This story was one of the best uber's ive ever read, everything about it touched me deeply and Develyn and Lauren are two of the best portrayals of Xena and Gabrielle out there, i just absolutely loved this story. - Lissa Dec 30th, 2005 |
Wow! What can I say? The writing, as expected, is top notch, the characters vivid and realistic. Awesome stuff again Finger! Love the character of Ashley. Gotta love a narky copper!!!!! - Polar Dec 29th, 2005 |
This lady has some serious talent and this story just proves it. Thanks Mickey I loved it! - Wannetta Wilson Dec 27th, 2005 |
This is a great story that I highly recommend to anyone who loves to read. The whole series is VERY well written and if you haven't read them do so, you will be in for a treat. - Wannetta Wilson Dec 27th, 2005 |
As 2005 nears its end and 2006 begins to bloom, one must be reminded of what life is all about... LOVE! This wonderfully written essay tells us what to search for, how to take care of it and that dreams do come true. MS Anderson's profound missive touches the heart, opens the soul and rings true for not only this life but eternity. My Whole Life, I have searched for the 'one' and now I know she exists. Thank you MSA! - Anonymous Dec 26th, 2005 |
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! When I finished reading this Holiday weekend, I realized I had consumed Fingersmith's stories in the reverse order they were written. It's a testament to her marvelous talent that her ability seems as polished in the first as it did in the last. Another wonderfully woven tale told with humor, insight, imagination and love. I am avidly awaiting the next story from this gifted author! - Therese Dec 26th, 2005 |
A touching short story. I love it!! - Anonymous Dec 26th, 2005 |
I must say it is a touching short story. Well done. - Anonymous Dec 26th, 2005 |
This is an a very thought provoking piece. I look forward to the next letter. - Amy Dec 26th, 2005 |
Wow - Anonymous Dec 26th, 2005 |
I just found this wonderful story and can't wait for more. Amazing and very very funny. Found myself laughing out loud. - Wendi Dec 26th, 2005 |
What a delight! You've seen the references in previous comments to the "dark" nature of this tale, but for me there were hidden sparkling gems. References to American music, movies and cartoons(Scooby-Doo) with the interspersed English idioms such as "gob smacked" brought a smile to my face time and again! This is one talented author!! What a well-crafted, thghtly-woven story! Thanks yet again, Fingersmith, for sharing your wonderful imagination in such a stellar manner. - Therese Dec 26th, 2005 |
What a marvelous read! Writing in first person is daring and this author has fulfilled the dare with style. The story is full up with angst, humor, love and just plain real life. I'd recommend the novel to my Mom (she's a former teacher and a fellow reader of the "avid" ilk) - and that's the highest compliment I can give. Thanks for sharing your talent Fingersmith, you've been added to my short list of favorites! - Therese Dec 26th, 2005 |
Warm and true to Amazons all over.Insightful and wonderful. Well worth your time. Dont miss it.Makes you proud to be a Sister. - Anonymous Dec 25th, 2005 |
A wonderful story, and I couldn't stop reading it till I reached the end. The narration was fantastic and it was very cleverly written. Can't wait to read more. If you haven't read this yet - read it now. You won't be disappinted. God no. - Jen Dec 24th, 2005 |
I wanted to take this opportunity to thank all my loyal readers for all the wonderful response Unexpected Arrival has received. The reaction has been phenomenal. Star Trek Voyager was a bit of a departure from my usual writing but was a fun experience. Seven of Nine has always been my favorite character, and I was intrigued by the idea of creating a story that featured Seven and expanded on the character we had all come to love. Many of the emails I’ve received concerning this story have requested, sometimes quite adamantly in fact ;-) a sequel to Unexpected Arrival. To that end, as a thank you to everyone who has taken the time to write and share with me their enjoyment of Unexpected Arrival I have an announcement. Coming in January to the Athenaeum: The sequel to Unexpected Arrival… Join Del and Seven on a totally new adventure as they go Into the Void. Happy Reading! - RJ Nolan Dec 24th, 2005 |
I had to read on account of Fingersmith's other stories. They were all good. I enjoyed this one because I can relate to having the same feelings that the protagonist is feeling. Kudos to the author and her wonderful work. - Mary Dec 23rd, 2005 |
A masterpiece of descriptive writing and creativity in ideas. I was moved to near tears in one scene (I don't cry when I read!) and nearly gagged up dinner in another scene.(I like keeping dinner in place.) This FIRST section of DESERT STORM is in 12 parts. Has the author completed the SECOND half of the story? I'd loved to read it, and was sorry not to see it there. It's a story I couldn't put down. You left us off with Kael and Ianna. You guaranteed the reader the 'next' character, who we all happen to love...so, ya up for it author? I am. - Anonymous Dec 23rd, 2005 |
This really is a great story. I loved it .I have to agree that I would love a sequel. Really great read thanx Kim and Alexa. - Anonymous Dec 21st, 2005 |
One word. WOW! McKee is an enigma wrapped in a mystery. I can't wait for a sequel to answer all the questions the ending of this story left me with. Great read! - Blue Dec 21st, 2005 |
This is a great story, very well written. - Chris Dec 20th, 2005 |
McKee is an exceptional story that is raw, gusty and lives right in the gutter of society. The action grabbed me right from the beginning in this finely woven tale. I thoroughly recommend this story to anyone wanting to experience the seamier side of life. Well done, AC! - Aurelia Dec 20th, 2005 |
In this modern day tale, Author Leslaureate introduces us to Jessica McElroy, a thirty something professional, who yearns to find that special woman to share her life with. After all traditional dating venues fail, Jessica develops a bond with a promising respondent to her personal ad, that she'd placed on an Internet web site, When Jessica is finally about to have her dream realized, and meet her cyber mate, Cynthia, the present collides unexpectedly and painful with the past "Memories of love." Will true love prevail? A very enjoyable, romantic, and nicely written drama by an exceptionally gifted author. Highly recommended reading. - solar Dec 20th, 2005 |
this is so good to read I just love it,, please make it into very long novel , becouse the first part was very short but love it the same...keep up the good work. - arly Dec 20th, 2005 |
