One of the best uber stories I have ever read. DONT MISS THIS!! - Anonymous Aug 4th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #03 in 2003, #04 in 2004, #99 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Officer Sam McKenna and her rookie partner receive an urgent radio call. There's a man with a gun in a local Emergency Room. As they race toward the hospital little does Sam know she is racing toward her destiny. When she confronts the gunman her life is forever changed...

I read this story probably since the first day it was posted and was SO blown away by it. And now, I'm lying awake at night, remembering the characters and just can't seem to let them go. In my opinion, IN A HEARTBEAT is an incredible story, very captivating and real enough that some of us can connect to. The emotions, the struggles..it all just shaped the story into one that touched my heart. This is a story that I've re-read several times as well as it's sequel Entwined Lives. - T.F. Oct 18th, 2004

Great story, awesome character developement.I laughed and I cried...sometimes at the same time. Highly recommend, this bard knows how to craft a compelling tale. - Sue Oct 3rd, 2004

A friend highly recommended this bard's story and boy was she right! The characters are so alive and believable they draw you right into the story. And what a story it was...well done bard, well done. Any chance of us seeing more of Sam and Riley? - Donna Dec 23rd, 2003

in a word? Brilliant... - Snuff Nov 6th, 2003

SUPERB...ONE in a milinon... But wher is the rest????Need MORE PLZ - Keegan Conner Sep 19th, 2003

I enjoyed this bard's first story LA Metropolitan so was happy to see a companion piece. Wow! This one was even better. In A Heartbeat is a wonderful love story. The characters are funny, compelling and presented in a well balanced manner. Once you start reading you won't want to stop! Great story and a throughly entertaining read. Hope to see more of these ladies. - Beth Sep 13th, 2003


As I said I would do, I read this novella by R. Nolan late last night on into early this morning. I was impressed. This is a well written story which definitely showcases R. Nolan's writing talent. "In A Hearbeat" is a beautiful love story that leaves you wanting to read more about it's two lovely heroines. And this is not a PWP tale. This work of fiction definitely has a heart and a soul wrapped around a nice story line. You'll understand where the title comes from not too long after you start reading. You'll find yourself on cruise-control as you glide from chapter to chapter. Then suddenly, it's over. And you have to stop. But most certainly, you're filled with a craving for more. This cleverly written and totally entertaining fictional delight was, indeed, a follow-up to "LA Metroplitan", but it's definitely left behind in this sequel's wake. Where have you been hiding R. Nolan? I can most assuredly say I want to read more of this writer's work! - //AW Sep 7th, 2003

Excellent story! Well written and makes you want to keep reading to the very end. I look forward to reading more from this Author. - Anonymous Sep 6th, 2003

I was impressed with R Nolan's first offering "LA Metropolitan" so when I saw this companion piece, I was excited to read it. "In A Heartbeat" matched, if not surpassed her original work. The writing is well done, the characters are real and relatable. By the end of the story I was yearning for more. R Nolan writes a wonderful love story and I look forward to more work from this talented Bard. - Littlespit Sep 6th, 2003

The title "In A Heartbeat" caught my attention very quickly. Hmmm...I thought, perhaps a nice romantic story to read this evening to lift my spirits and soothe my very tired soul after an extremely busy work day. So, I ventured to commence reading this 'new' story to The Athenaeum. WOW!!! I read...and kept on reading...not letting go...not wanting to. I was 'hooked' very early on in this very well written and delightfully entertaining romantic tale. It certainly had gotten my attention and I found myself wanting 'more' even after completing the last chapter. This story by Ms Nolan is certainly a wonderful sequel to her first story, "LA Metropolitan"...and in my estimation, much moreso. This fictional interlude is more poignant, more riveting, more romantic, and more thought provoking in many ways. But, all in all...it's a story of...and about...'the power of love'. My suggestion is for y'all to read this one. Why?! 'Cuz you're really gonna like it. You truly are...'Fer sure!!! Well done,
Ms. Nolan...very well done. - ~Ag Sep 4th, 2003

Tracy Chandler's beautiful young wife has been murdered, and Tracy is the prime suspect. Can her attorney find the truth before the murderer strikes again?

I really liked this story and am waiting for the next
part, has a great story line and the characters so far
have been developed really well. I recommend you read this - Anonymous Mar 10th, 2005

Love this story and the characters. I highly suggest everyone check it out!! - T. Stratton Mar 9th, 2005

Dashing and mysterious Hollywood newcomer Jamie Dean gets the opportunity of a lifetime to work with her favorite actress. Sarah Talbot, America's Sweetheart, wants to stretch her abilities in hopes of winning her first Oscar after years in the business. Together they venture through a suspense thriller, but what happens when the cameras aren't rolling? Is their chemistry only affected, or does the homebody win the heart of the latest ladies' woman? Appearances from the characters of "Love in Photographs" and "Georgia on My Mind" included.

This was a fabulous third edition to the series! I absolutely loved it! I especially enjoyed the addition of children to the mix. That was something new for Alex's books, and she did a wonderful job with capturing them accurately. There was also a new twist to her usual girl meets girl story line, which I will not divulge so it can be a surprise to readers, but I will say it truly makes Jamie a more believable character. The contrast between her physicality and her "real" personality is wonderful. As for Sarah, she was a great, strong woman. It was nice to see women who know what they want and go for it. A great book! A must read for fans of her work, and if you've never read Alex's stuff before, you should read this series. It's some of her best! - Anonymous Jun 10th, 2003

Sometimes our expectations are right on target, and then again... This one was written for the 2005 Valentine's Special at the Royal Academy of Bards.

In this sequel to 'Powers of the Queen,' Part Two of a Trilogy, Xena and Gabrielle have fallen into a routine at the camp of the Thracian Amazons, but that is about to change. Two weeks after the Solstice Festival, a sister Amazon from the Caucus Mountain in the east arrives in camp, and begs her western sisters for help. She tells them the story of her Eastern Amazon tribe which was decimated by a mysterious army with supernatural abilities. This army has been destroying everything in its path, taking only a few female prisoners from each conquest, before moving on to the next target. She fears the future of the known world is at stake as the army is unstoppable. Can seven women, led by Xena and Gabrielle, stop a force they know little about? So unfolds the adventure to the East!

Thanks Patricia and Xanja98 for the story, loved the multiple layers of the words, the archetypal imagery in both stories. Looking forward to the next part of the trilogy. - Anonymous Nov 15th, 2005

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HI, Xanjaa and Patricia,
Wow!!! What a great ending to the story! My emotions were on over load and my stomach was doing flips. I had to get up from reading the battle it was stressing me out. Nice job, usually I get lost reading them and have a hard time figuring out who is doing what to whom. Your description of what Tynet had to endure depressed me but then the human race can be pretty cruel to each other. I Liked the heart to heart talk that Ephiny and Pony had about Adara. Pony had to love Adara enough to let her be happy. That whole story line was beautifully written,very touching. I got kind of upset when I thought you killed Pony, nice one. I am glad everyone made it threw all right, I like happy endings. Thank you for a great story. I`m looking forward to reading the next parts. - Nancy G. Nov 6th, 2005

I am very much enjoying your story. It is nice to read a new Xena tale for a change.
Thank you! - Nancy G. Apr 24th, 2005

Impossible to stop reading, a story with extraordinary depth
and passion. Compelling and poignant, a story not to be missed
that never breaks its thread of action that draws you into a
vortex of unforgettable characters and shattering events.

- Kerry Apr 10th, 2005

Some how I missed your first story. Had to go back and read it. I liked it; Xena and Amazons always a good story. The Persian Encounter is even better than the first part. Cannot wait for more! Thank you!
- Nancy G. Mar 29th, 2005

I like the Pesian Encounter because you have managed to write with depth. I see the places you describe. I know the characters you paint. I experience the story myself, as if I am living it. Your story fires my magination. That is the mark of a truly good Bard. For that, I thank every one of you! May your quills ever remain sharp, and your inkwells perpetually full!! Thanks! - Justine Mar 26th, 2005

Great story so far...cant wait to read the rest of it and waaay lookin forward to part 3 - amy Feb 18th, 2005

Amazing start. I'm anxiously waiting for more. - Anonymous Jan 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #91 in 2002, #94 in 2005.  
After consuming large amounts of beer during a drinking game, Striker is dared to kiss the next person to walk by. With one kiss, everything changes in her small world. Especially since the person she kissed is a new employee that her father has just hired.

loved it need I say more...LARISA ROCKS!!!!! - Anonymous Mar 4th, 2005

When Claire convinces her partner of five years, Jolie, to let her gamble away their mortgage money in Las Vegas for the weekend on the promise of a better life, she has no idea the gamble she was taking. After meeting Becker Gaudet, one roll of the dice changes all three of their lives forever and none of them would ever look at Valentine's Day the same way again.

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Another great romantic tale from Ali Vali. I liked this story so much more than the somewhat similar plot in the movie starring Robert Redford, Demi Moore and Woody Harrelson. Read and enjoy! - Cam Dec 3rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #07 in 2004, #91 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
The Swing Time Ballroom was dark and smoky just like it had been more than 60 years before. Not much had changed in the place. Mac blinked her eyes a few times and then walked to the middle of the long mahogany bar. She pulled out a long cigar, snipped the end off with her cutter and slid it between her lips. Searching her pockets, she pulled out her silver Zippo and burned the end before lighting it. With one eye squinted, she looked to the bartender and gave her a crooked grin. "Hey Sally gimme a bourbon neat and some pretzels if you have any." Sally pushed back her dyed red hair, eyed Mac and shook her head of long curls. MacKenna Jones, Private Investigator, lived in the past and that's the way she liked it. However, a sticky case and her loyal secretarys' grandaughter may just change that, as the tall, gangly Truman becomes Mac's indomitable Girl Friday and fate calls for more than a beautiful friendship.

Hilarious story with great chemistry between characters - Shyn Jun 6th, 2005

If you are looking for a story with a little mystery, a lot of romance and a huge dose of humour then this is definitely the one that will fill the bill. Personally I have never read one of Larisa'a tales that didn't make my day better, she is always entertaining and I think we all owe her a big thank you for sharing her amazing talent with us. - Alex P Jan 26th, 2004

I truely enjoyed this offering from the pen of Larisa -- but then when don't I - talk about lots of frustration -- nothing like being told no, forget it, never in a million years to get one going.
- LInda Jan 18th, 2004

Really good story! The characters were likable and believable and had great chemistry. I enjoyed it a lot. - Peggy Jan 16th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #57 in 2002, #89 in 2005.  
Six years have gone by since Renny has been home, now at the age of 30, she has decided to go back home and settle down. When she gets there she finds out that a 25-year-old family feud, once cooled is well under way again and her brother is the cause of it. She gets right into the middle of it to save her brother and loses her heart to the other side to a small blond with green eyes.

I love LARISA and these stories of hers .The stories are all great .read them all!! - reader Mar 5th, 2005

Another story by Larisa...what can one say..EXELENT
Read it
- SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

An intricately wowen tapestry of madness, passion and love.

Dark but captivating. Absolution will keep you reading until the last word. It is so refreshing to read a story that isn't all rainbows and sunshine. To read a story which forces you to feel the hope, happiness, and pain of the characters as if it were your own. Well done. - cassie Jan 1st, 2006

OMG i love this story,it was great,all the different things that happened. i luv ya anne ,this is now 1 of my favourite stories ever.keep writing more like this.
xxx - louise Apr 7th, 2005

A love story with a twist. I liked all the places Ms. Gardner took us to in this story. I am amazed how she wove so many story lines and brought them together to gives us a surprise ending. Very well done. - Felicity146 Jul 28th, 2003

I had to read it. There are lots of surprises in this story. I thought I had it figured out but I was wrong. This story is written with lots of surprises. - Sally May 30th, 2003

S. Anne Gardner combines suspense with romance. Wonderful story. - Anonymous May 29th, 2003

Jammed with the tensions of imminent disaster. The whole thing unfolds with the timing of a quartz watch. - popadopalous May 28th, 2003

I just had to read this story after everything I heard about it. All good. I know this is one of the best mystery stories written by a writer. By the way, I plan on reading all this authors stories. - Jane May 28th, 2003

Totally absorbing. It reads like a fantastic mystery, but the horror is that in the end it is real. Kuddos to S. Anne Gardner. Number one Bard - Kittygreen May 26th, 2003

Written by the Queen of twisted. I reread this story again for the upteenth time since S. Anne Gardner wrote it and want to tell all of you to read it. - Anonymous May 26th, 2003

Dark but captivating. This is one of the first stories I read by S. Anne Gardner. I have read it many times over and never tire of it. It has many surprises in it. For those of you who love the twist and turns in a story, this is a must read. - Anonymous May 26th, 2003

What do you get the woman who has everything? A life of her own. She has the money, the cars and the beautiful family and she doesn't want any of it. Living her life to her husbands whim and her fathers fears. Can the threats of an assassin set her free?<br><br>What do you get the woman who has nothing? A life that she had. She lives to serve. Lives to fight. The childhood that she knew will imprison her in bonds tighter than she has ever known. Will the threats of an assassin be her prison?

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #05 in 2004, #86 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Advertising Director Elora Duke had been observing the writer for months now, and finally got the courage to talk to her. The tall dark beauty, by the name of Virginia Wolf, is not overly receptive initially...however, Duke is not one to let go of one who has touched her so...

I just read this tender love story for the second time. What a wonderful tour de force by Ms. Tryst! It is so difficult to maintain the speaker's voice in first-person narratives, but she does it beautifully. - Linda Feb 14th, 2005

A beautiful love story. I would love to read a sequel or a POV from Virginia or both. - ter Nov 12th, 2004

What an absolutely wonderful, wonderful heartfelt story, but it begs to ask what happens now, and why stop there, it could be so much more. - LuvTigger71 Nov 2nd, 2004

*wow* this is a tender and elegant story of awakening. simply beautiful. - fanfic gourmet Jan 7th, 2004

Extremely different for this author. Well done though! A pleasure to read. Makes you wonder what happens after the last line had been read. Where to Virginia and Duke go from there? - Anonymous Jan 3rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

This is the best one yet! I love all the stories of this series but I just loved this one because you see more of how the girls live day to day. Their normal lives interupted by trouble is even more interesting then the girls going out and finding trouble. Loved it!!! - Casey Aug 12th, 2005

Wow!

Another great one by Ri. I loved this story, Veba and Rickie and their family are so special. I just loved the plot and to watch Veba grow and grow. Really well done. - Ann Aug 10th, 2005

Another great adventure with Veba and Rickie! I really love this series. I really enjoyed them all going to school I thought that was a great idea! - Toddi Aug 5th, 2005

I just loved this new addition, I really thought the mix of domestic life and adventure worked beautifully. I really adore Veba. She is so interesting to watch grow and learn. All the crew have evolved but it is so neat to see Veba from Ghost to Learning Curve. Thanks. - Tucker Aug 3rd, 2005

Hi Ri,
Well you 've done it again....another fantastic well written story on my favorite
characters. I really loved the way you are bringing out the many facets of their
personalities.....especially 'Veba's. allowing that childlike 'innocence' to be
mixed with the stength, determination of an independent woman.

- Christi Aug 2nd, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
The story of Jesse Hill and Elizabeth Weeks and how they meet and fall in love. Jesse is a former accountant turned horse rancher and Elizabeth is the information center director at the law firm that Jesse uses for the ranch. Jesse has never dated a woman and Elizabeth is still getting over the death of her lover.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Sonji and her so-called girlfriend end up on an island that is not quite as deserted as they first thought. The owner of Diablo Island, is not exactly happy to see them. However, when the tall, dark-haired island owner and the little blondes' eyes meet, there are sparks aplenty. Neither woman is what she seems, but it seems that their destinies are intertwined in this whirlwind romance, that along with it's usual Larisa happy ending, includes a simian wrecking crew and colorfully interesting parental units. Great read!

