One of the best uber stories I have ever read. DONT MISS THIS!! - Anonymous Aug 4th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #03 in 2003, #04 in 2004, #99 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Officer Sam McKenna and her rookie partner receive an urgent radio call. There's a man with a gun in a local Emergency Room. As they race toward the hospital little does Sam know she is racing toward her destiny. When she confronts the gunman her life is forever changed...

I read this story probably since the first day it was posted and was SO blown away by it. And now, I'm lying awake at night, remembering the characters and just can't seem to let them go. In my opinion, IN A HEARTBEAT is an incredible story, very captivating and real enough that some of us can connect to. The emotions, the struggles..it all just shaped the story into one that touched my heart. This is a story that I've re-read several times as well as it's sequel Entwined Lives. - T.F. Oct 18th, 2004

Great story, awesome character developement.I laughed and I cried...sometimes at the same time. Highly recommend, this bard knows how to craft a compelling tale. - Sue Oct 3rd, 2004

A friend highly recommended this bard's story and boy was she right! The characters are so alive and believable they draw you right into the story. And what a story it was...well done bard, well done. Any chance of us seeing more of Sam and Riley? - Donna Dec 23rd, 2003

in a word? Brilliant... - Snuff Nov 6th, 2003

SUPERB...ONE in a milinon... But wher is the rest????Need MORE PLZ - Keegan Conner Sep 19th, 2003

I enjoyed this bard's first story LA Metropolitan so was happy to see a companion piece. Wow! This one was even better. In A Heartbeat is a wonderful love story. The characters are funny, compelling and presented in a well balanced manner. Once you start reading you won't want to stop! Great story and a throughly entertaining read. Hope to see more of these ladies. - Beth Sep 13th, 2003


As I said I would do, I read this novella by R. Nolan late last night on into early this morning. I was impressed. This is a well written story which definitely showcases R. Nolan's writing talent. "In A Hearbeat" is a beautiful love story that leaves you wanting to read more about it's two lovely heroines. And this is not a PWP tale. This work of fiction definitely has a heart and a soul wrapped around a nice story line. You'll understand where the title comes from not too long after you start reading. You'll find yourself on cruise-control as you glide from chapter to chapter. Then suddenly, it's over. And you have to stop. But most certainly, you're filled with a craving for more. This cleverly written and totally entertaining fictional delight was, indeed, a follow-up to "LA Metroplitan", but it's definitely left behind in this sequel's wake. Where have you been hiding R. Nolan? I can most assuredly say I want to read more of this writer's work! - //AW Sep 7th, 2003

Excellent story! Well written and makes you want to keep reading to the very end. I look forward to reading more from this Author. - Anonymous Sep 6th, 2003

I was impressed with R Nolan's first offering "LA Metropolitan" so when I saw this companion piece, I was excited to read it. "In A Heartbeat" matched, if not surpassed her original work. The writing is well done, the characters are real and relatable. By the end of the story I was yearning for more. R Nolan writes a wonderful love story and I look forward to more work from this talented Bard. - Littlespit Sep 6th, 2003

The title "In A Heartbeat" caught my attention very quickly. Hmmm...I thought, perhaps a nice romantic story to read this evening to lift my spirits and soothe my very tired soul after an extremely busy work day. So, I ventured to commence reading this 'new' story to The Athenaeum. WOW!!! I read...and kept on reading...not letting go...not wanting to. I was 'hooked' very early on in this very well written and delightfully entertaining romantic tale. It certainly had gotten my attention and I found myself wanting 'more' even after completing the last chapter. This story by Ms Nolan is certainly a wonderful sequel to her first story, "LA Metropolitan"...and in my estimation, much moreso. This fictional interlude is more poignant, more riveting, more romantic, and more thought provoking in many ways. But, all in all...it's a story of...and about...'the power of love'. My suggestion is for y'all to read this one. Why?! 'Cuz you're really gonna like it. You truly are...'Fer sure!!! Well done,
Ms. Nolan...very well done. - ~Ag Sep 4th, 2003

Tracy Chandler's beautiful young wife has been murdered, and Tracy is the prime suspect. Can her attorney find the truth before the murderer strikes again?

I really liked this story and am waiting for the next
part, has a great story line and the characters so far
have been developed really well. I recommend you read this - Anonymous Mar 10th, 2005

Love this story and the characters. I highly suggest everyone check it out!! - T. Stratton Mar 9th, 2005

Dashing and mysterious Hollywood newcomer Jamie Dean gets the opportunity of a lifetime to work with her favorite actress. Sarah Talbot, America's Sweetheart, wants to stretch her abilities in hopes of winning her first Oscar after years in the business. Together they venture through a suspense thriller, but what happens when the cameras aren't rolling? Is their chemistry only affected, or does the homebody win the heart of the latest ladies' woman? Appearances from the characters of "Love in Photographs" and "Georgia on My Mind" included.

This was a fabulous third edition to the series! I absolutely loved it! I especially enjoyed the addition of children to the mix. That was something new for Alex's books, and she did a wonderful job with capturing them accurately. There was also a new twist to her usual girl meets girl story line, which I will not divulge so it can be a surprise to readers, but I will say it truly makes Jamie a more believable character. The contrast between her physicality and her "real" personality is wonderful. As for Sarah, she was a great, strong woman. It was nice to see women who know what they want and go for it. A great book! A must read for fans of her work, and if you've never read Alex's stuff before, you should read this series. It's some of her best! - Anonymous Jun 10th, 2003

Sometimes our expectations are right on target, and then again... This one was written for the 2005 Valentine's Special at the Royal Academy of Bards.

In this sequel to 'Powers of the Queen,' Part Two of a Trilogy, Xena and Gabrielle have fallen into a routine at the camp of the Thracian Amazons, but that is about to change. Two weeks after the Solstice Festival, a sister Amazon from the Caucus Mountain in the east arrives in camp, and begs her western sisters for help. She tells them the story of her Eastern Amazon tribe which was decimated by a mysterious army with supernatural abilities. This army has been destroying everything in its path, taking only a few female prisoners from each conquest, before moving on to the next target. She fears the future of the known world is at stake as the army is unstoppable. Can seven women, led by Xena and Gabrielle, stop a force they know little about? So unfolds the adventure to the East!

Thanks Patricia and Xanja98 for the story, loved the multiple layers of the words, the archetypal imagery in both stories. Looking forward to the next part of the trilogy. - Anonymous Nov 15th, 2005

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HI, Xanjaa and Patricia,
Wow!!! What a great ending to the story! My emotions were on over load and my stomach was doing flips. I had to get up from reading the battle it was stressing me out. Nice job, usually I get lost reading them and have a hard time figuring out who is doing what to whom. Your description of what Tynet had to endure depressed me but then the human race can be pretty cruel to each other. I Liked the heart to heart talk that Ephiny and Pony had about Adara. Pony had to love Adara enough to let her be happy. That whole story line was beautifully written,very touching. I got kind of upset when I thought you killed Pony, nice one. I am glad everyone made it threw all right, I like happy endings. Thank you for a great story. I`m looking forward to reading the next parts. - Nancy G. Nov 6th, 2005

I am very much enjoying your story. It is nice to read a new Xena tale for a change.
Thank you! - Nancy G. Apr 24th, 2005

Impossible to stop reading, a story with extraordinary depth
and passion. Compelling and poignant, a story not to be missed
that never breaks its thread of action that draws you into a
vortex of unforgettable characters and shattering events.

- Kerry Apr 10th, 2005

Some how I missed your first story. Had to go back and read it. I liked it; Xena and Amazons always a good story. The Persian Encounter is even better than the first part. Cannot wait for more! Thank you!
- Nancy G. Mar 29th, 2005

I like the Pesian Encounter because you have managed to write with depth. I see the places you describe. I know the characters you paint. I experience the story myself, as if I am living it. Your story fires my magination. That is the mark of a truly good Bard. For that, I thank every one of you! May your quills ever remain sharp, and your inkwells perpetually full!! Thanks! - Justine Mar 26th, 2005

Great story so far...cant wait to read the rest of it and waaay lookin forward to part 3 - amy Feb 18th, 2005

Amazing start. I'm anxiously waiting for more. - Anonymous Jan 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #91 in 2002, #94 in 2005.  
After consuming large amounts of beer during a drinking game, Striker is dared to kiss the next person to walk by. With one kiss, everything changes in her small world. Especially since the person she kissed is a new employee that her father has just hired.

loved it need I say more...LARISA ROCKS!!!!! - Anonymous Mar 4th, 2005

When Claire convinces her partner of five years, Jolie, to let her gamble away their mortgage money in Las Vegas for the weekend on the promise of a better life, she has no idea the gamble she was taking. After meeting Becker Gaudet, one roll of the dice changes all three of their lives forever and none of them would ever look at Valentine's Day the same way again.

