This a very funny Conqueror story. Enginerd is a writer who can combine humor and adventure with terrific results. Here the alternative Conqueror universe gets a real work out with naked Amazons, a confused lovelorn Conqueror and a very accidental Amazon queen. - Cheryl Ande - Jan 17th, 2003   

The link to this story is broken. Curse of the Conqueror by Enginerd - Tracey - Feb 19th, 2004   

I just finished reading Curse of the Conqueror and I give it high marks. A tongue tied Conqueror looking for "love" in all the wrong places and unable to talk about, um... well, you know... makes for a very funny story. Add to that an excellent plot and you have a winner. - Patricia - Feb 23rd, 2004   

I thouroughly enjoyed this humorous and moving story. I don't usually like Conqueror tales, but this one is a fantastic exception. Enginerd has a very engaging writing style. - Carol Lee - Oct 19th, 2005   

This story has engaged me right from the beginning, I'll definitely give it high marks.

However, I was sadden to see the story ending just right after Xena wakes up. I hope to see a sequel where Xena and Gabrielle are reunited again. - Nat Chan - Apr-28-2006   

Curse of the Conqueror is a finished story and does not end with Xena waking up. There is much more to the story. The complete story can be found on the here or on Enginerd website. - Cheryl Ande - Apr-30-2006   

Fantastically funny. A real XTC gem. - msprism - May-15-2007   

a story with action,romance,between two enduring souls. a must read. - Anonymous - Feb-02-2008   

This story has humor and romance and is enjoyable from beginning to the end. - Avidreader276570 - Feb-09-2008   

Read this wonderful and humores story - Callisto - Feb-10-2008   

This is a funny Conqueror story that depicts the Conqueror and her desperate search for her problem with you know....you know...YOU KNOW
A must read! - Callisto - Feb-10-2008   

Extremely funny, had me going there!!! Always thought Xena had that..you know.. problem, that's why she stuck to Gabby..hahaha..!
And Gosh..can't help LMFAO..Najara wanting gin at the stake! "She never drank Alcohol" that was funny!
Well, if you like to let ur imagination float for a while into extreme comic scenarios, here's the thing for you. And though these may not be the characters as we know them , you'll still love them for sure. - XSDarkLord - Feb-24-2008   

This was certainly one of THE best Conqueror stories ever. The humor was right on point. I found myself actually laughing out loud to this. - Sherron - Sep-10-2008   

How on earth did I manage to miss this gem of a story after all these years? I will say however that I am glad I did because I have had the chance now to read a real classic that is not only utterly charming... Xena is so loveable in this even when chopping off heads! (Don't believe me? Just take a read :))
It also made me chuckle consistently throughout, with quite a few laugh out loud moments too.
It has everything you want in a classic story... Amazons, old enemies,feisty Gabrielle, stoic Xena, and a lovely romance thrown in to turn you into a big mush.
I wish I could write like this! Brilliant stuff! - Kez - Nov-01-2008   

this was really good. - Dawn - Nov-09-2008   

A wonderful surprise! Very, very funny! - Anonymous - Nov-10-2008   

Fantastic read! Brilliant, incredibly funny story with very good romance and many other things. This is indeed a gem. Do not miss! - Enverz - Nov-04-2009   

A very funny story. Great job. - sassy123 - Feb-22-2011   

one of a kind story.. hilariously funny at times with a feisty yet loving gabrielle, a very skilled yet unskilled xena.. a terreis like we haven't seen the likes of before.. very cleverly written story.. - xtra dog - Nov-02-2011   

Very good story. It was amusing, touching and just all around well written.A very enjoyable read.Enough said, read it!!! - uber goober - Sep-20-2012   

Hilarious, brilliant, and fun. This story is everything I hope for when I read FanFic, and I only wish there were more like it out there. Brava!! - Anonymous - Feb-09-2017   

This published story is one of the best I have taken the time to read. I recommend to anyone that wants to enjoy a good read to give this one a try. - Stone - Jul 18th, 2005   

I guess at one time this stories working title was "King of the Beach"? Either way... it's a great read. - jac - Jul 25th, 2005   

This was a good read. please give it a go. - vampireslayer2 - Jun-20-2007   

Heart's Passage is a terrific story! I am surprised I never noticed this writer or wonderful tale before! If you are looking for a story that will hold your attention, entertain and excite you this is the one! - Opus - Jan-16-2008   

WOW. What a great story! Thank for finding it Opus. Hurry and read! - dutchgirl - Jan-24-2008   

Excellent read. A very talented writer here! - Anonymous - Aug-09-2008   

A great story,adventure,love,drama...beautiful !!! - Manuela - Aug-27-2008   

Just re-read this story, sweet and sexxy. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Absolutely brilliant well written story. Captivated me from the very beginning and enthralled me to the end. The sequel is just as brilliant. Indeed, two books that will take pride of place on my book shelves. - terryb - Dec-03-2009   

An excellent uber that will suck you in its story of whirlwind love. - RB - Jan-13-2010   

That was a truely wonderful story! Great plot and characters that really makes the whole tale come to life as your reading it. - uber goober - Jun-11-2011   

so glad someone recommended this gem of a story. This is a great read. Highly recommended. Off to find the sequel mentioned above. - Anonymous - Jun-17-2011   

goodness gracious..!! i cannot believe that there is no recommendation given on Cate Swannell stories. All Barbs should read Cate stories from Heart's Passage to Ocean Deep. A great author like her shouldn't be left out for good ratings !! - zieta - Jun-29-2011   

A wonderful story of soul mates finding the truth. This shrieks out for a sequel, or 10. - Silver - Jul-02-2011   

What a great story. Awesome job - sassy123 - Jul-05-2011   

I really enjoyed this one and the sequel. Good on ya! - ~M - Aug-02-2011   

I feel in love with this story early on, and spent not one but two nights with very little sleep to get through it. Beautifully written and heart warming. Can't wait to start the sequel. - Stardawn - Sep-04-2012   

This is a very sweet story. Great characters and lovely setting. Good author who was kind to share her talent with us. Thank you - colorado fan - Sep-06-2012   

really interesting story so far, hope to see more chapters added soon. I really liked the different clans, reminds me of the a couple different scifi stories i've read - Anonymous - May 17th, 2005   

Loved the story so far hope you guys finish it soon!! - Krysta - Mar-07-2006   

So wonderfully written and well thought out, with rich characters and detail, that I'm sure this world must actually exist somewhere :)

Pick it up, read two pages and you won't be able to put it down...and you'll thank me for it! - Chris - Mar-10-2006   

So I found myself bored one day and thought that I would read a nice story, came here to find one and I curiously picked out "Blood and Honor". Started to read it and before I knew it time had flown and I was totally involved in this story, the characters, the events, the place where these women lived, everything...I was totally hooked. I can honestly say one of the best stories I have read in a LONG time. Hopefully you both finish it SOON!!!! This is a definitely recommend....it's a 10!!! Take care! - N - Mar-13-2006   

Very interesting story, it kept me reading till ungodly hours... pity it stops like that. I so hope it will continue soon :) - Lince86 - Mar-20-2006   

I'm dying for an update here! This is a great story with involved characters, good plot development and some wicked hot tension. More please! - Jalara - Mar-21-2006   

I loved this story. Its very well written and has a rich tapestry of characters. The plot is exciting and brilliantly developed. Windstar and Zee have done an excellent job of throwing me the line and now Im hooked! So come on guys dont leave me dangling like this&.. - Sai - Mar-22-2006   

AWESOME!! as usual - Anonymous - Jun-09-2006   

Ack! I thought it was finished so I started reading it. Oi! Please more, more, more! I just love this story! - rezu - Jun-14-2006   

reaaallly goood story! I nearly died when I got to the last section ><" ... can't wait for more!!! please say theres more.... :D - Anonymous - Jun-21-2006   

well written and captivating. awaiting the last of it with baited breath. - anon - Jun-23-2006   

I am absolutely hooked on this story. The characters, the place, the plot, the fact that the where is a world full of nothing but women. Love it!!!!! And there is humor, drama, love, hate, comedy, and sorrow. I can only hope that the next chapter comes soon! Any word on it??? Anyways, LOVE IT!! - Anonymous - Oct-05-2006   

I absolutely love this story!! I can't wait for the last chapter! I hope it is soon!!!! - DJB - Oct-08-2006   

I love this story and I keep waiting for the final chapter. - Anonymous - Nov-06-2006   

It is a very good story. I hope there will be a sequel or book 2.... - Anonymous - Dec-02-2006   

An amazing read, one I would recommend to anyone. - alecto - Dec-04-2006   

I was looking for a story to read and picked this one solely because (I'm embarrassed to admit) of the title. Wow did I get lucky! This is one of the most engrossing tales I have read in a very long time. It is extremely well written, and the depth and richness of the characters and the world they live in is extraordinary. The authors are to be congratulated...and encouraged to publish this gem asap! - Chris - Dec-05-2006   

From reading previous works by these two authors, I felt that Windstar's strengths are in writing epic tales while Zee's are in insightful observations in creating humor and depth to the characters. The combination of writing styles of Windstar and Zee create an absolutely brilliant story filled with action, anti-heroes, relationships, and redemption.

I hope to read other joint endeavors by these two authors. - diss_turbed_teddy - Dec-05-2006   

One of the best stories that I have had the pleasure of reading this year! I recommend this one to anybody who is looking for something fun, epic and immaginative to read. - Anonymous - Dec-07-2006   

Wow. What a great story! Not for the faint of heart, but definitely one of the best stories I have read. We need a sequel or a trilogy! These characters are so rich with possible stories and adventures. Simply amazing story telling. - jd - Dec-10-2006   

Whoa! Great story with a very rich background and a great plot. I read it in one night, I couldn't stop. - Golem3 - Dec-12-2006   

I LOVE this story. Tons of action and suspense, the world setting is awesome, and Luna and Torrin are two of my favorite characters ever. This immediately went on my Read Many Times list alongside great authors such as Melissa Good, Blayne Cooper, and LJ Maas. Haven't read it yet? Well why are you still reading this recommendation?! SCOOT! - Arassar - Jan-17-2007   

woooww great story!! thx for created it - elena - Feb-09-2007   

One of the best online-stories I ever read. I really love it! - Sammet - Dec-03-2007   

Amazing story. Plot and characters were outstanding. Would recommend this story to anyone! - Emily J. - Dec-04-2007   

Great story kept you interested and invested in the characters from beginning until the end. Hope there will be a sequel. - Fabeola - Dec-06-2007   

Wow! This was a great ride! Wonderful world-building and a cast of well-drawn characters -- heroes and villains. Great story! - leavethesky - Dec-16-2007   

I love this story. I reread it all the time. If you haven't read it, you are missing out. - Anonymous - Jan-25-2008   

Love this story just reread it for the 3rd time would recommend it to any one. - Anonymous - Jan-27-2008   

Great story with excellent setting and characters. - SS - Jan-28-2008   

Maaan...What a BEAST of an experience. A good one even. - jazzy - Jan-29-2008   

luv the story.. hope u have more stories to tell with torrin and luna on it.. - leia - Jan-29-2008   

One of the best stories I have ever read. - Anonymous - Jan-29-2008   

This is truly one of the most engaging, well-written and compelling stories I've read. Read this story, you won't regret it!!! I know you have written "Selene and Nix," as well as "Rezan," but could we get some non-prequel sequels? Thanks! - Anonymous - Feb-03-2008   

the most incredible story I have every read and I have reread it countless of times - Anonymous - Feb-17-2008   

Fantastic! lip smacking rip roaring Yarn with interesting characters and lots of swords and blood and guts and gore interwoven with a love story to keep everything buzzing just the way I like it. - LSC - Mar-25-2008   

sweeetness - sarah - Apr-09-2008   

This story was amazing. I do however hope that the ending was created with a sequel in mind. *Hint* *Hint* - Shadowquill - May-01-2008   

This story just pulls you in so that you do not want to put it down until you get to the end. I hope to read more about these characters in the future! - Anonymous - Jul-20-2008   

Great story - dont waste any more time - read it now! - Anonymous - Jul-27-2008   

I loved this story !I could not stop reading it! please continue with the sequel! - Anonymous - Dec-06-2008   

all i can say is that I am totally in awe of you two. This story is absolutly brilliant. I've said it before and I'll say it again...you guys should be collecting royalites on this stuff. I feel lucky that ya'll are willing to share your talent with us. Thanks so much. - Lea Ann - Mar-14-2009   

The best - if you like epic fantasy (e.g. Weber's The War God's Own or Elizabeth Moon's Paksennarion) you will thoroughly this book. but be prepared for sleepless nights - Anonymous - Jun-24-2009   

This story will keep you up well past your bed time, despite telling yourself your going to bed early. It is very, very long..but sooooo good. It will be worth every single sleepless minute. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-16-2009   

wonderful story,can't miss it. - martina - Oct-23-2009   

One of the best fantasy fanfic out there. Loved the pre-quells too. Please let there be a sequel to Blood and Honor. I would like to see how Luna and Torrin's lives fared. This series is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent. You should publish this ! - x/g fanfic fanatic - Mar-10-2010   

This story and its sequels are wonderful. I really like this Authors who are true storytellers as well as writers. Read this and anything they write. - sonji - Apr-22-2010   

One of the best stories I've ever read. I can't believe it hasn't been published. I'd buy a copy immediately. - Anonymous - Apr-26-2010   

Loved it!!! I'm meant to be studying... oops.. - Anonymous - Sep-03-2010   

This is an awesome story. I just wanted to say thank you so much for writing it :) - Alessandra - Oct-18-2010   

Brilliant series. Fascinating world. Thank you so much to the authors. - CAP - Jan-02-2011   

This series is epic. An amazing adventure filled with rich characters that you quickly form emotional ties to. Well done indeed! These writers are certainly a gift to us all. Take a weekend and read this series back to back...you'll spend the time transported to a magical realm. - Fern - Jan-23-2011   

Astounding read! This epic adventure was a true pleasure to read. I've already read thru the other stories in this series and will be anxiously awaiting more stories based in this delightful world created by the talented Windstar and Zee. Thank you both for such a deliciously fun trip. - Anonymous - Mar-01-2011   

I love this story! Im just about to start it again. - Anonymous - Oct-05-2011   

I have read this novel more than once. These authors are gifted. Read it and you wont regret it. Good job. - Chinwe, Nigeria - Oct-27-2011   

This is with out a doubt my favorite read! I highly recommend it! I love this action packed story and characters...Can't wait to read more! - katie - Apr-04-2012   

Got me hooked from the beginning! I couldn't wait to come home and read a little more every day, and I love it when that happens. Means I found a great one. So, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this one :) Congrats again to both very talented authors! - Anonymous - May-11-2012   

Amazing seriesn great job windstar and zee - Mandy - May-13-2012   

Another great story...might take a little while to get into, but totally worth it - Anonymous - Sep-06-2012   

This story has something for every reader and I love how the authors blended emotions in this. The range of emotions the two main characters go through is remarkable. Love the fact that the story/plot drives the romance. One of the absolute best fan fic stories I have read in over 12 years. - Stacia - Oct-23-2012   

I loved this story and series. The characters are not perfect and it is their personal growth that elevates this story above others. My only complaint is I wish there were additional stories because the authors really have hit upon something that not only draws the reader in, but makes the reader really want to know what happens to everyone. Read all three together if you can - it is one of the best series on the internet. I very highly recommend this story and series. - Stacia - Dec-27-2012   

This series is one of the best I have ever read. If your like me and fantastize about how fantastic a female (mainly lesbian) world would be than this series is for you sister ;-) - Amanda - Jun-30-2016   

Excellent story. One of my favorites - colorado fan - Jul-03-2016   

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This writer always surprises me. She is always giving us something a little different than the last story and somehow they are all winners. Thank you. - cc - Jun-21-2007   

A delicious quirky little PWP. Nice time out read. Very enjoyable. Love this writer. - msprism - Jun-26-2007   

It was REAL nice to see some Xena! Thanks! By the way, I love ALL of your work! - jjones - Jul-05-2007   

I love anything with the Conqueror. Great writing. I look forward to them meeting again. I read Avenging Angel quite some time ago, and it has stayed with me as well-written. Also enjoyed Reflected Passion, and Twice Reflected, some time ago. Forgive me for not saying, sooner, how much pleasure all gave me. And they are ALL memorable compared to many stories out there. I have avoided the long-titled stories, but I guess I better get with it. Thanks author for the best of reading. - Anonymous - Jul-08-2007   

I read this because it was a Conqueror piece (I was missing Xena)before I really noticed who wrote it. Good Goddess woman! Is there anything you CAN'T write!? Okay, NOW I need more of THIS story, AND more of the Reflected stuff AND more of our little Ghost Buddies AND I am not going to sign this so you can't track me down. Big smile and lots of love! You're super! - Anonymous - Jul-13-2007   

Hmmmm.. sexy Xena. Just the way I like it. - kellie22 - Aug-04-2008   

Dangerously sexy - Anonymous - Aug-06-2008   

Will we see more of this adventure? - Anonymous - Oct-14-2008   

This was totally HOT!!!! Will we see X&G again? Please? - sae - Jan-07-2009   

Very hot. Very fun. All the best types of Xenalicious bits in a Conqueror motif. - Anonymous - Feb-21-2009   

Ouch! Scorching hot!!! - Anonymous - May-23-2010   

Wow! That was a very steamy X&G conqueror tale. I just love Aurelia great imagination and her ability to share it with her readers. - uber goober - Sep-08-2010   

A really great story. A job well done - sassy123 - Sep-15-2010   

Totally recommend this engrossing story. It is all good--people, plot, and pace. More! More! - MEG - Aug-14-2007   

Marvellous. Solid writing, great characterization, tight grammar and spelling. This has all the signs of being an absolute epic. If you haven't started reading it yet... well, sorry.
Thanks, Jae, looking forward to the rest of the trip backwards. - k alexander - Aug-15-2007   

