Xena. Gabrielle. Werewolves. Amazons. Everything you need for a well-written, fun story. - AmazonQueen - Nov-12-2008   

A treat for anyone who likes to see a deliciously wicked side of the warrior princess. Particularly memorable is the scene where Xena pins the regent of an Amazon against a tree to find out just how 'concerned' about her she really is. - A. Fan - Nov-20-2008   

...the better to bite you with...
Nothing's sexier than Xena, Werewolf Warrior Princess. - George F. - Nov-24-2008   

this story was HILARIOUS and quite hot at times! OMG i laughed so much. awesome writing. - dee - Nov-25-2008   

HOT! HOT! HOT! And, fun..nee, too!!!! - Anonymous - Dec-04-2008   

you HAVE to read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Dec-08-2008   

Classic Xena Warrior Princess with Gabrielle and her original Amazon sisters. Thanks, Del, for reminding me why I fell in love with these characters ............. and for rekindling the spark........... - Anonymous - Dec-10-2008   

"Xena, I can't believe you ate my regent!" BWA!HA!HA!
I can't believe how many times I nearly fell out of my chair laughing!
- Anonymous - Dec-13-2008   

Oooooohhh .... gotta love big, bad werewolf Xena. - Anonymous - Dec-18-2008   

This is a great story, full of lots of twists and turns. Especially love the way Xena is alwasy harrassing poor Eponin. And, Gabrielle's reaction to the chicken feathers in the bed is priceless. - Anonymous - Mar-26-2009   

FANTASTIC!!!! ONE OF THE BEST ON THE WEB!!!!! - Anonymous - May-27-2009   

This is one of my favorite stories that I revisit over and over again. Whenever I'm in the mood for well-written, classic Xena, I look for fiction by this author. - Blue-eyed Bardlover - Jun-11-2009   

One of my favorites. And, with Halloween coming up in a few months, a story that I enjoy reading again and again. - A. Fan - Aug-27-2009   

A halloween story with a real bite. - Anonymous - Sep-04-2009   

fantastic story. - Anonymous - Sep-09-2009   

must-see....oops....make that must-read - Anonymous - Sep-15-2009   

I've devoured this story -- and with Halloween right around the corner, I'm looking forward to reading it again and again. Excellent work. - Anonymous - Sep-26-2009   

Halloween story. Hilarious. Hot. Read it. - Anonymous - Oct-02-2009   

This is a funny, sexy story. - Anonymous - Oct-09-2009   

Halloween, Xena-style. This is a great read. - Dani - Oct-15-2009   

Spooky.......sexy....hilarious........just the kind of story to curl up with a warm blanket and a hot cup of cider. - Terri - Oct-22-2009   

Marvelous read. - A. Fan - Oct-27-2009   

Just the right story to get in the mood for Halloween and a little trick or treating. - Anonymous - Oct-30-2009   

One of the best classic Xena stories out there. - Queen of the Amazons - Apr-11-2010   

oooh, a werewolf story set well before 'twilight' ----
who's afraid of the big, bad warrior princess? - Anonymous - Jun-25-2010   

I enjoyed this story. Very well written and I could read it ten more times - sassy123 - Sep-11-2010   

A werewolf story written before werewolf stories became "popular". Excellent read; just right for Halloween.
- Anonymous - Oct-31-2010   

I love this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Feb-09-2011   

well written.. great idea for a story.. - xtra dog - Aug-10-2011   

This is not only classic Xena - it's also a classic Howl-o-week story. - Anonymous - Oct-27-2011   

H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S!!! This one is a must read! It's unique, it's sexy, it's funny...one of my fav scenes is when an angry Gabrielle sends a misbehaving Xena to her room and she sulks away with her bone. - Silverwolf509 - Mar-04-2015   

Hot. Hotter. Hottest.?? - Anonymous - Jul-08-2016   

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Wow...this caused me to tear up. How true and painful the way it was put across. - Anonymous - Jan-06-2009   

This was a beautiful peace that honors our fallen gay and lesbian soldiers and those who still serve their country in silence because of a prejudice rule. Hopefully it will go the way of the same rule that didn't blacks and whites to serve together. Well done!! - mapsnika - Jan-10-2009   

Thank you. - rleef - Jan-11-2009   

This is an absolute "Must Read". A powerful emotional and intellectual indictment of unequal treatment. - wasabigrrl - Jan-12-2009   

Amen. - jls - Jan-15-2009   

YOU GO GIRL !!!! - TONI - Jan-16-2009   

You said it all, well written. Bravo! - Dawn - Feb-20-2009   

WOW! You said so much in so little a space. Great Story! - Charlie13 - Apr-14-2009   

Yes ma'am! - Anonymous - Apr-28-2009   

Highly emotional and highly insightful; and right on target. This piece should be mandatory reading for every military officer and our commander in chief. - jt - Apr-29-2009   

Stunningly brilliant. A mother's rant that is spot on. How many times in real life has this been repeated? If only change would come from this. Maybe a copy sent to all politicians ... - Georgia - Apr-30-2009   

OMG!!!! This is a wonderful story.... I wish more people would read this and let Our Government know that Gays in the Military should have the same rights.... They serve and die just as much as other people do.... I am ashamed of how are Government and citizens treat Gays in the Military and to those who are not... We are people too just because we don't have a man in our live doesn't mean we can't love too... People need to get a life and not worry about what we do in our homes..... - Xenafan33 - Jun-15-2009   

As we used to say in the Army, Hooah. Outstanding. - Roselle - Jul-23-2009   

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Awesome real story and real issue. Read it;I repeat myself READ IT and join the cause of all the families that want equality for all - xenamary - Sep-17-2009   

Damn. Really cuts to the heart of the matter, doesn't it? - xivren - Dec-07-2009   

wow.....just wow...+++ - Trish - Feb-01-2010   

I remember reading this a while back and it still move me. A great way to show up the hypocracy of a system that drastically needs changing. - Kugai - Feb-06-2010   

I am stunned - not being in the US, not having any connection to their army (I assume its the same for the other forces?) - in 2010 it seems impossible to have this type of horrific mentality.
Thank the Goddess that the someone other than a Bush is in the Whitehouse and has the courage to look at change......thanks Cheyne for bringing this to the attention of other women....and to any spouse or entlisted person, my heart goes out to you.....we are thinking of you - Anonymous - Mar-29-2010   

This was the Cheyne story that hooked me. It don't get anymore real than this. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

Excellent. Powerful. A must read. Cheyne is very eloquent in showing how hypocritical DADT was. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

wow.. this short story really got to me.. i am speechless.. i have no doubt that that is reality.. as a european i just don't understand.. i do believe that 'don't ask, don't tell' was installed with the best of intentions, even if it was a cop out, but it obviously backfired tremendously.. thought provoking.. - xtra dog - Mar-29-2012   

Really enjoyed this story. Extremely well written! Very true to the characters. I look forwards to the next chapter. - Anonymous - May-12-2010   

Very well written. Love the characterizations and the focus on the friendship...tension is starting to build! Keep it up! - Anonymous - Jul-04-2010   

love the pace of this story. looking forward to the next part. - carinjo - Aug-06-2010   

good. too many writers forget the organic essence of Seven in their quest to pair her up with Capt. Janeway. This characterization of Seven rings the truest I've ever read. This author would be very successful writing script for original TV series as well as current shows. - everett - Aug-06-2010   

The best explanation of romance I've heard to date! I so wish this series had continued. This writer has a pulse on Janeway and Seven's character. Good read, regardless of its incomplete status. - Teresa - Dec-02-2013   

I'm a big fan of Fletcher DeLancey, from the first moment that I came across Without a Front. The big surprise of the day was when I discovered another chapter in the story that I cherish greatly. I must say that I devoured these new pages with unique enthusiasm, I felt like a girl with her new toy, and boy toy! DeLancey's talent is more than present in this new job. Although this is a rather short novella, I'm used to a greater volume of pages by this author, DeLancey brings its grandeur in 68 or 400 pages, giving us things that many feel lost, as the meaning of honor, friendship and respect that everyone should practice to others. I hope Delancey continue the good work as she has done so far and delight us with more stories and so admirable job. Tip: Bookmark this author as one of the best. Thanks! - Lucian - May-18-2010   

This is a great addition to the Without a Front Universe! A definite must read. - L'Nara - May-18-2010   

thank goodness Fletcher Delancey one of the best writers around has graced us with another morsel of Alsean history - kind of a sequel to Without A Front - my only complaint, dear Fletcher, too short, too short! We need more of your wonderful stories. And BTW great beta reading as well!! - bookgeek - May-19-2010   

Excellent addition to the folklore of the Alsean world, my only wish is that it was longer ;) - Caden - May-21-2010   

Yay! A new story!! This is an excellent addition to the Alsea Saga. Great to see Fletcher writing again. - Kugai - May-22-2010   

I really enjoyed this addition to the "Fletcher Library" which continues along the Lancer Tal time 'n space. A little different but still a great piece of writing I recommend that you read WITHOUT A FRONT that sets the stage for Vellmar's follow-up as it helps with context. - CoolNik - May-25-2010   

Great read. A great author. Well worth the wait. I will probably read it over and over as I have "Without Front." Thanks Fletcher. P.S. I hope you are working on more Alsea. - BJ - May-28-2010   

Excellent follow-up novella to the Chronicles of Alsea series. Not to be missed -- this author has got it going, every single time she publishes! - Thora - Jun-08-2010   

I was thrilled to see there was an additional tale featuring the characters of Without a Front - and this is a well-crafted, lovely, engaging tale at that. I keep checking your website for new updates, Fletcher; your writing is the best on the web, and I adore your bevy of characters. I hope to see more soon!

And, thank you for your story. You are an inspiration. - Kate - Aug-03-2010   

This was fun reading right after Without a Front. What a great story. I can't wait for Salomen's story!!! - juliemania - Sep-02-2010   

I loved without a front and i loved this. Pleasantly surprised to have found this sequel, would love to hear more of Vellmar's stories. - bellat. - Sep-07-2010   

It really is a shame to see both these stories disappear from the web, they were the best tie-in/spinoff tales I've ever read and fit perfectly in with Fletchers Series.

One can understand it, with them having to be rewritten to remove those Voyager Tie-in elements, but I feel we've lost something in the removal of them in their original form.

They will be missed. - Kugai - Apr-06-2015   

It really is a shame to see both these stories disappear from the web, they were the best tie-in/spinoff tales I've ever read and fit perfectly in with Fletchers Series.

One can understand it, with them having to be rewritten to remove those Voyager Tie-in elements, but I feel we've lost something in the removal of them in their original form.

