Really cute story. Garanteed to make you smile. - Georgia - Apr-09-2008   

Community Service is more than cute alright :) - easteden - Aug-29-2009   

Awww this was so cute. Loved that it was a quick happy read. - Rae - Mar-06-2010   

Very well written story as always. Sweet. It made me smile and wish that it was longer. I'd like to see where their relationship was going. - Lyn B - Feb-02-2011   

As always very well written story. Thank you! - Anonymous - Aug-24-2011   

sweet story.. nice read.. - xtra dog - Mar-17-2012   

I have to admit, I didn't finish reading this, yet. I got through the first few paragraphs and couldn't get past the nagging feeling I'd read something eerily similar to this and was ready to contact the author to let her know someone stole her work. But... Turns out I oopsed. I was right about reading a similar story. It's called Playing with Fuego and is written by none other than K G Macgregor. I guess she turned this short into a full novel. Go check it out! :) - Oops? - Aug-07-2014   

Great story! Thank you. - Anonymous - Jun-25-2008   

I read this fic for the first time about three years ago. It has an interesting plot and it was joy to read again. - Slam - Jul-01-2010   

Loved this story. Really recommended it to stargaze fans. - Nico - Jun-19-2013   

I copied this brief summary from lunacyreviews.com. This is for readers who wanna know what the sequel is about. I hope u all enjoy reading this story as much as I have.

"Agent Tony Viglioni and her partner doctor Megan Donnovan are back in this suspenseful sequel to C. Paradee's debut story THE AGENT. Set a couple of months after they first teamed to find a serial killer, this second tale finds the two settling into their new lives together, dealing with family and tying a few loose ends from Tony's past, only there are some that won't appreciate the Agent's sudden scrutiny of those loose ends and to keep her from possibly ruining their plans they are more than willing to ensure Tony's retirement is of a much more...permanent nature." - Anonymous - May-28-2008   

Just finished this and the first story The Agent. What a great read. - rleef - Sep-17-2009   

Brilliant. A good sequel - Silver - Jul-10-2010   

That was a great story. Just the right amount of angst and suspence to keep you interested without making the tale uncomfortable to sit and read it.I wouldn't mind seeing another sequel to this story. - uber goober - Mar-22-2011   

good sequel.. doesn't lack in the romance department though i did find it a bit less enthralling in the suspense department.. all motives for the action scenes were laid down from the beginning.. still a real nice read though.. - xtra dog - Oct-23-2011   

Decent follow-up to The Agent. The plot is pretty straightforward but the growing romance between Megan and Tony is sweet. Things felt rushed in the end on the family level for Megan. Worth the read, especially if you're in the mood for a bit of crime drama. - Stacia - Jun-24-2013   

Good follow up to the agent - SD - Jun-15-2015   

A reaffirmation of life between the two women. Hot pwp. - Lyn B - Apr-07-2011   

Pwp, but i wanted it to be the start of something too. Sequel? - Silver - Jul-12-2011   

near miss?? nope, it wasn't a miss at all.. dead on, i would say.. - xtra dog - Mar-21-2012   

When you click on the author's name, it brings up an error thing that says "The location you're looking for has either moved, or does not exist.
The Athenaeum's Index page is now located here: http://xenafiction.net/index2.html "

As for the story - wonderful! [Corrected 4-25-2009] - Anonymous - Apr-24-2009   


- Anonymous - Aug-22-2009   

I loved it. One of the best Conqueror stories ever written. - Adilp - Apr-24-2009   

I have read a lot of fanfic. Thousands of stories. This was one of the first I ever read and after reading it the first time I wanted to grow up to write like Gin. Almost a decade later it is still firmly in my all time top ten. It is a conqueror without slave or mistresses, is still sexy and sweet, that loves the characters and yet still makes them new and reads as smoothly as a perfect dream. - Kamouraskan - Apr-24-2009   

I think this is finished. - Lysia - Apr-24-2009   

This series is right up there with the best, if not 'the' best. Gabrielle is different than we see her in most stories. And the approach to Xena is nothing more than a masterpiece. In one word? Exelent. - H.W. - Apr-26-2009   

This is the first part of a wonderful triology, not to be missed. - mjf - Apr-26-2009   

This series was an awesome read. I've never read a Conqueror series like this one. Kudos to Gin. - Nikko - Jul-13-2009   

great trilogy. really enjoyed the different twist on xena's personality. also enjoyed gabrielle being a mature, wise, compassionate Queen. Hope there is more to follow. - Anonymous - Nov-14-2009   

I love this trilogy. This was the first set of long stories I read so many years ago, and I still re-read it again and again. - Purplehawke - Apr-01-2011   

a very different take on the conqueror genre.. it is kind of sweet.. - xtra dog - Mar-14-2012   

6YLh8F Wow, great blog post.Really thank you! Fantastic. - http://crork.com/ - Jun-18-2012   

Very good,well written story. It was so good I had a hard time putting it down when I had to. I definitely recommend reading this tale. - ubergoober - Apr-08-2014   

WOW... just WOW!!! Is there a secual to this? I can't wait. - Claudia - May-08-2009   

Amazing,simply amazing,amazing and amazing. Sequel, Oh Yes.... - xenamrie - May-08-2009   

Oh. Just fine. WOW! Amazingly, touchingly and very sincerely. Thanx! - patronus - May-10-2009   

Absolutely love it! I cried, I laughed. What a wonderful love story, Jada and Carrie are perfect for each other. I would love to read more about how their relationship continues to develop along with how Jadyn grows up. Great job! - Chess - Sep-11-2009   

Wow a must read you want be disappointed would love to read more from this writer - Anonymous - Nov-10-2010   

i hope you wirte another part to this story. it was really good but i want to see if they do more like have more kids.

really great story on true love - ebby - Jan-24-2011   

A tender and sensitive story. I really loved it! - Ricky - Apr-30-2012   

Beautiful loving story!! Couldn't stop laughing and crying at the same time. - Static - May-31-2012   

Awesome. You can never go wrong reading Syro's stories. - sandy - Jun-19-2012   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Feb-01-2013   

with some fleshing out, the author could turn this into a novel.. - xtra dog - Feb-02-2013   

Well done this is another lovely story just again way to short :( x - SD - Oct-26-2015   

Short and sweet, perfect for a lazy saturday morning ñ_ñ (Keep em coming!) - Claudia - May-09-2009   

I just reread this story, before reading "I Wish You Loved Me Again", and once again I enjoyed the original and really love the next installment. - Maddy - Feb-19-2010   

Would love to read more please please please - Anonymous - Nov-11-2010   

One word..... AWESOME and HOT!! Oh yeah.. so they are two words but who can blame me - Sandy - Dec-21-2011   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Feb-02-2013   

Nice read just to short Xx - SD - Oct-26-2015   

Nice read just to short Xx - SD - Oct-26-2015   

Wow, another great story. I enjoyed the story and the characters were great. Totally recommend. I loved it!!!! - Tracey - Aug-04-2009   