Once again a masterpiece!! Oh if only I could write like you!! I say, Get thee to a publisher! xox - KTBard Dec 20th, 2005 |
WoW! .....Just................Wow! I gotta say, that was some very special story. Myself and two of my friends read it within days of each other, and we all agreed it was awesome. Well written, lots of emotion, great character descriptions. You didn't waffle on where there was no point. (which I thank you for immensely) All in all, a very good story and I say well done! Hope to be reading more of your stories soon. Thanks for sharing - Kelly Dec 19th, 2005 |
Very well thought out story. I Love the cultural education I got while reading this. Amazing story, creating vivid images of what love and honour is truly all about. This is a keeper fer sure ! ! - Kelly Dec 19th, 2005 |
This is a great story - interesting characters doing REALLY interesting things - documentary film, the ER, and romance~excellent combination! Read it now!! - ZenFilm Dec 19th, 2005 |
Hey cant believe noone has committed on this story . It is a great story one of my favs. I really love it and will read it again. So please read it now you wont be disappointed.Trust me. - yinyang Dec 19th, 2005 |
Great story. We want more!! :) - lyneX Dec 19th, 2005 |
Wow, wonderfullly written period piece, ok period pieces, seeing as it covers two different time periods. Amazing story concept. Well written with engaging characters. Hopefully we'll see more of these women who crossed time to stay together! - Kelly Dec 19th, 2005 |
When will you finish this story? I keep checking for the next chapter... - noel Dec 18th, 2005 |
I think you'll find this is not really finished! - Anon Dec 17th, 2005 Editor's Note: Corrected. |
fantastic story with great characters. it's well worth a read or three. would it be too much to ask for a sequel? :D - Anonymous Dec 16th, 2005 |
This powerful story starts out like a conqueror story does but slowly it changes into an entity that keeps you on the edge until the end. I’ll admit I’m a guy but I cried all through out this one. This isn’t the one to read if you want a feel good story, but if you want a suspenseful, romantic, difficult to read at times tearjerker this is the one to read. After reading this I immediately went to my wife and told her “I love you” because sometimes you don’t get a second chance to tell the people you love how you feel. Thank you S. Anne Gardner for all of your great writing. - Draco Dec 16th, 2005 |
this is the love of my life..i really love love love the story... i read pt-1-2-3 and i hope pt-4 soon ....great story ever....all the best take care... - fa artemis Dec 16th, 2005 Editor's Note: I'm uncertain where you're reading Provenance from, but we do have the complete story posted. The above link will take you to it. |
this is my no2 fav story i ever read the best story ever.... - fa artemis Dec 16th, 2005 |
In "All or Nothing," Alexandra Barton is a woman who achieved corporate success but at what expense? Currently living the life of a social hermit, deep down she longed for that one of a kind relationship, without which life would be full of emptiness and lonely nights. In walks a woman named Stacy, who could very well beome the love of her life. Would Alex allow the confusion and contradictions of her own heart destroy her new found happiness? Author Leslaureate tells this story exceptionally well and weaves a masterful portrait of self discovery amists the struggles, contradictions, and confusion one may encounter, along the path to true love and happiness, A well written fiction story that you won't want to put down. Highly recommended. - solar Dec 15th, 2005 |
Very good story, worth the price of admission, Engaging and very funny at times. BUT To borrow a line from one of the characters, I wanted to scream at both of them at several points along the way "Have you lost every bit of sense you possessed!?" and at others slap them both into next week. - -Aerows- Dec 15th, 2005 |
wheres the rest please / the story says finished is it ? - Anonymous Dec 15th, 2005 Editor's Note: The story is not finished yet, but we've a new part posted today. |
This whole series is excellent. Mel and Janice are complex and interesting characters and the story manages to be quite romantic without being cheesy at all. - Anonymous Dec 15th, 2005 |
Hi it's me again. The link for this styory is broken as well. Thanks - Vee Dec 14th, 2005 Editor's Note: Link fixed... |
I cannot say enough good things about this story! READ IT!!! It has it all. Seriously...the characterizations, the plot, the humor, the romance, the grammar...it's all good. - Anonymous Dec 13th, 2005 |
sooo hot lol and cuite - lil_Amazon Dec 12th, 2005 |
*sob*...so good *happy sob*....amazing - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2005 |
This is my favorite Larisa story of all time...OMG..LOVE IT...Xepher and Bri rock, but I love the captain, they're always embarassing him HAHAHA...thanks Larisa..I've re-read this too many times now.....and it just gets better. - Anonymous Dec 11th, 2005 |
link is broken. Can it be fixed so I can read this story? - Vee Dec 11th, 2005 Editor's Note: Link fixed... |
Hello Robin, This is a great story, please tell me that there will be a sequel . . . - Cindy Dec 10th, 2005 |
thank you for this set of stories, and i have to add my voice to the request for a third... i've enjoyed watching the characters grow and i've been scouring the net hoping to trip over the beginnings of a third part. good on ya! keep writing! - feral Dec 8th, 2005 |
One of the best Conqueror stories out there! Powerful and touching ... and wonderfully written, as might be expected from these bards! A must read! - roxper Dec 6th, 2005 |
"Don't make me use Lucy people! Family, or not, you are in my way." That line had coffee shoot out of my nose and all over my monitor, and it wasn't the only one! This is like reading a more matured and wittier Larisa story (No offence Larisa, I love your work!). This is full of great one liners and excellent caricatures of known characters. I laughed all the way to work scaring all the other passengers on my train. Great work ladies! I hope there is more from the two of you very soon. And please, more Lucy, that was great! - Lucy Lover Dec 6th, 2005 |
Interesting twist on Charles Dickins' A Christmas Carol. - Anonymous Dec 5th, 2005 |
Great story! I could not stop reading....I was literally up all night. - ERG Dec 5th, 2005 |
This story screams "sequels". Very interesting lead character with a wonderful supporting cast. - jac Dec 4th, 2005 |
I meant I DO is missing a link. - Kali Dec 4th, 2005 Editor's Note: The story is already labeled as a Lost Story. There is no link because it is no longer available online. We leave it in our Index on the chance that it will be reposted someday. |