Woo-Hoo!!! Larisa, you ROCK!!! And, so does Diablo's Island...wow!!! If you enjoy twists and turns, unforgettable characters, giggling out loud, and crying a few good tears, you'll enjoy this story...promise!!! Once again, Larisa, you've managed to make me cry real tears and laugh my ass off at the same time!!! Your stories never fail to lift my spirits and warm my heart...thank you, Larisa for all you've given all of us!!! Now, not to be greedy, but, can we have more, pleeeeeeease??? - Michelle Aug 13th, 2003

this one has become a all time favorite of mine, the "crew" is at it again!! even missed the train to work so I could read this! an it is well worth it! Rates right up there with "Lost". As always Larisa you have done it again..WYD!!!LMAO,lookin forward to the next story to hit the net! Wizzy
only one problem the fonts are to small!:~) - Wizzy Aug 9th, 2003

I have found that finding a Larisa story is like receiving a box of fancy chocolates. You say to yourself, “I’ll just put these aside for a special moment.” But the very thought of just having them somewhere preys on your mind. Taunting, tempting, seducing you. Next things you know you’re in a chocolate induced coma.
Larisa’s stories are just like that. I think I have managed to go 5 hours after printing one up before I read it. Once I start reading, nothing else matters. The house could burn down for all I care.
Don’t bother me, I’m reading LARISA !!!!!
DIABLO’S ISLAND has everything to keep your attention. Half nekkid women walking around. South Sea island paradise. Sailing around the ocean blue on a yacht with the before mention nekkid women. I’m telling you, what more could a girl ask for.
My favorite part was Gibbon sailing the yacht and keeping it on course, was priceless.
- Sissy2757 Aug 7th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Top-25 #1. 
Love is rarely perfect... sometimes it seems impossible. A young woman leaves her troubled past, determined to start a new life in a new city. When she becomes hopelessly entangled with a domineering, emotionally embattled individual, she doesn't know if it's a dream come true, or her worst nightmare.

Yup, this story is definitely addictive! Hoping for a sequel too! If you like
Turning Tides, you may wanna check out Poetry in Motion and When You Dance with the Devil by Harley. - UberCrazy May 3rd, 2005

Turning tides is a great read. It portrays the helplesness in the maelström of love and sexual attraction/need quite well.
Naten could have fleshed out some parts in more detail, added perspective or a bit more conclusion, such as: what of the "sneaky stepbrother"?. His machinations and the plans/deals he apparently made during his vacation are not referred to again further in the story. Perhaps a sequel is in the making?

Also the need for anonymous, strongly dominant sex. That, to my mind, could not just disappear overnight, so to speak. But well, those are just my thoughts.
I really enjoyed reading it and certainly recommed it to others!

Letterwolf - letterwolf Mar 12th, 2004

Very well done. Great character development. Plan some time when you read this, you won't want to stop. I'm hopeing there is a sequel ones of these dyas. - Anonymous Feb 9th, 2004

This story produces addiction. I couldn’t stop reading till the end, and then, I couldn’t stop thinking of the characters. Great one. - Pru Jan 23rd, 2004

This is a intensely moving story. A.K. Naten really brings her characters to life and we really feel their pain and their joy. It is a great story and a must read. - Charles Dec 29th, 2003

This is a FANTASTIC story and I am waiting with baited breath for the rest of it! - Sprout Dec 18th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #03 in 2004, #81 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
In this mystery, an old wrong is again brought to light as First Sergeant Merc Macgregor is assigned to guard Finnegan Draper, a High School teacher who has been seriously beaten and left for dead, and who Merc blames for her part in the long-ago incident. However, in usual Larisa fashion, things are not as they seem and sparks fly between the two protagonists and their cronies, to the innevitable attraction and bliss of the two former 'enemies.'

Another excellent offering from Larisa -- she just keeps getting better. I enjoyed the mystery -- didn't even come close to who the bad guy was. I always wait till things is done before starting as I know nothing will get done till I am done with the story. - Linda Feb 25th, 2004

Grace Myers is an ordinary suburban housewife, though hardly a happy one. You might even call her bitter. She doesn't quite understand what she's missing- though she has an idea she is missing something. That is until one day, when that something comes calling as it so often does; unannounced, uninvited, and defying all manner of propriety and convenience.

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #19 in 2003, #79 in 2005.  

this story is great, the characters are alive, and the interaction between them hilarious! a very fun read! - ibh Nov 20th, 2005

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I love this series. It is SOOOOOOO witty and entertaining, without compromising depth or plot. It's got it all romance, tragedy, humor, etc. I give this series the highest recommendation. - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2003

Oh, boy!!!!!! This stoy is verrrrrrrry romantic! UNDENIABLE, By KM,
is about two lawers. Jessie is Robin's boss. Both of them fallen
deep in love,fight against job's rules, family, all for your love.
This story is enchanting, funny, sad,highly recommend! Enjoy! - Leth Jan 15th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #18 in 2004, #78 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Follow the lives of your favorite women from "Love in Photographs," "Georgia on My Mind," and "Stick to the Script." Careers, marriage, and children have these six ladies living on a rollercoaster. Will marriages last? Will careers be sacrificed? Will the vows of the heart withstand the tests of life? Find out in the fourth and final book in the New York Series.

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This story is the best in the series....before you sit down to read this you might want to get a box of tissues, because it is a hell of a rollercoaster ride, I have to say I cried like a baby through most of this story, but Alex really brought the characters alive.....P.S DONT miss this work of Art :) - bxverse666 Sep 1st, 2005

A great end to a wonderful journey. To come to know these characters and to feel as if they are your friends, it is bittersweet to be closing the door on their lives. However, Alex does it with the class and style that is uniquely her own. Thanks for the series. It was worth every moment. - Anonymous Feb 1st, 2005

gladly accept this story in to my hart, to keep it with me in mind in good times and bad times, for it is truly special.
I still sit here with the tears gleaming in my eyes and i cant tell if they are form joy or sadness,love or pleasure. What i do know is that I adore this story and the series it is part of.
I can say that this series, this storys truly will move you. So if you are truly looking for something special to give you a good time with many turns but have a true hart this is the story you want.
Alex has many Superb storys to pick, Alex has not let me down yet I have always had a good time reading here works. I not look forward to growing old and only reading all day long. - Sammylee Oct 12th, 2004

this is a must read story.....the author proves yet again that she gets better and better with each new story. the story makes you laugh, makes cry, makes you mad all the way to the very end and your left wonderfully happy. - dreamangel Aug 14th, 2004

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WOW!!!!!!!!! I love this authour. the entire series was wonderful and it reached perfection with this last installment. the ending was a wonderful twist that brought tears to my eyes. to make you think one thing, and reveal the happy ending was genious! Alex tryst knws how to write a real story with believable characters that go through everyday problems and are flawed just like everyone else. She makes you care about these women and their familes and have you rooting for them to make it. love is eternal, and this series shows that with startling realism. Bravo! you are truly a gifted writer. - peaches Aug 2nd, 2004

Honors/Awards:  #70 in 2004.   Top-25 #1. 
Terri Bledsoe is very angry when Anthony Leone leaves, leaving her very pregnant. As a last resort, she visits Noemí Leone, the head of Leone Pasta Enterprises. When Noemí learns of her brother's misdeed, she offers a helping hand. Follow this chronicle of Noemí as she moves from an alcoholic haze and into a friendship that could give her life more meaning.

Great story! I could not stop reading....I was literally up all night. - ERG Dec 5th, 2005

Noemi and Terri .Wow this strory is great! A must read. - Anonymous Jul 8th, 2005

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I found the author's site and story by chance a couple of years ago, before she started posting here.
The basic premise is tangled - Noemi takes on the role of carer for her brother's ex-gf who is pregnant with his child. This story could have fallen apart in so many ways but the writer forges strongly ahead with every chapter. The focus and thread of the story is firm. There are sub-plots shoring the main couple nicely. The supporting characters are interesting; ranging from sleazy, benign, righteous to warm, funny and sexy.
Best of all (!), is the tortured soul herself, Noemi. Her character resounds with angst, anger, power, sadness and is oh, so very sexy. In my view, the earlier version of this story was much more powerful in it's rawness and sensuality but the revision has smoothed out some edges and added more to the surroundings. Personally, I think it detracts a little from Noemi's edgy characterisation but the story still remains one of my favourites.
The story moves very quickly from the start, we feel the restrained primality of Noemi and we learn about her family and personal demons. We are easily caught up in her activities and the story actually picks up heat the further it runs (note: glacier warning!). Terri is her catalyst for healing and loving again and her best friend's romance deserves a separate story of it's own.
Noemi is on my personal Tops list, I pull it for a good angsty, dramatic and erotic romance.

Brilliant work, Ms Ruiz. - E Sep 23rd, 2004

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I totally loved this story!! Katia N. Ruiz did a BEAUTIFUL job in this story. Battle between lost love and finds in totally different person. I loved how Noemi endure the loss of her beloved, find Terri, a lonesome person carry the baby of her bastard brother. How they both over came their agruement; their will of their own lives, and stands together as one. How they have friends, family that truely loved them.
I loved how close Noemi's mother and father are close to one another, and her best friend, Victoria. She stand by for her friend, Noemi, and guide her to her trouble times. I'm crossing my fingers for the next seaqual to this exciting story.
Thanks Katia, for your for love of writing. Keep it up. - Bay Dec 13th, 2003

I owe this author an apology for when I first saw the word "revision" and the amount (55) of additional pages, I knew she'd ruined a perfectly good story. My bad. Ms. Ruiz, you have turned a good story into a great one. - Kaye Mar 4th, 2003

What can one say...? It was and is a great story.
When will the sequel be posted?
I am egerly wating for next part - SammyLee Feb 23rd, 2003

Katia, I could not stop reading your incredibly well told story until i was done...your character development...your insights into the torment and pain of our hero was wonderful...i hope you don't end it here...I WANT A WEDDING..MAYBE THEY CAN HAVE ANOTHER CHILD...LOL...
You are an extremely talented writer, and i look forward to looking at more of your work. Cat
stolenhalogirl@aol.com - Cathy Jan 24th, 2003

This is the 2nd story I've read by this talented bard and it's a great story with just the right mix of drama, angst and love. I love a story with well written secondary characters and this author has done that and more with "Noemi." Well written and well done. - Kay Dec 26th, 2002

An absolute fabulous work of art, and yes, I mean art. The way Ms. Ruiz described the events in this story is amazing. She gave in-depth detail of the surroundings, giving the reader a clear picture, almost as if one was watching a movie. Once I started reading the story, I couldn’t stop. In some parts, I was on the edge of my chair, chewing my nails. The best story I have read in a very long time.
- Anonymous Oct 27th, 2002

Just wanted to give a comment on my favorite story, Noemi. Folks this is a wonderful story about two women coming together through adversity. One realizing that she can love again, and the other realizing that she is worthy to be loved. I have read the story 'numerous', ok over 20 times and I love it more each time I read it. You should read this story, and be sure to let Katia know what you think. - Tonya Coley  Oct 15th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #24 in 2004, #76 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this erotic tale, Gwen had memorized everything about Kyle and Cody's mom from Beth the first day she had seen her, and as an after school program teacher, she'd seen her every day. Beth had been noticing Gwen too since she was a breath takingly beautiful young woman with light brown hair, green eyes, incredibly fit and curvy body. Neither one knew just how to approach the other, but Gwens' second job takes care of that, which comes as a surprising exposure for both!

After reading Ms. Black's new novel "In TOO Deep", I wanted more! This is an adorable story with incredible characters. Great job! - HK Oct 13th, 2005

I think, I need a tall drink of water and a lap dance, not necessarily in that other. Thank you Ms Black. - B. Apr 27th, 2005

Makes me wonder about having a second career and the fun of juggling two diverse jobs. Great job on capturing the feelings and expressions of the characters. - Shadylady Oct 18th, 2004

NEEDS A FOLOW UP BADLY- abut 69 more chapters. rely good one i am inpresed. - SammyLee Oct 6th, 2004

HOT! And of course...NOT nearly long enough!
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- jlnickymaster Sep 27th, 2004

Excellent! Just what a short story should be. I highly recommend this if you want a fast good read. - darkenedkarma Sep 23rd, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #96 in 2002, #75 in 2005.  
Raven, the head of a covert special operations team, is sent out with her team to protect the U.S. Ambassador to Turkey from a possible terrorist threat. It's not a mission that she and her team enjoy, being more used to blowing things up, assassinations, or covert extraction terrorists. Raven is sent in undercover to protect the Ambassador's daughter, while the rest of her team pose as Marine guards. The tough spec-ops captain is stunned when she finds that the girl she's supposed to protect is actually a twenty-one year old spunky, head strong, gorgeous strawberry blonde. Don't let the above fool you, this isn't really an action-adventure tale, and instead is a very enjoyable romance that has some great moments in it. Keep some ice nearby when you read this one, and don't read it at work!

This is really a great read folks. Greek Warrior has a way of not leeting you lose interst in this story. I can usally tell within 5 to 10 paragraphs if a book is going to hold my interst and I've got to say, once I started I couldn't stop until I was done. Hats off to you Greek Warrior!! A fabulous read. - Robin Hicks Apr 10th, 2005

I really loved reading it. It's a really great story. The interaction of the characters and the atmosphere are well written... it's a good mixture of "Bodyguard" (the movie), a family drama... and... well, let's put it that way: It gets kinda hot in the middle (very soon and very eager!)! HIGHLY RECOMMENDABLE! :-) - The Fic Addict Jan 26th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #73 in 2002, #41 in 2003, #54 in 2004, #74 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
The ER Chief Besom had two choices - either fire Dr. Shay Gerard, whom he'd just heard the umpteenth complaint against or turn it over to the one person who could find out the deepest secrets of a spy. Enter Pez - tall, long dark hair and eyes that could pierce into your very soul...and Chief of Surgery. Can her unorthodox ways help her help Shay? What...who is she afraid of? Read on and find out, although somewhat graphic, this is yet another romp in the warped world of Larisa that will make you laugh and cry.

I really liked this story. The plot was awesome and the characters didn't get carried away. [wink. wink. poke. poke. nudge. nudge.]There weren't too many parts I wasn't allowed to read.
Good use of words, but not too complicated to read. My favorite line was "Can I get a wheelie chair for a frozen tater tot?"

PS I wish you would write more stories without the characters getting 'carried away'. - Nanaabelle's Grandson Aug 15th, 2003

it doesn't need comments... READ this story !! Larisa, you're one of the best bards !! - laurence Jul 31st, 2003

I must say I really do enjoy Larisa's stories very much. She has the ability to draw the reader into her story and keep them riveted to the screen. That being said I have but one criticism. The main characters are usually very likable and believable, but then the two goofy friends are always thrown in and they just completely detract from the story. I can't help but find them irritating and have to roll my eyes at their antics. I mean come on they don't act at all like real people do (well at least any people I have EVER met in my life). I personally enjoy being able to relate to the characers and they are simply impossible to relate to. This is just a personal opinion, of course. I would like to see Larisa turn her considerable talents towards writing something with more depth and emotion rather than finding new outrageous situations to throw these two annoying creatures into. - Peg Jul 12th, 2003

IMHO I believe this is one of her best. - Amanda Mar 16th, 2003

Larisa has found the formula that works everytime...I love her stories! Please keep them coming!!!! - LW Oct 5th, 2002

After wobbling a little with her last couple of stories, Larissa is back! "The Ice Princess" is well written, no lags or jags, just the author at her best. I loved the pez dispenser; it brought back childhood memories and a hankering for one of those solid, pure sugar treats that made me wired and able to run faster than anyone else. ;) Thanks and all that jazz to the author for an all-around good read.
- Kay Oct 3rd, 2002

Just finished reading and I really enjoyed it...hilarious! Touching, too! - L Sep 27th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #89 in 2004, #73 in 2005.  
A Medieval-era tale that follows the story of two people who are brought together under less than ideal circumstances, and must learn to adapt to each other, as well as their new lives. Deception, heartache, and twists of fate complicate feelings and alter futures, and relationships struggle between bouts of love and despair.

