wow, a very deep and touching series. Please take the time and read it :) - Anonymous - Dec 10th, 2004   

well told tale by a 17 year old.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

this story had some funny moments in it.. and you want to keep on reading, because you want to know what disasters will happen next.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

some lives are surely complicated.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

i found this a very moving story.. the writing style is different, but it does the story justice.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

what a sad story.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

interesting story.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

Great story with lots ot twists and turns. Is there a sequel in the works? - Kitty - Dec-10-2006   

Lots of twists in this story. Its a fun read! - jd - Jan-01-2007   

good story, keeps you at the edge of your seat. - ailidh - Apr-12-2008   

great story mafia style !!! - Karin - Oct-21-2008   

It will keep you in suspense till the very end. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

a lot of suspense and the story keeps you guessing until the end.. but it needs some serious editing in terms of grammar and vocabulary.. if you can read past that, you'll enjoy the story.. - xtra dog - Feb-20-2012   

I had to skip to the end because I couldn't take the suspense anymore.lol
This is the first time I have ever read a story backwards but it was worth it if you get a chance to read it do so. - Pritch - Dec-09-2015   

i really liked this story.. it was well written and i absolutely believed (in) the main character.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

those two are really way too funny.. "They already threatened us with supervised visitations only" lol.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2012   

i like the choices the author made about which direction this series should be headed in.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

interesting series.. a lot of introspection going on, but no decisions being made.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

well written indeed.. i loved how the tale evolved.. some people are a little backwards in coming forward.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

aww.. such a sad story.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

i beg to differ.. i would consider the day a complete disaster.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

well, is she or isn't she?? - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

Oh! That's so very sad...the ending really moved me... - JC - Mar-19-2011   

another well written piece.. the way this author chooses the words and builds up a story is quite amasing.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

we all need a good kick in the butt sometimes and friends who are willing enough to do it.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

to the author's question: hell, yeah.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

poor sam and dana.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

While not an entertaining story by any means, this writer gives us something far more mature. This is a powerful, well written tale with a very very important message - Anonymous - Aug 7th, 2003   

a very important message indeed.. it is just a shame that the ones the message is most meaningful for, namely high school bullies, are the ones that are most unlikely to read the story.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

nice series.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

only one statement in the disclaimer and the author was right.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

So moving I cried. - Kes - May-25-2007   

trough all the sadness, there is still a sparkle of hope.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

Gotta like this story! LOLI love it Eveh! It's really fun to read and I've had all my friends read it...they seem to think I have a lot in common with one of your characters...I don't know why? I give this story 11 out of 10! Wonderful story, as always, Eveh! - Polly - Feb 1st, 2004   

Gotta like this story! LOLI love it Eveh! It's really fun to read and I've had all my friends read it...they seem to think I have a lot in common with one of your characters...I don't know why? I give this story 11 out of 10! Wonderful story, as always, Eveh! - Polly - Feb 1st, 2004   

this story really cracked me up at times.. the two main characters are simply hilarious.. so i'm off to read the next one in this series.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2012   

bummer.. not the way i wanted the story to go.. but my two favourites are still together so i shouldn't complain..
- xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

I really like what you've got so far. The sparse language comes across with such character. Much better than a lot of the fanfic I am forced to endure. Well written, no grammar issues. Great voice! - Kerowyn - Aug-29-2008   

This is so well written and I was actually kinda iffy on the pairing, but this bard makes it work. Not only does she make it work, she makes it intriguing and the characters' interactions each other are just totally cool. There are no words. Just, waay cool. - Anonymous - Oct-22-2008   

THIS is FANTASTIC!!! YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!!! - Anonymous - Oct-25-2008   

incredible. I was also a tad skeptical as to whether the pairing will work, but the writing shows so much sophistication and control that you eventually forget every other preconceived notion and just find yourself falling deeper into the story. Excellent, really. - blue rogue - Nov-26-2008   

This is probably the best Devil Wears Prada fanfic I have ever read! Please don't keep me waiting too much longer for more!! - Dani - Dec-20-2008   

This story is AMAZINGLY well written. There are simply no words. The character dynamic between Miranda and Andy is so fascinating that I simply could not stop reading. Every interaction is filled with this fantastic tension, and it really IS about WHO Miranda is and WHO Andy is, and the strange reflections they are of one another. I can't even describe how wonderful this fic is. I have never read a Devil Wears Prada fic in my life, but this one I read for the sheer pleasure of experiencing the ride. - Anonymous - Jun-03-2009   

Th obliqueness of Andrea and Miranda's interactions with one another are what make this WORK. Its not about something so simple as instant attraction or romantic love. Its about self discovery and looking at yourself in the mirror of another. Slowly coming to terms with Truth. Nothing is rushed, the characters are true to themselves, and the story is all the more riveting because of that. - Kerr - Jun-03-2009   

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4448058/19/Incomprehensible_Desire Check out the finished story here :-) Loved it btw.. - Anonymous - Oct-26-2009   

