi is on my personal Tops list, I pull it for a good angsty, dramatic and erotic romance.

Brilliant work, Ms Ruiz. - E  Sep 23rd, 2004

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I totally loved this story!! Katia N. Ruiz did a BEAUTIFUL job in this story. Battle between lost love and finds in totally different person. I loved how Noemi endure the loss of her beloved, find Terri, a lonesome person carry the baby of her bastard brother. How they both over came their agruement; their will of their own lives, and stands together as one. How they have friends, family that truely loved them.
I loved how close Noemi's mother and father are close to one another, and her best friend, Victoria. She stand by for her friend, Noemi, and guide her to her trouble times. I'm crossing my fingers for the next seaqual to this exciting story.
Thanks Katia, for your for love of writing. Keep it up. - Bay  Dec 13th, 2003

I owe this author an apology for when I first saw the word "revision" and the amount (55) of additional pages, I knew she'd ruined a perfectly good story. My bad. Ms. Ruiz, you have turned a good story into a great one. - Kaye  Mar 4th, 2003

What can one say...? It was and is a great story.
When will the sequel be posted?
I am egerly wating for next part - SammyLee  Feb 23rd, 2003

Katia, I could not stop reading your incredibly well told story until i was done...your character development...your insights into the torment and pain of our hero was wonderful...i hope you don't end it here...I WANT A WEDDING..MAYBE THEY CAN HAVE ANOTHER CHILD...LOL...
You are an extremely talented writer, and i look forward to looking at more of your work. Cat
stolenhalogirl@aol.com - Cathy  Jan 24th, 2003

This is the 2nd story I've read by this talented bard and it's a great story with just the right mix of drama, angst and love. I love a story with well written secondary characters and this author has done that and more with "Noemi." Well written and well done. - Kay  Dec 26th, 2002

An absolute fabulous work of art, and yes, I mean art. The way Ms. Ruiz described the events in this story is amazing. She gave in-depth detail of the surroundings, giving the reader a clear picture, almost as if one was watching a movie. Once I started reading the story, I couldn’t stop. In some parts, I was on the edge of my chair, chewing my nails. The best story I have read in a very long time.
- Anonymous  Oct 27th, 2002

Just wanted to give a comment on my favorite story, Noemi. Folks this is a wonderful story about two women coming together through adversity. One realizing that she can love again, and the other realizing that she is worthy to be loved. I have read the story 'numerous', ok over 20 times and I love it more each time I read it. You should read this story, and be sure to let Katia know what you think. - Tonya Coley  Oct 15th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
PWP. Sandy has an interview. Stress reaction she becomes a slight basket case. Not to worry. A beautiful woman flirts with her in the elevator to the point of distraction. The stranger turns out to be Charlie, her interviewer. This is the 'How To' on being successful in an Interview. Step-by-step the rules are always the same. Just listen to your heart and wait for the results.

Life was just as the Honorable Dr. Reagan Elizabeth Charleston wanted it. She was 30-something, well off and a Judge. All was right with the world until a minor fender with a sweet, young, blonde student.

What’s the connection between drug dealers, a missing woman, council business, Welsh architecture and Sleeping Beauty? Striker might have made a connection between two of them... But she came to London to forget and to hide... and to seek. She had other riddles to solve. But an encounter at a hospital’s Accident & Emergency department turns her priorities, her life and her heart upside down.

We meet Morien and Striker who will fall in love as will the readers with these two opposites. Guess which is tall & blue eyed! A story that is kind of sweet, but has danger, flight, bad guys, mystery all entwined with a soulmate love tale with some pitfalls. Dialogue is really good and descriptions of places, feelings and actions are so full of depth that you feel like a part of it. Hated to see it end & hope Devize writes a sequel. I miss Morien & Striker. - Sandy  Jul 7th, 2004

i just finsed reading your story man it was great hope to more and soon - Anonymous  Jul 6th, 2004

Easily one of the best ubers I have ever read. Well written, great plot, lots of tension (of all kinds) and great character development. - Anonymous  Jun 29th, 2004

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Brilliant! This is an absolute corker of a story. I'm giving it 6.5 stars. Devize has written an astounding tale which has a great whodunitcatchthebadguys plot interspersed with a strong romantic thread and replete with angst.

The story will hook you and the revealing gems about our heroines will knock your socks off. Devize also kept me in a constant state of arousal by her teasers.

This is a hot one, folks. It has everything in an explosive fairytale romance for our uber couple. - E  Jun 11th, 2004

This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have read in quite a while. Between the bad guys, a missing person, drugs, and other mysterious happenings, you will find a cleverly crafted story built around 2 characters you will fall in love with as you watch them fall in love with each other. This author uses her words to create visions that dance in your heart and paint for your soul. You will want to visit where these girls go, cheer for them, cry & sigh as their relationship grows and they come face to face with their fears, real or imagined. Bumpy roads, tears, and a sweet tenderness as well as some humor. The scenery is gorgeous and when words can create that in your mind, you gotta love this story and the creativity of this writers efforts. Book of the month? Maybe, but it is definitely my choice for Chocolate of the Month between two covers. - O Ger  Jun 7th, 2004

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This story was AWESOME!!! A MUST READ for all! It puts together just the right amount of mystery, danger and romance all rolled up in one. Her characters draw you in straight away. It is about a woman trying to find someone. She searches high and low but realizes her search ends where it began with finding herself.
I can't tell you enough how good this story is. Check it out for yourself. :o) - Caden  Jun 7th, 2004

This is the kind of story that will keep DS Bauden on bookshelves for years to come. It has emotion, passion, mystery, suspense, revenge - good girls, bad girls - everything you could want. It's very well written and the revised edition shows great attention to detail in developing these characters. Di has done a wonderful job of making Sydney more Australian. She's made the story significantly longer and the added material makes the story more complete. In all honesty, the revisions Di has made to this story have turned Nurturing Souls from my least favorite of her books to one I will now eagerly and wholeheartedly recommend. - Anonymous  Jul 21st, 2004

Absolutely wonderful story. I will be buying this book ASAP. Mach 1 to this story, people. Highly recommended! - Kacie  Jul 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #24 in 2003.  Top-25 #1. 

I have been a KG MacGregor fan since the Shaken/Stirred series and I have got to say her stories just keep getting better and better!!! Getting it Right is fabulous!!! The romantic tension KG builds keeps you on the edge of your seat and the chemistry between Paula and Wynne is positively electric!!! Well worth the read and then some!!! Great job, KG!!! - Michelle  Sep 16th, 2003

O-MA-GAWD. I started reading this and got a kidney stone and still wanted to read. Okay the pain kept me from it. But my mind was wrapped up in the drama. (ok in unison-"freak!") This the first story I have read by KG MacGregor and I am very impressed with the GOOD, HIGH QUALITY, SUBTLE writing and storytelling. My favorite part is the little chapter end comments. RUH ROO is right! I will check in again after I have read every story posted. I highly recommend this authors work. - nicky in durham  Aug 25th, 2003

Here's an unusual outing: a Xena/Battlestar Galactica crossover which borrows from the most current Battlestar Galactica story recently shown in Dec. 2003.

I didn't know I could fall for that story but that's exactly what happened and now I BEG YOU AJ Marks to finish it!! - aquariusG  Jun 20th, 2004
(Story is now complete.)

I love this beautiful and romantic story. I enjoyed reading this. Please write more of those stories. I like it very much!!!!!
Thanks. - Susan  Nov 2nd, 2004

I love this story! It is so romantic and sweet! And the sequel "Honey,Honey...Be My Valentine!" is awesome! Really great job Fiur and Vlamme! Keep going!!! - Diane  Jul 23rd, 2004

Absolutely fabulous story and a must read. Hope there is a follow-up. - Claire  Jul 21st, 2004

"All I Want For CHristmas" is a fabulous Christmas tale, and something totally different from these two bards. What a great Christmas surprize!!! C'mon...open it up and see what's inside...you'll be glad you did, promise!!! Merry Christmas and the very best to all for the New Year!!! - Michelle  Dec 23rd, 2003

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #68 in 2003, #4 in 2002.  Top-25 #1. 
Detective Xepher Sallano, trying to solve what appear to be serial murders, keeps running into dead ends...literally. Then the Medical Examiner dies in the midst of the inverstigation, and his replacement is makes Sallano see red. It's hate at first sight for Chief Medical Examiner Brianna Meadows, too. Or is it? As the murders get more gruesome, Detective and ME find themselves involved...in more ways than one. This is another of Larisas' gripping tales with unconventional characters, laughs, love and gore, that will keep you spellbound.

I agree, there is gore galore but I like a story with grit so I was interested right away. I just read it in it's entirety, it's simply wonderful. I can see a Bone Collector 2 with Angelina here ... or is that wishful thinking? It would be a shame if you bypassed it simply because the graphic scenes may disturb you for it's got one of my highest ticks of approval. - Corbeau's Voyager  Dec 1st, 2003

Xepher? Guess those "X" names are kinda hard to come by, huh? Once I got past that, and the fact that parts of it are REALLY gory, I quite enjoyed it. - Mich  Sep 14th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Nicky McCloud’s goal is to hike the Pacific Crest Trail, a journey that should take her five months. Along the way, she meets Jay Reisman. Is Jay whom she professes to be or will she become the cause of Nicky’s nightmares?