Though there has been a huge gap in posting on this story, it's been well worth the wait. A.K. Naten has not let the lapse deter from the story's focus and momentum and I am looking forward reading to this continuing saga. - Kaye Aug 6th, 2005

beautifully written and a great romance story! cant wait for the upcoming chapters! - blazinangelwings Jan 13th, 2005

Excellent! This is going to be a whopper of a romance. Naten does it again. Please finish..soon!! Like "Turning Tides", I am sure this one will blow us away. Love this writer and boy oh boy will I be checking every day to see new installments.Wonderful.
- Califa Sep 29th, 2004

A great Conqueror style tale, well spun. - St0rm Aug 14th, 2005

Brilliant! Speaking as someone that has read David Weber's wonderful series a number of times, including all the adjacent books, this is wonderfully written by an author that really knows the universe and the very specific character personalities in quite some detail, and honestly it is just lovely to read Honor finally doing that which I always prayed she would and knew was ultimately what she should; fall for a woman :) - Ryath May 16th, 2005

Woohoo! Just love the girls and can't wait for Vic and ummmh ...??? to get together (come on, you know you want to! LOL). - Mic Oct 13th, 2005

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I love this story. The conflicts are realistically confusing as they would be in life when someone comes to the realization that they can no longer live the life chosen for them. I also love the interplay of loving friendships vs friends loving each other. - Jasmine Oct 13th, 2005

Fantastic story Hurry and finish it cause i want to know Who ends up with who!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a great story teller keep it up! - Andie Oct 6th, 2005

More please. - Anonymous Sep 30th, 2005

You're KILLING me. - JAZZY Sep 25th, 2005

More please. Loving this one. - Marie Sep 21st, 2005

The story is great. The charectors are so real I feel like I actually know them all. I'm also enjoying the plot twists. Write faster. ;) - Linda Sep 8th, 2005

Lady J, what a great story. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. Amazing plot. Can't wait for part eight. - Jenny Sep 6th, 2005

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana Sep 5th, 2005

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana Sep 5th, 2005

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. You are a wonderful writer and I am glad to see you writing again. I can't waite for the part seven. - Janice Aug 5th, 2005

Loved this story ...any idea when or if this story will be completed...finished part 5 pleeeaaase finish it Thanxx - FBF Jan 31st, 2005

I really enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for part 6!!!! - Deja Nov 7th, 2004

Wonderful, just wonderful. Waiting for the next part to be posted. - A. Nonny Mouse May 6th, 2003

Ok, so I am slightly biased, but I truly love this story. The characters are well written and the plot is fun (and at times just plain funny!) Its a charming and entertaining story and I highly recomend it! - Trin Apr 30th, 2003

I have found this story not only entertaining but also exciting. I feel the characters are 3 dimensional, each having a very unique personality. I anxiously await more and would recommend this story to anyone who loves good writing and a well-spun tale. - Windsong Apr 20th, 2003

It is great. There are parts in it that were so funny I amost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. I very much highly recommend this story. I am sure once you start reading it you will love it as much as I do. Can't wait till the next update. - Debbie Dee Apr 13th, 2003

I love this story. I was laffin so hard I almost joked. Lady J is really somethin special, can't wait to see more from her. - ne-ne Apr 10th, 2003

I loved what has been written so far. Cannot wait for more!! The characters are believeable and loveable. I recommend this story for everyone to read. You will love it as much as I do.

- T. Stratton Mar 21st, 2003

WHEN IS THE SECOND PART GOING TO BE ADDED? - Anonymous Dec 1st, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Not all first blind dates are what they seem, and not all blind dates end after the first.

For a short story, I extremely enjoyed it. I normally prefer the novels, but this was exceptional. - twidgetX Apr 11th, 2005

Carlin Whittaker had the world on a string. She had a stable relationship with her partner of almost twelve years and the perfect job. A chance encounter turns her world upside down and changes everything.

Honors/Awards:  2002 Story Of The Year. Perenial Favorite Award: #01 in 2002, #54 in 2003, #74 in 2004, #69 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
FBI Director Jericho Chamaune has a hobby of trying to solve the cases of missing women dating back ten years of more. One day her assistant director Stan gives her yet another folder of a missing woman. Like several others, she is a college student from Texas. In all the time she has been working the case, they have yet to find any sign of the missing women. When she placed the picture of the latest missing young woman on her wall, she could not tear her eyes away from the green eyes looking back at her. One day a friend working at the nearby hospital calls her. A woman has been found lying beside a road and brought to the emergency room for treatment. At her first sight of the woman's haunted green eyes, Jericho knows that this is the latest missing woman.

Great story. Check it out
- Anonymous Jul 26th, 2005

I must say that this story is one of her best. I loved it so much I have it bookmarked. - Anonymous May 16th, 2003

I’ve just ‘discovered’ Larisa’s stories. Buried Prejudices was fantastic, and I wan’t more, more, more!!!! - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2002

As with all of Larisa's stories, she grabs your undivided attention at the onset and you find you can't stop until the last sentence has been read. All her stories contain the standard beginning, middle, and end...but in between, they're packed with enough action and romance to make your reading a delighful pleasure. - ~M~ Jun 17th, 2002

I thoroughly enjoyed Buried Prejudices and the rest of your stories. I don't know why I've never read them before, but each new story is like a fine wine - to be savored. - Judy Jun 13th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #33 in 2004, #68 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Rayven a wildlife photographer and journalist returns to claim her ranch, while Jaxon Segreto, Chief of the elite firefighter team Blue Mountain Firefighters does some soul searching. The sequel to this tale is Fistful of Rain.

A great, touching story. I couldn't imagine how many "I love you"s a story could contain until I read this one. ;-) Read it!! - The Fic Addict Jan 30th, 2005

Great story...was up late looking for something to read when I came across this. Ended up staying up till I was able to finish it. Keep up the good work...=) - Lacey Aug 27th, 2004

Elijah Kingdom knew something was not right when she woke up on the hot sands of Fire's Backbone. She was faced with a world that was so foreign to her, yet so familiar. What does a book and a powerful shape-shifter have to do with her existence there? It is up to Elijah and her companion Balon to destroy the evil that dwell in the Dark Lands. A woman who reminds Elijah, of her beloved, enters her life. And a crown-less King and a powerful stone may resurface down the dark and terrible road.

Megan is a city girl who has inherited half of her aunt's farm, but in order for her to keep it she must live on the farm for one year with Charlie who owns the other half.

the story is great .....the best story ever.....finished the story please..all the best take care' - fa artemis Nov 18th, 2005

cool story so far, too bad it was never finished. - Anonymous Mar 1st, 2005

I just finished reading parts 1 to 5a of the story Dangerous Games and I really enjoyed it. The characters were finely drawn and the dialogue authentic. I really like the way the author weaved the Xena scrolls into this modern story. I would love to see how everything ties together but, alas, the story is unfinished. - griggssoccer Feb 15th, 2005

This is a really interesting story. Any chance the author's going to finish it? - aurelius Dec 20th, 2004

Jana Mueller and Cameron Grant spend a private afternoon on the four year anniversary of their chance meeting, reminiscing about the highs and lows of their relationship. A sentimental story about finding true love.

like all of ms tryst's stories a pleasure to read from beginning to end. A story that leaves the reader with a happy smile at the end. another great story!! - blazinangelwings Mar 2nd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:   #100 in 2003, #62 in 2005.  

what a wonderful, realistic, heart wrenching, upsetting, happy, sucking ya in and keeping ya hooked right to the end story, that I have read in a long time.
To put it bluntly, its a brilliantly written story. - LuvTigger71 Aug 13th, 2005

I just needed to read this story to put me in very good mood..wow...very very well done.. and just wonder why this wonderful story hasnot been publish yet..I would say this one is a plus.
keep the good work miss. Day.
- miriam Jul 10th, 2005

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This was a fantastic story. It was very well written and it had me until the very end. The characterization was great. I have to say though, I couldn't stand Paige. I think she was a bit of a lousy friend. Sort of reminded me of the phrase 'misery loves company' at times. Once again though, great story. - Anonymous May 25th, 2003

http://ca.geocities.com/dayliobserver/frontpage1.html Is where you'll find the rest of the story, it's in episodes. It was really hard to track down! Why would someone hide this beautiful story away like that tsk!!
- Stephanie Jan 14th, 2003

Loved this story.I thought the characters were very well rounded,but I couldn't find part 8 to finish reading it.Any suggestions? - jbamazon Jan 13th, 2003

Wow! This story is wonderful!!!! The characters Terri, a teenage and
Sarah, a more old sophisticated and sexy woman, have a relationship
tumultuous, hot, passionate, to writer with rare talent and preciosity.
Leth - Leth Dec 26th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #04 in 2002, #68 in 2003, #62 in 2004, #61 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Detective Xepher Sallano, trying to solve what appear to be serial murders, keeps running into dead ends...literally. Then the Medical Examiner dies in the midst of the inverstigation, and his replacement is makes Sallano see red. It's hate at first sight for Chief Medical Examiner Brianna Meadows, too. Or is it? As the murders get more gruesome, Detective and ME find themselves involved...in more ways than one. This is another of Larisas' gripping tales with unconventional characters, laughs, love and gore, that will keep you spellbound.

This is my favorite Larisa story of all time...OMG..LOVE IT...Xepher and Bri rock, but I love the captain, they're always embarassing him HAHAHA...thanks Larisa..I've re-read this too many times now.....and it just gets better. - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2005

GREAT STORY!! READ IT!!! Alittle gory, but if you're like me and like that kinda stuff, its a keeper. Larisa, you rock! - Anonymous Jul 26th, 2005

I agree, there is gore galore but I like a story with grit so I was interested right away. I just read it in it's entirety, it's simply wonderful. I can see a Bone Collector 2 with Angelina here ... or is that wishful thinking? It would be a shame if you bypassed it simply because the graphic scenes may disturb you for it's got one of my highest ticks of approval. - Corbeau's Voyager Dec 1st, 2003

Xepher? Guess those "X" names are kinda hard to come by, huh? Once I got past that, and the fact that parts of it are REALLY gory, I quite enjoyed it. - Mich Sep 14th, 2002

One word. WOW! McKee is an enigma wrapped in a mystery. I can't wait for a sequel to answer all the questions the ending of this story left me with. Great read! - Blue Dec 21st, 2005

McKee is an exceptional story that is raw, gusty and lives right in the gutter of society. The action grabbed me right from the beginning in this finely woven tale. I thoroughly recommend this story to anyone wanting to experience the seamier side of life. Well done, AC!
- Aurelia Dec 20th, 2005

Great story. We want more!! :) - lyneX Dec 19th, 2005

This story screams "sequels". Very interesting lead character with a wonderful supporting cast. - jac Dec 4th, 2005

Great story, I hope we have a sequel soon, thanks ¡ - Ailidh (Spain) Nov 21st, 2005

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Here's a truly intriguing dark tale that might seem to be just another PI tale at first glance. A.C. Henley has masterfully constructed a gritty tale whose center is the dark enigmatic Quin McKee, a PI who does not play by the rules and yet gets the job done. She has friends in high places and in the lowest depths and her heart is something else...fraught with a world of hurt and then some. As the story opens, in crossing paths with those she once called friends after a three years absence, she now meets detective Vivian Walsh, one tough cop that might change her ways and mend some fences. But can the tall blonde break through the barriers and really get through to KcKee? Read on as Book One unravels some of the mysteries... - Anastacia Nov 20th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Well, I like this story/journal as it has some interesting aspects delving into the writers character, how she grew up to some degree, how she especially relates to others and how she deals with her being gay. Location of story is kind of rustic but scenic. The circumstances are past and what you read is much like a back story. There are some funny lines and I like hearing how she deals with her life for the most part which is uncomfortable at times and even painful, though not unhappy. There was no email addy to give feedback to the author so hopefully that will be added to the next part. - KC Nov 10th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #29 in 2004, #58 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
As if the insanity of the ER were not enough, St. Luke's Hospital in Washington D.C. features the insanity of one Dr. Jack and her associate loonies, which makes poor Dr. Waylon Porter want to scream. Enter the a tall woman with long black wild looking hair, baggy clothes and the voice of an angel that captured everyone's attention including hers, who with a group of bums stood singing in front of a captive audience of senior citizens that had come from the bus wreck right outside hospital doors! Waylon calls upstairs for a Psych consult, only to find out that the 'blue-eyed bum' is none other than Dr. Hudson 'The Dude' Halgenberg, the hospital psychiatrist. So the fun continues in this zany tale of love and suspense sure to grab you!

"The Blues" was the story that finally got me hooked and so I started reading a lot of Larisa's works.
Where do I begin?
I really love the goofy people in the story. No one is safe from embarrassing oneself. I think that's what makes the characters alive, not to mention the dialogues. - lectra Aug 7th, 2004

Whoohoo!!! Another one from Larisa ... this is one funny story and comes with another liquid warning. A must read for everyone.
You rule, Larisa. Keep them comming!!!
- Bacchus Aug 19th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
C. J. Harte is an incurable romantic who is currently working on a series of love stories about the various stages of love in our lives. This is one of her life stage stories. This story is dedicated to the first crush in each of our lives...

I read the first story of Ms. Harte series (Last Dance) and really enjoyed it. It was well written and touching. She does it again!! Don't miss it! Both stories will make your heart flutter! Thank you. - Vesna Jun 15th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #21 in 2004, #56 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

I just found this wonderful story and can't wait for more. Amazing and very very funny. Found myself laughing out loud. - Wendi Dec 26th, 2005

Truly wonderful story. Please continue!!!! - Anonymous Nov 27th, 2005

Loved every single word. - Danni Nov 14th, 2005

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I just came across this story and was glad I did. I was pleasantly surprised first by the clever mixture of comedy and real life situations. Next how well written this story is. And lastly that this story is about more mature women with children. Thank you Lady J well done and I look forward to your next installment. - Diane Nov 10th, 2005

Very wonderful story. A real gem worth finding. - Steff Oct 31st, 2005

WELCOME BACK BUSINESS TRIP....this has got to be the funniest down to earth piece ever. I absolutely love this please please please update soon. - Lee Oct 20th, 2005

More please. The story is excellent. - White Wolf May 17th, 2004

Great story. Looking forward to more of it. I like that the characters are real people with imperfections, fears, aspirations, and needs...in other words, human. I also appreciate the more mature age of the main characters. As mentioned by other readers, the humor and writing style are excellent. Now if I can just be patient until I find out what happens next.... - Debbie May 10th, 2004

Lady J, you have a wonderful style of writing. I can't believe I laughed out loud but I did. I love this story, more please. - Jenny May 6th, 2004

This story is so great I can't wait to read more. Your doing a great job on it Lady J - Debbie Dee Apr 30th, 2004

Please don't end it in part three. - Anonymous Mar 11th, 2004

I laughed till I cried. Who are you and how do you know me? Great job Lady J. - Denise Mar 5th, 2004

OMG! This is so funny and so real to life! You've captured office politics with style. I love the characters and I hope we'll get to see more of them in the future! Go Lady J! - Kaia Mar 4th, 2004

What a great surprise this morning to see part 2 of Business Trip. One thing I can honestly say is I hope it does not end in part 3. - Judi Mar 3rd, 2004

Excellent. - Teri Mar 2nd, 2004

This story is so great. I can't wait till the next part. You have done one fanatic job on it Lady J. - Debbie Dee Mar 2nd, 2004

Loved it, when will we see more? - Rhea Feb 5th, 2004

This is a wonderful start. I love the humorous portrayal of corporate life. - Lisa Jan 28th, 2004

All I can say is.....More Please - A. Noni Mouse Jan 23rd, 2004

You did it again Lady J. This story is very humorous and entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next part. - Windsong Jan 20th, 2004

How many chances does a person get at a 'new life'? 'Period piece' set in the 1850's Oregon territory; Drama; Angst.

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New Life, Turning Tides and Second Son (not finished) are well written by this author. I like what A.K. Naten does with erotica in these three. Could limit some of the 'head talking' that each character gives to 'tell' us what they're thinking etc in Turning Tides...but it did keep me reading until finished. I think this will be a book Aug2005 according to A.K.N. page. I love stories that have the X character as she is in these pieces...gender straddling/dominance. S. Anne Gardner's great writing also comes to mind for strong X character's not to mention intriquing plots. - Anonymous Jan 12th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #83 in 2003, #98 in 2004, #54 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Tall, blue-eyed Largo Coogan, was having her first weekend off in weeks and she planned on spending it fishing at the Shenandoah River. Little did she know that she would run into Garrison Dexter...both literally and figurately. The little blonde would turn her world upside down and then some.

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This one is a riot, J is totally bonkers(too much candy) but also very likeable. One word of advice DON'T READ AND DRINK AT THE SAME TIME b/c you WILL ruin your monitor. Another great one from Larisa. Please keep writing these great tales. - Draco Mar 23rd, 2005

Winner of the Intrepid Story Challenge, June 2003. Larisa has managed once again to totally ambush us with a great story. My recommendation to you is…JUST READ IT! - SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

Sometimes fate has to hit you between the eyes to get your attention. Garrison Dexter and Largo Coogan certainly find this to be the case in this hilarious Larisa tale. Add to that a crazy cousin complete with the voices in her head and costumes to match, and some rather unorthodox breast enhancements, and you have another winner!!! You go, Larisa!!! - Michelle Jun 23rd, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #88 in 2002, #04 in 2003, #26 in 2004, #53 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Take one Regina Taylor, record executive, tall, dark and dangerous. Add singer Kari Swift, not tall but she more than made up for her height with fatal cutness. Record Exec and Singer meet - match made in heaven right? NOT! It's hate at first sight as far as Kari is concerned...will Reggie be able to change her mind? Follow along and enter the stormy music world and see if they'll rock on!