Absolutely love it. I've been waiting for updates for months. I see a spin off in the cards with Aquarius having a love interest that saves her from herself, hint, hint.... - Anonymous - Nov-09-2009   

I'm really enjoying this little series of vignettes. - Anonymous - Oct 31st, 2002   

i can't even imagine the high and low they must feel.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

Enjoying it and waiting for more of Inner Peace. Both this story and Mad World are great CSI fics. READ and ENJOY! - cam - Aug-21-2007   

Read other chapters here : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3422450/6/Inner_Peace - Diana - Sep-23-2010   

i'm afraid i wouldn't be able to just move on after all of that.. so, i do understand tamera.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

Absulutely wonderful series. I recomend this highly. - Anonymous - Oct-11-2010   

when i was at university one of our teachers kept on repeating "kill your darlings" as in making us edit ourselves.. the author certainly did with this story.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

this series is certainly never boring.. it's about all the little and big things life just throws at you.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

of all the stupid things to do.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

somewhat strange story.. the author noted not being sure of the spanish sentence used.. "usted está viviendo en un sueño roto" would be a better translation.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

mighty fine friendship they have going.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2012   

awesome! - Anonymous - Feb-07-2007   

Loved it, loved it, loved it.
read it!
Gives hope - Ixzie - Apr-05-2007   

This is a great story. The best CSI fiction i've read to date.
I couldn't stop reading, the plot and characters really grab you and keep you interested. - Fabeola - Apr-09-2007   

Not your usual fan fiction. Eveh tells the story from an interesting viewpoint without introducing conflict into "canon" storyline. Very well written.
- L'Nara - Apr-09-2007   

Honest, provocative, compelling and unique and that's just the reviewer ;-)Eveh's characterisation is flawless and the whole story utterly unique. I have not read anything else, in a fan-fition genre, that has gripped and moved me so much. Read it, trust me, you'll be impressed. - Kes - Apr-28-2007   

Totally blown away by this story. Been reading fanfic for a long time and this is top-notch writing. One of the few CSI slashfics that I've actually loved. Don't miss it. - Anonymous - May-30-2007   

Extremely well written. Highly recommend this fic. Written with a sensitivity for the characters and their experiences that rings true. - Louise - Sep-21-2007   

Awesome!
Excellent story - Anonymous - Aug-04-2008   

Extremely well written story. Have read it several times now. The unique viewpoint gives a clarity and depth to the characters that is very appealing and you're not gonna get anywhere else. Ok so it's not fluff if that's your thing, (and I'm a big fan of the feel-good stuff) but the characters drew me in straight away and there's enough wry humour and genuine compassion in the mix to make this a very attractive read. - Anonymous - Apr-05-2013   

ummm...what the user above me said!! - Aahi Young - Mar-26-2014   

ummm...what the user above me said - Aahi Young - Mar-26-2014   

ummm...what the user above me said - Aahi Young - Mar-26-2014   

ummm...what the user above me said - Aahi Young - Mar-26-2014   

really nice integration of the william blake poem into the story.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

Really enjoying this story. Hope there is an update soon. - Anonymous - Sep 25th, 2005   

Means Nothing At All!
A fantastic story. Compelling host of characters. Riviting...has me sitting on the edge of
my seat. Wanting more. Hoping that Eveh will grace us
with the next chapters. - Christi - Oct-21-2006   

Another great chapter! Thank you. - gillian - Jan-09-2007   

blind rage is not my specialty so i have difficulties appeasing lacey's love and friendship with all the rest she did.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

not what you think if the title is your only reference.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

a lot of silence going on.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

i hope the author keeps this series coming.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2012   

This is a well written, CSI, story with a great plot. The suspense is held throughout the story line - lots of twists and turns. Very highly recommended! - Anonymous - Aug-25-2009   

nice.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

it sure is an incredible adventure.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

broken and worthless says so much more than the state and worth of the antiques.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

aww.. both think they're worse than the other.. and they're both wrong.. i did recognize x & g in this without any problem.. - xtra dog - Feb-11-2012   

i'm curious to see what lacey will do.. - xtra dog - Dec-17-2011   

i understand why the author chose this title for the story.. it is unsettled but also unsettling.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

funny story.. poor polly.. - xtra dog - Feb-19-2012   

still a good read.. - xtra dog - Dec-18-2011   

Wow!! This is a great start to a series that is intriguing in its short length, but certainly not lacking in depth of emotion! Kudos to the writer! - Wolf Maiden - Jan 9th, 2003   

Read this entire series, was surprised by the depth of the story, and pleased with the writing. Strong characters with personal adjustments to make, however reluctantly to hurt others. Well written short pieces. Now, how about getting them together finally! - Kaye - Jan 11th, 2003   

This series is like no other. Omg.Great stuff - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

i've only read this story in the series so far.. so, i have no idea how the series is going to evolve.. i do feel for the 2 main characters and the predicaments they're in.. being of the lesbian variety myself, i do wish for some ways thos series could progress.. but it would be fine with me either way.. - xtra dog - Dec-16-2011   

Gread start of the series... loved it! - Ricky - Apr-28-2015