Incredible story so full of true love and compassion; furthermore, the struggles to find a true path to their own misconceptions and negative perceptions are truly remarkable. I enjoy this reading and find it, amazing - xenamary - Aug-07-2009   

Zollicoffer just does a great job with all her stories and this is another very good one! - Anonymous - Aug-23-2009   

Fantastic story and beautiful ending. - Silver - May-02-2011   

bit of a strange one, this story.. a mixture of romance, suspense and spritualism.. well written with a beautiful ending.. - xtra dog - Nov-09-2011   

What a wonderful, loving story full of second chances and forgiveness. Definitely warms the heart. - Stacia - Dec-31-2012   

Nice story xx - SD - Oct-06-2015   

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Slow development that shows how much effort and detail you put in to it. - xivrenewok - Feb-24-2011   

Enjoying the story so far. I hope your next update uses the Lair of the Shadow Broker plot! Shepard and Liara 4ever! - MEfreak - Apr-06-2011   

Excellent story. I love the depth of character development and pacing of the story, and how well this story is interwoven with the action from the game. - Anonymous - Jun-05-2011   

Great story!


- Anonymous - Sep-27-2011   

A Dark story about a secret that is a surprising revisiting of the Jo&Blair's genesys. About A damned Jo through hell and love lost. Angstlicious with hope - Ash - Jul-28-2015   

Fast paced and well thought out plot.. very nice read! - Ricky - Oct-24-2012   

Good, solid story that was a pleasure to read. The plot is interesting and strangely believable in today's world where professional integrity matters. - Stacia - Apr-02-2013   

Wow, what a unique ghost story with a happy ending. A true delight to read. - Stacia - Nov-09-2012   

Great story. Not your typical ghost story. It actually made me feel kind of sad, and I don't do sad. So kudos!! - Pickles - Dec-07-2012   

Good story. - Anonymous - Mar-22-2013   

Cute! Makes me think of some of the inappropriate things I wanted as a child. - Stacia - Dec-31-2012   

funny and adorable.. kids have the best imagination.. they just look at the world differently and often in a better way than adults do.. - xtra dog - Jan-21-2013   

OMG is that ever cute! And funny. Read it - youmwill get a great chuckle - Georgia - Sep-10-2013   

Wow!!Simply one of the most beautiful love story I've ever read. Anybody a believer in true love & soulmates, this is the story for u. The characters are so wondeferfully written, u can't help but root for them to get together. The author did such an incredible job blending a classic love story with a supernatural twist. Those that enjoyed Stein Willard's "Guardian" series, u will definitely love Warrior Mine. Cas, when can we expect a sequel, lols?? :) - Tiffany - Feb-08-2011   

Simply amazing! I was captivated from the beginning and couldn't put the story down until I absolutely had to. A wonderful must read for every one! I look forward to reading more from this author! - Anonymous - Feb-14-2011   

Very good story. Highly recommended - especially if you like the "vampire" methology. - Anonymous - Feb-16-2011   

Loved it, loved it, loved it. I admit to being a vamp tramp and will read just about anything to do with vamps, lycan or immortals. "Warrior Mine" will be properly placed amongst the best I've read and I look forward to the SEQUEL. Did I say I loved it?! - Anonymous - Feb-22-2011   

Loved it! Sequel please! - ChakramGirl - Mar-10-2011   

Interesting plot and characters. Well written. There is just a tiny little disturbing thing at the end... I can't see Lestat bowing to Dracula no matter what. But nevertheless I am really eager to read the sequel. - Condorcet - May-05-2011   

Such a good story! I simply loved it! It was rich of all the things that transforms a story into a really good one! - luna - May-21-2011   

I liked this story it was interesting and fairly well written and I would recommend reading it. - uber goober - May-31-2011   

LOVED the story. Its great to see new ubers. Can't wait to read the sequel!!! - Czarina - Sep-28-2011   

My first ever vampire fic and it was brilliant. Truly hope there will be a sequel. - Silver - Sep-30-2011   

For any fiend of Greek Mythology and Vampyres thys is a must read!! For those who don't normally delve into thys type of story THYS IS A MUST READ!! I promise it will make you a Lover of those Genre's!! - Tee* - Nov-25-2011   

This is one of my favorite conqueror stories, by two of my favorite bards... This story has it all, Intrigue, Love, Battles, Betrayal and even a happy ending... enjoy... I sure did. - Patricia - Dec 13th, 2003   

One of the best Conqueror stories out there! Powerful and touching ... and wonderfully written, as might be expected from these bards! A must read! - roxper - Dec 6th, 2005   

A fantastic conqueror story from two great authors. No one should miss this. - Anonymous - Apr-08-2007   

This is truely a wonderful Conqueror story, from T.Novan and Advocate to miss this would be such a pitty so ppl. read this story if ya searching for a good Conqueror story. These two bards are amazing in their skill to weave a good story. - Callisto - Feb-11-2008   

Awesome story! Advocate and T. Novan weave an excellent mystery! - Xenangabfan - Feb-18-2008   

Broke link. Quite a few that go to Bard's Corner are broke. [It's working as of 6-3-2009] - Lysia - May-30-2009   

This is one of my all time favorite Conqueror stories. I love the fact that Gabrielle is a strong, take no crap kinda girl in this one. It's a really wonderful read...AJ - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009   

What a fantastic story. Advocate and T.Novan are definitely world class tale spinners. This one has it all Adventure, mystery, suspence and romance.Do yourself a big favor and read this one you'll love it. - uber goober - Nov-15-2009   

Loved this story. I would highly recommend this story to anyone. Awesome story - tmackin - Mar-11-2010   

Very nice. Read it - you'll love it. I have enjoyed everything these two very talented authors have written. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Apr-17-2010   

very nice... - bluebutterfly - Aug-07-2010   

I love this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Nov-23-2010   

really loved the humour in this story.. and gabrielle's little mean streak.. well written with recognizable characters from the show.. well, maybe with the exception of gabrielle's innocense lost.. not the first time i read the story, but i had no regrets reading it again.. says a lot about the level of writing.. - xtra dog - Oct-17-2011   

Xena and Gabrielle with a difference, what a wonderfuk read. i highly rcommend it - JayGee - Jan-29-2012   

This is the best conqueror story I have ever read. I actually saved the link and read it 3 times in two years. I strongly recommend it to anyone! - Elena - Jun-16-2016   

After one year I still think it's the best Conqueror story out there - Elena - Sep-05-2017   

I feel like a woman who has been crawling under a blazing sun across hot sand, lips cracked and parched - mind numb with thirst. I can see something in the distance, but what is it? Is it real? No, it can't be! I crawl closer reaching out with blistered fingers. It is. It is.It's a honest-to-goddess, full-blown, classic Xena and Gabrielle story, with Amazons and Ephiny and Autolycus ... Xena is Xena, Gabrielle is Gabrielle - they look, talk and banter like they should - they even smell like they should! By the gods, I think I even even get a whiff of a first time story somewhere in there under all the muck!I fall back onto the hot sand and roll over, staring at the blue of the sky, spent but relieved. And then my eyes widen in horror.Yikes! They evoked the challenge! I better get my lazy butt off this hot sand and get to work!Djwp(Helluva start! Beautifully written, great plot! If anyone threw down the gauntlet, I'm sure glad it was you two. I raise my cup to JLynn and Brigit M. Morgan - two of the best who are keeping Xena and Gabrielle classic alive!) - Djwp - Feb 4th, 2005   