Really enjoyed this one. KG's stuff is always wonderful but this was certainly fun. Would have made a very nice novella or even novel if the secondary characters had been fleshed out. However, everyone was quite three dimensinoal and the read was a pleasure. Would be nice to see these two again. Reggie's transformation was quite remarkable and it would be interesting to see what happens in the long run. Her past is just itching to come back and bite... well, you get the idea. - Roxytrek Mar 7th, 2004

Still one of my favorites. Lust, love, passion all wrapped up in a deliciously funny package. Rock on! - Kel Feb 17th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #23 in 2004, #52 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

WOW!! Great story. It holds your attention to the very end. - kb Aug 26th, 2005

A fantastic story filled with romance, action, and mystery! One of my favorites. Don't forget to vote for Fire Within for the top 100. It definitely deserves a high spot, and so do Anita Louise's other stories. Check them out! She's such a talented writer. - Jane Bond Feb 1st, 2004

A bevy of butt-kicking, intelligent, and gorgeous women head up the cast of this exceptional mystery. Anita Louise offers another well-written adventure that will transport the reader to exotic locales, place you in the middle of danger, and face-to-face with an element of the supernatural. And just in time for Valentine's Day, Anita puts the reader in the mood for romance as she weaves tales of enduring love within this novel. Will you be able to solve the mystery before the heroines? It will be quite the challenge, even for super sleuths. - Rachel Jan 31st, 2004

Oh, yeah, the Fire Within has so many tendrils of flames feeding marvelous characters, romance, plots, mysterious goings on and a hairy horror not born from a bad hair salon. You will cringe at times, put new wrinkles in your forehead trying to figure out the who the numerous bad guys are and get a free suntan
following the characters to valleys & desert locations. The gals are gorgeous, lovable, funny and fend quite well dealing with the bad guys. Not much this story failed to weave well into it pages. Don't miss this one and encourage the bard to write a sequel. Just too characters you want to see again and follow to another adventure.How about it, Anita Louise?
O Ger - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

This story reads like a great mystery novel..with the characters intertwining within and around one another... loved it....looking forwards to a sequel. - Christi Jan 30th, 2004

Enjoyed the story, and I am the type of person where if you don’t catch my interest in the first few paragraphs, then I am going to read something that will. Well written, I look forward to new adventures by the characters and a sequel. R. - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

I'm up to date on my reading of "Fire Within" and can't wait for more! These characters have captivated me.

The town, the people, the strange going ons and now the monster that is scouring the countryside. It is a breath of fresh air to read a story that actually lets the readers feel 'every step.' A story that takes the reader on many adventures. I have laughed at times. Felt my heart beat faster when things got tense and scary.

I actually feel as if I am a part of this adventure. The love the women share is fantastic. Can’t wait to read more of this story.

- Jill Oct 8th, 2003

I am so loving this story.I am there, I feel as if I am part of the team.
A marvelous story, written so well, I don't want to leave. Just when
I think I have figured out whats going on, Anita throws in a curve
and brings it in a whole new direction........Looking forward
to the next chapters........ - Jean Dec 12th, 2002

This story has it all: action, comedy, drama, a little heartache, a lot of romance, and a mystery that has me pointing fingers at a half-dozen characters. This is another great story from the talented and popular author, Anita Louise. Do not miss this one! - Kimin Dec 10th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #34 in 2004, #51 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

absolutely captivating story! Shows a close friendship between 6 people, 2 loving couples and one sizzling new relationship, all the while as a great mystery is played out. wish a sequel would be written. - blazinangelwings Mar 8th, 2005

i'd love to read a sequel, i read it before but i lost it ,i've been looking for this story since the last time i read it last year,finally found it again.great story - Montse (spain) Jan 15th, 2005

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Psicology meets investigation, with action in the middle. A group of friends losing one of their one to sinking insanity over a sad twist of fate. A new comer igniting the fallen one’s awakening. New lovers lust with mixed emotions. Anger and friendship on the field.
Love it! But then again I'm a sucker for stories portraying a good group of friends; besides, there’s a really hot couple. In simple adjectives: sexy (very very!), funny, deep, unexpected, great. It left me reading all night long. I’m *really* crossing my fingers to see a new story with these characters (all of them!).
- Maria Jan 11th, 2005

Absolutely wonderful story. I hope there is going to be a sequel! - Jennifer May 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #36 in 2002, #49 in 2004, #50 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this beautifully romantic Uber by Colleen, Jamie Sheridan, a tall dark beauty who is a proof-reader by day and a limo driver by night, has just begun trying to get on with her life after a somewhat shady past, when she decides to accept her co-worker's invitation for a get-together at her house. There, Jamie meets someone who might just make all the difference…Erin Casey. Erin is Bridgett's younger sister, a beautiful blonde writer blinded in an accident, who seems to 'see' into Jamies' very soul. Follow this sweet and moving tale as their relationship develops, moving past emotional baggage and adversity. This is a story not to miss!

This is just a wonderful piece of work! Only... well, it's too short! *g*
- Amastre Mar 14th, 2005

Absolutely wonderful. Do not miss this story. Just perfection. - Kayryn Sep 24th, 2004

this story is great it has every kind of story there is i hope more will come from Colleen - Krysta Dec 17th, 2003

This is one of the best stories I have ever read !! I was captivated from the first chapter !! I would recommed it to everybody !!
- AJ Aug 28th, 2002

Excellent story. I found it to be very touching. The characters will touch your heart immediately and the reader will find herself submerged into their lives. - Anonymous Jun 5th, 2002

One of the best stories I've ever read. Simply beautiful. - Anonymous Apr 29th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Dale Wincott likes restoring old furniture. In fact, one could say she has a passion for it, spending many long hours scouring the flea markets and second hand furniture shops in search of long-forgotten treasures. During one such search, she finds an old battered mirror and falls in love with it immediately. Little did Dale know what effect such a discovery would have on her life. Are the secret whisperings at night coming from the mirror, or is it all in her lonely, frustrated mind?

Wow, wonderfullly written period piece, ok period pieces, seeing as it covers two different time periods. Amazing story concept. Well written with engaging characters. Hopefully we'll see more of these women who crossed time to stay together! - Kelly Dec 19th, 2005

Yeah, what those other two said! New writer? Where has she been hiding? Wow. That was a surprise. Bravo! - AD Nov 26th, 2005

Very good, interesting, different, and HOT. - Anonymous Nov 24th, 2005

Ooooooooo, not what I expected at all! I liked! This little story will definitely grab your attention and then twist it around in another direction all together. Lots of little surprises! Great read! - Susan Nov 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Love trust and desire grow in a burst of burning flames.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Cody Lawson's early life was a series of unpleasant events. Amanda Norris was the one that bothered her the most. Can a chance encounter between the two women allow Cody to tie up at least one loose end that has haunted her for the past 20 years?

Excellent story! I loved the character of Cody, and Amanda. I hope that in the future, this author takes the story and adds more to it. It finished way too fast for me! - Katia N. Ruiz Jul 4th, 2005

I am loving this story.....can't wait for the next part... - loubug Jun 27th, 2005

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Loved the part of the outcast going back to high school reunion to stuff it to the old popular crowd, that's looking fatter, older and uglier these days. Sounds like a start of a pretty good story, can't wait for the last 3 parts! - Anonymous Jun 22nd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #67 in 2004, #46 in 2005.  
What’s the connection between drug dealers, a missing woman, council business, Welsh architecture and Sleeping Beauty? Striker might have made a connection between two of them... But she came to London to forget and to hide... and to seek. She had other riddles to solve. But an encounter at a hospital’s Accident & Emergency department turns her priorities, her life and her heart upside down.

What can I say about this story except,wow! This is one awesome story. I really loved it. I hope to read more on these characters soon. If you havent read this read it now! - Anonymous Oct 24th, 2005

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What a story! I just finished reading it and am seriously contemplating ringing in sick to read it all over again. Striker and Morien are two of the best characterisations I have seen yet (and I eat a lot of uber!). This story is a gem and I hope there is more to come.

Besides doing a fabulous job with the leads, Devize deserves a standing ovation for her carefully crafted minor characters. Danny had a part in my heart as much as anyone and its rare that you get a story that makes you care that much. and makes you scared... and makes you laugh... and makes you wanna hit certain people over the head for being infinitely stupid...

This one really does have it all. Read it now. It's the real deal. - Vee Apr 22nd, 2005

We meet Morien and Striker who will fall in love as will the readers with these two opposites. Guess which is tall & blue eyed! A story that is kind of sweet, but has danger, flight, bad guys, mystery all entwined with a soulmate love tale with some pitfalls. Dialogue is really good and descriptions of places, feelings and actions are so full of depth that you feel like a part of it. Hated to see it end & hope Devize writes a sequel. I miss Morien & Striker. - Sandy Jul 7th, 2004

i just finsed reading your story man it was great hope to more and soon - Anonymous Jul 6th, 2004

Easily one of the best ubers I have ever read. Well written, great plot, lots of tension (of all kinds) and great character development. - Anonymous Jun 29th, 2004

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Brilliant! This is an absolute corker of a story. I'm giving it 6.5 stars. Devize has written an astounding tale which has a great whodunitcatchthebadguys plot interspersed with a strong romantic thread and replete with angst.

The story will hook you and the revealing gems about our heroines will knock your socks off. Devize also kept me in a constant state of arousal by her teasers.

This is a hot one, folks. It has everything in an explosive fairytale romance for our uber couple. - E Jun 11th, 2004

This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have read in quite a while. Between the bad guys, a missing person, drugs, and other mysterious happenings, you will find a cleverly crafted story built around 2 characters you will fall in love with as you watch them fall in love with each other. This author uses her words to create visions that dance in your heart and paint for your soul. You will want to visit where these girls go, cheer for them, cry & sigh as their relationship grows and they come face to face with their fears, real or imagined. Bumpy roads, tears, and a sweet tenderness as well as some humor. The scenery is gorgeous and when words can create that in your mind, you gotta love this story and the creativity of this writers efforts. Book of the month? Maybe, but it is definitely my choice for Chocolate of the Month between two covers. - O Ger Jun 7th, 2004

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This story was AWESOME!!! A MUST READ for all! It puts together just the right amount of mystery, danger and romance all rolled up in one. Her characters draw you in straight away. It is about a woman trying to find someone. She searches high and low but realizes her search ends where it began with finding herself.
I can't tell you enough how good this story is. Check it out for yourself. :o) - Caden Jun 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

I really enjoyed both this and A New Beginning, It seemed to take the characters to the present and give you a good idea of how they developed. I love Jo it was great to see her so successful in every way. - Toki Oct 14th, 2005

Love this story!!! I loved the show and its really cool to see this possible future for the girls. Very cool. - Tye Aug 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #20 in 2004, #44 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
D has outdone herself in the writing of this tale! In this wonderful amalgam of mystery, adventure, romance, history and fantasy, D has woven a tale rich with the sights, sounds and feel of two worlds centuries and cultures apart and populated with warm and rich characters, two of which reach out across time itself for an unforgettable fairly tale ending. You will be enchanted by classic-style Uber that draws you in from the first sentence and won't let you let go until it is done! Brava!

I would like to say just how much I enjoyed this thoroughly wonderful piece of work. It achieves just the right balance between action, adventure and drama; but above all else it is one of the most beautifully romantic tales I have ever read. - Ang Oct 27th, 2005

I absolutely loved this story. It's a great read for anyone who is looking for something to read on a day like this. This story is absolutely beautiful and proves that love can cross time. - Alise Mar 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #61 in 2004, #43 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Nicky McCloud’s goal is to hike the Pacific Crest Trail, a journey that should take her five months. Along the way, she meets Jay Reisman. Is Jay whom she professes to be or will she become the cause of Nicky’s nightmares?

All I can say is, there had better be a sequel!!! Great storytelling. Thanks! - sapphie Dec 17th, 2004

This is a story that will trap you and then drop you from a great height emotionally, so sit back and hold on. Just one question, will there be a sequel. - LuvTigger71 Dec 16th, 2004

The journey is brilliantly described - E Dec 8th, 2004

Great story!!! Hope there's a sequel!! This story is in my opinion too good to past up. - Krysta May 29th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Sequel to The Old Yellow House. This is a tale of love that transcends normal bounds as Bayley, a clairvoyant, struggles to locate lost children and Frankie, a mother, whose love is tested in the worst of ways as everyone tells her, her child, is dead.

I dont think my words will tell you the emotions that this story will bring to the surface....a roller coaster ride through a childs living nightmare to a mothers love that never fails as well as a new found relationship. You did it again Koda! What a wonderful story that brings tears of sorrow as well as the tears of joy! Thank you for writting another number one! - Wizzy Feb 22nd, 2005

This is one story that will touch the hearts of any mother. It is a tale of self-doubt, rejection and discovery. More importantly, it is a story of love; the love of a friend, mother, spouse and lover. I found it to be an excellent story and enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. - Shadylady Feb 21st, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Really enjoying this story. Hope there is an update soon. - Anonymous Sep 25th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #05 in 2002, #48 in 2003, #32 in 2004, #39 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Amazon law requires the Queen take a consort...will Xe return to Brie's side in time to claim her love? This funny little tale features Xena, Gabrielle, and a host of horny Amazons.

I wanted to simply say that I have read and enjoyed every single piece of literature that has been posted here. My personal favorite is Emotional Paralysis. It touches me deeply, so thank you. I hope that you will continue to share with us your wonderful talent and once again thank you!!!!!! Tina - Tina Jul 4th, 2004

There is only one thing more that a reader could possibly want out of this story. For it to be longer and have many, many sequels. Larisa sure knows what she's doing! - SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

Another masterpeice! Standing ovations all around.

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(Hands Clapping, Clossest I could come.) - The_Rogue_Angel Aug 23rd, 2002

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this well written tale, best friends make the most of their last summer together.

Melancholic, but wonderfully sweet as well. Just like the last days of summer. A beautiful and extraordinary setting, a story nicely paced, and characters well drawn - well worth a look or two. - annika Sep 30th, 2005

This is an excellent story... and very sweet. Thank you,
Penelope, for a really good read. - Summer Sun Sep 30th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
It’s another typical day at work for Shannon Hudson until the doorbell dinged and in walked Teal MacMillon who was destined to change Shannon’s life forever.

Hey, where's the #1 gold thingy for this story? :) - Anonymous Jun 27th, 2005

Great story...job well done! Love all your stories! - NF Jun 22nd, 2005

Just read this short story by GSB and I loved it. Well done. Please write more! - Anonymous Jun 6th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #58 in 2004, #36 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
With her regency stolen Tera had been forced to flee Hawk's Peak.She was definitely at her lowest. Now with two years to prepare she was ready to take it back, then incidents started happening. Can a new found friend help or hinder? Is Panter someone who will make that much difference to the cause or will it become more personal?

loved the the story, stories like this is hard to come by.... hope the sequel comes soon cuz i cant wait!!! - Krysta Jul 13th, 2005

I've enjoyed Panter's Pride very much, and am waiting on the next installment. My compliments to the author and the imagination behind the story. - Melinda Sep 16th, 2004

this is a truly fantastic story...well written.....had me hooked from the very first chapter..........kept me on the edge of my seat.......hasn't disappointed me yet...can't wait for more....... - Christi Jul 20th, 2004

Original!!! Truly cannot wait for more. - Anonymous Jul 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #31 in 2004, #34 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

I never read unfinished work, no patience. So why am I doing it with SAG's work? I love what falls out of this author's head and onto the page. Can we get her characters on The LWord?:) I still have Gardner's "Seduction of Laura" running through my mind. What a read! Greedy me, I think a sequel could happen...I'm still standing there with Laura, wondering. Very profound work. - Anonymous Mar 29th, 2005

As always S. Anne Gardner writes a comment upon the meaning and tragedy of life as it is lived in any age in any quarter of the globe. a must read. - Monticristo Mar 14th, 2005

God this story is amazing!! i have to stop reading them before they are finished though, now i have to go to class with it in my head unfinished!! TORTURE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! do u have an emailing list or something for post of new chapters perhaps?

l - Blueyez Mar 9th, 2005

Thank you, author, for the next 6 pages. This author is excellent at 'rifts.' The emotional distance S. Anne Gardner creates between the two main characters starts your heart pounding with a tension of wants, wants and more wants. (like a good serial that keeps you coming back) She also throws you head first into each of her stories, as an excellent writer will do..you are off and running within her text. I devoured the pages before breakfast! - Anonymous Mar 8th, 2005

Any updates for 'Breath Of Scandal'? I love this author's stories...they are thick and richly insane in psyche, and spellbinding. I'd like a new one for each week of the year. So selfish a reader am I, when I know darn well that such writing is a craft that is honed over and over... - Anonymous Feb 2nd, 2005

Brilliant as usual! Gardner's stories captivate you from the get go! I only have one thing to say..finish finish..finish..!The conclusion of "An Affair of Love" would be nice to have also. Author..Author!! - Califa Mar 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Questions that we were left with at the end of 'Stained Pages' are - will Nicky and Jay get back together? How will Nicky's children handle their relationship if they do reunite? What happens to them in the future? What happens to Mark? Hopefully, these and other questions will be answered for you in this series of stories.