Good story! Waiting for more. READ and ENJOY. - cam - Aug-15-2007   

Amazing story, read it all night long and want more. - Anonymous - Aug-15-2007   

Really enjoying this story. More please! - Gillian - Aug-15-2007   

Yikes! Very good read. Non-typical, believable characters, realistic story line. Gives me the same warm fuzzy feeling as Anne Cameron's "The Journey". Just hope it's not months between updates. I don't know if I can wait that long. - badsquirrel - Aug-15-2007   

Wonderful start to what will be an amazing story, the characters continue to grow on you as they change and mature through the story. Can't wait for the next installment! - Stephanie - Aug-15-2007   

excellent!! I am a big fan of the old west and this story was one of the best i've read. Can't wait for the rest. - Anonymous - Aug-15-2007   

Excellent!! I can't wait for the next installment. This kind of romance is just what the doctor ordered. Jae knows how to pull at your heart strings and keep you clamoring for more. Please finish!!
-Califa - Califa - Aug-15-2007   

This is a fantastic piece so far! Great characters, wonderful details, and a story that takes its time and allows the characters to slowly find their way to love and romance. I hope you continue!! - Anonymous - Aug-15-2007   

This is one enjoyable read! I can't wait for the rest. - filfil - Aug-16-2007   

Love this story! I love long romantic stories and this promises to be just that! - lmddixie - Aug-16-2007   

I try as a rule not to read stories which are unfinished, but I am so very glad I made an exeption in this case. This story is a delight to read and I would recommend it very highly. - Ang - Aug-16-2007   

Omg! This is the best western I have read in a long time. To be honest, I love it. I stayed up till 4am reading the first posting. I cant wait for more. I hope we see more from this bard. Damn good! - RCP - Aug-16-2007   

This is a wonderful story and I can't wait for more parts. It reminds me of playing the game Oregon Trail but with women. - A.L. - Aug-16-2007   

I have never been a fan of 'old west' stories until now! Amazing characters, a great plot filled with passion and just the right amount of suspence. I hope the author brings out the next installment real soon! Looking forward to it. - Barbd - Aug-18-2007   

I was totally absorbed till I reached the end of the last part. Please please give us the next chapter. :)
It's written very well and I couldn't nearly stop in the early morning hours to get some sleep. - wolfy - Aug-18-2007   

Jae writes an excellent story, well researched, with solid visualization of location and characters. Some idiomatic language issues, which is understandable from a writer who is not a native speaker of American English. Good use of suspense in developing the core relationship of the main characters and their personal dilemmas. I would recommend this story to anyone who enjoys historical lesbian romance. - DrDeany - Aug-18-2007   

This story is amazingly well researched and written. But, what is even more impressive is the bard, Jae, isn't from the USA, and English is not the local language!!I guess their "World History" classes are more thorough than the USA's version. Not since reading Blayne Cooper's "Last Train Home", have I enjoyed every page of 'history' of the old west, and wished I'd been around to ride along, doin' the sidekick thing. With writing this good, I'll wake up with blisters on MY feet!!!!GO(west)JAE!!! - dez - Aug-18-2007   

Well it is now 3am and I am just finished the reading. Wonderful!! This is honestly on of the best stories ever posted. And believe me I've read tons. Wonderful work Jae. I can't wait until you next post. - lrt - Aug-19-2007   

wow...this story is amazing! it's really thought through, thought-provoking, realistic, beautiful and tender. i'm so glad i read it and hopefully will read more of it! Jae you are a very taented bard, brava :) - Kat - Aug-19-2007   

I don't usually read a story before it is finished, but this one is highly recommended. I cannot wait to read the next parts..... - Anonymous - Aug-19-2007   

I don't usually read a story before it is finished, but this one is highly recommended. I cannot wait to read the next parts..... - Anonymous - Aug-19-2007   

What a fantastic story! Like many other readers, I don't normally read unfinished tales, but I couldn't resist after I read all the positive reviews. This story has adventure and romance, and it's all very well written. Can't wait for the next part! - Jen - Aug-19-2007   

Could not stop reading was up til 2am reading it! Great storyline, don't pass this one up
- Norfin - Aug-19-2007   

Most awesome! Jae has captured all the angst of this journey. Writing any historic period piece is an undetaking and Jae has managed to immerse my imagination into the 19th Century. I look forward to more from this author. - A.C. Henley - Aug-20-2007   

I love this story! One of the best that I have read in a while. The writing is beautiful and the characters and storyline are so engaging. Can't wait for more! - dj - Aug-20-2007   

most enjoyable must read story, looking forward to the next chapters. thank you. - Liz - Aug-22-2007   

Wonderfully engaging story. I do wonder about the author's use of pronouns in regards to Luke. - Anonymous - Aug-22-2007   

The history in this story is well researched and Jae is able to work it into this wonderful story.This amazing,beautiful tale is worth reading more than once. - CNS - Aug-23-2007   

Excellent, excellent read. I very seldom start a story unless it's complete but I made an exception and so happy I did. I see the makings of a published book in this one! - Katelyn - Aug-24-2007   

Best story I've read for some time. - Anon - Aug-25-2007   

I love this story and I hope there's an update soon. You're a great writer Jae. Take care. - B - Aug-25-2007   

I love this story and can't wait for an update. I already read it several times. so Jae concentrate to an update on this one and not to write an other story - Anonymous - Aug-26-2007   

I didn't get one thing done this weekend because I couldn't stop reading this story. I can't wait to read what happens next!! - Deja - Aug-26-2007   

awesome story. Just finished!! Would love to read more on Luke and nora. - Anonymous - Aug-27-2007   

An excellent tale. A story that is simple in the sophistication of its characters. Luke and Nora are so real, the descriptions of their surroundings and life are beautifully spartan as to reflect the reality of the hard life they were living. I would love to read anything else this bard writes. A must read. - nondescriptone - Aug-29-2007   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

I lift my glass to raise a toast to Jae as well! This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read on or offline! I would highly recommend it! - Opus - Aug-30-2007   

What a great story! I enjoyed it so much...I highly, more than highly, recommend it...

- Anon - Sep-01-2007   

You are a good writer and your tale is well spun. Hat's off to this outstanding tale! Highly recommended as far as I'm concerned. - Whitecrow - Sep-03-2007   

I noticed in the disclaimer for Backwards to Oregon, Jae mentions that English is not her first language. Honestly, you wouldn't know it unless you were looking for it. The story was marvelous, but it was her writing style that I found most intriguing. It reminded me of The Sun Also Rises. Well Done. This is not your average historical fiction. It's more like a liberated Willa Cather novel. Unless you find trans issues off-putting, you won't regret reading it. - Aubrey - Sep-10-2007   

Awesome!!! One of the best I've read in a long time. Be prepared for a sleepless night, once you start this you can't stop. - Anonymous - Sep-13-2007   

This was a wonderful story. Thanks so much for sharing with us. - Kali - Sep-14-2007   

Wonderful story. I hope this one has a sequel. I want more. - SB - Sep-14-2007   

Great work hate it when it ended a sequel wouldn´t be a bad thing. Worth it every sleppless hour. - Chris - Sep-15-2007   

What a wonderful, well-crafted story this is. Even if you're not a fan of Western tales, you can't go wrong with this one. Definitely a 'page-turner'! What a great treat a sequel would be. :) - Niko - Sep-18-2007   

One of the best Uber I've ever read so far ! Wonderful story, excellent characterization... you won't get bored anytime soon while reading this one :) Just perfect. Amazing - Gal - Oct-10-2007   

I got hooked from the very first pages and couldn't stop reading! One of the best fanfics I've ever read and certainly one of the most original! I very strongly recommend it. - Elise - Oct-23-2007   

I was just looking over some of the stories I've read and could not believe that I hadn't given due praise to this one. I read it when it started--and read it--and waited, with baited breath (believe me), for each next part. Anyone who has a taste for entirely and utterly fantastic Uber fic should read this story.

Read it! Now! - micah6 - Nov-15-2007   

Really awesome story. Will definately keep in my personal archive - Emily. - wakingthedream@gmail.com - Dec-04-2007   

There simply aren't enough good things to say about this story. I've read it more times than I can count. If this story isn't the Novel of The Year it would be highway robbery! - jaeygatsby - Dec-07-2007   

the best story on the net, and gets better, buy it on audio MP3 from L-books .com - Lizzielee - Apr-05-2008   

Love westerns and this is a good one. It is wonderful how Jae, who is not of the USA, still gets the flavor of the times. Enjoyed the journey of Luke and Nora very much. - rleef - Dec-12-2008   

wonderful story! I bought and read this all today and it was worth the small amount i paid! - Anonymous - Aug-19-2009   

A Great story that you MUST read.Wish there were more western stories like this one. - Anonymous - Aug-29-2009   

For anyone who hasn't read it, Backwards to Oregon is definitely worth buying - and buying an extra copy to lend out to friends. Jae writes an absolutely captivating story and the research that she's put into it is phenomenal. - mec - Sep-05-2009   

summary very interesting..can someone give me the copy of the book..=) let me know..email me -> {email address deleted by admin} [Editor's Note: We do not allow e-mail addresses in our comments section. You can use our forum for inquiries like this, and it's always far safer to use a PM on the forum for sharing your e-mail. 11-17-2009] - Anonymous - Nov-07-2009   

I must have read this story 5 times by now - my all time favourite. The author announced that she will publish a full novel-length sequel at the end of 2010 - I can not wait. This is the story that made me read every available lesbian western. - Anja - Feb-26-2010   

Bought the shook. Totally worth the money. - Anonymous - Jul-17-2010   

Buy The book, I dare you, it's worth it. - cpo - Nov-03-2010   

waaahh.. i could not stop myself. i bought the story. :) good read. i wish for a sequel. ~cheers! STAMP HERE! - *Reader - Nov-07-2010   

I read the book. It's EXCELLENT! - hit.dana - Jan-11-2011   

Is this a sight to read free stories or a place to advertise? Please remove a story of all it links to is a place to buy it. - SickNTired - Jan-29-2011   

I have been coming to this site for quite awhile now, reading the deliciousness from the bards. I am usually pleasantly engaged and impressed by the level of talent seen clearly in the writings of so many. Lately, I have been coming across stories, with interesting teasers and a long list of recommendations. I get excited and click on the link to read the story, and it is no longer available to be read without purchasing the book. I am all for awesome stories being published and a well done to those authors who have had their talent brought to the next level. However, I find it is poor taste to leave the story teaser and all it's recommendations up on the site but to remove a link to read the story. I might be confused (and in that case, I'm sorry...), but isn't this site for people to come read FREE online fan-fiction and such?

On a side note: I did end up reading this story (no, I didn't buy the book...) and it is a great read. "Google" is your friend... to anyone else wanting to read the story online for free. :) - Anonymous - Mar-10-2012   

Once again that was great! I can't wait for the next one. - Tracey - Oct-02-2009   

love this series. Once again Aurelia leads us on a wonderful ride of adventure. I can hardly wait for the next installment. - rleef - Oct-02-2009   

Great story! I cannot wait for Book 4. - Anonymous - Oct-03-2009   

Awesome story so far!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! - kaysy1994 - Oct-04-2009   

A wonderful addition to a great series. A 10 in my book! - Anonymous - Oct-13-2009   

Every story in this series is a gem. Totally engaging. - wasabigrrl - Oct-19-2009   

A fast-paced, riveting story that is becoming more and more intriguing with every book. And yet the author doesn't miss out on the detail and emotion of the human interaction between the characters. Great story, great characterization and heaps of action. - Anonymous - Nov-07-2009   

WOW! This is a fantastic series! I don't normally read sci-fi but I love the characters, the suspense, the humor in the Ratha series. I can't wait for Book Four - I hope it's soon. - Barb - Feb-18-2010   

This story is so great and just keeps getting better and better. I highly recommend reading this story. You won't be sorry you did. - uber goober - Aug-23-2010   

This story is so great and just keeps getting better and better. I highly recommend reading this story. You won't be sorry you did. - uber goober - Aug-23-2010   

This would have been the first perfect sequel I've ever read but was about 7 chapters too long. I feel bad saying this especially when I absolutely loved "At First Sight" and adore Colleen's work. Sorry. - Anon - May 16th, 2002   

this story was in my opinion excellent!!!! - Krysta - Dec 18th, 2003   

A true classic, dont miss out. - mjf - Aug-25-2008   

One word: EXCELLENT!!! - Dani Lucian - Jun-17-2009   

Kept me on the edge of my seat. Read this triology - it's a wonderful treat. Characters are lovely. Great author. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Jan-31-2010   

Just as good as the first tale . This one has a bit more angst in it but as the author says she saps up the wrap up so alls well that ends well.I highly recommend reading it. - uber goober - Aug-28-2011   

This is the sequel to Into the Dark and its definitely one to read. The first in this series 'Into the Dark' captured me from the start. The story 'Learning to Climb' has brought the story forward in ways that you have to read to understand. The characters have developed further along with the relationship, as if by being in their relationship they have grown even further than they would have on their own. A wonderful story and I really hope that third will be written, so Sharon if your reading this, please.. PLEASE.. write the third in the series. Thank you. - Cath - Apr 1st, 2003   

i really enjoyed reading both stories. i hope sharon smith continues writing about jordanna and rebecca,two exceptional soulmates! - pat - Sep 6th, 2003   

What a great sequel. It took characters that were already well developed and added to them. I certainly hope that this story will get one as well. It deserves one. - Erica - Nov 7th, 2003   

These stories are amazing! I can only hope for a third installment :) - Gabs - Dec 27th, 2003   

i love this story n i mean both of them!! i cant wait for the third part of it!! - Cris - Oct 24th, 2004   

One of the best series I've had the pleasure of reading so far. I truly hope a third is on the way. - Claire - Apr 29th, 2005   

thank you for this set of stories, and i have to add my voice to the request for a third... i've enjoyed watching the characters grow and i've been scouring the net hoping to trip over the beginnings of a third part. good on ya! keep writing! - feral - Dec 8th, 2005   

This is a wonderful series. A third is needed to clear up some unanswered questions? The reader is definitely left hanging. - jac - Jan 29th, 2006   

totally needs a third one!! awesome stories ya got here! - Anonymous - Jul-21-2009   

Excellent sequel! I enjoyed this one very much, and I liked that the author explored BDSM with the characters in a more positive light! I wish there was another sequel! - Anonymous - Oct-07-2009   

Ahh Yes Another Sequel - Anonymous - Apr-02-2011   

Great story...please continue the third sequel... - Dee - May-04-2011   

Great sequel to Into the Dark. Must read. - pegi - Aug-13-2011   

Great story...please continue the third sequel.. - braniac - May-12-2012   

Truly beautiful story I'm 23 and haven't read a book in 6 years but found this by accident late one night now I have to read the preaqual and hopefully a sequel is in the works. Encore Encore - Mike - Jul-04-2012   

while not a thrill a minute this is a wonderful continuation of a love story. I would have loved to see a sequel. either way well written, great story and loved the ending! - strange1 - Aug-06-2013   

What a great pair of stories. I really think that this should be more of a trilogy - just waiting for Part 3 :) . Very interesting and delightful read. Hot too - both of them. Very much recommended. - Georgia - May-08-2014   

Really enjoyed both story's xx
- Anonymous - May-06-2015   

Amazing just keeps getting better great follow up . Well done two great story's xx - SD - Nov-16-2015   

Amazing just keeps getting better great follow up . Well done two great story's xx - SD - Nov-16-2015   

WHEN IS THE SECOND PART GOING TO BE ADDED? - Anonymous - Dec 1st, 2002   

I loved what has been written so far. Cannot wait for more!! The characters are believeable and loveable. I recommend this story for everyone to read. You will love it as much as I do. - T. Stratton - Mar 21st, 2003   

I love this story. I was laffin so hard I almost joked. Lady J is really somethin special, can't wait to see more from her. - ne-ne - Apr 10th, 2003   

It is great. There are parts in it that were so funny I amost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. I very much highly recommend this story. I am sure once you start reading it you will love it as much as I do. Can't wait till the next update. - Debbie Dee - Apr 13th, 2003   

I have found this story not only entertaining but also exciting. I feel the characters are 3 dimensional, each having a very unique personality. I anxiously await more and would recommend this story to anyone who loves good writing and a well-spun tale. - Windsong - Apr 20th, 2003   

Ok, so I am slightly biased, but I truly love this story. The characters are well written and the plot is fun (and at times just plain funny!) Its a charming and entertaining story and I highly recomend it! - Trin - Apr 30th, 2003   

Wonderful, just wonderful. Waiting for the next part to be posted. - A. Nonny Mouse - May 6th, 2003   

I really enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for part 6!!!! - Deja - Nov 7th, 2004   

Loved this story ...any idea when or if this story will be completed...finished part 5 pleeeaaase finish it Thanxx - FBF - Jan 31st, 2005   

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. You are a wonderful writer and I am glad to see you writing again. I can't waite for the part seven. - Janice - Aug 5th, 2005   

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana - Sep 5th, 2005   

I am not in the habit of reading unfinished stories but this one got hold of me and wont let me go. Thank you for working on a good finish. Waiting for part 8. - Diana - Sep 5th, 2005   

Lady J, what a great story. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. Amazing plot. Can't wait for part eight. - Jenny - Sep 6th, 2005   

The story is great. The charectors are so real I feel like I actually know them all. I'm also enjoying the plot twists. Write faster. ;) - Linda - Sep 8th, 2005   

More please. Loving this one. - Marie - Sep 21st, 2005   

You're KILLING me. - JAZZY - Sep 25th, 2005   

More please. - Anonymous - Sep 30th, 2005   

Fantastic story Hurry and finish it cause i want to know Who ends up with who!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a great story teller keep it up! - Andie - Oct 6th, 2005   