Loving it large! It's yonks since I read a classic and this one has left me wanting more. Xena and Gabrielle are bang on and I realised how much I missed the 'real' them, if you get my drift. Don't get me wrong I love Uber, but you can't beat the real thing for a mega nostalgic trip.As soon as I saw who the authors were I was in there like a shot. I have loved both JLynn and Brigit M Morgan's other stories and I'm eagerly awaiting the conclusion to Brigit's outstanding Apocalypse/Inferno series, but this is filling the gap nicely. Bring on the classic revival. - Sai - Feb 14th, 2005   

It's such a relief to find a classic story these days -- especially one that's so well-written and such a pleasure to read. This is the dynamic duo we all remember and long for. Great plot, great energy, wonderful chemistry between the WP and Bard. Can't wait for more! I highly recommend this and all stories by JLynn and Brigit Morgan. They are among the best of the Xenaverse! - anonymous - Mar 1st, 2005   

You can't go wrong with these two authors. An absolutely captivating story and an amazing cast of characters. The development and conflict of emotions are intensely and vividly portrayed. Somehow I couldn't help but feel a little melancholy towards the end... - aurelius - Apr 2nd, 2005   

My compliments to the authors of this terrific story. Very imaginative plot, natural dialog, consistent characterizations... I could easily imagine this tale as an episode in Season Two. I hope Djwp's challenge to revive classic X&G fiction results in other works of such quality. And I hope that JLynn and Brigit M. Morgan will favor us with another tale. - LDP - Apr 15th, 2005   

Wow, I am so glad that I found this jewel! This story is alt but also like the good old classic Xena. Great plot and wonderful writing. It has something for everyone. Amazons, slavers, gods, thieves just to mention a few. Truly a good read. Thank you very much bards. I hope to see more from the both of you! PLEASE DONT MISS THIS ONE! - R. C. P. - Nov 9th, 2005   

Phenomenal! I laughed so hard at some points, I thought I was going to cry, and it kept me glued to the screen. Wonderful, wonderful story! - -Aerows- - Jun-04-2006   

Classic -- in an alt way. Wonderful read. It's got humor, drama, suspense, and, dare I say, a remarkable number of odors for a text-based work. Quite fun! - Anonymous - Dec-31-2006   

Sheer brilliance! This is one of those rare treats where you read as slowly as possible to savour every word, and make sure you don't miss a thing.
I absolutely loved this, to the point where I am now going through my Xena DVDs again with a renewed passion. If you missed this before, read it now! You will NOT be disappointed! - Kez - Oct-12-2008   

Two awesome writers combine to make double-awesome! - omkhalil - Jan-04-2010   

Great story with good humor and characterizations! - Anonymous - May-30-2010   

This is the kind of story you want to hunker down and just let it envelope you like when you either pick up, or call out or go out to have one of your most favorite foods that you have a hankering for and you just can't wait to sink your teeth into it knowing how orally orgasmic it's going to be when you place it in your mouth and start experiencing the many delectable delights of its delicious flavors - and you feel like you've just died and gone to heaven - this is a Xena story equivalence and it will satisfy every part of your taste buds. This story is delicious. There's drama, there's romance, there's adventure, there's mystery, there's angst (I love angst) and there's wonderful humor and repartee. But what do you expect from an author like J who writes these epic stories like STORMS OF WAR along with Brigit who does these tomes like the most amazing story ever, APOCALYPSE? This story will satisfy - but never satiate because it makes you want more high quality narratives like this. Rob? Eat your heart out. This is the stuff of Xena, indestructible and mythological. Myth never dies. - Karon Reiter - Jul-30-2011   

Well written, hilarious, sublime, such an excellent read. Feel the present fall away and be transported to the land of the Amazons, their Queen, her somber-eyed Champion, and the love that binds them all. - Anonymous - Jan-16-2013   

hahaha!! now that's a little masterpiece! trust me, if you haven't read it, you're not a Xena/ Gabrielle fan! I read it twice and each time laughed my head off! - Claudia - Dec-31-2013   

This story is finished. Part 2 onwards can be found in this link: http://www.ausxip.com/fanfic11/thedayafter2.html [Editor's Note: Link added above.] - aurelius - Jul-01-2008   

Thank you for tieing the "loose ends" up. both stories were a good read. - Lee - Jul-12-2008   

This story is finished and a very good read as well as the first story 'Resa', Thank you Journs !!! - Josje - Mar-23-2009   

Shorter than the original and also sweeter. Love all the "aw" moments between Resa and Jennifer, and there were a lot. Thanks for giving us a taste of their happily ever after. Awesome. - nicole938 - Jul-16-2009   

Well paced and original. - Anonymous - Mar-06-2015   

Both stories are a good read x - SD - Aug-28-2015   

Great follow-up! - Anonymous - Feb-12-2016   

Hot! - Andrea - Jul-03-2008   

Oh yeah! Great read, but not for the office.
I look forward to more contemporary work from
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- aj - Jul-30-2008   

That was super cute. Even though it was a short story the connection between the main characters was undeniable. Good job. - Hoqoq - Jul-30-2008   

Hot!!! will there be a sequel - Lee - Aug-05-2008   

what an adorable, totally hot, hot, hot romp!! this short story packs more depth than some books I have read recently. Great read and very much recommended - but definitely to be read in private (as the author suggests) - bookgeek - Jun-20-2010   

Adorable, totally hot and sweet - glad that there is a sequel now!!! - Anonymous - Feb-13-2011   

HOT! - Lyn B - Apr-10-2011   

That was a fantastic story. Short and sweet but Filfil makes it sizzle! - uber goober - Jan-04-2013   

Really enjoyed this story and the second part was good x - SD - Jul-17-2015   

Stop spamming SD. There's no way you've read all the stories you rated! It's not possible. - Jane - Jul-17-2015   

good job as always.keep up the good work! - Anonymous - Mar-13-2009   

Excellent work again. A sweet unselfish love found in the least likely of circumstances. Brilliant writing and I'm looking forward to your next work/s. - Anonymous - Mar-13-2009   

loved it - Manoli - Mar-13-2009   

this writer just gets beter and better. bravo! - Anonymous - Mar-13-2009   

WOW fantastic a excellent read - Anonymous - Mar-14-2009   

It is a very good story. Thanks again for your great work. - Anonymous - Mar-15-2009   

Love this story. Keep it up. I would like to see more of your works. Thanks. - Manoli - Mar-16-2009   