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Loved it, Loved it, Loved it, Fab, Fab, Fab, a totally and utterley brilliant sequel, more-more-more plz from these characters, but come on didn't ya just wanna slap the grandfather lots. - LuvTigger71 Mar 7th, 2005

I'm glad you gave us a sequal. It wrapped up a lot of questions I had. Characters were awesome and intriguing!!! It's nice to know that life doesn't stop at 50. - Lacey Feb 6th, 2005

Thanks for the sequel. It still had it's twists and turns like any trail. Think I'll find my hiking boots!!! - sapphie Feb 3rd, 2005

I had the honor of reading this story several times even before it posted on the net. The characters seem to climb right out of the print and become implanted in your mind until you don't know if it is fiction or someone you really know. The story line is great and held my interest until the very end. Now I have many more questions about the future of the characters introduced within Stained Pages and Finding Your Dreams. I hope this is not the end of the series but that the characters will return someday with a new story of their own. - Shadylady Jan 31st, 2005

You did it again my friend....created a journey of trails and tribulations. I found I could not stop until the very last word.To know she started out on a journey to find herself and then found love only to loose it.But now this one answers the questions in my mind from "Stained Pages".... Thank you for bringing us the answers to us as we searched for while hiking right along with Nicky and Jay the first time around!!!!
If you have not read this then I highly recommend this story for anyone who loves the outdoors and hot dogs!!!!:>) - Wizz Jan 31st, 2005

Allison and Jessica met five years ago and it was love at first sight, but due to circumstances and misunderstandings they were over before they could begin. Five years later they are best friends. Each still harboring the love that never had a chance to grow years earlier without the other's knowledge. Now that circumstances have changed time and fate might finally be on their side, but will Jessica's fears tear them apart forever.

In a time as Europe was cast in darkness, the paths of vampires and a hunter family crossed in Paris. Their bitter fight against the overpowering bloodsuckers prevented them from seeing the truth. In the deep forests of Transsylvania lays a castle, hiding secrets, magic and an inhabitant from an ancient time.

Oh wow! What a great, fantastic and awesome story. It gets better with every chapter!!And I wonder how they can do such a great job. At each chapter there are pics. That's so amazing!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING!!KEEP GOING!!! KEEP GOING!!!!! :) - Cassandra Jan 11th, 2005

What a great story. It puts a spell on me. I could not stop reading it. I can´t wait for the next chapter. So please continue as soon as possible!!!!!!!I like these pictures for each chapter.I always want more!!!! Great job Fiur and Vlamme!!! Thanks!! - Kristine Nov 2nd, 2004

Oh wow! This story is absolutely great! I'm dying to know how it will continue and can't wait for the next chapter! And now they even have pictures for each chapter! Awesome!!! - Jopari Oct 12th, 2004

This is the BEST story about vampires I ever read. I can't wait for the next update! So please keep writing, you are doing such a fantastic job! - Anonymous Jun 29th, 2004

Chapter 2 and 3 rally build the suspense in this tale!!! Good job Fiur and Vlamme!!! - Michelle Dec 5th, 2003

This just gets better and better!!! The suspense is really building!!! Great job, you two!!! - Michelle Nov 9th, 2003

Ooh...Chapter 1 is up and it's fabulous!!! What a great series!!! Full of dark beauty and suspense!!! Just what the Uber world needs!!! Thanks for sharing it with us, Fiur and Vlamme!!! - Michelle Oct 9th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #10 in 2004, #30 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

this is an awesome story,annes passion in her stories nd how she can make u feel the way the character does is amazing. any1 who likes a true love story of two ppl destined 2 be together,READ THIS!! once i started reading i couldn't stop.
an unbelieveable story anne,thank you.
xxxxx - louise Apr 7th, 2005

Been hoping for s. anne gardner to resume this story for the longest time, and now that she has cant wait for the next update!! Her stories draws the reader in and grabs hold, not letting go until the last word. They are always filled with so much emotion and you can almost feel it with the same amount of intensity and realism as the character. highest recommendation for all her works! - blazinangelwings Mar 30th, 2005

S. Anne Gardner reached new heights, both on her latest releases to paperback with "For the Love of a Woman...etc." and in her incomparable talent for creating compelling, passionate page-turners. Once again with "An Affair of Love," S. Anne Gardner presents her newest and most thrilling novel, a seductive and suspenseful tale of dangerous liasons and family betrayals. Has it been published yet and if so where can we order it? We give this story the highest rating. - jbrobrts@swbell Jan 8th, 2005

This is an amazing story that gave me the warm shivers, everyone should read it, plz let there be a second installment that follows their lives. Thank you for writing it. - LuvTigger71 Nov 9th, 2004

This is one of the best stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading! - Anonymous Nov 6th, 2004

All I'll say is WOW...The emotions I went through reading this. The last two chapters moved me to tears. I have read it over and over. I LOVE IT! - Caden Apr 3rd, 2004

Wow! This is a great chapter. Anymore coming? S. Anne Gardner thank you for the next chapter. - Monti Nov 12th, 2003

I read this story and fell in love with Blayne. Great story. Waiting for more. - Felicity146 Jul 28th, 2003

I love this story. I recommend it to everyone. - Monti Jul 27th, 2003

Great story. Is there more to it? It has captivated my attention and I would like to read more of it. - sally Jul 26th, 2003

Written as answer to the Bard Challenge tended by DJWP, this tale is set in the second season between 'The Execution' and 'Blind Faith.' The story is both a comedic and dramatic race against time. While on the way to the Amazon village for the sacred festival of Brauronia, Xena and Gabrielle encounter several bizarre (and seemingly unrelated) occurrences drawing them into a series of events and comedies of error that may spell the doom of the Amazon Nation and possibly the world unless they can help the goddess Artemis.

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Wow, I am so glad that I found this jewel! This story is alt but also like the good old classic Xena. Great plot and wonderful writing. It has something for everyone. Amazons, slavers, gods, thieves just to mention a few. Truly a good read. Thank you very much bards. I hope to see more from the both of you! PLEASE DONT MISS THIS ONE! - R. C. P. Nov 9th, 2005

My compliments to the authors of this terrific story. Very imaginative plot, natural dialog, consistent characterizations... I could easily imagine this tale as an episode in Season Two. I hope Djwp's challenge to revive classic X&G fiction results in other works of such quality. And I hope that JLynn and Brigit M. Morgan will favor us with another tale. - LDP Apr 15th, 2005

You can't go wrong with these two authors. An absolutely captivating story and an amazing cast of characters. The development and conflict of emotions are intensely and vividly portrayed. Somehow I couldn't help but feel a little melancholy towards the end... - aurelius Apr 2nd, 2005

It's such a relief to find a classic story these days -- especially one that's so well-written and such a pleasure to read. This is the dynamic duo we all remember and long for. Great plot, great energy, wonderful chemistry between the WP and Bard. Can't wait for more! I highly recommend this and all stories by JLynn and Brigit Morgan. They are among the best of the Xenaverse! - anonymous Mar 1st, 2005

Loving it large! It's yonks since I read a classic and this one has left me wanting more. Xena and Gabrielle are bang on and I realised how much I missed the 'real' them, if you get my drift. Don't get me wrong I love Uber, but you can't beat the real thing for a mega nostalgic trip.

As soon as I saw who the authors were I was in there like a shot. I have loved both JLynn and Brigit M Morgan's other stories and I'm eagerly awaiting the conclusion to Brigit's outstanding Apocalypse/Inferno series, but this is filling the gap nicely.

Bring on the classic revival.
- Sai Feb 14th, 2005

I feel like a woman who has been crawling under a blazing sun across hot sand, lips cracked and parched - mind numb with thirst. I can see something in the distance, but what is it? Is it real? No, it can't be! I crawl closer reaching out with blistered fingers. It is. It is.

It's a honest-to-goddess, full-blown, classic Xena and Gabrielle story, with Amazons and Ephiny and Autolycus ... Xena is Xena, Gabrielle is Gabrielle - they look, talk and banter like they should - they even smell like they should! By the gods, I think I even even get a whiff of a first time story somewhere in there under all the muck!

I fall back onto the hot sand and roll over, staring at the blue of the sky, spent but relieved. And then my eyes widen in horror.

Yikes! They evoked the challenge! I better get my lazy butt off this hot sand and get to work!

Djwp
(Helluva start! Beautifully written, great plot! If anyone threw down the gauntlet, I'm sure glad it was you two. I raise my cup to JLynn and Brigit M. Morgan - two of the best who are keeping Xena and Gabrielle classic alive!)

- Djwp Feb 4th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #09 in 2004, #28 in 2005.   Three Time Top-25 #1. 
In C.E. Grays' beautifully written account of growing up and finding you are different, AJ and her twin brother Bastiaan lead an idyllic life in a Montana ranch...or do they? As their 18th birthday approaches, AJ, who is dyslexic and whose entire world is the farm and the open spaces she will soon inherit, learns a secret about her twin brother about to go off to college. Simultaneously, new neighbors move into the nearby farm and she makes a new friend by taking the small green-eyed redhead home after being lost almost a day. That begins a friendship that threatens the world the tall lanky dark-haired youth has known...and makes her question who she is and where home really is. This is a great coming-of-age tale.

Very Good Story. I enjoyed it. Characters are brooding teens and full of angst as normal. A large amount of descriptive material about the land, horses, and ranch. Nicely done. - JLNicky Jul 16th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #14 in 2003, #34 in 2004, #27 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Kori Eaton remained in her usual hiding place, patiently waiting for everyone to vacate the expansive building. Glancing at her Mickey Mouse watch, she noticed the time. 8:48 p.m. Based on the last few nights she'd spent here, she knew that everyone would be gone by 9:15. Then she would have the versatile department store all to herself. However, unbeknownst to the 5'5" blonde, not everyone had left Shopholics... Ambrosia does it again, creating a quirky and wonderful romance!

Ambrosia has one the most vivid imaginations I've ever "seen". The bard's descriptive abilities are so clear, I can SEE Kori and Skylar driving the length of aisle 3,
it still cracks me up just thinking about it! - dez Oct 27th, 2005

I loved this story. I really dont usually read uber but I am glad I read this. Thanks to Ambrosia for writing this. - Anonymous Mar 28th, 2005

Liked this story, its a must read if you are a fan. - LuvTigger71 Jun 2nd, 2004

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The story of Kori Eaton and Skylar Whitney. An unusual meeting turns into an unforgettable night. A recently singled Kori, has been "living" at the Shopaholics Department store when one night, she finds out she is not alone in the store. A soon to be unhappily married Skylar, loses track of time (in the ladies room) to discover she was locked in the building with this stranger till morning. The events of the night would change both women forever. This tale was fun-loving and creative in nature, but most of all it had loads of that romantic stuff I crave. I would happily recommend this story.
- Di Bauden May 6th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #61 in 2002, #41 in 2003, #22 in 2004, #26 in 2005.  
Wow! This story is well written in style, taste,and in keeping continued interest. This story generates every conceivable emotion one could express.I love the characters Ash and Lauren. Their personalities are ones that a person could relate to and almost take on as your own. True to life.Exciting, keeps you guessing, what next. Light hearted. a chuckle or laugh at times. Romance, very refreshing, it deplicts the love, caring and understanding two people who are in love could have. Which so far constitues an unconditional love for each other. Being a continuing story, it keeps the readers interest in anticipation of what will happen in the lives of Ash and Lauren. A continuing story well done! (A Forever Fan) Kathy

Well, this is definitely a dangerous story... I couldn't stop once I started. I read right through the night to finish it...leaving me totally bleary-eyed but way happy. Absolutely brilliant! - Mic Oct 13th, 2005

Fantastic. - Anne Oct 13th, 2005

I made my partner mad this weekend because I started Fate on Friday night and didn't want to do anything else until I had finished it. When she was getting on me for reading instead of going out I had her read the first chapter. She was sucked in the same way I was. We spent a very romantic Saturday night snuggled together with our lap top reading Fate. DE Salsbury nice job from both of us. - Sharon & Lynn Oct 6th, 2005

Spellbinding. - Tara Sep 30th, 2005

I played hookey from work to finish this story. It was so worth it. - Lori Sep 30th, 2005

Wondeful. Amazing. Breathtaking. If you haven't read this story stop right now and read it. - Anonymous Sep 21st, 2005

Amazing story. Loved every page. - Jeri Sep 15th, 2005

I was looking for something new to read when I came across 'Fate' by DE Salsbury. I read the entire story in one sitting. I can honestly say that this story is one of the most well written pieces I have read on the net so far. The plot was well thought out with enough twist and turns to keep my intrest through out. All the players in this drama are credible. On the whole I give 'Fate' two thumbs way way up. - Tina Sep 8th, 2005

I have been reading this story from almost the beginning and I say,
Well Done, and in very Good Taste too.
This story has kept my iterest from the beginning and to now the End, which makes me fell sad in one way and Happy in the next. For one, I don't think we have heard the last of Lauren and Ash. I see and feel a sequel on the horizon. :)
I feel what lead up to the ending and how Ash displayed her love for Lauren was just Ash, being Ash, and shows just how two people can really be truely in love.
Then again beyond that, I can see how the sequel can begin to develop.
Great Job DE, this story deserves to be published!!
I will be waiting to read more of your stories.
Well done, and in good taste and fashion. :) - Kathy Jul 19th, 2004

Great story DE Salsbury. I have waited a while to read the entire story at one sitting (well okay, it took me more than a day because of other, unwelcome, intrusions) but it is an enjoyable, well put together story with enough excitement to keep me reading and enough tender moments to give myself an easier pace.
I eagerly await part 2 - letterwolf Jul 11th, 2004

WOW! Super story. Hope to see an addition. Would love to see more of these two. - Sheryl Jun 26th, 2004

I am normally a lurker who watches the top 25. Seeing Fate up for the last few weeks I finally decided to see for myself the staying power of this story. I was thrilled with the story. Once I picked it up I could not put it down and did not put it down until I had finished the last sentence. Great Job DE Salsbury, hope to see a sequel soon. - Karen Jun 22nd, 2004

Outstanding! Thank you for sharing your story. - Anonymous Jun 11th, 2004

I had stopped reading until the story was finished. When I saw it was done I went back to the beginning and read from the first word to the last in one sitting. I could not put it down. Fantastic story. - Bri Jun 2nd, 2004

If you do not read any other uber this year do NOT miss Fate. If you do you will miss something really special. - Dream Weaver May 24th, 2004

Fate is one of the most compelling books I have read on the verse. If you are looking for PWP, don't come here, but if you are looking for an exciting story that is well written with developed plot line and three dimensional characters this is where you need to be. Though the story is lengthy it is never ever dry or dull. Hats off to D. E. Salsbury for a job well done. Thank you for sharing your talent. - White Wolf May 17th, 2004

I just finished reading "Fate"- it took all day because once I started, I couldn't stop! It was GREAT, with likeable characters, and well written. I hope you are planning on a sequel, I find that I would like to know more about the pasts of the leads. I just wanted you to know that your story was appreciated. Read it! Live it! Love it!
- Uber Addict May 13th, 2004

Fate is one of the best stories I have read. It had a little bit of everything in it. If you have not read this story yet then I say do it now. You will not be sorry. Thank you so much for such a great story. I can't wait for you to start book 2 so I will know what happens to the girls next. - Debbie Dee May 11th, 2004

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I am so happy to see this on the top 25 again. This is a wonderful story that should not be missed. I realize that the length of it as well as the fact that it is still a 'work in progress' may hinder some from reading 'Fate' but I have one thing to say to those that may be waiting in the wings....READ THIS STORY. It is one of the best I have ever read. - Jerri Dec 25th, 2003

Excellent. - Anonymous Dec 17th, 2003

I have no idea how I could have missed this one for so long. This story is abosolutely FANTASTIC. Each and every page is filled with humor, suspense and romance. I LOVE THIS STORY, one of the best I have ever read and I have been reading stories in the verse since day 1. Hats off to D E Salsbury. - Samantha Dec 14th, 2003

Been reading this story since the begening...It a great story but where is 19...