They will be missed. - Kugai - Apr-06-2015   

That was a fun sequel to Angelique. I really enjoyed the story(s). Great job. - Anonymous - Jul-21-2010   

What a delightful sequel. Plenty of action. It was if I were watching a movie. I would love more stories about these two. - cygirl1 - Dec-07-2010   

Two great stories. - Silver - Apr-17-2011   

very good sequel.. plenty of action, good dialogues,.. loved it.. - xtra dog - Nov-30-2011   

Sweet poem about Xena and Gabrielle's unspoken communication. :-) - Anonymous - Feb-05-2011   

Great sequel as well. The story captures you with its intensity and I totally could picture the scenes in my head, like a movie. - aurelius - Mar-29-2008   

This is an impressive story. I found the dream-passage sequence quite unnerving, while the climatic battle was dramatic and gripping. 'Behold a Pale Horse' utilises stark imagery to construct a powerful visual of Xena's internal, emotional conflict and the forces that wage war on her soul. Nice work! - ab - Apr-10-2009   

One of my favorite stories. Great job - sassy123 - Feb-26-2011   

This was the first long Xena story I ever read - the first epic - and it still stands up there with one of the best - it's a classic in which I have always compared other stories to and it still holds up today as having all the elements, the angst, the passion, the sensuousness that other stories - even the good ones - failed to portray with the same amount of drama and eloquence that this story depicts. Patricia Ennis is a wonderful writer and she has the relationship between X&G down pat. This was the story that set the standards to me of what a good classic Xena story should encompass. She's also one of the first of the alternative fan fiction writers - way before any of the more popular ones even emerged. Read this story and you'll understand why this story still holds up as one of the best stories ever written. - Karon Reiter - Jan 17th, 2005   

Where are parts 10, 11, and the epilogue? I tried to pull them from other sites, but the links are broken. I would love to finish the story... - Anonymous - Jun-21-2007   

The whole story is on archive.org. At the bottom of the each chapter is a link back to DAx's Fan Fiction page. That page has links to each chapter. Be patient though, archive.org sometimes is very slow. - Bardeyes - Jun-25-2007   

What a great X/G epic! Can anyone tell me more about the lath?? - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

I read this story years ago, and it still is one of the best altfic's I've ever read. They don't make 'em any better than this one. - Taoduck - May-15-2008   

Does not link to story. [Editor's Response - Actually it does. Not certain what the trouble was on the 24th. 10-1-2009] - Shelly - Sep-24-2009   

this one doesn't link to a story for me too... - Anonymous - Sep-10-2010   

What a great story. Good job of writing - sassy123 - Feb-26-2011   

A very funny story. Great job - sassy123 - Jul-21-2011   

funny but i don't think the solution they ultimately came up with is going to work.. - xtra dog - Jun-11-2013   

This story made me giggle, role my eyes, wince and then laugh, reaching for my beer. Great short story and so believable in the fanfic world. - Stacia - Sep-05-2014   

The author has found my funny bone and I just keep coming back for more. - a Larisa fan - Sep 1st, 2002   

This is more than I ever wanted to know about chicken processing plants since the infamous X-Files episode. But the laughs keep coming! A GREAT read! - Anastacia13 - Sep 10th, 2002   

Y'know..the more of your stories I read, the more I like your writing abilities. The way you can have something totally different for each story...well that ability does and continues to surprise me to no end. I'd repeat this comment for each of your stories that I've read, but you might get irritated with the repetition. - Jules - Aug 1st, 2004   

Ok, basically the stories of Larisa have the same elements but still she creates new stories each time.The dialogues are really funny e.g Grandpa, "Damn woman if I was 50 years younger and female." You have to read it to get the context... . - lectra - Aug 12th, 2004   

"kissed you stupid!" HAH!!! Larisa, you are INCREDIBLE...and the funniest damn stuff I've EVER read.....Thank you. - Anonymous - Jan 29th, 2006   

I swear,I've never laugh sooooo much in my life !!!! This is a great story :) you're great,Larisa :) - Manuela - Aug-09-2008   

This was one of Larisa'a more humorous stories, the laugh just keep coming, even Buster the cow was great, who new hamburger could be so funny. - mutt - Dec-15-2011   

couldn't help but laugh out loud at a few passages, thank you so much for making my day!!! - opensource - Mar-19-2013   

YAY!! **squeals of joy!!** these two are SOOOO cute, i mean honestly! with all that they go through, this saga has been truly wonderful...thank-you, Very Much....i've definitely learned some new word games....my partner's an amazon...and i am most definitely her pygmy!....thanx again! - Anonymous - Oct 24th, 2005   

if your looking for a story that let you see the whole relationship then this is it - ebby - Jan-21-2011   

whoohoo.. another lovely story in this series.. loved the word games in this one.. - xtra dog - Jun-16-2011   

A solid entry in the lives of Anna, Lilly and their growing family/circle of friends. Parts of this one happened too fast for me, especially Anna's sudden change of heart. One of the best things about this series is that it offers a more realistic approach to romance and how a couple combines their different likes, dislikes and personalities. Definitely worth the time! - Stacia - Jul-25-2013   

I really like this story, although it has violence in it, it's not too graphic.The two characters Anpo and Ketlin are really cute together.There are detailed descriptions but they are not annoying but really informative. - lectra - Jul 30th, 2004   

This is a really well written story. Redhawk takes you with her into this story like you were right there along with Anpo. I found it informative as well as a wonderfull love story. Keep these stories coming at me Redhawk, I can't get enough. - Robin Hicks - Jun 12th, 2005   

I think I have read this story from beginning to end at least 3 times already. Some novels I just want to read my favorite parts and then skim over the rest, but not this one. As each passage goes by and I feel the loss in that I'm nearer to the end of the characters' journeys. This novel is truly an excellent original fictional work, in the sense that the author created the characters herself and not rely on the reader's expectation of what the uber X & G would be like. Every character is a clean slate when they were first described so you would not know what to expect and how they would react given a situation. Masterfully written story that pulls you into the colorful and enriched world of the Lakota, and in it you'd find a beautiful love story that transends gender and culture. Highly recommended! Anybody know where I could buy several hard copies? - BYL - Jun 22nd, 2005   

I've read a lot stories during these past months and this is for sure one of the best so far. I highly recommend it. - querdenker69 - Jan 9th, 2006   

I have read this story at least ten times. It is very well written. I love the characters. Great Job! - kaytrina lewis - Apr-01-2007   

I already read this story severel times. it's so beautiful written and I just love it. with this story you learn so much about the Lakota that you wish to live with them at this time. I'd like to read a sequel, more about the proud Lakota, even if it would be kinda sad with the coming wars in this time. - Francis - Oct-01-2007   

Redhawk, you go girl!!! - Carla - Feb-15-2008   

What a rich and tasty story. The characters, even the secondary ones, have so much depth that they are all fascinating. The plot is gripping and the culture of the Lakota people beautifully portrayed. Good work, Redhawk. - calabria - Mar-07-2008   

An exceptional story with deep character development. You won't want to miss this. - Anonymous - Aug-01-2008   

Extremely well woven tale...exceptional in every way. I beg Redhawk to continue writing about the Lakota people. She's got me hooked! - JC - Oct-27-2008   

Wow....I could not stop reading this. It's an amazing story and it's filled me with such love. Actually, I can't keep the goofy smile off my face. I need to go see my girlfriend now and tell her how much I love her. Thank you Redhawk :D - Yuri - Apr-10-2009   

This story sucked me in, and kept me up till 4 am reading! I loved this story, and wished it would have kept going on and on. - Xenasgrrl - May-16-2009   

I have to say, the "awww" factor is pretty high in this one. Incredibly sweet, adorable and just plain good. An extremely well written piece that had me up till four in the morning. - nicole938 - Oct-25-2009   

amazing story..i love it so much..must read.. - yenny - Nov-09-2009   

I skirted around this one for ages! When I finally did get around to it I found it to be endearingly romantic, very educational about the Lakota people and just down right lovely. - Sai - May-17-2010   

It is the first time I read a story that takes us to a world so different from other environments in which other stories focus. This story has all the necessary ingredients to keep us glued to the end. I have learned much about the Lakota way of life, to the point of appreciating the meaning of their customs. Overall, I enjoyed reading this story of love, lived freely and openly in a community that lets life pass through them with the full force and not the other way, passing through life as if it does not leave marks and we were someone watching from afar. My advice: read it without delay! - Lucian - May-31-2010   

I just finished reading this story for the thrid time and I just have to say that it is still amazing. It was one of the first bits of fan fic I ever read and to this day it is still one of my favorites. If you haven't read it yet better get to it! - Anonymous - Sep-02-2010   

Fantastic! A great epic story! READ This one. I was moved. This is my 1st story from
this bard and it did not disappoint. Redhawk, I will definitely read more. Thank you!
-Tena - tena - Jan-02-2011   

One of my new faves! Wonderful, emotional story! - Anonymous - Feb-20-2011   

I first read this story back in late 1999, and have fondly remembered it ever since. I couldn't remember the name, but I finally managed to find it again. Of anything, it is better with the second reading, and I appreciate Redhawk's talent even more at twenty-nine than I did at seventeen. I'll never forget the name of this gem again, and I know old be reading it a third time someday. - John Rehfeld - Feb-27-2011   

Great, great story! - hit.dana - Mar-10-2011   

This is a great piece of historical fiction! Almost no sex scenes saved for the last part, but this does not stop a beautifully woven story. Highly recommended. - booksmantra - Apr-20-2011   

This is the first story I read of the alt genre. I can never go back to harlequinn again. Such a fantastic tender first love story that does not need nor rely on graphic sex scenes to hold the readers attention. I recommend it to all readers of ANY genre. - Paula - May-23-2011   

Amazing visualisation. Pure entertainment from beginning to end. Whilst it had enough amount of spice( i think the fun's in the anticipation), the PWP followup To The River (..i think it was) would most certainly satisfy those less 'gratified' by TKL :) Thank you DJordan - Mica - Aug-20-2012   

OmG I'm obsessed with this story... It's soo good that I run and bought the paperback .. - Garlic - Jan-14-2013   

link broken - Anonymous - Oct-16-2016   

Advocate is one of my all time favorite authors, and this story is an excellent example of why. Everyone should read this story! - Sparky - Jun 25th, 2004   

I was really getting into this story, but it wouldn't let me continue after part 2. Is it finished? - jac.. - Aug 14th, 2005   

What a great story! Glad I was able to continue after "part 2". I know this writer has a few published works available (I just finished reading the published version of "First Lady" w/T Novan..another great read)....... Has this story been published? If not, it sure as heck should be. Excellent work. - jac.. - Aug 20th, 2005   

This is a great read. If you'd like to get past part two in this link....go up to the address bar and click on where it says lasttrain2.htm . Change the "2" to a "3" and the "htm" to "html" . Happy reading! - Anonymous - Oct 7th, 2005   

This is a wonderful story that I never wanted to end. Just goes to show that family can come from the oddest situations. A must read. - purplehawke - May-15-2007   

If you´re looking for a great story with all the right ingredients you mustn´t look any further. This is a truly wonderful story that tore at my heart... Highly recommended! - Ines - Sep-15-2007   

Broken link! - Ami - Jun-20-2009   

A very touching love story. I would recommend it to anyone who likes reading those kind of stories. - uber goober - Oct-31-2009   

Oh, this is a good story! Set in the late 19th century, it keeps its head while telling a tale of love and the search for family. The protagonists are lovable but true, and the story keeps you warm throughout. - RhB - Jul-21-2010   

What a great story. I really enjoyed it!!! - sassy123 - Oct-07-2010   

Brilliant. - Silver - Apr-10-2011   

Just amazing. I was left speechless! A must read - Anonymous - Sep-03-2011   

Wow !! I am inlove with this story. I'm a complete sucker for tales told in times of old, and being a New Yorker myself, I certainly appreciated the mentioning of our streets and Bridges. What a marvelously innocent love story between these two girls. Then combined with high adventure and danger made for an exceptionally exciting story, full of angst yet so much love it will have you rooting them on ! Thank you so much for this !! - Thothgirl - May-13-2013   

Gotta tell ya......this is a must read!!!! It's exciting,tragic,loveable and heartwarmingly funny. It's now my new top favorite. The ending wasn't enough and I feel like I just tapped into a great series if the author so wanted to continue on. PLEASE DO! - Katie of Ohio - May-20-2013   

Finished story. - Anonymous - Apr-20-2008   

Great action. Gentle emotional angst. Ran home from work and finished reading it. I couldn't stop! - Anonymous - Apr-30-2008   

I stayed up till 4 in the morning reading this book. Five it a chance and read it! - Anonymous - Aug-12-2008   

I really loved this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-15-2010   

good story and well worth the read. Lois Kay is a wonderful author. Highly recommended. - Anonymous - Dec-19-2010   

I liked the mixture of romance and suspense! Definitely a good read. - Ricky - Jan-04-2013   

It has been several years since I've first read this story. One I know I will continue to come back to since it is sooo good. This author is so good and the story well worth the read. Angst, suspense, romance, wonderfully flushed out characters. - colorado fan - Jan-05-2013   

Lots of emotions that tug the heart strings with a cast of fantastic characters. A great read for a rainy day. - Stacia - Jan-24-2013   

This recommendation really works!! I read and reread All That Matters S X Meagher is a great writer. I REALLY like and enjoy this story. Incredible story of Love.. I also read "Arbor Vitea" I don't see anywhere under her name to where a person can add their recommendations.. So I must write it on here.....
I absolutely loved every single word written in this story, Clancy the landscaper fall's in Love with the older woman Abby.... Refreshing to read, Clancy even drove a yellow Pickup truck... Breath taking!! Refreshing!!! and fun to read...You've have got to read this story too.
I think S X Meagher is a very good writer. GREAT STORY!!! - carrie - Aug-26-2006   

Beautifully written, compulsive reading. if you have not read it yet don't waste another minute, enjoy. - xenite 40 - Aug-28-2006   

precious, breathtaking tale - made me cry :) - Kati - Sep-05-2006   

I just sent the author an email, but I figured, "Hey, I'll let everyone else know how much I loved this story.".