Excellent story. - rosii59 - Mar-19-2009   

Excellent story. Very well written. Worth a read:-) - Lyn B - Jul-14-2011   

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What a great story. Fantastic job. - sassy123 - May-17-2011   

Beautifully written series. - Ginger - Aug-12-2011   

You Sir/Madam are the enemy of conufsion everywhere! - juzLOXOj - Dec-12-2011   

Excellent series. Talented author. Worth the read. - Anonymous - Dec-30-2011   

another good one from Dee. Thanks. - rleef - Jun-16-2009   

A beautiful love story. - wasabigrrl - Jun-17-2009   

Oh wow, my god I loved this one and it went immediately to my bookself ! Is there gonna be a sequel to this one? I hope there is. Thank you Dee for the lovely read. - Bitazh - Jun-18-2009   

Good story, sweet and spicy. - Amanda - Jul-25-2009   

Good story. I enjoyed watching their relationship develop. The twist in the plot adds to the romance too. Worth a read. - Lyn B - May-17-2011   

Good story. Well written and worth taking the time ti read. - uber goober - Apr-26-2012   

this author is a word junkies wet dream. To see such intellectual dialogue... I KNEW one of the characters HAD to be from OHIO. LOL. Thats the only place I have lived where its normal to use big words and not have anybody running for a dictionary. I would love to see the characters in a follow up story as this one was so short and didnt reveal the titles message if there is a message at all in it. lol - dez - Sep-15-2012   

I love the witty remarks! I can't wait for more...it is such a tease. Please keep writing! - Katie of Ohio - Sep-17-2012   

What a place to leave us haning!! Of course we want to see more of these ladies. Like another reviewer said, this story is a wordie's wet dream. More, please!! - Stacia - Jan-01-2013   

A sweet short story. Very witty. Would love to see a 2nd part. - Peacetat - Jan-01-2013   

well, this deserves to be more than just a one-shot.. it can still go so many ways plotwise.. so, yeah.. a continuation would be much appreciated.. ;) - xtra dog - Dec-31-2012   

Read Falling from Grace if you're on this site. It's on MY list of required reading and should be on yours also. - Mochamaker - May-06-2013   

A great story which poses lots of intriguing questions and having tossed both lead characters into a metaphorical bear pit with the sarcasm gremlins watching from above, it would just be plain cruel to leave unanswered.
Highly Recommended and whilst I am making demands please don’t neglect Rizzo.
- Dark Tangent - May-07-2013   

If you like L&O:SVU, then READ this. It's a good Alex/Olivia story. - cam - Feb-01-2007   

luv it! please write more SVU with alex and olivia pairing.. - leia - Aug-31-2007   

I've not read a story between Olivia and Alex before and this one was very well written. Angsty, poignant and powerful, I like the breakers and how D moved the story through their relationship. A nice read. - Lyn B - May-02-2011   

Liked it! - Ricky - Apr-29-2012   

A brillantly written story, handling a very delicate subject with compassion and trust. Very Sensitively written - scorpio_2097 - Jul-03-2008   

Extremely well written. Very sensitive subject handled with caring tactful writing. - Anonymous - Feb-03-2010   

a delicate story about a delicate subject wit a delicate friendship.. sad but good.. predators come in all forms.. - xtra dog - Nov-11-2011   

Well written and shows the depth of the X&G relationship be it romantic or platonic soulmates. - Lysia - Feb-01-2015   

I think the idea for the story was really good, but it needed some grammatical work big time. There were tons of run on sentences and the words 'I seen...' were used throughout instead of 'I saw...'. I don't mean to sound rude, but it made the characters sound dumb. Also, many times you couldn't tell where one scene ended and another began. Some sort of page break would have been very helpful. Again, it was a good idea for a story, but all the grammer problems made it a bad read. - Anonymous - May 5th, 2003   

This story, like its predecessor, is great! The charm of the piece comes from the fact that the characters sound just like they would in real life! Goodness the accent affectations and off-the-wall grammar just scream Southern, y'all! ;-) They are ALL insane, and you just can't wait to see what they do next! Keep them coming up with new antics Larisa, and thanks for the tears from laughter! - Anastacia13 - May 5th, 2003   

A very fun and funny read. Nice charaterizations of X & G as well as the Amazons. Loopy enough to be truly from Larisa's quill. - Georgia - Mar-07-2008   

Loved the first one, and loved this one as well. Let's hope that there is another. - kdsusa3 - Mar-24-2008   

This one of my favorite writers in this site. Once again this author has manage to make my day enjoyable and bright. This story is marvelous and unique I highly recommend it. - xenamari - May-23-2008   

I was disappointd with this sequal, it jumped around to much, and the humor was flat - mutt - Dec-22-2011   

This story is great! Visualizations are perfect. I could almost feel the flexing leg muscles during the "lap dance". Now if this comment doesn't get someone to read this story...nothing will! Thanks for the great short! - jlnickymaster - Feb 24th, 2004   

Yeah. nice story. :D - lyneX - Apr-05-2008   

this is the very first story i'd read and i forgot to rate on it. i like it very much. A.K.Naten all short stories is good, barb readers should check this one out! - easteden - Aug-17-2009   

Great read !!! Sequel please !!! - Manuela - Aug-21-2009   

A great juicy little story that leaves you wanting a little more. - uber goober - Oct-11-2009   

Nice short story. The secondary characters are fun and the watching the relationship develop worked well for me. Good read. - Lyn B - Mar-14-2011   

Thys was hot...in a real way! The build up,the lust and angst the shy interaction all of it!! It was a joy to read! - Tee* - Apr-17-2011   

Sequel!!!!! - Anonymous - Jun-30-2011   

This is a great story. Well written - Anonymous - Aug-09-2011   

Really good! - Anonymous - Aug-24-2011   

Really enjoyed this one. Just couldn't stop reading. Well done. - Annie101 - Nov-06-2011   

Nice short story! - Ricky - Mar-14-2012   

A nice little story. ;) - M.E. - Mar-13-2013   

this trilogy is definately very hot!!! I wouldn't mind a sequel, maybe a long epilogue? - rleef - Nov-16-2009   

Thos is the finished 3rd story in a wonderful series by these great authors! I HIGHLY RECOMMEND the series, starting with Unlimited Sexual Favours. - CoolNik - Nov-20-2010   

Very hot! I think it is the most erotic of the three tales and they are all pretty steamy. If you like well written erotica check these stories out. - uber goober - Jul-17-2011   

the aspect that binds all the stories in this series is that they are all playful, humorous and very erotic.. i hope this wasn't the last story of this series, because i would love to see how the parents throw that major party for the two main characters.. alright, i'll admit it: i'm a sucker for romance mixed with humor..
- xtra dog - Jan-20-2012   

Hot hot hot best game ever xx - SD - Nov-02-2015   

Beautiful Story, cant wait for more to come - Rachel - Oct-10-2008   

Fantastic story...endearing...funny...defintely
looing forward towards the next in this series. - Christi - Oct-11-2008   