All I can say is, there had better be a sequel!!! Great storytelling. Thanks! - sapphie  Dec 17th, 2004

This is a story that will trap you and then drop you from a great height emotionally, so sit back and hold on. Just one question, will there be a sequel. - LuvTigger71  Dec 16th, 2004

The journey is brilliantly described - E  Dec 8th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #86 in 2003, #11 in 2002.
In this romantic Uber, Rosie had only been at the job for a very short time and she was doing well as junior in accountant in the prestigious accounting firm. In prior positions she always fit in easily with most of the staff. This time she felt so alone. It was getting to be a desperate situation and Rosie really had no idea how to handle it any more. In steps a tall, dark-haired stanger with warm blue eyes whom she meets at Starbucks, who just happens to be the one person that could help.

I think this a wonderful story, its nice and twisty sort of a mystery with a sweet romance in the center of it. I loved it! Thank you. - Anonymous  Sep 16th, 2004

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Wow! Loved this romantic story. I think that the compassion that Robin had for Rosie was beautiful. I wish I had someone swoop in and rescue me like that. - Toddie  Apr 27th, 2004

I loved this romantic story. It is one that you never knew what was going to happen next and are surprised by what does. I really loved the charachters they lead you on a gentle fun adventure! - Petra  Oct 13th, 2003

I started this story just because I wanted a sweet love story. It is but I was caught up in the twists and surprises too. I loved the charachters and felt very much a part of the action. I was really charmed by this tale. - Yvette  Mar 11th, 2003

I love this story. It seems to go one way and then all of the sudden it goes another. I also adored the two main charachters. It gave me what I wanted a wonderful way to relax after a hard days work. Thanks Ri - Janet  Jan 15th, 2003

this was such a lovely romantic story. I love how sweet the charachters are and I couldn't wait to find out how the story ended. It was such fun ending I hope Ri writes more of it - Pip  Sep 27th, 2002

A muggy spring day in Michigan unleashes a fury of tornados. Two women are in the path of one of them: volunteer firefighter Gable McCoy and teacher Erin Richards.

This is by far the best of Kim Baldwin's work. The action scenes are right out of the movies. I felt the tension as the leads waited out the dark night in the tornado's aftermath. But it was the tension between Erin and Gable that stayed with me for days after I read the story. The sexual tension kept me on pins and needles! It hit way to close to home!
For anyone who has wondered if their "good friend" feels the same way they do... this story will bring back wonderful memories.
Thanks Kim,
- L. Karol  Aug 6th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Sometimes when you need help, it may come as a surprise who you get.

I've enjoyed Panter's Pride very much, and am waiting on the next installment. My compliments to the author and the imagination behind the story. - Melinda  Sep 16th, 2004

this is a truly fantastic story...well written.....had me hooked from the very first chapter..........kept me on the edge of my seat.......hasn't disappointed me yet...can't wait for more....... - Christi  Jul 20th, 2004

Original!!! Truly cannot wait for more. - Anonymous  Jul 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #23 in 2003, #69 in 2002.
Desiree Love had a hectic day, however this claim is probably a total understatement. First of all, she slept late, then she was caught in bumper to bumper traffic on the freeway, whereas it would usually move along smoothly, because she left early enough. Since there was a traffic jam, Desiree ended up almost being two and half-hours late, which her boss berated her for. Desiree, known for being a rather patient person most of the time, acted the complete opposite then. Next thing you know, she was packing her belongings...Then she found out her boyfriend had found someone else...Could it get any worse? Later that night, out to get ice cream, a cold barrel is put to her head and she's told to drive. Things might have gotten worse...maaaybe...but those blue eyes were electric! (Originally begun posting April 2002 - Revised May 2003)

A brilliant story, can't wait for the next installments to be written, when you read this story make sure you are sitting comfortably in a nice comfy chair, because you will not want to move until you have finished it. - LuvTigger71  Jun 2nd, 2004

I meant this story (Hostage of the Heart). I need some cafeine, please. - ip_reverso  Mar 20th, 2003

This was a great story. I'm waiting for the rest, hopefully not in vain. - Alex  Mar 18th, 2003

This was a story that made you laugh and cry! It's an excellent story about finding innocence in the one you love. - Jenni  Nov 15th, 2002

Dianthe Xavier, who joined the National Park Service several months following her leaving the military, was now at Drango Gap Wildlife Corridor as the new Law Enforcement pilot ranger. The tall dark amazon meets Meredith Murphy, wildlife biologist and ranger, almost immediately upon arrival, as Meri's spare cabin would be her home for a while. The chemistry between the two does not take much waiting, and the trouble that follows both is inevitable in this tale of romance, adventure and danger.

I loved this awesome story and can not wait for book 2 thanks RangerLiz for sharing your talent with all of us - Kat  Sep 17th, 2004

This is the first book of a two part series. Erin McEnzie is a rookie homicide detective who gets asked to go in undercover to help solve a serial murder case. Her target is the elusive and dangerously gorgeous Elizabeth Adams. She's quickly in over her head as her long buried attraction to women begins to surface and at the hands of a suspected killer.

Ok , so I stayed up late and read this because I just had to see what happened. Nice job !!!! - Shaybe  Sep 1st, 2004

This story is absolutely good. The characters seem real and the plot kept me reading well into the night. Believe me when I say you have to read this story because you will hooked from the first word to the last. I highly recommend this to everyone. Just when you think you figured it out, something else happens and that is what kept me reading. Can't wait to read the sequel. - Meg  Aug 30th, 2004

Wow, this story is just amazing. And I think the scene between Erin and Liz is the hottest I've ever read! I'm really looking forward to the sequel and how things turn out. Does anybody else wish that Erin and Liz end up together?? - Anonymous  Aug 30th, 2004

An intriguing series. The first story had me vaccilating between the 3 main characters and the sequel looks promising too. Excellent story. - E  Aug 15th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
The ER Chief Besom had two choices - either fire Dr. Shay Gerard, whom he'd just heard the umpteenth complaint against or turn it over to the one person who could find out the deepest secrets of a spy. Enter Pez - tall, long dark hair and eyes that could pierce into your very soul...and Chief of Surgery. Can her unorthodox ways help her help Shay? What...who is she afraid of? Read on and find out, although somewhat graphic, this is yet another romp in the warped world of Larisa that will make you laugh and cry.

I really liked this story. The plot was awesome and the characters didn't get carried away. [wink. wink. poke. poke. nudge. nudge.]There weren't too many parts I wasn't allowed to read.
Good use of words, but not too complicated to read. My favorite line was "Can I get a wheelie chair for a frozen tater tot?"

PS I wish you would write more stories without the characters getting 'carried away'. - Nanaabelle's Grandson  Aug 15th, 2003

it doesn't need comments... READ this story !! Larisa, you're one of the best bards !! - laurence  Jul 31st, 2003

I must say I really do enjoy Larisa's stories very much. She has the ability to draw the reader into her story and keep them riveted to the screen. That being said I have but one criticism. The main characters are usually very likable and believable, but then the two goofy friends are always thrown in and they just completely detract from the story. I can't help but find them irritating and have to roll my eyes at their antics. I mean come on they don't act at all like real people do (well at least any people I have EVER met in my life). I personally enjoy being able to relate to the characers and they are simply impossible to relate to. This is just a personal opinion, of course. I would like to see Larisa turn her considerable talents towards writing something with more depth and emotion rather than finding new outrageous situations to throw these two annoying creatures into. - Peg  Jul 12th, 2003

IMHO I believe this is one of her best. - Amanda  Mar 16th, 2003

Larisa has found the formula that works everytime...I love her stories! Please keep them coming!!!! - LW  Oct 5th, 2002

After wobbling a little with her last couple of stories, Larissa is back! "The Ice Princess" is well written, no lags or jags, just the author at her best. I loved the pez dispenser; it brought back childhood memories and a hankering for one of those solid, pure sugar treats that made me wired and able to run faster than anyone else. ;) Thanks and all that jazz to the author for an all-around good read.
- Kay  Oct 3rd, 2002

Just finished reading and I really enjoyed it...hilarious! Touching, too! - L  Sep 27th, 2002

Carol Barngate was in her fifties wanting nothing more than to live out her life basking in the glow of family and friends. For her, life had been good both personally and professionally. She considered herself happy until an innocuous meeting started her on a journey to self discovery that she never thought possible

sequel, sequel, sequel, PLZ
This is a must read story. - LuvTigger  Sep 29th, 2004

Is there going to be a sequel???? - SSH  Sep 23rd, 2004

What a Totally Awesome Story - Well Written - I Have Read It Over and Over and Over!! This is a Must Read for Everyone! - SSH  Sep 23rd, 2004

A tale of two women so caught up in their careers and family, they have forgotten what it is like to be lovers, at least until one of them decides to do something about it. Plotting a night of seduction, Carrie takes Jess on a journey of previously unexpressed desires, proving that even after a decade of marriage, there can still be some surprises.

Carly Griffin is home for a visit with her folks after years of being away from the home town where she never thought she had a future. Years of living overseas have certainly changed her views of the town, which is surprising to her to say the least. But not as surprising as meeting up with Justine Hall, who might just be what Carly never thought she was looking for.

Kate Ryan is a house builder with a past and Amy is a Ingram is a talented graphic designer. While out riding, Amy spots Kate and they strike up a conversation, and there a friendhip begins, which will embroul the two in each others's lives and be the saving grace for both fo them.