The story was beautifully writting and not full of the same old tired "blue orbs looked into green circles and long, muscular arms encircled taut abdomens, yadda yadda..." And the dialogue was superb. I have NEVER laughed out loud reading anything in my life at an online fanfic story/novel. Well, I can't say that anymore. And, for an FYI, the ONLY time I've EVER laughed out loud at anything written was when I've read any of Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum novels (if you haven't read one, you have no idea what you're missing...).

I HIGHLY recommend this author regardless of the story. If it has SX Meagher attached to it anywhere, you're doing yourself a grave disservice by not reading it. SO READ IT!! - Kye Morgan - Sep-12-2006   

I haven't read a story of Susan's that I didn't love and this is no exception. Another one for the keeper file. - Netta - Dec-10-2006   

Encore...Encore. Great read. What a wonderful story of how love is found sometimes unexpectedly. I would love to see more on these characters lifea fter pregnancy. - Karen - Mar-22-2007   

Unlike the last recommendation, this story ranks right up there as my all time favourite, so I'm pleading with S X Meagher - please write a sequel! Anyone who's read this story is surely longing to see where these two wonderful women are going with their relationship. It feels like they've just got started (which they have) and there's so much more that could be told by Ms Meagher on their behalf. Do us all a favour S X and bring on the sequel. I bet the day it hits the site, it rockets to number one on the readers list. At least tell us your thinking about it. - Pam, England - Mar-26-2007   

This was one of the BEST stories I've read in a long time...the characters were engaging, dynamic, passionate and endearing..A Must read...I would loove a sequel! - Karrie - Apr-16-2007   

This is a long story, which I do like, and it was very well written. I had to pull out my dictionary a couple of times which I REALLY like! Thanks S X Meagher for a great read! - CL MacDonald - Apr-22-2007   

Lovely story. Very realistic.
Looooved it! - Mile D'Cast - Apr-26-2007   

I don't think All That Matters could be any sweeter if it tried. The "awww" factor in this story is definitely turned to high. After reading it, I was filled with the nicest yet most inexplicable feeling of well being. Oh and the writing is superb, so superb in fact that I breezed through it in 3 days. SX manages connect you so deeply with her characters that you can feel Kylie's heart pounding a mile a minute in your own chest when...whoops can't do that, don't want to spoil if for the rest of the class. That reminds me, what are you waiting for??? Go read it already.

PS SX you rock my world.
PPS Hard. - nicole938 - Aug-09-2007   

Fantastic story--fantastic resolution of every possible angle. Great reading. Thanks! - Fic - Aug-17-2007   

A very well-written story which had me completely enthralled. Ms Meagher is undoubtedly one of the best writers of romantic fiction online. I notice that some of her work has been published - well done. - Anonymous - Oct-01-2007   

Ok, I know I just reccommended SX Meagher's other story, Arbor Vitae, but this one is also a favorite. The author pulls you in and doesn't let you go. After reading this great fiction, I now have a better appreciation for pregnant women and definitely find them HOT! : ) - little bear - Oct-03-2007   

One of my favorite stories. Endearing characters and well-paced romance. - SS - Jan-28-2008   

fantastic read
- Anonymous - Jan-29-2008   

I love to read any thing she had written. Good stuff. - michele - Feb-05-2008   

This is one of the most captivating stories I've read. It's definitely worth the time. - Jaydon Lacenta - Feb-08-2008   

one of the best storyline development and characters i've read! kylie and blair are absolutely loveable characters. S X Meagher is a gift to the fanfic universe. A must read. - luie - Feb-23-2008   

It is five am in the morning and I've just finished this epic piece. It left me breathless and, dammit, I want a freakin' sequel! - M. - Mar-09-2008   

Very good story. - Anonymous - Apr-25-2008   

One of the best stories I read, it melt my heart and made me cry, what an amazing relationship...please read this, I assure you that you won't regret it. - mackdido - Apr-30-2008   

This story is so wonderful; and touched me deeply. This is truly a story to take the time to read! - Jennifer Lee - May-24-2008   

Loved it, Loved it, loved it. Sequwl please!!!! - Xenangabfan - Aug-30-2008   

I read a LOT! And there are some stories that... whew need help, but not only have I read and read Susan X online stories. I bought her books, the only thing I would love to do is put it on screen, can you just see Brittany Murphy as Blair, in my mind Kylie is Angie Harmon... What a juicy, complete, well written full bodied story. Is there even wine this good? This is one of the most perfect detailed descriptions of love. She even gave it the very best title... All That Matters, it really is. - INOV8TR - Sep-16-2008   

I highly recommend ready all of S X Meagher's work. She is very talented and I continue to re-read her stories everyday, I'm simply in love with everything she writes. I never wanted this story to end. I loved that the it was unique like the roles were reversed. LOVE IT!! - Sheronah-Hope - Sep-28-2010   

wonderful read, the character dinamic could not be better. You must read this!!! then again, everything by sx is wonderful. - cpo - Oct-06-2010   

What a great story.Very well done. - sassy123 - Nov-29-2010   

story no longer available, recommend removing link.
[Editor's Note: Link found & updated... 01-08-2011] - Anonymous - Dec-11-2010   

What a great story... - bluebutterfly - Jan-11-2011   

Very good story. I love how this relationship grows throughout the story. It's a long, but very satisfying read. - Lyn B - Mar-21-2011   

This was brilliant. It took a long time developing the friendship and relationship and made an unlikely outcome, become likely and thoroughly enjoyable. - Silver - Apr-09-2011   

One of my favorite stories ... - Dynamo - Jul-10-2011   

it is indeed all that matters.. particularly loved tnis phrase as a dog lover: 'The dogs stretched out on the concrete, warming their bellies, while they dreamed up plans to teach the new puppy how to bark properly.' :)

- xtra dog - Jul-23-2011   

I have read this amazing novel time and time again. It's a great talent you've got, Ms Meagher! - Pegi - Aug-12-2012   

A very lovely read. - Niyah - Dec-09-2012   

I Really enjoyed reading this. I hope there is an update soon - gillian - Oct-16-2006   

Excellent story! Hope you continue, I am so looking forward to the next part. Just love it that Xena is not the evil conqueror this time round. Good plot - lovely character development - well written. Keep it up! - 3creeks - Oct-18-2006   

excellent story and love that it's not the typical Conqueror/Gabrielle story. Great plot and hope you continue the story!!! Job well done - Anonymous - Oct-22-2006   

Great story!! Very true to both characters in a completely new setting and plot. If you crave xena and gabrielle stories, read this. Only bummer is that it is unfinished. I will be watching for the next part eagerly! - kjviking - Oct-24-2006   

YESSS! This is what I have been waiting for, a new Conqueror story. This one has the makings for a exciting ride. This story is not your usual, so be ready for something new. I hope the Author posts more of it soon. I can't wait for the next part. - R.C.P - Nov-03-2006   

Awsome! A mew conqueror story, always love to read those. Great start with this new story and can't wait for the next part! Keep up the excellent work Lori. - alecto - Nov-25-2006   

This is a wonderful new Conqueror story. I love the storyline and the character development. This Xena the Conqueror is multilayered: powerful, confident, passionate, noble, and vulnerable. Shes not the typical evil Conqueror that needs Gabrielle to tame her. This is a unique story that shows how the strongest of rulers maintains an often-tenuous hold on her power. I cant wait for the next installment! - Jessica - Jan-09-2007   

Great story, I particularly like your characterization of Xena. I also like the fact that Gabrielle is not as innocent and naive, as other stories have her. I cant wait to see where this story will lead. - Anonymous - Jan-13-2007   

This is fun to read! The ancient ruins of Athens come alive. The Conqueror is developing into a very interesting character. I'm ready for more... - Cheryl B. - Jan-18-2007   

Excellent story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! - Anonymous - Jan-29-2007   

great start. now your muse must be invited to finish this wonderful story. - Anonymous - Mar-27-2007   

A fantastic story but I was so disappointed that it's never been finished. - JC - Jul-22-2007   

Wow great story...any word of it being finished anytime soon??? - nicole - Oct-12-2007   

OMG, I rated the wrong story. "Hunger" was a great story but his Conqueror story is different, unique in its interpretation of the Conqueror. Realistic in some ways, and absolutely believable. More? - SPQR - May-30-2008   

Where is part 2 for the love of god. Such a good story. Very engaging. What a great writer. - gracie - Jul-05-2008   

There was so much going on in this unbelievably good yarn.... and Wham! it ended . Where oh where is the sequel ??? I recommend it highly, but believe me, you'll get drawn so deeply into it, that the disappointment you'll feel when you're just left hanging....makes me kind of sorry I started it in the first place. NOT !! So not true !!.It's so worth the tease---read it; then please write the sequel. - JESS - Aug-25-2008   

This is easily the best Conqueror story to date. I love this Xena; she is smart, clever, vulnerable--not the evil one dimensional person she can be. And I love it that she lives in the ancient world. Where's the sequel? - The Singularity - Sep-04-2008   

It is great story...can not wait to read part 2 - Anonymous - Sep-06-2008   

I loved this conqueror tale. It was smart and very well written with three dimensional characters and clever situations. I do wish for a sequel soon. - ColdDarkMatter - Oct-30-2008   

The best conqueror story to date; but, where's part 2? - aeneid - Oct-29-2009   

This is an extremely well written Conqueror story. Kudos for the great depiction of ancient Greece and adapting it for a Xena story. - aurelius - Nov-03-2009   

Where is part II of this fabulous story? - inxes - Nov-08-2009   

Please finish this story. I've really enjoyed it and want to know how it ends. - Anonymous - Nov-12-2009   

Great Story!!! shame it was not finished ... - Anonymous - Jul-15-2010   

excellent - Anonymous - Jul-24-2010   

It's a really good story and going in a great direction. I hope the author will continue with this story. Perhaps a part II. - MoSeS - Sep-11-2010   

Yet another Conqueror story that remains unfinished. Why do these authors do that?Even a hasty tacked on version is better than none at all. - Anonymous - Nov-05-2010   

Wonderful story so far, but what is it about these Xena writers that they never finish a yarn? - Anonymous - Dec-08-2010   

I was astonished by the depth and maturity of Bardaholic's writing..When you read the disclaimer ..you will find out why!! Go on...Read it..it's sweet and sad and beautifully crafted..This is a major new talent..Good job Bardaholic!! - Mel - Jan-13-2009   

Sort of an extended ending for FIN, a sweet story. - Anonymous - Jan-24-2009   

So sad... - Anonymous - Mar-28-2010   

This is the first story to make me weep in quite some time. Beautiful, but heart wrenching. - Silver - Jun-17-2010   

A much more satisfying ending to the series. - Ann - Feb-05-2011   

Another great installment, but we've got a ways to go before the end. Good stuff. - Arassar - Mar-16-2009   

This story is becoming more and more intriguing by the minute. I love it!!! - jo - Mar-17-2009   

Sensational! Jordana is such an amazing character and I just love it when those women put her through hell. There are a lot of great one-liners in both this story and Book 1. I would recommend it to anyone. ENJOY!!! - amie - Mar-19-2009   

Another great tale from a truly talented author. I love all the characters in this one and look forward to seeing more of them. In fact, you can't go wrong reading any one of Aurelia's stories. Take my word for it. READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - jean - Mar-19-2009   

I just love these stories and cannot wait for intstallment 3. Please, please give us another one real soon. Im begging here! - RCP - Apr-15-2009   

The series gets better and better. I am really intrigued by the character interactions; there is always a twist. These ladies just miss understanding each other by millimeters, but it seems like miles. Through it all is a growing respect for one another. I'm just loving it. Wonderful texture in the story telling. - wasabigrrl - Sep-11-2009   

Aurelia, you have caused me many a sleepless night, but this one has kept me up all night! While I'm not found of science fiction, I love the fact that despite being set in outer space, it doesn't have the feel of science fiction. It's more a rollercoaster ride of an adventure wrapped up in space dust. I highly recommend this one to everybody. - jaq - May-20-2010   