I love this story. The conflicts are realistically confusing as they would be in life when someone comes to the realization that they can no longer live the life chosen for them. I also love the interplay of loving friendships vs friends loving each other. - Jasmine - Oct 13th, 2005   

Woohoo! Just love the girls and can't wait for Vic and ummmh ...??? to get together (come on, you know you want to! LOL). - Mic - Oct 13th, 2005   

I beg for this story to be continued. It is so great and you are left wondering why will get with who. Please finish. - Anonymous - Aug-09-2007   

Thanks you so much for posting more of this - love it - pls keep it coming ! - BJ - Aug-19-2007   

I was so happy to see an update to Spring Break. Please finish, it's a great story. - lrt - Aug-20-2007   

Loved it up to part 9. Where is part 10? - Anonymous - Aug-21-2007   

I'm truly enjoying this story. The mingling of the charectors is very well done. I really really like how each girl is so different and yet so the same that they mesh so well into their long term friendship. Nice job. - Tiff - Aug-21-2007   

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Keep it coming. - Randi - Aug-22-2007   

I have been reading your fics and I can't possibly describe it any different from all your fans. Wow!!! wonderful writer.. I hang on to every sentence,word and letters... whew.. You are awesome! Thanks for sharing your stories. thank you so much. thank you thank you. - redjassy - Aug-26-2007   

This such an awesome story so far. I can't wait for part 10!!! - Deja - Aug-26-2007   

such an incredible story. want more please?!? - Anonymous - Aug-29-2007   

More please! This story is just so engaging, I'd really like to see more! - L'Nara - Sep-07-2007   

I loved Business Trip and I'm loving this just as much. Please keep the updates coming. - Devin - Sep-15-2007   

This story is taking so many spins and curves I have no idea who will end up with whom and where they will end up. I'm loving this ride, please don't stop updating. Part 11 please. - Gina - Sep-15-2007   

Thanks for the update... waiting for more.. thanks again for sharing your stories. ciao - redjassy - Sep-15-2007   

great story. you have me hooked. will it be finished any time soon? - Lee - Jul-15-2008   

This is a tender, fun, sexy romp among college friends who learn more about each other on a journey to Louisiana. I wish Lady J would finish this GREAT story!!!!! - Anonymous - Jul-16-2008   

Loved the story Lady J. So many things going on, I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing - Nancy - Jul-21-2008   

I remember starting this story years ago. I loved it then & now. I am very pleased to see you continuing with updates, with twist & surprises. I know which original couple i'm rooting for...lol. I hope the updates continue. It's a brilliant story. - brighteyez - Aug-04-2008   

Always happy to see an update to this great story. Can't wait for more... - chatham23 - Aug-05-2008   

oh my god! finally!! thank you lady j....now tell lady muse to stay... pretty please...we've been waiting so long...keep it up. - Anonymous - Aug-05-2008   

thanks for adding another chapter. waiting for more but I'm patient. Great story. - Anonymous - Aug-06-2008   

thankyou for the wonderful storie. Great read. - Pat - Aug-09-2008   

I love this story and was really excited to see a new chapter. I hope you have plans to continue the updates.

- Les - Aug-09-2008   

Just like so many others I am enamoured with your story. It's amazing you've been writing it for years...please don't make us wait so long between updates! I'll wait to rate your story when it's completed. - JC - Aug-17-2008   

Thanks for adding another chapter. I love this story...I just don't know which couple I'm cheering for. - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

Lady J you are a genius!!! I like Business Trip a lot but I LOVE SPRING BREAK. Please keep the updates coming, we are really getting to the good part now. - Nigie - Aug-26-2008   

I adore this story and all the characters. I honestly don't know which couples to vote for. - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Wahoo! Another chapter and salivating for some more.

This is suspenseful as all heck. - Anonymous - Sep-29-2008   

Oh my God!! What a wonderful story! It keeps me on the edge. Please update this more often cuz I know I'm not the only one who's tired of guessing :)) lol. SERIOUSLY, ITS A MUST READ EVEN THOUGH ITS UNFINISHED - Anonymous - Sep-30-2008   

Love what's been posted so far. Can't wait for more. - C - Sep-30-2008   

Lady J! Lady J! What a great story!!! Spring Break just keeps getting better and better!! Please continue to give us our SB fix!!! And make it soon!!! I don't think I can wait for chapter 14!!! - Terri - Sep-30-2008   

More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved it! - Anonymous - Oct-12-2008   

This is such a great story with very engaging characters, I hope the author completes the story. - Anonymous - Sep-28-2009   

I love this story - please post more - Shar - Oct-15-2009   

this story keeps you going.... more pls........ - crv - Oct-19-2009   

What a great story. I love all of them. Please, please, continue to write. - sue4rab - Oct-20-2009   

Love this story. The players are all real people. Please post more. - TJ - Oct-24-2009   

Didn't realize the story was unfinished when I started reading. Just about ruined my night when I got to the end of the page and saw "to be continued" at the bottom. I truly hope that Lady J finishes this. Over the course of the first 13 sections I've become genuinely attached to the characters & am dying to know how things work out for them. - MD - Oct-19-2010   

Love it love it love it. Please send in the finish, I can't wait. - JC - Feb-01-2011   

Love this story. Would really like it to be continued. - Anonymous - Jun-20-2011   

aaaaahhhhhh. :( its not finished what i did read i do love. Great Read! - Anonymous - May-15-2014   

Revolution by Kim Pritekel and Alexa Hoffman is a major wow! It's a lovely, sweet, tender, humorous, LONG first time novel. I couldn't put it down.I was so impressed with the strong use of first person. It's rare to read a well written 1st person uber...I loved it. The characters are well developed and the authors allow them to evolve into a partnership, rather than using the instant attraction, love at first sight motif. There were some minor editing glitches and errors, but overall, it's a fabulous read. If I were Lunacy (which I'm not) I'd give this my HIGHEST RECOMMENDATION! Run, do not walk, do not sleep, until you've read this one. - PT Martin - Sep 18th, 2003   

I have no words to do this story justic in a revue. I can only incurage you to read it.In a way I envey you. You will read this story with fresh eyes for the first time,You have a remarkebel trip ahed. ENJOY. - SammyLee - Sep 21st, 2003   

Wow, Wow, Wow... I'm going down the line on these stories and so far they're wonderful. Love the writing style, the characters, the story line. This story is one of the most wonderful stories i've read, and believe me i've read plenty. Highly recommended, Don't miss it - Heidi - Mar 3rd, 2005   

Wonderful Story! The characters are funny, enchanted, a teenage falling in love for your mother'friend. Amazing! A unforgettable story! - leth cross - Apr 30th, 2005   

Totally outstanding story, well worth staying up till 4am to finish reading it. Everyone just has to read it. - LuvTigger71 - Jul-30-2006   

Amazing story!! Highest recommendations! - Krysta - Aug-22-2006   

This story is one the best in the xenaverse! I read
several time ago, but I read again and again, because
is wonderful!!!! - lethcross - Aug-25-2006   

Love all of their work. This however is a personal favourite. At first I frowned at the summary, wondering how it w/could ever work. It does, very well. Excellent even.

Excellent story and wonderful characters.

A must read. - Ape - Feb-14-2008   

This story is wonderful! It's a beautifully written story that takes the reader for a fully believable journey. In my opinion a must read! - Jaely - Apr-09-2008   

Oh! Now THIS is one FANTASTIC story!!! I hated reaching the end as I was nowhere near ready to let go of these two characters. Loved it!!! - JC - May-31-2008   

Grrreat story. Loved it. - lyneX - Jun-06-2008   

Great story,great romance,I really enjoyed it !!! - Manuela - Oct-27-2008   

Superb story. I must have read this about four times already and it always is a refreshing, entertaining and heart warming story. Great work by the authors. More, morem more. - aj - Nov-14-2008   

Amazing!!!! - Angelicrainbw - Mar-15-2009   

this is an awesome story! - Anonymous - Mar-26-2009   

dam well written story loved it - Anonymous - Apr-05-2009   

what a wonderful story. very sweet, very believable, very wow! - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009   

Wonderful and Hot!! Great story and characters - Anonymous - Jan-23-2010   

I read this story about a year ago and it still pops in my head every now and again. I stayed with me for days after I finished reading it. It should be published. This is my favorite author! - D - Jun-13-2010   

LOVE IT! There's so much depth in the characters. I love the authors - well recommended! - Jane - Jul-04-2010   

WOW! What a story.... A-MA-ZING!!!! I LOVED it from the first paragraph to the last. This one of THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!
- Sourth Guest - Oct-12-2010   

Brilliant. It could have been dodgy, but was written carefully and with great believability. Loved it. - Silver - Nov-14-2010   

I loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

I really loved this story. Was sad to see it end. Highly recommend. - moe - Apr-18-2011   

easy read.. i missed chemistry between the two main characters.. laughed out loud with the way things ended for bill and martha, though.. - Anonymous - May-25-2011   

Dude what a great story! :D i loved this line: ''It's a love revolution. Welcome''. - braniac - Jan-13-2012   

It was a slow start, but about halfway through I was hooked. I wish it had a bit more at the end, but liked it overall. - Anonymous - May-29-2012   

Really great read loved the story ending was a bit quick but still enjoyed it xx - Anonymous - May-17-2015   

Revolution by Kim Pritekel and Alexa Hoffman, a very enjoyable read. It's all good, even to their first fight. Only real problem, the story's too short, you don't want to leave these people. It's too soon. Anyway, thank you for sharing them with us. - orcsage - May-31-2015   

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I have had occasion to feel the way the main characters did going to the family wedding, so I could easily sympathize with them. Good job! - Alex Tryst - Jan 24th, 2005   

This story is an all around winner. Lovely characters and a well told tale. Definitely a "must read" in my opinion. - Beth Goodman - Feb 3rd, 2005   

Beautiful...just beautiful - KTBard - Aug 31st, 2005   

This is so sweet, I can only wish reality occured like this. - kiwi - Sep 4th, 2005   

This is one of my favorite stories, I just love the way it works. The characters are so true, and I can identify with Wendy facing the small town. Beautifully written, what more can I say? - Libris Cat - Oct-20-2007   

Thank you. It is truly the actions of the individual towards an unjust belief that is heroic. And this fight goes on. - rleef - Sep-12-2009   

Truthful and faithful to the point. A highly recommended read, especially in times in which we need to understand one another more and let them express themselves, as it is. Love is a powerful emotion and must be allowed to be, nurture and express without prejudice or self rightheousness. - xenamary - Sep-13-2009   

This is a very heartwarming and beautiful story. The author delves into the insecurities we may have when facing the unknown. Hostile attitudes towards an alternative lifestyle is what many of us have experienced. This story left me wishing that some day soon people will be accepting and understanding. One can only hope and percevere. - vicam - Sep-27-2009   

I cannot believe that I've read Penelope all three stories in a day..!! Thank you Penelope Street, you are wonderful!! I like to read more from you... - easteden - Sep-28-2009   

Beautiful story... I liked it a lot - RLA - Aug-27-2010   

This is still one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. - Anonymous - Aug-31-2010   

This is a lovely story and well worth reading. - Lyn B - Jan-04-2011   

Sweet and comforting. We really had come a long way. I loved the story. - Alake - Jun-16-2011   

A very well written story. Great job. - sassy123 - Jul-02-2011   

i like the philosophy of this story.. i do hope it's autobiographical.. loved the way 'righteous majority' was broken down into 'never the former and no longer the latter'.. - xtra dog - Jul-16-2011   

Very sweet and yet bittersweet at the same time because we all know this doesn't happen for everyone. Great for a pick-me-up piece. - Stacia - Feb-02-2013   

FYI -- None of the links seems to be working correctly. *Shrugs* I just change the number in the url and was able to get to the next chapters. - Anonymous - Aug-10-2006   

I love these stories. They are some of my top favorites and I really hope she finishes the last one, it's great. - Netta - Sep-14-2007   

Great story, I can hardly wait for the finale - Anonymous - Feb-19-2008   

Charactor development one of the best in fan fiction. I have her first book and I will buy her next one. - Anonymous - Feb-22-2008   

Great story can't wait for the ending - Anonymous - Feb-28-2008   

can't wait till done...love it so much thanks... - Anonymous - Apr-05-2008   

I enjoyed what's here so far...I'd love to be able to finish this story...how about it author??? - JC - Apr-25-2008   

Have read the series over three times...still love it. Can't wait for it to either continue or conclude. Come on Psi, u can do it! - Cole Micheal - Jun-20-2008   

Finished, at last. I can finally exhale! Thank you for a marvelous story. I can almost feel the alternate conciousness. - Dusty - Jul-09-2008   

FYI, this story is finished (finally! *squee*), but it is marked unfinished. And also, it's just as excellent as the previous 2 in the series! - Anonymous - Sep-12-2008   

Finished reading this wonderful story. Can't wait to learn what adventures Ally finds herself in next! - ullahoo - Oct-25-2008   

Thank you for a well written series that continued having good plot lines through all three books. It was a pleasure to read and I look forward to the next installment. - Anonymous - Oct-26-2008   

Thank you for this incredible story, but please!!! I want, no I need more!!!!! - Lucian - Feb-22-2010   

Please, Please, Please send us part 1V. What a fantastic series. Superpowers, intrigue, Atlantis revisited - couldn't ask for more. Could stop until I devoured each one and now have to find out what happens next. Please don't leave us hanging. MORE - ha. - Anonymous - Apr-22-2010   

incredible series, very thought-ought and without the very, very many stupid setbacks that are common within this genre. although i didn't like every aspect of the story, it still rates a 10/10 in my opinion. thanks for every word so far and please give us (plese give ME - i'm selfish) a fourth part.

one of very few books (an that stands for each of the 3 parts so far) i would happily pay for to support the author. - ruelpskopf - Sep-11-2010   

Me too!!! i would happily pay for to support the author!!!! I want, I need 4º part!!!!!!!!! Waiting for more - Lucian - Nov-13-2011   

wow! read it again, and i still can't get enough. i think one more sequel would be good. or more... PsiDragonis, i hope ur reading this. we beg of you, pleaasseeee... like ruelpskopf said, i wouldnt mind spending a few to read ur story. - reader - Jan-30-2012   

this is an amazing story! I could not stop reading it. I can't wait for more. - Anonymous - Dec-18-2012   

What a truly wonderful series. All around great fiction. Tried to find the last book to see how it all ended. Not sure if it was finished and hoping for the final story. Please Psi Draconis spare us mere mortals and complete the story. I have truly enjoyed the journey you took us on. - colorado fan - Dec-25-2012   

great story.. but how devious of the author to state that the end was NOT the end.. sigh.. knowing that 4 and a half years have passed since this story was installed, i have little hope of reading part 4 in this series.. - xtra dog - Jan-16-2013   

OMG I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!... can't even wait for your next book to be released... i'm always on the edge of my seat for anything you write...

i just hope you can give Claire someone... it not as nice to have her in love with people that can't fully return it... i just hope that while Ally is away that they don't do something that they regret... with not being able to look Ally in the eyes...

and i do so hope that Ally will come back like herself again... i would like to see her journey...

maybe at 'home' back in Canada she could go in the woods and meet a medicine man where he tells her that hes been waiting for her... that the sky spirits has told him of her...
...that would be cool... - crazykrew - Feb-13-2013   

QUESTION... is any more going to be explained on con-cave room... the ancient ruins Ally was working on... i'd like to know what you had thought of that when in introduced it in the story... - crazykrew - Feb-13-2013   

Well written. waiting for next book! please!Thank you for sharing your gift with us. - DMGood - May-27-2014   

I just love the stories of Kim and that is even (beside "Wild") my favourite one. It is a disturbing read in parts but I really recommend it! - querdenker69 - Aug-11-2006   

This was a fantastic story, very well written and I actually cried at one stage (which I never do!!) It would have been perfect if Keller and Garrison's romantic relationship had been expanded on, rather than, I felt rushed in the last two chapters...just MHO no offence to the wonderful writers of this piece which is now one of my favourites!! - Raven - Sep-03-2006   

This is a VERY good, VERY sad story. I've went through such a range of emotion reading this that I can't begin to describe it. If you are in the mood for a tear jerker this is it. - Netta - Sep-07-2006   

I enjoy Kim's other works, but particularly liked this one. The story is well told, and the characters are very sympathetic; they drew me in! Would highly recommend this story!! - Anonymous - Oct-25-2006   

This is an amazing story! The characters are completely believable, and story was very well though out. This is one of the best I have ever read. It takes the reader through every emotion possible. Truly an amazing story! - jd - Nov-28-2006   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Garrison and Keller are really great Characters in this story. I am amazed that I have not come across this story a lot sooner. This story will make you mad, make you cry and just want to go and hold your children if you have them. I was up all night reading this story because it is Just that great!! Well done!! If you haven't read this MASTERPIECE yet, then you are truly missing out. - K. Lewis - Feb-15-2008   

This is a great story. I loved it. - lyneX - Sep-11-2008   

WOW! Great Story - Anonymous - Dec-18-2008   

I find myself completely captivated by all the stories written by this author. Have to make sure I don't start reading a new one when I have things to do 'cause I just can't stop reading once I start. Loved it! - Ginger - May-18-2009   

Amazing story....overwhelming, give me an intense emotion, wow....excellent!!!! - Lucian - Nov-16-2009   

Ohhhh... that was intense. what a wonderful story. There's a little bit of everything in here. Angst, tragedy, love, heartbreak, LOVE and romance. Thanks for great read and sharing your wonderful storytelling talent with us. - Anonymous - Apr-10-2010   

Great story. Definitely worth the read. - Tara - Apr-12-2010   

A really great great great great story. It made me cry and that is something I really do not do when I read a story. - sassy123 - Jul-15-2010   

A really great great great great story. It made me cry and that is something I really do not do when I read a story. - sassy123 - Jul-15-2010   

I really loved this story> Keep up the good work - sassy123 - Aug-08-2010   

Damn it! I have no idea how you do it, but I can't stop reading! Just finished reading this gem and I am surprised it hasn't gotten more comments. Common guys!I very much respect and I bend the knees before talent of Kim. My most favourite books "Revolution" and "Wild", these stories have blown my mind. This story, of course, very emotional. Atmosphere is transferred well, characters are deep, well developed and believable, I felt heroes as real, a plot will develop in good rate. I often would like to pass to other page at reading fanfiction because dialogues or are banal and boring, or the plot is too predicted and it becomes again boring and again this damned feeling of a deja vu. But here I have read all from chapter 1 and to last. Only, it would be desirable to see more about romantic relations of Keller and Garrison, their feelings and as they go with it, therefore the end has seemed crumpled, and there was a feeling something lost... And I also don't deny that my eyes were filled with tears when I read this, that says that the author is able to influence the reader and knows as to tell a drama. This story will leave nobody indifferent.
I'm not able to write the good review, sorry, but I think, it is amazing and very talented work from the amazing author. BRAVO, Kim, and many THANKS to you!!!
I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys a good tale!