Another great romantic tale from Ali Vali. I liked this story so much more than the somewhat similar plot in the movie starring Robert Redford, Demi Moore and Woody Harrelson. Read and enjoy! - Cam Dec 3rd, 2005 |
In short, great story, fun characters, consistently entertaining author. Enjoy! - anonymous Dec 2nd, 2005 |
Read this story! It's great. dabkey's other stories are also good, but this is one that can be read over and over. - anonymous Dec 2nd, 2005 |
This story and its prequel were one of the first ubers i read and remains one of my all time favourite stories. i love the story within the story and how everything comes together in the wonderful ending. - Shyn Dec 2nd, 2005 |
a great great..story i say a sequel please......all the best take care - fa artemis Dec 1st, 2005 |
This is a great story . A must read. The best. READ IT NOW. Thanks C E GrAY,more stories please. (if its not too much to ask) - Anonymous Dec 1st, 2005 |
I can't stop reading that story all over again. Really hot stuff. Thanks alot. - Anonymous Dec 1st, 2005 |
Holy. Effing. Shit. That was INCREDIBLE!!! - Anonymous Nov 30th, 2005 |
i loved this story. very powerful and touching - Shyn Nov 30th, 2005 |
Another fantastic series by the lovely (I'm assuming) and talented (read and you'll agree) Vivian Darkbloom, one of the best writers in the fan fiction realm. I laughed, I didn't cry, I laughed some more, I had irresistable cravings for pork rinds and Budweiser long-necks. The White Trash Series is not to be missed. And definitely look up the rest of V. Darkbloom's writings, her Mel and Janice stories are beautiful, witty, poetic, sexy as hell, heartbreaking...far and away the best of all the M and J stories. - Count Back From Ten Nov 29th, 2005 |
i read the story and the story is great please finish the story please..... i need to know the ended please write soon i hope all the best take care.......... - fa artemis Nov 29th, 2005 |
Well imagine my surprise when I came across this!! An old PWP writing favorite and a recent favorite who's previous work makes my eyes water with laughter. To see them listed as Co-authors made my day! Keep up the great work Bards!! I hope to see more joint efforts in the near future. - Sarah J. Nov 29th, 2005 |
Truly wonderful story. Please continue!!!! - Anonymous Nov 27th, 2005 |
Yeah, what those other two said! New writer? Where has she been hiding? Wow. That was a surprise. Bravo! - AD Nov 26th, 2005 |
Good story with the right amount of 'funny' to it - I'll never look at green peppers the same way again! - Avid Nov 25th, 2005 |
Very good, interesting, different, and HOT. - Anonymous Nov 24th, 2005 |
I love this story, It is real cool to see Dev as herself and this undercover person who is so different from the real her. Holly is really an interesting charachter too. I like how they meet and its kind of neat to get to see Los Angles in this small window. - Rennie Nov 24th, 2005 |
This is such a wonderful romantic story. I really like all the charachters. I hope there is another one. - Rennie Nov 24th, 2005 |
Wow,...one of the best story i've ever red. I rarelly comment on stories, but I had to for this one. good job - Ely Nov 23rd, 2005 |
Ooooooooo, not what I expected at all! I liked! This little story will definitely grab your attention and then twist it around in another direction all together. Lots of little surprises! Great read! - Susan Nov 23rd, 2005 |
This is one of the GREATEST stories i have read..I cant wait for it to be published :) - bxverse666 Nov 23rd, 2005 |
I've come back to this story many times and it never fails to touch me deeply. a truly wonderful story - Shyn Nov 23rd, 2005 |
SIMPLY ELEGANT! Perfect in it's imagery. Bold AND subtle, just like the Japanese culture. A beautiful story of love, in a period torn by political violence and enormous cultural change. An unusual joining that was perfectly balanced. Light and dark. East and West. Yin and Yang. Beautiful. (Off to read the rest of her stuff!) - Evelyn Nov 22nd, 2005 |
A well crafted and beautiful story that's a feast for the eye to imagine and the mind to see. Where has this author been hiding? - Kaye Nov 22nd, 2005 |
I love it. Its very captivating and just has a good feeling to it. It's a story that you stay up all night to read and just cant stop reading. - Anonymous Nov 21st, 2005 |
Great story, I hope we have a sequel soon, thanks ¡ - Ailidh (Spain) Nov 21st, 2005 |
this story is great, the characters are alive, and the interaction between them hilarious! a very fun read! - ibh Nov 20th, 2005 |
Here's a truly intriguing dark tale that might seem to be just another PI tale at first glance. A.C. Henley has masterfully constructed a gritty tale whose center is the dark enigmatic Quin McKee, a PI who does not play by the rules and yet gets the job done. She has friends in high places and in the lowest depths and her heart is something else...fraught with a world of hurt and then some. As the story opens, in crossing paths with those she once called friends after a three years absence, she now meets detective Vivian Walsh, one tough cop that might change her ways and mend some fences. But can the tall blonde break through the barriers and really get through to KcKee? Read on as Book One unravels some of the mysteries... - Anastacia Nov 20th, 2005 |
Wonderful start so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. - Anonymous Nov 19th, 2005 |
Brilliant! Fantastic! Terrific! Engaging! Entertaining! Intriquing! Um I may run out of superlatives, but I would definitely recommend 'running out' to read this story! For starters, it is very well written with grace and style. It is a tale in the true tradition of story telling. Incredibly descriptive (umm, a little hit and miss with ancient geography, but hey.)you really feel drawn in to the world of Har. The characters of X & G are very nicely developed within the tale, while still be familiar from the show. Well done. Off to read the sequal now. - XenaVirgin Nov 18th, 2005 |
this is the best best story i ever read...... please a sequel please.......the great story ever.... ...all the best take care.... - fa artemis Nov 18th, 2005 |
the story is great .....the best story ever.....finished the story please..all the best take care' - fa artemis Nov 18th, 2005 |
Broken link going to part 5 prevents reading to the end.... :-( - Anonymous Nov 17th, 2005 Editor's Note: You can find parts 5-7 here. This story isn't completed past part 7 though. |
This was starting to be a wonderful story and then broken link....ugh!!! - Anonymous Nov 17th, 2005 Editor's Note: This story isn't finished yet. |