This is indeed a wonderful and emotive story. I look forward to reading more of this series. - Kara - Oct-13-2008   

great - Anonymous - Oct-14-2008   

Ah this submission has introduced us to a wonderful writer who has her fingers on the pulse of everyday life.
Moving and thought-provoking contribution.
Great read, my only comment is more, more, more!!! - aj - Nov-03-2008   

Very interesting beginning to a series of stories involving Mac and Jess. Quirky, interesting and quite realistic. I'm interested in seeing where the couple goes in the sequel. - Lyn B - Apr-01-2011   

A wonderful series of stories. Well written and very realistic. - Ricky - Apr-14-2012   

i really love this series.. - Anonymous - Mar-13-2014   

i really love this series.. - Anonymous - Mar-13-2014   

Really nice. pretty solid series. - sandy - May-12-2016   

good series
- Anonymous - May-27-2016   

Most excellent story! I highly recommend it. - Anonymous - Nov-13-2012   

Great story, read it in one go. - Anonymous - Nov-17-2012   

Absolutely adored this story! Great descriptions throughout and a great plot. A great read - Max - Dec-14-2012   

Excellent story. I'm surprised so few people have rated it. Definitely worth reading! - Ricky - Mar-23-2013   

Wow! Another barn-burner to lite your fire! Talk about hot. B.L., you do have a way with words! And I love them. - Diane - Jan-21-2009   

What can you say? It was a sexy sensual read due to BL Miller's style and pacing. Always an effective story teller. - kazy - Oct-20-2012   

Perfect pick me up for a cold afternoon! Cards anyone, indeed! - Stacia - Mar-18-2014   

This was a great Conqueror story - one of the best. Della Street captures the fundamental heart of Xena - be her a reformed warlord or the Conqueror - she's still Xena. - Karon Reiter - Jan 23rd, 2005   

This is one of the best conquerer stories around! A wonderful creation. - Jo - Jan 21st, 2006   

If you are starting in the Conqueror's genre, start with this one :) This Xena the Conqueror and this Grabielle the leader of resistence are the same wearing different titles. That conversation in the bedroom about their incoming marriages it is one of the most well writing scenes around and the story is worth just by it. - Goofynas - Jan-13-2008   

This story comes with my highest recommendation. If you like the Conqueror storyline you should read this fantastic story. - Callisto - Mar-03-2008   

Exceptional writer! My 3rd visit to the story and I'm still amazed ... It's been a long time but your stories still hit me on the right spots. Thank you. - Anonymous - Jun-25-2008   

I'm a sucker for a Conqueror story and this one did it for me.
Loved it - Miss Treetmint - Sep-13-2008   

An extremely well written story. - Anonymous - May-09-2010   

This one is a CLASSIC! I love all of Della Street's stories but this is one of her best. This one shouldn't be missed! - Luie - Jun-10-2010   

Della always hits the nail on the head with her stories. The love between Xena & gabby rings true. - Anonymous - Jul-04-2010   

Della always hits the nail on the head with her stories. The love between Xena & gabby rings true. - Anonymous - Jul-04-2010   

I loves this story.It rocks!!!! - sassy123 - Aug-27-2010   

That was a very good story. Kinda hated to see it end so soon. - ubergoober - May-10-2012   

This is one of the best Conqueror stories I have ever read. - Maximus - Dec 11th, 2004   

I absolutely loved this!...this writer knows how to write about passion with passion. I only wish it were longer! - JC - Dec-22-2007   

Beautifully written. Heartwarming and full of hope. - HP - Jul-24-2008   

Beautifully written. Heartwarming and full of hope. - HP - Jul-24-2008   

Very impressive! - Kite - Jul-26-2008   

Beautiful story. - NaT - Dec-04-2011   

Who wants kingdoms and riches when you can have an eternal love like that ? Just beautiful.... Thank you.... - Thothgirl - Jan-12-2012   

Let it be know that the black Knight and the Lady was and is one of the greatest Sagas I have had the fortune of reading her on the net. I would so love for there to be yet a another chapter or a sequel to this Saga, IÆm now only moments after reading the final words on the story, So I miss the characters as if the story tock place just beside me I miss their presence and their beautiful love for one another. Please let there be more of these stories. - Keegan Connor - Jan 15th, 2003   

i am surprised that there are not many reviews for this piece of literature! this story will surely make your heart sore!! highly recommended! - lunar - Feb-11-2008   

And they say chivalry is dead. This is a sweet romantic story to read on a sunday evening with the rain falling on the window pane. sigh but I love anything with swords so this really rang my bells. - LsC - Mar-24-2008   

Truly wonderful writing. Intelligent and rich. Filled with sweet emotion. I just feel it's not finished. Please author pick up the quill and bring these characters back to life! - JC - Jun-23-2009   

FANTASTIC READ!!! SEQUEL PLEASE AUTHOR!!! - Carmen - Nov-16-2009   

A very good authorian king of love story I would definitly recommend - erma - Jul-02-2011   

That was a great feel good fairy tale. I only wished it could go on, maybe a sequel?, any way well worth reading. - uber goober - Jul-19-2012   

Great story. Do yourself a favour and read it. Very well written and enjoyable - msprism - Apr-28-2007   

This story gives a warning to all the bards out there that have writers block and what kind of trouble you could get yourself into because of it. Very entertaining. - Sai - May-01-2007   

Reminds me of a situation I was once in. I really liked this story and which there were more like it by Angel. - Anonymous - Apr-12-2008   

A unique story with humor, emotion, and yes it is sexy. Well worth the read - Anonymous - Jan-26-2010   

Angelrad, i like it...should have more short stories like this. - easteden - Feb-11-2010   

Quirky story that scaled the emotional highs and a few lows too. Funny and bittersweet. It would have been nice to have seen this short story expanded to see where they're going. Nice. - Lyn B - Apr-07-2011   

A really great short story, tumultuous emotions run rampant and veer dangerously close to reality at times!! Well worth the read.. - Anfor - Sep-06-2011   

Funny short story with a number of interesting twists. - Anja - Jun-12-2013   

Niiiiice - Anna28Carm - May-05-2017   

Short but a brilliant story. Made me cry and smile! Loved it! - Yani - May-08-2008   

I really liked this short little better late than never love story. - uber goober - Mar-05-2010   

aww this is such a sweet story.. - xtra dog - Jan-26-2012   

What a cute story! - Ricky - Mar-30-2012   

Awww, what a sweet story! The ending was just perfect too, leaving the reader with a hint of what may happen next. - Stacia - May-22-2013   

Everytime I read this, I think its a brilliant way to describe families - well done Anna (with help from KG!) to work out about blood ties and love ties. This whole series is just super....I am so looking forward to the 4th book being released mid-October - CoolNik - Oct-03-2010   

Great series. If you have read it and liked it. by the Book Mother Load. It's more on the series. Heck, buy the whole series on book. It's worth it. - cpo - Mar-13-2011   

just finished the whole series.. i wish there were more... pls consider to write more. - crv - Mar-21-2011   

what a wonderful series.. i've read that this series is published.. pity it is not available in europe.. i would certainly buy the books.. - xtra dog - Jun-16-2011   