PS: Sorry for my English. It is not my native language.

- Akaisha - Nov-16-2010   

Brilliant. You two write this type of story so well. - Silver - Nov-16-2010   

Yes Read this story! Just finished it. I loved the well written characters, the story flow and the writing. Its top notch! Thanks for the gift of Keller's, Monk's and Parkers's story. Kim and Alexa you have done it again. Keep up the great work!! - Tena - Dec-13-2010   

A love story led in a very credible way, with endearing characters, and well writen, as usual with these authors. - Anonymous - May-04-2011   

This story is truly amazing. A great read, didn't want to stop reading. - Em - Jun-28-2011   

fantastic story.. really loved the last part of it.. a very unusual ending.. too bad i had read another story featuring keller and garrison (my favourite, btw) in a cameo before reading this story.. resulting in my having a good clue of the romantic involvements before they came about.. teach me to read stories by the same author in terms chronology instead of alphabetically.. - xtra dog - Jul-08-2011   

I loved this story. I could not put it down!! Sequel? - ChakramGirl - Nov-27-2011   

Now this is what i call a true story. The feelings so raw and poignant definitely had tears in my eyes a few times. A totally moving and compelling read. - Niyah - Sep-04-2012   

Like any good story this one leaves you wanting more, that feeling of 'What did they do next???'
Beautifully written, emotional and very rewarding.
On my top ten for sure. - Amphipolis Heart - Nov-26-2014   

Amazing story very emotional at times I can say I shed a tear reading this story well done on writing this lovely story xx - SD - May-18-2015   

This is one extraordinary reading experience. WoW, what an amazing story ! After being forced to leave it due to everyday duties, you can't wait to pick it up and pursue it late into the night, it's so good ! - orcsage - Jun-08-2015   

I just read this again for the umpteenth time in as many years and it always touches me. What an amazing tale and it brings tears to my eyes each time I read it. Well done. - Kelly Aten - Jul-18-2016   

Wow. was up all night reading this. The story evoked a gamut of emotions. From tears to out and out laughter, this well told tale had it all. A real pleasure and privilege to have been able to read. - Starr - Aug-12-2017   

One of my favorites! - Colorado fan - Aug-31-2017   

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Great light-hearted story. - jd - Mar-18-2007   

Oh My God! That was absolutely hilarious! I really, REALLY laughed......like OUT LOUD!
Thank you for making my day, I so needed that! - Kathy - Mar-18-2007   

Was looking for a nice little bedtime story. Saw this one, a couple of decent reviews. short story, great title (really great title by the way), thought hey, this looks like a good one.
Sometimes I get lucky.
This was adorable! GREAT dialog! Fun characters! And toilet humor to boot! This is BEGGING for a sequel. Pleaseeeeee, write me another bedtime story. - Anonymous - Mar-19-2007   

For everybody who loved this story... There are two more installments and they are equally funny and had also great titles:
http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/a/aurelia_tabledancing.html
http://academyofbards.org/specials/valentines07/aurelia_everythingyouwantedtoknow.html - Anonymous - Mar-20-2007   

Did you say SEQUELS? The thing, you know "the thing" with the toilet and the chicken....trying not to spoil it here. But, my God. That was damn funny. What was even funnier is that I could see myself under the same circumstances doing the same things. The insane things rational ordinary people do when faced with irrational extraordinary situations! THANK YOU! It was delightful! Hopefully you can squeeze another one of these little treasures out of that creative little mind of yours. I will be looking forward to it! - cj - Mar-22-2007   

Very, very, very funny! We need "funny" more often! Thanks! - cc - Apr-09-2007   

great little series that bring much laughter into my day! Love the bickering between the Dylan and Priory. Can't wait for the next of the series. - blaze - Apr-11-2007   

OMG---This was a hoot!
OMG---There's more! - JD - Apr-15-2007   

This series is absolutely hilarious!! I could not stop reading it, and I was left wanting more. Fantastic writing, and wonderful characters. Take some time to read this awesome story, you won't be sorry! - Otter - Apr-23-2008   

this was so silly. I read the whole series and and loved it. The chicken had me laughing my a$$ off. - k.lewis - May-18-2008   

Stories and ghosts and women? And yet somehow it works brilliantly... - AJ - Aug-06-2008   

The ghostest with the mostest. - Anonymous - Jan-20-2009   

I had avoided this series until now and boy am I kicking myself for waiting so long. This author had me in stitches!!! Best of all there were more of them to read well into the night. Is there another one coming soon? A++++ for making my day (and night)!!! - Anonymous - Oct-29-2009   

omg... this was sooo funny the people at work thought i'd gone crazy laughing at my computer screen... - estillore - Dec-27-2009   

Very off the wall tale that was funny and very entertaining.I found it to be an enjoyable story to read. - uber goober - Aug-08-2010   

HILARIOUS!! And so refreshing! Thank you for that little gem! - ET from France - Sep-24-2010   

I have posted a new Priory/Jacey story at the Academy in the Halloween Invitational. Link: http://www.academyofbards.org/halloween/2011/aurelia_flushedwithsuccess.html.

- Aurelia - Nov-07-2011   

Wowwww!!! This story is amazing, with characters intenses, very well written, impossible stop to read before the end!!
Amazing!!! - Leth Cross - Jul-24-2007   

I've had the pleasure of knowing Cheyne slightly longer than forever, served with her in the military and spent many wonderful hours laughing and talking and throwing bad guys up against walls with her. Trust me, she knows what she's writing about here. Reading anything she writes is terrific, and this work is no exception. Do yourself a major favor and read everything with her name on it - including a laundry list if it's available. Cheyne could make that sexy and riveting - she's that good. - notelmerfudd - Jul-27-2007   

Oh yes, this is such a great story. So much fun to read. I put it right next to "and playing the role of herself". Thank you so much, can't wait for your laundry list.
(smile;-) - 29 July 2007 - Inge - Jul-29-2007   

aww, i loved it! sequel maybe? - Anonymous - Aug-04-2007   

WOW!!! Exciting, suspenseful, sexy and daring!! Plenty of characters to love and a couple to hate. A must read from a spectatular author. Thanks Cheyne!!! - VTXSIP - Aug-16-2007   

Cheyne is a master writer. I have read all of her posted work; each story is a masterpiece. Her grammar is exquisite. Her characters entrancing. Her stories--her stories engage you, enchant you--they enthrall.

I am grateful to have had the chance to read such work. - discretemage - Aug-28-2007   

WOW!!! Another home run from Cheyne! These characters are so well drawn and visual I felt like I was watching a movie. That combined with Cheyne's amazing attention to detail makes for a fantastic story. It's a very well written and thought out suspenseful, sexy, passionate story. I loved the quotes at the beginning of each section and appreciated the full cirle Cheyne created with the first and last lines of the story. This is one for the library. Thanks Cheyne!!! - puddle jumper - Aug-31-2007   

EXCELLENT story!!!
Well written, well researched, and better than many published books in this genre. - Balmain - Jan-11-2008   

I have read it again. It is still one of the best stories. Next to.... and Playing the Roll of.... Great story! Love your style. Hot. Thank you for this. - Bernette - May-11-2008   

Great story! One of the best I have read in the genre.Love your work. - Lee - Jul-30-2008   

I think I read this story almost a year ago, and I STILL remember practically all the plot details! It says a lot when you read tons of fanfiction and still remember some of them, lol. Mainly, I just want to say that this is a very compelling story and I recommend it. Both characters are memorable, they're not cliché, and it's very well written. I loved the romance. And good sex. :P - Vanessa V. - Aug-27-2008   

I'm hooked...where's the rest of the story? - rusty - Jan-11-2009   

WOW!!! Exciting, suspenseful, sexy and daring!! Plenty of characters to love and a couple to hate. A must read from a spectatular author. Cheyne, You're the best!!!!!! - Leth Cross - Mar-17-2009   

Absolutely wonderful! This story had me up till 3am. I recommend it to anyone. - Syro - Jun-29-2009   

OMG! Fantastic!!! - Pearl - Jul-15-2009   

This one really rocks! - Anonymous - Jul-23-2009   

I thought after reading Renegade you couldn't do again,
boy was I wrong. This one is just as brillant. Now I am going to read anything with your name on it. - Loving Cheyne - Jul-23-2009   

Amazing, you'll love it. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Brillant!! - Wolfie67 - Jan-09-2010   

Ex CIA Tia Ramone lands herself in a whole lot of trouble. As she struggles to find her way out of it her life takes an unexpected turn. This is punchy, thrilling and hot! - Sai - Jan-27-2010   

One of my all-time fave Cheyne stories. She really should turn this one into a book. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

Very good story. Loved the plot! - Freya - Jun-15-2010   

Fantastic story by a great writer!! More please!?! - JC - Jul-18-2010   

oh, my, my. what a story. i absolutely adore the fact that fiction does not need extraneous violence, action, etc., to be thrilling and down-right captivating. a+ with a smiley. - kc - Sep-06-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. A job well done. - sassy123 - Sep-11-2010   

Holy fantastical story!! Could not stop reading. Just so good! - Anonymous - Jan-21-2011   

i'm on a total Cheyne-fic bender this week and this one did not disappoint. Another compelling storyline with great characters (and some wonderfully hot sex! ... did i say that outloud? LOL!) - Michelle - Apr-09-2011   

...a great story to read over and over again by Cheyne!! - zieta - Jul-11-2011   

Very good story well worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Jul-23-2011   

Very well written and compelling story. I love the flaws of Tia's character. I mean she is far from a perfect person and yet is a hero I could get behind. Great story thank you. - Jen - Mar-19-2012   

nice read.. even after a second reading when all the suspense is gone.. loved this line: 'Noises started rising from her belly that could have rivaled the beginning of an MGM movie'.. - xtra dog - Mar-28-2012   

Wow, Cheyne does it again. Really enjoyed reading Renegade and Clandestine is even better! Yup, she's a lifelong friend, but even if she wasn't, I'd be saying the same things! - Sydney - Jan-03-2013   

What an awesome story! Don't keep us waiting too long for Book 2. - Anonymous - Aug-18-2008   

I really enjoyed this story and I can't wait for the sequel. - Netta - Aug-18-2008   

What a great beginning. Her adventures look like being one wild ride! - xegirl - Aug-19-2008   

Fantastic beginning! I have to go read more!! - dawnsue - Aug-20-2008   

A very intriguing story that has the potential to be a fascinating series. Polar opposites finding a way to work together. I loved the interactions between Jordana and Beri. - wasabigirl - Aug-22-2008   

This is a great beginning to what is shaping up to be an exciting series. Keep them coming! - mel - Aug-24-2008   

The future as it could be. Looking forward to the next installment. Good job - grace - Aug-25-2008   

Great story, sequel soon, pleaseeeeee - Anonymous - Aug-25-2008   

Im not really into science fiction, however this is a very good story. Fast paced and leaves you wanting more! - icelover - Aug-27-2008   

A cracking good story! Can't wait to see what happens next. - dot - Aug-28-2008   

Very gritty, and lots of fun. I can't wait for more in the series! - Anonymous - Sep-03-2008   

This is a breath of fresh air. I find that science fiction, by its very nature, is 'de-humanizing', so to find a sci-fi story that manages to hold onto its 'humanity'is exciting. It's well worth a read even for those who don't particularly like science fiction. So GO READ IT!!!! - sheaz - Sep-08-2008   

It's like the old-time RKO serials where you can't wait for the next installment. It will be soon, right? - Anonymous - Sep-23-2008   

What a great story! Looking forward to the next installment! - jen - Sep-27-2008   

fantastic - Anonymous - Sep-28-2008   

Another winner from this fantastic author, You cannot go wrong in reading anything she has written. Read this, then read them all, she will not disapoint. - icelover - Sep-29-2008   

Wow! what a great story! The whole series promises to be one hell of a ride. I thoroughly recommend this, and any of this writer's work, who wants a break from reality. Excellent! - jane - Oct-05-2008   

It's a sort of Indiana Jones meets Star Wars meets X:WP. And it's a very enjoyable ride. Worth a read. - maamaa - Oct-09-2008   

A compelling first chapter to a potentially great series. More please!!! - Jo - Oct-14-2008   

I thoroughly enjoyed this rollicking space adventure. Can't wait for the next installment. - kristy E - Oct-27-2008   

This story is a jem. Brimming with pace, action and humour, it introduces you to a loveable rogue and her nefarious adversary. - ab - Nov-15-2008   

I can't wait for the next chapter in this series. It's shaping up to be an epic adventure with a heroine who's anything but an angel. Well done. - Anonymous - Nov-25-2008   

This tale is like a Chinese baqnquet... it has left me wanting more. I hope that Aurelia continues the journey soon. She has me involved in the lives of these characters and I want to know how it works out. - grayowl - Nov-27-2008   

For science fiction it is a breath of fresh air. I don't normally read sci-fi but I am thoroughly enjoying this one. - heather - Nov-27-2008   

I LOVE this story! Is Book 2 coming out anytime soon? I can't wait!!!! - deb - Jan-19-2009   

I'm not one for sci-fi but this tale is excellent, injecting a 'common' touch to the story-telling and making it reader-friendly for ALL tastes. DON"T MISS THIS ONE. - Anonymous - Feb-13-2009   

This was very good and wondered if Book 2 has come out yet. - Anonymous - Mar-06-2009   

Highly recommended... both book on and book 2 in this series are fantastic. I cared a lot about the main character, she kind of reminded me of Han Solo, you know a bit rough around the edges but caring... after a while. Great sense of humour though out... well done Aurelia... I can't wait for more. - dragon_grrl - Apr-23-2009   

A great read and a very interesting story. Thank you. - RB - Apr-25-2009   

This is story that can not be by passed it is wonderful and Book 1 is just the beginning. A must read.... - Linn - May-06-2009   

I came across this series one evening, and it had me up till 5am. It was that good. You will thank me for the recommendation. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Absolutely loved this series so far and can't wait for more. Just enough insight into this world to beable to emerse yourself but not so much that you get bogged down in them. Well pased stories that are building up to the final confrontation. I would recommend to any one. Well done bard, well done! - Anonymous - Feb-25-2010   

I found this one started off a little slow,but it definitely picked up speed and my interest as it went along. There certainly are some unexpected twists and turns in this one and I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where it's going to eventually end up. - uber goober - Aug-17-2010   

Having read the new instalment to the series, I went back and re-read the story so far. It was even better the second time round!! - marciev - Apr-27-2011   

I've just finished reading everything listed here by this fabulous author and am so wishing there were more! This series is so smart, sensual, intriguing, heart wrenching...I couldn't put it down but hated for it to end. Would love to read more! - Ginger - May-29-2011   

Just finished reading this fantastic series. Thank you for the recommendation or I would have missed this wonderful author. I never watched the TV show, didn't really know what to expect... sometimes its good to not have any expectations. The series is a wonderful journey for strong female characters who we can watch grow over time. It definitely pulls you in and is something to sink your teeth in for a nice lovely read. Highly recommended. Thank you BG for sharing your talent with us here. Hoping for more to come from you in this series. - colorado fan - Jul-11-2011   

Just finished reading this fantastic series. Thank you for the recommendation or I would have missed this wonderful author. I never watched the TV show, didn't really know what to expect... sometimes its good to not have any expectations. The series is a wonderful journey for strong female characters who we can watch grow over time. It definitely pulls you in and is something to sink your teeth in for a nice lovely read. Highly recommended. Thank you BG for sharing your talent with us here. Hoping for more to come from you in this series. - colorado fan - Jul-11-2011   

this is a fantastic, sharply written story--I have no idea where it's headed, but what great ride! - mary - Sep-22-2009   

this story is amazing.... can't wait for the next installment. - Anonymous - Sep-22-2009   

Well, just a brief mesage to encourage this extremely talented bard o continue this surprising story and to encourage fellow readers to delve into this rich work. The first installments are so promising that I can hardly wait for what's coming. - Anonymous - Sep-23-2009   

Xcellent story line.. hope it gonna be made into movie or television. :) - Nien aka David - Sep-30-2009   

captivating! one of the bests stories here. - Anonymous - Oct-05-2009   

amazing update as always. thoroughly recommend it... - Anonymous - Oct-08-2009   

Wow, really good... - Anonymous - Oct-08-2009   

Why this story isn't in the top 25 and/or best rated lists - that is something I don't understand. Because it is extremely well-written by a pewrson who knows more than 200 words in English, it has a strong plot, fine characterization and excellent dialogue. It's romantic without being obvious, with the exact amount oh humour (mainly from the dialogues), hurt, and, above all, a love for life.
Read it, girls. It's a refreshing dose of intelligence in the fanfic world. - the_waves - Oct-12-2009   

definitely one of the finest stories here. it's original, it's smart, and it's passionate. - Anonymous - Oct-13-2009   

This story has a perfect balance of humor, gravitas and scintillating passion. India and Jude are fascinating characters that are fully fleshed out and richly drawn. Not only does it entertain, it succeeds in making you really think about the world and the place these two women have in it. Superb. - Kerowyn - Oct-13-2009   

Wow! That was my first reaction when I was done reading this story. K. is an amazing writer. The characters are slowly and well developed as is their relationship. Crafting something new is challenging and risky and yet this effort appears to be seamless. - Kali - Oct-14-2009   

**** Spoiler Alert **** Heartbreakingly beautiful. It's been hours since i finished reading it, and it still lingers...not just the memory of it, no... but more so the passion, the rawness, and intensity that it made me feel. It's a bittersweet surrender to love, life, and destiny.