It has been too long since I read an uber that was this good, and I am shocked I missed it the first time around. The ending screams sequel... what happened? Will we see a follow up to this great story? I certainly hope so. - Kerry Nov 16th, 2005 |
Thanks Patricia and Xanja98 for the story, loved the multiple layers of the words, the archetypal imagery in both stories. Looking forward to the next part of the trilogy. - Anonymous Nov 15th, 2005 |
Loved every single word. - Danni Nov 14th, 2005 |
beautifully written story - Shyn Nov 13th, 2005 |
This story deserves five stars! I read it months ago and I still think about it. I don't think many have taken the time to read this great and wonderfully written tale. ...You're truly missing out if you haven't. Cheers to Linda Christ. - B Nov 13th, 2005 |
The religous and spiritual aspects of this story were a nice surprise. The pure and innocent love between Sariah and Emily was beautiful to read. Great story! - Anonymous Nov 13th, 2005 |
I just have one question. RJ where were you when this series was on the air? With writing like this it would still be on! Great story. I miss these characters and it was great to see them back. More please! - Karen Nov 12th, 2005 |
It says it is unfinished, but it is actually finished :) - Anonymous Nov 11th, 2005 Editor's Note: Corrected... |
This is a fun and interesting tale :) I liked it a lot :) - Anonymous Nov 11th, 2005 |
I really didn't expect such a wonderful love story! So powerful, sexy, and sweet. I wouldn't have minded being her sex-slave either! - teacher Nov 11th, 2005 |
Well, I like this story/journal as it has some interesting aspects delving into the writers character, how she grew up to some degree, how she especially relates to others and how she deals with her being gay. Location of story is kind of rustic but scenic. The circumstances are past and what you read is much like a back story. There are some funny lines and I like hearing how she deals with her life for the most part which is uncomfortable at times and even painful, though not unhappy. There was no email addy to give feedback to the author so hopefully that will be added to the next part. - KC Nov 10th, 2005 |
Beautiful and moving. As always. Thank you. [*] - AquariusG Nov 10th, 2005 |
I just came across this story and was glad I did. I was pleasantly surprised first by the clever mixture of comedy and real life situations. Next how well written this story is. And lastly that this story is about more mature women with children. Thank you Lady J well done and I look forward to your next installment. - Diane Nov 10th, 2005 |
Oh do I want a doctor like that...... - Anonymous Nov 9th, 2005 |
Wow, I am so glad that I found this jewel! This story is alt but also like the good old classic Xena. Great plot and wonderful writing. It has something for everyone. Amazons, slavers, gods, thieves just to mention a few. Truly a good read. Thank you very much bards. I hope to see more from the both of you! PLEASE DONT MISS THIS ONE! - R. C. P. Nov 9th, 2005 |
This is an amazing story. It's so rare to find a good vampire tale; zee has written this so well. Sequel please???? - Vee Nov 9th, 2005 |
The Clonefic trilogy,is a wonderful read,and if you like Xena fanfic, this is a must. - Michael Nov 9th, 2005 |
I really liked this story. Short and sweet :) - Shyn Nov 7th, 2005 |
lost link? - Anonymous Nov 7th, 2005 Editor's Note: Found Link... |
Oh wow. That was awesome and beautiful. I loved it - sarah Nov 6th, 2005 |
Truly brave - Anonymous Nov 6th, 2005 |
HI, Xanjaa and Patricia, Wow!!! What a great ending to the story! My emotions were on over load and my stomach was doing flips. I had to get up from reading the battle it was stressing me out. Nice job, usually I get lost reading them and have a hard time figuring out who is doing what to whom. Your description of what Tynet had to endure depressed me but then the human race can be pretty cruel to each other. I Liked the heart to heart talk that Ephiny and Pony had about Adara. Pony had to love Adara enough to let her be happy. That whole story line was beautifully written,very touching. I got kind of upset when I thought you killed Pony, nice one. I am glad everyone made it threw all right, I like happy endings. Thank you for a great story. I`m looking forward to reading the next parts. - Nancy G. Nov 6th, 2005 |
Desolation by MJB Can't wait for the outcome of this plot, do they or don't they? Please please MJB finish the story soon. - Keelo Nov 6th, 2005 |
This story is one of the best I have ever read, heartwarming, loving and real, everyone should read it, should be a film, play & book, We will all miss your work, rest now xx. - LuvTigger71 Nov 5th, 2005 |
LJ MAAS, I always loved your name. It stood out, as did your stories. My only regret is that I think I only 'fed' you once or twice for your great output of works. I'm in the process of re-reading all of your works in your memory. Thank you for giving us more than the series was willing to do. If there is ever a reincarnation of the series via whatever vehicle 'they' choose, I'm sure you'll have had something to do with it. I hope Rob Tapert et al did read your work along the way. Peace, sister. - Anonymous Nov 4th, 2005 |
This is a great story. I couldnt stop reading it. I loved the characters. I hope to read a sequel soon. - Anonymous Nov 3rd, 2005 |
You gave us so many hours of enjoyable reading. All your stories are the best! Thank you, thank you, thank you. You will be missed. - Fredrica Nov 2nd, 2005 |
the greatest conqueror series ever written. thank you LJ Maas for sharing with us your gift and imagination. - blazinangelwings Nov 2nd, 2005 |
I'm not sure many people remember this story. LJ took us on a roller coaster of emotions in all her works, especially in the Queen series. This is one of the best X/G stories. Thank you LJ! - Laura Nov 1st, 2005 |
LJ I hope you know how much your stories meant to all of us who read them .Thank you for them .We will all miss you . - Kim Nov 1st, 2005 |
Truely one of the best. Although I never met you I felt a connection through your brilliant work. You will be sadly missed. Sleep well. - Sai Nov 1st, 2005 |
The best story about The Conqueror! LJ Maas, yours stories became you unforgettable! Rest well. - Leth Cross Nov 1st, 2005 |
Wonderful series. Thank you for all of the great reading hours you have provided us with. May you rest in peace knowing that you have contributed so much to so many people. We will miss you. - Anonymous Oct 31st, 2005 |
Very wonderful story. A real gem worth finding. - Steff Oct 31st, 2005 |
This is one of my favorite storyes ever!! thank you LJ for soo many happy hours!! forever Rest in peace!! Godspeed - Cris Oct 31st, 2005 |