Wow! That was a great tale and the plot is definitely thickening. I can't wait to read the rest of the series. - uber goober - Aug-18-2010   

What a wonderfully interesting story. Incredibly thought-provoking - and so sad. Without giving anything away, just let me say, this is one of the best classic Xena stories out there along with so many others that Ella has written. I recommend all of her work. She's quite amazing. I wish she was still writing. We can use more classic Xena stories. This place has been overrun with too many ubers - some of which you can't even recognize as Xena and Gabrielle. They should be in the original fiction section as they seem to have nothing to do with the dynamic of Xena and Gabrielle. If you want a wonderful ride in the world of the Xenaverse, read this. - Karon Reiter - Apr 3rd, 2005   

Do not miss this story!!! It is one of the most gut wrenching...reaffirming love stories I've ever read!!! It gets better with every read...Highly...highly...recommend!!!!!! - loubug - Apr 14th, 2005   

I've come back to this story many times and it never fails to touch me deeply. a truly wonderful story - Shyn - Nov 23rd, 2005   

If this story was indeed written in '97 the author was remarkably prescient in anticipating several things that later happened in the series. They include the following; Gabrielle's loss of her blood innocence, her transformation to a skilled warrior, and her eerie description of preparing Xena's body for burial that, of course, later happens in the episode Friend In Need. Eloquent yet economical prose. Well done! - 3creeks - Feb-24-2007   

I loved this story. One word...compassion. - purplehawke - Aug-18-2007   

What a beautiful story ! The words are flowing with grace, and the emotions behind them go straight to the heart of the reader. Ella Quince's writing is like music, like a perfectly crafted song : you hear it once, the tune stay with you forever. - Carambar - Aug-25-2008   

They're RIGHT! Read it! - yuka - Oct-22-2009   

This is such a great story. A definite read. - Anonymous - Oct-26-2009   

Very compelling and moving story. Beautifully written for such a short piece, I'd recommend it to anyone. - Anonymous - Dec-09-2009   

Very good story! - Enverz - Dec-15-2009   

This was great! It acually made me cry but it was also loving and passionate:) - Dominyka - Apr-12-2010   

Nice story. Great job. - sassy123 - Nov-30-2010   

Abdolutely wonderful! Well written, incredibly unique--a true pleasure to read. Very highly recommended. - Anonymous - Apr-10-2011   

While there have been many well written post FIN stories describing very real and rewarding ways in which to get Xena back - should that ever happen, this probably deserves to be seriously considered as one of them. What makes this story so extraordinary is that it was written in 1997 long before the final episode aired, which makes it all that much more painful and heartbreaking to read. This, like most of Ella Quince's stories is a profound read. - Karon Reiter - Jul-01-2011   

A beautifully written story, so rife with pain and introspection. I wish she were still writing fan fiction because this piece is so unique & thoughtful. Without going too deeply into it, Xena's pain, fear and vulnerability are so beautifully captured. For anyone who relates to the inner struggles of X+G, this story is a MUST! - XenaZon - Jun-11-2014   

Beautiful and touching story. Gabrielle's love of Xena had no boundaries, no end. We all know there was nothing she wouldn't do for her soul mate. I love imagining her the way she has been portrayed in this endearing story. Thank you.. - Anonymous - Oct-10-2014   

With the constant and diminishing availability of classic Xena/Gabrielle stories on the web lately, I always rely on re-reading the "old timers". Ms. Quince's stories are a favorite indulgence, superbly written and always satisfying. - Kaye - Aug 24th, 2003   

Like the poster before me, I agree, there is definite lack of good classic Xena stories being written - everyone seems to be moving to uber more since the show ended - this story by one of the premiere superior writers is so moving and so touching - that no uber can come close. This story will bring a tear to your eye by the sheer weight of the emotions being elicited. - Karon Reiter - Jan 29th, 2005   

For some reason I always come back to this story. I absolutely love it and I really do suggest this story. - Nikki - Jun 12th, 2005   

Someone just mentioned this story the other day. I'd not read Ella before now and didn't know what I had been missing! This story is nicely written, quite moving, and sexy. Simply, a must read! - 3creeks - Feb-24-2007   

Well written really enjoyed it..... - Shayle - Jul-02-2009   

A classic, dont miss - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Really interesting and well written story. A good read! - Enverz - Dec-23-2009   

What a nice story. Great job of writing. - sassy123 - Feb-08-2011   

my first reaction to this story was after reading the synopsis.. 'what?? wait.. what happened??' and i just kept on reacting to the story.. very good writing when an author can achieve that.. - xtra dog - Jun-11-2013   

Just discovered this love story full of adventure. Read it and enjoy! - cam - Jul-23-2006   

- Anonymous - Oct-27-2006   

Very enjoyable read! Don't miss this one! - Anonymous - Oct-27-2006   

This was sooooooo good. One of my top fives. Please do yourself a favor and read this. It has everything! Romance, mystery, and adventure. If you love animals this one is for you! - Amanda - May-03-2008   

Fantastic story, a pleasure to read. Very sweet and heartwarming with plenty of action and an interesting plot. - Anonymous - Dec-03-2009   

I love these two stories and often re read them. Gangsters are hot! - Bolly - Feb-17-2011   

This story is AWESOME!!!!! Once you start reading you will not want to stop. The best thing is it's complete. Great characters (Julia and Kris) It's one of my favorites. I would urge everyone to read. - Anonymous - Aug 7th, 2003   

*******Very Important Notice*********You have to, i mean you really have to read this story it is the sweetest love story. It has taken Dreams a freakin' long time to finish this, and it is a long one. Dreams has an incredible talent with words, and a hooolarious sense of humour. just read it cos you won't be sorry. - Stephanie - Aug 8th, 2003   

Can't even describe how much I love this story. I felt as though that I had to read this story until it was finished because it was tremendous. Can't wait for the sequel. It should be great as the first one. I would recommend , no , I would WANT everyone to read this story because it is worth the read! - Meg - Aug 19th, 2003   

For the romantics out there this story is for you. Dreams weaved a sweet, funny, wonderfully entertaining story. Once you started reading, you won't be able to put it down. Dreams is a very talented writer, it's no wonder this novel is in the process of being published. On a rating of 1 to 6, DEFINITELY a 6. This story gets my highest recommendation. - lucidusgirl - Nov 1st, 2003   

This is just f**king amazing, f**king amazing :) - Anonymous - Nov 7th, 2003   

I don't know what it is. Just kept on getting good and I really, absolutely, positively, did not want to stop reading. Don't want to use a cliche but "it glued me to my chair." Never, ever will get tired of reading this story. I think I can unglue my eyeballs form the screen now. - Meg - Nov 24th, 2003   

It's odd. I didn't want it to end; and what do you know, it really didn't end.It's kind of pitiful to get so wrapped up in a bunch of imaginary people; but I hope there is a sequel or something. Dreams wasn't kidding about all the steamy sex. Loved the characters and the humor. I felt stupid for laughing out loud all by my self; then I remembered that no one else was around, so I laughed louder. It took almost a day to get through it but I just couldn't stop reading. - Anonymous - Nov 25th, 2003   

Incredibly tender, touching story of two souls recognising each other through the distance. So real it breathes with life. Thank you, Dreams, give my love to your muse :o) - Katrina - Dec 1st, 2003   

I was in the middle of this story-which is great, when I came upon a broken link on page 26. Please HELP!!! - Anonymous - Dec 3rd, 2003   

This story was amazing! I found myself staying up all night to finish reading it and it was well worth it! I would love to see a sequel... actually, I'm dying to see a sequel! I highly recommend all of Dreams' work!! - Alicia - Dec 27th, 2003   

This story is for the true romantic and it's absolutely incredible. I really hope there's a sequel to this amazing story. - Insane/Crazy - Jun 20th, 2004   

please please please someone badger Dreams for a sequel!this is an excuisite story, the characters are so real, evryone should run, not walk to read this if you haven't yet! - polar - Jul 5th, 2004   

awsome story!!! very romantic, this story reminds me of the movie you got mail. hoping for a sequel!! - blazinangelwings - Nov 18th, 2004   

This is a CRACKING story and one you won't want to put down. I didn't ever want to finish it, but couldn't wait to get to the end. Please, please 'Dreams' do a sequel. - Sai - Jan 14th, 2005   

This story is fabulous - I didn't know it was finished and am unable to link beyond the first part. I have up to 63.3. Is there another link to finish this great tale? - memck - Jan 15th, 2005   

This is an excellent story. I loved the humor. The characters and story line are wonderful. The only thing that would make it better would be a sequel. - jh - Mar 25th, 2005   

What a delightful surprise this was! I was browsing around looking for something new to read and noticed it on the "Archives" page. Very sweet. Real characters. Good dialogue. Right blend of pathos and humor. I completely enjoyed it and it kept me turning the page. Well done! Hope there will be more about Kris and Julianne! - Gracie Albright - Mar 31st, 2005   

Best fiction ever read~ ^^ - fallen - Apr-28-2006   

This link is not working. The story can be still found on The Academy. - Anonymous - Sep-30-2006   

Great characters, awesome dialog!!! Really good read... I hope there's a sequel. - Anonymous - Oct-11-2006   

- Anonymous - Oct-15-2006   

Without a doubt, one of the best I have ever read. I loved witnessing Julia emerge and ultimately blend with Julianne. And what lesbian hasn't at one time or another experienced the angst of unrequited love? I don't think we need a sequel however, I'd rather believe they just lived happily ever after LOL. Awesome job Dreams. Many thanks. - Tracy - Jan-14-2007   

This story is getting re-edited by the author on her site & the dialogue is even better. So far only 2 parts are re-worked. http://midnightisland.com/weblog/index.php/the-blind-side-of-love-v2-chapters-1-6/ - Kali - Apr-20-2007   

Excellent story. Amazingly believable characters. Simply great story-telling. Can't wait to see what comes next! - jd - May-05-2007   

I love this story. I started and finished it in one day. It is really romantic. Please, write a sequel one day. - s.happy - May-16-2007   

nice story, one of the best around here - Viridiana - May-20-2007   

AMAZING!!!! READ THIS STORY!!!

Oh and to awesome author, I ask you on behalf of anyone who has read your story......PLEASE write a sequel! Thanks - Kelz - Mar-21-2008   

good story but needs a continuence - Anonymous - Apr-01-2008   

Brilliant story...I read it until 7am, slept for 3 hrs then got up and read the rest because I couldn't stop dreaming about it....I've wasted the day away but it was well worth it. I'm gutted that it's finished, and I'll 'Dream' for a sequal LOL!!!! Julianne was very HOT too....mmmmmm..... - nexakill - Apr-09-2008   

OMIGOD! What a page turner this one is. I am on the last 30 pages and I DO NOT want this story to end!!! Witty, sharp writing, fantastic characters. Please, Please may I have some more in the way of a sequel?? With sugar on top?? - Anon - Apr-17-2008   

Nooooooo.... I just can't fanthom this being the end of the story. Please, please let there at least be a sequel in the making. Just a tiny glimpse of the future of these two...
such a wonderful piece of work! - lyneX - Apr-20-2008   

Seriously...one of the best stories I've read...and I've read a lot!! It kept me reading until I was literally holding my eyes open, just to read another page!! One of the most romantic and yet funniest stories. I couldn't stop myself from laughing out loud! Dreams definitely left me wanting more!! You have to read this...I'm sure I will again! - Chele - Apr-20-2008   

Good read. Definitely recommended. - Ape - Apr-21-2008   

You can't stop reading it! - HDA - Apr-23-2008   

Everyone should read this! - Lish - Apr-25-2008   

I adore this story, and have read it several times. It's funny and sweet and the characters (main and secondary) are engaging and lovable. Dialogue is excellent.
Definitely a recommended read - I'll give a warning however you might have trouble putting the book down once you start reading. :)

- K - Apr-25-2008   

A tip to everybody who loved this story: the author is currently rewriting it and it's becoming even better! Check her site: http://midnightisland.com. - Anonymous - Apr-28-2008   

A very enjoyable story. I hated to see it end and would really love to read a sequel. I was not able to stop reading; funny, warm, and insightful. - Wasabigirl - Apr-28-2008   

This is a very good story, the best I have read in a long time. Would recommend everyone read it. Can't wait for the re-written story. - Luvtigger71 - Apr-30-2008   