I'll always choose to dream of seeing Ms Waits rise like a phoenix. In my mind, she's the hero that lived forever, with her love by her side. - grey - Oct-14-2009   

Man, oh MAN! Perfect ending!!!! - Anonymous - Oct-14-2009   

excellent - Anonymous - Oct-15-2009   

Once in a while you come across a true gem...simply superb writing and a unique story to remember. Thanks and keep it coming! - OmisLiebling - Oct-15-2009   

WOW! Thank you. - Sherry - Oct-15-2009   

This story is profoundly beautiful. Just read it. - siggy - Oct-16-2009   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - Phenomenal piece. (Concise yes, but no other words are needed. READ IT). - Anna Lei - Oct-16-2009   

This story lingers long after you have finished reading. It's like when you stop to watch a cloud move across the sky and don't understand why you're crying. - Michi - Oct-16-2009   

Excellent work! Passionate and extremely moving! Thanks for sharing your work. :D - Chess - Oct-18-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Incredibly moving, but so sad. Very unique style. - Xenasgrrl - Oct-18-2009   

I loved it. The characters are so well developed and complex. I would love to meet them. The story has lingered with me all weekend, a true test of a very good story. Thanks KA - Ramsey - Oct-19-2009   

Impressive. Some of the most engaging dialogue I've ever read. Thought provoking and I agree with previous comments...it is a story that lingers with you. - Anonymous - Oct-21-2009   

I am an avid reader and must say this is one of the best stories I've read in a LONG time. This story should be published....great story!!!! - Bkwrmchar - Oct-21-2009   

Wow, this was an amazing and moving story. The love the two characters bring to life for you to enjoy is wrenching in its depths and vitality to go on.
Well done Ms. Alexander. Brava! - Cas - Oct-31-2009   

where/when can I buy this book? - Anonymous - Nov-01-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** I almost didn't get past the first paragraph as the style is not something I'm used to reading. So glad I stuck it out. It just really works for this story.
I hate to cry..I mean I REALLY hate it and right now I'm sitting at my desk trying to hold back the tears buts it's totally worth it to have been moved so much by this fantastic story. - Red - Nov-05-2009   

5 Stars is not enough.
This talented author should be writing movie scripts.I would love to see this story on "the big screen"
Thanks,Pat - PAT - Nov-14-2009   

Reading this story was one of those unique moments when you realize that you have in front of you a genuine work of art and each second spent reading it becomes a precious moment you wish you could prolongue. Mere words do not seem enough to describe the talent I believe this author has, and humbled, all I can say is thank you. I loved it. - Mary - Dec-02-2009   

I can name on one hand the stories which have touched me fundementally and this is definately one of them. Beautifully written, the author does an amazing job portraying the emotions the protagonist must deal with. In the end, it's a tale about unconditional, and eternal love. I HIGHLY recommend this to anyone who wishes to have a story touch them in such a rare way. - Yuri - Jan-12-2010   

So well written. Thank you. - Anonymous - Apr-19-2010   

So well written. Thank you. - Anonymous - Apr-19-2010   

All I can say is ....wow! - JettBlk - Jul-30-2010   

All I can say is ....wow! - JettBlk - Jul-30-2010   

For a long time avoid reading this story. Not quite sure why. Today I have the answer. Reading this story was somewhat fluid, and reach the end without realizing it. After reading the last row, time was suspended. A few pages touched me in a unique way. Left speechless. I think that subconsciously I knew, before I start reading this story. Bittersweet, but beautiful end. - Lucian - Aug-01-2010   

Excellent! Great and moving story. Absolutely amazing writing. - RhB - Aug-05-2010   

This was just beautiful. - Wolf - Sep-15-2010   


What a brilliant story. Somewhat bittersweet though. Brilliant nonetheless. I always think, 'what if'. - Jane - Oct-02-2010   

Wow! This is a must READ! So moving! K. Alexander, you have truly written an unconventional story that will be remembered. Even the style of writing is unique. Love is powerful moving force! Fantastic Job! - Tena - Dec-27-2010   

When I began to read this, I wasn't so enthousiastic. I was a little unsettled by the narration, and this Paul character was positively infuriating. But then, the whole thing began to settle, the whole pieces came into place and then I was able to truly apreciate the genius that is this bard. I've read in previous recommendation that the dialogues were excellent and I so absolutely agree with that! The chemistry just seemed to flow between the characters, bringing this unexplanable intensity to it all. I found myself breathless a few times, completely blown away by the mere words, touch between them. Reading this is a very powerfull experiment, I can not think af a better word to qualify this piece of work. It's powerfull. Powerfull with meaning, with passion, with aching. I'm still shaken, a bit out of my thoughts... Read this. This kind of work has to be aknowledged. - yuka - Dec-29-2010   

This has to be the most perfect story. Passion, angst, humanity, love, longing; it had everything. Like nothing I've ever read. I admit I was skeptical at first, but it comes together so perfectly. Don't give up on it just continue reading. You won't be sorry. I promise. - D - Jan-12-2011   

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you. - C - Jan-25-2011   

It's pretty darn rare to read a story that is both humourous and soul-reaching at the same time. The ending broke my heart in the most wonderful way. Amazingly well written.
- Michelle - Apr-09-2011   

Truly one of the best pieces of fiction you will ever read. Do not miss this. - Mysfyt - Apr-10-2011   

Thank you for reaching out and touching us all with this beautiful story. Words will do no justice and my tears are still falling as I write this. Thank you! - Dawn - May-08-2011   

WOW! This story stayed with me for days after I read it. - Anonymous - May-28-2011   

Such a beautiful story! Starts off a little difficult, but I'm so glad I stuck with it. Hope it gets published sometime! - Sam - Aug-07-2011   

Great story!! - Anonymous - Sep-14-2011   

Sigh...wow! This is one that really pulls at you in every way...and you feel it leave its mark. Beautiful, Powerful, Moving. - Fern - Oct-27-2011   

Excellent writing style. And the story is simply beautiful. Thank you K Alexander - tungfu - Nov-04-2011   

So incredibly beautiful. Read it if you haven't yet. It's totally worth it. - Elle - Dec-07-2011   

There aren't enough superlatives for this story! Just go read it. I hope K. Alexander never stops writing! - e - Dec-24-2011   

This is a wonderfully woven story. The characters jump vivdly from the page only to be proven more complex and human than first impression. Paired with an invoking story and a touching love, this is a must read. - Anonymous - Mar-24-2012   

Very thought provoking. A truly Powerful story. Thank you writer for sharing your gift. - Mica - May-25-2012   

Beautiful. "I'm the one who loves her." Read it. - Anonymous - Sep-06-2012   

BRILLIANT!! I'm not usually one for the supernatural but I LOVED this!!! Wonderfully written and so profound with the emotions. Thank you. - Niyah - Sep-12-2012   

What a beautiful story, just beautiful. Loved every moment of it! - Clare - Oct-08-2012   

This was an absolutely brilliant piece of work. The writing was incredible and the characters well developed. It is definitely a must-read. - YaddaYadda - Oct-14-2012   

Amazing story - so vivid I felt like I was watching a movie as it unfolded. I wish it was twice as long so the journey wouldn't have to come to an end yet! Recommend it wholeheartedly! - Anonymous - Jan-02-2013   

Beautyfull - Anonymous - Jan-04-2013   

Amazing story...so incredibly touching. I was pleasantly surprised by it - Sky - Jul-30-2014   

Beautiful writing and characters. At the end I burst into tears. - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

Incredibly great writing. So many visually miraculous scenes as if you, the reader, was there, living inside the scene with all of your senses. Good, profound characters ; you will deeply care about them.
- orcsage - Feb-01-2015   

I wanted to believe all these reviews and kept reading. At the end I wondered if all these revews were for a different story. i scratch my head because when i finished this story I was reminded of the cliche 'a tempest in a tea cup'. Lots of build up and this story went no where. SpOiLeR! It also had the worst ending, to make matters more puzzling: why all the great accolades and reviews??? - Samantha Carter - Feb-05-2015   

Brilliant! The banter was exceptional, my heart ached for some time after though, not to mention the tears I cried. - Dy J - Oct-08-2019   

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WONDERFUL...just WONDERFUL!!! - JC - Mar-22-2013   

Fantastic Read!!! - Anonymous - May 26th, 2004   

If you liked Surfacing, be sure and read the sequel Persistence of Memory. This is a great background story regarding Diana's past. - gail - May 29th, 2004   

If you liked Surfacing you'll love this one kinda reminded me of FIN. Please keep writing & posting your great works. - Lysia - Sep-14-2009   

again, this story, and it's predecessor, Surfacing, is one the most elegantly brilliant pieces of fanfic out there. - Anonymous - Sep-15-2009   

I loved the sequel. I can't get enough of Charlie and Diana! I would love for their story to continue on! What talented writers! - Anonymous - Sep-17-2009   

Great tale. I liked it better than the first. Had me on the edge of my seat. Please continue with Charlie and Diana's stories. It was a wonderful ride. - Anonymous - Apr-12-2010   

Just finished reading both in this series. Well written, I hope the story continues cause I like the characters, all of them. - ~M - Jul-23-2011   

what a wonderful story...one of the best i've read! - hera - Nov 10th, 2004   

i quite literally stumbled upon this over at the bard's corner and absolutely fell in love. what a fun story! - jumper23 - Mar-10-2008   

I can't believe this story hasn't been rated more! This is one of the best pieces of fanfiction around. I love the characterizations and this story is so witty and hilarious and at the same time so romantic! I would love to read a sequel . Everyone do yourself a favor and read this wonderful story! - Anonymous - Sep-25-2009   

very fun to read. terrific piece of writing with memorable characters. - kc - Jan-23-2011   

A very funny story. Great job - sassy123 - May-11-2011   

very witty.. in the beginning it had me chuckling constantly and then i was swept away by the romance.. - xtra dog - May-22-2013   

Everything this person writes is outstanding! - Anonymous - Jan 27th, 2003   

The best Janice and Mel story anywhere bar none. This is truly a wonderfully written fiction with enough humour, action, romance and the ever loveable rogue Janice for even the most ardent of fans.
Viv is a genius and I think this is going to be the last fanfiction for a long while from her. So I suggest when you read it, cherish it, then read it again.

Wonderful stuff. - Kez - Sep-24-2006   

Not just the best Mel/Janice or one of the best Xena fics, but some of the best writing online or off. Period. Beautifully written, perfect characterization and a sweeping, epic story that spans millenia, this is it. And it just gets better if you read it with Darkbloom's other Mel/Janice fic because they are all entertwined. - leavethesky - Oct-06-2006   

Darkbloom has imagined a hauntingly vivid Janice and Mel epic. Some of the best writing ever, especially if you like a bit of literature with your fanfic. This story, the whole series, will leave you bewitched by its grandeur and simplicity because as Grabrielle says, in a back story interlude, what really mattered was that she loved and was loved. Believe me, Vivian will break your heart wide open! - 3creeks - Nov-16-2006   

Vivian Darkbloom is a outstanding writer of Mel/Janice fanfiction period. It is adventure, humor, plot, magnificent characterization,etc...entc.. and of eppic standart.
You do well to read Vivian's other Mel/Janice works because they are all enterwined, creating a life story for two of the uber characters of the television show Xena: Warrior Princess
A most read!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Callisto - Mar-02-2008   

amazing!!! it made me cry, seriously you have to read this series, you won't regret it!!! - dalila - Nov-26-2008   

This story Will put you through emotional roller coaster. You will experience everything from humor to dread and back again. Unless your heart is made of stone this author will make you feel what her characters are going through. Perhaps one day Ms Darkbloom will give us another ride on the fictional roller coaster. - Anonymous - Dec-13-2008   

This is a wonderful series. If you are a Janice and Melinda fan then i urge you read "The Sercet Histories", followed by "Venezia", before you read "Coup de Grace" , You will be gripped.Ms Darkbloom draws you in and holds you. excellent read. - Jan&Mel fan - Jan-07-2009   

I finally succumed to the pull of giving a Mel and Janice story a go. I had been resisting it for years. So I stumbled on this on first and from the first words, I consumed it like I hadn't eaten in weeks. This story is so unbelievably fantastic that it has probably ruined me ever giving any other M&J story a chance. The writer has written such a rich tapestery of character with these women that I absolutly lothe to watch them go. I want to drown my self pity in a good bottle of bourbon. - Anonymous - Aug-12-2010   

this is a great m/j trilogy. Gives a really good history of Mel and Janice. Made me weep at the end. I would really like to get to know Francesca better and her life into the future. What about a sequel? - rleef - Dec-16-2010   

I absolutely love this series. The best versions of Mel and Janice out. Totally enthralling, as are all of Vivian's stories. A must read. - Niyah - Jan-06-2013   

This series is so complex. I laughed, I cried and was emotionally drained at the end. Fantastic. Thank you so much.
- Kaylis - Jan-12-2013   

Definitely the best story of Xenaverse I've ever read. - A. - Dec-14-2013   

Melissa never disappoints! Terrors of the High Seas takes us on a wild ride into the never ending exploits of Dar Roberts and Kerry Stuart. Certainly two of my favorite ladies!! I so love this series!!! - JC - Oct-23-2008   

I remember when I read this serie... I was so caught I was really sad when I reached the end. I felt a little empty for a few minutes and I still missing Dar and Kelly pretty much. I'm not some kind of maniac or something! It's all Melissa's fault!
I wish could be the half of the talented bard she is...
Thank you for the sooooo many hours I passed enjoying the beautiful gift you gave us all. - yuka - Jun-14-2009   

I'm a huge fan of Zuke's, and the "Dear Booger Letters" are a laugh! Short, sweet, sometimes filled with bitterness (and vomit). "Dear Booger Letters" are the answer to what a lesbian does on vacation. A must-read! - Taleweaver - Oct 23rd, 2002   

Loved the story. How I wish that I could have witnessed the pool scene in actuality, with my jar of peanuts and tall glass of ice tea. - Michelle - Nov 6th, 2003   

A feel good story, loved it, had me laughing real hard. Is there an encore in the works? - B - Apr 23rd, 2005   

dead link. [Editor's Note: Fixed. 1-19-2010] - Anonymous - Jan-18-2010   

this story is flipping hilarious. the writer's use of words is inspired. - kc - Jan-10-2011   

This is a great story that is sure to make you laugh! - Anonymous - Oct-30-2011   

Funny & sweet! - Anonymous - Jan-22-2012   

I loved this story. I can't say for anyone else's tastes but I'm gonna rate this high. It was funny, so very funny. I love humor once in a while and this was a great pick me up. I recommend reading this! - Zero - Nov-04-2012   

ok, after reading this story for the third time i'm finally putting in my two cents of comment.. i laughed out loud the first time.. i chuckled the second time.. i smiled the third time.. i adore the way jaz writes to booger.. it is so authentic and humorous.. this story gets top rating from me.. seriously, just read it.. multiple times!! - xtra dog - Jun-11-2013   

Woo, what a funny one! Definitely reminds me of U-Haul Lesbians. Do not read at work because the coworkers will look at you funny when you snort and laugh. - Stacia - Jun-12-2013   

Woo, what a funny one! Definitely reminds me of U-Haul Lesbians. Do not read at work because the coworkers will look at you funny when you snort and laugh. - Stacia - Jun-12-2013   

OMG !! I'm going to go try that TONITE !!! Great PWP !! - Horny1 - May 21st, 2003   

Nice story. HOT! - Luv N Her - May 21st, 2003   

Will you send me step-by-step instructions for that technique? - Seeking - May 21st, 2003   

I'm not saying whether my partner and I pulled this one off or not. What I am saying is that we are in fact giving serious thought to putting this obvious genius writer, (who, btw, should have her imagination bronzed), in our will. This has to be the hottest, PWP I've read in a long time. - Kaye - Jun 18th, 2003   

Holy. Effing. Shit. That was INCREDIBLE!!! - Anonymous - Nov 30th, 2005   

WOW! - Anonymous - Oct-16-2009   

Oh my ... sign me up for the complete instructions too. Whew! Where is that Amazon ice truck when you need it. - Georgia - May-06-2010   

Hot! hot! Hot! - Starry - Aug-02-2010   

Whew! Definitely something *to* try at home. - Anonymous - Apr-21-2011   

Wow, what a great story. - sassy123 - Jun-04-2011   

instruction manual, anyone?? i'll take it.. :) - xtra dog - Sep-07-2011   

WHOA! Holy crap! I SO need to switch teams!! - TK Vix - Dec-06-2011   

=))=))=))it really cracked me up, you should really try this, ummm... the story too... =))=))=)) - braniac - Jan-15-2012   

Among the best stories in this archive. Perfect 10s! - Anonymous - Mar-28-2008   

In a word...magical! Drew me in from the very first paragraph and kept me completely engrossed to the very last. I'm surprised there isn't a string of praises listed here...I'm proud to be one of the first. Read this and be engrossed! - JC - Aug-19-2008   