Hear, here - Anonymous - Feb-24-2012   

Great, realistic continuation of a wonderful series. Very heart warming. - Stacia - Jul-24-2013   

Thank you! Oh Gods thank you! I've read this ten times and never tire. I look foward to reading the rest of this bards work! - Anonymous - Oct-06-2008   

You completed this beautiful story so very gracefully; Thank you. - Anonymous - Oct-06-2008   

awww...loved it! - BlueButterfly - Nov-21-2009   

a beautiful short story that goes straight to the point and shows us love in it's purest form. if love is truly like this, then it's worth waiting for. great story! - mary - Dec-06-2009   

A good end to the story. Very poignant and happy too:-) - Lyn B - Jun-19-2011   

great coming out story. do read Dakota's Way first. - rleef - Oct-03-2009   

I've been waiting for this sequel for a long long time. another great one Miss hicks...thank you - candice - Oct-07-2009   

waited for a long time for the this since dakota's way... another great one!!!! - candice - Oct-07-2009   

great story and wonderful charatures. even though I should have read dakota's way first!! read them backwards but they were both great! thnk you for sharing - sara - Oct-17-2009   

Wonderful!!! I sooo enjoyed this, thank you for posting - Seabiscuit - Jan-11-2010   

Another great story. Job well done - sassy123 - Jun-08-2011   

Wow, love these stories by this author. Though there is no need to read Dakotas way first, it will help you know the characters even better. I love the couples in these stories. - Kennedy - Aug-14-2011   

I meant to leave a recommendation on this story which is the second to Dakotas Way but accidentally left it on Dakotas Way. A great second and a great group of friends, <3 - JT - Jan-13-2013   

Good sequel! - Ricky - Dec-08-2014   

Really good follow up such a nice story and such great friends to have - SD - Apr-29-2016   

Total wicked story. - Gaymar21 - Jun-08-2010   

Really enjoyed this one. Fell in love with the characters which had a little bit of a different spin than usual, but very well done. Was sad to see it end! - Stardawn - Jun-11-2010   

glad to see this story finaly made it here. for more stories from this author try http://www.fanfiction.net/u/932292/StarvingLunatic and http://www.fictionpress.com/u/576301/. - Anonymous - Jun-15-2010   

Absolutely amazing. - Dennu - Jun-26-2010   

Amazing pacing and very well written. The main characters are charming and the author makes you care for the very very much. The story is told with care and you can tell by the way it unfolds so beautifully. - Kerr - Jul-07-2010   

Excellent story. I like this writer's style. - MK - Jul-24-2010   

This is a great story with very unique flawed but still lovable characters. Also someone else mentioned it I think, but StarvingLunatic writes _the best_ Kim Possible fanfic. Even if you didn't watch Kim Possible(which if you haven't you totally should!) this author writes all the characters from that show like they are old friends of hers. Read this! Read her stuff on fanfic.net too! - Anonymous - Jul-25-2010   

thnx for a very very nice 'fix'. Especially like Danny. - Inu - Aug-09-2010   

I loved!!!!!!!! your story is beautiful!perfect! - Anonymous - Aug-09-2010   

Totally enjoyed this story!!! A must read - Traveller - Aug-25-2010   

Great story! Bravo Shea K! You've made my day. - pegi - Aug-26-2010   

Must read!! - Anonymous - Oct-09-2010   

Must read!! - Anonymous - Oct-09-2010   

Great story! Very well done Shea K. - Anonymous - Jan-23-2011   

I really liked this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Feb-05-2011   

I loved this story and the characters. A real 'page-turner'. Excellent. - Lyn B - Feb-16-2011   

Really good story, that must have take much work to write. When a writer did pay attention and give their heart to o story it shows. That's what I feel reading this. Great characters, not rushing development, an ending that it is not really one but bring enough closure... Great job! - yuka - Apr-01-2011   

I loved it! - Raf_51 - Apr-28-2011   

Loved this story! - ChakramGirl - Nov-27-2011   

This favorite of mine is going to be published. I'm hardly waiting to buy a ebook from L-Book. - Mo - Sep-08-2012   

Great story! I love these two characters! ... Read it! - Ricky - Sep-11-2012   

great story! - hit.dana - Feb-25-2013   

This is a must read fantastic story loved every bit of it can wait to read the next sequel xxx - SD - Jul-21-2015   

This story is amazing. One of my alltime favorites and you will remember this one. Xena's recovery process here is grueling, trying, and utterly real. A MUST READ!! - Anonymous - Jul 23rd, 2005   

Adorable...I loved it! - Alicia - Dec 10th, 2003   

This is one of the cutest stories I have ever had the luck to come upon! I read it to my daughter recently and she loves it even more than I do! This one should be on everyone's must-read lists! - Lily - Oct-16-2007   

Very sweet story! I really enjoyed reading it. - Enverz - Aug-29-2009   

aww.. that's so adorable. ~mushy~ i like. - rec - Sep-24-2009   

i was reading this story at work and it made me go aawwwww loudly... right beside my fuming supervisor... *grins sheepishly*... it was worth whatever came next.. - anne o'nymous - Sep-10-2010   

aww... this is so thweet. it's my second little xena/gabrielle story, and it just makes me want to read more about them. - kc - Jan-17-2011   

I absolutely enjoyed this story.It's one of my favorite's and leaves you on the edge of your seat,wondering what Gabby will do next to piss off the warrior.;P - Xexy Warrior - Aug 14th, 2002   

WHAT AFUN LITTLE RIDE THIS WAS ....YOU ARE ONE WARPED BARD - vampireslayer2 - Jan-10-2008   

I nearly fell out of my chair laughing. Great story!!! - Anonymous - Jun-23-2011   

simply hilarious.. loved the author's involvement in the story.. and the "play by play" nearly cracked me up.. - xtra dog - Nov-12-2011   

What a fun story. Great job - sassy123 - May-16-2012   

You can hear the nice soft music play as these two meet and see the electricity flow between these two as they get to know and trust one another. I give this story a five star rating. It's one of the best reads I've read in a very long time. I recommend this to anyone and everyone. - Righty - Sep 9th, 2002   

I found this story truly riveting and I wait for each new addition with great anticipation. The tale this bard has spun is not only spellbinding but is dotted with delightful characters that are so lifelike they come right off the pages and materialize before your eyes. I highly recommend this story as a must read for anyone who enjoys excellent writing. - Lady J - Mar 31st, 2003   

Amazing. This story has me totally taken in. I could not put it down until I had savored each and every page. Now all I can say is that I am still hungry, when will the next part be online so I may devour it? In all honesty this story is truly amazing. I give it 10 stars and recommend it to everyone. - Jazz - May 6th, 2003   

Fate is one of the best story's I have read. It has everything in it you could ask for. It will draw you into the story so much you will feel as if you are really there and that you know each of the characters personally. I can't wait to read more of this great story so I can see what happens next. - Debbie Dee - Aug 3rd, 2003   