I really enjoyed this story. There are times when you want to just read a story about a romance... without misunderstandings and slapstick. There was some serious drama and a bit of 'thriller' built in, but just enough. My one critique would be that some of the secondary characters were sacrificed for the 'drama' quotient. the family drama was actually just as interesting and there were a few holes left in it in light of the physical drama. It's like the story took off in a different direction than where the focus began. But all in all... totally enjoyable and a 'straight on 'til morning' read. - RoxyTrek  Mar 9th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #36 in 2002.  Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this beautifully romantic Uber by Colleen, Jamie Sheridan, a tall dark beauty who is a proof-reader by day and a limo driver by night, has just begun trying to get on with her life after a somewhat shady past, when she decides to accept her co-worker's invitation for a get-together at her house. There, Jamie meets someone who might just make all the difference…Erin Casey. Erin is Bridgett's younger sister, a beautiful blonde writer blinded in an accident, who seems to 'see' into Jamies' very soul. Follow this sweet and moving tale as their relationship develops, moving past emotional baggage and adversity. This is a story not to miss!

Absolutely wonderful. Do not miss this story. Just perfection. - Kayryn  Sep 24th, 2004

this story is great it has every kind of story there is i hope more will come from Colleen - Krysta  Dec 17th, 2003

This is one of the best stories I have ever read !! I was captivated from the first chapter !! I would recommed it to everybody !! - AJ  Aug 28th, 2002

Excellent story. I found it to be very touching. The characters will touch your heart immediately and the reader will find herself submerged into their lives. - Anonymous  Jun 5th, 2002

One of the best stories I've ever read. Simply beautiful. - Anonymous  Apr 29th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Evan Marlow contemplates the changes in her life, mostly brought about by love, Lisa...

What a sweet story, crafted like a rose unfurling slowly revealing itself to the delight of all. Very well written - Lari  Feb 25th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #50 in 2003.  Top-25 #1. 
Dr. Goran Pickens, World Health Organization, is being assigned to West Virginia and along with a Security Specialist, something she's not thrilled about. She's even less thrilled upon meeting Special Agent Raith Bullshanks of the United Nations Special Security Division. The tall dark-headed woman rubs the blonde doctor the wrong way, literally, from the first second they meet. But things will change, as this Appalachia adventure will develop into something unexpected for all involved and insanity will run rampant with many twists in this Larisa romp that written for the 'Intrepid Challenge.'

i don't feel hill jack conspiracy is one of her better stories but it is still a good one... then again all of her other stories are great, fantastic, MAGNEFICO! lol so u really can't complain at all.. if you've read this try to read the other stories done by her. you will NEVER ever regret it! i've read them a gazillion times over and they still capture me and pull me in! u rock larisa! - Anonymous  Feb 9th, 2004

Hilljack Conspiracy by Larisa

Loved the twists and turns this tale took! I loved how she placed them in the U.S. instead of a third world country! I laughed, I cried, and basically had a great time reading this! - Intrepid Judge2  Jan 3rd, 2004

Hill Jack Conspiracy….By Larisa

Ever meet Secret Squirrel or a femme version of Dr.Who? Well neither had I before reading this entertaining story. Anyone that likes Larisa’s adventures is sure to love this one.
It has whit charm and humor that take you on a tummy crunching exercise while reading it.
It measures up good and has all the pre-stated challenge statements in them.
We are truly taken for a ride with this story to locations I never had visited before. We get to follow two characters that truly are a discovery all in themselves. Though this story is long it does not feel that way when you have gotten into it, and when you reach the final line, you wish there was more to come. - Intrepid judge1  Jan 3rd, 2004

Hill Jack Conspiracy….By Larisa

Truly a hilarious adventure.
This story is one of the funniest pieces I have read in a long while. From the chicken dance to a squirrel tattoo…just out of this world funny.
My favorite line out of the whole story was.. “I’m a Pervert not a fighter.” I laughed my ass off. - Intrepid Judge3  Jan 3rd, 2004

"Hill Jack Conspiracy" is another winner from Larisa! Absolutely hilarious, and full of twists and turns, too! Thanks, Larisa...a great big, fat present for us, and just in time for Christmas, too! You rock! - Michelle  Dec 18th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #8 in 2003
Bowing to pressure from her family Dr. Kimberly Donovan returns to Detroit after completing her residency. Her life quickly goes down in flames. Falsely accused of molesting a patient and betrayed by her closeted lover, Kim flees to California hoping for a fresh start at a new hospital. She finds more than she bargained for at LA Metropolitan.

Well, I always wondered what happened to Kim after that fiasco with Kerry in the ER series. Now I know! Thanks R. Nolan. You picked it up and made it into a story, giving Kim a place she deserves. - letterwolf  Mar 14th, 2004

An excellent read. I didn't want to stop reading it. The main characters are fully realized and believable. Kim's ability to help Jess face her past and move beyond it was wonderful. Keep it up. I look forward to reading the sequel. Great job, R Nolan! - Kinsey  Oct 30th, 2003

One of the best ever. Dont You miss it. - Keegan Conner  Sep 19th, 2003

I really enjoyed this nice romantic tale. I loved the relationship between the lead charachers and I loved the end. I can't wait to read the sequel. - Ri  Sep 9th, 2003

Whoa!!! A pleasantly satisfying romantic tale that will delight anyone's taste for a great afternoon or evening of reading entertainment. Go ahead and read "LA Metropolitan". I'm willing to bet you'll like it. I certainly did. Thank you, R. Nolan. Now, next on my reading agenda for tonight...the sequel..."In A Heartbeat". It's a great day, or should I say, night for reading! - //WA  Sep 6th, 2003

Standard piece of uber for a lazy sunday morning, good dose of soppiness and a pinch of angst. Nice portrayl of the relationship between these two women and I did enjoy the subtle moral of the tale in the end. - Stephanie  Apr 12th, 2003

Overall, a very good story. A little rushed in places, but very good. I'll be on the look out for more from this author. - SBerry  Apr 12th, 2003

Love in Photographs is and excellent read. I highly resommend it to those looking for a good read. Once you start, you won't want to put it down...even if it's 4 o'clock in the morning and you're bleary eyed and running on caffine... - Michelle  May 29th, 2003

What a story! Talk about a rollercoaster ride! I loved it! Everyone should read this one. - Anonymous  Mar 31st, 2003

This is a heart wrenching tale. Keeps you captivated the whole way through. Great job by the author and I do hope there is more to this saga. Makes you laugh and makes you cry. I'd read it over and over again. Thanks for endulging our sweet tooth for good fiction. - Caden  Mar 7th, 2003

Great story! I loved every bit! The characters were so well done! I can't wait to read the follow up piece! - Anonymous  Mar 5th, 2003

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Oops! I apologize, I didn't know my comments were spoilers. Is there a way for you to place them under that category (and also delete this message)? Thanks and if I write anything else on your website I'll know for the next time. ;) - Kaye  Jan 3rd, 2003

It is my opinion that this is absolutely the best piece from this author to date. The relationship between the main characters as well as the subplots and secondary relationships are well-developed. Torrance Whitfield is an excellent character sketch. You can tell this character is full of compassion and love, making her truly liekable even when her flaws are brought to light. As for the other main character, Helen, she is sophisticated and open. From the moment these two come together, you can tell something is going to happen, and the rollercoaster ride is fabulous. In addition September 11, 2001 is dealt with in a sensitive manner. The passage is emotional and trying on the characters, but the way it was written was well-constructed, and I give kudos to the author for taking on the challenge. If you read only one piece by Alex Tryst, this is the one you should read. - Anonymous  Jan 3rd, 2003

IMO this is one of the author's best works. Some of her other stories give a definite uneasiness (enough to where I skip to the part where the child-woman is finally of legal age) with their may/pre-december themes. With "Love In Photographs" Ms. Tryst has perfected her love of the older woman/younger woman genre, especially since this younger character isn't a high school, sapphic, Lolita. ;) There's also a part that deals with 9-11 but the author is kind enough to forewarn her readers. Great story. - Kaye  Jan 2nd, 2003

" Love in Photographs" A great story once you start reading you won't want to stop! - Anonymous  Dec 23rd, 2002

Previously titled "Strangers Until We Meet," rewritten and longer. Agent Alexandra Adison's investigation into the disappearance of three women leads her to a Northern California town, Sunrise. What she found had her supervisor giving her a new assignment, to go undercover and monitor a group of outlaws that chose Sunrise as their home base. It took two years for SID, the law enforcement agency she worked for, to set up the right situation that will bring four important people to Sunrise, and one of them was a civilian who agreed to be the catalyst that will bring three dangerous men together. When it is time to put the bait in the trap, Adison has doubt in herself and fears that SID would be willing to sacrifice the civilian, whom she falls in love with.

"The acts of the one for the good of the many." This is the motto first adopted by the Amazons centuries ago and still upheld by the warriors of current day Amazonia. In "Amazonia - Book One," we meet Princess Bebo of Leon as she sets off on her first diplomatic mission on behalf of her mother, Queen Audrey. On a cold day in Washington D.C. the tall warrior finds her path in the soft eyes of Annie Paddio. The only problem is, Annie is already committed to someone else.<br> <br>"Amazonia - Book One" brings to life a modern day warrior and the quest for her destiny. Join in the adventure as the ancient world of the Amazons is brought to life in the 21st century.