Ilove this story. Such great characters! I do hope that you make a sequel!!! - thao - Sep-09-2008   

A very good story, good plot and charaters. Love Julia. But....why does this have a spice index of 7? I would give it a 2 if even. Needs a spicy sequel! - Amanda - Jan-18-2009   

Excellent story, just begging for a sequal!! - Lynn - Feb-04-2009   

okay...we're all waiting here...Where's the next one?!! - Anonymous - Feb-14-2009   

Amazing, wonderful, emotional and witty. A sequel is a must! Please do not keep us waiting.
A must read! - xf - Feb-24-2009   

loved it-----more please!!! - Anonymous - Apr-23-2009   

This story gets my highest recommendation. - Anonymous - May-17-2009   

I just read this for the first time and I can not compliment the author enough on how wonderful this story was. It had me laughing like a school girl and my heart beating just like it did when I had my first crush. I will refrain from screaming sequel at the top of my lungs, but I do recommend this for anyone looking for a fun read. Also, you might want to read it when you have some time considering I could not stop long enough to sleep for more then four hours. - Rae - Jun-15-2009   

Really great story...would love to read more about these characters! - Ginger - Jun-20-2009   

It REALLY needs a sequel.
Funny, witty, beautifully slow paced, character development and really cute moments. A MUST READ. - Anonymous - Jun-23-2009   

I haven't been able to stop readint this story for 2 days! Finally finished and I LOVE it...I just wish there had been more...and um, well, er...sex would have been nice after all that waiting! But excellent story! Sequel? Please??? - Xenasgrrl - Aug-29-2009   

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS STORY IS AMAZING...AND WHEN I SAY AMAZING THAT EXACTLY WHAT IT IS...PLEASE OH PLEASE POST THE SEQUEL SOON - reaser - Sep-01-2009   

What a wonderful read. A slow one but still wonderful... It needs a little spice, I think, erm, a little sex after that slow development.. Sigh... I guess a sequel must be nice for us readers who were probably left hanging after this one. - Fan - Sep-03-2009   

Absolutely Fantastic Read - Loved it! - Texas_wild - Oct-31-2009   

definitely recommend the story, great read albeit a bit slow. - T - Nov-10-2009   

Extremely well written...earns my highest praise!!! Stayed up 'til midnight three nights in a row and survived on five hours of sleep the next day because I just could not put this down!! I love it when a story builds slowly and we agonize along with the characters. Blooming love and the sweet burn of desire should never be rushed. Just so much sweeter and rewarding in the end. This was perfect! - JC - Nov-24-2009   

This story is amazing. The main characters and the development of their relationship was wonderful, and the supporting cast was great too - often bringing their scenes a chuckle or two. I stayed up until 4am finishing this and the only regret I had was that there wasn't any more for me to read. Definitely recommended. - E.J. - Jul-09-2010   

WOW. The others were not kidding about being glued to the screen. I started reading this morning and couldn't tear my eyes away til midnight. A PHENOMENAL STORY!!!! - Jane - Jul-23-2010   

Synopsis: Julianne Franqui is a hot actress and secretly gay. On a trip to New York she sees the artwork of artist Kris Milano, whose talent is not the only thing she's attracted to. Undercover of email, she begins a correspondence with the artist . When she comes to New York for filming and finally meets her, will she tell Kris the truth ... all of it?

- Anonymous - Jul-23-2010   

this is such a sweet love story. i had to stay up past my bedtime, into the wee hours of the morning just 'cause i had, had to finish it. - kc - Jul-25-2010   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** This is a great story. It is one of my favorite reads of all time. The ending however is less than satisfying. It ends so abruptly! Especially after the long buildup. Sequel anyone? Several loose ends. - Mindyd - Jul-30-2010   

If you like this one you should read the second version of it. You are gonna love it. It a bit more of a well rounded book go to;
http://community.livejournal.com/tbsol_v2/ - DalizC - Jul-31-2010   

make me wake up all night! cheers to that! but why i get access denied to read the version from LJ...i want to read moooooreeee - anon - Jul-31-2010   

Excellent story. Certain parts that touch all of us. I'm still trying to figure out what and who I wanna be when I grow up. - Anonymous - Aug-09-2010   

GOD I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY......
I really recommend this story.
ITS A MUST READ!!!
- SilentAngel - Aug-12-2010   

VERY GOOD STORY A MUST READ....MAY BE ANOTHER PART PLEASE ;) - DAMERE - Aug-21-2010   

Love this story. Great work. - sassy123 - Sep-26-2010   

There was more sex between the girl and her boyfriend. It's good, but needed some passion at the end. It didn't have to be graphic. Just...something. Still recommend reading it though. - Anonymous - Jan-16-2011   

I couldn't stop reading this story from the moment I started. Loved it! - Jaime - Feb-11-2011   

Such a beautiful story. Funny as hell, and yet so rich and intense. A must read! - UpsetLobster - Oct-02-2011   

lovely story.. the comparison to ross and rachel cracked me up.. there is some humor in the story, but not overly so to take anything away from the romantic side of it.. it is slow paced but that's refreshing in its own right.. i know the author is currently revising the story and the dialogues so it seems like the sequel might not be coming soon.. but i'm fairly certain one will be written since the ending is not a definite ending.. - xtra dog - Dec-05-2011   

A bit long, but definitely worth it. Wish there was a sequel. - Anonymous - Jan-18-2012   

i can count on one hand the amount of times an online fiction has made me laugh uncontrollably at my computer screen, and this one right here sure gave the others a run for their money :D
p.s. im sure quite a few of you out there could relate to this ;) Dani - Anonymous - Jan-20-2012   

oh my God...SPOILER ALERT ...i just had to stop reading and comment this line : the best advice i have ever heard is :"Okay, the first thing you do is go into the bathroom, turn on the shower as cold as it will go, and get under the stream and think about the girl. Repeat that process several times. Then, get your favorite picture of her, tape it to the wall, and then bang your head repeatedly while looking at it." :)):)):))
- braniac - Feb-23-2012   

beautiful story, great dialogue, funny characters, romance, wonderful plot, i couldn't put it down!...SPOILER ALERT...ok, this really needs a sequel! after all that 350 pages, i really wanted to read some sex scenes at the end, not necessarily graphical, but i feel like in the end they have all that passion that begs to lash out... i guees we have to wait for a sequel! please do one! - braniac - Feb-24-2012   

Amazing story, absolutely splendid. But this story deffo needs a sequel. Author please, do you hear me? I know it's been a long time but you can't let them get away without some more fun and an intimidating scene! PLEASE! :) Only one kiss? no way! - AW - May-16-2012   

That was wow! Incredible.That was one great blossoming of love story filled with tons of pent up sexual frustration.It was so well written that I sat all day reading it until my but was numb and when I got to the end I wanted it to keep going. Hell I'd loved to see a sequel. Great work Dreams!!! - uber goober - Sep-11-2012   

Here is a MUCH, MUCH better version of Blind Side of Love. The author calls it v2. Here's the link: http://midnightisland.com/journal/2011/11/18/the-blind-side-of-love-v2-pdf-file/

I hope the admin has time to update the link. This all-new version provides the much needed closure too. [EDITORS NOTE: Link updated.] - spyce - Sep-11-2012   

What an excellent story. Loved it. Charming, witty dialogue. Romance. Compelling characters. My only wish is the story continued.... Read and joy. Thank you Ingrid Diaz for sharing your imagination and talent with us. - Anonymous - Sep-15-2012   

This story was a delight to read. The witty dialogue and the loveable characters are enjoyable. I like the length of the story  the build-up is never rushed and everything gets its time to develop. This ranks high in my list of favorite online stories. - wt-ger - Nov-15-2012   

Exceptional! There is a part of me that wants a sequel so that I might read of the continued evolution of the characters and their story. However, all on its own, this piece was everything it should have been. - Anonymous - Nov-19-2012   

Spent the evening reading it (version 2, actually), and it was totally worth my time. Great one. - Anonymous - Nov-24-2012   

Found this Page by accident and read a lot of stories here since. But this is by far the best ever !!! Couldnt stop reading and loved every minute of it. Please, please, please let there be a sequel !!! - LeFreak - Nov-24-2012   

***Possible spoiler Alert***
I loved this work of writing and I had a hard time putting it down. My girlfriend wasn't happy with my obsession. Anyhoo, it was a great read but I must admit the ending felt a little rushed and I am still craving more stories about these two. Please keep writing! By the way, I love the feel of the "you've got mail" plot. - Katie of Ohio - Nov-26-2012   

Absolutely excellent! I loved the humor and playfullness between characters. The dialogue seemed perfectly natural... Not stunted or forced. I couldn't put it down! - Anonymous - Dec-08-2012   

I want to read the latest version, but I SOOOOO hate Adobe & PDF!! Has these huge margins, but Adobe doesn't consider them margins & thus they're not adjustable. Can't scroll text, just pages. Adobe SUX! Please, Please try Epub!! - Anon - Jan-30-2013   

Absolutely loved this story, I would have been happy if it went on another 400 pages! - Idgi - Feb-05-2013   

Great story. Well worth reading. Wish there would be even more. - M.E. - Feb-12-2013   

Excellent read! I spent an entire day reading it because I couldn't put it down. - Anonymous - Mar-09-2013   

Great story line. Needs some work on the aesthetics, namely punctuation; well worth reading. - TJBlueyes - Oct-09-2013   

Really good - Anonymous - Dec-21-2013   

This is amazing . My god I loved every page of this story I just wish it hadn't ended . I can only hope that there will be a sequel some time as it really does need one. Please please xx - SD - Aug-13-2015   

One of the best stories I have read on this site! Wish there was a sequel! - Jaime - Jun-21-2016   

Very cute first time story. - Amanda - Jun-29-2016   

really great story - Anonymous - May-29-2017   

Great dialog and story development! - Anonymous - Jun-03-2017   

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"All I Want For CHristmas" is a fabulous Christmas tale, and something totally different from these two bards. What a great Christmas surprize!!! C'mon...open it up and see what's inside...you'll be glad you did, promise!!! Merry Christmas and the very best to all for the New Year!!! - Michelle - Dec 23rd, 2003   

Absolutely fabulous story and a must read. Hope there is a follow-up. - Claire - Jul 21st, 2004   

I love this story! It is so romantic and sweet! And the sequel "Honey,Honey...Be My Valentine!" is awesome! Really great job Fiur and Vlamme! Keep going!!! - Diane - Jul 23rd, 2004   

I love this beautiful and romantic story. I enjoyed reading this. Please write more of those stories. I like it very much!!!!!Thanks. - Susan - Nov 2nd, 2004   

Drama, drama, drama, get it while it's hot. Could very easily become a tv series, reads like one. Great stuff. - Kiity - Dec-01-2006   

i love the artwork.. is the first one a manip? i can't tell.. first story i've read by these authors.. i've been postponing reading hollywood dreams 'cause it's quite long.. i was planning to read it next week since i have a week off then.. don't know if i can contain myself after reading this story though.. - xtra dog - Feb-23-2014   

Smart dialogue, sharp wit, and quirky humor. Action, adventure, humor, and romance ... after 7 stories, I still can't get enough and am waiting for more. I think the Nano series can be made into a great TV series or several blockbluster movies. This series is one of the finest uber fictional work out there folks. Don't miss out, go read! - BYL - Jun 27th, 2005   

Smashing good stuff here. Comedic, enthralling, super genious intelligence and of course...dramatic. It makes me think of Jane Bond meets Doogia Howser meets Janice and Mel. Ecellent characters..super well built plot...the dern thing just rolls right off the tongue (pun intended). READ IT - jlnicky - Jul 15th, 2005   

This is a fast paced story that is quite good. Read the Nano series, and you won't be disappointed. There are some leaps of faith you will have to take to get there, but overall its a great read. - jd - Dec-04-2006   

Really fine series, but I'm not sure if it's finished. Good story, unusually good writing. - bdwy721 - Jun-10-2007   

I've read some wonderful stories but I could never get this one out of my mind. Highly recommend it. I know at one time Jules Mills started to continue this story with Part 8 but looks like she's removed it from the web. Please, please, please Miss Mills...give us more of the awesome story !! I'm begging here :) - LDR - Oct-19-2007   