This story and all of LJ's stories are living classics and eternal. We honor your memory when we read them. - keeperofwords Oct 30th, 2005 |
I was hooked on this story. I didn't want to stop reading it. It is well written and the characters are really developed. I would love to see some more of them. This was a great story. - Erica Oct 29th, 2005 |
please finish this story...it is very very good...I love it. - barb Oct 28th, 2005 |
OH MY GODDESS!! I love these girls! laughed hysterically through half of the thing! breat job Larisa! Congrats! I think I almost pissed myself! - Anonymous Oct 27th, 2005 |
Wow, I loved this series. It was such an interesting series of stories all brought together but the love of Dakota and Jackie. Wonderful. - Toki Oct 27th, 2005 |
laughed like a hyena - Anonymous Oct 27th, 2005 |
Ambrosia has one the most vivid imaginations I've ever "seen". The bard's descriptive abilities are so clear, I can SEE Kori and Skylar driving the length of aisle 3, it still cracks me up just thinking about it! - dez Oct 27th, 2005 |
Do you miss XWP and all that great provacative dialogue betweeen X & G? Well, read this and see if Girls Just Want To Have Fun & A Day in the Life eps don't come to mind. The spooky fangs,a wildly imaginative Gabby, sheep to eat or count, but no Dracula, Xena's eye rolling, and fending off a shadowy wolf, & her rabbit skinning skills. The funny double entendre humor springs forth in this cleverly written, suggestive short tale capturing X & G at their best. You can tell this bard knew & loved these characters. This is an excellent trip back to the early funny & lighter sides of X & G. A hint of Halloween here, so treat yourself & enjoy this little bit of mind candy! - Casey Oct 27th, 2005 |
This story is worth finishing, please Sage finish the story. Please don't make me beg, you wouldn't like it when I beg ;-p As for the suggestion of emailing Sage for encouragement, I'm all for that. - Sai Oct 27th, 2005 |
I would like to say just how much I enjoyed this thoroughly wonderful piece of work. It achieves just the right balance between action, adventure and drama; but above all else it is one of the most beautifully romantic tales I have ever read. - Ang Oct 27th, 2005 |
beautifully done, on so many levels. keep writing, and please, think very seriously of a sequel. thank you for this gem. - feral Oct 26th, 2005 |
YAY!! **squeals of joy!!** these two are SOOOO cute, i mean honestly! with all that they go through, this saga has been truly wonderful...thank-you, Very Much....i've definitely learned some new word games....my partner's an amazon...and i am most definitely her pygmy!....thanx again! - Anonymous Oct 24th, 2005 |
What can I say about this story except,wow! This is one awesome story. I really loved it. I hope to read more on these characters soon. If you havent read this read it now! - Anonymous Oct 24th, 2005 |
I love this story too! I also have been waiting for the writer to finish. I say let's give Sage some encouragement. How about everyone email her on Oct 30th to let her know that we are still interested in her finishing this story. Maybe if Sage realise she still has fans out here she will get the spark back and complete the story. What say you...are you fans game? - Sue Oct 24th, 2005 |
Ive read all the way to Nurture and I am so hoping that SX Meagher will be coming out with the next one because these books are incredible, Ive been swept away by the plight of Ryan and Jamie and their love, i would recommend everyone who has ever experienced love to read this series. Congratulations SX Meagher on a great series of stories - Lissa Oct 22nd, 2005 |
This is the cutest story i've ever read, puts all those tv x-mas movies to shame! there's so much love in this story...everyone should read it...NOW!!!....thank-you for this one Debbie, I won't soon forget it... - Deanna... Oct 22nd, 2005 |
I am so in love with these characters!! The build up is killing me and I can't wait for the next chapter! - Ali Oct 22nd, 2005 |
sweet story...reminds me of my little italian gram....God bless her heart! she's always been feisty! - Deanna.... Oct 22nd, 2005 |
Wow, all I can say is...wow...incredible, absolutely incredible....such raw emotion...such great writing.....this is an amazing story.....by an amazingly talented author.....thank-you. - Deanna.... Oct 22nd, 2005 |
I love this story. You really have to read it ! - Anonymous Oct 22nd, 2005 |
I have just finished re-reading this fantastic story and it was just as good the second time around, but! it's still not finished. Does anybody out there know if this will ever get finished, I'm desperate to find out what happens mext, as I'm sure a few of you are too. Help us, pleeeaasse. - Sai Oct 21st, 2005 |
WELCOME BACK BUSINESS TRIP....this has got to be the funniest down to earth piece ever. I absolutely love this please please please update soon. - Lee Oct 20th, 2005 |
A breath of fresh air. - A Noni Mouse Oct 19th, 2005 |
I thouroughly enjoyed this humorous and moving story. I don't usually like Conqueror tales, but this one is a fantastic exception. Enginerd has a very engaging writing style. - Carol Lee Oct 19th, 2005 |
oh WOW what an incredible story! not only uproariously funny, but also very true and as the previous comment said (the reason why i read it actually, thanks Erica :) "relatable" and sizzlingly passionate. i couldn't put it down even after i finished it, so just started all over again, i missed the characters already. very, VERY well done, Vertigo! thank you :) - KatrinaššOct 18th, 2005 |
B. Soiree's stories are a pleasure to read. This story is progressing nicely and I look forward to more from this bard. - Femmester Oct 18th, 2005 |
I can only second the previous comments: Excellent story! Thanks for the great read! - Mindwalker78 Oct 18th, 2005 |
This story is great.The characters grab you and hold you making you feel what they feel.I hope to read more stories from this great bard. - yinyang Oct 17th, 2005 |
Thoroughly enjoyed this sequel, as well as the first story - Poetry In Motion. Thank you, 'Harley', for the two wonderful stories. Hopefully looking for a third in the series?!!? :) ***A hint to Anonymous - This story is finished and posted complete at the Academy of Bards site (authors/Harley)!!*** Dee! - Dee! Oct 17th, 2005 |
Wonderful story. A must read. - Anonymous Oct 16th, 2005 |
This was an amazing story. Wish there was more! (sequel please?) =) - Anrui Oct 15th, 2005 |
WOW! is right! This story is off to a fantastic start..tho the link to Chapter 8 is down. Chapters 9-24 worked. This is a "MUST READ"! - Anonymous Oct 15th, 2005 |