- Taz Oct 17th, 2003

I have never been one for reading long stories especially when they are not finished. With that said, I am so glad I made an exception to this rule for Fate.
Fate is an amazing story with a well developed plot line and three dimensional characters. I can honestly say, unlike most of the longer stories I have read, this one has never had a dull moment. This story is a very entertaining mixture of intrigue, humor and action.
Nice job D E Salsbury, keep up the good work.
- Summer Sep 24th, 2003

Fate is one of the best story's I have read. It has everything in it you could ask for. It will draw you into the story so much you will feel as if you are really there and that you know each of the characters personally. I can't wait to read more of this great story so I can see what happens next. - Debbie Dee Aug 3rd, 2003

Amazing. This story has me totally taken in. I could not put it down until I had savored each and every page. Now all I can say is that I am still hungry, when will the next part be online so I may devour it? In all honesty this story is truly amazing. I give it 10 stars and recommend it to everyone. - Jazz May 6th, 2003

I found this story truly riveting and I wait for each new addition with great anticipation. The tale this bard has spun is not only spellbinding but is dotted with delightful characters that are so lifelike they come right off the pages and materialize before your eyes. I highly recommend this story as a must read for anyone who enjoys excellent writing. - Lady J Mar 31st, 2003

You can hear the nice soft music play as these two meet and see the electricity flow between these two as they get to know and trust one another. I give this story a five star rating. It's one of the best reads I've read in a very long time. I recommend this to anyone and everyone. - Righty Sep 9th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #08 in 2004, #25 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Real Estate agent Georgina Anne Franklin stuck gold! Not only had she sold Jaden Connelly, singer extraordinaire about to retire, her dream house and made a bundle in commissions, she had made a friend. The gorgeous dark-haired, blue-eyed lankly singer and she just seemed to click together so perfectly...however, they could only be friends...or could they? Would Jaden's past mistakes be in their way? Could Georgie be just a friend? You'll have to read this enchanting and engrosing tale to find out!

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WOW!!!!!!!!! This story is just wonderfull I LOVE IT!!!! I was hanging on to every word . waiting to see what would happen next....I have a feeling where you left off is gonna be that Van is with child which I had suspected :) The Issues between Jae and G and how G wanted to be with her anyway even after knowing she was HIV positive was so sweet....durring this story I laughed and cried you just feel so much from the writing and that makes one awsome story.I recommend this story with high honers you will be stuck in your seat till the wee hrs of the morning (as I was) and still not want to leave it...I can't wait for more keep up the awsome writing...... - Xenasbards (XB) Mar 19th, 2005

truely enjoyed your story and I anxiously await it's continuance and conclusion. The sex life should be welcomed and informative for many people. When can we expect more? - keylimegal@webtv.net Feb 3rd, 2005

I'M IN LOVE!! ... whith this story ... uhm ... Anyway, this story is truly amazing, it's super, it will totally blow you away. Need I say more? READ IT! Don't walk, run! You'll be grateful to me, even when you're sitting behind the computer in the dead of the night with bleary eyes and you know you have to get up to work in few hours but you just can't put it down. Believe me, it'll happen! :D - Bacchus Jan 17th, 2005

great story so far, cant wait for the rest! - blazinangelwings Sep 4th, 2004

I think it's a very good story, when does part 4 come? I need to read it! - H Aug 3rd, 2004

Brilliant start to the story, want more soon plz. - LuvTigger71 May 31st, 2004

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Gods, what a fantastic story. It really touched a part of me. You see, I can compare myself with Jaden. I am HIV pos aswell. So this story really, really touched me. I hope to read the rest soon. - Anonymous May 30th, 2004

A very touching story so far. I can't wait to read more of it. - Bug May 18th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #28 in 2004, #24 in 2005.  
Oksana thinks she is the luckiest woman in the world. Women throw themselves at her everywhere she goes, and deep thoughts are not her priorities. One woman's strong will could drive her to distraction.

I love it. Its very captivating and just has a good feeling to it. It's a story that you stay up all night to read and just cant stop reading. - Anonymous Nov 21st, 2005

Wonderful story so far. I like how this bard makes her characters imperfect but likeable at the same time. Can't wait for the end. - Claire Feb 21st, 2005

Good story line....nice plot emerging here. A couple of interesting and unexpected surprises. It's certainly grabbed my attention. This story holds a lot of promise. Awaiting the next 20 or so chapters! - Anonymous Nov 19th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Scars on her body, scars on her soul, Jorane Jawson is living her life in depression and loneliness. Horrible nightmares are torturing her every night. But one day, fate brings a beautiful foreigner to her doorstep. Will Ileana Surienka be able to chase away the fear that keeps Jorane from embracing happiness with both arms? Read the story and find out. :-)

"Dyki Tantsi"
It seems they didn't disappoint me. These two very 'gifted' writers
have lived up to their reputation once again. A story so heartfelt,
compassionate, loving....well written. Left me for wanting more on
these amazing woman. One willing to reach beyond looks.....patient to
touch anothers 'Soul' Wow! Definitely worth reading. Thank you both for
allowing us to partake in your zest for putting 'pen' to paper. - Christi Apr 19th, 2005

Such a great story I´ve never, never read before. I enjoyed reading. And I can´t wait for the next one. I love the characters. You have to read it! I´m sure you like it!!!Great job!!! More of those stories!!! - Samantha Apr 4th, 2005

It seems that these two fantastically gifted writers. Have come together once
again to share with us another what seems to be an interesting.....riviting story.
That will keep us on the edge of our seats...til the very end......hopefully it
will turn out to be a long...trilogy? As always I look forward towards their
stories. - Christi Mar 17th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

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I truly enjoyed this story which I accidently came apon. Tootie and Nat were great with their humor, and Jo and Blair"s relationship showed what the meaning of true friendship first means, building into a loving relationship. I highly recommend this delightful tale. - Liz Aug 11th, 2005

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I fell across this by accident and am glad I did. I loved the Facts Of Life and enjoyed this story from start to finish. The humor with Nat and Tootie was true to there characters. The build up to the relationship betwen Jo and Blair was interestng and show"s how true friends (and lovers) lookout for one another. - Liz Aug 11th, 2005

I didn't enjoy this story about Jo and Blair as much as the others, but it was still interesting to read, especially the humor with Nat and Tootie. But what I'm waiting for are stories with "original" characters, made up by Larisa, as only Larisa's imagination can dream up. Those are her best loved stories ...and very much missed! Or how about sequels to ANY of her originals. I would love to read more about Memphis, Luka, CJ, Brumby, Sprout & Lia from "Day Walker" again, just to name one of my favorites. How's Tucker, Duncan, baby Shane, Ripples & Furball doing from "Blue Calm?" Or Levi, Brody, Shane & Teddy from "Blind Date." Ok, that's two more favorites, I better stop. Sequels from any of her originals would be appreciated and loved. Keep up the great work, Larisa, it's great to have you back. - Sherry Jun 1st, 2005

I'm a bit confused, are the characters in this story the same as who were in Weekend Bliss and A Period of Adjustment because I'm just having a really hard time grasping this idea. - Louise May 31st, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #13 in 2003, #21 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
This tale by Heike Freudenmann and G. S. Binkley, and written by G. S. Binkley is about a woman’s disillusioned quest for love. After giving her heart to another ten years earlier, Robin Hart decided to shun love forever. But an unexpected reunion with an old friend tests her resolve and gives hope to the beautiful Kim Patakas who has troubles of her own. When Robin intercedes between Kim and her boyfriend, the young woman tries one more time to find the key to her true love’s heart. Both Robin and Kim have to search within, melting away the layers of insecurities and doubts that they will only be able to do with each other as they pursue their own quest for love.

'An Innocent Heart' plays like a sweet melody of love when you read this excellent story. Robin's quest for love is eternal and has touched my heart and yearning just as much. My hope springs forth for my own soulmate as I read this story and now know that she's there waiting for me. GSB's extraordinary writing sculptures romance and love along with challenges that can be overcomed in this sweet story. Make sure you read this tale if you are dissolutioned about love coming your way or if you just want to be reassured. Once again, my highest praise for this author. - Anonymous Jul 21st, 2005

I took the time to re-visit this story and found it as enchanting, easy to read and romantic as I did when I first read it. It is one of my favs... if you missed it the first time, be sure to take a long at it now and see what you've been missing. Great story. - Ryn Jan 23rd, 2005

A truely wonderful story. You were able to walk right along with the characters.....Can't wait for the next installment! - Anonymous Jun 28th, 2003

One of the best stories I read. Very well written and done. - Anonymous Jun 26th, 2003

After their uncharacteristic one-night stand, what becomes of Dylan and her mystery lady? Both are desperately seeking solace, but will they find it together? Will they be able to accept each other as they are? When pasts are revealed, a newfound relationship is put to the test. This is a continuation of 'Blue Eyes.' Please note that a revised 'Blue Eyes' is the first chapter of this new book.

A great read. Alex never lets me down! Will there be a sequel? There is the possibility for so much more. - Anonymous Feb 8th, 2005

I loved this piece! So surprising, so emotional in spots! As always, Ms. Tryst is pushing her boundaries as a writer in new ways. Good job! - Anonymous Feb 1st, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #02 in 2004, #19 in 2005.  Top-25 #1. 
Against the odds, Marine Corps Master Sgt. Halley Braeden and Lt. Commander Eden Huntington Bryce, who briefly meet on the same ship they are serving on, end up crossing paths in a desperate struggle for survival that unbeknowst to them, forges the beginnings of something. One an officer and the other an enlistedman risen through the ranks, while their ranks separate them, their friendship serves to get them though the tough times and beyond...to following and finding their hearts.

Oh God, I NEED A SEQUAL!!!!! Great story and writing. Keep it up, you have tremendous talent. - Anonymous Aug 12th, 2005

All i have to say is MORE, MORE, MORE plz plz plz. Its brilliant, totally brilliant. - LuvTigger71 Dec 12th, 2004

I LOVE this! The characters are interesting and captivating, the story intriguing. Please let there be a sequel! I'm convinced these ladies have more to say. Thank you for letting us get to know them. :) - Anonymous Dec 1st, 2004

Great story. Builds slowly but the character development is first rate. And even the secondary characters are brought to life. I've loved all her stories and this one shows that Planetsolin still has it. - Anonymous May 31st, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
In this well written tale, a lesbian couple attends a small town wedding.

This is so sweet, I can only wish reality occured like this. - kiwi Sep 4th, 2005

Beautiful...just beautiful - KTBard Aug 31st, 2005

This story is an all around winner. Lovely characters and a well told tale. Definitely a "must read" in my opinion. - Beth Goodman Feb 3rd, 2005

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I have had occasion to feel the way the main characters did going to the family wedding, so I could easily sympathize with them. Good job! - Alex Tryst Jan 24th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #81 in 2004, #17 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
A SciFi/Fantasy tale where the lives of two people entwine to continue a Dynasty based on Love and Honor. I don’t do angst so there is none and I’m a mushball at heart, read at your own risk.

Man I'm speechless all I can say without giving out spoilers is that this story is A MUST READ!!! Anybody who doesn't is crazy not too. - Krysta Sep 1st, 2005

Hey this is superb! You should think about turning it into a screen play--as a film, it'd make a great addition to the small collection of good lesbian themed films out there. I'd see it if it were at the image out film festival!!! - Anonymous Jul 22nd, 2005

One word: INCREDIBLE! READ IT!!!! - Renée (NL) Jun 25th, 2005

WOW! What a story! One of the best novel I've ever read on the net. - Leia Jun 14th, 2005

Excellent story, well worth reading over and over! I would love to see a sequel about the second generation! - Sandy Apr 4th, 2004

Extraordinary story. Tas is a very imaginative bard with excellent writing skills. Her characters and plot are well defined. In addition to providing a breathtaking adventure, discerning readers also come away with an insight and appreciation for the advantages an open society always has over a closed society. Epic, well worth the time.


- Yvonne Mar 21st, 2004

God this is now one of my fave's!!! I absolutely love this bard.. i can't wait for them to write another one!! MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!
The characters are so unique and yet retain the base elemets of X&G. Simply Amazing! I don't want to give any spoilers but you would be completely mad to overlook this epic novel!
- Snuff Sep 27th, 2003

Hey I loved it..It was so cool.. I don't want to give any spoilers.. All I can say Is I can't wait until she writes another one... This one is awesome... - TinyLynae Jul 13th, 2003

Awesome read, was brill first time around and now the third re-read I find it even better - well done. I cannot wait for a sequel, please can we have one? - val May 23rd, 2003

i really enjoy all the stories and which to thank all the authors for enjoyable stories. Tas the return was a great story i hope you write a sequel soon. thank you again for a great story.

sincerely
jojo - jojo Apr 23rd, 2003

I was blown away by this story. The world and characters this bard has created are magnificiant. This is a must read story! It has everything..love,action,humour and alot of magic..Loved it!Keep up the good work Tas! - elfcat253 Apr 22nd, 2003

I remember reading The Return a few months ago...I loved it then and loved it even more the time around! Strong characters, good plot and excellent writing! Tas is a wonderful storyteller! - ~gail Apr 21st, 2003

I enjoyed this story so much, I saved it to re-read later. There is romance, action, and humor. I would love to read more stories set in this world. - jh Apr 18th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  2004 Story Of The Year.   Perenial Favorite Award:  #1 in 2004, #16 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
In this Law and Order: SVU homage, Detective Olivia Benson and ADA Alex Cabot become embroilled in a case that hits too close to home for them both and ends up getting them closer than they would ever admit to or allow themselves before. As the action builds to the fast-paced conclusion, the suspense will keep you glued to this series-worthy tale.

Larisa is an awsome writer with alot of great stories and this is one of her best!!! wonder if she'll do a sequel to this. - blazinangelwings Jun 6th, 2005

I have recently completed reading all of Larisas works that are posted here and I would like to recommend that anyone who hasn't seen any of her work to do so now they are well worth the time and will bring a smile to anyones face if not outrageous laughter. You only need to check out the top 100 lists to see how popular she is 19 fics appeared in the list for 2003 and 15 for 2004 grabbing the #1 spot in both lists! Run don't walk you won't be disappointed! - elatxc Jan 14th, 2005

Larisa, you are the best! I have read all your stories and have enjoyed them tremendously. I never got tired reading them over and over again. Keep it up and never stop writing. You got me hooked forever on your stories. - kimm Sep 6th, 2004

Damn woman!! I checked every day for over a month for new stories and found none. And what do I find now .... another absofuckinglutely FANTASTIC story, it was worth the wait :) This is one of the best in the line. YOU RULE LARISA!!!!!! - Bacchus May 21st, 2004

OK you have GOT to write more on this! this is now become my second favorite you've done sister!Then again you've got to many its hard to just pick one anymore! Damn good story line on this one, well worth missing two hours of work this last week! Packed with suspence and humor only you can write! PLEASE TELL ME YOUR GOING TO CONTINUE THIS??? - WYD May 20th, 2004

Definitely one of Larisa's best. The bard has matured and her stories are getting better and better. - E May 19th, 2004

You know, I've always thought Larisa wrote the best stuff and here I've been waiting it seems like forever for the new one. And what's this? A fantastic story that's quickly becoming a favorite AND it's about my second favorite show of all time. Just when I thought Larisa couldn't be any cooler. - Anonymous May 13th, 2004

You know i have read all of Larisa's stories many times. They are fun and entertaining and always good for a real laugh. Now this story comes along, and here i sit thinking WOW i really wish that she would expand this story into a cintinuing series. I eagerly look forward to more. Thanks Larisa its always a pleasure to read anything you write, but this one was truely special. Thanks so much for sharing.
- Scotti May 11th, 2004

Fantastic! This is one of my favorite stories by Larisa and that's a hard statement to make, considering most of her stories are favorites of mine. Hope there's more stories concerning my favorite TV show. This bard could write for the show. Another great story, Larisa, thank you. - Sherry May 11th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  2003 Story Of The Year.  Fan Favorite in the catagory of Mushball story.   Perenial Favorite Award: #1 in 2003, #14 in 2004, #15 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Tucker Danes is supposed to be on vacation in Hawaii with her fiancé Steve, and it's NOT what she expected. All he cared about was making a good impression with his boss, and Tucker was asking herself why she was with that looser. Then the unthinkable happens and Tucker leaves him, set on returning home to Texas as soon as possible. As fate would have it, she can't get a flight home, and ends up at Mama's. There she'll experience what Hawaii and surfing are all about, the antics of Furball, Ripples and Dunc, and what love looks like when she looks into eyes as blue as the ocean. This is another laughter-filled romance with tender moments and some spew alerts, a la Larisa!