Love this author's writing and this story is no exception, although it had my eyes crossing at the end trying to keep up with who was who! That part could have been a bit clearer or maybe it was just muddled to my feeble brain. One thing's certain and that is I will always read her stories because I know I'm clicking on something truly original, with just the right amount of humour and erotica. - Femmester  Dec 9th, 2004

I have read every piece in the Ali Vali collection, this one all but tops the bunch. It is wonderful, captivating, and I stayed up all night reading it - I just couldn't stop. I can't wait for Book 2 - and I hope it won't be too long of a wait! - Laura  Dec 2nd, 2004

This is a simply wonderful tale, I was absolutely captivated by it from start to finish. I have read all the works by this author and this story really stands out. Can't wait for Book 2! - Ang  Nov 20th, 2004

I don't think there is a story that Ms. Valdivia has written that hasn't been excellent. The way she tells her stories puts her characters right there in your mind to see and hear and feel as they do, and everytime i go back and visit them, they seem more alive then ever. Now she gives us Amazonia, and all i can think to say is. My dear Ali if i beg and plead and wish really really hard do you think you can actually make this island of Amazonia a real place, because if you can i know it would be overpopulated in a day. Your bardic "voice" is an amazing gift. Thank you for sharing.
- Scotti  May 17th, 2004

Another wonderful addition to the Ali Vali collection. Romantic and heroic and all the things fairytales are supposed to be. The fact that this one takes place during modern times just adds to the wonder and excitement. A must, MUST read for all. - Roxy  May 9th, 2004

WOW!!! Once I got started, I couldn't stop! I was up all night reading this wonderful, enthralling story. Another masterpiece from an outstanding author. Beautifully written and engaging, full of twists and turns, a definate classic. Awesome!! - Peaches  May 6th, 2004

Once again, Ms. Valdivia has given us one of her enthralling tales. Like every other piece she has given us out here, she fills our time living the amazing the lives of her intriguing characters taking us away from our mundane lives. As with every other story of hers I have read, I was unable to stop until I have read every word, and ended up all night. It's like giving steak to a starving person. I find her stories original and refreshingly well written, her characters seem to come to life for the reader and you find yourself deeply involved with each of them. I hope Ali will see her way clear to give us more of this wondrous world of Amazonia, and its fascinating citizens. - Alex P  May 5th, 2004

Olympic medalists, Jill and Christian, desperately seek to get Jill back to the Olympics after she loses her lover and ice skating partner of six years. In pursuit of trying to find another teammate, they recognize sometimes the best solution is right at home. With the games mere months away, more the one obstacle stands in Jill's way!

Cam Brusard was the stuff of jailhouse legends. She was a loner from day one, avoiding any affiliation with the gangs that flourished in the prison environment. She earned her respect the hard way, by taking down one of the most dangerous women when she was first incarcerated. Physically, she was an impressive 6'1" in her sock feet, with a narrow waist and broad shoulders. Sculptured muscles that a body builder would envy, she had earned them after spending hours on the free weights in the prison gym..." So, what could possibly cause a woman of ice to melt? Cam never let anyone get close to her heart... no one that is until Cheryl Killian.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
While on vacation two friends meet a mysterious hitch hiker who turns life as they know it into a flurry of confusion and sexual awakening. This dark-haired stranger is brash and undeniable, but who will fall victim to her charms? And is she all that she seems? One of them is determined to find out, but the price of the truth may be more than any of them can bear.

This is the sequel to Roadkill.

Wonderful! Thank you. :-) I wish Alex and Sydney a long and happy life together. - Sarah  Dec 2nd, 2004

well i JUST readed all your work man all i can say is i hope there will be more pplease write more thanks
kahlan - kahlan rahl  Jan 27th, 2004

This is a fabulous story. I can't wait for the next part. This has the making of a fantastic novel. - purplehawke  May 25th, 2004

Fabulous!!! Please...keep going! - Anonymous  Jan 20th, 2004

A business tycoon on a mission and Las Vegas show girl that has some how managed to retain some of her innocence - the potential for this story is enormous! Hope to see more of it soon! - GW  Jan 20th, 2004

T, my one an only Princess! I am glad you took the advice and continued to write! For theres nothing more pleasing then readin a new one from you! There is nothing ya cant write! keep up the good work and will there be more of this one sometime soon! - Stud  May 20th, 2004

T. Thanks again for a great humanistic story with believeable characters. There is nothing more appreciated than a wonderful story. I look forward to much, much more. Later gator, SL - Shadylady  May 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
The Los Angeles subway is the setting for the start of a friendship that develops between Dev Price and Holly Dasani. Little do they know that the professions that they both keep under wraps will bring them into each others' paths and set a course in motion that will lead them to collaboration, danger, and much more.

Dev and Holly are really a fun couple to watch. As they go through the process of freindship and discover all the special gifts the other has. I love the stuff about LA too. Its really a wonderful story. Very well done. - Ther  Sep 28th, 2004

This is a well crafted, intriguing tale set against the backdrop of movie star Jillian Young, whose life has been and fraught with tragedy, and unbeknownst to many, dark secrets and their damaging consequences. Victoria Senett, whose father marries Jillian, becomes an integral part of the drama. On Jillian's behest, Vickie tries to interceed on her behalf with her daughter, only to rediscover and old flame and begin to unravel all the secrests, including the love she thought she'd lost.

This piece is masterfully done. Each character has depth but does not inapropriately cross over the boundries created by the first person narrative. I was moved by this piece and only sorry that it was over when it was done. The mystery unfolds with the reader sometimes a half a step ahead of the narrator, and somehow that's just enough to prepare us to survive the whirlwind. The whole thing is honest and tragic and sweet all at once. I highly reccomend it. - Roxy  Apr 15th, 2004

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When I stumbled upon this story, I had no idea how prfound it would be. Simply on eof the best I have read period. I enjoy the fact that it's not a 'nice and neat' story and contains many intense depictions of survival of violence without being sensational. Amazing! - BkFaith  Mar 14th, 2004

Absolutely wonderful story.
Would deserve to printed at once. - letterwolf  Mar 10th, 2004

I've been reading this book again lately and I was hooked. Just like the first time when I couldn't stop reading and finished it in one weekend. There are some many twists and turns that you will think "oh, i figured it out" more than once just to read you're totally wrong on the next page. It always reminds me on classic Hollywood drama from the old days with all it's charme. It has everything from mystery, fame, love, family and life. One of my all time favorit books! - Mindwalker78  Mar 5th, 2004

I read this story some time ago on another web site. I highly recommend taking the time to read it. Once I began, I was hooked and could not put it down until I had all the twists figured out. Ms. Brownell tells an excellent story of love, survival, mystery, family, and forgiveness. You will certainly not be disapointed by this entertaining and well-written piece. - S. Lee  Jun 4th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Kori Eaton remained in her usual hiding place, patiently waiting for everyone to vacate the expansive building. Glancing at her Mickey Mouse watch, she noticed the time. 8:48 p.m. Based on the last few nights she'd spent here, she knew that everyone would be gone by 9:15. Then she would have the versatile department store all to herself. However, unbeknownst to the 5'5" blonde, not everyone had left Shopholics... Ambrosia does it again, creating a quirky and wonderful romance!

Liked this story, its a must read if you are a fan. - LuvTigger71  Jun 2nd, 2004

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The story of Kori Eaton and Skylar Whitney. An unusual meeting turns into an unforgettable night. A recently singled Kori, has been "living" at the Shopaholics Department store when one night, she finds out she is not alone in the store. A soon to be unhappily married Skylar, loses track of time (in the ladies room) to discover she was locked in the building with this stranger till morning. The events of the night would change both women forever. This tale was fun-loving and creative in nature, but most of all it had loads of that romantic stuff I crave. I would happily recommend this story. - Di Bauden  May 6th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Absolutely wonderful story. I hope there is going to be a sequel! - Jennifer  May 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Rayven a wildlife photographer and journalist returns to claim her ranch, while Jaxon Segreto, Chief of the elite firefighter team Blue Mountain Firefighters does some soul searching.

Great story...was up late looking for something to read when I came across this. Ended up staying up till I was able to finish it. Keep up the good work...=) - Lacey  Aug 27th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #48 in 2003, #5 in 2002.  Top-25 #1. 
Amazon law requires the Queen take a consort...will Xe return to Brie's side in time to claim her love? This funny little tale features Xena, Gabrielle, and a host of horny Amazons.

I wanted to simply say that I have read and enjoyed every single piece of literature that has been posted here. My personal favorite is Emotional Paralysis. It touches me deeply, so thank you. I hope that you will continue to share with us your wonderful talent and once again thank you!!!!!!  Tina - Tina  Jul 4th, 2004

There is only one thing more that a reader could possibly want out of this story. For it to be longer and have many, many sequels. Larisa sure knows what she's doing! - SammyLee  Jul 18th, 2003

Another masterpeice! Standing ovations all around.
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(Hands Clapping, Closest I could come.) - The_Rogue_Angel  Aug 23rd, 2002

Brilliant as usual! Gardner's stories captivate you from the get go! I only have one thing to say..finish finish..finish..- Califa  Mar 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Follow Alex and Melissa as they strive to uncover the secrets behind corporate corruption in the 36th Century. In this cold and barren century, will they reveal the dangerous truths in their own hearts as well?

This is perhaps one of the most interesting stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. It kept me intrigued throughout the entire plot. The end is truly worthy of a Rod Serling Twilight Zone story. I believe this is a must read for any sci-fi, suspense thriller. - Crystal Michallet-Romero  Jul 8th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
As if the insanity of the ER were not enough, St. Luke's Hospital in Washington D.C. features the insanity of one Dr. Jack and her associate loonies, which makes poor Dr. Waylon Porter want to scream. Enter the a tall woman with long black wild looking hair, baggy clothes and the voice of an angel that captured everyone's attention including hers, who with a group of bums stood singing in front of a captive audience of senior citizens that had come from the bus wreck right outside hospital doors! Waylon calls upstairs for a Psych consult, only to find out that the 'blue-eyed bum' is none other than Dr. Hudson 'The Dude' Halgenberg, the hospital psychiatrist. So the fun continues in this zany tale of love and suspense sure to grab you!