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Another great romantic tale from Ali Vali. I liked this story so much more than the somewhat similar plot in the movie starring Robert Redford, Demi Moore and Woody Harrelson. Read and enjoy! - Cam Dec 3rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #07 in 2004, #91 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
The Swing Time Ballroom was dark and smoky just like it had been more than 60 years before. Not much had changed in the place. Mac blinked her eyes a few times and then walked to the middle of the long mahogany bar. She pulled out a long cigar, snipped the end off with her cutter and slid it between her lips. Searching her pockets, she pulled out her silver Zippo and burned the end before lighting it. With one eye squinted, she looked to the bartender and gave her a crooked grin. "Hey Sally gimme a bourbon neat and some pretzels if you have any." Sally pushed back her dyed red hair, eyed Mac and shook her head of long curls. MacKenna Jones, Private Investigator, lived in the past and that's the way she liked it. However, a sticky case and her loyal secretarys' grandaughter may just change that, as the tall, gangly Truman becomes Mac's indomitable Girl Friday and fate calls for more than a beautiful friendship.

Hilarious story with great chemistry between characters - Shyn Jun 6th, 2005

If you are looking for a story with a little mystery, a lot of romance and a huge dose of humour then this is definitely the one that will fill the bill. Personally I have never read one of Larisa'a tales that didn't make my day better, she is always entertaining and I think we all owe her a big thank you for sharing her amazing talent with us. - Alex P Jan 26th, 2004

I truely enjoyed this offering from the pen of Larisa -- but then when don't I - talk about lots of frustration -- nothing like being told no, forget it, never in a million years to get one going.
- LInda Jan 18th, 2004

Really good story! The characters were likable and believable and had great chemistry. I enjoyed it a lot. - Peggy Jan 16th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #57 in 2002, #89 in 2005.  
Six years have gone by since Renny has been home, now at the age of 30, she has decided to go back home and settle down. When she gets there she finds out that a 25-year-old family feud, once cooled is well under way again and her brother is the cause of it. She gets right into the middle of it to save her brother and loses her heart to the other side to a small blond with green eyes.

I love LARISA and these stories of hers .The stories are all great .read them all!! - reader Mar 5th, 2005

Another story by Larisa...what can one say..EXELENT
Read it
- SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

An intricately wowen tapestry of madness, passion and love.

Dark but captivating. Absolution will keep you reading until the last word. It is so refreshing to read a story that isn't all rainbows and sunshine. To read a story which forces you to feel the hope, happiness, and pain of the characters as if it were your own. Well done. - cassie Jan 1st, 2006

OMG i love this story,it was great,all the different things that happened. i luv ya anne ,this is now 1 of my favourite stories ever.keep writing more like this.
xxx - louise Apr 7th, 2005

A love story with a twist. I liked all the places Ms. Gardner took us to in this story. I am amazed how she wove so many story lines and brought them together to gives us a surprise ending. Very well done. - Felicity146 Jul 28th, 2003

I had to read it. There are lots of surprises in this story. I thought I had it figured out but I was wrong. This story is written with lots of surprises. - Sally May 30th, 2003

S. Anne Gardner combines suspense with romance. Wonderful story. - Anonymous May 29th, 2003

Jammed with the tensions of imminent disaster. The whole thing unfolds with the timing of a quartz watch. - popadopalous May 28th, 2003

I just had to read this story after everything I heard about it. All good. I know this is one of the best mystery stories written by a writer. By the way, I plan on reading all this authors stories. - Jane May 28th, 2003

Totally absorbing. It reads like a fantastic mystery, but the horror is that in the end it is real. Kuddos to S. Anne Gardner. Number one Bard - Kittygreen May 26th, 2003

Written by the Queen of twisted. I reread this story again for the upteenth time since S. Anne Gardner wrote it and want to tell all of you to read it. - Anonymous May 26th, 2003

Dark but captivating. This is one of the first stories I read by S. Anne Gardner. I have read it many times over and never tire of it. It has many surprises in it. For those of you who love the twist and turns in a story, this is a must read. - Anonymous May 26th, 2003

What do you get the woman who has everything? A life of her own. She has the money, the cars and the beautiful family and she doesn't want any of it. Living her life to her husbands whim and her fathers fears. Can the threats of an assassin set her free?<br><br>What do you get the woman who has nothing? A life that she had. She lives to serve. Lives to fight. The childhood that she knew will imprison her in bonds tighter than she has ever known. Will the threats of an assassin be her prison?

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #05 in 2004, #86 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Advertising Director Elora Duke had been observing the writer for months now, and finally got the courage to talk to her. The tall dark beauty, by the name of Virginia Wolf, is not overly receptive initially...however, Duke is not one to let go of one who has touched her so...

I just read this tender love story for the second time. What a wonderful tour de force by Ms. Tryst! It is so difficult to maintain the speaker's voice in first-person narratives, but she does it beautifully. - Linda Feb 14th, 2005

A beautiful love story. I would love to read a sequel or a POV from Virginia or both. - ter Nov 12th, 2004

What an absolutely wonderful, wonderful heartfelt story, but it begs to ask what happens now, and why stop there, it could be so much more. - LuvTigger71 Nov 2nd, 2004

*wow* this is a tender and elegant story of awakening. simply beautiful. - fanfic gourmet Jan 7th, 2004

Extremely different for this author. Well done though! A pleasure to read. Makes you wonder what happens after the last line had been read. Where to Virginia and Duke go from there? - Anonymous Jan 3rd, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

This is the best one yet! I love all the stories of this series but I just loved this one because you see more of how the girls live day to day. Their normal lives interupted by trouble is even more interesting then the girls going out and finding trouble. Loved it!!! - Casey Aug 12th, 2005

Wow!

Another great one by Ri. I loved this story, Veba and Rickie and their family are so special. I just loved the plot and to watch Veba grow and grow. Really well done. - Ann Aug 10th, 2005

Another great adventure with Veba and Rickie! I really love this series. I really enjoyed them all going to school I thought that was a great idea! - Toddi Aug 5th, 2005

I just loved this new addition, I really thought the mix of domestic life and adventure worked beautifully. I really adore Veba. She is so interesting to watch grow and learn. All the crew have evolved but it is so neat to see Veba from Ghost to Learning Curve. Thanks. - Tucker Aug 3rd, 2005

Hi Ri,
Well you 've done it again....another fantastic well written story on my favorite
characters. I really loved the way you are bringing out the many facets of their
personalities.....especially 'Veba's. allowing that childlike 'innocence' to be
mixed with the stength, determination of an independent woman.

- Christi Aug 2nd, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
The story of Jesse Hill and Elizabeth Weeks and how they meet and fall in love. Jesse is a former accountant turned horse rancher and Elizabeth is the information center director at the law firm that Jesse uses for the ranch. Jesse has never dated a woman and Elizabeth is still getting over the death of her lover.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Sonji and her so-called girlfriend end up on an island that is not quite as deserted as they first thought. The owner of Diablo Island, is not exactly happy to see them. However, when the tall, dark-haired island owner and the little blondes' eyes meet, there are sparks aplenty. Neither woman is what she seems, but it seems that their destinies are intertwined in this whirlwind romance, that along with it's usual Larisa happy ending, includes a simian wrecking crew and colorfully interesting parental units. Great read!

Woo-Hoo!!! Larisa, you ROCK!!! And, so does Diablo's Island...wow!!! If you enjoy twists and turns, unforgettable characters, giggling out loud, and crying a few good tears, you'll enjoy this story...promise!!! Once again, Larisa, you've managed to make me cry real tears and laugh my ass off at the same time!!! Your stories never fail to lift my spirits and warm my heart...thank you, Larisa for all you've given all of us!!! Now, not to be greedy, but, can we have more, pleeeeeeease??? - Michelle Aug 13th, 2003

this one has become a all time favorite of mine, the "crew" is at it again!! even missed the train to work so I could read this! an it is well worth it! Rates right up there with "Lost". As always Larisa you have done it again..WYD!!!LMAO,lookin forward to the next story to hit the net! Wizzy
only one problem the fonts are to small!:~) - Wizzy Aug 9th, 2003

I have found that finding a Larisa story is like receiving a box of fancy chocolates. You say to yourself, “I’ll just put these aside for a special moment.” But the very thought of just having them somewhere preys on your mind. Taunting, tempting, seducing you. Next things you know you’re in a chocolate induced coma.
Larisa’s stories are just like that. I think I have managed to go 5 hours after printing one up before I read it. Once I start reading, nothing else matters. The house could burn down for all I care.
Don’t bother me, I’m reading LARISA !!!!!
DIABLO’S ISLAND has everything to keep your attention. Half nekkid women walking around. South Sea island paradise. Sailing around the ocean blue on a yacht with the before mention nekkid women. I’m telling you, what more could a girl ask for.
My favorite part was Gibbon sailing the yacht and keeping it on course, was priceless.
- Sissy2757 Aug 7th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Top-25 #1. 
Love is rarely perfect... sometimes it seems impossible. A young woman leaves her troubled past, determined to start a new life in a new city. When she becomes hopelessly entangled with a domineering, emotionally embattled individual, she doesn't know if it's a dream come true, or her worst nightmare.