Another damn good story. Geeze this is amazing. Good characters and plot. - Anonymous Jul 25th, 2005

I just finished reading the story. It was awesome. I laughed myself silly especially at Ripples and Furball. Two thumbs way up!!!!! - kb Jul 11th, 2005

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I loved this story. I laughed at the antics of Furball and Ripples and hope for a sequel to find those two somebody too.I also thought Steve got what he deserved. - Anonymous Mar 7th, 2005

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Fantastic!!! I just loved it... maybe because I'm myself a huge beach bum. ;-) I'm not so into the pregnacy/rape stories and I don't think it was "necessary" for the plot here, but... I just "ignored" it. The setting and the characters are great. READ IT! - The Fic Addict Feb 9th, 2005

I LOVE this story. It is one of Larisa's best and I sincerely hope that she writes a sequel. Please, please, please, write a sequel to this story. As a matter of fact get this story published, I would be the first in line to purchase a copy!! I've read almost all of Larisa's stories and this story along with Blind Date has got to be the funniest to date. If you don't read this story you will miss some of the best fan fiction every written. It has love, laughter and lust; what more could you want. Oh! Yeah, there is a plot and a worm named Steve, that should have been used as fish bait, but what is a love story without a villain. P.S. Can someone tell where I can find friends and a momma like this? - Lasher Dec 20th, 2004

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STOP!Don't read another story till you read this one.I haven't had so much fun reading a story in a long time. The characters are just priceless, and the idiots washing the baby had me on the floor in stitches. Damn good writing. Outrageous, delightful and sensual. Please, please write a sequel Larisa. These characters are just too good for one story only. You rock, Larisa! - Fredrica Jun 21st, 2004

All I have to say is Larisa writes some of the best fic storys I've ever read. - TMc Aug 1st, 2003

I loved it , but then I have all of hers. The goofy characters she comes up with and the situations keeps me in stiches - can't get enough of the goofy ones they just add to the story. If ever I am looking for something to read I just grab a Larisa story. Keep up the good work for I will read them all. - Linda Jul 14th, 2003

Damn, woman you're good. You should write sequels for some of your stories. I would love reading one of Blue Calm.

Please, don't ever stop writing!!!! You're way to good!!!!

- Bacchus Jul 11th, 2003

With the amount of stories, Larisa has written at this point, one might be tempted to say: GET A LIFE! However, I prefer to say: Please don't EVER get a life. Please! Blue Calm is not the first Larisa I've read, and it will certainly not be the last, either. It it simply too funny to describe, it has to be experienced. You laugh, you cry... and then you laugh some more. I want a Mama and two idiots of my very own. Larisa = Quality. Keep it up! - Wolvie-DK Jun 16th, 2003

Another wonderfully unique Larisa original...filled with romance, drama, and outrageous humor. Ahhh...a feel good sensation achieved with this truly delightful and sensually delectable read. Well done, bard. Two thumbs up! ~Ag~ - ~Ag~ May 13th, 2003

Well, Larisa has done it, again!!! Blue Calm kept me in constant giggle mode, with a few happy tears thrown in along the way. Ripples and Furball, the idiots, are hilarious, and watching Mama try to control her brood kept me in stitches. And I have to say, either Larisa has lived the most diverse life ever on this planet, or she has the best imagination around, because she can write about any subject, as though she's an old hand at it. Kudos, Larisa, and thanks again for sharing you're marvelous talent with us!!! I do have to say, though, I missed the goat in this one!!! - Michelle May 13th, 2003

A surfer, a writer, a couple of idiots and ... you'll have to read the rest. It's Larisa at her best. The laughs don't stop. - Anonymous May 12th, 2003

ANY CHANCE OF A SEQUEL??? - Anonymous May 8th, 2003

Why haven't any of Larisa's stories been published? I would love to have an anthology of her stories! I'd be the first in line to buy any of her books. The only problem would be trying to select just which stories to publish. Thanks, Larisa, for all the laughs and many hours of enjoyment you have given us. - Anonymous May 6th, 2003

Incredible story. Absolutely loved it. It just keeps getting better and better with each new one you show us. :) Gotta love those sexy surfers. ;-)

Keep up the excellent writing!

I do have one question however....

Where can I get a copy of that poster??? *drool* - Caden May 6th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Why does this story not show as a former #1 on the Top 25 list? Or is that fact just a given with a story by Larisa! ;) - Dee Jun 14th, 2005

I really enjoyed this short story, I especially love the interaction between Blair and Jo. I haven't read any Facts of Life fanfiction in so long, so thanks for writing about these gals :) - Jen May 25th, 2005

Oh my Goodness! Another story by Larisa. Two stories in two weeks!! And I don't have time to read it now. I can see I'll get alot done today, thinking about this story waiting for me at the end of the day. Thank you, Larisa, you've made me and the rest of your fans very happy. - Sherry May 17th, 2005

Abbie Jameson needs to escape her life. A writer with no muse, and a marriage with no love. She retreats to Yorkshire in a bid to find her true self. But the ‘self’ she finds is not what she was expecting. Only the dark, enigmatic Kate Thomas can help her discover the truth.

Although a supernatural vein flows through this story, it is ultimately about love, self-discovery and the realisation that all we have to do is let go … and believe.

What a delight! You've seen the references in previous comments to the "dark" nature of this tale, but for me there were hidden sparkling gems. References to American music, movies and cartoons(Scooby-Doo) with the interspersed English idioms such as "gob smacked" brought a smile to my face time and again! This is one talented author!! What a well-crafted, thghtly-woven story! Thanks yet again, Fingersmith, for sharing your wonderful imagination in such a stellar manner. - Therese Dec 26th, 2005

Had to read this after I had read Hearts and Flowers Border. I loved it! Loved it. Scary at times, and kind of dark, but the main characters were excellently described and I felt like I was there. A thoroughly enjoyable read and I would recommend this to anyone. Couldn't put it down. Thank you Fingersmith and keep up the writing! Please! - Jenny Aug 7th, 2005

wow ! this story is so intense is really deep,,,I wish I can discribe my love life the way fingersmith discribe the love of these two women.....very powerful..so unique . Keep up the good work ....and this story deserves a sequel.... oh yeah!!! - arly May 10th, 2005

I highly recommend this story!! I read 'hearts and flowers border' not long ago and it's a fascinating story!! Now Fingersmith came up with another just as good. Different from her first attempt to fiction this one sounds rather dark and spooky, makes one wonder that with a flick of the wrist your everything can turn to nothing. And even so the characters get drawn to one another by something more powerful, to finally walk out of the dark. Wonderful! Wonderful story! Perfectly written! I totally disagree with tarvvy, it's not boring at all. And it didn't seem long enough either cause when I reached the end I was somehow willing to have more to read. Well done, Fingersmith!! - Jo May 5th, 2005

I really loved this story and would recommend it without question. I could not put it down. Wonderful new author! Thanks, Fingersmith. - Summer Sun May 4th, 2005

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Good plot and characters. I have to disagree with tarrvy - I didn't find any boring bits, and it wasn't long enough. Everything was needed to make a really good read. It was funny and sexy. - Karen May 4th, 2005

it's a gud story, boring in some parts, just a little long, but over all a funny read - tarvvy May 3rd, 2005

What can I say that hasn't already been said about Fingersmith and her writing talents? She's an awesome writer and one that I will continue to watch out for in the future. I wish I were writing this good in my second story. lol. Although Dwelling in the Past is so very different from Hearts and Flowers Border, it's just as good. And man, can Fingersmith write a steamy sex scene. ;) So, give this great story a read. You will not be disappointed. - MSAnderson Apr 27th, 2005

In this second offering from Fingersmith, we the very fortunate reader are not let down one bit from the high we were on from Hearts and Flowers Border. Dwelling in the Past is a wonderful story that twists and turns and sometimes leaves your heart in your throat! I thought the writing was incredible....Fingersmith has a gift....a wonderful ability to shape an image perfectly for the readers mind. I personally think she is a master of descriptive writing! I certainly hope she doesn't stop anytime soon! Good on ya Fingersmith!!! - Asgard Apr 27th, 2005

Excellent. What a story!!! The plot is believable and the characters are as sexy as hell! I think the ending was my favourite part. Well done Fingersmith!! Please write more! - Sophie Apr 26th, 2005

Wonderful! A definite must-read! I loved Hearts and Flowers Border but this is so much darker and more intense, I think I may prefer it more. The characters are tantalisingly well-developed (for me, the dark and sultry Kate Thomas is a definite dead-ringer for LL in HOD - yum!). Though there is a supernatural element, it never detracts from the hot and steamy growing passion between Abbie and Kate, so if you're not one for ghost stories don't let it put you off! The ending I think is very well done - not what I was expecting! But I don't think it could have been done any other way. Excellent! Another brilliant story from this new gifted writer - you're not just a one-hit wonder!! From your number one fan xx - Julie Apr 25th, 2005

Living near where the events in Yorkshire occured added a great dimension to an already atmospheric supernatural tale. I loved the character of Kate, a wonderfully brooding uber X! Highly recommended second story from a great new writer. - sapphie Apr 25th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
This tale is about a heavenly guide sent to protect a young detective who is in hot pursuit of a master criminal. This fast paced love story reveals the heart’s truth if only Taylor will open her eyes to what is right in front of her.

WOW! GREAT STORY !!!! Read this now!!!! - yin yang May 30th, 2005

Wasn't 'Angel In Disguise' a #1 story a few weeks ago? So, where's the #1 honors? Because this is a great story!!!! - Anonymous Feb 20th, 2005

What a wonderful story! It's written as always with such grace and compelling characters that entertain, warm your heart and give us all hope of true love. My many thanks to GS who continues to write a variety of stories and in each and every case does it so wonderfully. Keep it up... I'm waiting for the sequel! - VP Jan 23rd, 2005

Absolutely EXCELLENT. Entertaining...bittersweet…Ingenious- And that Ladies is just the beginning of things to come form this Author and here stories. I give it 5 BUZZ out of 5 possible. - MoonLightning Jan 22nd, 2005

Wow! Wonderful! I absolutely loved this story and the characters. Again, GS Binkley has written a lively tale that should not be missed. I am anxiously waiting for the sequel to this marvelous, exciting and 'couldn't stop reading it till the end' story. Great job, GS! - Anonymous Jan 18th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Caid Harris is an ex beer commercial actress who’s made it to the big time and can’t believe her luck. A plum role on a hot new cop show has Caid sharing her once private life with a horde of press and media, sharing the screen with a temperamental southern belle who she calls friend, and sharing her trailer with a leggy brunette who leaves her tongue-tied, slightly off-center, and just a little breathless. And the roller coaster ride that took Caid from a beer hawking ‘Balentine Babe’ to the role of tough cop Rita Stone gets even more interesting when the show’s creator wants to push the envelope and decides Caid is just the woman to do it.

fantastic story with great characters. it's well worth a read or three. would it be too much to ask for a sequel? :D - Anonymous Dec 16th, 2005

I cannot say enough good things about this story! READ IT!!! It has it all. Seriously...the characterizations, the plot, the humor, the romance, the grammar...it's all good. - Anonymous Dec 13th, 2005

Read this story! It's great. dabkey's other stories are also good, but this is one that can be read over and over. - anonymous Dec 2nd, 2005

Wow,...one of the best story i've ever red. I rarelly comment on stories, but I had to for this one. good job - Ely Nov 23rd, 2005

This is a great story . I couldnt stop reading it .I loved the characters .I hope to read a sequel soon. - Anonymous Nov 3rd, 2005

I was hooked on this story. I didn't want to stop reading it. It is well written and the characters are really developed. I would love to see some more of them. This was a great story. - Erica Oct 29th, 2005

beautifully done, on so many levels. keep writing, and please, think very seriously of a sequel. thank you for this gem. - feral Oct 26th, 2005

I just wanted to add my recommendation of this story. It grabbed my attention and kept it to the very end. I do agree that I would love to read a sequel to this story it is that good. I would buy this one as well. It is definitely one that I plan to read again. Brava!!!! - wmnwholves Sep 3rd, 2005

This is a really great story. The author outdone herself. Great characters draws out this well told story. I think I found a new favorite author among the others. - xlvr Aug 29th, 2005

Loved it, Loved it, Loved it a wonderful and loving story...Thank You for writing and sharing. - NF Aug 19th, 2005

Excellent writing, well done novel. This work kept me sneaking back to my computer during breakfast, after work, and just before bedtime. It was one of those magical tales that captivated my attention from the beginning to the ending, and had several unexpected plot twists. Two thumbs up! - JS Stephens Aug 16th, 2005

This is a terrific novel! The author has done a great job of creating a well-plotted, well-written, and well-edited story that is very engaging. I'd heed the warnings from other readers about starting this story late at night or before a big work day--you'll have a tough time putting it down before you're finished! - Martha Aug 13th, 2005

I just finshed reading it , and just blew mind , cute, very well written novel. congratulations to the writer. - arly Aug 11th, 2005

it was SO great to read a well-written story with truly unique/original characters that was ALSO rivetting and fantastic - talk about a real treat. this particular author is immensely talented and could easily sustain a professional writing career if she so chose. TrinityB5 at yahoo dot com. - TrinityB5 Aug 9th, 2005

Good god, that was awesome.
If a sequel is written, I may just become faint with excitement - doopits Aug 9th, 2005

Well! Who could resist after reading all the praise this story has generated. I didn't regret it one bit either, it was a great read and I hardly noticed that it was over 200 pages long. I could have carried on for another 200. - Sai Aug 5th, 2005

Fantastic story! Great, dynamic characters. Hope this isn't the last time we saw them. One of the best romance stories I've ever read! - BacchusKiller Aug 5th, 2005

This is a truly excellent story. I loved every second of it. More! - Vee Aug 3rd, 2005

This is such a great story!! I couldn't stop reading and by the second chapter I knew this was going to be one of my all time Favs. Highly recommended!! - Anonymous Aug 1st, 2005

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This is one of the best romance stories I’ve read in a very long time. It had everything in it – angst, laughter, near tragedy. I hope dabkey submits it for publication, I'd certainly buy a copy. - Kit Aug 1st, 2005

This story ROCKS!! This one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I sat up and read it all in one go. I would recommend this to anyone and everyone. - Titch Aug 1st, 2005

This story was recommended to me and I feel very fortunate that is was, I want to pass my good fortune on - read this! You wont be disappointed. Wonderful piece that I simply could not put it down. Kudos to the author. - Eden Jul 30th, 2005

This story was recommended to me and I feel very fortunate that is was, I want to pass my good fortune on - read this! You wont be disappointed. Wonderful piece that I simply could not put it down. Kudos to the author. - Eden Jul 30th, 2005

This is a really brilliant story and would recommend it to anyone and everyone, it is well written, and one of the most heart warming complete stories I have read in a while. Could we have a little more plz, maybe just a few chapters to see how they are doing. Thank you for writing it. - LuvTigger71 Jul 29th, 2005

This is an awesome story. Not only is it novel-length and complete, it's also really well written. I haven't enjoyed a story this much in ages. A definite must read. - Jen Jul 29th, 2005

Wow! Definitely one of the best I've stories I've read in a long time. And all my coworkers had to put up with me on 2 hrs sleep the next day. :) - Anonymous Jul 28th, 2005

Great story! Love the characters. More please. - Anonymous Jul 28th, 2005

I highly recommend this story. It's one of the best romance stories I’ve read in a long time. Don't miss it! - Anonymous Jul 28th, 2005

I loved this story. I got completely caught up in it. Highly recommended. - eva Jul 28th, 2005

awsome awsome story! even though I had a midterm the very next day to cram for I couldn't put it down, but definitely worth it! recommend it to everyone!! - blazinangelwings Jul 27th, 2005

This is an exceptional story, very well written. I highly recommend it. - Chris Jul 27th, 2005

Truly a wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. - Peg Jul 27th, 2005

This is an incredibly well written story. The best I've seen in aeons. Do not pass this story by, you will be richer for the experience. - Alison Jul 27th, 2005

AWESOME - Anonymous Jul 27th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Danielle Hamilton recognized that The Station and some of her old friends weren’t exactly the same. But the raven-haired woman standing in front of her is definitely the woman pictured in the locket she’d been admiring…just before everything went blank. Jess Blain didn’t know who the woman was or how she had appeared, and until she did, she planned on keeping Danielle close. When the two have to pose as lovers to keep Danielle from being hanged, everyone questions the timing, since Jess Blain was recently accused of murdering the woman in her life. Add to this a civil war, a locket with a picture of a woman dressed in men’s clothing, an undeniable desire and an unsolved mystery and enjoy the ride as past and present collide.