AMAZING series! Fantastic pace, endearing, well-written characters. Intelligent dialogue and unerring story consistency. Definitely one of my top 5 stories of all time. Jules has recently finished the series as well. It has 8 parts and can be found at the Academy of Bards. If you haven't read this, you are really missing out. - Luciddream - Mar-21-2008   

This series is amazing - Anonymous - Oct-01-2008   

When it first started, I had some doubts. But that didn't last long. This is such a great story I was sad to see it end. I'll be anxious to see if there is more from this writer. Read it you won't be disappointed. - JettBlk - Sep-17-2010   

a comment seems to indicate a part 7, but i didn't find a link to it. it wouldn't matter except this is GREAT and if there's more, i want to read it. it's all the things you want in a story... good dialog, humor, adventure, and more. - Anonymous - Sep-19-2010   

This was great fun to read! LOL scenes, HOT scenes. Read it. The ending is a little on short notice, I would love to read more of it - Anonymous - Sep-28-2010   

This is my favorite Uber tale. Read this one and all of the others in the Nanoverse series. Jules maps a new story onto the compelling themes of the X/G relationship--traumatic past, the quest for redemption and a powerful, healing love. I particularly like the love scenes throughout. Each one is integrated into the character development: a must for good romance/erotica, IMHO - Rebecca Hall - Oct-02-2012   

very nice series.. i would qualify it more under science fiction/future than modern, though.. you should read all 8 stories in the series to get the complete picture.. - xtra dog - Jan-18-2013   

http://www.academyofbards.org/fanfic/j/julesmills_nano8.html - Wheezie - Jan-19-2013   

Good story line....nice plot emerging here. A couple of interesting and unexpected surprises. It's certainly grabbed my attention. This story holds a lot of promise. Awaiting the next 20 or so chapters! - Anonymous - Nov 19th, 2004   

Wonderful story so far. I like how this bard makes her characters imperfect but likeable at the same time. Can't wait for the end. - Claire - Feb 21st, 2005   

I love it. Its very captivating and just has a good feeling to it. It's a story that you stay up all night to read and just cant stop reading. - Anonymous - Nov 21st, 2005   

This story is enjoyable to get tangled up in. Plenty of angst and hot scenes. I look forward to more installments. - Kali - Jul-12-2006   

THis a very nice story but I feel sad because its not yet finish... Though it is not yet finish, you've gotta read this novella for it is really really good. It will not waste your time..lol.. - Fan - Dec-14-2007   

This story was well written by the author. Read it and you will know what I meant. I hope the author will finish this soon because when you read this you will beg for more! - Anonymous - Feb-18-2008   

Very engaging, interesting characters and plot to make me yearn for the next chapters. Can't wait! - wigwam - May-14-2008   

This is a great story. I can't wait for more to be written or the end to be finished! - Michelle - Jul-13-2008   

OMG you have to finish I love the story and need to know how it ends please write more - Anonymous - Jan-06-2009   

Really good story, please MUST finish - Anonymous - Feb-16-2009   

OMG- i just couldn't put it down, i absolutely loved reading Noemi and this one has followed suit. I hope it gets updated soon as i hanging out to see what happens next with Oksana and Kat - saracath - Feb-18-2009   

So... I totally missed the big "Unfinished" tag on this one. Is this story still in the works? I want an ending... ;_; - Littlearsonist - Aug-07-2009   

FINISH PLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! - Anonymous - Apr-11-2010   

Get with it girl!!! Great story....so far. Please don't leave us hanging. - mine2give2u - Jun-08-2010   

Oh for Gods sake...I didn't realize this was unfinished!! Please Author finish your brilliant work!!! <3 - JC - Jun-19-2010   

WOW! Amazing, please finish it. - Anonymous - Jun-27-2010   

I'm still chuckling over Dylan, and I finished the story two hours ago! Will the fun ever end? Please, oh please, say you have more of these delightful tales buried in your garden somewhere. - fj - Apr-02-2007   

Okay, I can't decide which one of these was the funniest. These are as cute as they can be. And I am excited that Halloween and Christmas are only two of MANY holidays. Hint. Hint. I hope you enjoyed writing them as much as I enjoyed reading them. Great fun! - KT - Apr-02-2007   

You are just killing me here! You made me snort my coffee! More! Gimme MORE! Please. I'm addicted now. - Liz - Apr-03-2007   

i would love to see what happens if these four get a puppy or a cat. i can see dylan over the first accident... it just wouldn't be a pretty sight, but it would be a side splitter!
the non-corporeal contingent is so much more sane than anyone who talks to fixtures... but the fun in watching is terrific. - crj - Apr-04-2007   

Even funnier! Where DO you get these titles????? - cc - Apr-09-2007   

Where do I get my titles? It wasn't easy, let me tell you. It took extensive research by me and my pesky demon.... Never fear. The awesome foursome will return later in the year... - Aurelia - Apr-10-2007   

LOL!! Readers if you want to have BOGG (big ol grins and giggles)read this series. It is delightful. Aurelia you have a great imagination! More please. - Sherry - Apr-17-2007   

This series is a must read. DO NOT read this anywhere near your computer. All these stories are hilarious. - Anonymous - May-04-2010   

Aurelia writes a good light hearted, enjoyable series of tales. I definetly recommend amusing yourselves by reading them. - uber goober - Aug-08-2010   

Aurelia writes a good light hearted, enjoyable series of tales. I definetly recommend amusing yourselves by reading them. - uber goober - Aug-08-2010   

The first one in the serie made me laugh so hard, I cried. I like this one very much as well... off to the next one... - Celine D - Aug-30-2011   

Another great installment from this fantastic series. Can't wait for the next one! - Anonymous - Mar-07-2010   

it's just tooo short!!!!!
plz, continue!!! - intheair - Mar-10-2010   

This series has been quite a revelation! Please put me out of my misery and post the next part. I'm begging you here! - blairj - May-04-2010   

This series had it all. I was surprised by the humor of the characters as sci-fi is not generally known for its rather blaze look on life. A wonderful story told by an equally wonderful storyteller. One to be added to the "must keep" file. - Anonymous - May-26-2010   

This whole series has turned out to be one big adventure. This talented author does it again. Highly recommended. - gracie - Jun-11-2010   

I'm really enjoying reading this story. I think Aurelia writes a great tale and is well worth taking the time to read. I can hardly wait to read the rest of her works. - Uber Goober - Aug-25-2010   

Nice roll reversal here! Love the way the author mixes it up here!! - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

funny read.. - xtra dog - Jun-10-2013   

Love it, read and enjoy. - vampireslayer2 - Aug-11-2007   

This is definitely finished and an AMAZING piece of fiction. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2007   

What a wonderful story! O'Malley is such a great character. Suspense and romance will keep your eyes glued to the monitor until the very end. - Anonymous - Aug-25-2008   

A very good story with a nice twist at the end. enjoyable or sure. :) - Anonymous - Aug-27-2008   

I love this story because it has resulted in one my my best friendships. LLE was recommended to me by The Raven and after reading it, I wrote my first fan letter. I found her military references right on target and her characters intriguing. And realistic. O'Malley isn't always a nice person, her scars run deep and she personifies Irish temper. But she is as authentic and noble as they come, just like the author. Roselle's writing rocks! I highly recommend this story. - Cheyne - Sep-02-2008   

This is a GREAT story and I really hope that there is a sequel on the horizon! - Anonymous - Sep-04-2008   

I want to add a "ditto" to what Cheyne said except maybe for the irish temper part...LOL. - lee - Sep-06-2008   

Great characters, good story. Well done. I would love to read more of your stories. - Marty - Sep-08-2008   

Couldn't close the browser. Great read! Just finished it a week ago and am ready to read it again. - Mayhem - Sep-27-2008   

Excellent story by this "first time" fan fiction author.
Characters were energetic and exciting. The story makes it hard to stop reading, so make sure you have the time to read to the end. Definitely a must read. Congratulations Roselle Graskey! Please feel free to give us more to read. - aj - Sep-30-2008   

Loved this story and all the characters. Couldn't put it down! - Ginger - Dec-03-2008   

Love this story I was completely drawn in...stay up all night reading - Anonymous - Dec-07-2008   

This is an amazing story. I loved it. The characters were unique and very real. And the ending, wow. - BardGirl - Mar-31-2009   

OMG! I can only just say ...WOW. I was intrigued from the start and then became addicted. The fight scenes were on the edge of your seat suspense. The main characters pain was felt and touched me in depths that cause me to clench my fists in anguish. What a roller coaster ride! I must say ...READ THIS~!!
You will not regret it...you MUST do this! - XNU - Apr-06-2009   

great story!!! good plot, great characters, very fast and fun read! - dalila - Apr-13-2009   

How I missed this little gem I'll never know. It's got the lot, exciting well thought out plot, action, great characters, romance and a few twists and turns along the way. I also think there's life left in these characters yet, so a sequel would be nice or have I missed that one too? - Sai - Apr-16-2009   

This is really fantastic and very different. I definitely recommend this. Its one of those little hidden gems that you always find on this wonderful site and perfect for a rainy sunday and a cup of hot chocolate and marshmallows. - LSC - May-10-2009   

**** Spoiler Warning **** hmm.. i still wanted to have Cage's ass kicked even though she's alright. can't believe O'milley just let it go, and Terri's less involvement to the ending of the 'crime'. heheh.. but nonetheless, very good read. i like. I usually just click the story exit if i don't like. even when im in the middle of it. heheh.. - belle - Oct-05-2009   

This is a great story and I'm surprised there aren't more of us who've read it. I do wish for a sequel, Callan is a great character. - JettBlk - Jan-14-2010   

this story is riveting, mesmerizing. i was totally worthless at work since all i wanted was to get home to finish it. thank you, charlie, for the recommendation. - kc - Aug-30-2010   

This is a fantastic story. One of the best I've read with wonderful twists and turns. So glad I found Roselle Graskey. What a great author. Can I put in a request for a sequel? Please? - Anonymous - Sep-11-2010   

this is one of my all time favorite pieces of fiction. it never gets old with rereading and each character is well developed. - Anonymous - Sep-18-2010   

Awesome read. Strongly recommend it. - Sarah - Sep-23-2010   

Loved the story so much that when "life's Little Edge" came out in print in 2005, I went out and bought my own copy. If you liked this story check out "October's Promise", also out in print. - LT - Sep-29-2010   

Highly recommend! - Peyton Andrews - Nov-26-2010   

This fic rocked my world! Perfect mix of strong characters, compelling storyline, rough & tumble action, and some well written love scenes ;) I have to admit i have never been overly interested in biker culture but while reading this i have totally decided i need to get myself naked over the back of a bike ;p - Michelle - Apr-14-2011   

Someone mentioned this being a hidden gem. So true. I feel like I've watched a film. - Silver - May-10-2011   

I liked this story so much I have it bookmarked for re-reads. Well worth it. - Dynamo - Jul-11-2011   

This is a great original story. Gun runners, bikers, low-lifes, Oh my!
a great read - but I think it is more novel sized. Main characters were well developed but also all the secondary characters seems well developed too. - Georgia - Apr-09-2012   

This story is an absolutely fantastic read! It is gripping from the very first page with engaging characters and great dialogue. Don't miss this roller-coaster ride of mystery, romance, commitment ... and motorcycles :) - Ricky - Mar-18-2013   

Amazing! I feel like i just watched a film. These characters and the story are so incredibly real. Just read it. You will be hooked. I did not want this to end... - Anonymous - Apr-03-2013   

An action filled thriller that's highly original. Great secondary characters aswell. - Anonymous - Jan-07-2015   

This is without question one of the best stories I've read. The characters, dialog, and action are all engaging and relate-able. The characters are not perfect, but you find yourself investing in them. I draws you in and doesn't let go. - JT - May-07-2017   

Read this too! - Stephanie - Aug 8th, 2003   

I cannot recommend this enough. Alix and Valerie will leave you grinning for days. - Lish - Apr-25-2008   