I have never been one for reading long stories especially when they are not finished. With that said, I am so glad I made an exception to this rule for Fate. Fate is an amazing story with a well developed plot line and three dimensional characters. I can honestly say, unlike most of the longer stories I have read, this one has never had a dull moment. This story is a very entertaining mixture of intrigue, humor and action.Nice job D E Salsbury, keep up the good work. - Summer - Sep 24th, 2003   

Been reading this story since the begening...It a great story but where is 19... - Taz - Oct 17th, 2003   

I have no idea how I could have missed this one for so long. This story is abosolutely FANTASTIC. Each and every page is filled with humor, suspense and romance. I LOVE THIS STORY, one of the best I have ever read and I have been reading stories in the verse since day 1. Hats off to D E Salsbury. - Samantha - Dec 14th, 2003   

Excellent. - Anonymous - Dec 17th, 2003   

I am so happy to see this on the top 25 again. This is a wonderful story that should not be missed. I realize that the length of it as well as the fact that it is still a 'work in progress' may hinder some from reading 'Fate' but I have one thing to say to those that may be waiting in the wings....READ THIS STORY. It is one of the best I have ever read. - Jerri - Dec 25th, 2003   

Fate is one of the best stories I have read. It had a little bit of everything in it. If you have not read this story yet then I say do it now. You will not be sorry. Thank you so much for such a great story. I can't wait for you to start book 2 so I will know what happens to the girls next. - Debbie Dee - May 11th, 2004   

I just finished reading "Fate"- it took all day because once I started, I couldn't stop! It was GREAT, with likeable characters, and well written. I hope you are planning on a sequel, I find that I would like to know more about the pasts of the leads. I just wanted you to know that your story was appreciated. Read it! Live it! Love it! - Uber Addict - May 13th, 2004   

Fate is one of the most compelling books I have read on the verse. If you are looking for PWP, don't come here, but if you are looking for an exciting story that is well written with developed plot line and three dimensional characters this is where you need to be. Though the story is lengthy it is never ever dry or dull. Hats off to D. E. Salsbury for a job well done. Thank you for sharing your talent. - White Wolf - May 17th, 2004   

If you do not read any other uber this year do NOT miss Fate. If you do you will miss something really special. - Dream Weaver - May 24th, 2004   

I had stopped reading until the story was finished. When I saw it was done I went back to the beginning and read from the first word to the last in one sitting. I could not put it down. Fantastic story. - Bri - Jun 2nd, 2004   

Outstanding! Thank you for sharing your story. - Anonymous - Jun 11th, 2004   

I am normally a lurker who watches the top 25. Seeing Fate up for the last few weeks I finally decided to see for myself the staying power of this story. I was thrilled with the story. Once I picked it up I could not put it down and did not put it down until I had finished the last sentence. Great Job DE Salsbury, hope to see a sequel soon. - Karen - Jun 22nd, 2004   

WOW! Super story. Hope to see an addition. Would love to see more of these two. - Sheryl - Jun 26th, 2004   

Great story DE Salsbury. I have waited a while to read the entire story at one sitting (well okay, it took me more than a day because of other, unwelcome, intrusions) but it is an enjoyable, well put together story with enough excitement to keep me reading and enough tender moments to give myself an easier pace.I eagerly await part 2 - letterwolf - Jul 11th, 2004   

I have been reading this story from almost the beginning and I say, Well Done, and in very Good Taste too. This story has kept my iterest from the beginning and to now the End, which makes me fell sad in one way and Happy in the next. For one, I don't think we have heard the last of Lauren and Ash. I see and feel a sequel on the horizon. :)I feel what lead up to the ending and how Ash displayed her love for Lauren was just Ash, being Ash, and shows just how two people can really be truely in love.Then again beyond that, I can see how the sequel can begin to develop.Great Job DE, this story deserves to be published!!I will be waiting to read more of your stories.Well done, and in good taste and fashion. :) - Kathy - Jul 19th, 2004   

I was looking for something new to read when I came across 'Fate' by DE Salsbury. I read the entire story in one sitting. I can honestly say that this story is one of the most well written pieces I have read on the net so far. The plot was well thought out with enough twist and turns to keep my intrest through out. All the players in this drama are credible. On the whole I give 'Fate' two thumbs way way up. - Tina - Sep 8th, 2005   

Amazing story. Loved every page. - Jeri - Sep 15th, 2005   

Wondeful. Amazing. Breathtaking. If you haven't read this story stop right now and read it. - Anonymous - Sep 21st, 2005   

I played hookey from work to finish this story. It was so worth it. - Lori - Sep 30th, 2005   

Spellbinding. - Tara - Sep 30th, 2005   

I made my partner mad this weekend because I started Fate on Friday night and didn't want to do anything else until I had finished it. When she was getting on me for reading instead of going out I had her read the first chapter. She was sucked in the same way I was. We spent a very romantic Saturday night snuggled together with our lap top reading Fate. DE Salsbury nice job from both of us. - Sharon & Lynn - Oct 6th, 2005   

Fantastic. - Anne - Oct 13th, 2005   

Well, this is definitely a dangerous story... I couldn't stop once I started. I read right through the night to finish it...leaving me totally bleary-eyed but way happy. Absolutely brilliant! - Mic - Oct 13th, 2005   

Amazing plot, charecters, and style of writing. Loved it. - Mary - Jan 29th, 2006   

I just finished re reading Fate. It's as amazing the second time around as it was the first. If you've read it, re read it. If you haven't read it, READ IT. - Helen - Feb 8th, 2006   

What a wonderful story - novel. Thank you for taking the time to share you talent with us. - Anonymous - Feb 9th, 2006   

I can't believe I missed this one for so long. Saw it this week on the top 25 and thought I would give it a try. Brillant, Amazing, Stupendous...there are not enough adjectives to describe Fate. It's a solid piece of writing. - Mary - Feb 17th, 2006   

I have been waiting for this site to get back up and running so I could say how much I enjoyed Fate. D E Salsbury wonderful story, wonderful writing just wonderful period. - Anonymous - Mar-07-2006   

I have just one thing to say....is there a sequel..and if so where is it. - Tina - Mar-11-2006   

WHAT A WONDERFUL STORY. Couldn't put it down. - Anne - Mar-30-2006   

Fate is one of my all time favorites. It is one of those stories that can be read again and again. I wish there was a sequel, as there is plenty more story to tell. - Baerinin - Apr-05-2006   

There are not enough good words to say about Fate, except to say we need a sequel. - Tristan - Apr-10-2006   

Do not miss this one. - Marie - Apr-14-2006   

Where is the sequel??? I have enjoyed this book so much that I don't want it to end. - Sierra - Apr-18-2006   

WOW!!!WOW!!!WOW!!! Where has this story been hiding, I can't believe I missed it for so long. DE Salsbury great work. - Liz - Apr-18-2006   