first... if you haven't read PANTER'S PRIDE, please do it NOW! YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED. this promises to be one of those series that you will return to again and again. PANTER'S PRIDE:HUNTED already has me on the edge of my seat, waiting for more. so please T.S. get those digits flying. i want more! great start to the second installment of this sreies. - Fredrica Oct 15th, 2005 |
This is poetry. Harley please finish the sequel. - Anonymous Oct 15th, 2005 |
I really enjoyed both this and A New Beginning, It seemed to take the characters to the present and give you a good idea of how they developed. I love Jo it was great to see her so successful in every way. - Toki Oct 14th, 2005 |
After reading Ms. Black's new novel "In TOO Deep", I wanted more! This is an adorable story with incredible characters. Great job! - HK Oct 13th, 2005 |
Woohoo! Just love the girls and can't wait for Vic and ummmh ...??? to get together (come on, you know you want to! LOL). - Mic Oct 13th, 2005 |
Well, this is definitely a dangerous story... I couldn't stop once I started. I read right through the night to finish it...leaving me totally bleary-eyed but way happy. Absolutely brilliant! - Mic Oct 13th, 2005 |
Fantastic writing!!! Can't wait for more. - Mic Oct 13th, 2005 |
This story is an intimate look into the love X&G have for one another. It’s not the usual short courting straight into sheet burn, they talk about the topics left untouched and about where they want to be. This is a MUST READ if you like romantic tales. The sequel is Candle in the Distance on The Academy Of Bards but it is unfinished. Hopefully the author will complete it. The sequel is at http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/k/kerryhurley_candle1.html - Draco Oct 13th, 2005 |
I love your writing style. Can't wait for more. - Anonymous Oct 13th, 2005 |
I love this story. The conflicts are realistically confusing as they would be in life when someone comes to the realization that they can no longer live the life chosen for them. I also love the interplay of loving friendships vs friends loving each other. - Jasmine Oct 13th, 2005 |
Fantastic. - Anne Oct 13th, 2005 |
loved it! incredibly cute - Shyn Oct 12th, 2005 |
"The requested URL http:// was not found on this server." Broken Link?? - Anonymous Oct 10th, 2005 Editor's Note: Fixed link. |
What an AWESOME story! You really have to read it yourself to appreciate it! the quality of writing is superb, the storyline well thought out and lots of steamy scenes. YUM! - Anonymous Oct 10th, 2005 |
This is a really good story. I found it intertaining and interesting. A good read. - Meg Oct 9th, 2005 |
AWESOME - Anonymous Oct 9th, 2005 |
This story has it all: war, clashing religions, clashing cultures, first love, sex, adventure, all wrapped up in one package. If you enjoy fantasy, you'll enjoy this. - Anon Oct 9th, 2005 |
I totally agree with Krysta. I vote for a sequel, too! Thanks for the wonderful story. - Terri Oct 9th, 2005 |
Oh my gosh, what a great strory. I couldn't stop reading it. The characters are so well written and relatable (is that a word). there were parts of this story that I had to stop reading for a few minutes so I could stop laughing. THis is the first story I've read by Vertigo and now I can't wait to read more. I highly recommend this story and would absolutely love to read more. Run don't walk to this story.:):):) - Erica Oct 8th, 2005 |
WOW!... - katrinaššOct 8th, 2005 |
Wrong link. The correct one is http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/m/mavis_angelsheart.html - Inge Oct 8th, 2005 Editor's Note: Corrected and thanks! |
Just an amazing story! Really, if you're any bit of a fantasy fan...READ THIS!!! - Anonymous Oct 7th, 2005 |
This is a great read. If you'd like to get past part two in this link....go up to the address bar and click on where it says lasttrain2.htm . Change the "2" to a "3" and the "htm" to "html" . Happy reading! - Anonymous Oct 7th, 2005 |
This is a wonderful story! The writing itself is fantastic and the story really does capture the feel of a time long gone. - Anonymous Oct 7th, 2005 |
Excellent story. I highly recommend it. - T. Oct 6th, 2005 |
Fantastic story Hurry and finish it cause i want to know Who ends up with who!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a great story teller keep it up! - Andie Oct 6th, 2005 |
I made my partner mad this weekend because I started Fate on Friday night and didn't want to do anything else until I had finished it. When she was getting on me for reading instead of going out I had her read the first chapter. She was sucked in the same way I was. We spent a very romantic Saturday night snuggled together with our lap top reading Fate. DE Salsbury nice job from both of us. - Sharon & Lynn Oct 6th, 2005 |
OH MY GOD!!!!! I loved this story. The characters in it are great . I laughed so hard at some parts I cried. And to I would love to read more of these characters. Cayden and Brooke are HOT. I loved the others too, Wade,Jo and everyone. I hope for a sequel please. - Anonymous Oct 5th, 2005 |
This is a really cool idea. I never thought of Lara Croft like this. Its more fun then the movies because she's human and I really like Sarah as her companion. - Tai Oct 5th, 2005 |
Utterley brilliant, read it you won't be disappointed. - LuvTigger71 Oct 5th, 2005 |
Excellent read!! I hope Gabrielle figures out who she is....And that Xena convinces her, who she is...Great plot!!! Hope the writer finishes the story....PLEASE!!! - Kel Oct 4th, 2005 |
It still amazes me just how good a writer you are. You have this great ability to simply bring scenes to life-and you sure did that in "Crossroads"-wonderful story. - Sandra Pascoe Oct 4th, 2005 |
Wonderfully told story. The combination of time travel and the Civil War to me is irresistible, more so when it is so well written. Thanks, Stone. - Summer Sun Oct 4th, 2005 |
Is it just me or did I miss something? Didn't seem as though this story was complete. - Anonymous Oct 3rd, 2005 |
Great story. When I started reading this I couldnt stop till I finished.You have to read this story I guarantee youll love it and the characters as much as I DID. - yinyang Oct 2nd, 2005 |
Great story! One of the best. But where is part three? - Piper Oct 2nd, 2005 |
Melancholic, but wonderfully sweet as well. Just like the last days of summer. A beautiful and extraordinary setting, a story nicely paced, and characters well drawn - well worth a look or two. - annika Sep 30th, 2005 |
This is an excellent story... and very sweet. Thank you, Penelope, for a really good read. - Summer Sun Sep 30th, 2005 |
A wonderful, wonderful story. I've read it several times, and i cant believe it hasnt been commented on before. Its a wonderful Xena and Gabrielle romance. The relationship between them is VERY realistic, very beautiful and deep. If youre looking for a lifelike, warm and classic romance story - READ THIS!!! - Anonymous Sep 30th, 2005 |