I can only second the previous comments: Excellent story! Thanks for the great read! - Mindwalker78 Oct 18th, 2005

Wonderful story. A must read. - Anonymous Oct 16th, 2005

Wonderfully told story. The combination of time travel and the Civil War to me is irresistible, more so when it is so well written. Thanks, Stone. - Summer Sun Oct 4th, 2005

I loved being warped to 1861 and reading the contrast in the'battle of wits'. Admired Danielle's spunk and skill and the sophistication and sexiness of Jess. - Anonymous Sep 27th, 2005

Excellent story. For those who enjoy a romance with a twist, I highly recommend this story. Unbelievable, but fun. One of the best stories I've read this past year. - annonymous, 9/26/05 Sep 26th, 2005

Excellent story. Don't pass this up! - Anonymous Sep 22nd, 2005

Enjoying this read, and it says it's 'finished'....but seems not so? - Anonymous Sep 20th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
A visitor from her past jolts Laura Stewart into memories … some funny … some heart wrenching … but she needs to deal with all of them before she can open the door to allow her past to shape her future.

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! When I finished reading this Holiday weekend, I realized I had consumed Fingersmith's stories in the reverse order they were written. It's a testament to her marvelous talent that her ability seems as polished in the first as it did in the last. Another wonderfully woven tale told with humor, insight, imagination and love. I am avidly awaiting the next story from this gifted author! - Therese Dec 26th, 2005

Great story. When I started reading this I couldnt stop till I finished.You have to read this story I guarantee youll love it and the characters as much as I DID. - yinyang Oct 2nd, 2005

Wow! What a story! I was captivated from the opening line and couldn't stop until I reached the end. This is definitely my all time favourite story on here. If you haven't read this ... it is a must must must read. Great characterisation and excellent writing. I need more! - Jenny Aug 4th, 2005

Definitely, one of the best stories I've read on here. Fingersmith's "Hearts and Flowers Border" is truely amazing. The style of writing is enjoyable and the overall story is wonderful. I eagerally await another story. - lena Apr 16th, 2005

Wonderful, amazing, excellent! Fingersmith, you're the best! I can't wait for
the next story! - leth cross Apr 16th, 2005

this writer is ace a superb story that flows, love with passion, a must read. - fan of xena Apr 13th, 2005

This story is absolutely beautiful. The characters were believable and I couldn't help but become engrossed in the story. I loved it. I would reccommend this to anyone. But moreso to someone with a broken heart looking for a bit of hope. Or to someone who is love, but is afraid to say anything. No one would regret reading this story. I can't wait to read more from this very talented author. :) - MSAnderson Apr 9th, 2005

B-e-a-utiful story! a must Must MUST READ! - katrina Apr 8th, 2005

A real roller coaster...I laughed (Fingersmith has a wicked sense of humour), and I cried (touching moments, well written) and I got horny!!!! (Fingersmith can write a mean sex scene!!!). All praise for this first time story, I look forward to many more. BTW if Fingersmith reads this I'd like to email her to congratulate and comment further, but it seems her email addy isn't working from the end of the story. - sapphie Apr 4th, 2005

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You will love this story!!! From beginning to end, it keeps you on the edge of your seat and on a roller-coaster ride of emotion. It is fast-paced, with never a dull moment, and you will surely fall in love with the characters as much as I have! Fingersmith is a truly gifted writer - witty one moment, delivering mouth-watering angst the next, all culminating in a climax of fulfilled dreams and a happy, happy ending (which, come on, we all love!!). I especially love the fictional scenario of supposed unrequited love, then discovering the passion is fully reciprocated - and Fingersmith manages to convey all this exquisitely!! She is a true, raw talent, who I think we'll all hear more from very soon - remember where you saw her first!! And Fingersmith, if you're reading this - if you publish we'll buy your books!!! From your Number One Fan! - Julie Mar 31st, 2005

I think I might have fell in love with this story. I was hooked from the first paragraph to the last sentence. I would recommend this to anyone who has had a broken heart. You won't be disappointed. - Meg Mar 31st, 2005

I couldn't wait to see this story on the Atheneaum just so I could recommend it! I agree whole heartedly with Poppet...the story is wonderful and it is fantastically written. I actually read this twice in under two weeks!! You will not regret taking the time to read this fabulous story and you'll fall in love with the characters. Asgard - Asgard Mar 30th, 2005

If you havent read this story yet...I can only say one thing: READ IT!!! And read it now!! Figersmith just striked me as a fantastically gifted writer! And this is her first attempt to fiction...go figure! It's a wonderful story... sweet, funny, with such captivating characters that we all can relate to. It is very well writen and it can reach anyone's heart with so much joy. It talks about lost love - a theme that can strike a chord in anyone who went/goes through similar situations. And it also talks about love, friendship and all the emotions and fears and insecurities we all have at some point in our lives. Laura's character has an amazingly great sense of humor, being sarcastic at the right times, making you laugh no end. I really enjoyed this story so much, so I'd like to recommend it to anyone who hasnt read it yet. - Cris (aka Poppet) Mar 30th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
A night on the town for Dylan turns into an unexpected evening as a mysterious woman requests her company. Unable to resist those blue eyes, they journey through a night of discovery. A one night stand or a new beginning for two women searching for more?

I can't wait to see more! I can't resist blue eyes myself... ;-) - Anastacia Jan 25th, 2005

Loved it and it should be continued. I'd like to see where these two can take this relationship. One has mystery - one adventure. If anyone can develop this story it's Alex Tryst. - memck Jan 6th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Here's a tale about a woman who unexpectedly inheirts a Castle and Island in Scotland.

This has to be one of the most fantastically well written story I have been
afforded the opportunity to read in quite some time. I have found it to be
riveting..compelling....and definitely sitting on the edge of my seat for the
next chapters. - Christi Sep 15th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #24 in 2003, #65 in 2004, #6 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

KG MacGregor knows how to weave a story. WOW! This one is definetly a MUST READ. The characters were really great together. Read this story now!! - yin yang Sep 10th, 2005

I haven't read a story that kept me hooked for a long time. This one did! It's really a great piece of work with wonderful characters (If I didn't know this isn't possible, I would say I have seen the sparks fly!) and a good story. - Amastre Feb 23rd, 2005

I have been a KG MacGregor fan since the Shaken/Stirred series and I have got to say her stories just keep getting better and better!!! Getting it Right is fabulous!!! The romantic tension KG builds keeps you on the edge of your seat and the chemistry between Paula and Wynne is positively electric!!! Well worth the read and then some!!! Great job, KG!!! - Michelle Sep 16th, 2003

O-MA-GAWD. I started reading this and got a kidney stone and still wanted to read. Okay the pain kept me from it. But my mind was wrapped up in the drama. (ok in unison-"freak!") This the first story I have read by KG MacGregor and I am very impressed with the GOOD, HIGH QUALITY, SUBTLE writing and storytelling. My favorite part is the little chapter end comments. RUH ROO is right! I will check in again after I have read every story posted. I highly recommend this authors work. - nicky in durham Aug 25th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Great story, I keep checking up for updates, they don’t come as fast as I like, ¡¡thank you Stone!! - Ailidh (Spain) May 1st, 2005

Sorry about the previous recommendation, that I wrote. I thought I copy and pasted the whole thing but I didn't. The story is awesome and can't wait for further chapters. I consumed by the story, you can tell by my previous half missing recommendation. I just wanted to reach through the words at the one character. - Shaye Mar 13th, 2005

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I just read part 3 and that restaurant scene, wow. There is one thing that bothers me, I can understand Taylor not wanting to blow her cover, but what Vicki did was out of line. That behavior should not go unpunished, I would think that something official would be done to Vicki for endangering an officer's life. - Shaye Feb 25th, 2005

I'm really looking forward to more chapters,it seems to be building up to a mighty fine read. Please, we want more more more ! - Eddie Feb 13th, 2005

Surrender,
A really interesting..well written storyline. I am definitely looking forward
towards the next chapters. Hopefully 'Stone" you and your 'gifted muse' have
the entire story finished. (g)..... - Christi Feb 9th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
In her inimitable style, Larisa will have you spellbound and rolling on the floor as her down and almost out detective, Jo Polniaczek meets up with her old college roomate now DA Blair MacPherson, who team up with a host of others to solve a mystery. In the procees, not only will the two friends come to a realization, but life will get just a tad more interesting...

Enjoyable as ever -- truely enjoy any Larisa story -- am anxiosly waitng for another of her stories. - Linda Jul 5th, 2005

This is such an awesome story. What a way to renew an interest in an old show, and its characters. This author was able to write the character so well. Highly recommend this story. - wmnwholves May 31st, 2005

Larisa is the all time Queen of Uber. She's finally back with "Private Hell" and the caliber of the story is awesome which is par for the course. Please write more Larisa, you rock!!!! - ellebmd May 13th, 2005

Well, I'm back. I just finished reading "A Private Hell" and must say I did enjoy it. I don't want to say any more than that 'cause it's too easy to give away the surprise. Or at least I was surprised! Just read it and find out for yourself. Again, thanks to Larisa for another of her stories. Sure am happy to see her back. You've been missed, Larisa. - Sherry May 9th, 2005

Oh WOW, a new Larisa story, I'm so excited! No, I'm sorry, I haven't had a chance to read it yet. I just downloaded it. I just had to tell you how happy I am to finally see a new story by Larisa. Now I'm off to read this new story. Thank you, Larisa! - Sherry May 9th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 

Split Second was a wonderful story with drama, passion, politics, family and heartbreak. Hell! If it were a country song...it would have been a number one hit. Only thing missing is a dog! Ya just gotta read it. Maybe Stone's next one will have a dog?? READ IT!

- jlnicky Aug 27th, 2005

If you are looking for a great cop story with a twist, this is it! WARNING – it opens with a bang!!! - Kristi Aug 17th, 2005

Great Story!! This work was very well written and kept me interested from start to finish. I absolutely loved it. Take the time and enjoy 'Split Second'. You'll love it just as I did. GSB - GSB Apr 22nd, 2005

A great whodunit and howtheydunit plot, it kept me hanging right till the end. Reads like a movie. And the two ladies are hot! Very well crafted. - E Apr 20th, 2005

Wow! 'Stone'...rocks! Edge of my seat,couldn't stop reading and now i am devastated that it isn't finished.This is going to be one of the GREAT mystery/thrillers when it's all said and done. The sexual tension is off the charts. Please finish it!! - califa Apr 15th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Little did Kris know that the traditional first baseball game of the season played each April between the San Diego Padres and Los Angeles Dodgers would change her life. Tripping in front of the dark-haired Erin and caught ogling to boot, was only the preamble for the tall blonde, as both ended up splashed with beer in the stands and laughing good naturedly about the accident and clean-up. As they talk, Kris finds out that the fairly newly come-out Erin has a set of 4 year-old-twins, which does not deter her from wanting to see her again. So begins what will be bound to open old wounds and make both women stronger as they find in each other a connection, and love, lust, trust, kids and trouble times two and more will decidedly make their relationship a rocky one but ultimately worth pursuing. R. Nolan has woven another wonderful tale to keep you glued to your screen in wonder!

This is what a romance story should be. R.Nolan knows how to to make you care about the characters and the trials and tribulations any new romace faces. Highest recommendation, read this story...you won't be sorry! - Dana Jun 13th, 2005

Double Trouble is a very lovely and wonderfully romantic story. I loved it. It is a 'must' read for everyone and since it was #1... many others agree. Thanks for such a wonderful story... keep writing! - GSB May 15th, 2005

RNolan never disappoints! Her new characters are wonderfully written. The women's love and their struggle to overcome life's obsticles is a great read. I'm always a sucker for a story that includes kids and this one does not dissapoint! Great work, I look forward to anything else RNolan writes. - Littlespit May 9th, 2005

She's back and with a whole new set of characters to love and of course a couple to love to hate! R. Nolan's new story is well worth a read. Both main characters are strong women in their own right and the kids were just adorable. Any chance of seeing more of these lovely ladies? - Kelly May 7th, 2005

ARGH!!! why must u torture us!!! please please please put the last part up! im dying here!!! awesome story, really tugs the heart strings... and some other regions! :P

Brilliant, simply brilliant. - Blueyez` May 5th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  2005 Story Of The Year.  Top-25 #1. 
In this ST Voyager tale, R. Nolan has woven a tale of romance and adventure that showcases Voyager and its crew while still bringing elements that are fresh and intriguing to the foreground. Janeway and the crew while still in the Delta quadrant, encounter escape pods with Federation signatures, and faint lifesigns in one. Unexpectedly, they find Commander Delores 'Del' Ray MacMillan, hurt but still alive. The tall blond addition to the crew will bring a few surprises to Voyager, and will make more than a few re-examine how they view themselves and each other, especially Seven of Nine, whose gaining of a measure of humanity and more will lead to an enchanting proposition.

I wanted to take this opportunity to thank all my loyal readers for all the wonderful response Unexpected Arrival has received. The reaction has been phenomenal. Star Trek Voyager was a bit of a departure from my usual writing but was a fun experience. Seven of Nine has always been my favorite character, and I was intrigued by the idea of creating a story that featured Seven and expanded on the character we had all come to love.
Many of the emails I’ve received concerning this story have requested, sometimes quite adamantly in fact ;-) a sequel to Unexpected Arrival. To that end, as a thank you to everyone who has taken the time to write and share with me their enjoyment of Unexpected Arrival I have an announcement. Coming in January to the Athenaeum: The sequel to Unexpected Arrival… Join Del and Seven on a totally new adventure as they go Into the Void.
Happy Reading, RJ Nolan.
- RJ Nolan Dec 24th, 2005

I just have one question. RJ where were you when this series was on the air? With writing like this it would still be on! Great story. I miss these characters and it was great to see them back. More please! - Karen Nov 12th, 2005

What an unexpectedly wonderful story! It was touching,
charming, funny, and exciting.Highly recommended, even if you are not a Voyager fan. Great sci-fi story. - Janie Aug 31st, 2005

An excellent story from start to finish. A nice change to have Seven not be
with Janeway and what a delightful alternative Del was. - Anonymous Apr 7th, 2005

this is an amazing story!!!! hope theres a sequel cuz i cant wait!!!! - krysta Mar 19th, 2005

R. Nolan has created something truly wonderful in Unexpected Arrival. It was one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a long time. With R. Nolan's wonderfully written dialogue, the characters really come alive to the reader. Seven is written very accurately, and the "Unexpected Arrival" was one that the reader can't help but fall in love with. It's sweet, romantic, funny…and just an all around great love story. It gets my highest recommendation. - Bardeyes Mar 7th, 2005

You have cemented my fandomhood with your latest story. Wow! I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more in the future. Please continue to write! - ln549 Feb 27th, 2005

It’s no secret that I adore R Nolan’s writings; this story is no exception. It is well written, and a wonderful love story with just enough angst to be intriguing without becomming frustrating. Keep up the great work R…and we’ll all keep reading, I’m sure. - Littlespit Feb 25th, 2005

Truly loved this story. I have never really been able to get into the Voyager Fanfic due to the dynamics of the characters but by adding a new character to the cast really made the story line click. Loved it. I highly recommend it to all.

The author's previous works have all been excellent pieces and with this addition is par for the course. Wonderful job. - ellebmd Feb 23rd, 2005