Wonderful story. - Savanah - May-01-2006   

Fate is a sensation. - Dominique - Jul-04-2006   

I found this story to be an absolute pleasure to read. There was not one point where I found that the plot dragged or that the characters were unbelievable. It was grammatically strong with is a huge plus for me. Wonderful work DE. When will we be privileged enough to read more of your stories? You have a wonderful talent, thank you for sharing. - Tanya - Oct-27-2006   

I have just finished re-reading this story for the um-teeth time. I love this story more every time I read it. I get more out of it each time I read it. The only thing I regret is that it ended. I can only hope to one day read the sequel. - Anonymous - Sep-15-2007   

Great story! Wonderful characters! - Joy - Mar-26-2008   

Amazing!! More please. - DJ - Apr-12-2008   

What a wonderful story. Have you continued? I would love to read more. - Lucy - Jul-07-2008   

WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! I started this story years ago and never got a chance to finish it. I finally read it all the way and I am totally hooked to the story and all of the characters!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! Give us more Ash, Lauren, Lu, Sheila, Ben and Louis before we riot!!! LOL!!! - Grasshopper - Oct-03-2008   

This is a wonderful story filled with humor adventure and suspense. I would reccomend this one to anyone I know. - Rachel - Oct-15-2009   

This was an amazing story, I loved it. - Toni - Jan-04-2011   

I REALLY WISH THERE WAS A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 - Te` - Dec-07-2014   

Excellent,excellent story!! I found myself reading til after midnight, I couldn't put it down.I can only hope there will be a follow-up story with these characters. - Jude - Jul-04-2015   

This is a wonderful story just couldn't put it down love every page of it Well done xx - SDthi - Aug-07-2015   

Here we have another hidden gem with no recommendations. This series has actually been published but, the author has kindly left it for us. People you should really, really check the series out. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

I just absolutely love Anne Azel's stories. They are truely wonderfully inventive and entertaining. I highly recommend reading all her tales. - uber goober - May-13-2010   

another story in this series finished.. there were some inconsistencies in this one.. - xtra dog - May-18-2015   

One of the greater stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The main character, Luna, has to figure out what the heck happened to her and how she ended up in space. But where she ends up is even more interesting. Read the sequel, The Fallen, and you'll find out more of this place Luna ends up in. :-D - Katia N. Ruiz - May 10th, 2005   

If you hadn't read this story please do. It's a great story about a woman who gets taken from our time into the future and how she finds love even though the Earth has removed unlikeable DNA traits such as homosexuality. It's a great story and don't forget to read the sequals The Fallen and there's a third called Reining in the Belle. - Anonymous - Jun-02-2006   

love it got to make another one...maybe...thanks for the story just beautiful... - Anonymous - Apr-13-2008   

This is one of my favorite original fictions. I've reread this story and its sequels at least ten times. If there is nothing else that interesting to read on that day, I just go to my bookmarks and find your stories and read. Awesome work!! I hope you can finish Reining in the Belle. I'm addicted to this series. - Sally - Apr-18-2009   

Great s.f. and good story telling - Anonymous - Aug-15-2009   

lost? - meg - Dec-18-2008   

I did enjoy it a lot. A really good story ! - Mani - Sep-02-2009   

I'm not a big fan of vampires and werewolves, but the author provided some compelling cultural and mythological background that made this all seem real in its own world. Overall, it's an engaging read. - wasabigrrl - Sep-06-2009   

the story started off very promising but it lost me along the way.. i'm sure it's a nice read for fans of the genre, though.. - xtra dog - Aug-22-2013   

This is a fantastic read. If you love this genre this is definitely for you! It has the perfect combination of love, angst and action! Read it!! - Anonymous - May-29-2014   

A VERY CUTE TALE!... - bluebutterfly - Aug-28-2010   

Fun pwp. Hot - Lyn B - Apr-29-2011   

trick or treating was never so much fun as it was for torrance and helen.. hot halloween special.. - xtra dog - Nov-17-2011   

Excellent sequel. This was a interesting and intriguing twist on the Conqueror genre. Please do continue with this series. It would be great to see where xena and gabrielle go next since xe's warrior status has been given back. Highly recommended - x/g fanfic fanatic - Sep-13-2010   

good sequel.. but a lot of questions remain unanswered indeed.. my main question is gabrielle's parentage.. when will najara reappear?? what will happen with toris and lyceus if xena stays with the amazons?? many questions so i hope the author will continue this series even after all the years since she last placed an installment.. - xtra dog - Oct-30-2011   

I'm a bit confused, are the characters in this story the same as who were in Weekend Bliss and A Period of Adjustment because I'm just having a really hard time grasping this idea. - Louise - May 31st, 2005   

I didn't enjoy this story about Jo and Blair as much as the others, but it was still interesting to read, especially the humor with Nat and Tootie. But what I'm waiting for are stories with "original" characters, made up by Larisa, as only Larisa's imagination can dream up. Those are her best loved stories ...and very much missed! Or how about sequels to ANY of her originals. I would love to read more about Memphis, Luka, CJ, Brumby, Sprout & Lia from "Day Walker" again, just to name one of my favorites. How's Tucker, Duncan, baby Shane, Ripples & Furball doing from "Blue Calm?" Or Levi, Brody, Shane & Teddy from "Blind Date." Ok, that's two more favorites, I better stop. Sequels from any of her originals would be appreciated and loved. Keep up the great work, Larisa, it's great to have you back. - Sherry - Jun 1st, 2005   

I fell across this by accident and am glad I did. I loved the Facts Of Life and enjoyed this story from start to finish. The humor with Nat and Tootie was true to there characters. The build up to the relationship betwen Jo and Blair was interestng and show"s how true friends (and lovers) lookout for one another. - Liz - Aug 11th, 2005   

I truly enjoyed this story which I accidently came apon. Tootie and Nat were great with their humor, and Jo and Blair"s relationship showed what the meaning of true friendship first means, building into a loving relationship. I highly recommend this delightful tale. - Liz - Aug 11th, 2005   

Larisa is a very talented and engaging writer and I have loved all of her stories, but I especially love her Jo and Blair stories. I have not seen much alt fan fiction about these characters and I really enjoyed the new life that Larisa gave them. She stays true to the basic characters, but her storylines go well-beyond the original show. I envy the imagination that this creative writer has to take two-dimensional characters from an old T.V. show and create such wonderful new storylines. I highly recommend these stories. - Joan - Jan-09-2009   

I really enjoyed this story. I was a huge "Facts of Life" fan. I love these characters. - purplehawke - Jan-19-2009   

I Loved the Facts of Life back in the day, and love Jo-Blair fan fiction now. Larisa's take on their relationship is quite engaging. She stays true to the show's characters but gives them a whole new original life beyond Eastland that is romantic, sexy and funny as all hell. Larisa thanks for bringing my favorite fan fiction couple, Jo & Blair together in a fresh, evocative way. I've read lots and lots of Facts Fan Fiction and I highly recommend Coming Home- it is truly unique. All I can ask is...please write more Jo/Blair stories! - Nitescout - Feb-04-2009