I've read this story 2 times so far, and highly recommend it to anyone. It's light, well-written, an excellent read and a very enjoyable time to pass! Kudos to the writer - Arwen - May-03-2008   

beautiful series. you get so invested in the characters. - kc - Sep-06-2010   


I can't believe this story hasn't been recommended more! Ingrid's dialog is soo superb that you actually believe these people exist. One of my all time favorites, so much so I bought the book! Must read. - Jane - Oct-02-2010   

i totally agree that the dialogues are so sublime that they trick you into believing that the characters are not just characters but real people instead.. as i commented before: i really love this series.. - xtra dog - Dec-04-2011   

this story reminds me a little of the song: ''Valerie - Steve Winwood ". great story. i was glued to my laptop. - braniac - Feb-23-2012   

Riveting story, wery well told and based on obviously well researched biblical premises! Loved it. - Cybnana - Nov 13th, 2004   

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! - Anonymous - Feb-01-2008   

Well a bit of "The Exorcist" and a dash of Argento's Hell trilogy. Not bad. Plus, the author's own skills... Not bad at all. - Mani - Oct-20-2009   

Extremely well written...just the way I like them!! - JC - Sep-10-2011   

OOOOH...nice job author!!! Loved it!!! - Anon - Sep-10-2011   

What a great Halloween story. Nice job. - sassy123 - Oct-18-2011   

I thought Slow Rise was a great story. I enjoyed the characters. It was especially interesting to note that they were best friends from Kindergarten and still were not as in tune with each other's feelings as they should have been. - Pjay - Dec 3rd, 2004   

Very well written story. Great buildup of the characters, develving into their thoughts and incorporating them into the story. I am a strong believer that friendship must exist before love or it will not last and this just goes to show that love can grow strongly from friendship. Well done EC!!! - Shadylady - Dec 6th, 2004   

LOVED this story! This one is a must read with never a dull moment!! It will leave you smiling. Makes me wish there was a sequel. - Anonymous - Mar-27-2006   

I can't believe this story hasn't been rated more. It's short but sweet,sexy,and downright hot!!! I would love to read a longer story involving Alex and Tory!!! - Anonymous - Jan-24-2010   

Well done. Nice story - Anonymous - Aug-09-2011   

Seldom gave 10/10 ratings for overall and spice index, but this story more than deserve them! - Anonymous - Nov-27-2013   

Very very nice indeed. Thank you! - Celine - Dec-14-2013   

A great series of stories. I highly recommend reading them! - uber goober - May-15-2011   

'crazy is as crazy does' certainly gets a whole new meaning.. nice read.. - xtra dog - Jan-05-2013   

ReaaLLL....CUTE. loved it - vampireslayer2 - Sep-30-2007   

Cute. And short. Loved it! :D - Anonymous - Oct-12-2007   

Cute. And short. Want more. - Anonymous - Oct-12-2007   

mission accomplished. cute story. - reita - Oct-13-2007   

Aww that's cute! So direct and forward! No wishywashy angst that go on for seventeen chapters, which I love too, but this was fast and ......efficient! Great story! - Anonymous - Oct-17-2007   

lovely bit of flirting. need more of these two, they're just starting to simmer. - msprism - Oct-20-2007   

Awww, such a cute story. PWP - pretty wonderful piece? I'm just sad that it's so short :(. - Oggie - Nov-07-2007   

Beautiful story - so different from most of the uber stories on line. - Anon - Nov-17-2007   

Utterly charming, cheeky, and charismatic!! - Balmain - Jan-11-2008   

Cute. It made me smile all the way through. - Anonymous - Feb-07-2008   

haha, nice! now that's what i'm talking about. I'm really loving this author - mary - Dec-07-2009   

Lighthearted and cute. - Lynne - Jan-06-2011   

thank you micah........... - stitz97331 - Feb-09-2011   

That was awesome! Funny and awesome and cute! Love! - Anonymous - Mar-14-2011   

Sweet and short...loved it.... - Mia - Nov-07-2012   

Cute! - Anonymous - Nov-13-2012   

Short, lovely and very funny!!! It's great!! - Rosa Santos - Nov-15-2012   

Very fanny!! - Rosa Santos - Feb-08-2013   

well, i'm no expert but i think her batting average was ok.. i do believe her bantering average is way higher, though.. - xtra dog - Jun-12-2013   

LOL Great Twist! Very sweet and hot!~ - Anonymous - Aug-17-2008   

A cute little story, and I love your depiction of Alex. - Anonymous - Mar-30-2009   

Wauw, nicely written, give us some more Law and Order loved it! - Anonymous - Apr-21-2009   

Beautiful, give us more Law and order please Givens!!! - C.R. - May-26-2009   

Fast, tight dialog reveals well drawn characters in this clever story. I read it twice to catch all the dynamics between the characters. Please continue the excellent work. - wasabigrrl - Mar-26-2009   

terrific -- great characters, intriguing plot. And Pirates! Woo Hoo! - Vick - Mar-29-2009   

More more more! Action, adventure, intrigue. Pirates, swordfights, true love... It doesn't get much better than this. - offhermeds - Apr-03-2009   

OMG!!!THIS IS AMAZING..C'MON ZIPPLIC DON'T LEAVE US WAITING TOO LONG...PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE? YOU GUYS HAVE TO READ THIS STORY. - GRACEY - Apr-10-2009   

Fantastic! Amazing and intriguing storyline with pirates! How can you go wrong with pirates! Can't wait for the final chapter and see how it ends. - blaze - Apr-11-2009   

ARRRGGHHH! It's unfinished! This will teach me to check the status of story before I plunge in! Still, it IS a great tale--a fresh twist on an old formula, complete with engaging characters, a hefty bit of spice, and just the right touch of mystery... But be warned, it's the kind of thing that'll haunt you 'til the author lets us all off the hook with a conclusion. - RR - Apr-12-2009   

This is a great story with lots of humor and adventure. I can't wait to read the rest. - cegger - May-15-2009   

A juxtaposition of comedy and drama; witty repartee and crude humor; predictable and inconceivable moments; realistic and fantastic...

I felt it might have been tied up a little too swiftly at the end but who ever really wants a fantastic diversion to stop? Overall the read was remarkably refreshing and well worth the time. I love it and I know I'll read it again. - A definite fan - May-26-2009   

if you looking for a story of a great adventure and two great lead characters, this is it. read it you won't regret it!i didn't want it to end. - dalila - May-27-2009   

Amazing story...would really love a sequel...what say you zipplic? - Anonymous - May-28-2009   

Loved it. Laughed my ass off. My favorite part was the opening scene. - Jude - May-29-2009   

simply wonderful!!!!!! - Anonymous - May-30-2009   

A fun read...didn't want it to end! - Anonymous - Jun-01-2009   

very good story, its a fun adventure with some drama, action, and a lot more. read this you won't regret it! - dalila - Jun-01-2009   

Love the action and the quirky humour. Must read! - Anonymous - Jun-02-2009   

What a winner! I was completely at home with the vocabulary, phrases like 'Buggery Bollocks' is habitual where I come from. Though this tale is by no means obtuse. It's smart, quick, funny, heartbreaking and heart warming and by Christ its got bloody Pirates Man! Do yourselves a favour and read this swashbuckling adventure. - Sai - Jun-10-2009   

This story was amazing! A must read. - Anonymous - Jun-16-2009   

This story is one of this years greats I recommend that everyone read this one. - Jasper - Jun-22-2009   

This was absolutely great! Great dialogue, interesting and not stereotypical characters. Some moments of great fun too. Perfect for a lazy afternoon. - RB - Jun-28-2009   

Cute, with witty dialogue. (Don't see that every day!) - CJ - Jun-29-2009   

"Shell Game" when it's impossible to win, it's time to change the game. Or "That sometimes there's no fairness 'til you start breaking the rules-". This story brilliantly illustrates the best in humanity and the worst. When "...the love for power" sometimes outstrips "...the power of love." At least that is the case temporarily and much suffering happens in the interval. The author uses humor like the tree of life. A harrowing tale with an equally magnificent love threading through it. I am moved and in awe. Brilliant writing. - Samantha - Jul-02-2009   

I was reading the recommendations for this story and decided to give it a try. And boy, was I glad I did. I absolutely love pirates! And great comedy! I will definitely read this again. Awesome job, Zipplic. - Meg - Jul-04-2009   

This one is intense and fast pace from beginning to end. A cast of many enjoyable characters you'll find yourself cheering for, and won't want the story to end. - brighteyez - Aug-16-2009   

Definately one of the best stories i've ever read, not to mention funny as hell, intense, sweet, and all the other good stuff you can come up with:) - Anonymous - Jan-14-2010   

This is very clever.. I loved the whole thing. Lynn is one smart captive ;) - Yani - Jan-17-2010   

Wonderful - Lindap - Jan-19-2010   

An instant favourite! I can't believe I missed this story for so very long. Marvelously written, beautiful caracters, intrigue, suspences, and best of all PIRATES! Thank you for sharing your talent! - Otter - Jan-21-2010   

A good plotdriven story with loveable characters and copious amounts of quirky humour. I was very entertained. - Ape - Jan-25-2010   

very good story good lesson too. If you don"t like the game change the rules. - Anonymous - Feb-15-2010   

A fabulous story ... the plot is critically unique in the world of fanfic. This author should be published! If you're tired of the same old plots read this! - Robin - Mar-07-2010   

Fantastic! Couldn't put it down. Original plot, great characters witty banter.
Loved it! - laf66 - Mar-09-2010   

I loved this story!! 'Lyn' was fabulously quirky and this author is one to watch for future stories. Of course, piracy on the high sea didn't hurt either. Marvelously written and such a treat to read. Robin - Anonymous - Mar-09-2010   

How on earth did I miss this little gem? Absolutely wonderful writing! A shy-pirate; a slave girl with a mysterius and secret past - beautiful characters, amazing story. This one's getting saved on my hard-drive cos no doubt it should be published. - Kattie - Mar-27-2010   

This definitely deserves an overall 10 rating. - Anonymous - May-25-2010   

Look at all these recommendations ^^
That alone shows that you won't be disappointed. - =D - May-27-2010   

This is an amazing story, a definite must-read! The characters are amazing and the humor works perfectly. A combination of a great plot and stints to have you laughing non stop! - Andrea - May-29-2010   

I would recommend this story a thousand times over. I instantly fell in love with the writing style of Zipplic. The dialogue was tight and entertaining, ellicting more laughs from me than any other story has ever done. The characterizations made the characters pop off the page. I loved it!!!!! - Jade - Jun-30-2010   

I've been reading fanfic in this 'verse for well over a decade and can honestly say that this story is one of the most well-written I've encountered. Funny, surprisingly romantic, and completelt (& this is so rare) original plot. Trust the reviews above - this story certainly deserves a chance to earn your 'highest recommendation'.
- Vee - Jul-02-2010   

Thank you for sharing these wonderful characters with the rest of us. I love the pace of the dialogues and the very distinct personalities. Please keep writing! - searcher - May-25-2011   

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! The story has everything....original plot, interesting well-developed characters and excellent (and humorous) dialogue. This was a joy to read. Please write more! - Anonymous - May-29-2011   

I really enjoyed this story. Well written, great characters, excellent dialogue - read it.