AMAZING!I couldn't stop reading.A must read.I cried I laughed I wanted the story to never end.I loved and can't wait to read the sequal. - Samantha Brown - Oct-05-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** A very good fic. A true Uber. Keeps you on the edge of your seat. I did not like the way it ended though. It felt rushed. Over all a great thriller. - Amanda - Dec-06-2008   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** Great work! I'm not very fond of the end... think it's kindda too simplistic BUT I really enjoyed this fiction. Xena's inner struggling is just incredibly well depicted and I've felt very in touch with the original character. I think SMB managed to recreate the same despair, the same impression of loss as ones Xena felt when gadrielle died (after throwing herself and Hope into the burning pit). Episodes that followed, were some of the most intense and touching ones of the whole serie. I felt the same way reading this. The pain is beautiful, the desire magnificent... The shining, perfect, so damn sweet and irresistible Xena is back! Thanks to the bard... - yuka - Oct-19-2009   

Thank you Susanne for the excellent stories. A must read. loved it and its sequel. Especially loved the ending. - Anonymous - Oct-20-2009   

One of if not the best pieces of FF out there!! This story is wonderful, emotional, sweet, sexy, adventurous, I could go on and on but just read this story!! Susanne is my favorite FF author hands down!! I would love it if she would write more FF!! - Anonymous - Jan-25-2010   

One of the best stories I've ever read ! Brilliant ! Beautiful ! - Anonymous - Feb-26-2011   

Wow....what a great read! Definitely a favorite. A must read. - Tracey - Feb-28-2011   

Great story!!! Don't keep us waiting for more - Traveller - Mar-12-2010   

I adore thys couple!! Their emotional and sexual connection is somethyng we all strive for!! Two live wires! More Please! - Tee* - Jul-15-2010   

Hot, Hot, Hot.... loved these sexy short stories. Terri and Charlie are the balm ! - Anonymous - Oct-12-2010   

I really enjoyed this series I'd like to see it continued. Good job of pwp story telling DS Bauden. - uber goober - Jan-04-2012   

i've really enjoyed this series.. terri and charlie make a very cute couple.. i hope there will be more stories featuring these characters.. - xtra dog - May-23-2013   

Wow. That's the first word that popped into my head after I read this story. It is THE best post-FIN story I have ever read. It doesn't cut corners; it doesn't spare emotion--yet it doesn't go overboard. The writing itself is fabulous, some of the smoothest and most...bard-like I've read. And the ending is so satisfying! I cannot wait to see more from this wonderful author. - Anonymous - Mar-17-2006   

Distraught after watching FIN for the first time in December 06..I was pointed to this story by a friend...It filled me with hope and renewed my faith in the natural order of how things should be..beautifully crafted and skilfully written... - Mel - Feb-11-2007   

I truly loved this story and the elevation it granted to our favorite bard. That, and the fact that the warrior returns, for the best of reasons. Gorgeously written. - osb - Apr-07-2008   

This story deserves to be 'bumped' for a new array of Xena fanfic readers to savour and enjoy..it is the first part of an amazing journey, beautifully written..and true to the deepest meanings of the tale of X&G. - Anonymous - Apr-18-2008   

Wow, indeed. A very satisfying and well crafted post-FIN. I am off to read the rest of the series - I am hooked. - Georgia - Feb-15-2010   

What a great story. Great job - sassy123 - Mar-12-2012   

This is a great series - well worth reading the whole! Rather a different take on a post FIN Gabrielle and her Amazons. I liked it a lot. - Georgia - Mar-06-2013   

FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC!!!! I LOOOOVVVEEEDDD this story! I am so glad there are sequals I can't WAIT to read them! Also, thanks for having the .pdf format, this means I can snag them when I am at the library and read them later. THIS is one of the BEST fan-fics I have EVER read! - Tank the Unstoppable - Jan-15-2015   

It's sometimes easier to face tough things in life if I can just understand why it had to be that way. This story does an excellent job of explaining one possible reason why Fin happened. why Gabrielle was left alone, and gives much needed closure and hope. - Copper - Jun-26-2017   

This quartet is still one if my post-fin favorites that I love coming back to. Great read! - colorado fan - Jul-08-2017   

Drools, love the series, hoping for more soon :P - Anonymous - Aug-12-2006   

found this tucked away near the bottom of SX Meagher's index page. I just have to recommend it for being an excellent read. a great introduction to this bard for anyone who might find the "I found my heart..." series a bit daunting - like i did - if you are new to SX Meagher's writing. now gonna start on the series! - carinjo - Oct-29-2007   

Absolutely brilliant! A wonderfully crafted and engaging story . Of the hundreds of stories that I have read this one remains on my top ten list. How very fortunate we are that this author shares her stories with us on the net. - Opus - Feb-19-2008   

Beautifully written story! - Jeanius - Apr-13-2009   

Your ability to make readers FEEL is just amazing. That's we all come here. So... Thank you so very much! YOU GUYS MUST READ THIS STORY! - Anonymous - May-09-2009   

Angst so good it hurt :P Very well written on the edge of your seat story. Thank you for sharing with us!!! - erjohnson007 - Oct-28-2009   

Another wonderful, well done romance by Susan X. Meagher - not to be missed! - Anonymous - Nov-20-2009   

Really really enjoyable read. I love how well this author builds her characters, not just their personalities, but their relationship as well. Loved it. - Anonymous - Feb-09-2011   

Very well written story. I liked the relationship between these two women and love how it developed over the years. It has everything that I love in a story; friendships, humour, poignancy and romance. You can always count on SX Meagher for this in her stories. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - Mar-21-2011   

Wow. Absolutely loved this story. Two of the most amazing woman. Highest recommendation. Thank you S X Meagher for your amazing talent. - Moe - Apr-20-2011   

nicely written story.. i kept on reading and rooting for my two favourite characters.. - xtra dog - Jul-22-2011   

Awesome story. Great job - sassy123 - Aug-11-2011   

I have read this story over the years at least 7 times. This story is very touching. If you haven't read this story, you should take some time to read it. You wont be disappointed. It has enough angst and sweetness to keep you in for the long haul. You will never forget these characters! - Cadey - Jan-03-2013   

Beautifully written and totally enjoyable, thank you!
There are so many things I loved in this novel...
The two main characters, their enduring love, their strengths and vulnerability and their individual growth thru the years.
Truly lovely! - Inema69 - Jun-22-2013   

If you like well written angst and drama, this is the story for you. I'm still not sure if I liked it or not, but I just had to finish to make sure of the end. - Stacia - Jun-24-2013   

Stayed up to finish this incredible story. If this doesn't make #1 this coming Monday, there are a lot of you out there who have missed reading a beautiful journey in survival and love. Complete on its own, but am looking forward to tagging along with Sarah & Meggie in book 2 & 3. Superb dialogue, exploration of emotions, growth and detail. - Sally - Feb-27-2007   

Wow, this is a great story. The plot is intriguing and the relationship development between the two girls is fascinating. I can't wait to read the next part. - Fabeola - Feb-28-2007   

Once I started reading I could put it down. I basically
stayed with it until I was done. Eyes are a bit bleary.
But well worth it. Don't walk, run to read this fantastic
story. I am so looking forward towards the next part of
this trilogy. - Christi - Mar-02-2007   

The images this writer drew out for us(the readers)were so realistic, I found myself trying to shield my head from flying debris!! I just hope to survive the storms of reality to see this series complete. I absolutely recommend this story, especially if you think your day to day life is too hard...wow...what a bard!!! - dez - Mar-02-2007   

I read it twice already and can not wait to read more of this well written tale.
- Keren - Mar-03-2007   

What a great story! a very tender portrayal of innocent love. Looking forward to next part of the series. - jd - Mar-09-2007   

I have NO words this story is beyond the norm. I was their swimming and cringing along with them. What a amazing bard. You must be a beautiful person to write such a story. I still have no real words to say this story was so touching. - vampireslayer2 - Mar-10-2007   

Fantastic story. Glad I took the time to read it. Can't wait to see where you take these girls. - Anonymous - Mar-15-2007   

Oh..My ...God...this is a must read I loved it..please more...more...more..I am hoping the author come up with a sequel SOON!! - arly - Mar-19-2007   

Beautiful well written story, I read it the whole night I just couldn't stop myself . READ IT !!!! you'd love it. - anonymous - Mar-20-2007   

Wow came to mind, then lovely, then sweet. Scary place...inside a teenage girls head but you wrote it well. They had no one to guide them in an isolated world and they survived. I just hope they can stay strong with the multitude of advise coming their way in a populated world. - gayzer - Mar-27-2007   

The only thing i'm going to say is: I WANT MORE!!!!! - Anonymous - Mar-30-2007   

great story and very well written. it's 6 a.m and i stayed awake the whole night to read it to the end. can't wait for book 2 - Anonymous - Apr-01-2007   

Wonderful story. I usually don't like when they are that young...but this story was so real...and captured the true escense of young love. Awesome Job A. Tietz, I'll wait 2 years for the sequel. - Lady D - Apr-25-2007   

Just read this story again. The circumstances these characters grow to love and care for each other is simply amazing. An extremely well written emotional read. I can't wait until part 2. - lrt - Jun-02-2007   

Absolutely LOVED it. Very 'Blue Lagoon'ish but better.
PLEASE bring part two (Together Apart) - ArcAngel - Jan-28-2008   

a must read !! once started you just have to finish it. would love to see the sequal..... - ydiscardit - Jan-28-2008   

Oh my, oh my. All I can say is OH MY. This is the first story I've read that doesn't contain sex scenes. Usually I wouldn't stories that don't have sex scenes in them BUT this was different. Damn, I loved this. I'M WAITING FOR MORE ! And I want to see how their realtionship would be when they're adults. - Bitazh - Jan-30-2008   

wow that was wow - Anonymous - Feb-08-2008   

Please you must write the sequel!!!!!!!!!!! - giorginha - Feb-11-2008   

Good story. Gentle, loving, the story reads like a caress. - Samantha - Mar-16-2008   

This is a very Blue Lagoon story, it's a wonderful read, the author planned on it to be a tree book story. I hope to read the remaining story. It sure would be intresting to see Sarah and Meghan in their full adaulthood. - Callisto - Mar-22-2008   

I have to say I was a little iffy about reading this story after glancing at a few reviews. (Um, The Blue Lagoon really creeped me out when I was younger...yeah I'm probably just weird). Anyway I am so glad I did. Such a beautiful, touching story. Incredibly sweet read. - nicole938 - Mar-31-2008   

Wow. I'm glad I stayed up real late to finish this. What a great ending...but I NEED the next part! This must continue! What are they like as they get older?! Wonderful story! - Jen - Apr-24-2008   

A round of applause. Great Story. Can't wait the the Sequel Book 2. Keep up the good work. - Candy - Jun-27-2008   

could you please tell me if book #2 has been written and where can I find it. You had my attention all the way through this story. I loved it.
mcnewt@mts.net - Fran - Jul-18-2008   

All I can say is WOW!! I LOVED IT!! Oh PLEASE where is book two?!?!?!? A. Tietz you are a marvelous writer...please don't make us wait long!!! - JC - Nov-05-2008   

Wow. I seriously stayed up all night to finish this story. Definately worth it and I cant wait for the sequal! - Anonymous - Dec-17-2008   

Hello fans. I wanted to thank you all for such a great reception of this story. I also wanted to share an update. I have had a computer crash and series family obligations take away my writing time. Also book two is just not coming together smoothly. I may never have the opportunity to turn this into the series I wanted. Thank you all for reading. I perhaps someday we will read about Sarah and Megan's life after rescue. Happy reading. Many Blessings to all. - FROM THE AUTHOR TIETZ - Feb-23-2009   

This is a wonderful story. I really can not wait for the sequel to be written! - tgz87 - Mar-15-2009   

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I would really like to see book 2. PLEASE - Anonymous - Jul-04-2009   

WOW!! What a wonderful and sweet story!! I can't wait for the sequel to read what happens to these two! Please give us the sequel soon!!!! - Anonymous - Jul-07-2009   

oh my god! I loved is the best A.Tiezt ROCKS XD Me encanto leer esta novela, esta entre una de mis TOP TEN y su lugar en el numero (1)!! solo espero que en un futuro no muy lejano saber que sucedio con sarah y megan. - maryjo - Aug-26-2010   

Truly awesome to read! I hope the sequel come out soon! - Anonymous - Feb-07-2011   

when a story and its characters stay with you, you know that you just read something special. the relationship between sarah and megan is so very sweet and lovely. - kc - Feb-12-2011   

Can we please see a sequal? love this story - Anonymous - May-20-2011   

o my god... i loved it... please do a sequel, i really wanna see what hapens when they go home, how megan's parents will react to their love, i wanna see them after a few years... - braniac - Jan-23-2012   

really inspired read...well done - soopi - Jul-08-2012   

Loved it! read from start to finish without stopping. - Aahi Young - Mar-30-2014   

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST A SEQUEL!!!!! THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Te` - Jul-20-2014   

I absolutely without a doubt fell in love with this story of these two very brave girls. My only wish is for the author, if it is at all possible, to come up with book 2. If you need inspiration read your own story again. My G*d it's beautiful! If not, forgive me for say this but I'm not a writer, get another bard to help you. PLEEEEEEASE!!!!!!! - Shar - Jul-27-2017   

One should read this at least twice to truly appreciate the author's talent. The first time through, learn what happens. On subsequent readings, pay special attention to the portrayal and conveyance of Marjorie's confusion. The writing is just exquisite. Incidentally, this isnt uber as I understand the definition. No raven tresses or grass green eyes... - jj - Mar-08-2007   

This is a fantasic story. The author conveys Marjorie's confusion and naiveté beautifully. Simply a wonderful story! - jd - Mar-14-2007   

what an amazing peace of work. this story makes one appreciate what we have today and salutes all those who quietly (or not!) came before us. - carinjo - Feb-05-2008   

i just don't know why i didn't read this before - its lovely. - Rangeela - Feb-13-2008   

Oh my God! I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner. What a wonderful little surprise to brighten my week! - Anonymous - Apr-02-2008   

This is a wonderful story! Extremely well written, funny and thoughtful. Also a pleasant way to learn about a more difficult time. - Anonymous - Feb-04-2009   

It was refreshing and definitely a different experience from what I'm used to. It has also given me new in-sight on the subject of sexual discovery and homosexual experiences.
Much appreciated for the great work! Thanks! - Anonymous - May-02-2010   

I just want to say that I absolutely loved this story. It carried me along so much that I re-read it just so I could savour it a little longer. What a wonderful story. Thank you. - Omega13 - May-12-2010   

this story is exquisite. i am not 100 percent in the marjorie camp but the side characters, including the various pets, make for a strong cast. - kc - Sep-25-2010   

i don't know what it is about this story, but it didn't quite grab my involvement as others do and have done.. maybe it's the time frame.. the 70's being long past and feminism having evolved quite a bit since then?? it is very well written and a fine exploit of how things and society in general, were.. it is even very easy to understand how the gay community and specifically some individuals felt way back then, but it doesn't capture me, as a modern day reader having the utmost respect for the trials and tribulations those before me have gone through.. as i said though, well written and worth the read if you want to have insight in the struggle others went through.. - xtra dog - Nov-21-2011   

it was really nice. a very calming story something you can relax with and enjoy the experience
- sandy - Nov-19-2012   

This is one of my all time favorite short stories. It is a pleasant read and leaves you feeling hopeful for the future of the characters. These are ordinary people who find a chance for love in an unexpected place. I'm glad to see the story get recognition. - Debbie TheProf - Apr-23-2007   

A short but sweet story, one that leaves you with a nice warm feeling after reading it. - Anonymous - Apr-24-2007   

holy crap this story is soooo freakin good!!! i need a sequel....i need to know what happens with these lovely ladies - Sarah - Apr-25-2007   

i LOVE this story! it's just the swetest little tale to curl up with on a rainy night, always gives you the warm fuzzies :) i remember desperately waiting for a sequel too - Kat - Apr-25-2007   

I really love how this 'recommendations' process works. If it weren't for this function I'd miss out on tones of brilliant fiction. And this short story is no exception, it was a delight to read and I wish there had been more of it. Would it be improper of me to DEMAND a sequel? Somehow I don't think I'm alone in my request. Right? - Sai - Apr-27-2007   

The romance that settles and soothes. Thank you...ahhh. Scone anyone? - Dusty - Apr-08-2008   

This is totally adorable. And, I feel bound to say, after way too long in food service, true to life. Except for the gorgeous customer part, but hey, a girl can dream. Very sweet and well worth a read (or two). - Hannah - Jun-04-2008   

Sweet and well-written, she manages to give the characters significant depth despite the brevity of the story. It's such a huge pity SJ doesn't appear to be writing anymore. Come back, Seana! - abbi - Aug-06-2008   

cute as a button! - Anonymous - Sep-27-2008   

Absolutly ADORABLE! So cute and sweet I wish there was a sequel. - Amanda - Jan-04-2009   

**** Spoiler Alert **** what??! it can't just end like that! i feel left out that i won't know what happened next. shucks. sequel please. ~sniff~ - belle - Oct-02-2009   

What happens Next??? ----- PLEASE Write more, don't leave me hangin' - Texas_wild - Jan-02-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** This is such a good story, and superbly written! Which, can be hard to come by. I'm a little disappointed in the ending though. It's almost like the story is ending in the middle. - Anonymous - Jul-27-2010   

Sweet story. Good read. - Lyn B - Jan-04-2011   

Very, very sweet! Would love to read more of this! - Mickey - Feb-03-2011   

Excellent conqueror story, I notice it was written over 10yrs ago so not hoping for an update soon, which is a pity. Just wish stories could be completed before posting. I usually don't read uncomplete works but clicked on this without noticing and now I am left hanging..URGHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Oh well - RavenIrish - Aug-21-2011   