Yup, this story is definitely addictive! Hoping for a sequel too! If you like
Turning Tides, you may wanna check out Poetry in Motion and When You Dance with the Devil by Harley. - UberCrazy May 3rd, 2005

Turning tides is a great read. It portrays the helplesness in the maelström of love and sexual attraction/need quite well.
Naten could have fleshed out some parts in more detail, added perspective or a bit more conclusion, such as: what of the "sneaky stepbrother"?. His machinations and the plans/deals he apparently made during his vacation are not referred to again further in the story. Perhaps a sequel is in the making?

Also the need for anonymous, strongly dominant sex. That, to my mind, could not just disappear overnight, so to speak. But well, those are just my thoughts.
I really enjoyed reading it and certainly recommed it to others!

Letterwolf - letterwolf Mar 12th, 2004

Very well done. Great character development. Plan some time when you read this, you won't want to stop. I'm hopeing there is a sequel ones of these dyas. - Anonymous Feb 9th, 2004

This story produces addiction. I couldn’t stop reading till the end, and then, I couldn’t stop thinking of the characters. Great one. - Pru Jan 23rd, 2004

This is a intensely moving story. A.K. Naten really brings her characters to life and we really feel their pain and their joy. It is a great story and a must read. - Charles Dec 29th, 2003

This is a FANTASTIC story and I am waiting with baited breath for the rest of it! - Sprout Dec 18th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #03 in 2004, #81 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
In this mystery, an old wrong is again brought to light as First Sergeant Merc Macgregor is assigned to guard Finnegan Draper, a High School teacher who has been seriously beaten and left for dead, and who Merc blames for her part in the long-ago incident. However, in usual Larisa fashion, things are not as they seem and sparks fly between the two protagonists and their cronies, to the innevitable attraction and bliss of the two former 'enemies.'

Another excellent offering from Larisa -- she just keeps getting better. I enjoyed the mystery -- didn't even come close to who the bad guy was. I always wait till things is done before starting as I know nothing will get done till I am done with the story. - Linda Feb 25th, 2004

Grace Myers is an ordinary suburban housewife, though hardly a happy one. You might even call her bitter. She doesn't quite understand what she's missing- though she has an idea she is missing something. That is until one day, when that something comes calling as it so often does; unannounced, uninvited, and defying all manner of propriety and convenience.

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #19 in 2003, #79 in 2005.  

this story is great, the characters are alive, and the interaction between them hilarious! a very fun read! - ibh Nov 20th, 2005

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I love this series. It is SOOOOOOO witty and entertaining, without compromising depth or plot. It's got it all romance, tragedy, humor, etc. I give this series the highest recommendation. - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2003

Oh, boy!!!!!! This stoy is verrrrrrrry romantic! UNDENIABLE, By KM,
is about two lawers. Jessie is Robin's boss. Both of them fallen
deep in love,fight against job's rules, family, all for your love.
This story is enchanting, funny, sad,highly recommend! Enjoy! - Leth Jan 15th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #18 in 2004, #78 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Follow the lives of your favorite women from "Love in Photographs," "Georgia on My Mind," and "Stick to the Script." Careers, marriage, and children have these six ladies living on a rollercoaster. Will marriages last? Will careers be sacrificed? Will the vows of the heart withstand the tests of life? Find out in the fourth and final book in the New York Series.

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This story is the best in the series....before you sit down to read this you might want to get a box of tissues, because it is a hell of a rollercoaster ride, I have to say I cried like a baby through most of this story, but Alex really brought the characters alive.....P.S DONT miss this work of Art :) - bxverse666 Sep 1st, 2005

A great end to a wonderful journey. To come to know these characters and to feel as if they are your friends, it is bittersweet to be closing the door on their lives. However, Alex does it with the class and style that is uniquely her own. Thanks for the series. It was worth every moment. - Anonymous Feb 1st, 2005

gladly accept this story in to my hart, to keep it with me in mind in good times and bad times, for it is truly special.
I still sit here with the tears gleaming in my eyes and i cant tell if they are form joy or sadness,love or pleasure. What i do know is that I adore this story and the series it is part of.
I can say that this series, this storys truly will move you. So if you are truly looking for something special to give you a good time with many turns but have a true hart this is the story you want.
Alex has many Superb storys to pick, Alex has not let me down yet I have always had a good time reading here works. I not look forward to growing old and only reading all day long. - Sammylee Oct 12th, 2004

this is a must read story.....the author proves yet again that she gets better and better with each new story. the story makes you laugh, makes cry, makes you mad all the way to the very end and your left wonderfully happy. - dreamangel Aug 14th, 2004

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WOW!!!!!!!!! I love this authour. the entire series was wonderful and it reached perfection with this last installment. the ending was a wonderful twist that brought tears to my eyes. to make you think one thing, and reveal the happy ending was genious! Alex tryst knws how to write a real story with believable characters that go through everyday problems and are flawed just like everyone else. She makes you care about these women and their familes and have you rooting for them to make it. love is eternal, and this series shows that with startling realism. Bravo! you are truly a gifted writer. - peaches Aug 2nd, 2004

Honors/Awards:  #70 in 2004.   Top-25 #1. 
Terri Bledsoe is very angry when Anthony Leone leaves, leaving her very pregnant. As a last resort, she visits Noemí Leone, the head of Leone Pasta Enterprises. When Noemí learns of her brother's misdeed, she offers a helping hand. Follow this chronicle of Noemí as she moves from an alcoholic haze and into a friendship that could give her life more meaning.

Great story! I could not stop reading....I was literally up all night. - ERG Dec 5th, 2005

Noemi and Terri .Wow this strory is great! A must read. - Anonymous Jul 8th, 2005

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I found the author's site and story by chance a couple of years ago, before she started posting here.
The basic premise is tangled - Noemi takes on the role of carer for her brother's ex-gf who is pregnant with his child. This story could have fallen apart in so many ways but the writer forges strongly ahead with every chapter. The focus and thread of the story is firm. There are sub-plots shoring the main couple nicely. The supporting characters are interesting; ranging from sleazy, benign, righteous to warm, funny and sexy.
Best of all (!), is the tortured soul herself, Noemi. Her character resounds with angst, anger, power, sadness and is oh, so very sexy. In my view, the earlier version of this story was much more powerful in it's rawness and sensuality but the revision has smoothed out some edges and added more to the surroundings. Personally, I think it detracts a little from Noemi's edgy characterisation but the story still remains one of my favourites.
The story moves very quickly from the start, we feel the restrained primality of Noemi and we learn about her family and personal demons. We are easily caught up in her activities and the story actually picks up heat the further it runs (note: glacier warning!). Terri is her catalyst for healing and loving again and her best friend's romance deserves a separate story of it's own.
Noemi is on my personal Tops list, I pull it for a good angsty, dramatic and erotic romance.

Brilliant work, Ms Ruiz. - E Sep 23rd, 2004

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I totally loved this story!! Katia N. Ruiz did a BEAUTIFUL job in this story. Battle between lost love and finds in totally different person. I loved how Noemi endure the loss of her beloved, find Terri, a lonesome person carry the baby of her bastard brother. How they both over came their agruement; their will of their own lives, and stands together as one. How they have friends, family that truely loved them.
I loved how close Noemi's mother and father are close to one another, and her best friend, Victoria. She stand by for her friend, Noemi, and guide her to her trouble times. I'm crossing my fingers for the next seaqual to this exciting story.
Thanks Katia, for your for love of writing. Keep it up. - Bay Dec 13th, 2003

I owe this author an apology for when I first saw the word "revision" and the amount (55) of additional pages, I knew she'd ruined a perfectly good story. My bad. Ms. Ruiz, you have turned a good story into a great one. - Kaye Mar 4th, 2003

What can one say...? It was and is a great story.
When will the sequel be posted?
I am egerly wating for next part - SammyLee Feb 23rd, 2003

Katia, I could not stop reading your incredibly well told story until i was done...your character development...your insights into the torment and pain of our hero was wonderful...i hope you don't end it here...I WANT A WEDDING..MAYBE THEY CAN HAVE ANOTHER CHILD...LOL...
You are an extremely talented writer, and i look forward to looking at more of your work. Cat
stolenhalogirl@aol.com - Cathy Jan 24th, 2003

This is the 2nd story I've read by this talented bard and it's a great story with just the right mix of drama, angst and love. I love a story with well written secondary characters and this author has done that and more with "Noemi." Well written and well done. - Kay Dec 26th, 2002

An absolute fabulous work of art, and yes, I mean art. The way Ms. Ruiz described the events in this story is amazing. She gave in-depth detail of the surroundings, giving the reader a clear picture, almost as if one was watching a movie. Once I started reading the story, I couldn’t stop. In some parts, I was on the edge of my chair, chewing my nails. The best story I have read in a very long time.
- Anonymous Oct 27th, 2002

Just wanted to give a comment on my favorite story, Noemi. Folks this is a wonderful story about two women coming together through adversity. One realizing that she can love again, and the other realizing that she is worthy to be loved. I have read the story 'numerous', ok over 20 times and I love it more each time I read it. You should read this story, and be sure to let Katia know what you think. - Tonya Coley  Oct 15th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #24 in 2004, #76 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this erotic tale, Gwen had memorized everything about Kyle and Cody's mom from Beth the first day she had seen her, and as an after school program teacher, she'd seen her every day. Beth had been noticing Gwen too since she was a breath takingly beautiful young woman with light brown hair, green eyes, incredibly fit and curvy body. Neither one knew just how to approach the other, but Gwens' second job takes care of that, which comes as a surprising exposure for both!