More please. - Anonymous Sep 30th, 2005 |
Spellbinding. - Tara Sep 30th, 2005 |
I played hookey from work to finish this story. It was so worth it. - Lori Sep 30th, 2005 |
the best story ever .........all the best take care.... - fa artemis Sep 30th, 2005 |
This was really good. Thanks for the read! - Anonymous Sep 27th, 2005 |
I loved being warped to 1861 and reading the contrast in the'battle of wits'. Admired Danielle's spunk and skill and the sophistication and sexiness of Jess. - Anonymous Sep 27th, 2005 |
I so enjoy the feel of a character like Eleanor Powers. So glad to see this sequel. Powers makes the other two main characters feel like a couple pieces of milk-toast. Hope you continue, and thanks for all your work. The Seduction of Carol blew me away. - Anonymous Sep 27th, 2005 |
Excellent story. For those who enjoy a romance with a twist, I highly recommend this story. Unbelievable, but fun. One of the best stories I've read this past year. - annonymous, 9/26/05 Sep 26th, 2005 |
You're KILLING me. - JAZZY Sep 25th, 2005 |
Really enjoying this story. Hope there is an update soon. - Anonymous Sep 25th, 2005 |
AWESOME - Anonymous Sep 24th, 2005 |
omg! no idea wot 2 say,part from "f****n hell!" and "damn!" if only life was like that. thaank u so much 4 that memory shadylady,uve opened my eyes. :-) keep writing ,ure gr8,nd hav best imagination ever. - lousie Sep 24th, 2005 |
Loved it! Absolutely loved it! I haven't read "über" or original stories for a while, but this one defintely kept me hooked! - Fic Addict Sep 23rd, 2005 |
I’m sure these two authors were dangerous enough before they teamed up, so a word of advice, do not read the story at work! |
Excellent story. Don't pass this up! - Anonymous Sep 22nd, 2005 |
More please. Loving this one. - Marie Sep 21st, 2005 |
Wondeful. Amazing. Breathtaking. If you haven't read this story stop right now and read it. - Anonymous Sep 21st, 2005 |
Enjoying this read, and it says it's 'finished'....but seems not so? - Anonymous Sep 20th, 2005 Editor's Note: The story isn't finished...it was mislabeled. Editor's Note Update 9/22/05: The Story is now finished... |
oh thats just adorable!! naughty warrior ;) - Shyn Sep 19th, 2005 |
Now I don't know which take on this storyline I like better or would like to see more story(ies) This story is well written grammer and punctation is well done as well. I think it would be great to see more with these current pairings. I would recommend the to others to read. But I would kind of like to see you write exactly what happened in the SGC that day both on and off planet, and the trip to the Nox planet and that interaction as well. Maybe a flashback in the future story. I hope your muse is kind and we see more of your work in this universe. - wmnwholves Sep 19th, 2005 |
The story totally blew me away. The take on the storyline was absolutely amazing. The story grabbed my attention and kept it to the very end. I would love to see another story in this timeline about just even everyday life for this pair and their friends. Well written and if no one has read this pairing it would still be easy to follow and to keep up with. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS STORY TO ALL TO READ. It is worth your time to read. - wmnwholves Sep 19th, 2005 |
this is just an awesome, highly original vampire series with a good mix of action, character development, romance, sex (which has not been drawn out, but still steamy), and evolving plot. surprisingly, the first two parts of this series is not listed on this site (Tasting Desire and Blood Vengeance), although they are on AoB site. (i highly recommend reading parts 1 and 2 before hitting balances). i'm not much into vampires, this was one of those few ubers that combined all the good elements plus great grammar, decriptions, and knowledge of sentence structure to keep me reading into dawn. - kate - Anonymous Sep 19th, 2005 Editor's Note: Ask and ye shall receive... Tasting Desire and Blood Vengeance have been added. |
This was an interesting story - very unique! Had some really great moments, especially if you like time travel stories. Never expected the twist at the ending - good one! - AustinXenaChick Sep 18th, 2005 |
Fabulous trilogy! Excellent, excellent, excellent - Think I'll read it again right now |
this story was great. It is like the Energizer bunny. It keeps going and going and going. And when it ends you want it to keep going and going and going. I certainly would enjoy more of this story. The characters were very strongly developed and multi-dimensional. I give this story 10 thumbs up. - Erica Sep 17th, 2005 |
very cute and funny story - Shyn Sep 17th, 2005 |
I just finished reading Second Generation for the third time. I enjoy the story as much, if not more, with each reading. Is there any sequel in the works? I hope so, I'd love to know what happens to all the characters! - Ellen Sep 16th, 2005 |
Here we are deep into 2005, and I still come upon such excellent writing. I've read nearly all of this author's work, a couple more to go. They all leave me thinking..great entertainment. - Anonymous Sep 16th, 2005 |
great read. wonderful story that captured me from begining to end - Shyn Sep 16th, 2005 |
This is a broken link. need to be fixed - Krysta Sep 15th, 2005 Editor's Note: Done. |
Amazing story. Loved every page. - Jeri Sep 15th, 2005 |
This has to be one of the most fantastically well written story I have been afforded the opportunity to read in quite some time. I have found it to be riveting..compelling....and definitely sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapters. - Christi Sep 15th, 2005 |
This was just so cute. I loved it. Thanks. - Anonymous Sep 14th, 2005 |
I am extremely proud to announce the publication of a collection of my short stories by Blue Feather Books. It's entitled "Pearl Had to Die" and features that story and a host of others, including the Unlimited Sexual Favors stories, written with MJ. Also in the collection is the Swollen Bud Award winner, "Sin City Confidential." The books will be available first at BardCon in Orlando in October, so be sure to stop by and chat with me there. If you can't make it, check out bluefeatherbooks.com
By The Gods I can't believe I will not be able to read the last chapter. I can't get pass chapter 3 in the Chalice because the link is broke. Does anyone know where I can find Part 4 of the series completed. What an amazing story. - Veronica Sep 13th, 2005 Editor's Note: You can find all four parts here. |
An excellent place to stay and read stories by KTBard! And the owners are fabulous, if I do say so myself! |