Very cute story but feels like chapter one and leaves us waiting for chapter two. Author please finish? - JC - Oct-24-2011   

great story very sweet but i have to agree with JC this feels
like a begining not an end i would be interested to see what happens next. - chippy - Nov-27-2011   

really cute and sweet. - sandy - Nov-08-2012   

Cute! Vera sweety! - Anonymous - Nov-11-2012   

This is so cute! Very much a must read. Being a Pacific Northwesterner I really liked the setting.
- Georgia - Feb-06-2013   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jun-11-2013   

One Word SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! - Lysia - Aug-24-2014   

I've long been a fan of anything with the Amazons. It was especially nice seeing the same story told from four different views. Del has managed to capture the voices of each of the characters in their own right. The nuances of the differences of the same event (Gabby's view as Queen versus Xena's as her slightly inebriated champion) was handled masterfully. I hope to see more of this author's work in the future. - Terri - Aug-25-2007   

part of a 4-part series that simply rocks!!!! - Anonymous - Feb-09-2008   

This is one of my all-time favorite series. Del has done an outstanding job capturing the voices of not just Xena and Gabrielle, but also of Ephiny and Eponin. More, please, more!!!! - AmazonQueen - Aug-28-2008   

This was a bodacious story; I liked how the same story was told thru different views. you rock....... - anon - Oct-02-2008   

If you are looking for just a piece of fan fiction...take a pass on this...if you are in need of an exceptional tale ...this is the one for you... - tippy - Oct-03-2008   

Classic Xena with a twist. Relates an amazon party through Gabrielle's perspective. Nailed Gabrielle's voice to a tee. Two thumbs way up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - A. Fan - Oct-14-2008   

Amazing - or is that Amazon? (sigh) - Anonymous - Jul-06-2009   

Love this story. Great fun. - sassy123 - Nov-27-2010   

this story messes up a number of romantic ideas i had about xena and gabrielle.. well written though.. - xtra dog - Aug-10-2011   

I loved this story. Good writing. - Anonymous - May-17-2008   

Great story. Read and enjoy. - Anonymous - May-17-2008   

Oh my gosh, I looooved this story. At first I was a bit shocked by it, but in the end I laughed so loud and it was kinda romantic as well - Sterre - May-18-2008   

Enjoyable read. Surprise ending - cygirl1 - May-20-2008   

Absolutely enthralling post Endgame story where Janeway is kidnapped by a mysterious figure who wants to know the state of affairs between her and Seven. Excellent read! - happykt - May-21-2008   

A post-Endgame story with a quirkier than average twist. A brilliant read. - Anonymous - May-29-2008   

love this! so glad to see people are still writing j/7 fiction! - Anonymous - Aug-06-2008   

This was a good story, far better than some of the Voyager episodes. I love the ending. It's so Seven. - Lynne - Jan-04-2011   

I've read this story a lot and always enjoy it. I love the interaction between Seven and Janeway and the ending is excellent. - Lyn B - Feb-28-2011   

Very cute story - well written. Good ending. - Georgia - Oct-30-2011   

Very nice. Excellent style and characterization. - Mochamaker - Jan-27-2013   

Bravo, histoire prenante et amusante. - Marie - Apr-15-2021   

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ehh... just can't wait to read more of this series. Hope to see 7th story much faster than 6th ;d Loved it! - Anonymous - Aug-05-2011   

Love this series. Can't wait to see what happens next. - xenaspice - Aug-07-2011   

Sad story, but best. Now all i need is wait for update.. - nien - Aug-09-2011   

This is a great story! Anxiously awaiting the seventh installment!!! - Anonymous - Aug-10-2011   

Ugh cliffhangers..but really good story cant wait to read the seventh - Anonymous - Sep-20-2011   

I just stumbled on this series and I am in love! I've been fortunate enough to read adventures 1-6 with no gaps and now I'm in the crowd waiting for the next update! I need more Brice! - Beth Goodman - Dec-12-2011   

Please finish!!!! - Anonymous - Apr-15-2012   

What a wonderful story this Bard has written, I truly enjoyed it. - Teresa - Oct 16th, 2002   

This story was different than what I'm used ot form Larisa. But, it was still just as good as any she's ever written! It was very good... can't wiat for part two! - Amanda Windeler - Nov 10th, 2002   

This is brilliant. Radically different to her usual style, which I have to admit, that, like a recent comment stated, I'm not really a fan of. I find the supporting "lunatic fringe" characters irritating and un-realistic, too. I realise that these are the very things that draw a lot of readers to Larisa's stories so I won't knock them, they're just not to my taste. This story however was very much to my taste. I hope there's a sequel, (it did say to be continued!). Well worth a read! - Zero - Jul 16th, 2003   

Oh this one is really good. Different than her other stories but the heartwarming love is still there! - Anonymous - Jul 29th, 2005   

This story has touched my heart just as much as Blake Shelton's song This Is Austin did when I first heard it. I just wish that Larisa would do a sequel to it. I know that it has a nice ending but it just seems sort of unfinished in a way. - Jesse James - Apr-21-2006   

I loved this story. Haunted Past touched my heart the same way that Blake Shelton's song This Is Austin does every time I hear it. I just wish that Larisa would make a sequel. - Jesse James. - Apr-21-2006   

ROMANCE is still alive and well in the mind of Larisa! Thanks L. This bard is amazing. - toni - Apr-29-2008   

I'm speechless, so emotionally written and well made story.
Absolutely brilliant, it has been quite some time since I shed tears like this. i live it..this has got to be one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. Definitely in my top 10 for a long time to come. - braniac - Nov-14-2011   

Yhis was a great story, it made you cry and laugh, it had just the perfect mix of drama and humor,come on Larisa please star to publish some of your work. - Mutt - Dec-23-2011   

This bard is simply amazing in her detailed story telling. She talks about psychology and police procedure like someone with first hand knowledge, yet in such a manner you are fully drawn into the characters and situations. AWESOME, brillant!!! - toni - May-11-2008   

Radclyffe is a genius. - Anonymous - Nov-19-2008   

Very intense characters and story. I love this writer. - MK - Apr-16-2010   

This is an excellent story, I was hooked from the very first page. So much so, I went on to read the follow up "In Pursuit of Justice" This is a "Must read!" You won't be dissappointed! - Gemmagirl - Oct-24-2010   

What a great story. Great job - sassy123 - Oct-24-2010   

I love the 'Justice' series. It has great characters and tightly woven plots. Everything works. I'm trying not to say too much so I don't give spoilers away:-) If you love Radclyffe's stories and good fiction this is a must read. - Lyn B - Feb-10-2011   

i love this story.. i love everything about this story.. the connection between the main characters, the psycho part, and - blast it all to hell - even watts.. a very interesting character.. i might - oh, blasphemy - like this series better than the honor series.. - xtra dog - Oct-15-2012   

This is an excellent story - full of twists and turns and full of suspense. Added to the mystery is the tension between the two main characters. This story left me wanting more ... and thankfully there is :-) - Ricky - Jan-14-2013   

absolutley fantatic. I have not read anything that interested me this much in a long time. I sat at my computer and read every bit. Sometimes tears made it hard to read. Please write some more along this line this is absolutley the most fantastic subject around now.Thank you so much for writing this. - Donna - Jan 20th, 2003   

absolutley fantatic. I have not read anything that interested me this much in a long time. I sat at my computer and read every bit. Sometimes tears made it hard to read. Please write some more along this line this is absolutley the most fantastic subject around now.Thank you so much for writing this. - Donna - Jan 20th, 2003   

Beautiful story, I also cried my way through it. Sadly, when I searched for some more of this ladys works, I discovered a memorial website for her. Sadly for all of us, she has passed away from cancer. More tears. - Stephanie - Feb 27th, 2003   

Simply amazing..what a tale! - Alicia - Dec 21st, 2003   

I felt this story touching my heartstrings. I laughed and cried and lost myself in the words. I think this is a well-written legacy for the author, and a gift to all Xena fans. Thank you. - Moregan25 - Jan 6th, 2004   

Really beautifully written. Even though I think that especially Xena's "change" of feeling could have been more elaborated (I hope that's the right word!). :-) - The Fic Addict - Jan 4th, 2005   

I was expecting another average X/G slashfic. Instead, i got the most amazing surprise of my life. This is by far, the GREATEST and most amazing fic i have ever read, throughout the Xenaverse. A fic has never brought me to tears before, this one did, however. I am very saddened to hear that Tonya has since passed away, as i would have liked to let her know how her story touched my heart, and soul. God bless, you truly captured the spirit of both Xena and Gabrielle. I strongly reccomend EVERY Xena fan read this. If you are not a fan of Subtext, read it anyway. There is so much more to this story. so so so much more. Thank you. - Penstarr - Jan 22nd, 2005   

I read a great deal of fanfic, almost as a hobby. I gain a broad perspective on this kind of work and i've come to realise there is a huge range of quality as well as general content. Coming upon this story was nothing special, i was browsing and it looked intriguing. I have read a piece about an alternative life initiated by 'Remember Nothing' but compared to this it was dust in the wind. This piece is by far the most intriguing, well-paced, exciting and also heart wrenching piece of fanfiction i have read to date. And that's out of A LOT of stories!! I have no doubt that if this was a published piece of writing, available to buy, it would almost certainly be on the best-seler list. All I can say is thankyou, you managed to stop me in my tracks and i couldn't get this out of my head for days. Magnificent. - Amy - Jan-28-2007   

There are only a few who by the sweetness of their words make me weep. You are in good company, Tonya. I hope it is true that you might hear my thoughts - you have given us a gift, gorgeous and moving, simply sublime. Thank You. - 3creeks - Jun-05-2007   

An oldie but a goodie. All Tonya Muir's works are (in my humble opinion) superb and are a perfect study in fanfic writing. Go on, treat yourself - oh and you may need a few Kleenex for this one in particular. RIP Tonya and thanks for the legacy of your wonderful stories. - anex - Aug-19-2007   

This is another of those examples where the fiction is actually better then the episode that it is based upon.
I dare anyone to read this and not be moved. - Kez - Oct-13-2008   

This is actually finished though it is labeled unfinished. And I highly recommend this fic. It is very well written and will tug on your heart strings. - Anonymous - Oct-15-2008   

this was so magnificent. no other fan fiction has made me cry like this one, and it was so refreshing. this is a beautiful representation of Xena and Gabrielle's characters (especially if they had been in a relationship) - Chow - Jun-03-2009   

this story is beautifully written. it is bittersweet, soul searing; deep with love. angst by the buckets. the characters stay with you long after the last word is read. - kc - Oct-31-2010   

What a beautiful story. I was not expecting it, honestly. I read a LOT of Xena fan fiction and very rarely (if ever) give a 10, but this got one. It's one of those stories that stays with you long after you've read it. It's perfect. - Whitney D. - Apr-07-2012   

I'm agreeing with the other review where fanfic is indeed better than the episode. In this case 10x better. I liked seeing how Xena became to understand what it must be like for the real Gabrielle to deal with her. I just think the end is missing another "scene" between our beloved characters. How cool would that have been...two "first times" rolled in to one story. Anyways this was a fantastic read. - BigZee - May-21-2013   

very nice reversal of roles.. i just don't get the end..
***SPOILER ALERT*** why, after her epiphany, would she wait for 3 years to confess?? all the missed chances!! - xtra dog - Jun-10-2013   

"High quality erotica" - Anonymous - Dec 17th, 2003   

Great erotic offering. I didn't mind the switch from perspective which I usually don't enjoy. It just seemed to add to the story even more. - Anonymous - May-12-2008   

Awesome presentation and story. The format is unique in regard of the authors approach to the development and interaction of this story. - xenamari - May-23-2008   

This is really well written. Loved it! - Ginger - May-30-2009   

nice erotica. thank you. wish there was a sequel to go with this to follow their tale. - x/g fanfic fanatic - Feb-21-2010   

Very hot, good story. Highly recommended erotica. - snott - Feb-12-2011   

omg.hot.hot.hot - braniac - Dec-14-2011   

loved the way the interaction between the main characters was protrayed through changing POV.. it as also a very hot pwp.. - xtra dog - Jan-03-2012   

This was great !! Very erotic but also quite funny in parts. Thank you ! - Thothgirl - Jan-17-2012   

Wow, wow, wow. Loved this story. Great short story. A must read. - Anna28Carm - Oct-25-2016   

This is a must read story. It is a story that gets under you skin and never, never leaves you. Falling in love is dangerous if you fall in love with a beautiful woman who has everything and finds herself in true love for the first time. Read it, you will love it. - Monti - Jul 27th, 2003   

I finished this story and feel chills all over me. This is a story that would make a thrilling movie or maybe suspense. I am going to recommend it as a must read. I will never forget it. - felicity146 - Jul 28th, 2003   

Yeah! Thank you. I am the first one of our group to read this story and I have been biting my nails off. I stayed home this afternoon to read it. It is fantastic. Charlie is great and scary and beautiful. - Sally - Jul 28th, 2003   

Wow! What a ride. S. Anne Gardner has written a hard as nails story. Way to go S. Anne Gardner. - patticakes - Jul 29th, 2003   

This was the first story I read by S. Anne Gardner and it is still my favorite. I'm so glad to see it finally posted to this site! You will not be disappointed by this story! - Jennifer - Aug 6th, 2003   

Alright! I see this story as a movie. read it. You will see what I am talking about. - Jane - Aug 6th, 2003   

I am so glad I was able to find this story here. I have read it twice. It was a rollercoaster ride that was lots of fun. A must read. - kayden - Aug 7th, 2003   

Wow! That was above and beyond the most fascinating yet disturbing story that IÆve ever readà You will inevitably find yourself feeling like Wylie Coyote hanging on to an acme rollercoaster. A must read! - Anonymous - Sep 10th, 2003   

Gardner is one of the best writers I came across in the X(Uber)verse. Just finished reading this -once again- beautiful written, but rather disturbing story. I spend a whole afternoon reading instead of going out in the sunshine; couldn't stop. Searching for a story you won't forget very soon? Stop here and start on this one. - Renee (Netherlands) - Jul 26th, 2004   

[Contains Spoilers] A thoroughly disturbing story but gripping as few others. Great angst and drama, not a light read. I think this is a story that totally polarizes because the ending is brutal with one character loosing all of herself in the other and still thinking it is her fault while basically evil triumphs. No happy puppies in this one :-). - Anonymous - Mar-04-2007   

I've read this story many times, and it never fails to leave me with chills. It's not a light read by any means. There are no flowers and bows, no 'fluff' if you will. It's dark, really dark. And incredibly disturbing. With that being said, I do love it. It has stayed with me from the very first time I read it. I keep returning to it, because I simply cannot shake it. If you haven't read it, please do. It's not to be missed. - Melissa - May-12-2007   

What an intense amazing story! - jd - Jun-10-2007   

This story has never left me. I think it's the most disturbing and equisite story I've read. It will haunt the reader for a long time. I recommend everything she writes. - Joy to the World - Feb-12-2008   

I can honestly say it's the most disturbing piece of literature I've ever read. Part of me wish I'd never read it, but at the same time I'm in awe by any writer who can make me feel so intensely about anything.

Be warned the story will leave you with a sense of dread that will squeeze your heart for a very long time. It's an emotional high of paranoia and fear.

That said I recommend it, because it is bloody brilliant in all its dark glory. - Ape - Feb-14-2008   

A very well written story. Disturbing and intense as it's meant to be. I think it will haunt me for awhile in a way not many do. - JC - Apr-20-2008   

Wow! What a fantastic piece of writing. Truly disturbing, but so very well written. Take a chunk of time to read this one, it is well worth it! - Otter - Apr-22-2008   

It's almost 3am and I had to stay up to finish this story, I couldn't step away from it. It seemed a simple story and yet it turned out to be so much more. The characters were so real...too real. Thank you for bringing this story to life. - Shelly - Apr-24-2008   

Just the way love should be. Obsessive, addictive, overwhelming, lustful. I'm quite envious of their relationship in a demented sort or way. Extreme jealousy and possessiveness provides wonderful power dynamics in a relationship. Compile that with complete dependancy on one another, and a resentful yet irresistably devastating love...and it's a drug you can't possibly live with or without. Beautiful.