After reading Ms. Black's new novel "In TOO Deep", I wanted more! This is an adorable story with incredible characters. Great job! - HK Oct 13th, 2005

I think, I need a tall drink of water and a lap dance, not necessarily in that other. Thank you Ms Black. - B. Apr 27th, 2005

Makes me wonder about having a second career and the fun of juggling two diverse jobs. Great job on capturing the feelings and expressions of the characters. - Shadylady Oct 18th, 2004

NEEDS A FOLOW UP BADLY- abut 69 more chapters. rely good one i am inpresed. - SammyLee Oct 6th, 2004

HOT! And of course...NOT nearly long enough!
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- jlnickymaster Sep 27th, 2004

Excellent! Just what a short story should be. I highly recommend this if you want a fast good read. - darkenedkarma Sep 23rd, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #96 in 2002, #75 in 2005.  
Raven, the head of a covert special operations team, is sent out with her team to protect the U.S. Ambassador to Turkey from a possible terrorist threat. It's not a mission that she and her team enjoy, being more used to blowing things up, assassinations, or covert extraction terrorists. Raven is sent in undercover to protect the Ambassador's daughter, while the rest of her team pose as Marine guards. The tough spec-ops captain is stunned when she finds that the girl she's supposed to protect is actually a twenty-one year old spunky, head strong, gorgeous strawberry blonde. Don't let the above fool you, this isn't really an action-adventure tale, and instead is a very enjoyable romance that has some great moments in it. Keep some ice nearby when you read this one, and don't read it at work!

This is really a great read folks. Greek Warrior has a way of not leeting you lose interst in this story. I can usally tell within 5 to 10 paragraphs if a book is going to hold my interst and I've got to say, once I started I couldn't stop until I was done. Hats off to you Greek Warrior!! A fabulous read. - Robin Hicks Apr 10th, 2005

I really loved reading it. It's a really great story. The interaction of the characters and the atmosphere are well written... it's a good mixture of "Bodyguard" (the movie), a family drama... and... well, let's put it that way: It gets kinda hot in the middle (very soon and very eager!)! HIGHLY RECOMMENDABLE! :-) - The Fic Addict Jan 26th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #73 in 2002, #41 in 2003, #54 in 2004, #74 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
The ER Chief Besom had two choices - either fire Dr. Shay Gerard, whom he'd just heard the umpteenth complaint against or turn it over to the one person who could find out the deepest secrets of a spy. Enter Pez - tall, long dark hair and eyes that could pierce into your very soul...and Chief of Surgery. Can her unorthodox ways help her help Shay? What...who is she afraid of? Read on and find out, although somewhat graphic, this is yet another romp in the warped world of Larisa that will make you laugh and cry.

I really liked this story. The plot was awesome and the characters didn't get carried away. [wink. wink. poke. poke. nudge. nudge.]There weren't too many parts I wasn't allowed to read.
Good use of words, but not too complicated to read. My favorite line was "Can I get a wheelie chair for a frozen tater tot?"

PS I wish you would write more stories without the characters getting 'carried away'. - Nanaabelle's Grandson Aug 15th, 2003

it doesn't need comments... READ this story !! Larisa, you're one of the best bards !! - laurence Jul 31st, 2003

I must say I really do enjoy Larisa's stories very much. She has the ability to draw the reader into her story and keep them riveted to the screen. That being said I have but one criticism. The main characters are usually very likable and believable, but then the two goofy friends are always thrown in and they just completely detract from the story. I can't help but find them irritating and have to roll my eyes at their antics. I mean come on they don't act at all like real people do (well at least any people I have EVER met in my life). I personally enjoy being able to relate to the characers and they are simply impossible to relate to. This is just a personal opinion, of course. I would like to see Larisa turn her considerable talents towards writing something with more depth and emotion rather than finding new outrageous situations to throw these two annoying creatures into. - Peg Jul 12th, 2003

IMHO I believe this is one of her best. - Amanda Mar 16th, 2003

Larisa has found the formula that works everytime...I love her stories! Please keep them coming!!!! - LW Oct 5th, 2002

After wobbling a little with her last couple of stories, Larissa is back! "The Ice Princess" is well written, no lags or jags, just the author at her best. I loved the pez dispenser; it brought back childhood memories and a hankering for one of those solid, pure sugar treats that made me wired and able to run faster than anyone else. ;) Thanks and all that jazz to the author for an all-around good read.
- Kay Oct 3rd, 2002

Just finished reading and I really enjoyed it...hilarious! Touching, too! - L Sep 27th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #89 in 2004, #73 in 2005.  
A Medieval-era tale that follows the story of two people who are brought together under less than ideal circumstances, and must learn to adapt to each other, as well as their new lives. Deception, heartache, and twists of fate complicate feelings and alter futures, and relationships struggle between bouts of love and despair.

Though there has been a huge gap in posting on this story, it's been well worth the wait. A.K. Naten has not let the lapse deter from the story's focus and momentum and I am looking forward reading to this continuing saga. - Kaye Aug 6th, 2005

beautifully written and a great romance story! cant wait for the upcoming chapters! - blazinangelwings Jan 13th, 2005

Excellent! This is going to be a whopper of a romance. Naten does it again. Please finish..soon!! Like "Turning Tides", I am sure this one will blow us away. Love this writer and boy oh boy will I be checking every day to see new installments.Wonderful.
- Califa Sep 29th, 2004

A great Conqueror style tale, well spun. - St0rm Aug 14th, 2005

Brilliant! Speaking as someone that has read David Weber's wonderful series a number of times, including all the adjacent books, this is wonderfully written by an author that really knows the universe and the very specific character personalities in quite some detail, and honestly it is just lovely to read Honor finally doing that which I always prayed she would and knew was ultimately what she should; fall for a woman :) - Ryath May 16th, 2005

Woohoo! Just love the girls and can't wait for Vic and ummmh ...??? to get together (come on, you know you want to! LOL). - Mic Oct 13th, 2005

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I love this story. The conflicts are realistically confusing as they would be in life when someone comes to the realization that they can no longer live the life chosen for them. I also love the interplay of loving friendships vs friends loving each other. - Jasmine Oct 13th, 2005

Fantastic story Hurry and finish it cause i want to know Who ends up with who!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a great story teller keep it up! - Andie Oct 6th, 2005

More please. - Anonymous Sep 30th, 2005

You're KILLING me. - JAZZY Sep 25th, 2005

More please. Loving this one. - Marie Sep 21st, 2005

The story is great. The charectors are so real I feel like I actually know them all. I'm also enjoying the plot twists. Write faster. ;) - Linda Sep 8th, 2005

Lady J, what a great story. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. Amazing plot. Can't wait for part eight. - Jenny Sep 6th, 2005

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana Sep 5th, 2005

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana Sep 5th, 2005

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. You are a wonderful writer and I am glad to see you writing again. I can't waite for the part seven. - Janice Aug 5th, 2005

Loved this story ...any idea when or if this story will be completed...finished part 5 pleeeaaase finish it Thanxx - FBF Jan 31st, 2005

I really enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for part 6!!!! - Deja Nov 7th, 2004

Wonderful, just wonderful. Waiting for the next part to be posted. - A. Nonny Mouse May 6th, 2003

Ok, so I am slightly biased, but I truly love this story. The characters are well written and the plot is fun (and at times just plain funny!) Its a charming and entertaining story and I highly recomend it! - Trin Apr 30th, 2003

I have found this story not only entertaining but also exciting. I feel the characters are 3 dimensional, each having a very unique personality. I anxiously await more and would recommend this story to anyone who loves good writing and a well-spun tale. - Windsong Apr 20th, 2003

It is great. There are parts in it that were so funny I amost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. I very much highly recommend this story. I am sure once you start reading it you will love it as much as I do. Can't wait till the next update. - Debbie Dee Apr 13th, 2003

I love this story. I was laffin so hard I almost joked. Lady J is really somethin special, can't wait to see more from her. - ne-ne Apr 10th, 2003

I loved what has been written so far. Cannot wait for more!! The characters are believeable and loveable. I recommend this story for everyone to read. You will love it as much as I do.

- T. Stratton Mar 21st, 2003

WHEN IS THE SECOND PART GOING TO BE ADDED? - Anonymous Dec 1st, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Not all first blind dates are what they seem, and not all blind dates end after the first.