I would have enjoyed more sex scenes but that's the only caveat I can give this story. It was excellent. Got to love pirates. - snott - Jun-05-2011   

Well developed characters, captivating plot, witty lines... great story telling!! The writer's stories must be read to understand the talent of making the readers' actually experience the world of the characters... A great story can only come from a very talented writer! Please write more. - raspberry beret - Jun-10-2011   

At first, I thought this story wasn't reasonable. How was I supposed to take this one character, Lynn, seriously is this was how she was going to act thought-out all the story. But I keep reading anyways because I've learn first impression can be misleading. Then suddenly, I found my self laughing out loud; just at the stuff that pop into the characters head is so real life it comical. I can go and go, but real what I want you to do is real the story. See for you're self, what I'm talking about. - Ami - Oct-03-2011   

wow this is a really good story thanks Zipplic for writing this and please write somemore - Erma - Jan-23-2012   

I've never really written a recommendation in here ever, and that's saying a lot considering the number of pieces I've read UNTIL now! This story is just... beyond words. It's definitely one of the mbest stories in this site. Be sure to read it! - Avid reader - Jul-04-2014   

It's an excellent piece. Loved it. Fun, intrigue, adventure, you name it. The bouts of humour every now and then was just the cherry on the top. Couldn't stop laughing at certain places. - Anonymous - Apr-30-2015   

Janine is one of my favorite writers. This is a great story. Janine has a way with dialogue that is amazing. It is literally burst out laughing good at times. Keep writing, please! - Aerows - May-30-2010   

How many of us have not found ourselves in this situation before? I think we can all relate to this poem or at least one of its verses. - Claudia - Jul-07-2009   

Guess we all know something of the feelings described here. - Silver - Jul-07-2010   

So accurate! Yes we all know this feeling. - yuka - Dec-09-2010   

Short and sweet story. Makes me happy. - silverwriter01 - Jul-21-2010   

BoP is always in need of more love and attention, Enginerd does great!! - Anonymous - Jul-24-2010   

Hurray, another Birds of Prey story, and even better by one of my favorite authors :) This was a very sweet story. We need more Birds of Prey stories! - Aerows - Aug-05-2010   

A nice story. Great job - sassy123 - Feb-23-2011   

Awww! This story was funny, full of love and sexy in the ways that mean something. There was no angst or anxiety. I so very much needed to read this story that was easy to let in and feel with the heart. Thank you, Enginerd! - Samantha - Nov-04-2012   

Another one of Fingersmith's excellent stories with enjoyable plot and great characterization. Highly recommended. - pegi - Sep-09-2012   

Great story. - zac - Dec-30-2012   

i generally dislike stories written in first person.. but fingersmith's stories seem to be the exception.. maybe it's the way she engages the reader to react, form an opinion.. maybe it's the way she incorporates humor into her stories.. not via situations, but through the use of language.. whatever the reason, fingersmith's stories always captivate me.. - xtra dog - Jul-25-2014   

Wonderfull story!! Great characters. Great plot.Widely recommended. It has angst, confusion, mistakes, love, a lot love and all permeated with a mood light and delicate... - Rosa Santos - Feb-08-2013   

sweet! - opensource - Feb-09-2013   

Another great story from this writer,it's been to long a wait, great to have Weebod back! - Roasted1 - Feb-09-2013   

Another wonderful story from this great writer! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Good plot and characters. I love Weebod's style of writing. +++ - Wolfie67 - Feb-10-2013   

I've read all of Weebod's stories and this one does not disappoint. Thank You for sharing xx - Penny - Feb-17-2013   

Loved this story, Great bedtime reading.... - Amy - Mar-03-2013   

Great story from weebod who is fast becoming one of my favourite writers - Jane - Mar-31-2013   

nice read.. - xtra dog - Jun-09-2013   

Wonderful story. I'm not particularly fond of the bagpipe. However, this story has me looking forward to reassessing the music. I love how Weebod's always gives good dialogue in her stories. Thanks, Weebod! - Samantha - Nov-03-2013   

Very wickedly funny - Callisto - Mar-03-2008   

Cute and very funny! - Anonymous - Feb-19-2010   

Funny, cute and sexy... Great story. - Anonymous - Oct-09-2010   

Great story! You won't regret reading it, very cute and funny. - Enverz - Feb-08-2011   

This was a very good Conqueror story. It also followed very much from the Herc episode and I could easily see this as a follow-up Xena episode. It shows a very conflicted Xena doing battle with her darkness and her new disturbing feelings for Gabrielle, The Storyteller who brings a sense of joy into her life - a joy she's never known. - Karon Reiter - Jan 26th, 2005   

There's a sequel to this called "The Healer" is it still available online? - Lysia - May-18-2007   

Yes, this story is very powerful and one of my favourites. Here is a link for the Healer which is not completed
http://bearblue.150m.com/library2/1990s/STO/healer/healer.html - Paquin - Mar-05-2010   

I really liked this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-02-2010   

A very sweet read here. Very emotional and exceedingly well done! A favorite - Anonymous - May-03-2008   

yes, this could totally be one of g's scrolls.. very profound and well written story.. - xtra dog - Jun-11-2013   

Links between Part 3&4 is missing - Anonymous - Oct-12-2006   

This series, along with its spinoffs (All the Colors of the World, etc) is some of the best reading online or anywhere. Truly astonishing! - leavethesky - Feb-27-2008   

You'll do good to read all her Mel/Janice works becouse their enterwinded, as ever this is truely astonishing.






- Callisto - Mar-02-2008   

This is an amazing Janice/Mel story, it stayed with me for days. Its a must read! - d - Aug-13-2008   

Vivian writes the sassiest, toughest and sexiest Janice ever in her Jan and Mel series of stories. I absolutely love her work but she has made me love her Janice even more! Great stuff. Do not miss! - Kez - Sep-20-2008   

A must read! - Anonymous - Dec-27-2008   

What a great story. very well written - sassy123 - Oct-22-2010   

Yeah, for Mel and Janice. Great Story. - sassy123 - Nov-27-2010   

One of my favorites. Great job - sassy123 - May-08-2011   

This story is brilliant, hillarious and even better than 'story of me' which I honestly didn't think possible! - Anonymous - Oct 27th, 2002   

awesome story :) - Katrina - Jun 24th, 2005   

This was a very NICE surprise! - Anonymous - Nov-02-2007   

This is one of my favorite all-time stories. Although "Story of Me" comes close. - Anonymous - Feb-04-2008   

What a great book this is. It will grab at the start and won't let go until the end. It does not get any better. - Netta - Feb-05-2008   

This is one of those stories, a year after I've read it, that still passes through my head. Images, characters, the unique plot have imprinted on my gray matter. Still one of my favorites. - calabria - Feb-05-2008   

WOW! What a great writing team please post more of your great works. - Lysia - Feb-08-2008   

I love this writing duo, this is a real fun read Advocate and T.Novan make such hilarious story's you just have to laugh, there is notting else to do. Pleas ppl. you have to read this little fantastic story. I think you gonna love the squirell duo and the ''heavenly handywoman'' - Callisto - Feb-10-2008   

What a wonderful story this is! It is charming, funny, romantic, intelligent, moving and sexy all at the same time. It really is the complete package. I guarantee that anyone that reads this will take it with them, and read it again and again.
A fantastic read. - Kez - Feb-11-2008   

Great,awesome ! - Manuela - Feb-24-2009   

Great & really funny story! Loved the ending. - Enverz - Sep-13-2009   

This was a great story and what a surprise ending. Highly recommend that you read it. - uber goober - Nov-10-2009   

FANTASTIC read. But like so many before let me beg, MORE PLEASE cuz a sequel would be great to see what the characters do going forward. Great stuff and definite must read nice touch with the tie-in with the squirrells and reminder to read the story of me first. - ~toni - Nov-17-2009   

Loved it! Good twists and many laughs (those squirrels are genious). - RB - Dec-18-2009   

Excellent! Funny, romantic, charming, and touching. I love the quirky characters, and it's always a delight to see those crazy squirrels. Glory is the type of place that you want to go back to again and again. This would make a great series .... - jaeygatsby - Mar-13-2010   

Ahhhh.... that was a very sweet story. Loved it. Nice twists and turns - who would have thought. Great job Advocate and T Novan. Everything you write is GOLD. - Anonymous - Jul-11-2010   

Another Gem!!! - bluebutterfly - Aug-05-2010   

this is a glorious piece of writing. the characters are so fully-realized. it's fantastic. thanks, again, to charlie for a memorable recommendation. - kc - Sep-02-2010   

Wow! Although I have not been disappointed by any of Advocate and T. Novan's stories, this is the best one yet! I'm a late comer to fanfiction, but this is easily one of the top ten tales I read thus far. Well-written, but even more imaginative, Road to Glory travels at the right speed, allowing the reader to "catch-on" at his/her own pace. Due to the highly unusual twist, it differentiates itself from the rest of the uber genre, and will remain one of my all time favorites! - Anonymous - Jul-06-2012   

I've revisited this story time and time again. Beautiful and poetic. Wonderfully written, very true to the characters. - Anonymous - Oct 16th, 2004   

beautiful, beautiful story - Shyn - Sep 10th, 2005   

Great story!! Well done! - alex - Mar-10-2006   

Loved this piece - well worth a read - X & G's relationship has rarely been portrayed in a more insightful and sensitive way. Very moving almost poetic in its delivery. Definitely up there in my all time top 10. - Anex - Sep-16-2006   

xena's little bitch is a beautiful storyteller. rarely have i read stories that touch me and bring back xena and gabrielle the way her stories do. she understands these characters and writes them in ways that touch your soul every time you read them. i hope she never tires of writing about them. - kjviking - Sep-28-2006   

beautiful - intimate - perfection. I love this little gem of a story! - Anonymous - Jun-12-2008   

A very loving and passionate story. I love reading from Gabby's PoV; I don't think anyone would ever get enough of her waxing poetically. I've read this story at least three times, and still find myself completely captivated.

Well recommended read. - Anonymous - Dec-09-2009   

A beautiful explanation of their love from Gabrielle's perspective. - Starry - Jul-08-2010   

Beautiful :) - Mira - Jul-29-2011   

Beautifully poetic indeed. Very nice rendition of the matured relationship. - Anonymous - Feb-06-2012   

xlb does write a good Gabrielle inner monologue.. - xtra dog - Jun-12-2013   

An amazing tale of a love that we wait a lifetime for. Truely a story i rushed home from work to read.
good one a. valdivia. - lordlamberino - Aug-13-2006   

I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading this and had a couple very late nights or early mornings to get to the end. - purplehawke - May-02-2007   

This is a truly extraordinary tale that should not be missed. Ali Vali weaves a wonderfully romantic story that is intertwined with elements of fantasy, the supernatural and history and enhanced greatly by its cast of highly interesting and complex characters. This story, and its sequel promise a fantastic read and should not be missed by anyone who considers themselves a romantic at heart. - fox_feathered - Jun-15-2008   

Beautiful story. I didn't think I would enjoy a story about vampires but since I haved loved every Ali Vali story I have ever read I thought I would give this one a chance. I am so glad I did! This tale has a great plot, engaging characters and witty dialogue. Don't miss it! - Anonymous - Jun-22-2008   

A nice take on the concept of immortality and what it may include. Good supernatural action mixed with a sweet love story. - Ape - Jul-05-2008   

One of my favorite vampire stories. I was glued to it and its sequel for a few days, to the detriment of my relationship...but it was worth it. - calabria - Sep-17-2008   

Really loved this story. Thanks! - Anonymous - Sep-28-2008   

Stuck in on a cold wintery night? No problem---grab a seat and hold on to your drink, the ride is about to begin. Excellent work.... - Stormy - Mar-01-2009   

Thanks for bringing a bit of NOLA to a homesick soul. I moved to New Zealand 7 years ago and do love it here, but nothing can come close to the Big Easy. Lucky for me and my partner I can cook! Your a great writer thanks again for the wonderful stories. I was sorry to be done with them. These are my favs. - Lea Ann - Apr-14-2009   

Fantastic!! Not to be missed. I read a lot and this is one of the best ever. - Anonymous - Sep-28-2009   

When there are so many stories to choose from, choosing what to read is difficult, sometimes the title is not so attractive, sometimes there is no preliminary outline, but when Ali Vali is behind the words, the decision is easy. One has the urge to read. I have read several stories that Ali Vali has shared on this website, and my desire is that they keep coming. Ali Vali is a wonderful writer, her writings maintain a rhythm, and his characters run deep, being difficult to break away from them. Vampire .... is a good example of the talent of this writer, mixing fantasy and different times, the writer takes us back and forth in time without many problems, while laying the foundation for a love story that all we want to read. My advice is, read it while you can, fast. - Lucian - May-17-2010   

great story!! i had an awesome time reading it - cell - Aug-27-2010   

this story was better than good
it was great - ebby - Jan-21-2011   

i read an excerpt of the book (balance of forces: toujours ici) via the bold strokes books site.. story seems promising.. - xtra dog - Dec-12-2011   

This story runs with that of Anne Rice. It's absolutely amazing. My problem is I am missing part of it the first part. I have the beginning right up until when Jacques enters the picture when he enters the solarium and falls on his knees and says: "My queen, welcome to New Orleans. I'm here to do your bidding." Please help... Does someone have a copy they can email me? I actually even tried to buy the book, but for some reason it wouldn't post an amount so seemed impossible to get. I'm hangin' on here. Please help. Somebody release me from this torment. I don't think I'll be able to sleep until I finish it. I gotta see how this ends. My email is Jojodyke@rogers.com Thankx in advance! - Jojo - Mar-28-2016