"The Blues" was the story that finally got me hooked and so I started reading a lot of Larisa's works.
Where do I begin?
I really love the goofy people in the story. No one is safe from embarrassing oneself. I think that's what makes the characters alive, not to mention the dialogues. - lectra  Aug 7th, 2004

Whoohoo!!! Another one from Larisa ... this is one funny story and comes with another liquid warning. A must read for everyone.
You rule, Larisa. Keep them comming!!!
- Bacchus  Aug 19th, 2003

Oksana thinks she is the luckiest woman in the world. Women throw themselves at her everywhere she goes, and deep thoughts are not her priorities. One woman's strong will could drive her to distraction.

Good story line....nice plot emerging here. A couple of interesting and unexpected surprises. It's certainly grabbed my attention. This story holds a lot of promise. Awaiting the next 20 or so chapters! - Anonymous  Nov 19th, 2004

In this Conqueror tale, Artemis and Aphodite are out to teach Ares a thing or two when Xena the Conqueror meets the Bard of Potadeia under unusual circumstaces, and this begins changes that will affect the known world.

I love this story, i hope there is a sequel, pleasee pleaseee!! - Anonymous  Jan 16th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #4 in 2003, and #88 in 2002.
Take one Regina Taylor, record executive, tall, dark and dangerous. Add singer Kari Swift, not tall but she more than made up for her height with fatal cutness. Record Exec and Singer meet - match made in heaven right? NOT! It's hate at first sight as far as Kari is concerned...will Reggie be able to change her mind? Follow along and enter the stormy music world and see if they'll rock on!

Really enjoyed this one. KG's stuff is always wonderful but this was certainly fun. Would have made a very nice novella or even novel if the secondary characters had been fleshed out. However, everyone was quite three dimensinoal and the read was a pleasure. Would be nice to see these two again. Reggie's transformation was quite remarkable and it would be interesting to see what happens in the long run. Her past is just itching to come back and bite... well, you get the idea. - Roxytrek  Mar 7th, 2004

Still one of my favorites. Lust, love, passion all wrapped up in a deliciously funny package. Rock on! - Kel  Feb 17th, 2003

This story continued in Aftermath.

This story is one of my all time favourites. I don't know how many times I've read it and every time its still special. There isn't a wasted word or scene in this story. And it builds to a very satisfying and believable conclusion. - Anonymous May 31st, 2004

This story is wonderful. Alex and Sydney will melt your heart. You will stayed glued to the screen with this one all night. Don't miss it. Also read the sequel Aftermath. It's a great follow up to an awesome beginning. - southern belle Jan 13th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this erotic tale, Gwen had memorized everything about Kyle and Cody's mom from Beth the first day she had seen her, and as an after school program teacher, she'd seen her every day. Beth had been noticing Gwen too since she was a breath takingly beautiful young woman with light brown hair, green eyes, incredibly fit and curvy body. Neither one knew just how to approach the other, but Gwens' second job takes care of that, which comes as a surprising exposure for both!

Makes me wonder about having a second career and the fun of juggling two diverse jobs. Great job on capturing the feelings and expressions of the characters. - Shadylady Oct 18th, 2004

NEEDS A FOLOW UP BADLY- abut 69 more chapters. rely good one i am inpresed. - SammyLee Oct 6th, 2004

HOT! And of course...NOT nearly long enough!
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- jlnickymaster Sep 27th, 2004

Excellent! Just what a short story should be. I highly recommend this if you want a fast good read. - darkenedkarma Sep 23rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #38 in 2003.  Top-25 #1. 

A fantastic story filled with romance, action, and mystery! One of my favorites. Don't forget to vote for Fire Within for the top 100. It definitely deserves a high spot, and so do Anita Louise's other stories. Check them out! She's such a talented writer. - Jane Bond Feb 1st, 2004

A bevy of butt-kicking, intelligent, and gorgeous women head up the cast of this exceptional mystery. Anita Louise offers another well-written adventure that will transport the reader to exotic locales, place you in the middle of danger, and face-to-face with an element of the supernatural. And just in time for Valentine's Day, Anita puts the reader in the mood for romance as she weaves tales of enduring love within this novel. Will you be able to solve the mystery before the heroines? It will be quite the challenge, even for super sleuths. - Rachel Jan 31st, 2004

Oh, yeah, the Fire Within has so many tendrils of flames feeding marvelous characters, romance, plots, mysterious goings on and a hairy horror not born from a bad hair salon. You will cringe at times, put new wrinkles in your forehead trying to figure out the who the numerous bad guys are and get a free suntan
following the characters to valleys & desert locations. The gals are gorgeous, lovable, funny and fend quite well dealing with the bad guys. Not much this story failed to weave well into it pages. Don't miss this one and encourage the bard to write a sequel. Just too characters you want to see again and follow to another adventure.How about it, Anita Louise?
O Ger - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

This story reads like a great mystery novel..with the characters intertwining within and around one another... loved it....looking forwards to a sequel. - Christi Jan 30th, 2004

Enjoyed the story, and I am the type of person where if you don’t catch my interest in the first few paragraphs, then I am going to read something that will. Well written, I look forward to new adventures by the characters and a sequel. R. - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

I'm up to date on my reading of "Fire Within" and can't wait for more! These characters have captivated me.

The town, the people, the strange going ons and now the monster that is scouring the countryside. It is a breath of fresh air to read a story that actually lets the readers feel 'every step.' A story that takes the reader on many adventures. I have laughed at times. Felt my heart beat faster when things got tense and scary.

I actually feel as if I am a part of this adventure. The love the women share is fantastic. Can’t wait to read more of this story.

- Jill Oct 8th, 2003

I am so loving this story.I am there, I feel as if I am part of the team.
A marvelous story, written so well, I don't want to leave. Just when
I think I have figured out whats going on, Anita throws in a curve
and brings it in a whole new direction........Looking forward
to the next chapters........ - Jean Dec 12th, 2002

This story has it all: action, comedy, drama, a little heartache, a lot of romance, and a mystery that has me pointing fingers at a half-dozen characters. This is another great story from the talented and popular author, Anita Louise. Do not miss this one! - Kimin Dec 10th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Perennial Favorite Award: #41 in 2003, #63 in 2002.
Wow! This story is well written in style, taste,and in keeping continued interest. This story generates every conceivable emotion one could express.I love the characters Ash and Lauren. Their personalities are ones that a person could relate to and almost take on as your own. True to life.Exciting, keeps you guessing, what next. Light hearted. a chuckle or laugh at times. Romance, very refreshing, it deplicts the love, caring and understanding two people who are in love could have. Which so far constitues an unconditional love for each other. Being a continuing story, it keeps the readers interest in anticipation of what will happen in the lives of Ash and Lauren. A continuing story well done! (A Forever Fan) Kathy

I have been reading this story from almost the beginning and I say,
Well Done, and in very Good Taste too.
This story has kept my iterest from the beginning and to now the End, which makes me fell sad in one way and Happy in the next. For one, I don't think we have heard the last of Lauren and Ash. I see and feel a sequel on the horizon. :)
I feel what lead up to the ending and how Ash displayed her love for Lauren was just Ash, being Ash, and shows just how two people can really be truely in love.
Then again beyond that, I can see how the sequel can begin to develop.
Great Job DE, this story deserves to be published!!
I will be waiting to read more of your stories.
Well done, and in good taste and fashion. :) - Kathy  Jul 19th, 2004

Great story DE Salsbury. I have waited a while to read the entire story at one sitting (well okay, it took me more than a day because of other, unwelcome, intrusions) but it is an enjoyable, well put together story with enough excitement to keep me reading and enough tender moments to give myself an easier pace.
I eagerly await part 2 - letterwolf  Jul 11th, 2004

WOW! Super story. Hope to see an addition. Would love to see more of these two. - Sheryl  Jun 26th, 2004

I am normally a lurker who watches the top 25. Seeing Fate up for the last few weeks I finally decided to see for myself the staying power of this story. I was thrilled with the story. Once I picked it up I could not put it down and did not put it down until I had finished the last sentence. Great Job DE Salsbury, hope to see a sequel soon. - Karen  Jun 22nd, 2004

Outstanding! Thank you for sharing your story. - Anonymous  Jun 11th, 2004

I had stopped reading until the story was finished. When I saw it was done I went back to the beginning and read from the first word to the last in one sitting. I could not put it down. Fantastic story. - Bri  Jun 2nd, 2004

If you do not read any other uber this year do NOT miss Fate. If you do you will miss something really special. - Dream Weaver  May 24th, 2004

Fate is one of the most compelling books I have read on the verse. If you are looking for PWP, don't come here, but if you are looking for an exciting story that is well written with developed plot line and three dimensional characters this is where you need to be. Though the story is lengthy it is never ever dry or dull. Hats off to D. E. Salsbury for a job well done. Thank you for sharing your talent. - White Wolf  May 17th, 2004

I just finished reading "Fate"- it took all day because once I started, I couldn't stop! It was GREAT, with likeable characters, and well written. I hope you are planning on a sequel, I find that I would like to know more about the pasts of the leads. I just wanted you to know that your story was appreciated. Read it! Live it! Love it!
- Uber Addict  May 13th, 2004

Fate is one of the best stories I have read. It had a little bit of everything in it. If you have not read this story yet then I say do it now. You will not be sorry. Thank you so much for such a great story. I can't wait for you to start book 2 so I will know what happens to the girls next. - Debbie Dee  May 11th, 2004

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I am so happy to see this on the top 25 again. This is a wonderful story that should not be missed. I realize that the length of it as well as the fact that it is still a 'work in progress' may hinder some from reading 'Fate' but I have one thing to say to those that may be waiting in the wings....READ THIS STORY. It is one of the best I have ever read. - Jerri  Dec 25th, 2003