For a short story, I extremely enjoyed it. I normally prefer the novels, but this was exceptional. - twidgetX Apr 11th, 2005

Carlin Whittaker had the world on a string. She had a stable relationship with her partner of almost twelve years and the perfect job. A chance encounter turns her world upside down and changes everything.

Honors/Awards:  2002 Story Of The Year. Perenial Favorite Award: #01 in 2002, #54 in 2003, #74 in 2004, #69 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
FBI Director Jericho Chamaune has a hobby of trying to solve the cases of missing women dating back ten years of more. One day her assistant director Stan gives her yet another folder of a missing woman. Like several others, she is a college student from Texas. In all the time she has been working the case, they have yet to find any sign of the missing women. When she placed the picture of the latest missing young woman on her wall, she could not tear her eyes away from the green eyes looking back at her. One day a friend working at the nearby hospital calls her. A woman has been found lying beside a road and brought to the emergency room for treatment. At her first sight of the woman's haunted green eyes, Jericho knows that this is the latest missing woman.

Great story. Check it out
- Anonymous Jul 26th, 2005

I must say that this story is one of her best. I loved it so much I have it bookmarked. - Anonymous May 16th, 2003

I’ve just ‘discovered’ Larisa’s stories. Buried Prejudices was fantastic, and I wan’t more, more, more!!!! - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2002

As with all of Larisa's stories, she grabs your undivided attention at the onset and you find you can't stop until the last sentence has been read. All her stories contain the standard beginning, middle, and end...but in between, they're packed with enough action and romance to make your reading a delighful pleasure. - ~M~ Jun 17th, 2002

I thoroughly enjoyed Buried Prejudices and the rest of your stories. I don't know why I've never read them before, but each new story is like a fine wine - to be savored. - Judy Jun 13th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #33 in 2004, #68 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
Rayven a wildlife photographer and journalist returns to claim her ranch, while Jaxon Segreto, Chief of the elite firefighter team Blue Mountain Firefighters does some soul searching. The sequel to this tale is Fistful of Rain.

A great, touching story. I couldn't imagine how many "I love you"s a story could contain until I read this one. ;-) Read it!! - The Fic Addict Jan 30th, 2005

Great story...was up late looking for something to read when I came across this. Ended up staying up till I was able to finish it. Keep up the good work...=) - Lacey Aug 27th, 2004

Elijah Kingdom knew something was not right when she woke up on the hot sands of Fire's Backbone. She was faced with a world that was so foreign to her, yet so familiar. What does a book and a powerful shape-shifter have to do with her existence there? It is up to Elijah and her companion Balon to destroy the evil that dwell in the Dark Lands. A woman who reminds Elijah, of her beloved, enters her life. And a crown-less King and a powerful stone may resurface down the dark and terrible road.

Megan is a city girl who has inherited half of her aunt's farm, but in order for her to keep it she must live on the farm for one year with Charlie who owns the other half.

the story is great .....the best story ever.....finished the story please..all the best take care' - fa artemis Nov 18th, 2005

cool story so far, too bad it was never finished. - Anonymous Mar 1st, 2005

I just finished reading parts 1 to 5a of the story Dangerous Games and I really enjoyed it. The characters were finely drawn and the dialogue authentic. I really like the way the author weaved the Xena scrolls into this modern story. I would love to see how everything ties together but, alas, the story is unfinished. - griggssoccer Feb 15th, 2005

This is a really interesting story. Any chance the author's going to finish it? - aurelius Dec 20th, 2004

Jana Mueller and Cameron Grant spend a private afternoon on the four year anniversary of their chance meeting, reminiscing about the highs and lows of their relationship. A sentimental story about finding true love.

like all of ms tryst's stories a pleasure to read from beginning to end. A story that leaves the reader with a happy smile at the end. another great story!! - blazinangelwings Mar 2nd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:   #100 in 2003, #62 in 2005.  

what a wonderful, realistic, heart wrenching, upsetting, happy, sucking ya in and keeping ya hooked right to the end story, that I have read in a long time.
To put it bluntly, its a brilliantly written story. - LuvTigger71 Aug 13th, 2005

I just needed to read this story to put me in very good mood..wow...very very well done.. and just wonder why this wonderful story hasnot been publish yet..I would say this one is a plus.
keep the good work miss. Day.
- miriam Jul 10th, 2005

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This was a fantastic story. It was very well written and it had me until the very end. The characterization was great. I have to say though, I couldn't stand Paige. I think she was a bit of a lousy friend. Sort of reminded me of the phrase 'misery loves company' at times. Once again though, great story. - Anonymous May 25th, 2003

http://ca.geocities.com/dayliobserver/frontpage1.html Is where you'll find the rest of the story, it's in episodes. It was really hard to track down! Why would someone hide this beautiful story away like that tsk!!
- Stephanie Jan 14th, 2003

Loved this story.I thought the characters were very well rounded,but I couldn't find part 8 to finish reading it.Any suggestions? - jbamazon Jan 13th, 2003

Wow! This story is wonderful!!!! The characters Terri, a teenage and
Sarah, a more old sophisticated and sexy woman, have a relationship
tumultuous, hot, passionate, to writer with rare talent and preciosity.
Leth - Leth Dec 26th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #04 in 2002, #68 in 2003, #62 in 2004, #61 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Detective Xepher Sallano, trying to solve what appear to be serial murders, keeps running into dead ends...literally. Then the Medical Examiner dies in the midst of the inverstigation, and his replacement is makes Sallano see red. It's hate at first sight for Chief Medical Examiner Brianna Meadows, too. Or is it? As the murders get more gruesome, Detective and ME find themselves involved...in more ways than one. This is another of Larisas' gripping tales with unconventional characters, laughs, love and gore, that will keep you spellbound.

This is my favorite Larisa story of all time...OMG..LOVE IT...Xepher and Bri rock, but I love the captain, they're always embarassing him HAHAHA...thanks Larisa..I've re-read this too many times now.....and it just gets better. - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2005

GREAT STORY!! READ IT!!! Alittle gory, but if you're like me and like that kinda stuff, its a keeper. Larisa, you rock! - Anonymous Jul 26th, 2005

I agree, there is gore galore but I like a story with grit so I was interested right away. I just read it in it's entirety, it's simply wonderful. I can see a Bone Collector 2 with Angelina here ... or is that wishful thinking? It would be a shame if you bypassed it simply because the graphic scenes may disturb you for it's got one of my highest ticks of approval. - Corbeau's Voyager Dec 1st, 2003

Xepher? Guess those "X" names are kinda hard to come by, huh? Once I got past that, and the fact that parts of it are REALLY gory, I quite enjoyed it. - Mich Sep 14th, 2002

One word. WOW! McKee is an enigma wrapped in a mystery. I can't wait for a sequel to answer all the questions the ending of this story left me with. Great read! - Blue Dec 21st, 2005

McKee is an exceptional story that is raw, gusty and lives right in the gutter of society. The action grabbed me right from the beginning in this finely woven tale. I thoroughly recommend this story to anyone wanting to experience the seamier side of life. Well done, AC!
- Aurelia Dec 20th, 2005

Great story. We want more!! :) - lyneX Dec 19th, 2005

This story screams "sequels". Very interesting lead character with a wonderful supporting cast. - jac Dec 4th, 2005

Great story, I hope we have a sequel soon, thanks ¡ - Ailidh (Spain) Nov 21st, 2005

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Here's a truly intriguing dark tale that might seem to be just another PI tale at first glance. A.C. Henley has masterfully constructed a gritty tale whose center is the dark enigmatic Quin McKee, a PI who does not play by the rules and yet gets the job done. She has friends in high places and in the lowest depths and her heart is something else...fraught with a world of hurt and then some. As the story opens, in crossing paths with those she once called friends after a three years absence, she now meets detective Vivian Walsh, one tough cop that might change her ways and mend some fences. But can the tall blonde break through the barriers and really get through to KcKee? Read on as Book One unravels some of the mysteries... - Anastacia Nov 20th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Well, I like this story/journal as it has some interesting aspects delving into the writers character, how she grew up to some degree, how she especially relates to others and how she deals with her being gay. Location of story is kind of rustic but scenic. The circumstances are past and what you read is much like a back story. There are some funny lines and I like hearing how she deals with her life for the most part which is uncomfortable at times and even painful, though not unhappy. There was no email addy to give feedback to the author so hopefully that will be added to the next part. - KC Nov 10th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #29 in 2004, #58 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
As if the insanity of the ER were not enough, St. Luke's Hospital in Washington D.C. features the insanity of one Dr. Jack and her associate loonies, which makes poor Dr. Waylon Porter want to scream. Enter the a tall woman with long black wild looking hair, baggy clothes and the voice of an angel that captured everyone's attention including hers, who with a group of bums stood singing in front of a captive audience of senior citizens that had come from the bus wreck right outside hospital doors! Waylon calls upstairs for a Psych consult, only to find out that the 'blue-eyed bum' is none other than Dr. Hudson 'The Dude' Halgenberg, the hospital psychiatrist. So the fun continues in this zany tale of love and suspense sure to grab you!