This was an excellent short story. I'm not usually into vampire tales but this one was too good. Obsession is a vampire tale but it also happens to be an unconventional love story. I saw there was a sequel called Obsession Returned and I can't wait to read it. In fact, I'm going to do that now. - Tara Sep 13th, 2005 |
If you haven't already ready "Second Chances"....please do. It's a wonderful story set in the Emergency Department of a Medical Center. It's a story filled with a building friendship, emotions, and suspense. This is the 3rd or 4th time I've read the book (424 pages) and it's so well written that each time I couldn't put it down until I completed it. This is a MUST!! - Jeanne Sep 12th, 2005 |
This is a wonderful story. Erin's stories just keep getting better and better. This one has vivid, unforgettable characters and you will never guess the ending. A must read. - squrl Sep 11th, 2005 |
Cephalgia writes a humerous, heartwarming and thought provoking piece in this one. Run, do not walk, do not pass go, do not collect $200.00 to read this story. What are you still doing here? You're supposed to be reading...Go! - Victoria (Littlespit) Sep 10th, 2005 |
This made you feel just what the warrior and bard truley felt for one another. Isn"t true love grand? It was hard to read but well worth it. I would recommend you read it. - Liz Sep 10th, 2005 |
KG MacGregor knows how to weave a story. WOW! This one is definetly a MUST READ. The characters were really great together. Read this story now!! - yin yang Sep 10th, 2005 |
beautiful, beautiful story - Shyn Sep 10th, 2005 |
This was a fun one! I loved it. Jo as a pirate was really cool! - Tia Sep 8th, 2005 |
I was looking for something new to read when I came across 'Fate' by DE Salsbury. I read the entire story in one sitting. I can honestly say that this story is one of the most well written pieces I have read on the net so far. The plot was well thought out with enough twist and turns to keep my intrest through out. All the players in this drama are credible. On the whole I give 'Fate' two thumbs way way up. - Tina Sep 8th, 2005 |
The story is great. The charectors are so real I feel like I actually know them all. I'm also enjoying the plot twists. Write faster. ;) - Linda Sep 8th, 2005 |
Stop what you're doing and read this story immediately! It is a terrific read. I liked it a lot. - Peg Sep 7th, 2005 |
This is a wonderful story. It is a bit different from the author's other work but is very nicely done. It has humor, heartbreak and a special guest star, God. And she is a hoot. - jh Sep 7th, 2005 |
That was beautiful! There has got to be a sequel. Someone tell me there will be one. It screams sequel. - Amy Sep 6th, 2005 |
This was one of the compelling stories I have ever read. Obviously you placed your heart on paper. Thank you for being brave enough to post this. I am glad my friend recommended this to me, it or you helped me move on. Thank you. - Joan Sep 6th, 2005 |
Excellent read. Perfect for when you've only got the time for a short (ish) one. - Sai Sep 6th, 2005 |
Lady J, what a great story. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. Amazing plot. Can't wait for part eight. - Jenny Sep 6th, 2005 |
I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana Sep 5th, 2005 |
This is one of very few fanfic stories that I come back to again and again. The concept is original which sets it apart from the beginning. I normally prefer contemporary stories but as this was so well constructed and written I didn't have time to think about the setting. I like a good story and I like a good PWP but this combination (that the author names SWP) is great, with the sex scenes enhancing and complimenting the story while also being really hot at the same time! I highly recommend this story and commend the author for an engaging and sexy interpretation of 'marriage' traditions of the past! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your work! - Leah Sep 4th, 2005 |
This is so sweet, I can only wish reality occured like this. - kiwi Sep 4th, 2005 |
hey,loved all of ure storys ssoo much. but please can u finish this last 1,im goin insane wondering what happened. anyway your great,keep writing. xxxxxx - louise Sep 4th, 2005 |
I just wanted to add my recommendation of this story. It grabbed my attention and kept it to the very end. I do agree that I would love to read a sequel to this story it is that good. I would buy this one as well. It is definitely one that I plan to read again. Brava!!!! - wmnwholves Sep 3rd, 2005 |
This story is the best in the series....before you sit down to read this you might want to get a box of tissues, because it is a hell of a rollercoaster ride, I have to say I cried like a baby through most of this story, but Alex really brought the characters alive.....P.S DONT miss this work of Art :) - bxverse666 Sep 1st, 2005 |
Man I'm speechless all I can say without giving out spoilers is that this story is A MUST READ!!! Anybody who doesn't is crazy not too. - Krysta Sep 1st, 2005 |
great story! very sweet :) - Katrina Aug 31st, 2005 |
This is an amazing story. Sensual and spiritual. Lush and cool. It's been around a while, so if you haven't read it, you should. Great characterizations of Lao Ma and Borias, never mind Xena and Gabrielle. Just go read it! - Carmen Aug 31st, 2005 |
Beautiful...just beautiful - KTBard Aug 31st, 2005 |
What an unexpectedly wonderful story! It was touching, charming, funny, and exciting. Highly recommended, even if you are not a Voyager fan. Great sci-fi story. - Janie Aug 31st, 2005 |
That was truly an amazing story. I love the end! - Anonymous Aug 31st, 2005 |
Uh... Isn't this the EIGHT story in the series or have I missed something? Other than that, another great installment in the series. Any chance for more? - Wolvie-dk Aug 31st, 2005 |
I don't want it to be the end, plz plz dont let it end. It's a great story. Hope you continue!!! - Krysta Aug 31st, 2005 |
This is one rock solid story, one of the best in the xenaverse. Also check out BL's X&G stories, they are also very well done. - Sally Aug 31st, 2005 |
One of the best Mel and Janice stories on the net. Totally worth the time to read it. Enjoy! - Peg Aug 29th, 2005 |
One of the best authors out there on the web. I recommend all of her stuff, but The Underworld Chronicles trilogy, which begins with this story, is my favorite. It has action, romance, humor and the supernatural. What more could you want?! - Peg Aug 29th, 2005 |
This is a really great story. The author outdone herself. Great characters draws out this well told story. I think I found a new favorite author among the others. - xlvr Aug 29th, 2005 |
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