Excellent. - Anonymous  Dec 17th, 2003

I have no idea how I could have missed this one for so long. This story is abosolutely FANTASTIC. Each and every page is filled with humor, suspense and romance. I LOVE THIS STORY, one of the best I have ever read and I have been reading stories in the verse since day 1. Hats off to D E Salsbury. - Samantha  Dec 14th, 2003I have never been one for reading long stories especially when they are not finished. With that said, I am so glad I made an exception to this rule for Fate. Fate is an amazing story with a well developed plot line and three dimensional characters. I can honestly say, unlike most of the longer stories I have read, this one has never had a dull moment. This story is a very entertaining mixture of intrigue, humor and action. Nice job D E Salsbury, keep up the good work.
- Summer  Sep 24th, 2003

Fate is one of the best story's I have read. It has everything in it you could ask for. It will draw you into the story so much you will feel as if you are really there and that you know each of the characters personally. I can't wait to read more of this great story so I can see what happens next. - Debbie Dee  Aug 3rd, 2003

Amazing. This story has me totally taken in. I could not put it down until I had savored each and every page. Now all I can say is that I am still hungry, when will the next part be online so I may devour it? In all honesty this story is truly amazing. I give it 10 stars and recommend it to everyone. - Jazz  May 6th, 2003

I found this story truly riveting and I wait for each new addition with great anticipation. The tale this bard has spun is not only spellbinding but is dotted with delightful characters that are so lifelike they come right off the pages and materialize before your eyes. I highly recommend this story as a must read for anyone who enjoys excellent writing. - Lady J  Mar 31st, 2003

You can hear the nice soft music play as these two meet and see the electricity flow between these two as they get to know and trust one another. I give this story a five star rating. It's one of the best reads I've read in a very long time. I recommend this to anyone and everyone. - Righty  Sep 9th, 2002

More please. The story is excellent. - White Wolf  May 17th, 2004

Great story. Looking forward to more of it. I like that the characters are real people with imperfections, fears, aspirations, and needs...in other words, human. I also appreciate the more mature age of the main characters. As mentioned by other readers, the humor and writing style are excellent. Now if I can just be patient until I find out what happens next.... - Debbie  May 10th, 2004

Lady J, you have a wonderful style of writing. I can't believe I laughed out loud but I did. I love this story, more please. - Jenny  May 6th, 2004

This story is so great I can't wait to read more. Your doing a great job on it Lady J - Debbie Dee  Apr 30th, 2004

Please don't end it in part three. - Anonymous  Mar 11th, 2004

I laughed till I cried. Who are you and how do you know me? Great job Lady J. - Denise  Mar 5th, 2004

OMG! This is so funny and so real to life! You've captured office politics with style. I love the characters and I hope we'll get to see more of them in the future! Go Lady J! - Kaia  Mar 4th, 2004

What a great surprise this morning to see part 2 of Business Trip. One thing I can honestly say is I hope it does not end in part 3. - Judi  Mar 3rd, 2004

Excellent. - Teri  Mar 2nd, 2004

This story is so great. I can't wait till the next part. You have done one fanatic job on it Lady J. - Debbie Dee  Mar 2nd, 2004

Loved it, when will we see more? - Rhea  Feb 5th, 2004

This is a wonderful start. I love the humorous portrayal of corporate life. - Lisa  Jan 28th, 2004

All I can say is.....More Please - A. Noni Mouse  Jan 23rd, 2004

You did it again Lady J. This story is very humorous and entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next part. - Windsong  Jan 20th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
D has outdone herself in the writing of this tale! In this wonderful amalgam of mystery, adventure, romance, history and fantasy, D has woven a tale rich with the sights, sounds and feel of two worlds centuries and cultures apart and populated with warm and rich characters, two of which reach out across time itself for an unforgettable fairly tale ending. You will be enchanted by classic-style Uber that draws you in from the first sentence and won't let you let go until it is done! Brava!

I absolutely loved this story. It's a great read for anyone who is looking for something to read on a day like this. This story is absolutely beautiful and proves that love can cross time. - Alise  Mar 7th, 2004

A chance meeting between two political foes creates havoc in a crucial election year. Rising political activist, Dara Rosenthal, is ready to take on the current White House Administration as a stepping stone for her own political aspirations. Elisabeth Gunter, one of the President's campaign aides, is desperately trying to keep the momentum in the Republican's direction while keeping extreme political zealots at bay. Explosions follow as both women come to realize neither is what she seems and that secrets of the past never die. As the election draws closer, will they do whatever it takes to get their candidates into the White House?

A great read! Intelligent and thought provoking debates between the two main characters and a beautifully developed romance. Even though Alex Tryst's political intentions are obvious, you don't have to know a lot about the election to enjoy the adventure of two women looking for their soulmates. This book makes you believe in the power of love, love of family, love of friends, and the kind of love only to be found in that special person. And the part about Dara's nephew, Justin, well, all I can say is that it takes a strong person to reveal their personal trials to the world. Thank you, Alex, for allowing us to look into your real life for a brief moment and letting us learn more about a disease that affects so many. Job well done! - Anonymous  Sep 14th, 2004

this was such a great story to read. a sequel is needed for sure - Anonymous  Sep 11th, 2004

Wow, this story is absolutely the best thing Ms. Tryst has written. This story has the perfect balence of plot, sensuality, and romance. please write a sequel. - Anonymous  Aug 25th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Follow the lives of your favorite women from "Love in Photographs," "Georgia on My Mind," and "Stick to the Script." Careers, marriage, and children have these six ladies living on a rollercoaster. Will marriages last? Will careers be sacrificed? Will the vows of the heart withstand the tests of life? Find out in the fourth and final book in the New York Series.

gladly accept this story in to my hart, to keep it with me in mind in good times and bad times, for it is truly special.
I still sit here with the tears gleaming in my eyes and i cant tell if they are form joy or sadness,love or pleasure. What i do know is that I adore this story and the series it is part of.
I can say that this series, this storys truly will move you. So if you are truly looking for something special to give you a good time with many turns but have a true hart this is the story you want.
Alex has many Superb storys to pick, Alex has not let me down yet I have always had a good time reading here works. I not look forward to growing old and only reading all day long. - Sammylee  Oct 12th, 2004

this is a must read story.....the author proves yet again that she gets better and better with each new story. the story makes you laugh, makes cry, makes you mad all the way to the very end and your left wonderfully happy. - dreamangel  Aug 14th, 2004

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WOW!!!!!!!!! I love this authour. the entire series was wonderful and it reached perfection with this last installment. the ending was a wonderful twist that brought tears to my eyes. to make you think one thing, and reveal the happy ending was genious! Alex tryst knws how to write a real story with believable characters that go through everyday problems and are flawed just like everyone else. She makes you care about these women and their familes and have you rooting for them to make it. love is eternal, and this series shows that with startling realism. Bravo! you are truly a gifted writer. - peaches  Aug 2nd, 2004

Love is rarely perfect... sometimes it seems impossible. A young woman leaves her troubled past, determined to start a new life in a new city. When she becomes hopelessly entangled with a domineering, emotionally embattled individual, she doesn't know if it's a dream come true, or her worst nightmare.

Turning tides is a great read. It portrays the helplesness in the maelström of love and sexual attraction/need quite well.
Naten could have fleshed out some parts in more detail, added perspective or a bit more conclusion, such as: what of the "sneaky stepbrother"?. His machinations and the plans/deals he apparently made during his vacation are not referred to again further in the story. Perhaps a sequel is in the making?

Also the need for anonymous, strongly dominant sex. That, to my mind, could not just disappear overnight, so to speak. But well, those are just my thoughts.
I really enjoyed reading it and certainly recommed it to others!

Letterwolf - letterwolf  Mar 12th, 2004

Very well done. Great character development. Plan some time when you read this, you won't want to stop. I'm hopeing there is a sequel ones of these dyas. - Anonymous  Feb 9th, 2004

This story produces addiction. I couldn’t stop reading till the end, and then, I couldn’t stop thinking of the characters. Great one. - Pru  Jan 23rd, 2004

This is a intensely moving story. A.K. Naten really brings her characters to life and we really feel their pain and their joy. It is a great story and a must read. - Charles  Dec 29th, 2003

This is a FANTASTIC story and I am waiting with baited breath for the rest of it! - Sprout  Dec 18th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
This is the fourth story in the 'Woman I Love Series' and continues on with the lives of Lacy and Gage a couple years later as the writer finally confronts all of her past. A previous relationship is revealed that threatens Lacy and Gage’s union and one of their children experiences behavioral problems.