"The Blues" was the story that finally got me hooked and so I started reading a lot of Larisa's works.
Where do I begin?
I really love the goofy people in the story. No one is safe from embarrassing oneself. I think that's what makes the characters alive, not to mention the dialogues. - lectra Aug 7th, 2004

Whoohoo!!! Another one from Larisa ... this is one funny story and comes with another liquid warning. A must read for everyone.
You rule, Larisa. Keep them comming!!!
- Bacchus Aug 19th, 2003

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
C. J. Harte is an incurable romantic who is currently working on a series of love stories about the various stages of love in our lives. This is one of her life stage stories. This story is dedicated to the first crush in each of our lives...

I read the first story of Ms. Harte series (Last Dance) and really enjoyed it. It was well written and touching. She does it again!! Don't miss it! Both stories will make your heart flutter! Thank you. - Vesna Jun 15th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #21 in 2004, #56 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

I just found this wonderful story and can't wait for more. Amazing and very very funny. Found myself laughing out loud. - Wendi Dec 26th, 2005

Truly wonderful story. Please continue!!!! - Anonymous Nov 27th, 2005

Loved every single word. - Danni Nov 14th, 2005

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I just came across this story and was glad I did. I was pleasantly surprised first by the clever mixture of comedy and real life situations. Next how well written this story is. And lastly that this story is about more mature women with children. Thank you Lady J well done and I look forward to your next installment. - Diane Nov 10th, 2005

Very wonderful story. A real gem worth finding. - Steff Oct 31st, 2005

WELCOME BACK BUSINESS TRIP....this has got to be the funniest down to earth piece ever. I absolutely love this please please please update soon. - Lee Oct 20th, 2005

More please. The story is excellent. - White Wolf May 17th, 2004

Great story. Looking forward to more of it. I like that the characters are real people with imperfections, fears, aspirations, and needs...in other words, human. I also appreciate the more mature age of the main characters. As mentioned by other readers, the humor and writing style are excellent. Now if I can just be patient until I find out what happens next.... - Debbie May 10th, 2004

Lady J, you have a wonderful style of writing. I can't believe I laughed out loud but I did. I love this story, more please. - Jenny May 6th, 2004

This story is so great I can't wait to read more. Your doing a great job on it Lady J - Debbie Dee Apr 30th, 2004

Please don't end it in part three. - Anonymous Mar 11th, 2004

I laughed till I cried. Who are you and how do you know me? Great job Lady J. - Denise Mar 5th, 2004

OMG! This is so funny and so real to life! You've captured office politics with style. I love the characters and I hope we'll get to see more of them in the future! Go Lady J! - Kaia Mar 4th, 2004

What a great surprise this morning to see part 2 of Business Trip. One thing I can honestly say is I hope it does not end in part 3. - Judi Mar 3rd, 2004

Excellent. - Teri Mar 2nd, 2004

This story is so great. I can't wait till the next part. You have done one fanatic job on it Lady J. - Debbie Dee Mar 2nd, 2004

Loved it, when will we see more? - Rhea Feb 5th, 2004

This is a wonderful start. I love the humorous portrayal of corporate life. - Lisa Jan 28th, 2004

All I can say is.....More Please - A. Noni Mouse Jan 23rd, 2004

You did it again Lady J. This story is very humorous and entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next part. - Windsong Jan 20th, 2004

How many chances does a person get at a 'new life'? 'Period piece' set in the 1850's Oregon territory; Drama; Angst.

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New Life, Turning Tides and Second Son (not finished) are well written by this author. I like what A.K. Naten does with erotica in these three. Could limit some of the 'head talking' that each character gives to 'tell' us what they're thinking etc in Turning Tides...but it did keep me reading until finished. I think this will be a book Aug2005 according to A.K.N. page. I love stories that have the X character as she is in these pieces...gender straddling/dominance. S. Anne Gardner's great writing also comes to mind for strong X character's not to mention intriquing plots. - Anonymous Jan 12th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #83 in 2003, #98 in 2004, #54 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Tall, blue-eyed Largo Coogan, was having her first weekend off in weeks and she planned on spending it fishing at the Shenandoah River. Little did she know that she would run into Garrison Dexter...both literally and figurately. The little blonde would turn her world upside down and then some.

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This one is a riot, J is totally bonkers(too much candy) but also very likeable. One word of advice DON'T READ AND DRINK AT THE SAME TIME b/c you WILL ruin your monitor. Another great one from Larisa. Please keep writing these great tales. - Draco Mar 23rd, 2005

Winner of the Intrepid Story Challenge, June 2003. Larisa has managed once again to totally ambush us with a great story. My recommendation to you is…JUST READ IT! - SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

Sometimes fate has to hit you between the eyes to get your attention. Garrison Dexter and Largo Coogan certainly find this to be the case in this hilarious Larisa tale. Add to that a crazy cousin complete with the voices in her head and costumes to match, and some rather unorthodox breast enhancements, and you have another winner!!! You go, Larisa!!! - Michelle Jun 23rd, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #88 in 2002, #04 in 2003, #26 in 2004, #53 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Take one Regina Taylor, record executive, tall, dark and dangerous. Add singer Kari Swift, not tall but she more than made up for her height with fatal cutness. Record Exec and Singer meet - match made in heaven right? NOT! It's hate at first sight as far as Kari is concerned...will Reggie be able to change her mind? Follow along and enter the stormy music world and see if they'll rock on!

Really enjoyed this one. KG's stuff is always wonderful but this was certainly fun. Would have made a very nice novella or even novel if the secondary characters had been fleshed out. However, everyone was quite three dimensinoal and the read was a pleasure. Would be nice to see these two again. Reggie's transformation was quite remarkable and it would be interesting to see what happens in the long run. Her past is just itching to come back and bite... well, you get the idea. - Roxytrek Mar 7th, 2004

Still one of my favorites. Lust, love, passion all wrapped up in a deliciously funny package. Rock on! - Kel Feb 17th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #23 in 2004, #52 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

WOW!! Great story. It holds your attention to the very end. - kb Aug 26th, 2005

A fantastic story filled with romance, action, and mystery! One of my favorites. Don't forget to vote for Fire Within for the top 100. It definitely deserves a high spot, and so do Anita Louise's other stories. Check them out! She's such a talented writer. - Jane Bond Feb 1st, 2004

A bevy of butt-kicking, intelligent, and gorgeous women head up the cast of this exceptional mystery. Anita Louise offers another well-written adventure that will transport the reader to exotic locales, place you in the middle of danger, and face-to-face with an element of the supernatural. And just in time for Valentine's Day, Anita puts the reader in the mood for romance as she weaves tales of enduring love within this novel. Will you be able to solve the mystery before the heroines? It will be quite the challenge, even for super sleuths. - Rachel Jan 31st, 2004

Oh, yeah, the Fire Within has so many tendrils of flames feeding marvelous characters, romance, plots, mysterious goings on and a hairy horror not born from a bad hair salon. You will cringe at times, put new wrinkles in your forehead trying to figure out the who the numerous bad guys are and get a free suntan
following the characters to valleys & desert locations. The gals are gorgeous, lovable, funny and fend quite well dealing with the bad guys. Not much this story failed to weave well into it pages. Don't miss this one and encourage the bard to write a sequel. Just too characters you want to see again and follow to another adventure.How about it, Anita Louise?
O Ger - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

This story reads like a great mystery novel..with the characters intertwining within and around one another... loved it....looking forwards to a sequel. - Christi Jan 30th, 2004

Enjoyed the story, and I am the type of person where if you don’t catch my interest in the first few paragraphs, then I am going to read something that will. Well written, I look forward to new adventures by the characters and a sequel. R. - Anonymous Jan 30th, 2004

I'm up to date on my reading of "Fire Within" and can't wait for more! These characters have captivated me.

The town, the people, the strange going ons and now the monster that is scouring the countryside. It is a breath of fresh air to read a story that actually lets the readers feel 'every step.' A story that takes the reader on many adventures. I have laughed at times. Felt my heart beat faster when things got tense and scary.

I actually feel as if I am a part of this adventure. The love the women share is fantastic. Can’t wait to read more of this story.