I don't think this story was as disturbing as people suggest though...it just highlights more primative elements within a relationship that are often perceived with a negative point of view. x x - nexakill - May-10-2008   

A brilliant pice of literature but also the most disturbing story i`ve ever read. Really dark and intense! - Germany - Jun-02-2008   

WOW It was very good but competely disturbing. The ending blew my mind. Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! - ag - Jul-21-2008   

Wow! Here I am reading until after 3 a.m. again. What a dark and disturbing story. It held me until the very end. The ending twist...all done in the name of love when in actually it is in the name of power and control. I will be haunted for some time by this story. - Lee - Jul-22-2008   

Riveting story of the darkside of love ruled by obsession and need. This is a page turner. - Anonymous - Jul-31-2008   

this is has to be one finest love stories i have read. the pathos and inner turmoil of laura for loving and needing charlie is beautifully brought out. definately movie material. loved the ending very hollyhood. S. anne gardner's heronies are toutured souls but none of them come close to charlie's. I recomend not to miss this. DEFINATELY NOT FOR CANDY FLOSS ROMANCE LOVERS. I LOOOOOVE IT. - hellraizer77 - Aug-12-2008   

This story is one that grabs you and won't let go. It is compelling and I 'had' to stay up last night to finish it. A reviewer referred to it as the 'Darkside' of love. If we're honest, we can see both Charlie and Laura in ourselves; many of us chose not to act on those darker passions. And some know no other way but to love like this. Love is madness with no boundries. - DANI L. THORN - Aug-12-2008   

Dark and disturbing, but I couldn't stop reading. Very well done. - Anonymous - Oct-20-2008   

Wow. Captivating and disturbing. I spent all day reading this and it was well worth it. This story will stay with me for a looong time. - Sara B. - Jan-19-2009   

HOLY CRAP what a RIDE!!!! A must read, this story is like no other! - Lea Ann - Feb-03-2009   

My God..S.Anne Gardner, this is truly a mind blowing story. Everyone, this is a must read story. - easteden - Sep-09-2009   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - This was the first S. Anne Gardner story I ever read. I have since combed the Internet in search of everything else she has ever written. To say this author is good at depicting passion and desire in her tales is and understatement. This story sticks to your ribs. It is one you will not likely forget anytime soon. The SHOCK value is right up there. This recommendation comes almost 2 years after I've read this story and it is still fresh in my mind as if I've only just read the thing. - Anna Lei - Jan-05-2010   

It's when reading this kind of work that we fully realize the gift places like this site offer.
We can discover masterpieces from extremely talented authors, like S. Anne Gardner.
Of course, like other reviewers already intimated, this story must be read by non-depressed people.
But despite the hardness of the framework, it's worth the read a thousand times.
It's so well written, it has rhythm, energy, adventure, rebounding. Very full.
And after that, we can always enjoy the other S. Anne Gardner's stories with lighter development and ending. - M. D. - Feb-28-2010   

One of the best, twisted and disturbing (in a good way) stories I've ever read. Charlie is an interesting character. - MK - Mar-12-2010   

that's just perfect, mind blowing work. thank you, author, very much!!! - intheair - May-23-2010   

This story was a hell of a ride! I have to give this bard the credit for writing something that audacious. She did go all the way over the storyline, stucking to it, never failing to the level of passion she wanted to depict. I could feel the despair, the agony, the distraction and the dependancy the characters felt for each other. I could hardly breath sometimes and felt as if I was going deep into the lymbes of human nature that it is more confortable to ignore.
But like I said, this story have a point, and this bard has talent. Good work. - yuka - Jan-22-2011   

Wow! This really would make a great movie. So dark and intense. - ~M - Aug-17-2011   

most reviewers on this site seem to depict one of the characters as the victim.. i think they are both victims caught up in an all consuming love.. none of them can escape it.. both handle it differently but i believe that pov expressed in the last sentences would prove to be correct.. they will move on and beyond since they are both trapped.. this story was so cleverly written, giving the reader such a clear insight into the relationship, that it's impossible to not be intrigued and highly unlikely that you will stop reading before you have reached the very last word of this story.. - xtra dog - Dec-06-2011   

Sweet Athena!! That was intense!! I have this queezy feeling in my gut and I am extremely unsettled. Never has a story affected me quite like this. Good Lord!! If for nothing else, I will remember this story for its eery, twisted, pychotic, haunting feel. Absolutely brilliant! F***ing Brilliant!! Don't miss this one. - Anonymous - Dec-08-2012   

Well written but please be aware that there is woman-on-woman abuse.
- DP - Feb-14-2013   

Became addicted to it, even if I felt like I shouldn't. The last parts of the story were everything is tied up, was the part I loved most, even if it was kind of like watching, knowing an accident would happen but the curiosity of shifting through the wreckage, just to find out what happened. (...in a good way, if that makes any sense whatsoever; translation of my mumble = story was a great one, and I would recommend it to others to read, especially if they're not after the whole typical love story thing.) - Naomi - May-10-2013   

WOW!! I think this story broke me for a moment. It is so dark and real, the story fills you with a longing for that happily ever after,i don't think i will forget this story any time soon. It made me see the real selfishness of people and i don't think i want to forget it. Brilliant story, a most definite must read! - Laura - Jan-31-2014   

A horror story is what this was. I knew I didn't want to read it, but I couldn't help myself and I was led by the reviews. Once I began I couldn't stop, and now I have a sick feeling in my stomach. An incredible piece of writing that left me feeling much like Charlie. Sick and twisted. - Thothgirl - Feb-05-2014   

very sick story - Ash K - Dec-25-2014   

Wow... - Welma Singh - Feb 11th, 2005   

Wow, indeed. You will not be disappointed. - Lilybean - Feb-28-2007   

Really enjoyable and very clever. A fantastic and entertaining tale from a great Bard. - msprism - Feb-28-2007   

read this one. really, really do. it's magnificent. - msprism - Sep-06-2008   

Great author, dont miss - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

I've read this one before somewhere else...and now I read it again here. I'd recommend it to anyone, it's a refreshing read, and the ending is clever. - Anonymous - Dec-10-2009   

Consistently amazing writing from Ella Quince. I recommend all of her works. - kc - May-21-2010   

oh yes a very good story - erma - Nov-27-2010   

Loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-03-2010   

I have been reading new fanfaction from Once Upon a Time and other shows - and I can't help but feel it is so lacking. Coming back to the Xena fanfiction and authors as talented as Ella Quince is so refreshing. This might have been written quite a while ago now, but it is still some of the best writing out there. - Matrixrose - Feb-23-2014   

very well written story.. xena is ever the strategist, gabrielle can outwit anyone.. - xtra dog - Jul-22-2014   

Was hoping part II would be coming soon, definitely recommend this series - Anonymous - May-17-2006   

I simply loved the story, fascinating and really engaging. Beware don't read at night... - Leticia - Jun-28-2006   

What a great story! And the ending? Wow, what an exciting cliffhanger! I hope Part 3 will be available soon. - Barbara - Apr-26-2007   

Wonderful continuation to the series. I need Part III...soon! - Anonymous - May-06-2007   

I have been absolutely enthralled and give it my highest recommendation!! I beg the authors for Part III...please don't make us wait much longer!!! - JC - Feb-06-2008   

Great story, but beware, it ends with a cliffhanger and the time from part 1 to part 2 was 4 years. If the authors don't speed up the next part is finished in 2010. - Anonymous - Mar-01-2008   

Its a great series. So pleeease Authors bring it on. I really can't wait for Part III. - Candy - Nov-17-2008   

I read the this story and the prequel. im sad the sequel is not yet ready. leaves me wondering what would happen next. This Xena and Gabriel character in the story is quite different from the other personalities that i've read about. but anyways,,, it is entertaining. - rec - Apr-15-2009   

Great story both this and the pre, to bad there isn't a part 3 yet, argh! The writer better hurry up -.- - Eliane - May-06-2009   

Wonderful story one of the best I have read.....where is part 3...please writers :-) - Shayleuk - Jul-05-2009   

Excellent story!! Need part three please!! - kjviking - Jul-06-2009   

Waiting anxiously for part 3. - Anonymous - Jul-18-2010   

One of my favorites. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-01-2010   

What an excellent conqueror series. Here's wishing for part 111. Anxiously awaiting the conclusion to this cliff-hanger. highly recommended. - colorado fan - Aug-24-2011   

Wonderful love story, perfect characterization... 10/10
-To the authors ...please...I'm begging you...write or post part 3...pretty please !!! xoxo - Anonymous - Sep-13-2011   

It is now 2912 ^ still no part 111. I think we'll have to be satisfied with the 2 we have. Too bad. - Anonymous - Jan-21-2012   

Hi everyone. Just a note to say we're still here and still working. Real Life has slowed progress, but progress is being made. Part 3 is almost complete (pause for cheers) and the first couple of chapters will be posted very soon. - Harpy & HkdonXetG - Jan-26-2012   

Yaaaaay!!!! - k - Jan-27-2012   

I've been patiently waiting for Part 111 and its finally here !! yeah. Don't know when the Athenium will post updates, but you can find it on Academy of Bards. First couple of chapters are posted. - colorado fan - Jun-19-2012   

Wow this series is great. It keeps the good times rolling and keeps delivering a great sequel you can sink your teeth in to. It is so well written you just want it to keep going. - ubergoober - Jul-10-2014   

A story that will keep you up reading, a story about love and life. Written with the usual Fingersmith wit, full of twists and turns, you can't help but fall in love with the characters and feel their happiness and pains. Thank you for everything. - E.M. - Jan-07-2008   

Wow yet another fabulous story by this gifted writer. Only thing to say is holy shit well done story. well worth waiting for - Anonymous - Jan-08-2008   

Fingersmith's writing is always delightful, funny and charming and this story is no exception. I heartily recommend it! - micah6 - Jan-08-2008   

GOOD STORY, WELL WRITTEN. LOTS OF ANGST. LOTS OF HOT STUFF AT THE END. KEEPS YOU READING. ONCE AGAIN A WONDERFUL READ FROM THIS AUTHOR. - Anonymous - Jan-09-2008   

Great story, laughed so hard about the Reggie. - shk - Jan-09-2008   

Once again and amazing read and I couldn't stop when I started. Fantastic characters, a brilliant way of writing (as usual, laugh out loud funny, and a definite must read. It is the kind of story that makes you keep going back, and I will be reading it again now. - Maggie - Jan-11-2008   

Definitely an absolutely wonderful story. I loved to read about both sides of the story und it made me laugh very much very often. Just the right amount of everything. Thank you very much for this lovely story! - Ines - Jan-11-2008   

Congratulations to Fingersmith for her latest # 1!!!! Miracle is a wonderful tale that will make you laugh and melt your heart! A definite must read! - Opus - Jan-16-2008   

Another top story, well done Fingersmith beautifully written, a funny romantic tale at it's best. - WSM - Jan-17-2008   

Brilliantly written. Hillarious, poignant, tender, righteously indignant, colourful. You will NOT want this one to end. But it does, and wonderfully so. - Hoback - Jan-20-2008   

This story grabs your heart from the very beginning. It's funny as all Fingersmith's works and even better, tells you a good original story. Dialogues are simply perfect to me. What are you waiting for? - Towanda - Feb-03-2008   

A must read, love reggie the farting dog... - Callisto - Feb-05-2008   

This was an awesome story. Fingersmith has a wit that just keeps me laughing, yet so involved woth the story I can't put it down. Though this one took me two nights to read it is on my list as one to re-read, and re-read. - Robin - Feb-18-2008   

I loved this story! I laughed so much at the characters interpretation of events, It is so like real life. I would love a dog like Reggie, apart from all the farting. Keep it up! - Harrie - Sep-23-2008   

Amazing. Funny. Hot. Can't stop reading. Want more. You must read it. - Me - Nov-20-2009   

i normally don't go for blood and gore stories, but this was a nice one.. :) - xtra dog - Jun-25-2011   

As usual, loved the wit. Fingersmith youre a nut :D - M - Feb-04-2013   

An excellent story.Made me laugh out loud a few times. - uber goober - Feb-25-2013   

I really enjoyed this authors writing style. It's refreshing and at times really funny and yet sometimes you want to shake the characters out of there never ending thoughts. Speaking of which....I guess I'm normal...I never stop thinking myself...even random things. I always wondered if other people had an never ending dialogue running in their head. Any hoo...its worth the read. Great first person narrative. - katie of Ohio - Mar-26-2013   

Tryed to read this story just couldn't keep at it the writing style just recked my head sorry - Anonymous - Jun-19-2016   

Loved this story. Loved the way it was written. A must read - Anna28Carm - Oct-25-2016   

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This was an amazing story. So many story lines related to the mystery being solved in BOP fan fiction aren't developed in order to explore the relationship more. Enginerd managed to make this fiction as much about the mystery as the relationship. It was extremely well written. I couldn't put it down. - darkenedkarma - Jan-28-2008   

Good god this is good... contains some angst, confusion and love...whats not to like, could not stop reading it. This is definitely worth a read two thumbs up :-D - Anonymous - Jun-21-2008   

god please more just love it... funny, sexy, sweet, loving storie - Anonymous - Oct-26-2008   

A touching, romantic adventure. I wish there was more!! - Barbaralover - Oct-30-2008   

A captivating story! I hope to see more Helena/Barbara fiction from this author. - Helen - Jul-19-2009   

Broken link [Editor's Note: Repaired. 07/17/2010] - Anonymous - Jul-16-2010   

Great story - I love BoP - Aerows - Aug-05-2010   

What a great story. Very well done - sassy123 - Oct-16-2010   

I really loved this story. Great job - sassy123 - Feb-23-2011   

This was awesome. I may or may not have skipped classes to read this. A quick read with characters sure to bring the inner BOP animal out of anyone. - Lina - Dec-05-2011   

A truely fun to read westeren, I've read the online version and the book. Good story, nice character's and action, great romance, in short all the ingrediants to a great story. - Callisto - Feb-11-2008   

You must red this fic! It is so wonderful and hot! While reading this, we can clearly picture out our two favorite characters, Xena and Gabby. You really have to read it. - Anonymous - Feb-14-2008   

An Outlaw + beautiful maiden in distress = great story plot. What you waiting for?! Stay on for the wonderful journey... - Anonymous - Jun-25-2008   

This is one of my all time favorite stories. If you like Westerns and Romance, check this one out. You won't be disappointed. Just be sure that you have some free time set aside, because once you start reading, you will find it hard to stop. - RCP - Mar-10-2009   

This is a good read - the chapters are episodic, with never a dull moment, but at the same time the central characters develop and change throughout the 'Chronicles', so that a gentle love story is also plaued out. Nice! - Frankie - Jun-01-2009   

GREAT STORY!! Probably one of if not my all time favorite fan fiction story! Talk about talent! - Anonymous - Jul-04-2009   

Awesomeness! If you are looking for a great western filled with action and love you'll find it with The Western Chronicles! - 1234 - Sep-25-2009   

sweet story - Angelicrainbw - Oct-12-2009   

This story appears to have been removed by the author due to plagerism. It's a shame there are people low enough to steal someone's work and claim it as their own. [Editor's Note: Altered to reflect that this story has been published. Give the chance we will rant at length about plagiarism. :< 12-7-2010] - Anonymous - Dec-03-2010   

I really enjoyed this sweet story it was worth the buy my only complaint would be needs msome spice - Mandy - May-30-2012   

Write faster - Anonymous - Mar-27-2008   

Cant wait for the finish of the story. Dar and Ker just make me want to be a better woman. - Anonymous - Apr-08-2008   

I said I wasn't going to read this story until it was finished, after reading the 1st few lines I was hooked. Now I'm stuck waiting for each installment wishing Missy would write faster. Dar and Kerry are the paramount characters in the fan fiction realm. Ms Good gave them life and keeps them alive with each story. Thank you forgiving me a reason to enjoy reading again. - slotfever - Apr-10-2008   

Dar and Kerry are just the best - what else is there to say ... I am always glad for MORE - berghaupten - Apr-12-2008   

Dar and Kerry are just the best - what else is there to say ... I am always glad for MORE - berghaupten - Apr-12-2008   

Dar & Kerry are one of the greatest Ubers I've ever come across. I absolutely love them. - MJ - Apr-13-2008   

It all started with Tropical Storm and now Storm Surge! I have loved following these two ladies in all there adventures. Missy brings them to life in her books! I hope she is still writing about Dar and Kerry when they are old and grey You get 5 stars from me.***** - sandya - Apr-15-2008   

One of my marked favorites is merwolf updates and has been for 7 years. I have followed each of Dar and Kerry's stories one update at a time then gone back and read them completely, several times. With Storm Surge, Melissa shows the personal growth of Dar and Kerry as adversity only tightens the bonds and highlights the strenths brought forth in the development of all her characters. This is a reflection of the strengths shown by our nation following 9/11. As always, Great job Melissa. (please write faster-lol) - nljacksn - Apr-15-2008   

This writer is in a class of her own!!! The story of Dar Roberts and Kerry Stuart captured my heart form the very beginning. I simply cannot get enough of these two characters and Storm Surge does not disappoint! - JC - Aug-17-2008   

Missy please,never,ever,ever,stop writing about Dar's and kerry's life,I know that's a lot to ask but there's just sooo much more for you to tell us,and so much more for us to enjoy. ..Your characters are so good that I feel like if I know them for real,like they are an old couple of friends whose life I know everything about, and I never wish for their story to end. - Anonymous - Sep-02-2008   

Excellent story; a really good read - Anonymous - Sep-02-2008   

Another amazing story by Melissa Good about Dar and Kerry!
(this is finished btw....) [Corrected 5-1-2009] - Nicole - Apr-30-2009   

GOD!!!!!!this is by far the best i have ever read on any site i have ever been to. i have read the whole series and i have to say hot damn....ur a stupid ass if you by pass this here series. - iheartpickles - Jun-09-2009   

This is my favorite Uber series and I don't think any series can be more perfect than this. Every story is just great and fantastic to read. Love Dar and Kerry and sure hope for more! - Enverz - Jun-22-2009   

Wonderful sequel....so glad there's more to read! - Anonymous - Oct-26-2009   

I love all the Dar and Kerry stories. For those who missed it there is another sequel ...Winds of Change. It can be found at the bottom of this link.
http://www.merwolf.com/ffiction.html - Wheezie - Jan-27-2014   

For a short story, it is really powerful. Great read. Thanks Cam! - Nancy - Jul-02-2008   

Such a bittersweet story...it's too awesome to miss,and I'm sure there's gonna be a sequel...right? - GrAcE - Jul-02-2008   

A true LOVE STORY. Makes the reader remember that life really is short, and we must live and love to the fullest.
Please do not leave us waiting too long for the sequel. This is too poignant a story to end here. I highly recommend this story. My encouragement to Cam Taylor keep on writing! - aj - Jul-15-2008   

I cried. I never cry. Good Job! I highly recommend this. - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

Squeal? ppppleaseeeeeee???????????????? - Anonymous - Aug-20-2008   

**** Spoiler Alert **** A little disappointed with the ending but still made for a good read. Would read again. - Anonymous - Feb-03-2009   


I really wanna say something, I know a should because this story is one of the most beautiful I've ever read. But I don't know where to begin! You must be a genius, or something... anyway, whoever or whatever you are I'm thankfull.
Oh... I nearly forgot, EVERYONE MUST READ THIS PIECE OF ART! - yuka - Jun-11-2009   

So well written. Best short story to me. It almost made me cry. - sue4rab - Oct-31-2009   

very poetic... - BlueButterfly - Nov-21-2009   

Exceptionally moving! - JC - Mar-19-2011   

Powerful and poignant. I liked how Cam Taylor makes every word count. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - Jun-19-2011