Excellent!! This is THE most outstanding series by which all others should emulate. Fantastic, run to it and enjoy! - Anonymous  Jul 7th, 2004

Excellent!! This is THE most outstanding series by which all others should emulate. Fantastic, run to it and enjoy! - Anonymous  Jul 7th, 2004

A really great story! - happy  Jul 3rd, 2004

This one is as exceptional as all the rest of the series!!! This is a must read!! Need I say more!! - Susan Haun  Jun 22nd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
After Ashley Moore and Jessie Stone meet while listening to a beautiful and captivating love song, they embark on a platonic friendship, but the magnetic pull of love cannot be denied. While Jessie vowed to never open her heart again, Ashley must face her greatest fear.

beautifully written story. a must read!! - blazinangelwings  Dec 6th, 2004

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Beautiful friendship which developes into the most romantic story, a must read for all who believe in love. G S Binkley writes with a passion and understanding as shown in her previous "The Woman I Love" series , she has found a worthy writing partner in M S Anderson they compliement each other perfectly , Thank you both. - Gina  Nov 26th, 2004

This story was such a delight to read and I couldn't put it down once I started. The authors did a wonderful job making me enjoy the characters and story and wanting more. It is rare to find such a well written story that draws you in to it and makes the characters come to life. I absolutely loved this story!! It was romantic, endearing, moving and realistic. The fact that Ashley and Jessie found friendship first, blooming into a love that filled not only their hearts but soul moved me more than any other story I have ever read. Although, I do absolutely love 'The Woman I Love' series by GS Binkley so it's kind of a toss up! ;) Thank you for this story and the promise of a sequel. - Stevie  Nov 25th, 2004

Brilliant, totally brilliant, if you took te time to read the title then read the story, it just brilliant. - LuvTigger71  Nov 25th, 2004

These two authors make an outstanding writing team.
This story is the most well written, wonderful romantic
story I have ever read. More, Please!
- RAB  Nov 23rd, 2004

Wonderfully romantic story. I absolutely loved it! The friendship blooming into a romance was realistic and beautiful. Thanks so much MS & GS for this great story. I want a sequel!! - Anonymous  Nov 23rd, 2004

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This was an awesome story!!! i loved the fact that there wasn't instant attraction followed by sex, how it developed from friendship was so much better!!!
When does In Between Poses come out???
Thanks again for a great read! - Snuff  Nov 18th, 2004

Wow! OMG! What a wonderfully romantic story!!! I fell in love with everything about it. I couldn't stop reading it. If there is only one story you read this year, click on 'When You're Near Me' and enjoy! - Trish  Nov 15th, 2004

Honors/Awards: 2003 Story Of The Year.  Fan Favorite in the catagory of Mushball story.  Top-25 #1. 
Tucker Danes is supposed to be on vacation in Hawaii with her fiancé Steve, and it's NOT what she expected. All he cared about was making a good impression with his boss, and Tucker was asking herself why she was with that looser. Then the unthinkable happens and Tucker leaves him, set on returning home to Texas as soon as possible. As fate would have it, she can't get a flight home, and ends up at Mama's. There she'll experience what Hawaii and surfing are all about, the antics of Furball, Ripples and Dunc, and what love looks like when she looks into eyes as blue as the ocean. This is another laughter-filled romance with tender moments and some spew alerts, a la Larisa!

I LOVE this story. It is one of Larisa's best and I sincerely hope that she writes a sequel. Please, please, please, write a sequel to this story. As a matter of fact get this story published, I would be the first in line to purchase a copy!! I've read almost all of Larisa's stories and this story along with Blind Date has got to be the funniest to date. If you don't read this story you will miss some of the best fan fiction every written. It has love, laughter and lust; what more could you want. Oh! Yeah, there is a plot and a worm named Steve, that should have been used as fish bait, but what is a love story without a villain. P.S. Can someone tell where I can find friends and a momma like this? - Lasher  Dec 20th, 2004

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STOP!Don't read another story till you read this one.I haven't had so much fun reading a story in a long time. The characters are just priceless, and the idiots washing the baby had me on the floor in stitches. Damn good writing. Outrageous, delightful and sensual. Please, please write a sequel Larisa. These characters are just too good for one story only. You rock, Larisa! - Fredrica  Jun 21st, 2004

All I have to say is Larisa writes some of the best fic storys I've ever read. - TMc  Aug 1st, 2003

I loved it , but then I have all of hers. The goofy characters she comes up with and the situations keeps me in stiches - can't get enough of the goofy ones they just add to the story. If ever I am looking for something to read I just grab a Larisa story. Keep up the good work for I will read them all. - Linda  Jul 14th, 2003

Damn, woman you're good. You should write sequels for some of your stories. I would love reading one of Blue Calm. Please, don't ever stop writing!!!! You're way to good!!!! - Bacchus  Jul 11th, 2003

With the amount of stories, Larisa has written at this point, one might be tempted to say: GET A LIFE! However, I prefer to say: Please don't EVER get a life. Please! Blue Calm is not the first Larisa I've read, and it will certainly not be the last, either. It it simply too funny to describe, it has to be experienced. You laugh, you cry... and then you laugh some more. I want a Mama and two idiots of my very own. Larisa = Quality. Keep it up! - Wolvie-DK  Jun 16th, 2003

Another wonderfully unique Larisa original...filled with romance, drama, and outrageous humor. Ahhh...a feel good sensation achieved with this truly delightful and sensually delectable read. Well done, bard. Two thumbs up! ~Ag~ - ~Ag~  May 13th, 2003

Well, Larisa has done it, again!!! Blue Calm kept me in constant giggle mode, with a few happy tears thrown in along the way. Ripples and Furball, the idiots, are hilarious, and watching Mama try to control her brood kept me in stitches. And I have to say, either Larisa has lived the most diverse life ever on this planet, or she has the best imagination around, because she can write about any subject, as though she's an old hand at it. Kudos, Larisa, and thanks again for sharing you're marvelous talent with us!!! I do have to say, though, I missed the goat in this one!!! - Michelle  May 13th, 2003

A surfer, a writer, a couple of idiots and ... you'll have to read the rest. It's Larisa at her best. The laughs don't stop. - Anonymous  May 12th, 2003

ANY CHANCE OF A SEQUEL??? - Anonymous  May 8th, 2003

Why haven't any of Larisa's stories been published? I would love to have an anthology of her stories! I'd be the first in line to buy any of her books. The only problem would be trying to select just which stories to publish. Thanks, Larisa, for all the laughs and many hours of enjoyment you have given us. - Anonymous  May 6th, 2003

Incredible story. Absolutely loved it. It just keeps getting better and better with each new one you show us. :) Gotta love those sexy surfers. ;-) Keep up the excellent writing!

I do have one question however.... Where can I get a copy of that poster??? *drool* - Caden  May 6th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Fan Favorite in the catagory of Original / Über.

Hot stuff! But romantic true to Alex's style. What a great piece! Makes you wonder about the woman mentioned in the disclaimer who inspired such a story though. Thanks for this little PWP, Alex! - Anonymous  Jan 3rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
This is a sequel to In A Heartbeat. It's the continuing story of Sam and Riley and Kim and Jess. Find out how their lives become entwined as Jess and Kim enjoy their new family and Sam and Riley go about starting theirs....

Just finished reading Entwined Lives ... Wow that was a fabulous story!!! I never laughed, cried, or cooed more then the story I just read. What a great story. But, my happiness fell when I read the last sentence...This is the end of the series with these characters. I hope R. Nolan will reconsider and give us another look into the lives of Sam, Riley, Kim and Jess. - Jan  Oct 18th, 2004

Wow was it great to see these ladies back! It was wonderful to spend time with four of my favorite characters. I'll really miss these ladies but look forward to what ever further adventures this bard will take me on. It was a great final look into the lives of Sam, Riley, Kim and Jess and a well written story.. I highly recommend it. - Donna  Jul 3rd, 2004

This is a great story, bringing the tale of the lives of Kim, Jess, Sam and Riley to a fulfilling conclusion. I definately recommend this story to everyone. - Anonymous  Jun 16th, 2004

I feel sad that this is the final story featuring these characters.
It was an absolutely wonderful trip into their lives.
I strongly recommend the three stories. They touch you in all the right places. Letterwolf - letterwolf  Jun 13th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
While in a catatonic state, Hannah Webster was actually reliving a past life. Her past life with a woman named Xena. It all ended when she died in Japa, her last memory being on a boat holding a small jar filled with her ashes…and then Hanna regained consciousness in the present. Some people, especially her parents, though she was not quite right. Now a best selling author, Hanna is not prepared for what her parents are capable of. But she will come to doubt her sanity herself when she meets up with Activity Coordinator, Brittany Sparrow, whose kinda familiar face and kind azure eyes are not those as a stranger at all.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

This is an amazing story that gave me the warm shivers, everyone should read it, plz let there be a second installment that follows their lives. Thank you for writing it. - LuvTigger71  Nov 9th, 2004

This is one of the best stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading! - Anonymous  Nov 6th, 2004

All I'll say is WOW...The emotions I went through reading this. The last two chapters moved me to tears. I have read it over and over. I LOVE IT! - Caden  Apr 3rd, 2004

Wow! This is a great chapter. Anymore coming? S. Anne Gardner thank you for the next chapter. - Monti  Nov 12th, 2003

I read this story and fell in love with Blayne. Great story. Waiting for more. - Felicity146  Jul 28th, 2003

I love this story. I recommend it to everyone. - Monti  Jul 27th, 2003

Great story. Is there more to it? It has captivated my attention and I would like to read more of it. - sally  Jul 26th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In C.E. Grays' beautifully written account of growing up and finding you are different, AJ and her twin brother Bastiaan lead an idyllic life in a Montana ranch...or do they? As their 18th birthday approaches, AJ, who is dyslexic and whose entire world is the farm and the open spaces she will soon inherit, learns a secret about her twin brother about to go off to college. Simultaneously, new neighbors move into the nearby farm and she makes a new friend by taking the small green-eyed redhead home after being lost almost a day. That begins a friendship that threatens the world the tall lanky dark-haired youth has known...and makes her question who she is and where home really is. This is a great coming-of-age tale.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Real Estate agent Georgina Anne Franklin stuck gold! Not only had she sold Jaden Connelly, singer extraordinaire about to retire, her dream house and made a bundle in commissions, she had made a friend. The gorgeous dark-haired, blue-eyed lankly singer and she just seemed to click together so perfectly...however, they could only be friends...or could they? Would Jaden's past mistakes be in their way? Could Georgie be just a friend? You'll have to read this enchanting and engrosing tale to find out!