- Jill Oct 8th, 2003

I am so loving this story.I am there, I feel as if I am part of the team.
A marvelous story, written so well, I don't want to leave. Just when
I think I have figured out whats going on, Anita throws in a curve
and brings it in a whole new direction........Looking forward
to the next chapters........ - Jean Dec 12th, 2002

This story has it all: action, comedy, drama, a little heartache, a lot of romance, and a mystery that has me pointing fingers at a half-dozen characters. This is another great story from the talented and popular author, Anita Louise. Do not miss this one! - Kimin Dec 10th, 2002

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #34 in 2004, #51 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

absolutely captivating story! Shows a close friendship between 6 people, 2 loving couples and one sizzling new relationship, all the while as a great mystery is played out. wish a sequel would be written. - blazinangelwings Mar 8th, 2005

i'd love to read a sequel, i read it before but i lost it ,i've been looking for this story since the last time i read it last year,finally found it again.great story - Montse (spain) Jan 15th, 2005

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Psicology meets investigation, with action in the middle. A group of friends losing one of their one to sinking insanity over a sad twist of fate. A new comer igniting the fallen one’s awakening. New lovers lust with mixed emotions. Anger and friendship on the field.
Love it! But then again I'm a sucker for stories portraying a good group of friends; besides, there’s a really hot couple. In simple adjectives: sexy (very very!), funny, deep, unexpected, great. It left me reading all night long. I’m *really* crossing my fingers to see a new story with these characters (all of them!).
- Maria Jan 11th, 2005

Absolutely wonderful story. I hope there is going to be a sequel! - Jennifer May 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #36 in 2002, #49 in 2004, #50 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this beautifully romantic Uber by Colleen, Jamie Sheridan, a tall dark beauty who is a proof-reader by day and a limo driver by night, has just begun trying to get on with her life after a somewhat shady past, when she decides to accept her co-worker's invitation for a get-together at her house. There, Jamie meets someone who might just make all the difference…Erin Casey. Erin is Bridgett's younger sister, a beautiful blonde writer blinded in an accident, who seems to 'see' into Jamies' very soul. Follow this sweet and moving tale as their relationship develops, moving past emotional baggage and adversity. This is a story not to miss!

This is just a wonderful piece of work! Only... well, it's too short! *g*
- Amastre Mar 14th, 2005

Absolutely wonderful. Do not miss this story. Just perfection. - Kayryn Sep 24th, 2004

this story is great it has every kind of story there is i hope more will come from Colleen - Krysta Dec 17th, 2003

This is one of the best stories I have ever read !! I was captivated from the first chapter !! I would recommed it to everybody !!
- AJ Aug 28th, 2002

Excellent story. I found it to be very touching. The characters will touch your heart immediately and the reader will find herself submerged into their lives. - Anonymous Jun 5th, 2002

One of the best stories I've ever read. Simply beautiful. - Anonymous Apr 29th, 2002

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Dale Wincott likes restoring old furniture. In fact, one could say she has a passion for it, spending many long hours scouring the flea markets and second hand furniture shops in search of long-forgotten treasures. During one such search, she finds an old battered mirror and falls in love with it immediately. Little did Dale know what effect such a discovery would have on her life. Are the secret whisperings at night coming from the mirror, or is it all in her lonely, frustrated mind?

Wow, wonderfullly written period piece, ok period pieces, seeing as it covers two different time periods. Amazing story concept. Well written with engaging characters. Hopefully we'll see more of these women who crossed time to stay together! - Kelly Dec 19th, 2005

Yeah, what those other two said! New writer? Where has she been hiding? Wow. That was a surprise. Bravo! - AD Nov 26th, 2005

Very good, interesting, different, and HOT. - Anonymous Nov 24th, 2005

Ooooooooo, not what I expected at all! I liked! This little story will definitely grab your attention and then twist it around in another direction all together. Lots of little surprises! Great read! - Susan Nov 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Love trust and desire grow in a burst of burning flames.

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Cody Lawson's early life was a series of unpleasant events. Amanda Norris was the one that bothered her the most. Can a chance encounter between the two women allow Cody to tie up at least one loose end that has haunted her for the past 20 years?

Excellent story! I loved the character of Cody, and Amanda. I hope that in the future, this author takes the story and adds more to it. It finished way too fast for me! - Katia N. Ruiz Jul 4th, 2005

I am loving this story.....can't wait for the next part... - loubug Jun 27th, 2005

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Loved the part of the outcast going back to high school reunion to stuff it to the old popular crowd, that's looking fatter, older and uglier these days. Sounds like a start of a pretty good story, can't wait for the last 3 parts! - Anonymous Jun 22nd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #67 in 2004, #46 in 2005.  
What’s the connection between drug dealers, a missing woman, council business, Welsh architecture and Sleeping Beauty? Striker might have made a connection between two of them... But she came to London to forget and to hide... and to seek. She had other riddles to solve. But an encounter at a hospital’s Accident & Emergency department turns her priorities, her life and her heart upside down.

What can I say about this story except,wow! This is one awesome story. I really loved it. I hope to read more on these characters soon. If you havent read this read it now! - Anonymous Oct 24th, 2005

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What a story! I just finished reading it and am seriously contemplating ringing in sick to read it all over again. Striker and Morien are two of the best characterisations I have seen yet (and I eat a lot of uber!). This story is a gem and I hope there is more to come.

Besides doing a fabulous job with the leads, Devize deserves a standing ovation for her carefully crafted minor characters. Danny had a part in my heart as much as anyone and its rare that you get a story that makes you care that much. and makes you scared... and makes you laugh... and makes you wanna hit certain people over the head for being infinitely stupid...

This one really does have it all. Read it now. It's the real deal. - Vee Apr 22nd, 2005

We meet Morien and Striker who will fall in love as will the readers with these two opposites. Guess which is tall & blue eyed! A story that is kind of sweet, but has danger, flight, bad guys, mystery all entwined with a soulmate love tale with some pitfalls. Dialogue is really good and descriptions of places, feelings and actions are so full of depth that you feel like a part of it. Hated to see it end & hope Devize writes a sequel. I miss Morien & Striker. - Sandy Jul 7th, 2004

i just finsed reading your story man it was great hope to more and soon - Anonymous Jul 6th, 2004

Easily one of the best ubers I have ever read. Well written, great plot, lots of tension (of all kinds) and great character development. - Anonymous Jun 29th, 2004

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Brilliant! This is an absolute corker of a story. I'm giving it 6.5 stars. Devize has written an astounding tale which has a great whodunitcatchthebadguys plot interspersed with a strong romantic thread and replete with angst.

The story will hook you and the revealing gems about our heroines will knock your socks off. Devize also kept me in a constant state of arousal by her teasers.

This is a hot one, folks. It has everything in an explosive fairytale romance for our uber couple. - E Jun 11th, 2004

This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have read in quite a while. Between the bad guys, a missing person, drugs, and other mysterious happenings, you will find a cleverly crafted story built around 2 characters you will fall in love with as you watch them fall in love with each other. This author uses her words to create visions that dance in your heart and paint for your soul. You will want to visit where these girls go, cheer for them, cry & sigh as their relationship grows and they come face to face with their fears, real or imagined. Bumpy roads, tears, and a sweet tenderness as well as some humor. The scenery is gorgeous and when words can create that in your mind, you gotta love this story and the creativity of this writers efforts. Book of the month? Maybe, but it is definitely my choice for Chocolate of the Month between two covers. - O Ger Jun 7th, 2004

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This story was AWESOME!!! A MUST READ for all! It puts together just the right amount of mystery, danger and romance all rolled up in one. Her characters draw you in straight away. It is about a woman trying to find someone. She searches high and low but realizes her search ends where it began with finding herself.
I can't tell you enough how good this story is. Check it out for yourself. :o) - Caden Jun 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

I really enjoyed both this and A New Beginning, It seemed to take the characters to the present and give you a good idea of how they developed. I love Jo it was great to see her so successful in every way. - Toki Oct 14th, 2005

Love this story!!! I loved the show and its really cool to see this possible future for the girls. Very cool. - Tye Aug 23rd, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #20 in 2004, #44 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
D has outdone herself in the writing of this tale! In this wonderful amalgam of mystery, adventure, romance, history and fantasy, D has woven a tale rich with the sights, sounds and feel of two worlds centuries and cultures apart and populated with warm and rich characters, two of which reach out across time itself for an unforgettable fairly tale ending. You will be enchanted by classic-style Uber that draws you in from the first sentence and won't let you let go until it is done! Brava!

I would like to say just how much I enjoyed this thoroughly wonderful piece of work. It achieves just the right balance between action, adventure and drama; but above all else it is one of the most beautifully romantic tales I have ever read. - Ang Oct 27th, 2005

I absolutely loved this story. It's a great read for anyone who is looking for something to read on a day like this. This story is absolutely beautiful and proves that love can cross time. - Alise Mar 7th, 2004

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #61 in 2004, #43 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Nicky McCloud’s goal is to hike the Pacific Crest Trail, a journey that should take her five months. Along the way, she meets Jay Reisman. Is Jay whom she professes to be or will she become the cause of Nicky’s nightmares?

All I can say is, there had better be a sequel!!! Great storytelling. Thanks! - sapphie Dec 17th, 2004

This is a story that will trap you and then drop you from a great height emotionally, so sit back and hold on. Just one question, will there be a sequel. - LuvTigger71 Dec 16th, 2004

The journey is brilliantly described - E Dec 8th, 2004

Great story!!! Hope there's a sequel!! This story is in my opinion too good to past up. - Krysta May 29th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Sequel to The Old Yellow House. This is a tale of love that transcends normal bounds as Bayley, a clairvoyant, struggles to locate lost children and Frankie, a mother, whose love is tested in the worst of ways as everyone tells her, her child, is dead.