great story so far, cant wait for the rest! - blazinangelwings  Sep 4th, 2004

I think it's a very good story, when does part 4 come? I need to read it! - H  Aug 3rd, 2004

Brilliant start to the story, want more soon plz. - LuvTigger71  May 31st, 2004

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Gods, what a fantastic story. It really touched a part of me. You see, I can compare myself with Jaden. I am HIV pos aswell. So this story really, really touched me. I hope to read the rest soon. - Anonymous  May 30th, 2004

A very touching story so far. I can't wait to read more of it. - Bug  May 18th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
The Swing Time Ballroom was dark and smoky just like it had been more than 60 years before. Not much had changed in the place. Mac blinked her eyes a few times and then walked to the middle of the long mahogany bar. She pulled out a long cigar, snipped the end off with her cutter and slid it between her lips. Searching her pockets, she pulled out her silver Zippo and burned the end before lighting it. With one eye squinted, she looked to the bartender and gave her a crooked grin. "Hey Sally gimme a bourbon neat and some pretzels if you have any." Sally pushed back her dyed red hair, eyed Mac and shook her head of long curls. MacKenna Jones, Private Investigator, lived in the past and that's the way she liked it. However, a sticky case and her loyal secretarys' grandaughter may just change that, as the tall, gangly Truman becomes Mac's indomitable Girl Friday and fate calls for more than a beautiful friendship.

If you are looking for a story with a little mystery, a lot of romance and a huge dose of humour then this is definitely the one that will fill the bill. Personally I have never read one of Larisa'a tales that didn't make my day better, she is always entertaining and I think we all owe her a big thank you for sharing her amazing talent with us. - Alex P  Jan 26th, 2004

I truely enjoyed this offering from the pen of Larisa -- but then when don't I - talk about lots of frustration -- nothing like being told no, forget it, never in a million years to get one going.
- LInda  Jan 18th, 2004

Really good story! The characters were likable and believable and had great chemistry. I enjoyed it a lot. - Peggy  Jan 16th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Erin Tucker wakes in her bed to the sweet delectable scent of peaches. When she opens her eyes she finds blonde hair and the sleepy green eyes of a naked stranger cuddled against her. Finding herself naked as well, and having little memory of the night before, she is indeed perplexed. Who is this person, and what's she doing in my bed? Erin is saved from further musings, when her girlfriend (make that ex-girlfriend) appears near the bed demanding an explanation. Things quickly get more complicated for Erin after finding out that she married this stranger the night before. Erin wants an annulment but Courtney Calloway has a slightly different proposal. Find out what that proposal is in yet another great read from Ambrosia!

Great story. Really enjoyed it. - xluvr  May 17th, 2004

Another great tale from a wonderful writer! Although it was somewhat predictable (at least to me), it's not the destination, but the journey getting you there! And Ambrosia takes you on one that you wish didn't end! I highly recommend this story! - gail  May 4th, 2004

Brilliant story. Brilliant writer. I read all of Ambrosia's stories and liked them all. I laughed and I cried. Truly a piece of art. I hope to read some more in the near future! - Bacchus  May 1st, 2004

great story!! the characterizations were very real and believable. It made me cry and made me smile. Awesome! - peaches  Apr 29th, 2004

All I can say is BRILLIANT!!!, I couldn't stop till I finished it.
Ambrosia,great story! - Anonymous  Apr 23rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Advertising Director Elora Duke had been observing the writer for months now, and finally got the courage to talk to her. The tall dark beauty, by the name of Virginia Wolf, is not overly receptive initially...however, Duke is not one to let go of one who has touched her so...

A beautiful love story. I would love to read a sequel or a POV from Virginia or both. - ter  Nov 12th, 2004

What an absolutely wonderful, wonderful heartfelt story, but it begs to ask what happens now, and why stop there, it could be so much more. - LuvTigger71  Nov 2nd, 2004

*wow* this is a tender and elegant story of awakening. simply beautiful. - fanfic gourmet  Jan 7th, 2004

Extremely different for this author. Well done though! A pleasure to read. Makes you wonder what happens after the last line had been read. Where to Virginia and Duke go from there? - Anonymous  Jan 3rd, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perennial Favorite Award: #3 in 2003.  Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Officer Sam McKenna and her rookie partner receive an urgent radio call. There's a man with a gun in a local Emergency Room. As they race toward the hospital little does Sam know she is racing toward her destiny. When she confronts the gunman her life is forever changed...

I read this story probably since the first day it was posted and was SO blown away by it. And now, I'm lying awake at night, remembering the characters and just can't seem to let them go. In my opinion, IN A HEARTBEAT is an incredible story, very captivating and real enough that some of us can connect to. The emotions, the struggles..it all just shaped the story into one that touched my heart. This is a story that I've re-read several times as well as it's sequel Entwined Lives. - T.F.  Oct 18th, 2004

Great story, awesome character developement.I laughed and I cried...sometimes at the same time. Highly recommend, this bard knows how to craft a compelling tale. - Sue  Oct 3rd, 2004

A friend highly recommended this bard's story and boy was she right! The characters are so alive and believable they draw you right into the story. And what a story it was...well done bard, well done. Any chance of us seeing more of Sam and Riley? - Donna  Dec 23rd, 2003

in a word? Brilliant... - Snuff  Nov 6th, 2003

SUPERB...ONE in a milinon... But wher is the rest????Need MORE PLZ - Keegan Conner  Sep 19th, 2003

I enjoyed this bard's first story LA Metropolitan so was happy to see a companion piece. Wow! This one was even better. In A Heartbeat is a wonderful love story. The characters are funny, compelling and presented in a well balanced manner. Once you start reading you won't want to stop! Great story and a throughly entertaining read. Hope to see more of these ladies. - Beth  Sep 13th, 2003


As I said I would do, I read this novella by R. Nolan late last night on into early this morning. I was impressed. This is a well written story which definitely showcases R. Nolan's writing talent. "In A Hearbeat" is a beautiful love story that leaves you wanting to read more about it's two lovely heroines. And this is not a PWP tale. This work of fiction definitely has a heart and a soul wrapped around a nice story line. You'll understand where the title comes from not too long after you start reading. You'll find yourself on cruise-control as you glide from chapter to chapter. Then suddenly, it's over. And you have to stop. But most certainly, you're filled with a craving for more. This cleverly written and totally entertaining fictional delight was, indeed, a follow-up to "LA Metroplitan", but it's definitely left behind in this sequel's wake. Where have you been hiding R. Nolan? I can most assuredly say I want to read more of this writer's work! - //AW  Sep 7th, 2003

Excellent story! Well written and makes you want to keep reading to the very end. I look forward to reading more from this Author. - Anonymous  Sep 6th, 2003

I was impressed with R Nolan's first offering "LA Metropolitan" so when I saw this companion piece, I was excited to read it. "In A Heartbeat" matched, if not surpassed her original work. The writing is well done, the characters are real and relatable. By the end of the story I was yearning for more. R Nolan writes a wonderful love story and I look forward to more work from this talented Bard. - Littlespit  Sep 6th, 2003

The title "In A Heartbeat" caught my attention very quickly. Hmmm...I thought, perhaps a nice romantic story to read this evening to lift my spirits and soothe my very tired soul after an extremely busy work day. So, I ventured to commence reading this 'new' story to The Athenaeum. WOW!!! I read...and kept on reading...not letting go...not wanting to. I was 'hooked' very early on in this very well written and delightfully entertaining romantic tale. It certainly had gotten my attention and I found myself wanting 'more' even after completing the last chapter. This story by Ms Nolan is certainly a wonderful sequel to her first story, "LA Metropolitan"...and in my estimation, much moreso. This fictional interlude is more poignant, more riveting, more romantic, and more thought provoking in many ways. But, all in all...it's a story of...and about...'the power of love'. My suggestion is for y'all to read this one. Why?! 'Cuz you're really gonna like it. You truly are...'Fer sure!!! Well done,
Ms. Nolan...very well done. - ~Ag  Sep 4th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
In this mystery, an old wrong is again brought to light as First Sergeant Merc Macgregor is assigned to guard Finnegan Draper, a High School teacher who has been seriously beaten and left for dead, and who Merc blames for her part in the long-ago incident. However, in usual Larisa fashion, things are not as they seem and sparks fly between the two protagonists and their cronies, to the innevitable attraction and bliss of the two former 'enemies.'

Another excellent offering from Larisa -- she just keeps getting better. I enjoyed the mystery -- didn't even come close to who the bad guy was. I always wait till things is done before starting as I know nothing will get done till I am done with the story. - Linda  Feb 25th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Against the odds, Marine Corps Master Sgt. Halley Braeden and Lt. Commander Eden Huntington Bryce, who briefly meet on the same ship they are serving on, end up crossing paths in a desperate struggle for survival that unbeknowst to them, forges the beginnings of something. One an officer and the other an enlistedman risen through the ranks, while their ranks separate them, their friendship serves to get them though the tough times and beyond...to following and finding their hearts.

All i have to say is MORE, MORE, MORE plz plz plz. Its brilliant, totally brilliant. - LuvTigger71  Dec 12th, 2004

I LOVE this! The characters are interesting and captivating, the story intriguing. Please let there be a sequel! I'm convinced these ladies have more to say. Thank you for letting us get to know them. :) - Anonymous  Dec 1st, 2004

Great story. Builds slowly but the character development is first rate. And even the secondary characters are brought to life. I've loved all her stories and this one shows that Planetsolin still has it. - Anonymous  May 31st, 2004