I dont think my words will tell you the emotions that this story will bring to the surface....a roller coaster ride through a childs living nightmare to a mothers love that never fails as well as a new found relationship. You did it again Koda! What a wonderful story that brings tears of sorrow as well as the tears of joy! Thank you for writting another number one! - Wizzy Feb 22nd, 2005

This is one story that will touch the hearts of any mother. It is a tale of self-doubt, rejection and discovery. More importantly, it is a story of love; the love of a friend, mother, spouse and lover. I found it to be an excellent story and enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. - Shadylady Feb 21st, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Really enjoying this story. Hope there is an update soon. - Anonymous Sep 25th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award: #05 in 2002, #48 in 2003, #32 in 2004, #39 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 
Amazon law requires the Queen take a consort...will Xe return to Brie's side in time to claim her love? This funny little tale features Xena, Gabrielle, and a host of horny Amazons.

I wanted to simply say that I have read and enjoyed every single piece of literature that has been posted here. My personal favorite is Emotional Paralysis. It touches me deeply, so thank you. I hope that you will continue to share with us your wonderful talent and once again thank you!!!!!! Tina - Tina Jul 4th, 2004

There is only one thing more that a reader could possibly want out of this story. For it to be longer and have many, many sequels. Larisa sure knows what she's doing! - SammyLee Jul 18th, 2003

Another masterpeice! Standing ovations all around.

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(Hands Clapping, Clossest I could come.) - The_Rogue_Angel Aug 23rd, 2002

Honors/Awards: Two Time Top-25 #1. 
In this well written tale, best friends make the most of their last summer together.

Melancholic, but wonderfully sweet as well. Just like the last days of summer. A beautiful and extraordinary setting, a story nicely paced, and characters well drawn - well worth a look or two. - annika Sep 30th, 2005

This is an excellent story... and very sweet. Thank you,
Penelope, for a really good read. - Summer Sun Sep 30th, 2005

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
It’s another typical day at work for Shannon Hudson until the doorbell dinged and in walked Teal MacMillon who was destined to change Shannon’s life forever.

Hey, where's the #1 gold thingy for this story? :) - Anonymous Jun 27th, 2005

Great story...job well done! Love all your stories! - NF Jun 22nd, 2005

Just read this short story by GSB and I loved it. Well done. Please write more! - Anonymous Jun 6th, 2005

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #58 in 2004, #36 in 2005.   Two Time Top-25 #1. 
With her regency stolen Tera had been forced to flee Hawk's Peak.She was definitely at her lowest. Now with two years to prepare she was ready to take it back, then incidents started happening. Can a new found friend help or hinder? Is Panter someone who will make that much difference to the cause or will it become more personal?

loved the the story, stories like this is hard to come by.... hope the sequel comes soon cuz i cant wait!!! - Krysta Jul 13th, 2005

I've enjoyed Panter's Pride very much, and am waiting on the next installment. My compliments to the author and the imagination behind the story. - Melinda Sep 16th, 2004

this is a truly fantastic story...well written.....had me hooked from the very first chapter..........kept me on the edge of my seat.......hasn't disappointed me yet...can't wait for more....... - Christi Jul 20th, 2004

Original!!! Truly cannot wait for more. - Anonymous Jul 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #31 in 2004, #34 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

I never read unfinished work, no patience. So why am I doing it with SAG's work? I love what falls out of this author's head and onto the page. Can we get her characters on The LWord?:) I still have Gardner's "Seduction of Laura" running through my mind. What a read! Greedy me, I think a sequel could happen...I'm still standing there with Laura, wondering. Very profound work. - Anonymous Mar 29th, 2005

As always S. Anne Gardner writes a comment upon the meaning and tragedy of life as it is lived in any age in any quarter of the globe. a must read. - Monticristo Mar 14th, 2005

God this story is amazing!! i have to stop reading them before they are finished though, now i have to go to class with it in my head unfinished!! TORTURE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! do u have an emailing list or something for post of new chapters perhaps?

l - Blueyez Mar 9th, 2005

Thank you, author, for the next 6 pages. This author is excellent at 'rifts.' The emotional distance S. Anne Gardner creates between the two main characters starts your heart pounding with a tension of wants, wants and more wants. (like a good serial that keeps you coming back) She also throws you head first into each of her stories, as an excellent writer will do..you are off and running within her text. I devoured the pages before breakfast! - Anonymous Mar 8th, 2005

Any updates for 'Breath Of Scandal'? I love this author's stories...they are thick and richly insane in psyche, and spellbinding. I'd like a new one for each week of the year. So selfish a reader am I, when I know darn well that such writing is a craft that is honed over and over... - Anonymous Feb 2nd, 2005

Brilliant as usual! Gardner's stories captivate you from the get go! I only have one thing to say..finish finish..finish..!The conclusion of "An Affair of Love" would be nice to have also. Author..Author!! - Califa Mar 5th, 2004

Honors/Awards: Top-25 #1. 
Questions that we were left with at the end of 'Stained Pages' are - will Nicky and Jay get back together? How will Nicky's children handle their relationship if they do reunite? What happens to them in the future? What happens to Mark? Hopefully, these and other questions will be answered for you in this series of stories.

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Loved it, Loved it, Loved it, Fab, Fab, Fab, a totally and utterley brilliant sequel, more-more-more plz from these characters, but come on didn't ya just wanna slap the grandfather lots. - LuvTigger71 Mar 7th, 2005

I'm glad you gave us a sequal. It wrapped up a lot of questions I had. Characters were awesome and intriguing!!! It's nice to know that life doesn't stop at 50. - Lacey Feb 6th, 2005

Thanks for the sequel. It still had it's twists and turns like any trail. Think I'll find my hiking boots!!! - sapphie Feb 3rd, 2005

I had the honor of reading this story several times even before it posted on the net. The characters seem to climb right out of the print and become implanted in your mind until you don't know if it is fiction or someone you really know. The story line is great and held my interest until the very end. Now I have many more questions about the future of the characters introduced within Stained Pages and Finding Your Dreams. I hope this is not the end of the series but that the characters will return someday with a new story of their own. - Shadylady Jan 31st, 2005

You did it again my friend....created a journey of trails and tribulations. I found I could not stop until the very last word.To know she started out on a journey to find herself and then found love only to loose it.But now this one answers the questions in my mind from "Stained Pages".... Thank you for bringing us the answers to us as we searched for while hiking right along with Nicky and Jay the first time around!!!!
If you have not read this then I highly recommend this story for anyone who loves the outdoors and hot dogs!!!!:>) - Wizz Jan 31st, 2005

Allison and Jessica met five years ago and it was love at first sight, but due to circumstances and misunderstandings they were over before they could begin. Five years later they are best friends. Each still harboring the love that never had a chance to grow years earlier without the other's knowledge. Now that circumstances have changed time and fate might finally be on their side, but will Jessica's fears tear them apart forever.

In a time as Europe was cast in darkness, the paths of vampires and a hunter family crossed in Paris. Their bitter fight against the overpowering bloodsuckers prevented them from seeing the truth. In the deep forests of Transsylvania lays a castle, hiding secrets, magic and an inhabitant from an ancient time.

Oh wow! What a great, fantastic and awesome story. It gets better with every chapter!!And I wonder how they can do such a great job. At each chapter there are pics. That's so amazing!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING!!KEEP GOING!!! KEEP GOING!!!!! :) - Cassandra Jan 11th, 2005

What a great story. It puts a spell on me. I could not stop reading it. I can´t wait for the next chapter. So please continue as soon as possible!!!!!!!I like these pictures for each chapter.I always want more!!!! Great job Fiur and Vlamme!!! Thanks!! - Kristine Nov 2nd, 2004

Oh wow! This story is absolutely great! I'm dying to know how it will continue and can't wait for the next chapter! And now they even have pictures for each chapter! Awesome!!! - Jopari Oct 12th, 2004

This is the BEST story about vampires I ever read. I can't wait for the next update! So please keep writing, you are doing such a fantastic job! - Anonymous Jun 29th, 2004

Chapter 2 and 3 rally build the suspense in this tale!!! Good job Fiur and Vlamme!!! - Michelle Dec 5th, 2003

This just gets better and better!!! The suspense is really building!!! Great job, you two!!! - Michelle Nov 9th, 2003

Ooh...Chapter 1 is up and it's fabulous!!! What a great series!!! Full of dark beauty and suspense!!! Just what the Uber world needs!!! Thanks for sharing it with us, Fiur and Vlamme!!! - Michelle Oct 9th, 2003

Honors/Awards:  Perenial Favorite Award:  #10 in 2004, #30 in 2005.   Top-25 #1. 

this is an awesome story,annes passion in her stories nd how she can make u feel the way the character